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Chuck

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Date Story Comments from Chuck Gentle's response Rating
21/03/2006 8:14:20 p.m. Tennis panties Good hot story, and well written as usual. We should all have an Amy in our lives! How would we cope? :-)
27/02/2006 6:18:59 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3c = Great.......really great. Up to your usual standards. Thanks. Twice.
23/01/2006 10:30:56 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 2 Hey Gentle..........yeah....its good. Realistic too. At that age, I spouted at the least provocation.....most times into my underwear. It was a major undertaking to get the weapon out to work without spouting too early. Good plot, and as usual well written. Good diction, puctuation correct,plot line followed well.......alltogether superior porn. Much better than most. Another 10 to me. Pleased you like it Chuck. I better write the next one!
29/12/2005 4:09:34 a.m. The Game - Part 5 - Closure Gentle.........it was superb. Terrific plot, well told, meticulous diction and structure. You must be an English Major. Sexy as hell and massively arousing.....really really good. You could be crafting a novel, carrying that lobg plot line. Thanks for everything you said, including the bits I couldn't fit in here! :-)
8/12/2005 10:43:35 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Hey Gentle..........very good story. Heather is almost as bold as Meg. I like that. Sexy.....horny......in a most delightful way. All us fellers should have a female so delightfully endowed with horny genes. Well written too. You just might be allowed to hang around here a bit longer! :-)
15/11/2005 10:40:01 a.m. It starts with a castle Part 4 Like I said Gentle..........You are superb with prose. It was excellent. Alys is a female I would have loved to have known. (An extention of Your mind). Very well written and arousing....an easy 10 Thanks Boss! :-)
4/11/2005 8:53:06 p.m. Under The Desk Playful..........cute.........but your highest praises come from prose. You are a master of descriptive prose..... with porn for sure. No one I've ever read has been able to describe the excitement of the female better than You with prose. Wow, thanks chuck... But some of my highest praises are about dialogue... :-)
21/10/2005 7:08:35 p.m. White Witch Witch?.............short but good gentle. Arousing too. You do have a way with prose. I still wish You would continue with Meg. What a woman! You're obessessed! :-)
27/09/2005 11:08:51 a.m. Hunter's moon It was hard for me to follow this one...perthaps I'm dense. Then you're lucky I didn't write it in Italian. ;)
23/09/2005 8:27:28 p.m. This is the girl... Could that have been Meg? That was good Gentle....horny.... I loved it. Makes me jealous for a lover like that. No Chuck, different girl. Wishful thinking! :-)
27/08/2005 11:25:49 p.m. Kaz Part Two Gentle.........well done. I'm not sure whether I like Kaz better or Meg. They're both sexy and uninhibited. Like I said.....you are superb with discriptive essay. Thanks a lot. You're very kind. Oh, and I can't decide either...
27/08/2005 11:24:16 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 Damn good. One can only wish they had such an uninhibited female to go thru life with. Well written too. I find that to be a given with Gentle's friends....delightfully so. I'm looking fwd to the continuation. ooo! May you find at least one good "Allie" in your life!
20/08/2005 9:20:50 a.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk Like I said.........your powers of prose are awesome. It was delicously erotic and sexy. Your excercise in no dialogue was succesful.........an easy 10. But some dialogue would not have been onerous. You do very very well with erotic stories. Thanks Chuck. Glad you liked it.
18/08/2005 8:49:58 p.m. Hey gorgeous Weeelll......sexy, but different. I like it better without all the dialoge. Your descriptive powers are so superior, that to me dialoge gets partially in the way. Not entirely....but to an increasing degree, as in Digitally, and here. Your descriptive prose is so superior to any other format. Well, thanks for the many kind words, but... I think my dialogue is BETTER. :-)
1/08/2005 6:43:00 p.m. Alice Pt 4 the scenario is .........weeelll.......... different. The sex is fantastic......easily a ten What a gift you have to romantically describe such a rut. Uh huh. Different. Got it. Oh, thanks. Rut??? :-)
30/07/2005 10:55:48 p.m. The doorstep Ah Gentle.............sexy as all get out. Gave me a massive ........ What a surprise ending. Very well written. Still wish You'd continue that sexy Meg! Keep up the superb writing. An easy 10. massive.... ? Heart failure :-) As for Meg, hmmm.... :-)
3/06/2005 9:46:03 p.m. The Swap Part 5 well written as usual.....and sexy. I'm going to have to go back and read the whole story again. I really think You write very well, and of course I love the subject matter. Still would like to see a continuation of Meg the alien. She was really horny. Well, thanks a lot. Meg is unlikely to get an update, but I can't rule out the possibility.
6/03/2005 1:10:33 a.m. Chocolate Strawberries Hi Gentle......the farther I got into the story, the more I needed my wife. Alas....She's asleep, and I had to make do until I could read the story to her. Very good....10 again. Hey, nothing wrong with that, so long as you make it up to her tomorrow!
4/02/2005 Tiros and his Nemesis Both stories very good. [This one, and Meg] You write so well, and capture horny and romance beautifully. WHAT A MIND YOU HAVE!!!!!!!!!! A warped mind, you mean? :-)
4/02/2005 Meg Loved Meg especially... You write so well, and capture horny and romance beautifully. WHAT A MIND YOU HAVE!!!!!!!!!! Thanks. Most appreciated.
20/12/2004 The Shower As usual Gentle, extremely sexy and very well written. Got me hard, and thats no small feat at my age. Wish I'd had a woman who liked sex that much when I was a young man. Probably would have screwed myself to death. What a way to die thuogh. Another 10 to rack up. I thought age was a state of mind?
26/11/2004 Splat! Exceedingly good Gentle.........the dialog is fun, but the description of the coupling is superb. You capture the getting to know one another and the sex is dynamite. Pleased to hear it.
26/11/2004 The Swap Part 4 As usual Gentle.......the writing is superb. However I find the premise unlikely in contrast to Your usual very believable narratives. Perhaps I'm to much from the old school....I want it all from my life partner....and mostly will get it. Well, I know what you mean, and this is the reason that this story is quite different to all my others. An experiment if you will.
11/11/2004 Wake up call I loved it......really good Gentle. What a wonderful way to wake up. A similar experience woke me one morning... Thanks Chuck. Had to leave the rest of your story off. You should write though!
30/10/2004 Caramel Part 1 You have such good descriptive power. I could just feel my cock sliding up her love canal. I can't imagine Paulo leaving such a sweet morsel alone to pine for love. Thank you for the vote, you are very descriptive yourself. I'm delighted you bonded with my lady, it means a lot that my words can get a "positive" reaction out of a reader. I hope you like the others just as much. Just as soon as I finish them. Take care. ;)
26/10/2004 The Swimming Baths Very good...........got me hard. Well written and beliveably erotic. Reminds me of the time my wife and I got lost to lust while driving on a lonely country highway. Driving and fucking at the same time isn't easy, but we did. One of my better memories. Not easy? It's not very safe, either! Still, got me a ten. Thanks!
25/09/2004 Vivian I loved it.....She may be a slut, but its the kind I like And me!
18/09/2004 Donna Well written, superb idea, perhaps it is that way with a soul-mate.
18/09/2004 A Tall Tale Hot...Hot....Hot! I'd love to have my tail tickle that fertile brain. I'm pleased you liked it. I'll just add you to my list of dangerous perverts. 8-)