99 11.02.04 ken Molly's Boys
comments = I love this type of fun, hot, respectful sex between adults.
I also love the groups, threesomes, and moresomes. Keep them coming.
(Eskimo: As you all can tell, multi-partner sex is my favorite, although
in reality, I know it's not practicle, as it really is too much like work. I am
working on a few new stories, may have them done by end of month. Haven't really
had time to work on my writting as much as I would like to.)
98 25.01.04 dave story page
comments = Enjoy your stories -- keep up the good work -- i am
not super critical .. but do find so many writers of erotica
ofetn ignore good grammar ... frequent have no idea of verb
tense .. and make horible spelling errors that it distracts from
flow of story and I end up just clicking off link -- It is
refreshing to find one that cares enough to try and pay attention
to such things -- I share you backgroud .. born and raised in Illinois
.. am 70-year old retired journalist -- taught some colleg
writing courses ... but really don't claim to be an expert ..
just a horny old fart--
(Eskimo: Actually, I suck in English, but getting better, now
that I run my stories through spell check, and then go over them and
see if I need to make changes. My biggest problem isn't spelling, but
typing. Oh, and I can relate to the horny old fart, even though I still
haven't hit fifty yet. By the way, if any one is wondering, I copy and
paste all messages, errors included.)
97 25.01.04 brian Filling The House
comments = Ecellent dream fantasy to those who enjoy impregnating our
wives. Only finances stopped our family at three. This story warmed
me up as what we call an artic blast is blowing from the north upon
England
(Eskimo: This has become the latest topic for me, you'll
probably like Breeding Of Chris as well. And yes, we know about artic
blasts, the central US is getting one now. So, I need to write to
keep warm myself.
96 24.01.04 dave Molly's Boys
comments = I loved the story. Not ofter does a story keep me
hard all the way through but this one did. Maybe I identified
with it since I am from a bit south of Indianapolis. I am
afraid to show the stoy to my wife. She might get ideas. On
second thought that would be a good thing. Your stories are
great, keep up the good work, Dave
(Eskimo: Wow, you ain't that far from me, little more than
a hundred miles. Let your wife read them, you may never know what
might happen. I enjoyed writting this story, it had a wonderful effect
on me as well.)
95 24.01.04 Catherine Patricia's Vacation
comments = Great story... hope you don't mind, but I had two nice little
orgasms reading it :)
(Eskimo: hell no I don't mind! Sounds like I would like to watch
you read.)
94 21.01.04 john Patricia's Vacation
comments = Good story. The other couple on vacation added a first
time twist and the gang bang was one of the best I've read. The
ending was outstanding. Not enough writers have the women
appreciate their husbands, boy friend or man.
(Eskimo: Thank you, just something I came up with during this cold
midwestern winter.)
93 06.01.04 Alabama Flash Wife's Friend
comments = DAMN GOOD IS ALL I CAN SAY
(Eskimo: LOL, thanks for reading.)
92 04.01.04 Jen stories
comments = You have got to be one hot fuck baby ....... so in
tune. I love the way you understand and communicate every shread
of horniness. I would give anything to give you my hot, sweet
pussy. I wrote a story about getting fucked by 6 guys on a pool-table
one night, and posted it somewhere on this damned site. I was
expecting lots of response .... which makes me think I did
something wrong and it never got on the net. Whatever. I wanna
be one of your gangbang whores. They are top-notch sluts.
MMmmmmm..... Send me something hot ...... Jenn
(Eskimo: ohmy! Sounds like a story needs to be written
about Jen. Give me some time, and I'll work on it.)
91 01.01.04 lew Maggie
comments = A great action story. Well told and riveting. Thanks
for sharing it with us.
(Eskimo: Thank you.)
90 14.12.03 tphile story page
comments = Hi Eskimo I can give you some possible reasons for you not
getting much feedback. Its hard to know when you have a new story
posted. It needs to be quick and simple and flawless. We can't gov
by the ftp site dates since you reload all of them frequently. The
Date in the index section is great but we have to scroll thru the
whole page to find them. Some authors put new stories at the top of
the page instead of in alphabetical order or a flashing NEW marker.
