After one week of using FormMail to receive comments I had twenty-five responses. Prior to this, I hadn't twenty-five in five years! Please keep on responding, I appreciate the comments, good and bad. These are the comment's that I've received so far. Please add to it. I will not include email address's, for yours, and mine, own protection.
As you can tell, I've been recieving lots of nice comments, and very few negative ones. I've found that it's not neccesery to constantly repost my stories, seems you readers find them and enjoy. I will update this page and my bio page as often as I can, as I do like to post the comments, and make comments of my own. Thank you very much, and happy reading!
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I've decided to cut down on file size by writting new pages containing the coments sent by you readers. Each page has a hundred comments. I guess you can say this is an archive of what you readers have said about my works.
898 18.08.08 Terry Impregnating My Wife
comments = what a lucky bastard; wish she was my wife; only thing you didn't say was enjoying
licking all that juice out of her. Good screwing for the future; if you ever decide to come to
Aussie you'll be very happily welcomed !!!!!
(Eskimo: LOL Although wife and I would lve to visit Austrailia, this story was a total
work of fiction.)
897 17.08.08 Craig Swingers Diary
comments = what I liked about your swinging with cindy story besides the great visuals and getn
off was the thought patterns of all the players and how cindy was a great spirit and you both
communicated over and over lovingly, it was the conclusion thoughts that said maybe we found out
the big picture between each others fantasies and moreso real human needs through I see that
swinging was not necessary to do that; talking fantasy and living loving and hopefulness and
laughter between a couple and even platonic couple parties for fun may or could have worked
better. (yet if you had smaller equipment, I wonder?)
(Eskimo: I sent your message to Cindy(not her real name), she sent a very thankful reply.
Her and her husband(I can't remember the name I used in story) are doing very well, and are
still happily married with no desire to enter the swining lifestyle again. They still are part
time nudists (Like my wife and I), and enjoy that when they have the chance to go enjoy life
sans clothes.)
896 05.08.08 Jason Doug's Good Fortune
comments = Great story, any hope of getting more stories based around Doug?
(Eskimo: Probably not...try using your imagination, works for me.)
895 24.07.08 Dave Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
comments = I wish I could find a way to talk my wife into geting bread by a good looking black
man. Do you have any suggustions
(Eskimo: Yeah, how about just dropping her off at a black bker bar on a Satruday night
after you've gotten her good and drunk...oh wait, you want tot alk her into it, never mind!)
894 21.07.08 Guy Teen Bride
comments = Good,I am glad to see you back to your Older male,Younger Female story line.Some of
your best stories are these.
(Eskimo: Ah, Guy...one of my favorite critics....and yes, I do tend to do thees type of
story's well...but I enoy writing good old fashioned fuck works too! :)
893 07.07.08 Kenneth Beginning Of A Harem
comments = Dude you know how to write the most incredible story EVER! For the whole story, i
thought i was the guy! you should become a writer or something =D
(Eskimo: Amazing the responses I get soem times.)
892 02.07.08 Snib Teen Bride
comments = Great Story! Good to see you writing again, especially on the subject of southern
girls. One more to add to my collection.
(Eskimo: I'm really surprised this one didn't get mroe response, oh well...)
891 30.06.08 Maj32 Doug's Good Fortune
comments = Doug's Good Fortune was a great story. It was so addictive I had to stay up
and finish it before I went to sleep. Is there any chance of you writing a sequal to it?
(Eskimo: A sequel? Highly unlikely...if it hasn't become obvious to you all, but it's
unfortunate that I have the time to write anymore. I've probably over 130 story's that I've
started and yet to finish.)
890 30.06.08 Justin Toys 1
comments = that was amazing, exhilarating and very erotic story. picturing it was almost as
good as the real thing, lol. ur a great story writer and im gladly going to advance to
part 2 2moro
889 23.06.08 Nick Campground Sluts
comments = this story was great!!!! it seems so real! Everything about it is top notch!!!!!
888 22.06.08 Alvin Teen Bride
comments = What happened in Georgia? What became of the lawsuit? Did any of the officials go
to jail? or lose everything? Money, homes, land? Otherwise an excellent story! Welcome back!
(Eskimo: LOL What the fuck? You a lawyer? Actually, I decided not to add mindless legal
nonsense to the story.)
887 22.06.08 Frank
comments: You are actually a very good writer but there are several things that drive me
crazy -- the grammar and the spelling.
Modern word processors have both grammar check and spell check. If these were used a lot (not all) of these problems would go away.
Now I can not be the first to say this and I am sure this is not welcomed news. The thing
that is interesting is if these issues became less bothersome, then your real writing
capability would become more apparent and your writing talents would grow.
Why do you think this is not happening?
(Eskimo: Frank's missing the point here of why I write.....)
886 22.06.08 JR Teen Bride
comments = I really like your stories. They generally have a realistic quality that I enjoy. I just
finished reading “Teenbride”. There are a few typos which detract a bit. I think your talent
should not be allowed to be diminished by such distractions. Great story though. Keep it up!
(Eskimo: That's noting, you shold read the next comment! Anywya, thanks for the praise
and understanding...after all, this isn't my way of maing a living, just a way to make others
achieve a healthy outlok on love, sex and their own body.)
885 21.06.08 anon Impregnating My Wife
comments = after reading half of the story..it made me sick..one question..how on earth could
u let allthose men fuck ur woman..ur asick person getting exited from something like that..
two..how do yuo know if out of all these men..maybe one had aburst kondom..?What kind of man
are you that cant satisfie ur woman. Four..i feel very sorry for your kids growing up in such
an invironment..five..why would any normall person tell astory like this on the internet..both
of you neeed help..sexadicts is one thing coming to mind..trust me there are other ways of
getting attetion then fucking ur brains out..Please have somebody adopt ur children. Nasty
freaks..and one last comment..ur hoe..oh sorry wife needs to get tested..regurlar..
