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DeeE

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Date Story Comments from DeeE Gentle's response Rating
23/05/2006 11:11:55 a.m. Stand and Deliver I wouldn't have shared such confidences with my sister.... but my -girlfriends- would have covered my story! *Grin* (and almost had the chance ... but the 'rogue' in my story got cold feet and disappeared! .... and I may not have quite been a virgin.... *innocent blinking*....) What a sensible lady Dora is. *low chuckle* And her sister Elizabeth is wise to plan a lot of traveling to visit her sister!!! Not *quite* ? :-)
20/11/2005 5:15:23 p.m. The Shower *delighted chuckle* 'The poor boy barely survived the day.' We women are a wanton lot, aren't we? (and aren't you men glad! *devilish gleam*) Oh yes. A slippery man in the shower? One of my very favorites. What took you so long? :-)
20/11/2005 5:00:17 p.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit Oh my stars,... and there are 4 more parts? We are most alive when we are feeling our 'edges'. And this is VERY edgy. *gleaming grin* Anticipation is also an erotic sensation..... *slow smile* Well, hope it lasts. :-)
25/10/2005 7:16:23 p.m. Steak please *low laugh* Is the world ready for the emancipated wife? Or the husband who not only frees her, but -encourages- her? Hang on world, we're in for a wild, spectacular ride! Well done! Ready or not, here she is!
22/10/2005 11:24:15 p.m. The doorstep Oh my gawd. You have a lascivious, firtile mind, wiht the creativity to bring it to life. On another note, it's amazing to read one story by you that is almost entirely dialogue - and excellent; then immediately read another story that is almost entirely without dialogue - and equally excellent. Too much flipping talent in one body! You sure you won't marry me? :-)
22/10/2005 11:23:14 p.m. White Witch *laughing* You are too much. Your talent with dialogue is incredible. And your wicked wit probably has many pious people praying for you.... uselessly. (and thank goodness. Never change!) This was GREAT! Could we get married? :-)
22/10/2005 11:15:31 p.m. No Sequel Oh my. Excellent as always, but .... oh my. I can hear my own heartbeat in my ears in the silence. Yeah, well, I did warn you!
5/08/2005 4:25:47 p.m. The Quiz Carly is priceless! Nat is caught up in a human hurricane - and in the end he'll feel shaken, stirred, befuddled, and more alive and vibrant than he ever has before in his life. *grin* I'd love to take lessons from Carly! Take? I suspect you could give some. :-)
5/08/2005 2:37:38 p.m. Men are scarce Oh... my ... God. *shaking my head and laughing* If this is where it's heading, just shoot me now. But it's a priceless story, and the idea captured beautifully. Great stuff! Would you like a job?
5/08/2005 2:36:03 p.m. Suddenly wide awake *delighted smile* Top shelf quality from you, as usual. Never would have guessed how it ended from it's take-off. And your dialogue, as always, right on. Your signature guarentees a good read! No, a GREAT read. Thanks Dee. You're the best. Stick around please.
14/04/2005 8:31:48 p.m. Snow White Well, well. Nothing is sacred. Thank goodness. *grin* Hooray for putting a new spin on an old classic. I was scared, but not scared enough to stop!
8/04/2005 7:24:00 p.m. The Ritual Delightful. Primal. Ageless. Sensual. Lusty. All senses woven together to lure the reader along while increasing breathing and heartrate. I loved that there is a place for both male and female in the ritual. And loving that the link is through the ladies! (trying not to give anything away) You did well. My God, you give good feedback Dee!
9/11/2004 Caramel Part 1 My word!!! Enough to make a person pant. Delightful imagery, and a way with words that makes you feel the hunger of the emotions. Very nicely done. I certainly hope you're going to continue this... that ending leaves SO much possibility!!! Thank you! That's means a lot that women enjoy my story(s) as well. I certainly hope I continue to impress you with the others. ;)
25/10/2004 The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll Just a riot. Thank goodness twisted, perverted, goofy minds like yours also can put it together in written form that makes for great reading. Keep it up! Thanks for the laugh... Oh, sorry. I stopped reading when I got to 'perverted'. Pleased you enjoyed it. We all need a laugh.
19/10/2004 The Swap Part 3 Wow. You nail it each time. The interplay of emotions, the playful erotic banter, the descriptions of sensual touches that are so right one could feel a phantom touch on your own skin just reading the words. You -know- you have to keep going now..... (awaiting every so patiently...) Dee, you are wonderful.
19/10/2004 The Swap Part 2 no time.. no time! Must get to chapter 3!!! Yeah, but Dee, I... Oh, okay.
15/10/2004 Kaz Part One errr.... For all the ice in that story, it sure is hot in here! Excellent, intriguing, erotic, delightful to read. Gotta save some of the adjectives for the rest of your stories, I'm sure... I like it hot! :-)
15/10/2004 It started innocently enough This was your first?!? Darn. I'd say most people only get this good near the END of their writing career. Well done! Interesting that you chose the female point of view... *low grin* And as always, your dialogue and setting is perfect. You say the darndest things. Keep it up!
15/10/2004 Digitally Part 3 Well done, as always. You certainly have a command of conversation, even ones as odd and disjointed as those in diners with waitresses. (and I might add, you're spot on. *G*) Oh, thanks Dee
23/05/2004 The Swap Part 1 Yet another wonderfully done piece. And played out realistically and delightfully. It will be interesting to see how it continues… Me too. Got any ideas???
17/05/2004 It was sexual right from the start You are a wonderful writer! Exquisite. I am an avid reader, of all things, and this is one of the top 3 things I've EVER read. In spite of the quite inprobable course of events, you spun the tale so well it seemed all so natural. From him getting nude, to her stripping and spending the day nude with him at his activity. Even to the very ending. I believe! *smile* From the details of the surroundings to the dialogue, this is a perfectly crafted piece of written art. This reader (and sometimes writer) thanks you for sharing your talent for my pleasure. Including the slight breathlessness and high alert nerves through my whole body! *grin* This is easily the nicest review I've ever received. I'm flabbergasted.