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Ahem. . . Guess I'll have to go change, since I'm WET (and throbbing, tingling, etc). Yum. . . Hope you regulate the situation before making the switch, darling. ;) -Lisa Does she have a sister? that would be fair for the husband lol... otherwise good. Actually, she does. She's taller, sexier, and...oh never mind. For some, that would be another story...and I don't have the strength. ;D -Lisa I think Sierra said it best: "Oh my god......Oh my god.....Oh my.....mmmm." Pleased to have satisfied. -Lisa Excellent.....i have to run to the mens to masturbate....I hope no one sees my enormous erection...just simply love it..
I have this code for a dear friend of mine, when I write in red, he's turning me on. You can't see this, but the writing is bloody red! Oh, and if someone does see it, you can blame it on me. ;) -Lisa This is turning into one hell of a story! Can't wait to read the next part. I want to find out why Sieria has the hots for Carlos and not her husband and his brother Paolo! Read on young man! You have built a very interesting story that I can even suggest how it will end. Glad you think so...just now. ;) -Lisa Very erotic so tintaling , so strong in ecastasy, paossion, intringing story,and wonderfully written. Give us another story like this and you on your way to be the next best sellet Wow, that tickled. "Caramel Causes Chaos" ;o) -Lisa This story was pretty hot. Very good imagery. At the beginning, it almost sounded like he was going to rape her though. Look out for that a little... rape is a HUGE turn off. Other than that, it was a huge turn on. Haven't been back to that story in a while, so not really sure what the connotation was {I blame the sub-conscious}...on the other hand, I'm delighted to know that I could arouse something out of you. ;-D -Lisa Good story with a nice twist at the end, good setup for part 2 Glad you think so. -Lisa that was tooo goo if u wana be my friend th mail me or chatwith me on <snip>@<snip>
Why...you want me to misbehave with you? ;) -Lisa This is a VERY HOT story and I enjoyed it as it was believable and happened many times in many ways. Can't wait to read the next part! You have to get a 9 for this. You gotta stop spoiling me this way...Nah! -Lisa I'm hard as a rock... thank you
No, thank YOU. The pleasure of knowing your reaction to my words is worth the effort. -Lisa Lisa, very erotic and kept me hard. Can't wait to read part two. You can really describe emotions and orgasms. Thank you. Practice makes...one deliciously exhausted. ;) -Lisa I read the second part first and that made this part even better. Wonderful! Glad it worked out! -Lisa What a delightfully written, sexy story. Your ending leaves room for all kind of imagination, and this is what sex should be all about – most of the time! There are occasions when graphic words, phrases and scenes do need power...
I'll have to keep that in mind. ;) -Lisa My word!!! Enough to make a person pant. Delightful imagery, and a way with words that makes you feel the hunger of the emotions. Very nicely done. I certainly hope you're going to continue this... that ending leaves SO much possibility!!! Thank you! That's means a lot that women enjoy my story(s) as well. I certainly hope I continue to impress you with the others. ;) -Lisa MMMMMmmmmm......wonderfully erotic. i loved it hope you finish it and maybe let the husband join them .. a baby would be nice ..they could share ,not knowing who was the daddy... Although, I appreciate the vote, I don't think I would have the strength to take the story in that direction. I'm not a series type of gal, I just found out I can write short stories! ;) Yet, I hope I can please you with a nice plot in Part 2. -Lisa [No comment] They were just enjoying themselves so much that they couldn't see straight. It happens to me too! ;) -Lisa A sensual high--I got hard as i read and rushed through the story the first time and then went back to read it again (still hard). More please. Well, John, that's quite a response. Yours and mine. I will gladly give you more, if you promise to write back and let me know if it was 'hard' not to like Part 2. ;) Ciao, -Lisa brilliant lets have some more A truly nice romantic story, I enjoyed it very much.
Hi Roy, thank you. My goal IS to be romantic, I hope I can still pull that off when I spice things up a bit in Part 2. I really hope you enjoy that one as well. Will you be so kind as to let me know? ;) -Lisa I loved it and would love to see more of your works Hi Rusty, I have never written anything else in my LIFE. I was encouraged to do this after talking with one of my favorite authors and after his compliments I thought I would give it a shot. What better motivation could one receive, you know? So, thank you for reading, thank you for voting, and thanks for asking...for more. ;) I do have a few more stories I'm trying to finish at this moment and I hope you enjoy those just as much. Thanks again. -Lisa Lisa. Oh what a lovely name.... A story of passion, but Part 1 IS going to lead onto more fun. You set the scene, now let it unfold.... Why that was very lovely of you to say. Thank you for voting, but thank you even more for enjoying the story. With comments like that you could get any girl's creative juices flowing. Thanks to you, Part 2 will be coming soon. Take care. -Lisa Caramel was one of the best written stories that I've read, when will part two be out? Thanks Wow, that is incredible! If I would have known I could get a reaction like that from something I wrote, I would have started writing a long time ago. Thank you. Part 2 will be coming shortly. I just HAVE to make it a good one. -Lisa You have such good descriptive power. I could just feel my cock sliding up her love canal. I can't imagine Paulo leaving such a sweet morsel alone to pine for love. Thank you for the vote, you are very descriptive yourself. I'm delighted you bonded with my lady, it means a lot that my words can get a "positive" reaction out of a reader. I hope you like the others just as much. Just as soon as I finish them. Take care. ;) -Lisa i think u should tell the rest about paolo walking in the room.
Thanks for the vote and the vote of confidence by asking me to finish. I will finish, but I want to make sure it's worthy. This is my first story and it's alot more difficult than I thought, but it makes me want to continue when I have readers that appreciate my effort. It's also alot of fun, too. Thanks again and I will be giving you part 2 very soon. -Lisa Exactly what Erotic means. Such feeling and love of your subject shines through. I look forward to more of your writings.
Thank you, Jim, for that very special compliment. The emotions are key in my stories, because they come from different situations in my life. I will continue to write when I have an open window to do so and I really do hope you enjoy them. Thanks again. -Lisa Where's the ending?!?!?! did he kick his brother's ass or what? i must know! but it is very well written adn well thought out. i think my boyfriend would enjoy reading this one. i could just see the story being played out in my mind. beautifully (for lack of a better word) detailed i like reading stories like this one. awesome Yes, Katherine, there is an ending. I just can't decide if the readers would like to see good "ass-kicking" or something else, which I don't want to give away. Thanks for the awesome vote. It gives me inspiration to make it a really good ending for you! ;) -Lisa I really don't get the ending, the story was excellent, but I'm so curious, did Paolo kick, his ass, did Carlos get away unscathed? I'm dying to know
*giggle* -Lisa would like more detail eg describe her pussy. be more graphic Very well written! Although I got a bit confused about the timeline of when it all happened. But it was really quite hot. It was a nice little triangle story with an ambiguous ending. the sex was hot and wery descriptive.The characters were believable and the possibilities for a sequel are there..Good spelling and punctuation. Good luck in your endeavors. |
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