199 03.02.05 Dan Fantasy Vacation
comments = The copy of this story on ASSTR seems to be incomplete and I really
wanna know what happens! Please drop a note to when and if you re-upload it.
Thanks.
(Eskimo: Ooops! Seems I reposted it, and not all of it arrived where it
shold have. I've since corrected the error. Sory for the inconvenience.)
198 29.01.05 Scott Olive
comments = i'm setting out an atlanta ice storm and reading your stories. some
for the second time. i notice you don't mind spelling errors from your comments.
so neither will i. after five hours i thought it was time for my comments. GREAT!
i can't figure out how you have time for a life and work and put out so many
stories. and i dont mean trash either. to the readers who make negative comments.
go read harry potter. what did they expect to find. polished short stories is
what i found. i must admit i like longer stories but then i hate waiting as
new chapters come out. yes we are in our yearly ice storm and nothing is moving.
i wish i had a lap top today so i could stay under the covers and read but oh well.
your imagination is so fertile that more than 10 % must being used
(Eskimo: Yeah, Atlanta in a ice storm....been there, done that. I lived there
back in the early 80's. Nothing as funny as a bunch of Georgians sliding all over
damn place. NO, I don't usually mind the spelling errors. Nor the complaints. I do
my own proofreading, and sometimes I do tend to get careless. And I agree about
those that complain, what do they expect? It's not like I'm getting paid for this,
nor am I looking to win any world lit awards. I'm writting to get you horny bastards
and nymphos off, damn it! As for finding the time, it's hard to come by. Yeah, I've put
out a ton of stories. Some took me a year or two to get done, some less than a week.
And I do like the short stories. I tried longer ones, but I get bored easily.)
197 29.01.05 SB Olive
comments = Loved the story, Hope you write a sequel. The last paragraph had me
wondering... She lost her smile, her face now looking rather non-plus, as she said
"You and I will be having dinner this evening. Mother said you present a lot of
potential." She left my cubicle, and I leaned back, and just smiled as I reached
down and happily patted the toy by my desk. Why did she lose her smile? What
"potential" was Olive refering to? With her or her daughter?
(Eskimo: Glad you liked the story, and you brought up a good question. You needed
to read it again, as it was Olive's daughter at his cubicle, not Olive. Her daughter
is a professional woman, one that's strictly business. She was referring to his prowess
in bed. Earlier in the story, he mentioned to Olive that he had a better chance of
getting a toy from santa that he had always wanted as a child, than he would of getting
the blonde from the pool into his bed. The blonde turns out to be Olive's daughter,
and Olive sent him the package. Hope this helps. As for a sequel, the person that was the
inspiration for this story has give me another story line to go by, although this one
will have nothing to do with the first one. Let's just say it will be an Olive of a
different color. Oh, and the potential was for both Olive and her daughter.)
196 29.01.05 Charles Turning The Tables
comments = Great story, great sex and very amusing ending two thumbs up!
(Eskimo: Amazing! Utterly amazing! Why? Because I didn't even want to post it.
I just didn't think this one flowed well, and was about to chuck it. Oh well, glad to
hear from someone that liked it.)
195 28.01.05 Bruce Changing Values
comments = I enjoy your stories but they would be MORE enjoyable if you would correct
your spelling mistakes. Why don't your run your work through a spell checker??
(Eskimo: Ooops, I looked this story over, and I saw that I really did a lousy
job of proofreading this one. I have since gone over it again and re-edited it. I
reposted already, hope all enjoy.)
194 27.01.05 mosquito Changing Values
comments = I have read you stories for a long time. I think your great. But I'm not
sure if Changing Values is written by the same person. Typo's, gender confusion, and
other mistakes make the story tough to read. I still think your a great writer, but
you need more proofreading.
193 23.01.05 anon Olive
comments = You've written so many stories that you know what pleases your kind of
readers. Therefore, I've nothing to comment. Thanks for sharing the story.
(Eskimo: I appreciate readers like you, even your 'no comment' means so much
to me. This story was insipred by Olive in message 188. And, she has written me more
and I've another story that I may be writting soon. By soon, I mean sometime this year.
I was rather inspred while writting this one, and I knocked it out quickly. The next
one will probably take longer and be a bit slower in development. I also have another
female fan that is interested in writting, and I'm trying to convince her to co-author a
story with me. Stay tuned.)
192 21.01.05 dave stories
comments = Eskimo, I'm thoroughly enjoying your stories. You are on my "gotta come
back" list; probably only 5% of ASSTR authors are ones I want to come back some
time and re-read -- or see what's new. You probably ought to get a proofreader.
Lots of spelling errors. But they're kind of strange. No spell-checker would ever
catch them, because they are correct spellings of another word. Usually it's a
homonym. Let's see if I can remember a few. There's one that is consistent through
all your stories. Fix this and you'll probably have fixed half the errors there.
Look for the word "too" at the end of a sentence. If you don't use it to mean "also",
it should really be "to", not "too". (I don't remember a single place that it should
have been "too".) The other ones I remember are pretty common. "Taught" vs "taut".
"Their", "there", and "they're". Stuff like that. Please don't be put off by the
criticism. The stories are fine, and the errors aren't a major distraction. Just
mentioning an easy bit of cherry-picking that could improve the stories without
too much effort.
(Eskimo: Thanks for being such a faithful reader. And sorry about the errors
in my english grammer. I do proofread, but it seems that at times it's like the proverbial
fox watching the chickens.)
191 19.01.05 Bob garage
comments = Your story is fun reading. My first wife (who died in 1987) was a
professional writer. I know how much work goes into these tales.
(Eskimo: Thank you, writting isn't as easy as it seems. And sometimes,
a story will get different responses, which is interesting.)
190 18.01.05 charles stories
comments = It is very hard for me to understand how a writter who wrote stories
like The Cottage,The Garage,Beginning Of A Harem,and Turning The Tables could
write such pieces of shit as Fantasy Vacation,Impregnating My Wife,and Lover to
name some of the worst.You have changed over the years.Too bad it wasnt for the
better.
