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Date Story Comments from Anonymous (Most recent fifty only) Gentle's response Rating
17/08/2006 8:22:06 p.m. Gathering in the Green Yes a very dark story , I enjoyed it.
17/08/2006 8:18:00 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 I'd love to learn what her sisters do next ?!
17/08/2006 8:03:27 p.m. Wet so much more than erotic... so much more... Such as?
30/07/2006 4:14:03 p.m. Stand and Deliver Delightful! Oh, good!
29/07/2006 7:26:59 p.m. Phone for Jackie not bad Oh, thanks.
25/07/2006 10:04:14 p.m. Stand and Deliver I have always loved the 'Augustan' age of English literature,, and doted on Fielding. His life of Jonathan Wyld left me giggling for days after. Yours mildly risque scenarios is a worthy tribute to that era of elegant dreas, mannger, and speech. The good Mr. Cleland would acknowlege you as one of his odwn. I have the honor to be, Yr humble and obd't servant. etc. I just love your feedback!
24/07/2006 8:13:09 p.m. Gathering in the Green I will comment on one thing only here. This seems a bit unfocused, as if you wrote it by pure instinct. It has no linear trail. The signifigance, and indeed relecance, of the hanging and the descriptions are unclear. The depth may be good, however, so give it clairity. You're the first person to say something like that. I'll think it through. Thanks.
24/07/2006 8:08:01 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 Loved it! Loved that!
23/07/2006 11:50:18 a.m. Picture This 2 very good as useal i find the story hard to understand but it's the diffance between americanthought and engish diffance but stillavery good story please keep me on your listof poeple to e-mail thank you Thanks.
21/07/2006 9:10:14 p.m. Gathering in the Green Accordingly, it is my hope that this dark story is the first chapter of a much longer story that is perhaps equally dark, of a widow that for one weird moment played the part of a prostitute and EVENTUALLY confirmed that she was pregnant as a result. Because of what passed for 'family values' in that era, both she and her child would spend the rest of their respective lives living in shame the shadows of polite society, just because of her ONE MOMENT OF WEIRDNESS. Nope. Ain't gonna happen. Nope.
21/07/2006 9:03:56 p.m. Sleepy "her clitoris protruded proudly from it's home, expecting, demanding satisfaction." are you saying that her clit, wasn't erected before this point? Nope.
20/07/2006 8:43:29 p.m. Photographic Memory 1 Well done. Excellent job. Keep up the good work.
20/07/2006 8:42:11 p.m. This is the girl... Wow!!
20/07/2006 8:41:48 p.m. Picture This 2 more! Soon!
20/07/2006 8:36:47 p.m. Gathering in the Green You were right in saying that it is 'audience limiting.' Although, very, very interesting. Was arousing, all the same, though I can't motivate myself to get off to this. As usual, excellent writing - I noticed a bit of a departure here for you as well, in a different way, no dialogue. You're the first person to mention the dialogue.
20/07/2006 8:36:25 p.m. Donna GGGRRRReat, fantastic etc etc etc
20/07/2006 8:33:15 p.m. Gathering in the Green Chuckle.....a departure for you Gentle is putting it mildly, :-) You must have been watching a horror movie that night. I agree with others, the first part was not to my taste, (I do not watch horror films at all, just don't have the stomach for it I guess) but the reaction was so real and as has been said, written beautiful. You really have a knack for this and should go pro. But don't, because then we would lose you and I for one do not want that to happen. Thank you for your hard efforts. You are appreciated more than you will ever know. P.. Oh I gave it a 10 because yes it did astound me.....chuckle.. Hey, gotta take 'em where I can get 'em. Thanks.
20/07/2006 8:32:48 p.m. Gathering in the Green sad yep
20/07/2006 7:33:23 p.m. Gathering in the Green It was alright. Fine, but not great So was your feedback. :-)
20/07/2006 7:32:48 p.m. Gathering in the Green ^^ Are those raised eyebrows, or happy nipples? :-)
20/07/2006 7:31:11 p.m. Gathering in the Green How about finishing some other stuff maybe? Yeah, but my muse wanted this one to be written. Sorry about that. I'll get back on the job. :-) Happy to provide a refund any time you don't like the ride. After all, I charged you so much...
20/07/2006 7:14:15 p.m. Gathering in the Green WoW! You touched a deep consciousness of something that makes me wonder if you are even aware of it. I really liked this story, it touched me. Where?
