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Date Story Comments from Rapunzel Gentle's response Rating
6/09/2005 2:17:06 p.m. Encounter Beth, never, ever stop writing. Ever. Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it. ^_^
6/09/2005 11:41:30 a.m. Hey gorgeous That Dee is a crazy woman... I like her! I loved the dialogue too! More please. :-) More?
30/08/2005 8:39:16 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 Oooo I loved it! There's some serious romance going on here. More please! :-) Thanks for the good words Rapunzel! :-)
29/08/2005 6:58:40 p.m. The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll Grrr! :-) :-)
29/08/2005 6:57:57 p.m. The Joining Mmmm, that was sexy and romantic and yummy! Oh, must be dinner time. :-)
22/08/2005 6:43:55 a.m. Eyes Closed Part 2 - Blindfolded Wonderful again. More please! :) Working on it, thank you ^_^ I just need a little time to come up with something suitably tantalizing!
22/08/2005 6:41:51 a.m. Eyes Closed Mmmmm, that was wonderful! Wow! A 10! Thank you ^_^
19/08/2005 10:47:33 p.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk Note to self: DO NOT proofread Gentle's stuff at the beginning of a work day! It causes all sorts of frustratingly nice problems... SCORE: Yes please! I'm so NOT sorry to cause problems!
17/08/2005 10:34:10 p.m. Digitally Part 4 Your shower scene made me so sweaty that I need one now! Well go on then!
11/08/2005 6:46:46 p.m. The Gauntlet Gee, if I'd known that "Spin The Bottle" could be THIS much fun I would have played it more!! Definitely one of your best Gentle! You want a game? :-)
1/08/2005 3:30:28 a.m. Pinball How fun! And a nice build-up to a satisfying conclusion. Kinda makes me want to quit my job and go work at the local arcade. :-) Well, so long as I get feedback!
31/07/2005 11:59:28 p.m. Alice Pt 4 Oooo, thank you Gentle, that was fantastically erotic! I just love bed-time stories, don't you? I just love the feedback
31/07/2005 6:38:06 a.m. Alice Pt 3 AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! :-D *Beams* thank you :)
31/07/2005 6:36:58 a.m. Alice Pt 2 Mmmm, thanks Gentle, that made me quite horny! You have a way with words!
31/07/2005 6:36:20 a.m. Alice Part 1 Very erotic and... enlightening. I think I'll move my bed closer to the East window. Just make sure the drapes are open
28/07/2005 4:57:07 p.m. Eelas Wedding Very erotic. I love that their rhythm is created by ***** Nice way to plan a wedding too... get everything done in one fell swoop! Hehe. Tut tut. Clever, but gives too much away. I left a hint or two though.
27/07/2005 4:42:18 a.m. The doorstep 10 :-)
24/07/2005 2:28:45 a.m. It was sexual right from the start You are just FULL of surprises aren't you? I loved it!!! That's the idea!
24/07/2005 1:56:13 a.m. Milo Haha! I loved it, but took off a point for [[see below. Hey, you would have cut this out anyway!]] Oh, and where in the hell can I score some Milo in the states?! Sounds yummy!!!! Re the point, well, I'm not saying that on the page.... Re the milo, no idea!
15/07/2005 9:01:02 p.m. Sleep Therapy This is not a great sex story, it's a great story which just happens to have great sex in it! And getting them there is more than half the fun... You give good feedback, you know. :-)
4/07/2005 5:40:45 p.m. The Swap Part 5 Excellent story Gentle, and the ending was PERFECT!! Excellent feedback. Thank you very much.
3/07/2005 6:22:37 p.m. The Swap Part 4 A perfect "10"! I'm scared to ask you to read part 5 now!
29/06/2005 9:21:40 p.m. Vivian That was sweet and sexy and funny and hot and just plain wonderful!! :) So is your feedback!
27/06/2005 10:20:13 p.m. The Swap Part 3 What do I think? I have ceased to think, and only feel... Is this a good thing?
26/06/2005 7:55:05 p.m. The Swap Part 2 Nice job Gentle, that was INCREDIBLY HOT! I almost wish I'd married a twin... That was incredibly hot Gentle. Really, really incredibly hot. Dare I use this phrase again? -- HOTTER THAN THE SUN! Wet panties discarded, husband targeted, I'm outta here...... Maybe he has a long lost brother! :-) I'm not sure if Maybe I feel sorry for him!
26/06/2005 6:59:45 p.m. Dryworld Is there no "11"? Why can I only give it a "10"? :) What is it about this story, just lately?