(Eskimo: Ah yes, another satisifed reader. Yo Chuck, can I call you Chuck?
Could you please be more specific about why you didn't like the stories you
mentioned? Not that it matters, since I won't be changing them. Of my main goals
in life, none involve making everyone happy. Happy reading.)
188 13.01.05 Olive stories
comments: Dear Eskimo, I am not really writing at this time to give you input
about any particular story but to let you know just how much I enjoy them. And,
Mr. Eskimo, I do believe that I have hit upon the reason for your success and
the appeal of your stories, at least for me. And that is this; your characters
are such nice appealing and likeable people. A reader finds themselves wanting
to be like these characters and identifies with them. It really seems possible,
too. The characters certainly are attractive and sexy, but not impossibly so.
Their breasts are large and sensitive, but not necessarily perfectly shaped.
The cocks are realistically sized and quite stiff, but not unbelieveably so.
I first wrote to you after reading "Couple Fun," still my favorite. The story
about Rita, which starts with Paul out in his garden is so uplifting. Such
loveable and yes suckable characters. And oh my, the delightful, loveable
horny vacationers in "Carribean Cruise" make this retired widow very, very wet!
Keep up the good work!
(Eskimo: I'm speechless! There was enough here to really overinflate my
ego. Excuse me, while I print out her letter and tape it to my wall.)
187 13.01.05 Art Canoe Trip To An Orgy
comments = Another fun story! You certainly do write a good gang bang story!
Thanks for a great read.
(Eskimo: Funny thing abut this story, I really wasn't too satisified
with teh main sex scene. I really didn't think it to be real enough. But I do
think the story leading up to it played out real well.)
186 10.01.05 art Couple Fun
comments = Throughly enjoyed your story. Writing a good group fuck story is a
bit difficult, and it's not just keeping who's screwing whom and in what order,
etc. straight, but making it damned fun to read too. Very well done! Had to
smile when April was identified as attending Eastern Kentucky. Man, that brought
some great memories! I attended graduate school there back in the seventies.
Very conservative, at least the school was, but for me, a horny vet in my mid
twenties, it was pussy paradise! Very well done! Thanks for the great read.
(Eskimo: I am very happy that people still find this story so damn hot to
read. I actully wasn't too sure about the length, but it seems it's just right
for this particular story. I'm always afraid that I write too daen much, and take
too long to get an ending that you readers will enjoy. And the reference of
Eastern Kentucky University was really jsut a coincedence. Although years ago, I
did have the pleasue of a young EKU coed for a part of an evening. Maybe I'll
write a short(very short) story about it.)
185 10.01.05 anon April
comments = good
(Eskimo: I like it when my readers go into great detail. Thanks.)
184 10.01.05 Jerry April
comments = Enjoyed your story very much. The pictures you painted gave me
a good hardon to jerk while I read. My only critique is that I found it
unrealistic for a man to be able to come that many times that close together.
If the woman is as good as yours were I can continue to fuck for hours but not
come over and over. That doesn't mean other guys can't. I wouldn't know.
They do in stories. Sounds good. I'd love the opportunity to find out.
(Eskimo: You bring up a good critique, thank you. I appreciate it. And
in some ways, you're right. But then, this is fantasy. And I would love to
have the oppurtunity as well!)
183 10.01.05 Marc stories
comments = I like the writing style. Looks like you might have done one
journal entry per day to give it the appropriate look of randomness. What
a fantastic future. I hope some day we reach this ideal
(Eskimo: I am assuming you're commenting about Camp Diary. This
is one of my earleir works, and I've always enjoyed it. It was my first
stab at a 'futuristic' style story, or at least the first one in that
genre that I finished. I definitly thought the diary format was a good
way to present it, and have been tinkering with a couple of others that
would be of teh same nature. No idea when the hell I'll get them finished.)
182 06.01.05 anon Comunity Breeding Project
comments = you have done it again great story
(Eskimo: I'm amazed. No, really, I am. I really didn't think that
this story would get this much of a good response. Looks like I'll have to
start writting something to go along with it. It'll be a while.)
181 04.01.04 mikeo Reunion With An Old Lover
comments = I really enjoyed this story since I'm from the Buffalo area and
actually had a similar experience a few years ago. I was working in the
Rochester area as a consultant when I got a very simple email "Are you
from Buffalo?" This led to my being reunited with an old flame I hadn't
seen in over twenty years. We met for dinner one night and started an
affair that lasted over two years with some of the best sex I've had in
my life. Your story brought back some great memories. Thanks.
(Eskimo: I'm happy it brought back some pleasant memories.)
180 04.01.04 gt Hubby's Plaything
comments = Stories are all pretty good but poor spelling can be annoying
(there's 3/4 in here hubbyplaything.html) and if I spotted tthem there's
probably loads more as my spelling is rubbish!!)
(Eskimo: Sorry about the spelling errors, and of your typing errors
as well. If you only found three or four, then I'm happy.)
179 03.01.04 Maria Comunity Breeding Project
comments = this one was really good.i have read steamer ones but this
one is really good.are theyre going to be mor after this one? i have
to get off now lol
(Eskimo: I'm surprised by the positive feedback of this one, as
I really thought I could have done a better job with it. A second part
is possible, but no idea when I'll get to it. I do have an idea or two
in my head, however.)
178 25.12.04 steveroni Sam And Crystal
comments = Son, I've been reading for years and years. This is about
the best short story I've ever read. I might even add "in this genre
or any other", but I'n not sure. But it was very satisfying. Thanks.
I am impressed. Good job. No kidding. Steve
(Eskimo: Thanks Steve! Glad it pleased you. Hope the other works
that I've posted do just as good a job.)
177 25.12.04 Augman Rita's Friendly Neighbors
comments = you should spend more time having the clitoris fooled
with.otherwise it is a spicey story
(Eskimo: Interesting comment, and I'll haev to keep that
in mind. I know of a woman or two that believe in that as well.)
176 25.12.04 Alia Comunity Breeding Project
comments = This story doesn't logically work out. If the main aim is
procreation, why would people have anal or oral sex?