20/07/2006 7:13:26 p.m. Wet i love stories where both people have fun - civlised. So does it have to be both? :-)
19/07/2006 7:35:53 p.m. Picture This 2 very good...please make a third Oh, you asked very nicely. :-)
18/07/2006 9:22:53 a.m. Picture This 2 oh, yes, yes.. Thankyou~! You alright? :-)
16/07/2006 8:26:10 p.m. Donna you should write another chapter to this one No, no. This is ancient history. YOU write one. :-)
14/07/2006 11:19:19 p.m. Picture This 2 OMG what an ending !!!!! Loved it! ++++ ty for making a second part oh so much Thanks. Who ARE you? :-)
14/07/2006 8:50:44 p.m. Kitty great!! great!! :-)
14/07/2006 3:59:05 p.m. Encounter delicious moment Passed on to Beth for comment.
14/07/2006 1:25:28 p.m. Picture This 2 This is very nicely done, and the details are very 'tasty' indeed! :-) You're a foodie? :-)
14/07/2006 10:52:42 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3c Please write more! Hell, I don't know how many times I mastraubated while reading this! Like you lost count? :-)
14/07/2006 10:49:49 a.m. Stand and Deliver Excellent. Very few stories I have read manage to convey eroticism with courtesy and finesse and flirtatious wiles. If you can write one like this, you can do so again and become known as an author of exquisite smut (if that should please you as surely it should). Thanks. I have over a hundred stories online now... I hope I've done it again. :-)
13/07/2006 9:31:28 p.m. Picture This Oh, write more! Please. Hell, it's got me so horny! What did you expect?
13/07/2006 9:28:29 p.m. Liberty It was a charming story, sweet and inoccent. My cock was aching all through the story as I remembered a few year ago the same had happened to me. Excellent story I'm glad it brought back fond memories, and I'm very glad it gets your seal of approval!
13/07/2006 9:27:57 p.m. Photographic Memory 3 Typo, Gentle: "It was difficult for Jake not to look at Jane in a different why" is probably "way". Otherwise well-written. . . as usual! Bugger. Thanks.
13/07/2006 9:23:00 p.m. Picture This mmmn.. that sounds like a very good start to something more sorted.. both my imagination, and heart were racing by the end! - Meow. Where do all these ideas come from? :-)
13/07/2006 9:21:51 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 Reminds me of highschool... hmmmmm :) You must have been at a great school.
8/07/2006 3:23:22 p.m. Picture This asusal very sexy with out down right screwing-very well written nicey done ///thank-you Thanks!
8/07/2006 2:16:37 p.m. Picture This lol i pictured it, and i liked the picture :P Oh, good!
7/07/2006 10:51:18 p.m. Wet Excellent story. By the end I was very wet. Ideal reaction!
7/07/2006 9:52:37 p.m. Picture This very good gives me a very enjoying sight Oh? :-) Good. I think.
7/07/2006 8:16:38 p.m. Lust Letter i am 89 but i still think it is ausome. i was jacking off so hard at the part when he fucked you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\ Mission accomplished! :)
7/07/2006 8:15:52 p.m. Lust Letter that is one of your best stories yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh the PRESSURE!! :)
7/07/2006 8:14:31 p.m. Sally Saucy Sank you. :-)
4/07/2006 7:47:22 p.m. Wet This is JUST PERFECT for a HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-) GREAT!
3/07/2006 9:23:01 p.m. Liberty I loved your story it was really really good. So are you going to make a sequal or another chapter? Please do i would love to read it. Well let me know. Keep up the good writing hun. Too many things on the go to even think about looking backwards, but you never know! Thanks for the encouragement! :)
3/07/2006 9:21:19 p.m. Liberty Thank You This story brings back long ago memories. You lucky thing!
2/07/2006 11:40:07 a.m. Alice Pt 4 Please,you must develop this story. Alice could be in for quite an awakening!! That is provided that the Queen of Hearts does not interfere!!!Don't let it hibernate again--Please. Thank you for the promise of an arousing tale... Oh, I don't know about that... It's been a while now... But thanks.
2/07/2006 11:27:35 a.m. The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll Very good! A bit low onthe lust but I liked the humerous ending. Yhank you!!!!. There's a lust quotient requirement? :-)
30/06/2006 11:09:55 p.m. The Shower This HOPELESS ROMANTIC is utterly delighted with your firm grasp of the realities of college life and sex. :-) I never went so I had to imagine it. :-)