Personally, I do not like having to search thru a site to find
the new stuff. There are a lot of sites out there of favorite
authors and it can be really tedious. Also the "but thats another
story" ending on most of your stories can get very frustrating
and annoying. The Bane for every reader is "to be continued" on
an absorbing story and find its abandoned and never gets finished.
I would rather see a whole story and if a sequel happens it
happens. and if its a multipart story, thats fine as long as
its not like a year between parts. btw you might consider posting
to StoriesOnLine.com you can reach more readers there and with easy
feedback.
(Eskimo: Okay, first item resolved. I am reposting my main story
page, putting my stories in chronological order, newer stories first.
And I have decided to stop reloading my stories, except for making
corrections. I also have posted a alternative story page, with the
stories in alphabetical order so those hunting for a specific story
can find it. As for endings, I don't intend to add a sequel to every story
I end as you suggest, ususally say that so my eraders can think of
a fantast ending on their own. So I really don't consider it a bad thing,
the usual, each their own. And as for teh other website, I tried the url
you listed, but didn't come out, no such page.)
89 12.12.03 Jim Flashback
comments = As a Vietnam Vet let me offer kudo's on a well written
story, rarely do I get to see such a sensitive literary work of art.
Hope you find Joku, His insight has allowed you to see what so many
others can't (or won't) Please do not take offense..but as a writer
I noticed that you need to proofread your art. (example: using
I seen instead of I saw) But that did not mar in away the Brilliance
of your word painting.
(Eskimo: Thanks, the first part of the story was inspired by
a relative that told me about sitting in a bunker, and a enemy morter
round came through the roof, but failed to explode. Claims the longest
thirty seconds in his life. He was staying overnight when he told us,
and that very night he had a dream like the one I mentioned in the beginning
of the story. Scared the shit out of all us with his screams at 2:30 in the
morning. All else in the story, including the detonation of the shell,
were purely fiction on my part. As for the grammer, I miss a lot of stuff
when I proof read...mainly because I never was that great in English,
oh well.)
88 09.12.03 chuck Camp Diary
comments = Your spelling is pretty good but the writing is repetitive
and boring.
)Eskimo: One of my earlier works, are yu talking about the story
being repetitious, or all my stories in general?)
87 28.11.03 B Camp Diary
comments = Your stories are great but you need to run them ALL
through a 'spell check.' The misspelled words are a distraction
from the merits of the stories.
(Eskimo: Ooops, oh well. I ran it through spel check and
reposted it already. I'll check others when I find the time.)
86 23.11.03 Fred Cottage
comments = Just thought I'd let you know, this isn't the first of
your stories I've read. I've enjoyed all your writing, enough,
that I thought it time to tell you. Thank you much for writing
and more to the point publishing your work. Fred
(Eskimo: Thanks for letting me know. Wish more people would
let me know what they think.)
85 18.11.03 lindsay College
comments = I really enjoyed this story and was wondering if this
story was continued?
(Eskimo: Not sure, I could, if I ever find the time.)
84 13.11.03 chuck The Cottage
comments = People with hyperthermia are excessively hot. Your folks
were suffering from hypothermia, low temperature. You should really
use a spell check. Probably a third of the paragraphs contain at
least one serious misspelling. This is a serious impediment to
reading — and Word has a grammar check that might confuse you but
make reading clearer. chuck
(Eskimo: Ooops! Okay, guess I better edit this one again and
repost. Thanks for your help.)
83 10.11.03 liz Cheryl's Gangbang
comments = I loved it. It was really good, made me hot. I would have
liked to have known what each of the guys looked like just a little
bit more. Other than that, it was good.
(Eskimo: Since I'm male, I have a hard time describing men. But
you do bring up a good point, and I'll work on it. Glad it made you hot
though.)
82 10.11.03 Grace Toys For Mom & Daughter
comments = Dear Eskimo1958, Over the past 10 years, I have read
literally tens of THOUSANDS of erotic stories on the internet,
books, magazines, you name it...... I've read nearly all of it!
But let me just say here that " Toys " is one of the most fascinating
stories I have ever read......... ever! I'm very sure that it is
obvious to many people that you are an author a class above nearly
everybody else in this genre. Let me just tell you that I really,
really, enjoyed reading this excellent story, and being "involved"
in this fascinating world that you have created for all of us......
