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Date Story Comments from JustMe Gentle's response Rating
3/06/2006 5:11:30 p.m. It was sexual right from the start I must say that this was certainly a very unusual story. :) But as with all the other stories of yours that I have read, I liked this one also. You have a talent for leading the reader through the plot of a story, and making them feel like it was actually happening. You are also very good with dialogue. The ending was very much of a surprise. All the way through the story, I kept wondering . Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your stories. I had to out some of what you said, sorry.
3/06/2006 4:54:00 p.m. Lust Letter I just finished reading your "Lust Letter". I've read the other stories that you have written and enjoyed them all. This one is no exception. You are a very good writter, and I sure hope that you will continue submitting your stories. Reading this letter, makes me wish that someday I'd receive a letter like that from someone. :) Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading whatever you write next. I certainly will! Thanks, JustMe.
23/05/2006 7:30:54 p.m. Stand and Deliver Hi This is a very interesting story. The ending was a complete surprise. I liked it. Keep up the good work. Interesting is good! :-) Surprise is better!
27/04/2006 8:15:02 p.m. Statuesque Hi. I just finished reading your story. I must say, that I didn't expect it to end the way it did. What a pleasant surprise. :) I think that this one is one of your better stories. It was a bit different then the "usual" sex story, but I loved it. Keep up the good work. Different is my middle name. :-)
27/04/2006 8:10:33 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 3 Hello Cam I just finished reading this story, "Allison's Long Weekend - Part 3". I have also read Parts 1 and 2. You set a very high standard in the first two parts, and I see that you have continued on at the same level of writing. All I can say, is that I sure do wish that I could write like you do. You have a real talent, and I hope that you will be kind enough to give us some more samples of your writing skills. They are three wonderful stories that are well thought out, the dialogue is great, and each story just adds a little more to the total story, whatever that will turn out to be. There is a touch of romance in each, that holds a readers interest right up to the end. Now, I can hardly wait until Part 4 comes out, and then, how about a Part 5? :) To sum up what I am trying to say, I LOVED THEM ALL. Please keep up the good work. Passed on to Cam for comment.
19/04/2006 1:40:05 p.m. Liberty I just finished reading your story. Man, what a story. I LOVED it. It has all the ingredients that make a story interesting, and holds a readers interest right up until the final word. The plot is interesting and believable, the dialoge is great, and the implied romance begins almost from the first word of the story. Goodness me. Well, JustMe, thank you! You've given me alot to think about!
11/04/2006 9:47:58 p.m. Twas the night I have read different versions of "T'Was the Night Before Christmas", but never one quite like this. :) You not only have a talent for using words in stories, but now I see that you are also a great poet. I really enjoyed reading it. And I'm sure that the next time I read a "tame version" of it, I'll still think of this one. :) Keep up the good work. Thanks. I am NOT a poet! :-)
17/03/2006 8:07:01 p.m. Hunter's moon Hi Lisa Once again you have come up with a wonderful story, full of suspense, sex and romance. As I said to you in a previous letter, you have a wonderful way with words. I envy you for it. I especially enjoyed the way you described her orgasam as, "Suddenly, Jaden's orgasm hit like a soft blinking radar, a small dot of a euphoric wave pulsated the middle of her womb and spread tormentingly slow in a radius." I have never heard it described that way before, but I can't think of a better way to describe the feeling. :) Unfortunately, I don't get as much time to read as I would like to, however, I look forward to reading more of your works. Keep up the good work. We can always use more writters of your caliber. Your comments are sincerely appreciated. BTW, with these awesome paragraphs you've sent, try practicing with those? Then gradually get larger, adding some eroticism here and there, I mean, you certainly have my attention when I read them. I'm betting you could write me a very sexy paragraph. ;)
9/02/2006 4:55:02 p.m. Kitten Tales Lisa, being a man, I suppose that the thought of two ladies making love together, is a thought that most men find VERY exciting. In this story, you have done a very nice job of creating the setting for not only a sexual, but a very romantic encounter between these two lovers. This extra feeling of romance just adds to the quality of the story. You are certainly working your way to becoming a favorite reader. You seem to have your own flare for making people 'warm' with your words. I appreciate you taking the time to enjoy the story, and tell me about it. Plus, I did get your hint about two lovers travelling to various romantic spots around the world. That alone has such possibilities to create many short and hot stories. With the ideas running through my head just now, I wish I could write them all at once. When I finish up the ones currently arousing me, I'll be sure and let you know when more 'tales' arrive. Take care, sweetie. And thanks again. ;)
9/02/2006 4:54:29 p.m. Meeting of the Minds - Journey of Two Authors I just finished reading the above mentioned story. WOW!!! That is some story. Well, JustMe, I hate to tell you this, but I think I've just fallen in love with you. Beyond that, I'm utterly speechless...other than, I do plan to continue writing with Sir Will. Hope you stick around. ;)
15/09/2005 6:18:04 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 2 I just finished reading this story, and there isn't much more that I can say, except W O W!!!! And I already said that in my comments to the first part. :) Passed on to Cam for comment.
15/09/2005 6:17:33 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 W O W !!!!!! What a beginning to a wonderful story. This is my first time to this site, and just by chance, I happened upon your story. I don't know whether you are a professional author or not, but you do have a wonderful gift for words. You use just the right amount of descriptive language to set the "tone", but yet not to much description to distract from the story. WOW! I'm very touched that you liked both parts this much! Yes, please let Gentle know you would like to be updated when there's a new story and soon, very soon, I will have part three! Thanks so much for reading!