(Eskimo: You missed some things in what I wrote. The younger
malkes are the ones doing the breeding, so they were doing vaginal
intercourse, as the older males, they were not to add any more
offspring with any younger women, tehy took the 'backdoor'. As for
oral, it helps at times to get things going, and well, sometimes
us guys get a bit too excited to get to the proper hole. I hope this
explains it for you.)
175 25.12.04 Fred Nudist
comments = Enjoyed reading your story. I'm sure that it would be nice if all
couples who where interested in the lifestyle would read stories like this
before they go to a camp. Sure would make for a better first time for many.
(Eskimo: Yes, I agree. On our first visit, many years ago, we had no
idea on what to expect. And now, even though we don't have as much time to
go as we would like, we're old hands at it. Thoroughly enjoy the lifestyle,
and think everyone should try it. Not that erotic, but still damn nice. And I
love hearing from other nudists, so please drop me a line. For those in the
know, a certain resort in Michigan is our favorite escape from reality.)
174 25.12.04 Larry Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = super story! really enjoyed your characters. keep up the good work!
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad you liked it.)
173 21.12.04 terri Comunity Breeding Project
comments = HYow about making this into a series?
(Eskimo: LOL, why? Oh yeah, because it's my story. I'm very much tempted to
continue on, as well as write a 'prelude' story. Tha latter has a definite
possiblity. As for continuing, it may get boring, writing about each of Cathy's
daughters as they maintain their households, all teh while getting constantly
knocked up. We'll see.)
172 17.12.04 Seth Comunity Breeding Project
comments = "At least it finally ended the muslim problem"? I'm not a muslim, but
this really pisses me off. It's an ill informed, insensitive comment. Muslim
problem? What problem? It's an extremist problem. A terrorist problem. A bunch of
people pissed off by other nation's foreign policy problem. No excuses for
terrorism, but to call it "the muslim problem" and saying that it could be ended
by a meteor hitting the middle east (the most populous muslim nation is Indonesia)
is offensive and ignorant. I normally enjoy your stories, but this really annoys
me. Please change this, and continue making great erotic fiction (or non-fiction :)
(Eskimo: Actually, if you've read most of my stories, you should have noticed
my complete disdain for relegion in general. I don't particulary care for
Christianith either, if that makes you feel any better. And, after discussing it
this aspect with anotehr reader, the passage stands.)
171 16.12.05 Taum Comunity Breeding Project
comments = I really like your interracial stories because the characters always
enjoy themselves. So many IR stories are written as if no one truly likes sex.
However, I especially liked this one because of the sci-fi/futuristic element
thrown in. If there was one thing I can criticize you on it is that you've got
too many characters involved here for this short of a story. Something this long
should only have six to eight characters maximum--and they should be fully
developed. You're very good with writing, and plotting, but you could even
be better.
(Eskimo: Thanks for the comments and the very good criticism. I enjoy it
when a reader is more specific in his viewpoints. And, I have to agree. I did make
this story way too short. It should have been longer, or at least made into a
series of stories. Sort of like "Fertile Valley", a story that also an be
found here at asstr-mirror.org. As I've said in the past, I've been working on a few
others that involve futuristic settings. I've no idea when they'll get finished.
Another note about this one, I did leave me plenty of ideas to continue it as a
series. Maybe someday I will. But with over fifty other stories already started
and far from finished, it could be a while.)
170 15.12.04 lalo Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = I liked your story, and wait for the following part. May be an insest
with mom and aunt?
(Eskimo: Mom & Aunt? Well, it seems you like lesbian incest stories. Sounds
like fun, but not sure I want to go there, as I tend to shy away from incest themes.
Oh, and I don't think there will be a 'following part'. I should have just made the
story longer, but it just wasn't working right. I was originally was going to end it
right after the first sex scene, but for some reason, I went on to include a swap night.)
169 10.12.04 Tom April
comments = I enjoyed the story, can only wish something like that would happen to
me, but that is what stories are for. Thanks
(Eskimo: Yeah, we all wish some stories actually would happen. Fantasy is
a wonderful thing.)
168 01.12.04 John stories
comments = I found your stories a couple of weeks ago and have read most of
them. I have found your stories, believable, witty, interesting, and just plain
enjoyable to read. There are authors that write stories some of it good and some
of it bad but then we have authors that are Storytellers. They have the ability
to get us to believe and even experience what they are telling us. It's a knack
that is not found in a lot of authors and for me you have that knack...
(Eskimo: I love an appreciative readership! I sure hope my future stories
are well liked by you, and others, as well. I try making them realistic as possible,
even if some are just plain fantasy's on my part....and some rather strangely
unbelieveable true life adventures as well. And I always love to use some wit.
Happy reading!)
167 27.11.04 homer Breeding Of Chris
comments = Nice fantaasy. I'd like it if the mother got so hot she decided
to have another baby, too, maybe by the Balck father. And the Balck mother
could have one by the white husband. I like well mixed pregnancies. :)
(Eskimo: I've found I really like stories where the female get's knocked
up. And have added a few more since this one. I'm also working on a few
others in the same genre.)
166 27.11.04 Homer Widower Fun
comments = It would be easier to read if you make sure to start a new
paragraph when there is a change of speaker.
(Eskimo: I found the mistakes and have corrected them. I reposted the
story this afternoon.)
165 25.11.04 Patricia Hubby's Plaything
comments = I found your story very inviting and it started getting me aroused as soon
as the action began on the couch and went to the floor and then the bedroom. I have
only had two opportunities to be with more than on man and woman. I was to young to
appreciate it then but now I would love to do it again. This time I think I would
like to have at least one other couple involved. For now, I am going to get into
the shower and make use of my shower massage. Good job....
(Eskimo: I bet you could find some of my readers that would like to take
you up on some group sex! Hell, even me! It's not often that I recieve a comment
from a female. Seems mostly guys, but I'm glad I have at least one female fan,
other than my wife. Don't think mom would approve, though.)