Please keep writing MORE of your wonderful stories! ..... and
thank you very much for brightening-up my day! My warm regards,
Grace K.
(Eskimo: I'm speechless, thank you. And I'll try getting some
stories finished soon. Having writers block at the moment, not to
mention real life getting in the way again. I am happy that I
finally recieved a comment about this story, as I thought it is one
of my better ones.)
81 10.11.03 t Relunctance To Swing
comments = reading your words tooking me to a totally throbbing
experience. keep the good stuff coming.
(Eskimo: LOL, and don't forget the kleenax.)
80 03.11.03 Danny Beginning Of A HArem
comments = First, let me say I truly enjoy your writing. Suffice it to
say several of your works are in my 'read again' archive. I
realize RL often gets in the way of recreational writing, but I
hope you continue to post. Second, of all your stories, IMHO,
"Harem" begs for a sequel. Having read your comments I know you
are considering one so I am just adding my vote.
(Eskimo: Well, looks like I better get busy on that sequel. I
have started it, but trying to find the direction I want to go with.
Maybe by end of year, but that is only less than two months away. Also
have a few other stories trying to get done as well. Not to mention
next parts of the April story.)
79 29.10.03 Rick Relunctance To Swing
comments = I truly enjoyed this story. It's is well written and very
stimulating and believable.
(Eskimo: It's not often I get such a quick, positive response
from one posting. I must have realy done good this time. Thanks for
reading and enjoying the story.)
78 29.10.03 David Relunctance To Swing
comments = You have a very nice style. I dont really like violent
sex.
(Eskimo: And I kind of liked this story. Thanks to "matt"
the oppurtunity to write it.)
77 28.10.03 Surni Beginning Of A Harem
comments = I'm jealous as hell!
(Eskimo: I'll take that as a positive review.)
76 27.10.03 Clara Breaking In Party
comments = lol...SICK....
(Eskimo: That's a strange combination of responses.)
75 27.10.03 Marty flashback
comments = Is a nice story .Is hard to find authors that think romantic
stories are boring without a bunch of perverse if not plain perverted
plot lines .Well just looked at your story page and see a couple that are
a bit out my taste range but for the most part they look like some
good stories.
(Eskimo: Thanks, I try to make the stories to include romance, although
some people's idea of romance is a bit whacko. Hope you enjoy all
of my stories that suit your taste.)
74 26.10.03 Patrick College
comments = Hi, I am a fellow Canadian and enjoyed this story and
others you have written. Well leaving off this story where you
did could be an ending, it does leave one hanging. Was this your
intention or are you going to add more to it as I hope you will.
Anyway, THANK YOU for the stories you have wriiten that I have
read so far. I did note one typo when you used filler insted of
filled her as in filled her mouth with his come. And I did not
see any of your previous storys signature hte insted of the
in this story, so you are now either spell checking your stories
or have an editor. If you would like an aditional proof reader,
I would enjoy that previage. While not working as one now I was a
technical writer for 9 years. If you decine I understand, my reason
to offer proofing your stories is to get to read them sooner, as
i reraly like them.
(Eskimo: I probably will not add a sequel. Thought of adding a
group scene with their friends, but not sure I'll ever get around to
it. And I did run this story through spell check within the last week.
Unfortunatly, not all words were corrected properly. Will have to re-proof
read it once more. Also, you might want to check your own spelling lol)
73 24.10.03 cadisfly Beginning Of A Harem
comments = This is an interesting and well written story. There
are many typos, but they don't impact on the flow much. I am
interested in a sequel to this...have you written it yet? Hope
you do Cadis Fly
(Eskimo: Yes, I'm working on a sequel. May have it done by
beginning of 2004, I hope)
72 22.10.03 Cisco College
comments = Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story
"College" that was posted on www.asstr-mirror.org. It was very hot, as
well as a really good story. The characters and relationships
between them were really well done. The sexual descriptions
were intense. It seems to me that this story is just begging
for a sequel, because it can go so much further. I can see a
natural evolution of events and dynamics between the couples:
Jess with Shellie, Cathy letting Leroy be her "second," the
girls further exploring their lesbian desires, hot sex in the
guys' shower, and Donna being passed around by the guys, and
by the girls. There is alot that could happen leading up to Cathy
and Jess' wedding which I and I'm sure others would love to read about.