24/06/2005 7:26:48 p.m. Amy The sex was as wonderful as always Gentle, and I loved the premise, it was very original! But I gotta feel sorry for the characters. Twenty YEARS?!?! Well, at least they get to do The Wild Thing together on a regular basis. ;-) Well, kinda! :-)
22/06/2005 5:15:08 p.m. Caramel Part 3 Sensuous and hot and exotic and erotic and ... just wonderful Lisa! I'll be back to read more of your stuff just as soon as I recover from reading "Caramel"! You mean I'm not suppose to feel like this all the time?! Maybe something short-circuited...oh well, I'm not fixing it! ;D
22/06/2005 5:13:44 p.m. Caramel Part 2 I don't know how you did it Lisa, but this was even better than Chapter 1! I don't think I have the stamina to read Chapter 3 tonight.... ;) I blame hormones...oh, and my naughty thoughts.
22/06/2005 5:10:03 p.m. Caramel Part 1 I think Sierra said it best: "Oh my god......Oh my god.....Oh my.....mmmm." Pleased to have satisfied.
21/06/2005 7:12:48 p.m. Lancelot and The Damsel I love it! I love it! I love it! That doesn't rhyme!
21/06/2005 7:12:17 p.m. Peta WOW - I need a vacation! :) Who with???
20/06/2005 8:30:42 p.m. Virginia We have a saying here in the states: "Less talk, more action!" I really liked it though. Ever thought about doing something in zero G? ;-) Constantly!
20/06/2005 8:22:40 p.m. Phone for Jackie They're cute and sweet and sexy when they talk on the phone! :) God girl, don't you ever sleep? :-)
20/06/2005 8:21:18 p.m. Terry Ooooo, I LIKE your darker side Gentle!! :) Why am I not surprised?
20/06/2005 8:20:45 p.m. Snow White I love twisting the classics but didn't much care for the present tense style that you used here. That said, I did like the story itself. I hope I never lose my train of thought when I read the original version to a child! ;) Now that's strange. No one else ever said that. Perhaps you were overdosing! :-)
20/06/2005 8:19:55 p.m. Sleepy That was a treat - more like a vivid erotic memory than a story. And now I have my own vivid erotic memory of reading it for the first time alone and in bed... a ten! It's like in the cooking shows. "Here's one I prepared earlier."
19/06/2005 4:12:42 p.m. Bus Stop One wonders exactly what you saw that got you thinking...? :) I bet!
19/06/2005 1:19:30 p.m. Nancy Very, very erotic! This one? Why thanks.
19/06/2005 1:18:29 p.m. Mary What would I do? If I were Alan I'd hop a flight to Australia and if I were Mary I'd cancel my flight to Australia... or invite Alan along. :) Very hot little story. Sometimes it's nice not to go all the way for a change... You're a liability, you know that? :-)
18/06/2005 6:12:29 p.m. Kitty Hey Gentle, want my phone number? ;) Can I reverse the charges?
18/06/2005 5:58:22 p.m. Kaz Part One Gentle, please get some more ice.... You're hot? :-)
16/06/2005 9:45:51 p.m. Chocolate Strawberries Mmmm... makes me wish the Godiva store was open all night! I've got chocolate!
16/06/2005 9:45:27 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 3 I think you should call in sick tomorrow and write Part 4! :) How did you think I wrote 3?
16/06/2005 9:44:34 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 2 Typical male. ;-) Great chapter though! I might have to withdraw my to your comment on the previous chapter now! :-)
16/06/2005 9:43:42 p.m. It starts with a castle Hotter than the sun! Will you marry me? :-)
15/06/2005 7:06:14 p.m. Blue Angel Makes me want to turn off the light early just so I can wake up at midnight and snack on someone.... I'd claim the chicken wings though. :) I would too!
14/06/2005 8:11:05 p.m. Digitally Part 3 I read all of "Digitally" just now and it's instantly my all-time favorite of yours!!! After reading this I find it HIGHLY unfair that your rating system only goes to "10"! Oh, *blush*. Thanks.
14/06/2005 8:06:23 p.m. Electronically The ***** and ***** were a little much, but I have to give it a 9 for the pre-disconnect orgasm. (MINE, that is!) Psssst! Any idea where I can get one of these here inter-stellar contraptions...? :) Yeah, I'll sell you one. Would you be able to demonstrate it to people for me?
12/06/2005 3:15:03 p.m. Splat! I was just reading "Splat!" (Which I also LOVED! Hooray for sexy non-perfect bodies!!) Thanks. I think most of us possess one of these.
12/06/2005 12:12:50 p.m. Suddenly wide awake HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHA... AHHHAHHAHAHA HAHAHAHAH! :-)
12/06/2005 12:11:53 p.m. The Ritual Mmmm, I LOVED it! One of the greatest things about it is that you covered so many types of sex without letting it become overwhelming. It all blended together into one solid experience. And the ending was perfect! I'm very pleased. I don't get a LOT of feedback on this one, but when I do... Well, thank you very much.