164 25.11.04 Eric Hubby's Plaything
comments = Good story! Well-paced, good development, good proofreading, an enjoyable
read. And you hit a commonly-held fantasy in an almost realistic way, making the
fantasy even more fantastic. In the end, you made her frigidity make sense--and made
her reawakening logical. Very well written. Gotta go stuff a turkey, now. Happy
Thanksgiving.
(Eskimo: Hey, great analysis! A reader just re-edited this one, and after
re-posting it, I've recieved three very nice comments.)
163 25.11.04 John Caribbean Cruise
comments = Good story line, good character discription. realistic dialog and great sex..
...What else could anyone ask of a writer???? As you can tell I enjoyed the story and look
forward to reading more of your work. Thank you. John
(Eskimo: One of my older stories, and a long one. I just hope you enjoy my other
stories as well. Some times I write hits, sometimes I don't. And, I've found you readers
take different views of what I've written as well. I'm glad you found the work
believeable. I find that important in most of my writtings. And speaking of dialogue,
it is my experience, as well as others, that during sex little is spoken. Heck, we're
usually putting too much effort in rutting away to speak. This is especially true during
group sex. Who wants to hear soemone else talk while you're fucking away with someone
other than your significant other? There's even rules of ettiquite about talking in
swing clubs, just because of that. That's why it amazes me when writters add dialogue
during sex, having them commenting on the actions of their partner is rare in real life.
Of course, your wife talking about the ceiling needing painted while you're on top of her,
that IS definitily realistic!)
162 25.11.04 Johnson Hubby's Plaything
comments = Great story. You write well. I like the build and the neat ending bout a
bigger bed.
(Eskimo: The ending was a sucessful stab at some humor, glad someone liked it. I
find I enjoy adding a bit of humor to the stories I write. Maybe it's because it adds
more life to the story. Or maybe because I'm a terminal smartass. And of course, it's
damn near every man's fantasy to have two female sex partners, especially at once!)
161 24.11.04 Jonathon Nudist
comments = It better be sexer
(Eskimo: Huh?)
160 24.11.04 ali Camp Diary
comments = lt me start by telling you that this story is one of the greatest stories that
i have ever heard, but i have not read the second part and i was hoping u could tell me
when you would be putting it on this site and if you would tell me the name as well,
thank you
(Eskimo: There won't be a second part. However, the story was set in the future,
after years of civil war in what was once the United States. I've a few stories started
with the same post-war era, and one set during hte war, but I'm far from finished with
any of them.)
159 22.11.04 gavin Setting Up Roger
comments = a very well thought out story with lots of laughs and excellent story lines
i look forward to reading many more
(Eskimo: Pretty sure I won't have a sequel of this one. But may have more stories
on the same subject. Thanks for reading.)
158 19.11.04 wet2lander Learning With Gail
comments = An enjoyable story. You write well. The images conjured up by your languaging
are clear. what is especially interesting is that your story has a clear ring of being
possible, in contrast to most of the stories in this genre. Good job!
(Eskimo: Wow! Thank you very much. It's interesting how different people make
totally different obversations on my work. And and as I've said in the past, I do
try to make my stories to seem to be possible. Although the gangbang stories may be
stretching it. But then, isn't fantasy just grand?)
157 18.11.04 anon Setting Up Roger
comments = the writting was okay, as far as i am concered it made me wet my pants
which was the main reason i came to this site.but i do know that the exergeration
was a bit too much cos after a gals first time she is sopposed to be briused n
hurt, aint sh
(Eskimo: I asked an expert, my wife, and she says it depends on the woman.
Foreplay helps, helps a lot according to her. That must be why my head is between
her thighs for about twenty minutes before we actually have intercourse. Oh yeah,
before I forget. If you reached the end, maybe she wasn't as inexpereinced as he
thought she was. And please, check your spelling! As for fake and exsageration,
check out comment number 154. Sex is usually just one part of my stories, and the
rest are things that have happened to my life, or to others that I know, and I've
added them here and have made them erotic. And this is the second message in a
row commenting about exsageration in my story. Please think of teh story's you read
as made-for-tv movies about real life events. Most have a liberal amount of 'stretched
truth' added in. Case in point, my Swingers Diary story is rather boring, in that the
sex scenes are short. This actually mimicks real life, as 98% of us males only last
five minutes during intercourse, and half of the remaining 2% are flat out liars. So,
to make the story interesting, and to get you readers rocks off, us authors have to
embellish the content somewhat.)
156 18.11.04 xeenahr Setting Up Roger
comments = the stoies were highly exergerated and fake. it had the feel of an amature
(Eskimo: Ohhhkay, and you might want to check your spelling next time you send
a comment. Of course it's amateur, you think I'm getting paid for this?)
155 18.11.04 Joe Snow Job
comments = That was an excelant story. I was a little disappointed that it was not
his real aunt. The suprise at the end, was just that a suprise, not just to the
charactor but to me also. Excellant work.
(Eskimo: Thank you, and sometimes a twist at the end is always good. Sorry
about it not being his real aunt, maybe next time.)
154 16.11.04 Sam Setting Up Roger
comments = Story indicates that you enjoyed your stay at Paradise Lakes. Nice place
to vacation.
(Eskimo: Yes, Paradise Lakes is a nice place to vacation, and we did enjoy our stay
there. However, I didn't have that particular resort in mind when I wrote the story. Try
thinking of another one, more in the middle of the state. Not as upscale as Paradise or
Caliente, but in our humble opinion, a lot nicer to visit. Oh yeah, we've been to
Paradise's neighbor across the lake as well. It's nice to hear from a fellow nudist, feel
free to write again. Thanks and happy tanning!)
153 11.11.04 Jim Ellen's Erotic Adventures
comments = LOVED it...was SOOO nice to hear about the lights out all included sex with
many couples ( house party) what a way for a woman to get prgnant and NOT care who the
"donor" was...and the donor would not know either. What a way to "level" the playing
field..older and youger...haeavier and thinner...just sexy FUN and a way to "let it all
happen" and NOT be wooried about "later" recognizing a "bad" or reluctant lover !