Anyway, thanks for a great story!
(Eskimo: I jsut edited the whole thing, and already someone has
offered their praises, see #69. Well, you bring up some good ideas,
now I am going to have to quit my regular job and work on writting porn
full time....not! Anyway, I'll keep it in mind. I am working on a few others,
will keep you all posted.)
71 21.10.03 Dean Visiting Challenge
comments = The story was fun once you got passed the part of the
story that looked like it might rip apart a good relationship. I
hope to see the next years return visit.
(Eskimo: I sort of thought the beginning was fun as well. Oh
well, at least you enjoyed the rest. Damn, another request for a
sequel to another story. I realy do need to get paid for this.)
70 20.10.03 John The Cabin
comments = very nice damsel in destress storie
69 20.10.03 Jeremy College
comments = Speaking as a white Canadian football-oblivious
computer geek, pretty much all of the lifestyle content in
this story was foreign to me (and while I do go to university,
we have no frats and I'm sure even our star athletes don't
have special dorms). Normally I have no interest in such
things; if I can't relate, it's boring. But even so, the
characterization was so strong, so well-done and believable,
and Jess so likeable, that I followed the story to the end
for its own sake. It wasn't the most strokeable story I've
read even today, but it was the best-written I've read on
asstr-mirror.org for quite a while. But you do need to do something
about your editing. Spelling errors (for example, above my
hips is my waist, not waste), typing errors (for example,
I think "teh" shows up about 20 times), and punctuation
errors (apostrophe is _not_ for pluralizing, dammit). It
certainly didn't ruin the story, but it detracted very slightly
Thanks for a good story. I'll get around to reading some of
your other work soon, I think. =]
(Eskimo: Thank you, I enjoyed your points. Seems
my spell check let me down on the word 'waste', I should have caught that.
As for punctuation, yeah, I'm guilty. I never did like English class,
but then, I never thought I would be writting porn and need it.)
68 19.10.03 alex Beginning Of A Harem
comments = You gotta finish this story
(Eskimo: lol, see above.)
67 19,10.03 rustyken Stories
comments = Nice job on your stories. Have enjoyed April and Harme
as well as several others. You indicated future additions to
harem an april. Good idea. Cheers, Rustyken
(Eskimo: I'm working on additions on both, well, at least I was.
Sort of workingon some other stories, maybe pick back up on sequels in
the near future.)
66 08.10.03 greg Couple Fun
comments = Anoher good story, graet writing
65 07.10.03 tapen Listening In
comments = I had a similar experience at Blackpool in England
last summer. It was more like a cock to cunt orgy and some
sucking and muff diving. I was cold, and got up with a very
stiff neck and dozed all the way back home the next day. I
should have thought about the telephone, damn!
(Eskimo: Loved this story, since it actually did happen.
Although the location was changed, didn't want anyone to trace it back to
me.)
64 07.10.03 GEB story page
comments = I`ve read your stories; Harem, Becky, and Setting up
Roger they are excellent stories. The people in your stories seem
to be very real. As for misspelled words or improper english it
dosen`t distract from the stories. Your one of my top 5 favorite
authors. Keep writting !!!!!
(Eskimo: Wow, I enjoy responses like this, that's what I live for....
well, besides actually havig sex of course.)
63 06.10.03 Orlando story page.
comments = I was checking all your novel and I found out that I've
read most of them, I have also stored them and I only do it with
the ones that I want to read again. If you're a reader you know
what it means. Please keep on writing; although to be honest,
since I'm a latin and raised with old standards (I'm 45), I
sometimes do not agree with the subject, specially sharing, I
confess I'm a male chauvinist pig, what's mine it's mine, for as
long as she wants, once she looks for another one, she's not
mine (and the other way aroun too). Having said that, please
write a longer novel, you're one of the writers on ASSTR that I
consider that could do it.I'm not into good words; but if you
haven't understood what I wanted to say, I will say it: "YOU
ARE A GOOD WRITER", keep on doing it.
(Eskimo: Wow, I love praise, even from someone that doesn't
always agree with what I write. Thank you. Now, a novel? Not
sure if I have the time, I do have a few works on the burner, maybe
I can do something with one of them. Stay tuned!)
