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I THINK IT IS GREAT! WELL IT CERTAINLY PROVED WELL WITH MR BIG DOWNSTAIRS, I WOULD LOVE TO REACT THE WHOLE THING WITH U!!!! HA!!! HA!!!! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam More, please! I loved the whole thing...So sensual, yet not in a sleazy way- Its perfect! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam GOD! 1&2 were WONDERFUL! I'm a virgin. But,I DON'T feel that way anymore. It's like I was You going through all the excitment. That's gonna stay as a dream for Me some day. Thank You!!!! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam mmmm!...I may write something for you to read...would that be ok with you...
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam that was an amazing story. i loved it! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam awesome Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Great Story! It *is* nice to have a story that has some deeper characters. It really deserved the name 'erotic', unlike much published under that name. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Your stories are great! I would love to hear more adventures of Thomas and Allie THAT WAS GREAT CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT... Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Great story hope that you write more chapters! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam great story. Allie deserves some TLC and Thomas is a very patient man. lives by the guys code and is rewarded. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Fabulous story. Wish you would write more about them.
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam very good.
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam awesome! i cant wait till more is written! very sexy discriptions and wonderful mental pictures! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Great
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam another build up story. antici.....pation, an important part of this complete erotic encounter! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam really great. i loved the story line, most stories jump right into the sex, buy you actually created a good background. Even though ist a fantisy it isn't unbelievible, that just makes it beter. Glad to hear you did. -Cam great story. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam This story, thus far, has been truly beautiful. I love the rich, full characterization. It allows the reader to really get into the story and the people, the hearts and minds involved, and makes the sex and sensuality that much more intense, intriguing and enjoyable when it occurs. Thank you so much for this story. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam i loved it! lol best i read in a good while
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Great story hope there are more where this came from.
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam I didn't find this part as hot as the first chapter. Not sure why, still it was a good read. Thank you. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam OMG! Incredibly erotic! Keep them coming! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Good Story with lots of possibilities. Allie and Thomas are two very likable lovers and can generate some sexual excitment with their sexual cavorting. The story does what it is supposed to do, that is, get you horny. It's like sex for the first time.....more is better! So let's have some more. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam ezcellent! What a great beginning. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam absotlutley amazing! Thank you so much! -Cam brill Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Excellent simply excellent Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam I have read both parts of this story and was very excited. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam good writing. I have recently become a student of better than average and you did a very good job Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam I can't wait for Part 3 Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam very awesome and erotic! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam An outstanding story of LOVE between two adults who really need and want each other. This was a very arrousing story. And also very believable. I have to give you a 10 for this. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam not bad Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam it was sexy i need more as early as posible
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam After reading this story for the second time I enjoyed it more the second time around. But I really liked it the first time. Being shy all my life I can really bond with Thomas. The storyline is very realistic and moves quickly to the conclusion. Thanks for allowing us to read your work. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam AWESOME..I got so wet reading this story!!!
wet is good! -Cam IT WAS KIND OF BORING NEEDED MORE DETAILS. SORRY IT IS MY PERSONAL OPINION. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Outstanding to say the least a real turn on
Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam I needed both my hands to read this story. Thanks... Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Not as good as part 1, but still enteraining. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam i am a mlae 58 yrs old and loved the story. I had gottem realy warm from it you might say, I am glad i read it Glad you enjoyed! Hope you have many many more warm moments! Thank you for reading and thank you for the high marks!! -Cam I didn't kno i could be turned on by reading about sex rather than watching/ having it, Thankyou
I remember when I found "stories" too! They can be much more sexy/hot/sensual than any picture or video ever could be!! Thanks for the good marks! -Cam What a great story and the sex was also fantastic..... Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam I know this is an erotic story site. however, I enjoy stories that are not violent, or humiliating and could possibly happen to ordinary people. thanks! -Cam Very sensual without being crude....I enjoyed it very much. Please finish the weekend!! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Nice to see that not all of the good guys finish last! thanks! -Cam I've read a lot trash in my time but I think that your story was well written in spite of its subject matter. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam amazing story this is the third time i have read it. and every time it gets me excited again. The wording and everything is great. i am so very flattered!!! thank you! -Cam I enjoyed both parts of the story. Good to hear that their is some romance alive and not just vulgar sex. Thank you kindly! -Cam I just finished reading this story, and there isn't much more that I can say, except W O W!!!! And I already said that in my comments to the first part. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Great story. Your descritions are sexy and stimulating. It's fun to imagine being in the story. Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam A very well paced (tail. Apologies for that, but I really enjoyed the work, and look forward for more of this - and whatever else you fancy. i fancy your approval! thank you for reading! -Cam loved it! thanks! -Cam REally good is there any more i would lov to raed more...