(Eskimo: Yeah, I liked the no lights thing in this story. Sort of a sensory
deprivation theme with a different twist. And I guess the story theme of looks not making
a difference did stand out. A lot of people wouldn't like this, as they have hang-ups
on the human body. Then of course, you have the right-wing religious nuts that think
any sex is bad, but I wouldn't think they would read my stories anyway.)
153 01.11.04 Doug stories
comments = I happened upon you page, and just love the stories. I like stories that have
something of a plot to them, and not just sex. these are great, keep up the good work.
(Eskimo: That is one of the bad things about asstr-mirror.org, in that it takes some effort
on you the readers part to find stories that you would like. Personally, I
use the advance search page, and that helps. I'm glad you found my site, and I
hope you return to read more.)
152 30.10.04 anon Reunion With An Old Lover
comments = Another well written story.
(Eskimo: Thanks, I like these type of comments. Actually, this one took some
time, as I was having problems with it as I went along. But I'm glad you liked it!)
151 27.10.04 silkmaze stories
comments = I really like the stories with a black female and white male.
The standard stuff BM and WF is all the same. I also enjoy your preg stores.
(Eskimo: Yeah, so do I. I am a WM and I actually had a sexual encounter
with a BF many years ago, and no, money was not transacted. I am tired of the
typical BM/WF stories fo where humiliating the WM is the norm. In most cases that
our swining freinds have said, that is actually a rarity. Most WF that swing
enjoy sex no matter of the skin color. And of course, they prefer their husands
over other males. Women that swing are like most males, they enjoy sex, and the
variety. Okay, enough of my soapbox. As for pregnant and impregnation stories,
I've sort of got to like them. I find all women sensous, and there's something
about a pregnant woman to make her even more so. It's not even just sexual, but
the beauty of a woman carrying child, it's more than jsut erotic. Excuse me while
I go write another story on this subject.)
150 27.10.04 Don Greg's New Housemates
comments = Why can't you and Carl, and Elaine, Krystal, Beth and Abby just all
live together under one roof, naked of course, and fuck without restraint with
anyone you want to fuck? To Hell with "marriage"(s), etc. Or maybe be married,
legally so the babies are well provided for, legally, but just fuck at random,
whenever, with you fathering both Abby's and Elaine's babies and Carl doing the
same? And when you and Carl get too old to father babies any more, and Abby and
Elaine reach menopause and can no longer get impregnated, perhaps the younger
generation can make grandparents out of all of you. In the meantime as those
babies grow into adolescence, you can fuck them, too, and make babies with them
likewise. And with your acreage, you should be able to fuck in the grass, out in
the trees, wherever, just like you were in one big nudist camp.
(Eskimo: I like your imaginiation, have you ever thought about writting
a story? No, I'm not making fun of you, just an offhand way of giving you a
compliment. As for the knocking up his own grandkids, I'm not really into that. Oh,
and by the way, you won't see sex in the grass(or anywhere else) at any legitimant
nudist resort. Sorry I dashed your dreams there, big guy.)
149 24.10.04 anon Learning With Gail
comments = Excelent story. Well done. It's so good that there's nothing for
me to comment except that keep up the good work and looking forward to your
next stories/installment.
(Eskimo: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've a few more works
that are almost finished, may have them online before the end of the year.
I knocked out six stories this past month, and need to take a break and
recharge the batteries, so to speak.
148 23.10.04 Bob Home Schooling
comments = This is a great story. In a similar cenerio, how about a Seventh
grade (13-14 yr-olds) party i.e.:Halloween or Birthday with parents (chaperones)
called away and The Kids left to their own games or devices.
(
(Eskimo: I like your comments, may have to come up with soemthing by
Holloween of next year. A costume party, could be interesting. But I'm never
comfortable about underage sex, although a learning concept is possible. This
was also another story that I started long ago, and finally just rushed through
to the end. I thought I could have done better with this one as well. It seems
lately that I've been having problems ending a story in a way to make it more
enjoyable for me the writter as well as you the reader.)
147 21.10.04 BIGBUNKYSR Carla's Business Trip
comments = Hey. Great story, those guys missed that ass hole.
(Eskimo: Wel, I really didn't think this was one of
my better written stories, but if you liked it, GREAT! I would really
have liked to have made it longer and more in depth, but at the time,
was having writters block. Plus lately I've been trying to get a lot
of stories that I've been working on for a long time, finished.)
146 15.10.04 Renee Saving Grace
comments = This story was good, but it would have
been GREAT if it wasn't for all the typos.
(Eskimo: I did another spell check, and came up with
all of four typo's.)
145 15.10.04 Renee Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = Boy, that's John's a lucky man! Nice read!
144 14.10.04 Charlie Greg's New Housemates
comments = I really liked your story - the characters seemed very real
& natural, and the dialogue was very realistic. I'm just jealous of
Greg as I never had anything similar ever happen to me (I wish!!!!)
However, I noticed that part of a line seems to be missing in the story
when Carl and Greg are talking about Carl & Elaine having a baby. The
end of the line was - ."v I said "Well, congratulations then." Please
let me know if you correct the text as I'd like to keep a copy to reread
from time to time. Thanks again for a great read.
(Eskimo: I made a typing error when I was adding HTML tags. I've
since corrected it and reposted the story. There actually wasn't anything
missing, just the misstyped entry. I actually wasn't too happy with
this story, didn't think it was one of my better works. But, I'm very glad
that a reader took time to write to say he enjoyed it.
143 11.10.04 mike Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = Any chance of continuing Picking Up My Parents Surprising
Lifestyle? If so, I might suggest that since John has already made
it with his cousin, that the story line drift in the direction of incest.
(Eskimo: Not a chance! I get bored writting real long stories
and 'continuations'. I think it's because I get tired of the characters
that I've brought to life, and in my own way, I let them live on in
others peoples fantasies. But if you, or anyone else would like to
continue the story, go right ahead. But please use an intro and say
where the original came from, or have me post it at my sight and I'll
give the author credit for it.)
