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Allan

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30/11/2005 8:46:35 p.m. Digitally Part 4 Absolutely great...I think the dialogue is the best ever. Where do you come up with these ideas for stories? It's all in my warped mind...
29/11/2005 7:49:13 p.m. Digitally Part 3 I think that you are just about the 'fucking' best erotic writer on the web. If you can top this piece of 'fucking' erotica', then good 'fucking' luck. I'm not afraid of that word..actually it sounds good although it's not always appropriate in 'polite' society, but then they can always go 'fuck' themselves. I know that this will be edited, but this story must make you proud to know that you have a wide base of world-wide fans that enjoy your talent and that you are big enough to share it. Thanks so Very Much What's with all the fucking language then? See, no editing. :-)
27/11/2005 8:50:03 a.m. Steak please What do I think? You really would't really want to know, but if you mean about the story....It was hilarious. I love dialogue and this was superb, sexy, subtle and the ending was delightful. Thank you for my daily chuckle Pleased you like it Allan
10/10/2005 5:25:22 a.m. Eyes Closed nice.very nice......with fanticies like this you'll never need a man.......Damm......that was hot Allan fuzzy logic....that's my way of thinking Hehe, well I have one and am quite enamored of him. At any rate, I am glad you liked it, ^.^
7/10/2005 7:23:14 p.m. This is the girl... This is fantastic...kind of reminds me of a young girl I once had a relatinship with. The feelings were there but time and age were against us. I've never forgotten her and she still remembers that special time. Thanks Thanks Allan.
11/07/2005 4:36:53 p.m. Suddenly wide awake This is the first of your stories I have read for a long time and I wasn't dissapointed. I loved it and by the feedback, I guess I'm not alone in this opinion. You're still the master. Well, I did wonder... :-)
4/04/2005 9:19:17 p.m. Kaz Part One The communication process was a bit hard for me to follow, but the sexual descriptions really turned me on so I can only say that this story is very good. Nice bit of foreplay, and a great orgasm is all I need to feel good about your writings. Nicely done. Hey, I'm glad I overcame your difficulties!
4/04/2005 9:16:57 p.m. Alice Part 1 Do you think I could borrow Alice for a bit. I'd like to get inside her head (and other spaces) for a while. This one had me spinning for a bit, not sure where it's going but I suppose I'll be enlightened by the end of part 2 Not your best but pretty dam good. Sure, sure. Help yourself. Oh, if you think you're going to be enlightened reading my stories, you're in for a disappointment!
4/04/2005 9:16:25 p.m. SMS Although I've contributed a couple of pieces I still don't think they're right for YOU. Thanks for letting me know!
4/04/2005 9:14:47 p.m. Hail - Chapter 1 Well chapter one lovely. Hail went from a cold stret waif to a warm bed over night. The solo scene is well written and sensuous although a bit embarassing in the end. Overall, a delightful story. It was supposed to be embarrassing! And thanks.
4/04/2005 9:14:03 p.m. The Swap Part 4 I'd say that Holly should be a bit exhausted by now- great way to start the day. I loved the eroticism (sex)in this story. It's a great turn on and I'd like to read more about these couples. More?... Yeah, I must get back to this...
4/04/2005 9:12:29 p.m. The Swap Part 3 I didn't think it was possible to top part two, but you did it. The whole story was sensually erotic and I liked the *****, in fact they all seem to be playing to the same drummer. Now on to part four. See, told you it was nothing to worry about! :-)
4/04/2005 9:11:05 p.m. Lancelot and The Damsel Well, as for erotic poetry, this is about the finest I've ever read. Realistically describing the 'dirty deed' by way of rhyme would almost seem impossible to me - -but you did it. Very nice job, I know it's difficult to write but I'd be pleased to see more of this. More? Look Allan, this isn't poetry. It's a thinly disguised joke. Ask a poet! :-)
3/04/2005 6:05:01 p.m. The Swap Part 2 Many years ago....I had the same opportunity and although we've all gone separate ways, I'll always remember the feelings that you so lovingly brought forth. Glad to be of assistance.
3/04/2005 6:03:53 p.m. The Swap Part 1 Very nice, hot sex, nice setting and a girl who knows how to get her point across. I think that Holly was actually eager once it sunk in. All's fair in love and war. To me it was a pleasurable solution. Now onto part two. You THINK she was? :-)
1/04/2005 6:09:17 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 3 As always, your stories impress me, and I was especially delighted with this one. Wonderful sex with a humourous dialogue does it for me. You have an affinity for youthful thoughts and feelings. I'd like to know if the 'Staples'come back. I'll let you know, Allan.