(Eskimo: ROFL...not only is he shy, he can't even spell correctly, and then there's his
grammar! Pelase, I don't want anyone giving me any mroe shit about my spelling and grammer, not
when there's morons out there that send me this garbage...guess he doesn't know the meaning of
fantasy....probably another Bush supporter.... )
884 21.06.08 Keith Impregnating My Wife
comments = This has got to be one of the sexiest, horniest stories I have ever read.
And in my 65 years
I have read a lot! That must be one horny wife you have there. Lucky guy!
(Eskimo: I love this job! teh idiot that wrote comment #885 hated ths one. )
883 17.06.08 Frank
comments = 1. It's catEgory, and the plural is categories.
2. The apostrophe is almost NEVER used to form a plural. It denotes possession. Try's
is not a word. The correct spelling is tries.
Thanks for your effort.
(Eskimo: Um, yeah, I'll get right on it....)
882 15.06.08 Roger Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
comments = i love mfm . Lts see 2 goes into 1 three ways. I love to hear more,.
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it, and you can read more of my works anytime right here!)
881 14.06.08 Tony My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = No you didn't add too many characters. This storey was AWESOME. I new he
would end up fucking Anna. I just didn't expect your little surprise of her being a
virgin. Keep up the great work man. I have seen ALOT worse in Hustler and Playboy.
This story was fantastic. Hope to read more soon.
880 11.06.08 Rajeesh April
comments = Very nice hot and sexy story. Good work
(Eskimo: I've actually started two sequels to this one...and have gotten no where!)
879 08.06.08 Matt Meadow View Court
comments = Nice erotic story - almost believable, too. Except for the population
explosion, a great time was had by all.
(Eskimo: Beleiveable? Well, okay....)
878 08.06.08 Frank Rita's Friendly Neighbors
comments = Nice premise. I share your interest in nudity. Glad you work it in, as at
the dinner table.
Could do a sequel, with the two boys' girl friends enjoying the action as well as Rita
and Julie. Julie's husband could pleasure the girl friends as well.
(Eskimo: I tend to refuse to do sequels.)
877 05.06.08 Rick Celinda
comments = great story would love to see more chapters of it. you have an easy flow to
your stories and they seem to be about real people someone i can relate to being in my
late 40's myself. keep up the good work. thank you.
(Eskimo: I usually try to make things realistic in my works...then sometimes, pure
fantasy takes over lol.)
876 05.06.08 Mike Happy Birthday
comments: This story needs to be reformatted to put in carriage returns for the end of lines.
(Eskimo: yeah,yeah,yeah...I took care of this problem.....)
875 05.06.08 Lamont Happy Birthday
comments = I enjoyed your story -- quick and dirty (Yay!). It's the
first I've seen with your name on it. Are there others??
A little editing would make it an easier read, however. There are some spelling problems,
maybe a typo here and there but the most disconcerting is that you change back and forth
from present to past tense. (Compare the 1st and 2nd paragraphs.)
(Eskimo: I didn't pen this particular peice, and I obviously screwed up while
editing it. I should have done a better job, however, I'll leave it as is for the time
being.)
874 05.06.08 Joel Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = very interesting story. not so far
fetched, really. love is the basis of christianity, so...
(Eskimo: Hmmm...interesting response.)
873 05.06.08 anon Happy Birthday
comments = I can't yet comment on the content, since the formatting is so bad.. i have to scroll right
to read what appears to be a very long line..
(Eskimo: Ooops! I fucked up...I've since corrected the problem.)
872 01.06.08 Gary Bonnie
comments = Great story. It just proves you don't need a bunch of sex to make great entertainment. Thanks.
(Eskimo: I liked writting this one, as it did have a good story line.
871 30.05.08 Joe A Slave's tale
comments = i really love your storry, but i with you let Hardy keep
Samantha two girls as well.o, please write more for us.
(Eskimo: I've kicked around hte idea of a sequel...but God, do I ever hate
sequesls!)
870 28.05.08 Harold Doug's Good Fortune
comments = I loved it. It's not often that the "less than attractive"
guy gets the action, particularly if he is part of the geek culture.
This one was great and more would be even better.
(Eskimo: This one was pure fantasy, inspred by a cruise my wife
and I partook in this past winter. And I agree, as since I'm part of the
"less than attractive" crowd, it's awlays ncie to see one score big...and, there
have been a few times that this has happened to me, but not on such a scale
that I wrote here.)
869 27.05.08 Red Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = that was a good story. but definately need to continue on
with the story line. what happens with Adam and Pamela? does he stay
with mom, go with the wanna be nudist with the awesome hoo-hoo's, the hot
little fire fox, or will he accept the beautiful daughter of the
mother that wouldn't mind having him for a son-in-law.
868 24.05.08 Jeremy Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = your stories are something else, from 1-10 I give it a 12.
867 22.05.08 Bryan
comments = I have just read a couple of you stories. I like them. I
have posted about thirty stories and like you I try to put a plot, or
some
interesting dialogue. I agree with what you say that you get better
with time and practice.
I wrote non-fiction before and had four books published. This type of
writing requires new skills.
(Eskimo: Thank you for the comments. One of the hardest things to do is to
come up with new plots, and to make a story not sound like one that's already been
written.)
866 15.05.08 Maria The Cottage
comments = CAN'T STOP PLAYING WITH MY PUSSY--GREAT STORY.