142 10.10.04 scott Carrie
comments = hi again. i'm not sure if u like ga or not. i live an hour
outside of atlanta near where your fellow with the empire should be.
am still ejoying reading but have to leave for a wk in ms.......scott
(Eskimo: I'm hoping you mean live and not like. Anyway, at one
time, a long time ago, I lived in Georgia. About seven or eight differnt
communities, to be exact. Including Atlanta, as well as Carrollton and
Covington near Atlanta.)
141 10.10.04 scott The Garage
comments = i,ve just finished six of your stories. i'm bad that
way. pick an author and read for several hours. i definitely enjoy
the style. plot,sex, and romance. no dogs, no incest, and no
killing for violence. i continue to marvel at the quality of
material on the internet. i'm disabled and this is much better than
the library and i can change the print size and read to my hearts
content. thnks so much......scott
(Eskimo: Thanks for enjoying them, glad I help you past the
time with some good reading. And I'm not into violence, except for
some cases of revenge or standing up to assholes. Not am I for animals,
watersports, and incest. I do enjoy teens cumming of age, and of course
romance, group sex, and wife sharing. Voyeurism is an aspect I like as
well, but I've only used it rarely in my stories. Would like to do
another one of these days.)
140 10.10.04 Jack story page
comments = Hey why no bi stories? Is that not your thing at
all? Jack
(Eskimo: Well, you talking about MM or FF? I enjoy FF, and I've
had some in a few of my stories, especially those involving group sex.
As for MM, no, that's not my thing. I'm strictly hetero, and I really
don't get into MM sex, either writting, reading, or viewing(live or on
tape).)
139 09.10.04 d Jane And I
comments = Very well done! I'm impressed.
(Eskimo: Thank you, this was a story suggested by Miro in
message #125. I finally got around to finishing it.)
138 09.10.04 Bill Relunctance To Swing
comments = great story
(Eskimo: I'm glad you liked it. I thought this was one of my
better short stories, although there isn't much story to it, the
outcome is rather interesting.)
137 07.10.04 Alex Couple Fun
comments = Hi, i loved your story couple fun. Keep on writing! alex
from Holland, europe
(Eskimo: Thanks Alex, glad you enjoyed the story. And I do have lots of works
started, may have a few new ones posted within a few weeks.)
136 06.10.04 TM Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = I liked this story as well. I don't mind having more than one male in
the story. Heck, it might even be nice to have some MM action in it. Looking forward
to more of your stories. Also, I think I would like to read your version of your
friends finding their daughter and her new husband!
(Eskimo: Interesting story idea about my friends, but the truth is, once they
'discovered' each other, they quickly and discretly moved to other parts of the
house where the party was being held. Of course, I could make something up...lol.
As for MM, I'm really not into that, except for maybe incedental contact.
135 06.10.04 Chris College
comments = I loved the story and how it was all unfolding, but did you ever write
the continuation of it? if so could you drop me a link
(Eskimo: Sorry, haven't even thought of making a second part. I get asked
this from time to time, but not really sure I know how to handle it. I've tried a
sequels, and with the exception of Relunctance To Swing,
I've been disappointed in the resulting work.)
134 05.10.04 anon Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle & Carla's Business Trip
comments=Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle I like the opening of the story.
However, swinging where more than 1 male is involve is not my style. When the story
goes into that mood, I stop reading.
Carla's Business Trip I like this stroy's plot. Very original. However, I'm not into
'inter' and sex involving more than 1 male. When story goes... Don't get the wrong
ideas. Your stories have very good plots and that is what I'm after. Keep writing.
I may not enjoy the sex but I'm very sure others would. Thank you for writting.
Please keep those stories coming.
(Eskimo: Well, at least you enjoyed the plot, which is usually 95% of the
battle. Anyone can write about fucking, but adding a story line to liven the readers
imaginiation is a challenge. Come on back in a month or so, I do have some regular MF
stories that I've been working on.
133 04.10.04 chris Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = One of the best mid-size stories I've read. The group idea has always
fascinated me, this has fueled the intrigue =)
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. I've always enjoyed reading and
writting stories that involved group sex.)
132 04.10.04 Harold Turning The Tables
comments = Rough justice -- but true justice. When those who hurt others are hurt
they scream the loudest. Keep it up!
(Eskimo: Actually, this is a re-write. The original I wrote years ago. I enjoy
IR sex, at least reaing about it, but always get annoyed with writers that make it
into a cuckold story. The female half of the couple that I mentioned in the previous
post has always said that just because you got a big dick, doesn't mean you're a
great lover. She's proud to admit that her hubby(he's white) has a nine incher, and she
says she enjoys a good average six incher when used properly.)
131 04.10.04 cowboy Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
comments = Basically a great story. Hard to understand how an observant teen
age person wouldnt have figured out his parents lifestyle sooner.
(Eskimo: Actually, it can happen and has. A swining couple we know related
their story of how they had been swinging for years, and their daughter didn't find
out until one night they went to a house party and found her there with her new
husband. Needlass to say, it was a mastercard moment.)
130 03.10.04 H Hubby's Plaything
comments = Excellent story-Well written and a real thriller! It definitely
increased my attention span.Write more of these! I particularly enjoyed the
respectful treatment of the women-no "bitches",no abuse.A believable
fantasy(how's that for an oxymoron?)
(Eskimo: Thank you. It seems my better stories have more story
before actually getting to teh sex. Some like this, and some don't. I
guess it comes down to what get's you off.)
129 24.07.04 Charley Couple Fun
comments = It is hard for me to belive that a writer who has done a
number of outstanding stories could write a piece of shit like this.
I have to admit that your last few stories have gonr downhill some.But
this one takes the cake for PISS POOR.Can you say,AIDS?Can you say
SLUT?Can You say WHORE?I hope what your working on is better than this
one and your other recent writtings.
(Eskimo: Um, this is an older story charley. Can you say old?
