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Date Story Comments from Hank Gentle's response Rating
23/07/2006 11:55:00 a.m. Gathering in the Green A really different story for you (and for me). Can't say that I enjoyed it. Sorry but a 5 for this one. I was reading your other feedback and wondered if you'd still be talking to me when you got here. I can take it. :-)
23/07/2006 11:49:09 a.m. Picture This 2 Again very well written as you lead your readers, step by step, through a very sexy encounter Amy and Scott. Amy seems like she know what she wants - just sex- and how she wants it - Scott on top. She is sure not a prude (my idea of a great sex fuck). Amy is a dominent partner who makes the end a lot more understandable. Lisa and Amy obviously have a plan together. I wonder if Sarah is included? No I don't wonder I know she is ;-) You just might be reading more into this than actually exists...
23/07/2006 11:12:18 a.m. Picture This Gentle I got a very vivid and arrousing picture of a very excited Scott and an extremely willing Amy making the most out of one of those chance in a lifetime situations that you wish would happen every day! Wonderfully written and quite sexy. PS: doesn't the word "panties" make this a sexier story "knickers"? ;-) Oh, good! That was the aim. :-) Oh, and nope!
8/07/2006 11:34:25 p.m. The Ritual This is an extremely story. As I read it I wondered how much of it was fiction. My conclusion was "all of it". it reminds me of some of your other stories where you didn't give away the ending until the very end. Well done. It kept me in suspense and excited. A definite 10! Hell, you'd hope it was all fiction, Hank! :-)
7/07/2006 8:22:40 p.m. Wake up call Gentle I'm not sure how to take this story. It does not seem to me to be medically "correct". Sex is great but I never thought of it as a medical cure. Have to give you a 7 for this one. It's my job to confuse. :-)
2/07/2006 5:12:05 p.m. Lust Letter Tilly I had to read this a second time it is so good. It, and you are the best! Perhaps you can't count it but my mind still says 10! And I certainly appreciate knowing! A second read?! Hank, you're a man of fine, fine taste. :)
25/06/2006 8:17:16 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 Great love and better sex. A great story with good dialogue and descriptions. A definite 10. But what is going to happen to Vicki and Heather? More chapters? Of course more chapters!
25/06/2006 8:16:20 p.m. Photographic Memory 5 Chapter 5 is good (hot) but not as good (hot) as chapter 4. Opinions vary, but thanks!
25/06/2006 8:15:24 p.m. Photographic Memory 4 WOW WOW WOW HOT HOT HOT SEX SEX SEX And you said this chapter had no sex! I guess "no sex" can be better than "sex" or MF or mf! LOVE IT! So you liked it, Hank? :-)
21/06/2006 8:05:48 p.m. Photographic Memory 3 I found part #3 very exciting but unrelated to the previous parts. You should pay attention, Hank. The girls are telling a story. :-)
21/06/2006 8:04:50 p.m. Photographic Memory 2 Gentle This is a great little story and I have no idea where you are thaing me. The 3 broads sound like a LOT of fun. As usual, great dialogue. I'm not telling! :-)
7/06/2006 8:24:44 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 3 This is a great story. Lots of love and young sex. I really like the way Alys and Dom have "learned about sex"! All by themselves. This makes their relationship absolutely UNIQUE to them! This fact alone makes this Part a 10! Too bad that in Part 4. Gentle, keep up the good writing. Thanks Hank
5/06/2006 10:02:28 p.m. Lust Letter Tilly You are a very good writer and have a real creative mind which is evident by the way your stories read. Your imagination is also creative! "LUST LETTER" is a good example. Who else would develop such a strong, exciting sex story from an overcrowded train ride home from a busy day at work? If it was me I would have exited the train all pissed-off and in a bad mood. You developed a lot of "sex/heat" from your ride home. I could feel the sexual tension just reading your story! Thanks for a great story. I do some of my best thinking on my commute to work Hank, I just have to make sure I have my pad and pencil at the ready! :)
27/05/2006 8:07:54 p.m. Photographic Memory 1 Tremendous story. One of your best.Younge sex but with all the concerns of "am I doing it right?". They both learned soooo much. Who needs a teacher when they can teach each other, This is truly a great story and is one of your very best. A definite 10. Thanks Hank. I knew I could rely on you! :-)
27/05/2006 5:16:56 p.m. Photographic Memory Prologue Getting that perfect picture is the product of good planning, lots of luck and PERFECT timing. You had at least the first two! Too bad you missed the big wave, but, Gentele, that's life. You know what, Hank? I don't think Paul was complaining. :-)
26/05/2006 7:18:04 p.m. It was sexual right from the start I am not an English Major, (really engineering) but this is the best wrtten story of yours that I have ever read. A GREAT story. Thanks Hank. Sorry to some of your feedback, but you were giving away some of the story. :-)
23/05/2006 3:09:26 p.m. Stand and Deliver Really different from your normal stories. But I prefer the old stories to this. It is well written but not as fast moving and sexy as usual. Can't really get excited over this one. Bummer. :-(
23/05/2006 1:20:41 a.m. The Swap Part 1 Wow - what a setting! Holly has the plan to satisfy all. I love it. A great beginning. Definiteny a 10 I hope you read the rest then, Hank. :-)
18/05/2006 7:59:01 p.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk Kimberly was either dead drunk or not close to it - it is a matter of degree and her degree was reading sober. She did not get me hot by anything she did. I think she faked it. She knew what she was doing all the time. Still a well written story. Give you an 8 on this one. Nonsense. :-)
18/05/2006 7:58:20 p.m. The Game - Part 2 - How To Play This multi-part story if very sensual. It is obvious that Heather is both excited and pleasured by her unkown attacker. She is an extremely adventerous coed - too much for her own good! I do believe that she is more excited by the dares of her lover than any danger he represents. This is a very exciting, involved story. Definitely a 10! Sensual is good! :-)
18/05/2006 7:57:27 p.m. Digitally Part 4 Wish I was Joe (the poor exvirgin)! Mel and Stella really knew what he needed and how they could play with him! Lucky guy. With all the obvious sex in this story it was very believable and certanily FUN to read. The shower sceen was well written. You dun good! A definite 10 Thanks Hank. That's some damn good feedback!