(Eskimo: Well, a pciture of you playing youerself would be greatly
appectiated..as long as you're over the age of 18 of course.)
865 11.05.08 Thos Wingman
comments = I've just discovered your stories and immeditely read
several -- they're simply great! It's too late in the night to expand on that
comment, but I'll certainly be reading them all and may get back to
you with specific comments on why I like them so much.
I do have one nit-picking complaint, however. Like so many other
non-professional (American?) writers, you seem not to have been taught when
to use "XX and I" and when to use "XX and me". To figure out which to
use, try replacing the phrases with either "we" or "us", or try dropping
the "XX and". 'Sandy and I looked at each other' is grammatically
correct (We looked..., I looked..., Sandy and I looked...); 'a conversation
with Diane and I' is not: (... with us, ... with me, ... with Diane
and me).
(Eskimo: Ohhhhh noooooo! It's the fuckin grammer police!....oh well,
at least you enjoyed the story.)
864 11.05.08 Donald My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = I'm sitting here with a smile on my face softly chuckling to
myself. Great story! I read the first few paragraphs and was going
to stop, but I try not to guess/judge stories until the end. I'm so
glad I did that!
Several times in this story, I found myself actually laughing out loud.
One of them was the scene with first session before the Deans and the
president. Hilarious. Yes, I knew the jokes were coming as I read
them, but the timing and words still made me laugh. Great work.
The ending was interesting. Most of the time, the authors delve into
the "other" path that a story like this could take. Thank you for not
trying to make a moral statement at the end (well, for not going into
those other moral judgements/ending). I did find it amusing, too.
"Serves them right for ruining a good thing" came to mind many times. No,
that's not a nice thing to think, but, it is true. In real life, I
would probably think the same.
Anyway, thank you for a great read and for helping me relieve some ...
stress .... and relax on this raining Sunday afternoon. hehe Like
John, I now need a nap too.
(Eskimo: I webt and edtitred it again, but I'm not syaing it is still
without errors.)
863 09.05.08 Peter Jimmy & Cindy
comments = This looks like one of your earlier stories. I enjoyed it,
but it was written so quickly and not edited that it leaves the reader
very confused at points.
The transition between Jimmy and Cindy sometimes happens mid-sentence
because of writing speed. Either that or the Jimmy/Cindy cue is missing
or not formatted.
I think it is really worth your time to take this one and plan some
time to re-edit and repost it.
Suggestions: Make the Cindy.Jimmy transitions clearer by either putting
the transition sections in CAPS or <>.
Yes, I think that looks better than caps.
Then do a review for grammar errors. Most of your stories are a lot
cleaner than this. It won't take much time and it will be a lot easier on
the reader.
Plot: You really don't have to change a thing. The plot is interesting
and complex with a lot of changes. By the end of the story you get a
lot better at showing us surprises with the change in point of view. If
you re-write we might find out some new things that would surprise us.
But really, you don't have to change anything.
One note: Your story is really unusual in the ASSTR world because it
deals with the childlessness issue. That hits many couples and women
particularly hard. If you did do a re-write, you could spend even more time
on it. Also, how you dealt with Cindy's self examination of her high
school pattern behavior as an adult was good. Very good. And most
surprising.
I think overall, my feeling was that this was potentially an award
winning story that did not win one because it was written very quickly.
Maybe it was a contest challenge? At any rate, why not take the time to do
a rewrite sometime and beef it up a little. There is nothing wrong
with the sexual descriptions. Your sense of emotion is great. You might do
a tiny bit more with the VOY feelings in the last lake scenes. But
all in all, the best thing would be a pass for grammar and Point of View
clarification.
I've read a bunch more of your stories since my last note and continue
to enjoy them. Like all writers, I put out internet stuff without too
much editing sometimes too. I can't tell you how many times I've hit
on my blog the gone DAMN! And had to immediately fix 6-10 little
typos. I am getting better at waiting a day and then posting. This helps
because the new eyes I have then really do spot new things.
Thanks again.
P.S. I loved the Big Man with woman concept in the biker stories. Big
men don't get the good writeups they need. Would not mind seeing one
with a Big Guy with a redhead and blonde tall both, who meet in the woods
or camping, or watching kids play t-ball....
(Eskimo: Whew! I thought he would never get done writting! Actually, I
am grateful of your comments. However, at teh top of the story, you would see that
I am not the author. I will passthe note along to Anne, as it is one of her works.)
862 09.05.08 Bruce Rosa
comments = I liked your story a great deal. Good build up, with some
hot sex plugged in at good places. (One does read these stories for sex,
even if it's not the only thing that's enjoyable about them!) I liked
the characters. Realistic. You're a good writer. Proofreading would've
lead to fewer distractions.
Thanks for having the story available for me to read.
(Eskimo: Obviously, proofreading is not one of my better points.)
860 09.05.08 Guy Doug's Good Fortune
comments = Well Done!!! A very good start.Glad your able to write/type
again.
We enjoyed the story and are looking forward your next one.
(Eskimo: Okay, who kidnapped Guy and is sending comments in for him?)
859 08.05.08 Bruce Olive
comments = ...how do ya' like that?!
Nicely written story, with hot sex.
It's all to rare to find a realistic, hot and well-written story with
an older man or woman who is genuinely sexy. Thanks for reminding me
that such stories exist.
(Eskimo: This story has been around for a while, but it's always been
well liked.)
858 08.05.08 anon Martha
comments = Good reading. PLEASE USE SPELL CHECK................ON ALL
OF YOUR STORIES. Thank you.
(Eskimo: Spel check doesn't always work that well....get over it.)