Can you say fantasy? Can you say woman that likes to have fun? Do you know
the difference between a slut and a bitch? Answer- A slut has sex with everyone
in the room, a bitch with everyone but you. Oh well, can't please everyone. And
the five previous responses all seemed to like this particular one. Not to
mention it's my most read story. Plus, I put codes on my stories, if you don't
like stories involvong women with multiple partners, don't read stories that
are coded as such!)
128 18.08.04 John Hubby's Plaything
comments = great story. Every mans dream.
(Eskimo: Yeah, I do tend to dream of it. In reality, would
it really work? It would be fun to try at first, but it would probably
grow old.)
127 07.08.04 Missy story page.
comments = hey dude u sound heaps cool how old r u well betta go
catch ya l8er
(Eskimo: My age really is unimportant, but lets just say that I was
born about 1960, give or take a year or two. Glad you liked my stories.)
126 12.07.04 Peter Hubby's Plaything
comments = OO opening paragraphs so so near reality. Wonderful fantasy.
Thanks for sharing your writing
(Eskimo: Thanks for reading.)
125 11.07.04 miro Stories
comments = Hallo,i must writte you after i was reading your story.I like it
very much. I was very excited when i read that.I love reading sex stories.I
imagine my girlfriend in the storie.She is very beatifull, but very shy.Please
can you writte story about my girlfriend.I have oneThema that excited me
incredible.Thanks for your answer.
(Eskimo: Miro had listed two different story scenerios, and I
liked them both. I will try to get semething written in the next month or
so, although early fall may be more like it, as I've gotten rather busy
of late.)
124 19.06.04 vez Stories
comments = Just to let know---I tried your Feedback thingy----it did not
work--- I was trying too tell your stories are top shelf!!!!!!!!
(Eskimo: Well thank you. And I tried the form feedback as a test,
and it worked fine. If any others have problems, please let me know
which page you were trying to use it from.)
123 18.06.04 anon Hubby's Plaything
comments = Just to let you know that someone out there is still reading your
well written stories
(Eskimo: Glad to hear it.)
122 18.06.04 blandseer Hubby's Plaything
comments = Very nicely done story! It was erotic, and entertaining. Good
job drawing your characters and their personalities. It always helps a story
if the characters are believable and sympathetic.
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad to see a story was liked by a reader. This story is
another of those male fantasy stories involving a wife that allows another woman to
join in some bedroom fun. Of course, deep down us guys know very damn well that such
an idea, no matter how tempting, would probably never work.)
121 17.06.04 guy Weekend With The Boys
comments = I have Read all your stories and I like them well enough to
reread some 2 of 3 times.But I have a problem with this one, WHY did
you write it?Is it a fuck story?If so,it stinks.Is it a Young-Old story?
Again,not much.A divorced thirty-four year-old blonde,ten years of little
or no dick.A great start that I am sorry to say it went down hill after
that.I hope your next one is back to your normal high level.
(Eskimo:(deep sigh) okay, that was real construcitve criticism Guy, and
I'm going to take this story and re-write it. Hopefully have it done within a
or so, time permitting.)
120 16.06.04 tom Home Schooling
comments = That is a very hot story. I can hardly wait to read another
from you. Sixteen kids, wow, I ahd a tough time keeping them al;l straight.
(Eskimo: Actually, I thought I could have added more to ths story. I
really wanted to go into more detail of the sexual play once the kids
kids discovered the fun and joy that sex can bring. But on the other hand,
it was gettign rather long as it was. Sixteen kids is a hard thing to
keep track of. Maybe a follow-up story a few years down the road, as they
inter-marry and still enjoy group sex. Or maybe even a special event with
just the parents. The possibilities are endless.)
119 14.06.04 anon The Cabin
comments = a real love store very good i loved it
118 14.06.04 Guy Impregnating My Wife
comments = What a piece of shit.This has got to be the worst
story I have read in the past 5 yrs,After a lot of good ones
you just had to jump down in the gutter and come up with this
turd.God save us.
(Eskimo: Hmmm, I take it Guy didn't like this one. This was
one of those that I just wanted to get done with, so oh well. Sometimes
you eat the bear, and sometimes it eats you.)
117 10.06.04 Gabe Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = This story was fantastic, and I'd love to read more.
(Eskimo: Not sure if I can add another chapter on this one. But
the thought is there.)
116 06.06.04 Wilbur P Husband's Indiscretion
comments = Great!!
(Eskimo: Thanks guys! I did this story in less than an hour. Just
came naturaly, I actually remember a joke similar to this, as well as a
car commercial that was on the same line. Thought I would incorporate it
into a story. Glad my readers liked it.)
115 06.06.04 anon Husband's Indiscretion
comments = This is the funniest story i have read here. Super job. A classic short
story
114 24.05.04 Bill Couple Fun
comments= Hi Eskimo, I've been reading some of your stories on Asstr , and like them and
your style very much. Perhaps, though, you might want to consider having someone edit them?
Or at least do a "spell check"? Please keep writing. I don't mean to be critical, I'm just
making a suggestion. Bill
(Eskimo: Sorry it took a while to respond. Life has gotten in the
way again. I have been runing my stories through spell check, and usually
hit the correct button. Sometimes I do screw up, chalk it up to human error. As
for editing, I've recieved nmerous suggestions for me to edit my stories for
proper grammar as well. Well, I suck at proper grammar. And I haven't had
anyone offer to edit it them for free.)
113 22.05.04 x Stories
comments = THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
112 08.05.04 JM Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = I rars is a quite well, written piece of work. Its both more
realistic than mostm at least with the ammount of sex that happenes, and
The people in it seem rather familiar...as if they are real people. Some
would say the actions of the Families is unlikely in the extreme ( Which
I disagree with, from personal experience, having been through a situation
in some ways mirroring this when I was 16.) Looking forward to seeing a
continuation of this story telling of life at the Shirley house.
(Eskimo: Wow, two comments already and this story has only been
online for 48 hours! I thought it was a good idea to start the story with
curiousity on Candy's part, and build from there. Naturally, in real life
build-up would probably taken a bit longer, but it seemed to flow pretty
god. And some of it may seem unlikely (ie: Candy taking on her sisters
boyfriends.), but this is afterall a story. And so far two readers
seemed to enjoy it.)
