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Clayton

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Date Story Comments from Clayton Gentle's response Rating
21/07/2006 9:06:46 p.m. Gathering in the Green Very interesting story. Yes, dark and sad, yet ending with a light turn, from death to (potential) life, or pain to pleasure. Well written, projected me into a time when just such a scenario might have happened. Oh, thanks!
18/07/2006 9:23:56 a.m. Picture This 2 Yeah, picture that! Another pretty lass to dally with ... hm, interesting! Good job. What makes you think that's going to happen? :-)
8/07/2006 2:15:56 p.m. Picture This Good story. I CAN picture that! Now please tell me - Does he find an explanation out of that predicament? Remains to be seen...
26/06/2006 5:51:10 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 Yeppers, another eggselent (that hen talk) segment. That from an Expert in such stories...you know expert? An X is an unknown quantity and a spurt is a drip under pressure. This one says ya got a winner. Oh, good! I thought I lost you in chapter 4!
25/06/2006 8:14:26 p.m. Photographic Memory 5 Good story - outstanding developments! I thought you might like that one, Ed.
25/06/2006 11:20:44 a.m. Photographic Memory 4 another good segment. Maybe not the impact of some others but good. It's a consolidation chapter. :-)
17/06/2006 8:57:10 a.m. Photographic Memory 3 Good story...I'm a little puzzled about where it is headed....so you accomplished what you wanted, right? Looking forward to part 4. Oh, good!
17/06/2006 8:52:38 a.m. Photographic Memory 2 Okay, okay! You've got me mesmerized too. Let's get on with the story. You definitely have my attention ... LOL! Good story, keeps moving, has just enough sex to make me anticipate more. Loving it! You're so EASY! :-)
27/05/2006 4:02:03 a.m. Photographic Memory 1 Excellent story. Masterful use of dialogue, as always. Very entertaining and very erotic. I hope I can keep it up then...
27/05/2006 3:02:37 a.m. Photographic Memory Prologue Skill is required ... knowing what to look for, how to frame it, how to use the light. All of that is important. But nothing ... NOTHING ... beats old-fashioned luck! Being at the right place at the right time when just the right group of girls decides to do ... the right thing? ... is unbelievably lucky. So you understand cameras and girls? :-)
24/05/2006 2:38:45 p.m. Stand and Deliver A very intriguing, humorous story. I love the "period" theme, well carried through the dialogue. Very entertaining. As usual, a good job. Thanks Ed.
9/05/2006 10:29:59 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 7 Another excellent segment of the series. I am not that much of a fan of girl-girl action but found this curiously exciting. Good job. Oh, so any idea why? :-)
25/04/2006 11:56:23 a.m. It starts with a castle Part 6 Another excellent saga of the castle and its crew! Great story. Thanks Ed. More as soon as I find the time!
9/04/2006 4:55:12 p.m. Wet As usual, a great story told basically in dialogue, with aq very unusual storyline behind it. Great job! 'As usual'? I'm going to have to do something to shock!
28/03/2006 7:55:35 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 3 A very good story (although it had been so long, I had forgotten the background setting...sorry) Hope additional parts will come more often. Passed on to Cam for comment.
28/03/2006 7:53:08 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 Another good story with excellent visuals. Hm, wonder if she can continue to separate love and sex ... ?!? Only time will tell!
16/03/2006 7:30:30 a.m. Tennis panties Another outstanding story told with great dialogue. I love the way the story flows through such short blurbs by the participants. Just as well, seeing as that seems to be what I DO these days. :-) Thanks.
26/02/2006 12:45:08 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3b Another excellent story with a twist at the end...If I wasn't hooked on this story before, I am now. Can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. Gread job. A hook was just what I was after!
27/01/2006 11:53:13 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3 Another excellent story in dialogue...maybe not with quite the impact as the face-to-face parts but that's the same as in real life. Still very erotic and very readable. Remember it's just one chapter though... :-)
25/01/2006 9:48:10 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 2 Another riveting story from the master of erotic dialogue. Loved it all. I hope you don't think it's finished! :-)
7/01/2006 12:33:21 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 1 Another excellent story...good content, very believable, didn't go too far...left room for as many more chapters as you care to write. Good job, Gentle. Thanks
10/12/2005 9:46:55 a.m. The Game - Part 4 - Risks Fan-damn-fucking-tastic! Getting better and better, though I gotta wonder about the self-control of a guy who obviously could ***** but holds back. Good story. Looking forward to the "climax". Yeah, one to go! I'm excited too! :-)
3/12/2005 4:57:55 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Excellent story...very hot. Love the "take-charge" attitude of a girl who knows what she wants, and gets it. My interest is piqued and I'm looking forward to the next segment I thought you might like that one...
26/11/2005 1:52:21 p.m. The Game - Part 2 - How To Play Still a good, intriguing story but it doesn't seem to carry the same impact as part 1. Still ... 'tis always nice to run into a lass whose skirt can't cover her ass as she skipe up a stairway!!! Are you sure we have to wait a week for Part 3? Damn, I liked this part much better. :-) Yeah, of course you have to wait!
20/11/2005 10:54:41 a.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit Excellent opening. Now I'm really anticipating the next chapter to see just what The Game really is. Sure you don't want to speed up the postings? Ha! I learned this trick from Batman. Cliffhangers are good! :-)
16/11/2005 7:19:04 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 4 Excellent! Each part simply got stronger and stronger. In this one, I could feel the tension of the connection between the two, could sense the sweat from his exertions, the agony that follows the ecstasy. Great story. More Parts? When I find the strength. :-)
16/11/2005 7:00:53 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 3 Very Good. This story gets better as it goes along. Whew.