857 08.05.08 Dave Doug's Good Fortune
comments = I really like that most of the participants were respectful,
loving and considerate.
(Eskimo: Well, looks like I'm back...for one anyway....)
856 08.05.08 Stact Cindy's Quest
comments = One of the few erotic stories that tied sex in with a story
line that truly had me glued to the screen. Very few erotic stories are
anything more than fuck stories. This one is so much more. You are an
excellent author
(Eskimo: God, I love praise!!!!)
855 08.05.08 GG & TC Doug's Good Fortune
comments = Doug`s story is GREAT and I see you are back in great
writting style. Keep writting look forward to next story. This is a 10 of
10 story !!!!!!! GG & TC
(Eskimo: oI was sort of worried that I made this one a bit too unrealistic, I mean,
six women in all? Waht the hell did this guy eat? Besides pussy, of course.)
854 08.05.08 Peter Monica
comments = I've spent a good deal of this morning reading a number of
your stories and as a writer myself, I thought I should tell you how
much I enjoyed many of them. While some of the elements are not always to
my personal taste, your writing style itself and warm rich character
development has made all of those I have read far more enjoyable than
many stories I read.
Monica for example, has great heart in it. That's what I like about all
of your stories, they all seem to have great heart and that makes me
enjoy reading them all the more.
I've only read about 10-15% of your stories today, and already I know
that I will be back for more soon. I think that you should really be
working on mainstream novels - perhaps you do already and this is only
your sidleline for juicier stuff, but really there is nothing much more
graphic than many of the Harold Robbins books, you seem to be the right
age to remember when those were THE books. So why not go for it?
Or perhaps try to get an editor interested in publishing a collection
of your short stories?
You may not think you are ready, but you are.
You might wonder why anyone would BUY a collection of your stories when
they are already available online. The fact is that reading with a
computer is just not as comfortable as reading with a book. I bet ASSTR
has some way of determining how many stories are read by each Author, at
least at a minimum how many pages are loaded, this might be good
evidence to try to get an agent with.
Again, even as a book author as need be you could publish under a
psuedonym. If it was good enough for the Nancy Drew books...
Say, while I'm at it, you might try a humorous satire about a sexy
inquisitive girl named Nancy and her first time with her boyfriend Ned. The
Secret of the Young Cock? Adventure on Larkspur Lane?
Thanks a lot.
(i>
(Eskimo: Actually, a few years back, a adult publisher did approach me about
publishing some of my works in one of those monthly things that you would find in
adult bookstores. The payout wasn't great, think it was $25 per story, and I
almost went trhough with it. And no, I don't write anything else but porn. I get bored
way too easily to write anything beyond a short story, so a novel is out of the
question.)
853 08.05.08 Dave Doug's Good Fortune
comments = Loved it, especially the ending!
852 08.05.08 Marlon Rosa
comments = Wow, two stories in one morning, and again a well written
one. As I stated before I love stories of MILF and younger men, and you
certainly know your subject.
One thing I've noticed of authors on this site is their reliance on the
spell check button, which in no way enhances your stories. Please do
not take this as criticism but rather as a critique of a modern day
electronic writing. It is disconcerting to be reading a pleasant story
and to be stopped short and have to go back and read the sentence again
because the word written is not the word intended. If you have editors
then they should catch these mistakes but if you need somebody to vet
your work then you should have access to readers who are willing to do
this for you.
Thank you for the story though, any sexual content in your writings, is
very satisfying to a 43 yr old woman who has fantasies of younger well
hung men.
852 08.05.08 Marlon Mrs. Driggs
comments = I really enjoyed this fast paced short story. Well written
about one of my favourite subjects, MILF and younger men, and all legal
and consensual. What older women want with none of the emotional
attachments, just plain ole fuckin' with two horny young guys who can go on
forever.
851 08.05.08 Rich Amusement Park Adventure
comments = Thanks a great story. I thought it was a little slow to
start but once it got going it was a great Read. Looking forward to
hearing the rest of the story.
(Eskimo: glad you liked.)
850 03.05.08 Jim
comments = At 78, I'm finishing up a 75,000 word autobiography about my
sex life. It started with Sally Rand at the Chicago World's Fair in
1934... My wife and I are bisexual and have an open marriage, love each
other and have been married 54 years, so I have a lot to write about.
But have you ever heard or read of such a project? I may publish if
enough persons believe it would be of value. The names would change to
protect the "innocent." Thanks for your thought.
(Eskimo: Interesting note, however, he's 78 now, he would have
only bn 4 in 1934....things that make you go 'hmmmmm'.)
849 01.05.08 Mark Celinda
comments = Celinda was the first that I've read of your stories but I
don't think it will be the last. You don't read many 'Adult' stories
these days with such a compelling storyline. My only complain is that it
should have been longer.
(Eskimo: In regards to making the story's longer, I get that a lot,
but I tend to get bored with the story, and whnt to finish it. Amazingly,
they still read okay....usually.)
848 01.05.08 Leon A Slave's tale
comments = Superb story, and so well written. The master's wife when
she came back home, would have been erotic making it with Hardy and or
maybe her daughter.
Anyway, a very very entertaining read. THANK YOU VERY MUCH
I'll now have a go at some of your other stories
(Eskimo: I played around with that thought of includng the master's wife
or daughter, but opted out for it. I decided the way I told it would be more
beleiveable.)
847 29.04.08 Beth
comments = I am a new reader, enjoy all the stories. Started to read
some of the comments and who is the dude named Guy? He sounds like a
real pain in the ass. I think he is not too happy with the way the
world runs. If one doesn't like, don't read. Simple. I enjoy the different
reads. All the different types of writings. Looking forward to more.