14/05/2006 11:31:42 a.m. Wet A very well written and believable story of a pair of strangers who, in one day became the most loving, intimate friends. You wrote it so convincently. Well done. Thanks again Hank.
14/05/2006 11:30:59 a.m. Kitty This is one hell of a story. A real surprise request from a stranger. A very sexy virgin stranger. Have to give you a 10 with pleasure! I thought you might like that one Hank. Thanks.
12/05/2006 5:23:39 p.m. Alpha & Omega Cute story from the beginning with lots of possible endings. Have to log into SOL to find out! Oh, but this is all there is, my friend. :-)
10/05/2006 2:39:15 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 7 A very hot story about a very hot farm girl. Wish I knew an "Alys" in my younger years ;-) :-)
25/04/2006 5:00:28 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 6 This is the only chapter I have read, found it very interesting and well developed. It is very sexy; Alys has two really different lovers. I have to read the previous chapters. Until further complete reading.. Hank, you've given me feedback on parts 1, 2,4 & 5. I'm pretty sure you've read them, buddy.
22/04/2006 7:45:02 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 3 Cam - you have really written a great story of love and sex! Both Allison and Thomas really need and want each other more than either anticipated or expected at the beginning of the story (part1).Thanks for a real romantic experience. Passed on to Cam for comment.
19/04/2006 2:14:13 p.m. Liberty Give me Liberty or give me death. But I'm not Tom. I'm Hank and really enjoyed your story Tilly. It is very believable and very sexy. I was wondering, as I read the story, how you would end this story, how you would take care of Lisa. You did it in 6 simple sentences. Well done! This story has potential for a lot more chapters. Just the age difference must be overcome. And I'm sure a lot more sex is required before they consider a permanent relationship! Libby just lost her virginity!! Please continue. For this story you deserve a 10! Hank, blunt is good. Thanks for this!
10/04/2006 7:58:47 p.m. Everything's A Blur Your story is based on a very interesting concept of how a terminally ill person and a perfectly healty person can truly fall in love with each other. But this is such a complex subject, and it is weighted by such a heavy subject that I found it hard to enjoy. Yes, your descriptions of their sex were good and led the reader (or at least me) into some understanding of intimate the two had become. But you only gave us one glimps of their relationship. And that was not enough. Sorry but I don't think even Gentle could make this a good story. I have to give you a 6. So honest, ohhh, such a turn-on, but a writer can't talk about fantasy all the time. Spirit is still intact...thanks for stopping by. ;)
25/03/2006 10:16:06 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 Gentle This is a great story which Alys learns the difference between Love and Sex. And she likes them both Shhh... It's supposed to be a secret!
17/03/2006 8:05:35 p.m. Statuesque This is a good story bur not nearly your best. ?? (does she have a name) is a sexually experienced woman that really needs a man to satisfy her but since none are available, she takes control herself. Not terribly exciting but predictable. And no dialogue (your strength) as she is she only character (her and her fingers). Luv Ya but have to give you a 5 Strangely enough, my scores for this one are much higher than the other one you mention. Can't win 'em all! :-)
17/03/2006 8:05:02 p.m. Tennis panties Gentle You are at your very best in this cute/sexy (or is it sexy/cute) story. I think it was cute and then sexy because of your very clever dialogue between Amy and Dan. And I'm sure they fucked happily ever after! You get a 10+ for this one. Glad you like it, Hank.
5/03/2006 12:56:02 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3c Gentle This was good but not your best. Too predictable and not your normally great dialogue. It is still a 8 You know, I think you are my toughest customer!
