Reviews from

John

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Date Story Comments from John Gentle's response Rating
28/04/2006 8:01:18 p.m. Statuesque Sexy. Nice. Thanks again.
28/04/2006 7:46:19 p.m. Tennis panties Fun, quick. Just like your comment, John! :-)
26/04/2006 2:34:51 a.m. Everything's A Blur Verrrry sexy. The wandering time line is a nice tease. Passed on to Lisa for comment.
25/03/2006 9:37:23 a.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 Thoroughly enjoyable. It's been quite a while since your last contribution to my pleasure. Hey, you keep your pleasure to yourself. :-)
2/03/2006 5:40:39 p.m. Ghost Not one of my favorites, not sure why, probably a bit too unbelieveable but not fantasy. If I had the chance to write a story over, it would be this one. I love the idea, I love the character, especially , but I have to admit...I rushed, and it changed the story completely. Damn deadlines. ;) Still, thanks for a cool rating.
2/03/2006 5:39:54 p.m. 69s Very well done. The Tunnel was my favorite. Liked the ending. Thanks. So you got one for me?
27/01/2006 11:42:37 p.m. Wind-play Interesting, but "only" a 7. I'm a 'rounding off' kind of gal. Thanks. ;)
27/01/2006 11:05:46 p.m. Meeting of the Minds - Journey of Two Authors HOT! HOT! HOT! I didn't last as long as they did. You've just won first place, my friend. ;)
9/01/2006 10:47:10 p.m. The Chieftan Erotic, good but not my style. I enjoyed it. Passed on to Lisa for comment.
9/01/2006 10:46:36 p.m. Linoleum Wonderfully erotic. Stories by women seem sexier than by men, but then maybe I am prejudiced. Glad to hear you liked it so much! I am not sure why stories by women seem more erotic, perhaps it's just our take on sex? I've read stories by both and it's my opinion that- while both are good- women tend to be a little more... tender with it. Even in scenes of rough, wild abandon.
9/01/2006 10:45:53 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 1 Very sexy. Reminds me of the first girl I was ever in bed with. She was my age physically (about 12-13) but sexually-mentally way ahead of me. She knew what she wanted but sadly, I didn't have a clue. I still dreame about her over 50 years later. If only I had known! Some of us NEVER get a clue. Think yourself lucky!
3/12/2005 12:41:24 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Fun brief.
27/11/2005 8:48:25 a.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 I didn't find this part as hot as the first chapter. Not sure why, still it was a good read. Thank you. Passed on to Cam for comment.
27/11/2005 8:47:13 a.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 Althought this was written from the womans view, it had a bit of male fantisy in it. A bit gender bending but very good. Passed on to Cam for comment.
23/11/2005 8:11:38 p.m. Sally I am supposed to be working but you have sucked me in. Enjoying your writing too much. Can I stop work too, then?
23/11/2005 8:06:32 p.m. The Gauntlet Very erotic. Want to make the pleasure last. Good plan