62 5.10.03 tom Wife's Freind
comments = Good Story. You should do another chapter. If Amy is
10 year younger, then still is still young enough to start a
family......
(Eskimo: Not sure if I want to do another chapter of this one, my thinking
here is why mess with it? Let the readers fantasize on their own on
what happens next.)
61 30.09.03 tphile Beginning Of A Harem.
comments = I agree with Terris, you should develop the relationships
more and put off the pregnancies till much later. We need to get to know
them first.
how about sailing or on a RV road trip with him as captain and the
women as crew. they form a company weekend sports team.
the girls escort him to the company picnic or school reunion.
ski resort or tropical island holiday
How about a Dude Ranch Connestoga Wagon trail drive.
and please change the title ;)
(Eskimo: Okay, I'll make the pregnancy thing a later chapter.
I've some ideas, should get something going sometime in the future.
Sometimes it's best if I just let ir sit idle and come back to it. Now,
what title do you suggest?)
60 29.09.03 Terris Beginning Of A Harem.
comments = Interesting story. There are some spelling errors,
but they do not cause too much problems. There was only one
point where I had to think what you tried to say (there was a
weight on his hips when he woke up). I would like to read a
continuation of this story, where some time has maybe passed
and John plans the weekend activities. So he has one weekend
for each lady, but this time John makes all the arrangements.
There might be also some things that do not go by the plan
(maybe some drunk in a bar gets too pushy and tries to grab his
ladyfriend or something) and how he reacts to the situation
deepens the bond between John and the lady in question.
(Eskimo: YES! CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS! I LOVE IT! Anyhow, I'm
working on a second part, where the women decide to be impregnated.
Maybe I'll start it over, and go with your idea. As for the spelling,
I put it through spell check, like all my worls, seems sometimes I
miss things.
59 29.09.03 Peter Camp Diary
comments = I liked the story. But why having set the events in the
future ? From my own camp experiences, when boys were in minority,
well the path of events went quite far and active, even if the
100% nudity for males all the day wasn't of course the rule (
only at night, or when no adult was watching us (during part of
trekking activities, for instance).
(Eskimo: In the beginning of the story, I mention it was
post-civil war, where new social mores now cover the land. I'm
wanting to expand on this theme, jsut haven't finished the stories
concerning it. All would be set in the future, with one just at the
end of the war, and the others well after. Kind of like Sci-Fi.)
58 26.09.03 Laci story page
comments = Dear Eskimo! I'm from Hungary, and I like your works,
I think the best are the orgys! Would you mind if I translate
them to Hungarian?
(Eskimo: Alright, coming to another language near you!)
57 17.09.03 anon story page.
comments = i wasn't enchanted by April; great idea, hot writing, somehow
something didn't quite click for me. Maybe that April's problem
kept being put as "her needs" not being met. But i *loved* the
tale of two titties. boy, did that work. Excellent writing,
very funny, very well done. keep up the good work. and thanks
for giving us a form for comments; a lot of authors love
comments, but don't make it this easy to send responses.
(Eskimo: Working on two sequels of April, hopefully
you'll enjoy them more. Thanks for the response for tale of two
titties! Thats the first feed back I've gotten on it. It was
inspired by a friend and her night at a swing club. She was also
the one that gave me her escapades at a swing club in my "Swingers
Diary" story.)
56 13.09.03 Bill Hayes Cabin
comments = Excellent story. You really should think about making a series
out of it.
(Eskimo: Thanks for the comments, and the sugestion. May work
on the idea.)
55 13.09.03 Keith story page.
comments = loved them how about pedo and little girl stories?
(Eskimo: just don't think I can do that, but thanks anyway.)
54 3.09.03 Irene Molly And The Boys
comments = darling i love your stories,can't get enough!!!! you
are GREAT and get me off every morning.....irene*
(Eskimo: oh my! Glad I can get your day off to a good start.)
53 31.08.03 Simon Beginning Of A Harem
comments = I'm not sure if the rom tag is appropriate for this
story. I didn't see anything especially romantic about it. None of
the women are especially emotionally connected to your
protagonist from what I can see. Yes, they like him. And yes,
they enjoy sex with him. But I'm not sure that but a couple of
them would consider him to be much more than a casual friend?
Still, a good story. Nice work.
(Eskimo: In the story, Joe has to please the ladies, not just
sex, but in courting them as well, so I placed that under romance.