24/02/2006 8:41:07 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3b Gentle I am continually amazed at how you use dialog to support the story. Better than any writer I know. The relationship between CA and Paul is really described by the dialog. CA's humour is great and almost as good as Paul's. They make a "natural" couple (thanks to your writing skills). 3B was a good story, but not the best (I believe part 2 was the defining part0. please don't wait so long for the next chapter. I'll do my best, Hank. Thanks a lot.
28/01/2006 11:11:04 p.m. Meeting of the Minds - Journey of Two Authors A good hot story. Mostly believable. Passed on to Lisa for comment.
6/01/2006 7:24:54 p.m. The Chieftan Story is very sexy and well written. Characters are a bit over exagerated for my taste. But it is a very good story. Still 100% satisfied with your comment. ;)
6/01/2006 7:24:33 p.m. Linoleum This is a good story as it tells a about very believable love between a couple tha never thought of themselves as being in love. Alex and Alyis make an ideal couple even though at least Alyis didn't realize it. Her "recovery" was accelerated Alex who understood her and her needs. I enjoyed their relationship and how it concludes. You deserve an 8 for this effort. You should see how they act around each other on a day-to-day basis, it's like a bomb ticking away. They're good friends, but Alex is not above putting Alyis in line. Glad to know you liked the story ^_^
6/01/2006 7:23:54 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 1 I like the story very much. It is a great beginning. Not too heavy (except the breathing). Two kids finding out what sex is for starters. Their dialogue (one of you specialties) is outstanding and really tells the story and what they are feeling and thinking. This "start" deserves a 10 and I hope you are working on "Day 2". Damn pressure... :-) Thanks Hank
18/12/2005 7:55:40 p.m. The Game - Part 5 - Closure On purpose I did not read any of the reviews. I wanted to see if I could figure out who Birch was. Nor do I want to give the ending away for any other reader. The overall story was terrific and kept me in suspense. I did not guess the identity of Birch. But I truly enjoyed the story. Have to give you a 10 for part 5 and for the entire story as well. "GENTLE, YOU DUN GOOD" Thanks Hank. The comments are usually safe to read. I try not to let anyone give it away.
11/12/2005 10:57:25 p.m. Digitally Part 3 What a wonderful beginning to a good sex life as *****. I love sex, you love sex, and WE ALL LOVE SEX. You keep trying to give the story away, Hank. :-)
11/12/2005 10:54:33 p.m. Digitally Part 2 Mel is one crazy young *** a very sexy story. Sorry to bleep you Hank.
11/12/2005 12:01:17 a.m. Digitally A great start to a hopefully very sexy story. Very believable and well written. You stopped here? :-)
10/12/2005 11:52:41 p.m. Eyes Closed Part 2 - Blindfolded More GREAT sex! Alex is one HOT BABE!!! She has never even thought of love - just great sex. Hope you plan on continuing this series and forget the "love" for more REALLY GREAT SEX! One request - don't make Alex so submissive. In fact a great story would be when she, by design, turns the power of sex over to herself and controls Jeff!!!!! This is a natural because: number 1 she is a woman (who normally control sex) and number 2 because she has such a great body and loves to show it. What do you think? I have actually been considering that for the next installment- ^_~ No promises nor spoilers though! I am sorry I've been slow with it... my creative energies have been absorbed by school @_@
10/12/2005 11:50:33 p.m. The doorstep Very good. I've been looking for another story, similar in many ways, also written with verve and style. In that one she turns off her car and starts crying, the cell tone is music which she ignores... angry at having caught him btwn the wrong pair of legs. Then a mutual male friend approaches and one thing leads to another right there in front of the house, the step digging uncomfortably into her back... Whew! Did you write that one too? Nope, not me. Anyone else know?
10/12/2005 11:49:06 p.m. Eyes Closed Beth So far this story has left me believing that Alex is a real slut that somehoe remained a virgin 'till college. To bad she didn't attend my college! The story is very exciting and well written (I'll leave it to the present college generation as to how realistic). But I thoroughly enjoyed it. Glad to know you liked it! I am not too sure it's realistic or logical, but I liked the idea and so I ran with it.
10/12/2005 11:09:00 p.m. The Game - Part 4 - Risks You are keeping the story interesting and not giving away any answers. Keep it up. Not for much longer. Only one to go!
3/12/2005 4:30:32 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Very well written little sex story that leaves the reader still wondering who Birch is. Waiting unpatiently for part IV. Hey, less of the 'little' :-)
29/11/2005 8:55:37 p.m. Donna I do not understand what really happened. It is a VERY sexy story. I am in need of an explaination. Sorry No need. I'll email you...
20/11/2005 10:21:45 p.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit Gentile "The Game-part 1" is off to a hot start. Obviously there is to be a part 2-5. I am very interested in what is to follow! Give you a 10 for the start. It's 'Gentle', Hank. :-)
17/11/2005 8:54:27 p.m. 69s 69s is both a sexual and a author's chalange. Gentile, you done good! But not that good. 69 words are not enough for describing anything, especially a 69! Its like trying to eat a Thanksgiving dinner in 10 minutes with both hands tied behind your back and nobody else in the house to help you! But you took on the chalange and did well. So... Do you have to carve the turkey too? :-)
17/11/2005 8:53:18 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 4 I enjoyed this chapter very much. Was somewhat surprised by Alys. She is a real sex hound where I had thought of her as a more loving but very sexy young woman. Thanks Hank. She's supposed to surprise you!
