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Date | Story | Comments from Richard | Gentle's response | Rating |
5/01/2006 8:44:25 p.m. | Linoleum | My last night before surgery and I am overjoyed to read another of your creations. Enjoyed the byplay of the characters and the smooth delivery. Thanks for sharing. Hope they while let me use the computer by the 12th. | Good luck in surgery, good sir! I am glad I was able to give you something to enjoy before you go through such a thing. I am pleased that I get such high reviews. Feel better! |
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12/12/2005 6:57:03 p.m. | The Game - Part 4 - Risks | The picture portrayal of a college campus is excellent. The story fits the background and is exciting. What more could one ask for. Thanks for sharing. | That's a lucky fluke. :-) |
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15/11/2005 4:50:24 p.m. | It starts with a castle Part 4 | To show such restraint by an adult might not be believeable but it makes an excellent story. Thank you for taking the time to create this for others to read. | Who's showing restraint? :-) |
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31/10/2005 9:18:30 p.m. | Digitally Part 4 | Great story that needs another chapter like in threesome. | Thanks Richard |
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30/10/2005 3:30:20 p.m. | Alpha & Omega | One slight correction in spelling for this marvelous story... | Damn. Thanks. Fixed. |
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30/10/2005 3:27:51 p.m. | Donna | An excellent host story. One of the best I have ever read. Considering I read one to two books daily that is the highest complement I can give you writing. Thanks again for your time and effort. | Thanks Richard. Much appreciated. |
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30/10/2005 3:25:26 p.m. | Wake up call | What a way to wake up! The desire of a spouse when their loved one is very ill can be overpowering. The setting was very well done and the development of the two main characters is so smooth and believeable. Thank you for creating this little section of life. | Must be time for bed. :-) |
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30/10/2005 3:24:52 p.m. | The Shower | I always leave the shower cleaner than I find it HA! Its the bath tub that I fail to clean fully. Good story that I find very possible, therefore exciting. Please accept may thanks for sharing this story. |
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30/10/2005 3:24:08 p.m. | Next Time - Part 2 | I think i am hooked on you and artie for life. Your stories are pleasant not crude, sexually exciting, and I always want more. Thank you for creating such wonderful entertainment. | Well, Artie deserves it. :-) |
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30/10/2005 9:32:12 a.m. | Peta | I am having so much fun reading your stories for my afternoon break. Oh well time to head out again. Thanks again for sharing. Will try to read some more after dinner. | More? You'll hurt yourself. :-) |
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30/10/2005 9:31:25 a.m. | Terry | Very fasinating story that seems possible. I am enjoying a break from yard work by reading several of your stories. Thank you for the entertainment. | Several? I think you've just about read the lot! :-) |
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30/10/2005 9:28:47 a.m. | Kaz Part Two | I loved the story but what about an editorial comment. Three lines below where "shampoo. two people." is asked for it says "untill he finally grabbed told of her" should read grabbed hold of her. After all your time and effort it is the least I can do. | Damn. That's gotta be four years, and no one said a word! Thanks Richard. All fixed, at least at ASSTR |
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30/10/2005 9:22:00 a.m. | The Swap Part 5 | A hot story that just keeps going. I can patiently wait for more(sigh). Well written with a wonderful flowing of events. One of the reasons I enjoy reading your creations is how the events are so logical in their order of progression. Thanks again for sharing this story. | More? Not from me! :-) And thank you very much |
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30/10/2005 12:24:31 a.m. | The Swap Part 4 | [blank] |
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30/10/2005 12:13:35 a.m. | The Swap Part 3 | [blank |
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30/10/2005 12:13:19 a.m. | The Swap Part 2 | [blank] |
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30/10/2005 12:12:50 a.m. | The Swap Part 1 | [blank] |
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30/10/2005 12:04:25 a.m. | The Adventurous Matilda Tapley - Chapter 1- Nineteen | A polite sex story that promises much and then delivers. A very different style from your other stories. I can imagine myself writing something like this if I had the ability and patience. Thank you for sharing another of your creations. | Polite? :-) Is this part of the criteria now? :-) |
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29/10/2005 10:41:51 a.m. | Vivian | Vivian was a refreshing breeze after some of the stories I have read lately. Thank you for sharing. | Pleased to hear it. But after the amount of feedback you've sent me today, are you talking about MY stories? :-) |
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29/10/2005 10:39:29 a.m. | It started innocently enough | What can I say that has not been said before, except I am addicted to your stories. Thanks. | Oh, you starting at the beginning? :-) |
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29/10/2005 10:38:41 a.m. | Steak please | Very nice short story. Just to quick for my tastes.Thanks for sharing. | Yeah, but honestly it had to be that quick. |
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21/10/2005 3:17:57 p.m. | White Witch | Entertaining spoof that is well written. Thank you for sending this new story. |
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14/10/2005 7:06:25 p.m. | Kimberly might not have been drunk | WOW one of the hottest stories you have written. May be number one on my list of hottest stories you have written. Keep up the wonderful work and thank you very much for your time and creativeness. | Thanks Richard. Much appreciated. |
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14/10/2005 7:05:15 p.m. | No Sequel | Enjoyed the discreption of the sex and events leading up to to final ending. Hope to see longer stories but am happy with whatever I can find on the internet that you have written. Again as always thank you for sharing this story. | Well, that's more comprehensive than your last comment... And a better score. Thanks. |
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14/10/2005 7:04:16 p.m. | This is the girl... | It was OK but not a top ten by this author. Just not an area of intereste. Thank you for the posting of this story. There will always be some that my not interest me but I am sure the younger readers will enjoy. | Hey it's in MY top 10! :-) |
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14/10/2005 6:59:26 p.m. | Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 | After reading this story for the second time I enjoyed it more the second time around. But I really liked it the first time. Being shy all my life I can really bond with Thomas. The storyline is very realistic and moves quickly to the conclusion. Thanks for allowing us to read your work. | Passed on to Cam for comment. |
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5/10/2005 8:59:13 p.m. | Hunter's moon | Again I thoroughly enjoyed this excellent story. While I always wish were longer all stories must come to and end or another chapter. Thank you again. | Watch out with the 'sincerely yours' it makes a girl like me think all sorts of things. By the way...could you possibly be throwing hints for another chapter? ;D |
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17/09/2005 11:45:33 a.m. | No Sequel | Enjoyed it as an introduction but wish it were longer. | :-) |
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17/09/2005 11:44:43 a.m. | Encounter | This is a very romantic story and I know some lady friends who will love it. Thanks for letting me enjoy it without having to search for it on the net. | Thanks, I am glad you found it enjoyable. That's what I write for, yeh know ^_~ |
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10/09/2005 12:05:02 p.m. | Eyes Closed Part 2 - Blindfolded | Enjoyed the supense and action. | Why thank you! I appreciate your kindness. I am glad you enjoyed it and hope you continue to read my works! |
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