(Eskimo: I'm glad you've enjoyed the many variety's of my works. I try to
provide somethign dierent each time, which is probably one of the many reasons
why I have not posted anything new in a while. As for Guy, I find him and his
rants mildly amusing, which is probably why I post his comments here, for
others to enjoy.)
846 28.04.08 John College Graduation Present
comments = What a great story, it reminded me when I first left home.
I came from the Bronx, New York. I started work at the age of 21 in
Washington DC. One night at a club I met this woman who was 36 years
old. I met her at 8 p.m. and by 9 p.m. we were heading for my motel room.
I did have romance sex with prior girlfriends, but this was my first
and only marathon. Your story brought back wonderful memories.
At the age of 66 it is mostly memories now.
(Eskimo: This was a 'what if..' story, thanks in part to a chance meeting at
a small town college between yours truly and an older woman. No, there was no sex, but,
what if...?)
845 25.04.08 Robert A Slave's tale
comments = i like all your stories but my favorite to date is a slave
tale keep up the good work
(Eskimo: If I was to re-write this one, I would most likely make it
longer. In my opinion, there were more chapters there, just waiting to be
written.)
844 23.04.08 Lorenzo Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
comments = I loved ur story and i thnk it was so good wat a pitty 1 of
thows kids wernt mine i love u mwha
(Eskimo: Okay, I'm back to oasionaly posting the comments. I guess reading the wonderfully
penned works of some of my fans drove me to it. Maybe I'll even finish a work
before summer starts.)
843 15.04.08 Guy
comments = Nothing since Dec 07 ? Did I drive you out with some of my
comments on some of those trash stories you submitted ?.You are too
good a writer to put out some of these later stories.i.e.,A Slave's
Tale,Trained By Uncle Joe,Campground Sluts,and Julie & Rachel.I have to ask
why,when you also wrote,Bonnie,Martha,Pizza Shop Intern,and Becoming A
Nudist.In any case,I read all you publish,good or bad( by my
standards).So,get with it and let us see something new.
(Eskimo: Ahhh Guy, nice to hear from you....December 7th? Don't remember that one,
must have been while I was uncer the influence of those painkillers. A couple
of surgeries later, and I'm starting to feel like typing again, maybe. I'm
obviously not going to apoligize for lack of material, or quaility for that matter,
but as usual, life has thrown me a few curves in the liine of health and carrier
issues. The latter has involved a hell of a lot more hours than I am accustomed
to, and I had to cut back somewhere to get more important things accomplished.
The former hasn't helped, as I couldn't type all that well to begin with, and with
my injury, it made it even more difficult. Will I finish any thing? Who knows. Check
back from time to time and find out. Hell, I haven't even updated my comment page since
August, where does the time go?)
842 30.08.07 Maxine story's
comments = the stories are so real, such a feeling of warmth, my friend
and I love reading them afetr school... please write some more
(Eskimo: It's nice to hear that at least some of our youth take time to read.)
841 28.08.07 Henk Canoe Trip To An Orgy
comments = Loved the Dorset and Kawagama refrences!
(Eskimo: Alright! Someone that actually knows the palce mentioned in the story! Glad you
liked it. This was one of my earlier works, and I don't think it was one of the good ones.
Probably not even in the top half, actually. I think I sort of put too much sex into
this one, although the story line itself is pretty good.)
840 27.08.07 Peter For Profit story's
comments = Came across your story online about you and your wifes sexual adventures.
Would lobve to see a picture of her. You have some kind of woman.
(Eskimo: My wife is flattered for the itnerest, however, she flatly
refuses to have her picture sent out or posted.)
839 23.08.07 Joao Widower Fun
comments = Very hot. I love it. :o))
838 23.08.07 D Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
comments = awesome story , i actually jerked off just reading some of
the stuff. just so yah know , even a 22 year old appreciates a nice
story as it has been known in the past that us young men do not.
(Eskimo: Nice to see that this story provided some stimuli for
someone.)
837 21.08.07 Snib Pizza Shop Intern
comments = Found the other religious bigot I was thinking of, he's in
Cindy's Quest. I had forgotten that he was a religious bigot hidding
behind a pulpit.
Great story! Just to my liking. Strange romance with plenty of
twists. Like Beating Off Bob you can be pretty sure that the female lead is
going to be pregnant by the end of the story, but the way you get there
is always interesting! I am amazed at all the ways you find to
advance the story. Donna's adventure was a twist I didn't expect.
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story's. I'll probably keep
on writting, just maybe fewer and farhter in between works. My creativity and
patience has been lacking of late, and it's hard trying to come up with something
new each time.)
836 21.08.07 Snib Bonnie
comments = Great story! Enough story and adventure to keep the story
moving whith some sexual tension to make things interesting. I sort of
knew where the story was going but there were enough quick turns to
keep it interesting.
I don't really know what to call Beverly's brand of Christianity, maybe
religious bigotry? I remember you using the same type characters in
Justice For Megan and one other story where the bigot's tried to get
custody of some children and the congregation ran the pastor out of town.
It is sad that there are people who label them selves as Christian but
don't have the faintest idea of the love of Christ.
Hope you enjoyed your "retirement"! It looks like you are going after
quality over quantity which is fine with me!
(Eskimo: I try to make my works interesting, and even though the ending is
probably very evident, it's the path to it that I try to keep the readers guessing.)
835 13.08.07 Mork Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = Hi..I did read you story and I like it. There is any second
part ? Sincerely..Mork (Patagonia - Chile).
(Eskimo: No second part planned, sorry.)
834 11.08.07 Griff Bonnie
comments = good yarn.!!