16/11/2005 7:00:19 p.m. It starts with a castle Good setup story line --- let's see what follows. Quite a lot, I hope, after all this time...
14/11/2005 1:44:33 p.m. Unexpected I think you are the master of telling major parts of a story with dialogue instead of narrative. All in all, this was an excellent story. And yes, I loved the "ironing as an erotic activity" comment. Another great job. Thanks Clayton.
31/10/2005 9:02:15 p.m. Under The Desk Another great story. I may never look at a telephone the same way again. I've always wished I could project my tongue through the phone line and now I know how (lol)
25/10/2005 7:34:56 a.m. Kitten Tales Lisa, I'm usually not a fan of FF-type stories but this was a little different. First there's a woman named Kitty with a very wet pussy. Second the use of a remote control device to stimulate a female opens up whole new worlds of eroticism (yes, I know they've been around for a while but...). In the end, I found it interesting that one of the partners was wishing she had the equipment of a man so she could FEEL what a man feels as he fucks a woman. Makes me wish I could be a little more understanding of the feelings of women. Mmmm, conversation...I love it. I'm sure you know the phrase 'a man in touch with his feminine side,' well there are plenty of women in touch with their masculine side as well. While I'm pretty estatic being a receiver of such a magnificent tool, frankly, I will forever wonder how you lucky bastards feel when you slide into a creamy center. ;*)
25/10/2005 7:33:21 a.m. The Adventurous Matilda Tapley - Chapter 1- Nineteen Ah, the Great American West. One of my favorite subjects. I've seen few erotic stories about it but this one has started out great. And, better yet, the story line leaves room for many more chapters. I like the way the dialogue captured the way of speaking in those days of yesteryear. Looking forward to more chapters soon. Oh, I thought you said 'wet'. :-)
25/10/2005 7:28:00 a.m. Steak please Another unusual and outstanding story. Great dialogue, had me laughing and then great images of a satisfactory coupling finished it off. Good job! Great!
25/09/2005 10:06:25 a.m. Hunter's moon Good story with a great ending and good descriptions. ... Still, its an eight, bordering on nine. Keep writing, Lisa. When I got to the scene where he tied her to the 'dartboard' (?) my mind started working overtime, if you know what I mean... ;D
25/09/2005 9:41:23 a.m. Wind-play Wow! Tremendous story, great visuals. Was it real or was it Memorex? If only I could find such a lady to share a time with!!! Keep up the good writing, Lisa. Thanks for the con. note. Hey, you found 'me', I'm sure you can find one closer to you...they're EVERYwhere. ;)
25/09/2005 9:14:35 a.m. Ghost Good story. Puts the reader right into the scenario. Love the ending. That's very exciting news, thank you.
24/09/2005 9:44:02 a.m. This is the girl... Beautiful! First the shear lust that drives so many outrageous actions, then the love and gentleness that comes from the ultimate culmination of that lust. Great story! Thanks Clayton. You want to take over? :-)
3/09/2005 5:25:44 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 Outstanding story! Good plot, nice descriptions, well executed! Left me wanting to read the next episode. It would be a crime if you don't at least finish the weekend, no matter now many parts it might take. Keep up the good work. Oh dont have me arrested yet, Clayton! More is on the way! Thanks for reading!
20/08/2005 7:44:41 a.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk Awwww, damn! I got all ready ..... and you wouldn't let me. Good story. I kept wondering right to the end . I edited your comment just a little. Forgive me.
16/08/2005 7:58:25 p.m. Digitally Part 4 Another really outstanding story, well-told, excellent descriptions. Thanks very much
12/08/2005 9:03:53 p.m. Hey gorgeous Another outstanding story. Good humor, good sex, good reading. Keep up the good work. Good. :-)
16/07/2005 4:31:20 p.m. Alice Pt 3 This is a magnificent series. I thought it started a little slow ... that is, like a lot of other fuck stories ... but then I begin to see the storyline better and I love how Alice in Wonderland became a nymphomaniac. Ok, maybe that's the wrong term for her ... turns out she is just as horny as I am, but I loved all three segments, especially the last line of the poem. Now you GOTTA write at least one segment about "me" and Alice. I know you have to have some great ideas about how that will go and I'm looking forward to reading about it. *Beams* Whee. Thank you. I'll have to think about that last line a bit.. Or Maybe Gentle can Dream up that part.. We'll see. (There's always a chance - Gentle)
10/04/2005 7:43:22 p.m. Caramel Part 3 Ugh. What happened to the writing style? Story line is fine but the use of a single 6-page paragraph to tell this story made it super-hard to read online and it appears that spell-check was bypassed. You're talking to the writer, sweetheart, and I'm glad you enjoyed the 'story line'. As for my mistakes, thanks for pointing them out. I hope you didn't let a few pebbles ruin your trek into my fantasy. Still, thanks for coming in. ;)
10/04/2005 7:42:43 p.m. Caramel Part 2 Another good story, well told. Looking forward to part 3 Be gentle.
10/04/2005 7:41:55 p.m. Caramel Part 1 Good story with a nice twist at the end, good setup for part 2 Glad you think so.
9/04/2005 10:00:21 a.m. The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll A very entertaining story and its nice that 'the bad guy' gets some pussy this time. Excellent finish. Thanks a lot. The bad guy was pretty good though.