15/11/2005 6:44:41 p.m. Unexpected Very real-to-life and very sexy. A great story! Have to give you a 10 as I could not imagine a better plot. Damn! I hope I think of one! :-) Thanks Hank.
30/10/2005 9:02:28 p.m. Kitten Tales I'm not sure what I think. The story itself was very arrousing. But I don't understand how and/or why a strap-on-cock is needed to arouse two perfectly committed women lovers as Liz and Kitty. Do they still new a male component to satisfy their great sexual feelings towards each other? I'll gladly supply the cock if that is want they want and both they and I will will be well satisfied! Obviously I am a hetero male. But what are they? perhaps your readers could "straighten" me out. They're lesbians, sweetie, and their fierce attraction arouses these two. Since their cores are still in tact, wouldn't you understand the need for something long and hard to satisfy their itch?
25/10/2005 7:19:02 p.m. The Adventurous Matilda Tapley - Chapter 1- Nineteen An excellent story with great dialog and even better sex. But the whole story was not quite believable. I don't know what Gentile and Tramp contributed. Jed and Matilda are interesting characters. Please keep me informed for the next chapters. And we're not saying either, Hank. :-)
25/10/2005 7:17:47 p.m. Steak please This is tremendous. Almost as good as "The Three Stoges". Whos on first? etc. Great dialog between story. Would love to see it put in a stage play. A REAL 10! Thanks Hank.
22/10/2005 11:25:58 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 An outstanding story of LOVE between two adults who really need and want each other. This was a very arrousing story. And also very believable. I have to give you a 10 for this. Passed on to Cam for comment.
22/10/2005 11:25:16 p.m. White Witch Well written - great dialog. You keep getting better! It's only because you bully me, Hank. :-)
25/09/2005 7:41:02 p.m. Wind-play A very sexy story. Raven is one hot woman. The fact that she doesn't even know her lover is exciting. Can't say that I completely understand the ending. But that is not important - probably meant for another story. Lisa , yor deserve a 9 for Wind-Play I was hoping that the meaning was clear. Guess I'll have to go in and insert a little key word for you, then I'm sure you'll understand. ;)
25/09/2005 7:40:07 p.m. Hunter's moon A real suprise ending. Well written. Very sexy. Lisa, you deserve a 9 for this Ohh, thank you.
25/09/2005 7:39:28 p.m. Ghost A very interesting story. But Ghost gave up too quickly. I had hoped for a much longer and more detailed seductions by India before Ghost, gave even a hint of his identity. The author seems to be in a hurry to get to the end. I tried, my friend, but they only allowed me 2.000 words. Next time I'll prolong it...just for you.
23/09/2005 9:01:59 p.m. This is the girl... A very very sexy from you.I believe it is your best by far. With all the wild sex background you tell about this girl, who would have expected such a loving, tender intimate LOVE exchange between you two. Of course the last sentence tell it all! Extremely well done, of course a 10. Oh, thanks Hank. I was DRIVEN to write it. Maybe I should take more notice. :-)
14/09/2005 6:13:31 p.m. No Sequel Really enjoyed. This is the way to "go"! It is obvious why there is no sequel. The dialog between Cassie and Steve is great. It tells the whole story (probably your strongest writing method) and the flow of the story is great. The story itself is very sexy. This is true in especially in the complete darkness where only verbage alone provides the sexual intensity and finally the ultimate sex. This is an excellent story and rates a 10+. Thanks Hank.
10/09/2005 5:52:24 p.m. Encounter Very well written with a sense of sex overcoming the fear one might have expected. Thanks for an entertaining story. Thanks! I am glad you liked it. And indeed, that was the effect I was going for ^_^
3/09/2005 9:29:21 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 OUTSTANDING! Thank you for a truly great story (parts 1 and 2). I hope there is a part 3 in the future. You deserve a 10 for this. Wow Hank! I've read you're other reviews and I must say I am very flattered! Thanks! Pt. 3 is in the works!
3/09/2005 6:16:39 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 It seems to be the beginning of a great story. Can not wait for the next part. Passed on to Cam for comment.
28/08/2005 5:11:46 p.m. Eyes Closed So far it has been a very sexually exciting story. I have really enjoyed it. Thank you ^_^ I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy my future works as much.
13/08/2005 6:35:46 p.m. Hey gorgeous Gentle The story was very creative and yes, sexy. I enjoyed it very much and could relate to Aaron and Dee. ... The story was very exciting, fast moving, and worth a 10. Thanks Hank.