833 11.08.07 Ralph Bonnie
comments = Great stories. I especially like the nudism story lines.
From your writing I suspect you know the scene personally. At least I
hope so,as I am forming much of my imaging of that setting based on what
you have written about it. It is an experience I have often wished for
but not had the opportunity.
(Eskimo: It's a safe bet to say that yes, we've expereinced the nudist lifestyle. We
still do practice it from time to time, but not nearly as often as we once did. And for
those interested in it, you can find plenty of resources at such sites like AANR.com.)
832 11.08.07 Jim Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = Ive read 3-4 stories toay an an only say thank you for your
great tallent at telling a story. It was so clear I could picture
myself there as a bug on the wall watching and enjoying.
(Eskimo: Funny you mentin that...I've found the one major thing that helps me
write, is to visulize the situation, as if I'm there watching the action unfold in front
of me. Yes, this is fantasy working, but a healthy fantasy at that. This is probably why
I have so many works started and unfinished, as I then start thingking about other
ideas and move on to them.)
831 10.08.07 Hopeless Romantic Bonnie
comments = This 'Hopeless Romantic' is delighted with your story, even
if their first intercourse was delayed until they were properly
married.
(Eskimo: Easily explained, she has six kids! And they kept getting interupted.)
[as she grabbed a sheet and threw it over us both, not bothering to
even disengage from me]
I frankly think that the older girls ought to get used to seeing their
mother and stepfather having sex when they walk UNANNOUNCED into the
marital bedroom, particularly after visiting a nudist camp. Even better
yet, such moments ought to be used later on as a springboard for rather
frank discussions about sex and marriage.
(Eskimo: Hmmm....well for starters, I don't think Bonnie would have gone for
a 'frank talk'! Maybe alone without Stephen, but not with him. He had that with
Randy in the story.)
[The conception took place the first month of our marriage]
At age 35 more or less? I think that it would be more realistic and
indeed more interesting if conception didn't occur for a few months.
Nevertheless, it is important to me that they had intercourse so frequently
that they were never able to figure out just which time led to
conception.
(Eskimo: Six kids in sixteen years, I don't think reproducing was one of
her weak points.)
[Beverly still lives with us]
I am really surprised because I really expect Beverly to be the kind of
person to carry her grudges for a lifetime. Indeed, it might have even
been necessary to use the proceeds from Stephen's house to buy her a
little cottage across town if not further away. Indeed proximity to
Beverly's church may have been an even more important factor so that her
congregation could support her in maintaining her great anger for a
lifetime! :-(
(Eskimo: The proceeds from selling Stephens house went for the addition
to Bonnie's house. I ignred Bev for the most part towards the end, because her type
should be ignored.)
830 10.08.07 Joe Pizza Shop Intern
comments = You DO write some of the best stories. The sex AND story
line are fun. Human. And pretty rare.
Thanks.
(Eskimo: I really did thought about adding more to this one, but decided againt it. I
tend to hate longer wors as I thnik the readers tend to get bored and move on to
something else. A short story, with a plot that leds to sex, or in some cases, more sex, tends to
get more favorable reviews.)
829 09.08.07 Dave Bonnie
comments = check your spelling twice before posting to your site
(Eskimo: OH NOOOO! Another fucking english major! I have since corrected most of the
errors.)
828 09.08.07 Dave John's Adventure In Babysitting
comments = this one is good but not s good as working with charlotte
(Eskimo: Personally, I preffered this one over Working For Charlotte.
Each have their good points. And both are of a older female/younger male theme. Some have said I
could have expanded Charlotte a bit more, but thought it ended well jsut the way it is.)
827 08.08.07 Cheryl Carrie
What an inventive family...and that LeRoy is a person after my own
heart....not to mention Kathy.
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it....I seldom receive commetns on this one, have even
sort of forgotten about it.)
826 08.08.07 Floyd story's
comments = I REALLY LIKED YOUR STORIES OF GANGBANGS. TURN ME ON. I
KEEP LOOKING FOR A STORY I READ A LONG TIME AGO. IT WAS ABOUT A CLUB
THAT ABUCTED FOUR PREGNANT WOMEN. THEY WERE USED AND ABUSED THEN KILLED.
LOVE TO FIND IT AGAIN. OR DO YOU NO WERE I CAN FIND STORIES LIKE
THAT?
(Eskimo: There are some readers that should just be turned in to the authorities.)
825 08.08.07 Big Cock My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = i'd love love to see a fucking video
(Eskimo: Hell! I'd love to star in it!)
824 08.08.07 Robert story's
comments = i think there great
823 08.08.07 Sonny Doris
comments = I have always wanted to fuck older women specially redheads.
I was raised in a family that didn't talk or discuss sex at all and
that caused me to be very shy around women I would look but never touch I
am so sorry about that now wish I would have tried! I would love to
have a three some but know that wont happen with my wife she is strict
old school.
enjoyed the story very much
(Eskimo: There was no basis for this oe, just purely fantasy on my part
as the author. Although, please note that my significant other is quite a bit
older than myself. Just don't tell her I said that!)
822 08.08.07 Tommy Pizza Shop Intern
comments = a sweet romantic story.
well written too, but then all yours are.
kudos!
(Eskimo: My latest creation, not sure what inspired me to write it,
and it took what seemed forever to finish it. Glad someone liked it.)
821 07.08.07 Doc Rosa
comments = Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Grew up in Buffalo N.Y., not
far from what was then called Buffalo State Teachers College. would not
surprise me to learn that you and I have walked the same earth ... Now
living in midwest north of Milwaukee.
Look forward to the fruits of your future labors ....