111 07.05.04 Rob Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = I read your new story "candy..." - the
1st of your stories i've read - and, in my opinion, it was well written with
a nice mixture of humor and insight along with the hot sex. I found the
references to the Athens area intriguing as I am also from Ohio and familar
with some of places mentioned in the story, ex, Hocking Hills and Old Mans
Cave. It made the story more vivid. And while all these stories require some
suspension of disbelief, this one had enough reality to the character's
personalities to make the wild siutations more acceptable - nice touch!
Thanks! and hope to enjoy more of your work!
(Eskimo: As with most of my storis, I always try to make them
somewhat believable. It helps when I use a location that I am familiear with.
And of course, a little bit of fantasy goes a long way.)
110 28.04.04 Jim Stories
comments = Just read some of your stories. Liked them a lot. You certainly
have a sense of humor. I am also amused with your spelling!!
(Eskimo: Thank you, nothing like good humor during sex. Or
leading up to it. And thanks for enjoying the spelling.)
109 25.04.04 stewart story page
comments = Your stories are quite well written, although I would like
to have more facial semen shot themes: cum baths, glazed faces, drinking
cum from glasses, I also like non-violent camping, swinging and large
group family themes. A gangbang club might be fun. The bigger the orgy
the better, especially with good set up. keep up the good dirt!
(Eskimo: Wow, maybe you might want to get to the point! Well,
I'm working on a few other stories, none really involving gangbangs, except
for one or two involving youth and group sex. These could turn out to be
fan favorites.
108 25.04.04 anon Couple Fun
comments = ...spellchecking and editing go a long way to improve the readability. Your
readers will be much happier if you correct the verb conjugations - "I saw"
instead of "I seen" and "it doesn't" instead of "it don't." There were countless
mistakes of this nature, plus abysmal spelling mistakes. Sure, the content of
the stories is what really matters, but these mistakes really detract from the
enjoyment of their reading.
(Eskimo: Yeah, but did you like the story!?! I know, I get this complaint the most. I
try editing the best I can, and run through spell check each story I
post. But shit happens. As Is aid before, I was lucky to get through
English in Hich School and College, so best to just read and bare it.)
107 24.04.04 dwdirtydeejr1 The Garage
comments = great story! frist story i took the time to read but the title and
resyult fit perfect i love it. never read a story that long but it was great
(Eskimo: I liked writting this one, a romantic story actually. Thouhgt
I did a very good job with it. And the sex was hot as well.)
106 20.04.04 Olive Couple Fun
comments = Dear Eskimo1958, I have just completed reading Couple Fun, in
its entirety for the third time. It is so nice that you have given us readers
the opportunity to communicate to you how much your inspirational writing
is appreciated. The story was totally uplifting to say the least. The
characters seemed so warm and believeable. They are drawn is such a way
that each and every one (except Mark) seems very attractive to this reader
and others, I am sure. I found myself wishing that I could just enter
the story and give each and every one a hug. The characters all seemed so
happy and well adjusted as they were almost constantly celebrating
their own very healthy sexuality and that of the other characters as well.
(Eskimo: OH YEAH!! I'm sorry to say I had to shorten Olive's
whole letter, but rest assured, the rest was just as fine. As I'm sure
Olive is, too. This story is one of my better works, it just flowed out.
Seems I took my time and really got into it as I wrote. Wish all my
stories came out this way. Think this one, along with Flashback, Widower Fun,
Cindy,and The Cabin are my five best works. Thanks Olive, I appreciate it.)
105 15.04.04 Lady Widower Fun
comments = One of the best stories i have read in a long time. Very
well written with plot along with the story well told leading up
to the sex. Very good.
(Eskimo: Yeah, I liked writting this story, it just sort of flowed. I
think it's every male fantasy to have more than one woman. Although in
reality, it probably be too much like work. And I did enjoy leading
the story to the sex, makes it more believable. I try to do this
with most of my stories, if at all possible. I think the build-up
makes it more erotic.)
104 10.04.04 Linda story page
comments = I love your stories because they have some build up
prior to sex. I would love to be on your mailing list for new
erotica.
(Eskimo: Thank you, I try to make all my stories enjoyable to
read, not just take off the clothes and fuck like rabbits. I would
love to add you to my mailing list, but, I don't have one. I've found
in my other online hobbies that people tend to change emails often,
making it very difficult to keep an update list. Everyone's best bet
is to check out my main story page., where I post the newest stories
first, just so you know when I've posted something new.)
103 05.04.04 charley Filling The House
comments = A truely Outstanding story as are most of yours.I hated
to see you end it with a kind of a cold ending.We got to know the
girls and you kind of left them short after they got back from the
Lodge.You covered about 15 years or so in a short para.Lots of questions
not answered.Look at Frank D. and what he has done with "Dance Of A
Lifetime".I belive that Joe and the girls have a lot more to say.
(Eskimo: Great review, thanks for saying what you thought. I
think I ended it the way I did because, well, I just wanted to end it.
I felt like I was dragging it on and on some how. Maybe I'll work on
an extra chapter, covering the growing years of the children, and how
the five adults handles things during pregnancy and parenting, and
still have time for great romance.
102 24.02.04 jenny story page
comments = Hiya poop head i know you atre like Lian gosh your
such a poop head
(Eskimo: What the fuck? I haven't a clue what this was
about. It might have helped if she kept her fingers out of her snatch
as she typed)
101 21.02.04 joe Convention
comments = Very good reading thank you
100 20.02.04 revonic Snow Job
comments = great story.....did not see the ending cumming,so was
surprised. i need a sequel or a continuing story
(Eskimo: Yeah, I decided to make the ending a bit diiferent. The
idea of a continuation is tempting, but don't think I will. Let your
imagination take over, and go with that.)
I would love to hear your opinion of these comments, or about my stories. So please, let me know what you thought of it. All comments, good and bad, will be greatly appreciated. If you would like for me to respond, which I shall, please add your email address in the comment area. Thank you.