7/08/2005 6:33:42 p.m. Alice Pt 4 You wrote a great story with Alice. Just finished Alice 4 - full of surprises, unbelievable age changes, and crazy interruptions (the mouse). I enjoyed it but it isn't even near my style. But I have to give you an 8 because it is so well written. Thanks Hank. Much appreciated.
7/08/2005 6:33:19 a.m. Alice Pt 3 Alice pt3 is strange. It shows Alice as a a hot woman looking for some kind of sex that is totally undefined. Part3 is obviously an intro to part 4; as by itself it tells the reader very little about Alice or what is to come. Well actually, I didn't WRITE part 4 until after Catlina's part 3 inspired me to! And it might not TELL much, but it FEELS great. (Gentle) *smiles* Honestly, I don't think it was supposed to make sense, I usually like to leave alot up to the reader's Imagination. And I'm not sure about your perpective of alice in the poem actually looking for something.. She did however find something.. Thanks for the comment :)
7/08/2005 6:32:17 a.m. Alice Pt 2 THIS IS A FAIRY TALE AND I REALLY ENJOYED IT. GIVE YOU A 9 FOR GOOD IMANINATION. Thanks Hank
1/08/2005 4:25:12 p.m. Carmine You were VERY creative in this. Obviously your imagination was very active during this rewrite. The story is very intertaining and creative. Have to give you a 10 for this. Thanks again Hank.
1/08/2005 4:24:32 p.m. Lancelot and The Damsel I'm not a poet but enjoyed your little poem. It sure if different from anything I have read befor about Sir Lancelot! Hey, neither am I, but I enjoyed writing it!
1/08/2005 4:23:57 p.m. Snow White Cute story. A change in pace from the "normal" - if you have a normal! Enjoyed it for some strange reason. Pleased you like it Hank.
25/07/2005 6:17:33 p.m. Suddenly wide awake The dialogue was good but the description of sex was average (at best) and somewhat disappointing compared to previous writings. And yet LAST time you reviewed this, you gave me a 1!
24/06/2005 7:09:53 p.m. Dreamscape This is the most descriptive and believable description of what a woman feels when having sex with a man! It is very believable as well as erotic. I really enjoyed the part where she experiments with how deep she can swallow his cock. I would like to read more about this as I have NEVER read a berrter description. You really have sweet dreams and they are worth a 10! Oohhhh, you're too much! I wouldn't mind writing another story about this, it's one of my favorites. All I have to do is think about what I want to do to a guy...and it pretty much writes itself. Ciao ;D
17/06/2005 11:48:18 p.m. Caramel Part 2 This chapter was tense but but does not stand by itself. It shows the sexual tension between Carlos, Sierra and Paolo but reaches no conclusion. I assume it will all come together at the end but I am not all that impressed of chapter 2. You're right, it can't stand alone, that's why there's 3 of them. And after having the pleasure of living with these two, they certainly impressed the hell out of me! ;)
17/06/2005 11:35:48 p.m. Caramel Part 1 This is turning into one hell of a story! Can't wait to read the next part. I want to find out why Sieria has the hots for Carlos and not her husband and his brother Paolo! Read on young man! You have built a very interesting story that I can even suggest how it will end. Glad you think so...just now. ;)
12/06/2005 5:03:37 p.m. The Watcher Lisa, you are a gifter porn writer. Your detail of what the story figures are thinking and planning really add to the excitment of the reader. And it is all believable and just as I, a male, would want it as a lover to Keri. Jason did not have much confidence as a sexual lover, yet he overcame it as he made wild sex with Keri. That added to the story as I, the reader, wondered how he would do with a very sexually experienced woman. This is a great porn story and I have to give you a 10. Hope to read more of your stories in the future. I prefer stimulating, erotic literature, Hank. Porn is, in my opinion, nowhere near romantic and I'd like to think romantic is what I write on Gentle's site. Although there's nothing wrong with a little visual stimulation every now and then. BTW...who the hell is Keri?? ;)
1/06/2005 7:25:31 p.m. Lisseth and the Bargain Not but not great. I had to use too much imagination. Come on Hank. You know you have plenty of that!
1/05/2005 2:18:53 p.m. Suddenly wide awake Gentle I'm sure you will get a lot of high scores for this great surprise ending, but I for one must give you a zero. Sorry to have offended, Hank. It certainly wasn't intentional.
15/04/2005 7:00:37 p.m. Blue Angel A very pleasant lovemaking. I like the dialogue; it was humerous and timely as usual with your writing. Thanks Hank. Should I send her around for a visit?
11/04/2005 3:58:47 p.m. Kaz Part Two Kaz Part Two comments = This was a good beginning to a weekend but what happened to the other 44 hours? Hank, I wrote this years ago! I was shy!
11/04/2005 3:35:37 p.m. Kaz Part One The story was a little confusing at first but the longer I read the more I liked it. Good sex deserves at least an 8! Well, I'm glad it improved for you!