(Eskimo: It's suffice to say that yes, we probably have walked the same earth. I
grew up in teh Eastern Suburbs, and am now like you settle din the midwest. If you have
read my other works, you'll notice I tend to use similar places, as they're palces I've
been to, or know rather well.)
820 03.08.07 Leeroy My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = That was fantastic! good work mate!
(Eskimo: And the funnny part is, this story gets a lot of postive comments, yet
I really didn't enjoy writting it. I actually thought about not posting it. I should
have ended it after the main story character had done it with his tep-mom and the
neighbor lady and daughter, but I didn't.)
819 01.08.07 Scott Amusement Park Adventure
comments = I am a very, very average guy; nothing special at all. Yet,
in graduate school I met and had two classes with a grandmother who
was very special and far from average. We too wound up having a sexual
fling and yes she too was far more exciteable than I...yet for some
reason we lasted. Yes, I did meet her married too daughter and once said
that she "felt" more than "saw" what attracted her mother to me.
For nine years the three of us became a very intimate threesome to the
point that both got pregnant and had my babies, which their husbands
accepted with considerable reluctance and trepadation. Daughter Carol's
oldest daughter and I became intimate too, with full knowledge of her
mother and grandmother and she too got pregnant but miscarried.
So, if your story is a fantasy, it is a very nice one indeed, for in my
care with very few changes it is a true one.
818 17.07.07 anon My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = Pretty good lol
817 17.07.07 Bob Becoming A Nudist
comments = Eskimo, just finished reading "Nudist", had to tell you it
was one of the better stories I've read here, that I appreciate the
effort it took to write it. It read like a very convincing and genuine
memory of a young guy's initiation into his first intimate sexual
relationship in an unconventional way. The plot development of Jeff's being
brought into the nudist lifestyle via Terri and her mom and then having
three-way sex with them packed an erotic punch. I liked the humorous
attitude of Terri's mom, her down-to-earth personality and her postive
attitude towards her daughter's sexuality. I also liked the combination of
voyeurism on the mother's part and Terri's frisky exhibitionism. Jeff
comes across as a likeable guy, smart enough to go along with the
adventure. The story had the right combination of dialog, description and plot
surprises right up to the last one. Not sure how I feel about Jeff's
being sandbagged into marriage via Terri's plot to rope him by geting
herself knocked up but as he was ok with it what the Hell!
(Eskimo: Seems like a lot liked this one. I wonder if it's because it brings
back memories of youthful fantasies.)
816 15.07.07 Hopeless Romantic Becoming A Nudist
comments = I will admit to having a PURIENT interest in UNPROTECTED
intercourse. Thus as Terrie and Jeff entered the motel room at the nudist
resort, I wondered if Mrs. Jones had put Terrie on 'the pill' between
the first and second sessions at the nudist camp.
I really don't like the idea that Mrs. Jones was able to successfully
schedule her daughter's intercourse so that she was sure to become
pregnant. Instead, I think that our bodies have evolved so that very good
sex lures us into an ongoing sexual relationship, and that pregnancy
occurs SEEMINGLY AT RANDOM in the course of a month or two or perhaps three
of that relationship. Conversely, it wouldn't surprise me if one of
her very good orgasms somehow initiated the release of an egg cell. But
most important, we human beings are NOT expected to figure out just
which of many very enjoyable acts of intercourse lead to her pregnancy and
the resulting heavy burdens of parenthood!
[Then, her whole body stiffened, but I keep lunging into her, as she
then let out a sharp, erotic cry, her tight pussy yanking hard on my
cock, making me groan out "Oh man, damn!", as I felt my pecker erupt deep
inside her body, sending hot ropes of cum into her convulsing womb.]
I think that you have this sequence of events EXACTLY RIGHT!
[And, after all these years, we're still together, with a heck of a lot
of adventures. Adventures that would entail writting a few more
stories.]
This 'Hopeless Romantic' really wants to know the secrets of success of
this delightfully long marriage! :-)
(Eskimo: A sequel sounds nice, but it'll never happen. Although the comments
for this one have been posistive, I personally don't consider it to even be close to one
of my best. In the top half, yes, but not in the top ten percent. I couldn't even tell you
why I think that, although probably not the same reasons mentioned in the comment above.)
815 15.07.07 Ron Becoming A Nudist
comments = Hot, wish my parents would have been open, I realize this is
a fantasy, but really, I wish I may parents were more open, sweet,
sexy story
814 15.07.07 Oral Rex Becoming A Nudist
comments = I like this story. The pace is good, the story builds up
nicely and the characters have just enough meat to be believable. Nie
work.
813 15.07.07 Frank Becoming A Nudist
comments = For the story, "Becoming a Nudist,":
It's bicycle 'pedaling', not 'peddling'.
(Eskimo: I've been told that already, jsut never got around to correcting
it. It's now been changed.)
812 14.07.07 Frank Nudist
comments = Your story is pretty realistic. I've visited five nudist
resorts (hate those who call them "colonies") in Florida, Black's Beach
and Elysium in California, and two nude beaches at Clubs Med in the
Caribbean. There was more sex on the grounds of the Cavalieri Hilton on a
high hill in Rome where, rounding a corner where the hedges were 7 feet
high, I stumbled upon a mostly clothed couple, literally coupled while
standing upright. I think the Internet has helped promote nudism and
the AANR. A group that combines nudity and sex is Family Synergy - as
an "alternative lifestyle". They insist that newbies undergo an
'orientation' on proper behavior and not intruding where not wanted.
(Eskimo: It's always nice to get comments from other nudists. Even if
they happen to seem to be English majors.)