52 30.08.03 Glynn Becky
comments = Wow... That was a really great story... I have to
say that it was a shame that it ended there... It could have
gone on longer... But I can't fault you for the way you put it
across. It really is very good! Thanks Glynn (ATSC!)
(Eskimo: Maybe a sequel? Who knows, although I've been working on
a few other sequels as it is, not sure if I like doing that.)
51 30.08.03 tphile Becky
comments = nice to see a new story and this was a pleasant one. I'm a
fan of Nick Scipio's Summer Camp so I liked this being set in a
nudist camp I suggest you proof this some. I'm not sure if its
Susan or Roxy as the dead wife I like the name Roxy
(Eskimo: Ooops, yeah, I thought I started her as being named Roxy,
and when I can, I'll corect the text. Thanks for catching it. Being a nudist
helped in writting this story. Planning on a couple more with similar theme.)
50 27.08.03 Guy Molly And The Boys
comments = This is a piece of shit.
(Eskimo: This guy had a similar style of critisism for a few
of my other stories as well. You would think after reading one he
wouldn't read anymore.)
49 26.08.03 Vic Canoe Trip TO An Orgy
comments = Great story, but two college teachers use spell check , correct
grammer and proof readers, Check out Nick scipio for a well
written story.
(Eskimo: They taught Animal Husbandry, not english....besides, it wasn't written by
a college teacher(LOL), I'll get on it and make corrections one of these days. My older
stories I didn't run through spell check and went over and edited them myself, so some
need to be reviewed by spell check.)
48 26.08.03 Gus Widower Fun
comments = is superb. The characters are very well developed, giving
the reader a slice of reality that is rarely found in erotica
these days. I just finished the story about the 6'10" mailman and
ver Jade, and now my dick feels like it went through a giant
Lewinski. Keep up the great work. All the best.
(Eskimo: Giant Lewinsky? Anyway, thanks for reading my stories
and enjoying my writting style. Hopefully by November I'll have
two or thre more done.
47 24.08.03 JM41 Becky
comments = AS usual another good story.Your proof reaser
missed a lot of run together words [ 2 words w/o a space between
them].....KEEP WRITING!!!...JM41......
(Eskimo: What's a 'proof reaser'?)
46 24.08.03 John Texas Fun
comments = I loved it, what a fabulous story! Certainly got me
revved up. Long live ASSTR Cheers John
44 15.08.03 Abe story page.
comments = Hi! I've read all your stories and think that they're
fantastic. I first read 'Western trip to an Orgy' and 'Carribean
Cruise' a couple of years ago and still enjoy reading them now.
Character development is good, though I feel that some stories
are far better than others (the triplet auction felt so sterile
to me while the previously mentioned two and 'Visiting challenge'
had characters that projected their feelings and warmth in a way
that is rare among stories). Keep up the good work!
(Eskimo: That's what I like to hear, readers that come back
and re-read the same story because they enjoyed it so much the
first time. Yeah, I didn't like Triplet Auction either, something
definitly missing. But we can't write great stories everytime. I've
been working on a few stories at once, hopefully you, and others
will enjoy them as well.)
43 8.08.03 Mary The Garage
comments = Way to go! Passed this story along to quite a few at work.
They all enjoyed. Keep them coming.
(Eskimo: Thanks Mary, I knew you would like this one. But, don't your
Co-workers have jobs to do? Working on about a dozen new stories, probably
won't have anything posted until October, 2003.)
42 3.08.03 Mschur Opening Her Eyes
comments = Very well written short story. Thanks.
41 2.08.03 Jack story page.
comments = I really like the stories. Would like to hear more
about you.
(Eskimo: Wow, guess I'll have to post a bio page, never thought of that.
I'll work on something for it.)
40 23.07.03 Fred story page.
comments = How do you find the time to write so well? I have only
read a few of your stories yet each is so different. Are you a
professional writer? Whatever, just keep up the good work. And
thanks a lot for posting these stories on the ASSTR system.
(Eskimo: Actually, it takes awhile for each story. I've 41 stories
written so far, started 5 years ago, so eight stories a year. No,
I have a day job, and writting isn't it. Some stories take longer
than others. I've one story that I've been kicking around now for
years. And finding the time is tough, when I get bored, I'll write,
until I'm bored with writting. There are times I won't write for
three months, then boom, I put out four stories.)