11/04/2005 3:18:18 p.m. The Gauntlet Gentle You really out did yourself here. Nothing but a 10. This is by fay the hotest story of yours that I have read. Need more stories about these two lovers or more real hot sex stories like this. Thanks Hank. These two? I don't think so... :-)
11/04/2005 8:13:49 a.m. Relentless This is one of the sexiest stories I have ever read. You really developed the sexual tension... There is nothing like a really great fuck ;-) And that is what they had (and deserved). Thanks for a really great (10) story and I honestly hope it happened to you personally. Your writtings really turn me on. Passed on to Lisa for comment
10/04/2005 7:46:49 p.m. Hail Part 2 Hail part 1 and 2 were very well written and both very sexilt explective. find through circumstances that sex is GREAT! I would like to read a "Hail 3" without Tom. No Tom? You sure?
10/04/2005 7:45:11 p.m. Summer This story describes exactly what summer is about for young lovers. A well written story. Sex and the young. Hey, both sex and summer are for the old as well, Hank! :-)
7/04/2005 7:28:05 p.m. Carmine I am amazed that you can change stories so easily. I read ALICE before so I will not be continuing this series. But I give you a grade of 8 for the past story Fast? These took me years!
7/04/2005 7:27:28 p.m. Lancelot and The Damsel What Poetry! :-)
7/04/2005 7:26:59 p.m. Snow White OK for a Fairy Tale Give you a seven. OK for feedback. Give you an eight! :-)
7/04/2005 7:25:52 p.m. Men are scarce She needs to get a real, alive man to have sex with. The hell with the Frenchman (they are to egotistical to begin with). Go to a local club , allow herself to be "picked-up" and go fuck. That vibrator is a really poor sub for a real dick. You paint her as a hopefully desperate woman. Why? Nobody is this hopeless. I really didn't care for the story. Sorry Gentle but I give you a 4 for effort. You are quite wordy when you get going, you know Hank. I don't mind the four. It keeps me working!
7/04/2005 7:24:48 p.m. Milo Quite comic and entertaining.Good thing Friday worked out the way it did but you wrote the story! There are always teasers at work. That is one of the things that make work fun. And I can tell you Gentle, the older you get the more teasing you get ;-) Thanks Hank. Teasing is very important! :-)
6/04/2005 6:45:28 p.m. A Quiet Meal This was a really different story from you. It was PURE SEX annd well done at that. No real dialogue, just a woman and woman who want sex. I liked the fact that she took the lead - that makes it sexier (to me).She knew what she wanted and got it. Good for her! You mean a man and a woman, right? Otherwise, I agree completely!
6/04/2005 6:41:47 p.m. He had a big clock This was a cute sex story but I don't think it has any real meaning. I say that because they split at the end. Can clocks make sex that much more exciting? I don't think so. Perhaps the first 5 or 10 times but after that I would be surprised. Meaning? It's entertainment, Hank. And it's not about the clocks. It's about obsession, about abstracted habits, and about the power of repetition. So there! :-)
3/04/2005 8:45:33 p.m. Late Night ...an entertaining and believable story and is close to what I have done in my youth. The chances you take for excitment can easily lead to sex as they did in your story. And after such an experience, the sex is ALWAYS great as you have never experienced it before in this setting. A GOOD story - worth a 10 Thanks Hank.
29/03/2005 6:18:01 p.m. Caramel Part 3 This is the best love/sex story that I have read. Give you a 10 for it! Passed on to Lisa for comment.
29/03/2005 6:14:16 p.m. Caramel Part 2 Find it quite hard to believe Paolo was not Really upset with both his wife, Sierra, and brother Carlos. Apparently this idea of watching his wife have sex with another man was enough to turn him on - even if the other man was his brother. I liked this part of the story but not as much as the first part. Give you a 7 for this one. By the way, Sierra is one hell of a woman with all those organsims. Passed on to Lisa for comment, but Hank, you're losing it. This is the third time you've commented on part 2 of this!
29/03/2005 6:12:25 p.m. Caramel Part 1 This is a VERY HOT story and I enjoyed it as it was believable and happened many times in many ways. Can't wait to read the next part! You have to get a 9 for this. You gotta stop spoiling me this way...Nah!
6/03/2005 8:53:13 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 2 Part 2 was much better than part 1 in my opinion. This is because I felt that I knew something about Alys ...... It is a fun story with a lot of future opertunity for further development. Much? But you said part 1 was great! :-)
6/03/2005 8:47:16 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 1 was great. Will read part 2 in few minutes. You get a 10 for part 1 Thanks. Now what about part 2?
6/03/2005 8:45:14 p.m. Chocolate Strawberries An excellent start of a new story (I assume). But what about the background of these two seemenly matched couple? I enjoy reading about their powerful sex but wonder what kind of people they are to so casually meet on a beech and then engage in such strong sex. But what you have written is great and I have to give you a 9 Start? No, no, no. That's it. :-)
21/02/2005 Splat! Very sexy story with good plot and good dialog. Wish I was Steven! Andy appears like the girl I always wanted to meat! Thanks Hank. Did you spell it that way on purpose???