811 14.07.07 Frank Setting Up Roger
comments = Nice story - the location seemed to be Paradise Lakes or
Lake Como.
The security crew made me think it was Paradise. Tampa is the
lightning capital of the world, so that part fit, too. And Homosassa Springs
being less than 2 hours away.
The past tense of lead is led.
A quick look is a peek, not peak.
(Eskimo: Neither one, as it was set at a resort in the middle of the state. We did
visit Como this past spring though, first time in about five years or so. A lot nicer, save for
the obnoxiuos fat ass drunk rumpranger.)
810 12.07.07 Me Cassie And The Biker Twins
comments = excellent
809 11.07.07 Kay Cindy's Quest
comments = For me, while I enjoy erotica, it was the kindness shown and
how the racial tension was handled. All in all, a very good uplifting
story.
808 11.07.07 Matt Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = hey man whats up i just have to know is this a true story id
like to know
(Eskimo: I not only wish the hell it was true, I wish teh fuck it had
happened to me! This one was purely fantasy.)
807 01.07.07 Jim Summer Heat
comments = Dear Mr.Eskimo,
I just finishing reading your "summer heat" story on www.asstr-mirror.org and
I am blown away! I'm not sure how much of the story you remembered, but
the way you developed the characters are amazing. The little details
you incorporated during the teasing and sex at the beginning was
incredible. Even though at the end of the story felt rushed and repetitive
(pretty much the Randy had sex again and again...)the over all rating of
the story was good. I really enjoyed the plot, where there was suspense
of the mother finding out and reward for quick thinking.
I definitely will be looking forward to your next story!
(Eskimo: This is one of my better works. Even Hopeless Romantic liked
it!)
806 30.06.07 Hopeless romantic Slut Cherie
comments = [They all expressed the same sentiment, as I asked "Momma,
are they all for me?"]
This 'Hopeless Romantic' thinks that there are important health reasons
to avoid sex with strangers, anal sex, and so on. Indeed, six hours of
orgasms ought to leave both mother and daughter utterly exhausted (if
not much worse).
But I think that this would be a better story if the noises that she
heard from her mother's room frightened her about sex with just ONE man,
thus the thought of eight men was too horrible to even contemplate.
Indeed, her deflowering was an unpleasant experience at best. However,
since the pleasure of sex is so addictive, it is important that she
enjoyed each man better than the previous. And indeed even though she was
exhausted beyond words, she was frankly disappointed when the last man
left.
One more thing, in keeping with the 'trailer trash' theme, I think that
it is important that her mother explains to her that because of
welfare benefits (before Clinton's reforms), Cherie's pregnancy was essential
to the maintenance of their meager lifestyle. Furthermore, the evening
had been carefully planned so that the social workers would never be
able to figure out just which man would be forced to make child support
payments! :-(
(Eskimo: Actually, this was jsut a quick 'fuck-n-suck' story I wrote one night
while the Mrs. was away. So I really didn't put much thought into this one.
805 30.06.07 Hopeless Romantic Celinda
comments = The overall plot is a delight for this 'Hopeless Romantic'!
["We're not using protection, Celinda."]
I think that the story ought to be tweaked so that both of them NEEDED
the sex (without condoms) but DID NOT want the heavy burdens of
parenthood. Yes, I know that his sister-in-law right next door is an OB/GYN,
but there might be REASONS why Mei would prescribe 'the pill' or the
like for Celinda. The theme of a revised and expanded section of this
story is that the better the sex, the harder it is for him to avoid
ejaculating into her depths.
I also like the idea that they TRIED to abstain from sex during what
should be her most fertile period, but their mutual addiction to sex
(another product of its great pleasure) made that extremely difficult.
Indeed, they felt compelled to 'cheat' on the margins of her fertile days
on numerous occasions.
[No, she didn't get pregnant that night.]
Unless they had JUST ONE OR TWO acts of sex between menstural periods,
I think that it is rather important that neither of them can figure out
just WHICH ejaculation resulted in her pregnancy. Indeed, the sheer
lack of knowledge avoids blaming each other for the unwanted results of
THAT particular night.
Furthermore, it is rather important to me that the experience of
clutching each other's body as his fat cock reaches into her hot depths,
nurtures a strong feeling of emotional UNITY. Indeed it is that strength
that keeps them together in spite of the growing hardships of pregnancy
and parenthood!
Finally, it is the hormones released into her body during her pregnancy
and nursing that slowly conditions her to acceptance of her fate as a
mother.
804 29.06.07 Robert A Slave's tale
comments = i thought it is well written and possaible I think
most of the slave were treated a little worst. it was intertaing and
enjoyed reading it thank you
(Eskimo: This one suprised me. I was expecting some negative feedback, but so
far it seems to be well received.)
803 29.06.07 AJC story's
comments = Could you make more orgy stories like "Breakingin Party" and
"Meadowview Court"? Admire your work. Thanks.
(Eskimo: I'm like you, I enjoy orgy stories, but they seem to be the hardest to
write. Also, it seems they get the most negative reviews. I do have quite a few of this
type started, but most are far from being finished.)
802 28.06.07 Tom A Slave's tale
comments = You know this gave me an idea, I don't know if its your
thing, but how about writing a story where a scientist travels back in
time. You can have him fuck the woman of that time he travels back to. This
was a good story by the way.
(Eskimo: Interesting concept....I may have to start one on that theme, but
no telling how long it will be before I finish it.)
801 28.06.07 Bill Rosa
comments = Very enjoyable. I have always enjoyed the thought of being
able to understand a language when it was thought I didn't. This could
easily stand a couple of more parts.
(Eskimo: Sorry, no added parts are forseen. But I am glad you enjoyed it.)
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