3/03/2005 9:07:58 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 2 I think I like part two much more than part one. It probably has a lot to do with the clever dialogue, I'm a sucker for that and you do it so well. I hope you take this one and run with it. It deserves several more chapters and I know that you have the talent to keep us wanting more. It's great , as is your imagination. Oh oh. Thanks Allan. I'm even more impressed that you want more, given the eight month wait for this one!
3/03/2005 9:06:04 p.m. Chocolate Strawberries OOHHH, so that's how it should be done. I should have been clued in a while ago. If I get another chance, I'll be prepared. It was very loving, very hot, and very descriptive. Yeah, Allan, just like that. Now all you need is a beach!
2/03/2005 6:36:37 p.m. Twas the night I think I'm a little late with this review, was almost going to wait till next season. This must be another side of you that for the most part has been hidden. It was a nice little erotic poem, but unlike Dr Seuss, it wasn't illustrated. Can't have everything,eh. Wonderful, give us another one 'please'. Not until the next silly season, I don't think.
21/02/2005 Summer As much time as I try to undrestand the inner workings of a female, I can't hold a candle to you. You need candles Allan? You should have said!
21/02/2005 Tiros and his Nemesis sexual description ..... 6 dialogue ..... 5 historical inaccuracies .....-1 Maximum rating allowable .....10 Hey, what's with the minus :-)
19/02/2005 The Quiz I'm still laughing as I write this. I give it a 10 for humour alone. Hey, what about the sex? Oh, yeah, that's right! :-)
19/02/2005 The Shower Well, you got another winner here. From 'The Quiz'(no sex)to 'The Shower'with it's hormonely charged descriptions of sex is quite a transition in one evening for me. Although I like humour, it's this type of erotica that keeps you on the top of this genre. On top? Well thanks Allan, but that's unjustified! I'm glad you managed the transition alright!
1/02/2005 Next Time - Part 2 Excellent*, great little story. I know that dialogue is hard to write, but you did a superb job on this one. 9.5/10 from me. Thanks Allan.
1/02/2005 Next Time - Part 1 I'm confused about the animosity between the brother and sister, other than that, I thouroughly liked it. I don't know where it's heading but I'm sure Josh and at least one girl (maybe more) are going to be happy in the end. Now, on to part two. Don't you have a sister? :-)
2/12/2004 Wake up call A little odd, but a nice story. Nothing like this has ever happened to me (alas) but then again I wouldn't like to be in his position. The sex was excellent though. Where did this idea come from???? My demented head!
23/10/2004 The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll Where DO you come up with these ideas? Goats....and a Troll....??? Nice little parody, very, very funny. Lucinda's simple mindedness and conversations kept me laughing. I don't know much about trolls but do you think that I could borrow Lucy for a bit...? Just products of a warped mind, Allan. Yeah, help yourself. Get her to pick up her own panties this time though, will you?
20/10/2004 Peta A different kind of sex story. Very nice. Any way for me to get in on it..?? An unusual plot, to say the least That was the idea, Allan. And no, sorry mate.
19/10/2004 Meg I had the same thoughts as Steve until Meg did her acrobatics. Nice rotation. Got back into it and had a pleasant ending.
17/10/2004 Lou and Maria Well, Hell, you did it to me again. I, at first, thought it was going to be one of your erotic sex stories,but nooo... This has to be one of the most humorous stories you have written. Lou and Maria are wonderful characters. Their conversation was witty and artfully crafted with sexual innuendos, and the rules kept changing as they progressed. Even their curcumstances added to their charm. Bravo!!!well done!!
16/10/2004 Sally Well, Jack has a good formula for dating and I could see that it could work. Sally confirmed my suspicions. You described it beautifully. Taking one's time doen't seem to be the norm anymore but you made it delightful. Sensual, slow and erotic. Very nicely done. I think that more can be done with these characters, but you are the one doing all the work Great story. Maybe a sequel...??? Nope, sorry. Not this time, Allan.
11/10/2004 Kitty This is great. A stroking story within a stroke story. Your dialogue was so descriptive that you could 'see'the events taking place. I would like to listen to their conversation when they met at Kittys'place. This was out of even my range of imagination. Great. Thanks Allan. I thought you'd like this one.
8/10/2004 Sleepy A lovely lazy day. A lovely lazy woman. A lovely lazy stroke. A lovely lazy review. What could be nicer..? Here, you want a writing job? 8-)
8/10/2004 Eelas Wedding Actually, I liked it....sort of like a fairy tale. You said it best,"a seeming mix of magic and biology" Dam original. Very descriptive, as usual. Sorry Allan. Had to chop out the bit where you give it away...