17/02/2005 Terry Gentle, read all 3 stories and it provided me with a better overall understanding of your writings than any 1 of the 3 could have done. I realy enjoyed them. This was a VERY Interesting and Sexy plot. Thanks Hank. But WHAT three stories?
16/02/2005 Terry A very different story with a REAL twist. Very enjoyable and believable. Thanks Hank. I'd wondered where you'd got to!
6/02/2005 Tiros and his Nemesis "Tiros", "Acacia" and "Nemesis" to me interfered with the real sex this story was meant to convey. They seemed to actually take away a lot of the sexual aspects of the story. But I know nothing about Greek mythology. Sorry Gentle but I have to give you a 5. Hey, I can cope. Oh, and I don't know anything either!
4/02/2005 Relentless Your stories are VERY sexy. "Relentless" is a perfect example. Eric is my hero. A great story, wish you had more. Have to give you a 10+ for this. I don't blush very often, but you seem to have done that today, Hank...thanks!
2/02/2005 Caramel Part 2 I really can't believe [Gentle] wrote this story. It was too intense and sexy and without real dialog. But it was GREAT and very sexy. Gentle didn't write it Hank. I did. [Lisa] Sex-iness is what I live for, Hank. ;)
1/02/2005 Alpha & Omega You hane a real story here. Can't wait to see how you get out of it. Hold on Hank. It's finished. 'And they lived happily ever after'. That sort of thing. Sorry buddy.
29/01/2005 Dear John Very believable and VERY sexy. I love the ending line: All my love, and an unreasonable amount of lust. LUST IS GREAT!!! Give you a 10 for a very believable and well written short story. Thanks Hank.
20/01/2005 The Quiz Very clever dialogue with great transition of subjects. Just not enough sex. needs more personal or intimate questions between the Nat and Carly. You could get really raunchy and make it more hysterical. Thanks... And no thanks. It's deliberately not raunchy, just flirty!
19/01/2005 Virginia This was crazy with so many EV changes. I like the sense that life can be altered by time and speed. It is less predictable yet obvious to those involved. A paradime shift! and you make mankind part of it. Heavy thinking!! Jeeze Hank, it was just a stroke story! :-)
15/01/2005 The Swimming Baths Another good story but this one had a twist! Too bad I figured it out about half way through the story. But I still enjoyed it. Apparently Janice wasn't the sharpest tack in the box! She was busy!
15/01/2005 Life Read "Lust" then "Life" and they individually and/or together make a great story. Very convincing in all ways. Give you a 9 for each. Thanks again, Hank.
15/01/2005 Lust Read "Lust" then "Life" and they individually and/or together make a great story. Very convincing in all ways. Give you a 9 for each. Thanks Hank.
13/01/2005 Phone for Jackie I think you really hit it correctly in this story - You acheived a tremendous amount through dialogue... You really acheived your objective plus it was a good, sexy story! I'll give you a 10 for this effort (knowing your personal goals). Thanks for that Hank.
9/01/2005 Nancy Public sexual exposure is also quite exciting. So you did good for your first erotic story. Why thank you, Hank. It was a long time ago, now, but I still like it.
9/01/2005 Kaz Part Two Read part 1 and 2 tonight. Kaz and Leks had GREAT sex that realy turned me on. It was based on pure sexual desire with no personal relationship! Loved it when he ***** You can't give it away Hank, but thanks.
9/01/2005 Meg Unique. Who and what is MEG? It was still very sexy and I give you an 8 for this. Thanks Hank. I skipped all the bits where you gave the story away! :-)
9/01/2005 Sleepy I like reading about female masturbation but tiis had no real details that turned me on. I felt like the woman in the story, "lets get it over with" so I can go on to something more interesting. Hey, I can't be held responsible for not being kinky enough for you, Hank! :-)
9/01/2005 Mary Great Sex Story! What's a party without sex? Wish I was guy you wrote the story about!
6/01/2005 The Quiz Why do you call this stort "The Quiz"? Do you realize there are 58 question marks in this short story??????????????? But I have to admit the dialog was cute and did make me laugh. Well, quizzes always have lots of question marks. Thanks.
4/01/2005 The Joining Again well done. And I have to believe this was pure fiction for where you get intimate details of an African marriage ceremony. You could have made it more sexual in the marriage "act" and more descritive (just to give me a good hard-on). You can manage that without my help, Hank! :-)
4/01/2005 Blue Angel Story is cute and sexy. Well done. Liked the comic dialog. Gave you a 10 as it was excellent for a short story. Thanks Hank. Are longer storie sexier?
2/01/2005 A Tall Tale Really different. Good thing their programmer put SEX as an option - open sex with others and both opposite and same gender sex. That's my idea of a GREAT computer programmer. The story was very creative and sexually stimulating.
2/01/2005 Next Time - Part 2 Read both part 1 & 2 and found them very unique but sexy. Again you had good dialog between all characters - one of your prime writting attributes. Aww, thanks Hank.
