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Charlie

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Date Story Comments from Charlie Gentle's response Rating
9/04/2006 12:50:08 p.m. Wet I read "Wet" and enjoyed it. Maybe it meant a bit more to me because *****. The interplay of characters was really more important than the sex. I don't read all you write but I was the person who complimented you on using correct grammar Thanks for the kind words, Charlie. Sorry to blank out some of what you said.
21/09/2005 10:35:36 p.m. Summer I had a problem with dealing with her nudity and than her stripping. I'm a nit-picker from way back and little things bother me. What I said about the other story is also applies to my oopinion of this one. I was particularly impressed with your correct usage or the past tense of the verb "lie". Thanks for the pointers.
21/09/2005 10:34:05 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 I've read a lot trash in my time but I think that your story was well written in spite of its subject matter. Passed on to Cam for comment.