thank you for reading! -Cam absolutely great. I am one that is easily annoyed by the "typo", but this story flows like honey . The warmer it gets the easier it flows. My firewall won't allow the asstr page to submit, but I rate your story a 9, only because the edges of a paradigm must never be touched. Until I read everything written, I won't ever give a 10. I'm off to find part one and start all over. Thanks! Wow! Thank you very much! I'll take your 9 anyday! -Cam this was very hot and very touching Thank you! -Cam it was great! just the kinda of thing id like happen to me! the spooning at the end is a gr8 way to end the story! soooooo Goooooooood! Thanks! I love spooning too! and forking too, but that's in part three! (GRIN) -Cam Very well done; I'm hanging over the cliff! Nice erotic story w/o being stoke.
Oh, that's not a good position at all... Hang on tight! -Cam Great stuff. I love the mix of romance and sex. It flows wonderfully and feels very real, like I'm there myself.
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! -Cam Gentle,you sure are very good at what you do! Keep them coming.Makes me wish that i was Allie;-)
Passed on to Cam for comment. (By the way, it's not me, Sunny. Cam wrote this! - Gentle) Isnt fiction wonderful! We can be anybody for a little while! Thanks Sunny! -Cam AWSOME,Cant wait to get to part 2.
This was part two A very good finish, an enjoyable story overall. Keep writing.
Thanks! There's a bit more to the story! Glad you liked it! -Cam Well Gentle made a strong suggestion that we taste a sample of your wares. I'm very glad I took up his suggestion. I tasted and enjoyed Chapter 1, then by the time I got through Chapter 2 I knew I was hooked onto this gourmet food for the senses. Great stuff, please keep it coming. You make me hungry! Thanks Ian! -Cam OUTSTANDING! Thank you for a truly great story (parts 1 and 2). I hope there is a part 3 in the future. You deserve a 10 for this. Wow Hank! I've read you're other reviews and I must say I am very flattered! Thanks! Pt. 3 is in the works! -Cam Outstanding story! Good plot, nice descriptions, well executed! Left me wanting to read the next episode. It would be a crime if you don't at least finish the weekend, no matter now many parts it might take. Keep up the good work. Oh dont have me arrested yet, Clayton! More is on the way! Thanks for reading! -Cam Awwwwwwww! How sweet! A part three would be nice, too.... *grins* Awwwww! Thanks! Three is in the works!! -Cam I just read both parts 1 & 2 and I was well pleased. Your writing is so real and intense. I was both aroused and very satisfied. Keep writing. I'm pleased you like it! Thank you! -Cam Excellent....my girlfriend and I read it together and had fantastic sex afterwards !!! Need I say more ????
hey, it did what it was supposed to then! i'm very flattered! that's the best kind of review! -Cam you are a talented writer I do enjoy you stories ! Thank you No! Thank YOU! But I feel I may be getting credit here for Gentle's stories. He's the one with that big long list of stories. I just have these two parts...so far! -Cam Marvelous, arousing explicit descriptions. Warm and exciting personal interactions. I loved it , old as I am. Thanks
Thank you for the nice words! just because you're older, that doesn't mean you can't feel good! ;-D -Cam Thanks for writing something thats good and sexy. I get really tired of people being unpleasant in sex stories. Its good to read something that actually sounds like real life. thanks for the good and sexy review! -Cam O more, please! Wonderful story telling, great pace, romantic, erotic......... Perfect! I an't wait to rad more.
Thanks! It might be a little while before part three comes out, but I'm sure you will find lots of wonderful stories at Gentle's site to keep you busy! -Cam mmn. wonderful story Cam. Just the right blend of fantasy and rl. I hope it has a happily ever after. fantasy? it could happen... (smirk) yea right... ok, ya got me on that one. ;-) thanks Catalina! -Cam I enjoyed your story as I can relate to it.It was very well written Thanks which part do you relate to? thanks for the good words! -Cam great story, so well told, so erotic, yet so easy to read... had me aroused all through, parts 1 and 2... wouldn't have minded being that lucky guy wow. thanks! i wouldnt have minded being allie either ;-D -Cam Wonderful, arousing writing. Where's part 3?! Passed on to Cam for comment. -Cam Oooo I loved it! There's some serious romance going on here. More please! Thanks for the good words Rapunzel! :-) -Cam |
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