2/01/2005 Next Time - Part 1 Read both part 1 & 2 and found them very unique but sexy. Like in part 1, I never-ever thought of sex with a female wearing panties. Narrow minded, are you Hank?
30/12/2004 The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll Found this story hard to believe and not very exciting. Very predictable. I don't really enjoy stories about the "low-life". Can't win 'em all. Thanks for letting me know.
24/12/2004 Alpha & Omega Great story. I never gave it a thought as how identical twins would perform sexually.
24/12/2004 Late Summer Sun Maria and Lee make a PERFECT couple. And you did an excellent jof of presenting their love and passion for each other.
24/12/2004 Electronically Gentle Had no idea that you were into virtual sex, but I am very impressed with your imagination of what it could be like. No matter, I like your virtual sex very much.
22/12/2004 Tom VERY ROMANTIC! But it all depends on your view. Is pure underalted sex better than being romatic? A bit analytical tonight, aren't you?
21/12/2004 Alice Pt 2 this story starts off as a great sexy story (Alice 1) but a completely different sext story is presented in Alice 2. They are really 2 seperate stories that use Alice as the main character. Both are good, stimulating stories but are NOT related (excepted by the Knickers - what ever they are). Of course they are related, Hank! And knickers are panties!
21/12/2004 Alice Part 1 this story starts off as a great sexy story (Alice 1) but a completely different sext story is presented in Alice 2. They are really 2 seperate stories that use Alice as the main character. Both are good, stimulating stories but are NOT related (excepted by the Knickers - what ever they are). Of course they are related, Hank! And knickers are panties!
21/12/2004 It started innocently enough Very creative. Short but I enjoyed it! Size isn't everything, Hank!
18/12/2004 The Shower Those were the best days of my life and your "The Shower" reminded me of them in a most amusing, pleasant way. Thanks for a great story! Thanks Hank.
11/12/2004 Twas the night Cute and humerous and different! Thanks Hank.
10/12/2004 Splat! Sorry Gentle but I have to give you a 7 for this one. I realize you were trying to mix humour with sex in the lives of these 2 people but it just did't do too much for me. Probably because Andy was so "outgoing". In my mind women like Andy don't really exist. Oh, you poor bastard. Of course they exist. Would someone like Andy please write to me, and tell me? Oh, and Hank? You already reviewed this once, and gave me a nine! Did you forget?
8/12/2004 Sleep Therapy It was so NATURAL that they end up together that the author made it frustrating to me. Sorry to hear that, Hank. Some people LIKE it slow...
2/12/2004 Caramel Part 2 I was quite surprised at this story. I was sure that Carlos would have been the "victor" over Paolo. (And you would have had more to write about). You know, the grass is always greener on the other side ...etc" and a new lover is ALWAYS more exciting than your married mate. But you came out and totally surprised me. I'm glad it ended with Sierra and her husband Paolo still hapily married. But the story could have been much more provacative if Carlos had won the love-fuck. Gentile, you must be a romantic person! Good for you. The world needs more people like you! Love Hank Deja vu, Hank? (lol) Anyway, I feel kinda silly responding to a vote intended for someone else, but I am glad you liked MY story. ;) As for Gentle, I have to agree with you...he is definitely a romantic.
29/11/2004 Caramel Part 2 I read part 1 and 2 and fund them sexually exciting but unbelievable. Two brothers are not likely to take one screwing the others wife as gently as it was told. Nor would I expect Sieria be so open about the whole relationship. Your mind said 6, but your fingers gave me a 7. Now about those brothers, you do have a point. Sierra...is alot like me in so many ways. While everything is true, the sex is not...therefore, the title is Lisa's Stories, not Lisa's Biography. Thanks for the vote, sweetie.
26/11/2004 Splat! Another good one Gentile Give you a 9. The Dialog between 2 strangers was a little weak You're a tough customer, you know that? :-)
25/11/2004 The Swap Part 4 Hi Gentle You really surprised me with this series. Not only was it well written, it showed me some real creativity (especially in part 4). I take back about what I said about you being "predictable". Part 4 was a real surprise to me with ***** during breakfast! Thats my idea of a perfect meal. Then *****, it appears the story is over. But you could CREATIVELY continue it! That is my challange to you!!! But no matter if you do or don't, thanks for a a good few evenings of reading. You are MUCH better than I at first thought. Well, thanks Hank. I'm pleased I was able to surprise you. Sorry to have [bleep]ed your comments, but I can't let you give it away.
23/11/2004 Sally You are still tooo predictable but your stories are great. There is no mystery in your date-plan. But your description of first sex between the new couple is great. In my days (I'm 67) it took 10 to 20 dates to get to the 3 that Zack and Sally needed. And Sally was ready after the first date. She was really easy. I was born too soon. You're still rather critical, but you make up for it, so thanks! :-)
21/11/2004 Vivian Think you have a talent that needs developing but it produces quite interesting stories right now. But there were no surprises - quite predictable. But I did enjoy it as a good sexy story and read it to the very end. Well, thanks for that, I think...