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Date Story Comments from Ian Gentle's response Rating
27/05/2006 12:30:12 p.m. Photographic Memory 1 Oh yes, much more of this. I want to see what happens when . I want to see the reaction from Sally when she . Oh yes, more of this for sure. No one said those things were going to happen! :-)
25/03/2006 3:12:38 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 great chapter, she has a seriously good time between Paul and Domenic. I like that. Light and shade. Makes for a believable yarn. One minor slip ... You left off the :I: at the start of Chapter 5 ;) I'm not sure what you mean, Ian.
14/03/2006 5:40:53 p.m. Tennis panties How sporting of them. Gee, maybe there is a new genre out there, "Sporting and Spurting"... nah, probably not. Nice thought though ;) Tut tut. :-)
27/02/2006 6:19:34 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3c Good chapter, I can put that rope away for a while ROFL I like the way Dawn handles the situation by just getting in there and enjoying the fun. Sounds like they all had a great afternoon. Wish I could see the pictures Just close your eyes!
24/02/2006 8:33:57 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3b You better be writing fast, I can see some folks gathering some rope I like this one. Innocence lost and yet there seems to be something going on between the two of them. Something neither of them expected nor are they sure just how to handle it. Bit of suspense won't hurt... Too much. :-)
28/01/2006 10:42:02 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3 Like it so far? Hell Yes. Loads of fun. Innocence of childhood. First time and all that. Really enjoying it. More please. Great. Just what I was after!
14/01/2006 11:26:33 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 2 yeh liking the pace just fine. Some kids just race to the end together and then find they have missed out on the fun of taking the time to enjoy themselves along the way. This pace suits the characters and will soon end up with them as one. Nice story. Well, these two aren't organised enough to rush! Thanks Ian.
17/12/2005 11:23:50 a.m. The Game - Part 5 - Closure Would never have guessed it was *****. You kept your cards very close to your chest on that topic! Great story, liked it a lot. Wish SOL had let me vote it a 10 but the voting routine never showed up I think if you've voted on it during the chapters, then you can't do it again. Not sure though.
3/12/2005 10:18:33 a.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Mike could have been something of interest. Will she go back to him when the game is over or has he been all that he is going to be ... other than a good close friend. You want to know NOW?
15/11/2005 3:38:35 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 4 Loved it. Glad to see the new chapter. I guess that means I should do it again. :-)
27/10/2005 7:46:12 a.m. Steak please Well I liked it, the steak I mean. The Chicken, well it was a bit hot. But tasty. Yes, very tasty piece of flesh. I think she liked it too. The steak I mean. Thankyou. Note. No chicken for Ian. Got it...
3/09/2005 11:11:04 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 Well Gentle made a strong suggestion that we taste a sample of your wares. I'm very glad I took up his suggestion. I tasted and enjoyed Chapter 1, then by the time I got through Chapter 2 I knew I was hooked onto this gourmet food for the senses. Great stuff, please keep it coming. You make me hungry! Thanks Ian!
14/08/2005 12:32:37 a.m. It started innocently enough Reminds me of my younger days when my lady would travel around on the suburban trains with me on late shift. There were times when we were the only ones on the train and the driver was in his cab at the front. Nice time. Nice memories. Nice way to spend time at work. You're at work? :-)
14/08/2005 12:11:33 a.m. Hey gorgeous Well. That's .... ummm... different. I think that it is a pleasant departure from the norm... the regular ... the usual style you use but ... yes, interesting. Do I want to see ... some ... more perhaps... not sure. Maybe not. Did I like this one? Yes, it was ... different ;) Hey, different is good!
1/05/2005 2:06:07 p.m. Suddenly wide awake I enjoyed it. The sneakiness, the solitude, the searching of memories, the climax. And then ... Classic. Thanks Ian. Sorry to snip you, but that was a spoiler!
3/03/2005 7:13:25 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 2 I'm liking this story. Thanks for that. Sorry to snip you, but you gave the story away!
5/02/2005 Tiros and his Nemesis A good interlude. Quite enjoyable. I liked it.
31/12/2004 Next Time - Part 2 I was very surprised. I enjoyed the first one but felt so sorry ... A great story that I enjoyed, thanks for sharing it with us. Sorry, but I had to bleep out some, in case you give it away.