8/10/2004 Amy Well, you did it. A 'sci-fi' story that I could almost believe in. The story flowed smoothly, and the sexual descriptions and the dialogue were great. Almost? I'll let Amy know...
8/10/2004 Splat! Veerrryy funny. Exceptional dialogue and great sex. You seem to have mastered this style.
8/10/2004 Phone for Jackie Dialogue only. WOW, what a great job. You didn't need description, you could 'see' by their conversation exactly what was going on. This kind of story really 'yanks my crank'. Love to see more of this type. It's bloody hard work though, Allan...
7/10/2004 Dryworld As I started to read it, the 'Little Mermaid', came to mind and I couldn't shake that image. It was definately imaginative, probably something that only you could dream up. Very nice. Walt Disney must be spinning in his grave, or chamber.
7/10/2004 Now I lay me down to sleep I too, was entranced, by this story. This is definitly a woman pleaser, it's not too bad for men either, if they want to know how to please a woman. Too bad that youth is wasted on the young. Nice story.
5/10/2004 Orange Sexual...sensual, this one spans the gap. I saw this as a 'romantic' man, showing his wife his utter devotion, in a most personal and private way. Your decriptions of the setting and the act itself are unrivaled.
4/10/2004 The Gauntlet The title threw me off. The first line had me laughing out loud. I giggled throughout the story. Very humourous. Your sexual descriptions are unmatched. I loved it. You dirty bugger. It was supposed to throw you off. I AM a dirty bugger, but how did you know?
4/10/2004 Caramel Part 1 It was a nice little triangle story with an ambiguous ending. the sex was hot and wery descriptive.The characters were believable and the possibilities for a sequel are there..Good spelling and punctuation. Good luck in your endeavors.
4/10/2004 Carmine Gentle, right on,it was insane, but I think everyone is touched with a bit of insanity sometimes.(I read it, didn't I) That being said, it was well written, witty dialogue and visually descriptive sex. It had a pleasant ending.
4/10/2004 Late Night Everything but the kitchen sink in this one. Excitement, fear, humour and sex, all in a neat little package. Well written, nice dialogue. Tom was a little daft, but he was the winner. Nice ending.
3/10/2004 Men are scarce Very well done. Hot, erotic and descriptive.
3/10/2004 Virginia Nice premise. The sex and the dialogue were good. The last two sentences (lines) grabbed my interest.
2/10/2004 Digitally Part 3 Great story. sexy and funny with great inerplay betweent the chsrscters, especiall Mel and Stella with their blatent sexual overtones had Joe all confused, but it worked for him in the end with that lovely love scene. Nice ending. Good humor and nice sex does it for me. Ending....??
1/10/2004 Blue Angel I think I need a wife, but I don't think I could wait five years for this hot sex to come about. I'm jealous as hell.
30/09/2004 A Tall Tale Wonderful. The sex, both hetro and lesbian, was some of the hottest that I've ever read. I almost felt I was part of it. But...while I was reading, I was wondering what Dr Seuess would've had said about this one. He would NOT have liked it. It doesn't rhyme!
29/09/2004 Digitally Part 2 I'm back. Just finished part 2 and liked it as much as part 1. I don't know where you're going with this one, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it as much as the first two. The humor and the dialogue are(is) wonderful. I don't know where I'm going either!
29/09/2004 Digitally Brillant, just loved the dialogue. Funny,witty, and very humorous. Does this come naturally or do you have to work at it. Fine job. And now, on to part 2. It's hard work Allan, but it's the part I love the best.
29/09/2004 The adventures of Akakia Nicely done. A female 'stroke' story. Very well written, from a woman's point of view. Also nice for us voyeurs. I sure would like to see what's in your closet...hehe Thanks for another one. Closet? Me? Nah.
27/09/2004 It starts with a castle The couples'sex was hot but I liked Alys's solo a lot better. Nice bit of humour a the end. I always enjoy your dialogue. Nice job.
27/09/2004 A Quiet Meal HOT,erotic, very descriptive. Definitely a stroke story. It's a keeper. Thanks
25/09/2004 Milo I am starting to run out of words of praise for your stories. This is another keeper.(for me at least) I'm in that age bracket that this sort of story yanks my crank. Short, two nice characters, and erotic as hell for me. Hey, it works for me too!
25/09/2004 It started innocently enough That was a great story. Imaginative but believable.
25/09/2004 Alpha & Omega Lovely short story, very erotic. The twins dialogue is extremly well done. It would be nice to know what happened to the ***** but I can live with this ending. Thanks for another great story.
25/09/2004 Eye Contact I wouldn't mind that problem occasionly if I also had that same solution. Great story, great ending.
21/09/2004 He had a big clock I know a clocksmith and I'm going to be his best customer, thanks to you.(Oh and maybe a girl too) but at a different shop....I think.
21/09/2004 The Ritual Gentle, Awesome. Great description of an orgasm from a woman's point of view,I think,if that's possible.(me thinking, that is). Of course it's possible for you to think. Look at all this feedback!
21/09/2004 Bus Stop Cute, funny, sexy and almost too short. I really like thiskind of story.
21/09/2004 Late Summer Sun Another short masterpiece. A truly in love couple making wondeful love in a semi-private setting. You never seem to run out of adjectives, even if you have to make some of them up. Lovely my man,..just lovely.
18/09/2004 Donna What do I think?...Hell..It was terrific. Beautifully descriptive sex,(human)and very imaginative other sex(alien?). I don't think a sequel could do this one justice. This one floats my boat. You're a romantic pervert, Allan. Take a seat. I've got some more here somehwere.
17/09/2004 Life Followed instructions, read 'Lust' first, took a short break, hehe, and read 'Life'. It was a nice continuation of a life partnership, which I liked, but found the sex a little 'too' much.(can't beleive I wrote that). Maybe I'm still tired from reading 'Lust'. That being said, I enjoyed it. Not like you to follow instructions Allan! :-)
17/09/2004 Lust Nice Dialogue, as usual. Great little stroke story.... which reminds me.......gotta go now. Hey, you can keep SOME things to yourself Allan!
10/09/2004 The Swimming Baths I must be a closet voyer. Loved it. Removing the bikini bottom was a bit iffy but the wink at the end turned it around for me.
10/09/2004 Mary This one's a keeper. Loved it right from the start....and, all the way through. Erotic as hell I thought. Got to rest now.
10/09/2004 Nancy Nice...not great,....but very nice. Oh, and sensuously (is that a word) written. I'd love to be Nancy's fingers. You dirty bugger Allan. :)
6/09/2004 Electronically Gentle, Imagination is a wonderful thing and you seem to have an abundance of it. Lovely little mind piece but I still don't beleive in aliens. Well written though.
6/09/2004 Pinball Very nice, beleivable?....sort of. Semi-public, I like that...been there. Very sensual description. Wrong guy....I doubt it. Thanks for another one....
4/09/2004 Snow White Well....you did it. Took a lovely little fairy tale and turned it into a delitefully erotic little story. Snow White for god's sake, who'd of thought she she was like that. You have a wonderfully twisted mind. I like the way you think. I thought you were going to tell me off there for a minute. Thanks Allan.
3/09/2004 Dear John The title threw me off, instead of a tearjerker it turned out to be a short erotic stroke story with a very pleasant ending. Almost didn't read it..glad I did. Mary was very discriptive. Loved it. I'm pleased
31/08/2004 The one with the jeans An epic,...it ain't, but it is one hellofa nice short sex story. Been there, done that but you were a lot less vulgar than my thoughts at the time. Keep up the great stories (I gota go to the bathroom) Just watch it down there, Allan.
22/08/2004 Vivian Gentle, I loved it. Perfect. Beleivable story, nice characters and subtle humor in the dialogue. Everything about it worked for me. Thanks........Allan
9/08/2004 Tom Another winner. Spicey/sweet. One to knock her down and another to set her back on her feet. I just love your stories, you have very few peers. Oh, thanks Allan. Tell someone rich! :-)
7/08/2004 Sleep Therapy Wonderfully sloowww.... I loved it. Great dialogue. Nice characters and a believable ending.
7/08/2004 Lisseth and the Bargain The very first line did it all for me. The nice little story that followed was sort of delightful window dressing with an odd twist. Nice dialigue. I love your stuff. Thanks Allan.
13/07/2004 Silent Neat...concise...erotic...very well written. Almost had me want to believe in vampires,but I don't so I only gave it a 9, otherwise a 10 for sure. You do have a special descriptive style. Keep it up.
10/07/2004 Vivian I enjoyed it, really,really liked it. Loved Vivian and Tim's dialogue...witty and humourous.Liked their characters too, especially Vivian's. Keep this stuff coming. I'm a big fan already. I give it a 6.72/6.72 Cdn. 10/10 US Thanks a heap Allan. By the way, that's about 16/16 NZ for me!
5/07/2004 Hail Part 2 Ijust finished reading both parts of Hail, and and although girl/girl is not my big turn on,I found it hard to stop reading. Once again it was the slow build up and excellent dialogue that held my attention. You do have a way with words. Thanks again for an excellent story.
2/07/2004 It was sexual right from the start I thought it was great,the humour in the dialogue I thought was excellent. The ***** at the end were a strange twist. Here we go again! 8-)