39 22.07.03 Dick Rohwder Visiting Challenge
comments = WOW! What a story. Well done.
38 22.07.03 tphile story page.
comments = Just want to say that I have been enjoying your stories.
Is there some way you can hilight the brand new stories from the
reposts when you post them? I especially enjoyed the humor one
and would love to read more like them Harem was a lot of fun but
that has to be the worst title ever. It also gave away the plot.
you should give it a better title. maybe something sports
related like The Benchwarmer or Equipment Manager or even
something goofy like Have Dick Will Travel. :) The Garage was
another favorite. The chance meeting and opposites attract is
always fun I hope we will get to read some new ones soon tphile
(Eskimo: You bring up a good point. I decided to repost my
stories once in awhile, so they're more visible to those cruising
asstr-mirror.org, but maybe I can do something. Not sure when next story
done, probably not until after mid-September. As for "Beggining of
A Harem", probably could use a new title, will have to think about
that.....Have Dick, WIll Travel?....and "The Garage" was inspired by
a trip through Western Colorado a few years back. Vast openess
with the occasional cow in the middle of the road.)
37 22.07.03 Dick Wife's Friend
comments = Mercy. Lucky threesome. Glad the husband and wife are
open enough to share and feel comfortable in doing it. All three
have the best of both worlds. Lucky Amy to have such good
friends to help her give her virginity in such a loving
relationship.
(Eskimo: lol...now what man doesn't fantasize about helping
a young lady give up her virginity? I loved writting this story,
and although it's fiction, I can at least think about it. This
story line came up about the same time as my Tagalong
story.)
36 20.07.03 Spunky Swingers Diary
Thanks for revealing yours and Cindy's exploits.
Very well written.
A lot to think about
Regards Spunky and Q
(Eskimo: Wish it was mine and my wife's, but I will pass it
along to those involved. Chances are maybe one day they'll go back and
watch.)
35 20.07.03 ahotstory Couple Fun
I found and downloaded one of your stories today. (Couple Fun) I
am not far enough into the story to give and opinion but I am far
enough to make a request. The story codes as you have used them
are misleading if not partially incorrect. Lower case 'm' and
'f' mean "teen male and female" and some of your story codes
should be changed to 'M' and 'F' .Thank you for all your work
and I hope to write you again in a few days. ahotstory
(Eskimo: Just corrected them all 7/22/03, I knew they were wrong for
awhile, but never got around to changing them.)
34 17.07.03 Streve Beginning Of A Harem
comments = Please continue. It is well written and very enjoyable.
Let me know what you plan on doing.
33 16.07.03 Rags Beginning Of A Harem
comments = Hi Just cant wait to see what happens to Joe next ;-)
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!! Rags
32 15.07.03 KC Texas Fun
comments = Hi,i thought the story was real good,but would of
liked it to be more graphic in nature,maybe a little coercing or
nc,i like the way it built up your emotions too.i tend to lean
toward stories about PTA mom's or soccer mom's being coerced into
degrading acts for one or son's friends,which is black and very
graphic about the acts he makes her do until he is satisfied
about his first white women experence and releases her from his
torment,so she can resume her life as he can his.I know you
have your own style of writting as everybody does,but wish
someone could write a story on this format,anyway great job,
have a good one and thankx for allowing the comments
(Eskimo: Interesting......)
31 14.07.03 Ed Western Trip to an Orgy
comments = This is one of the best stories I've read in quite a
while. IMHO it has the right mix of story and sex, and the
descriptions of the sex are well done. I would have enjoyed more
description of the DP sessions (what it felt like for all
concerned when she was impaled on two pricks). I give this story
the highest marks.
(Eskimo: Thanks for the input, I'll keep it in mind.)
30 14.07.03 Carl Beginning Of A Harem
comments = What a fantasy! I've read it twice and I hope you do a
continuation. Actually I've read all your stories at ASSTR and
enjoyed them all.
(Eskimo: Wow, going to have you start my fan club.)
29 13.07.03 Mat The Cabin
comments = To use the word 'seen' you need to precede it with
'has', 'had' or 'have' otherwise you should use 'saw'. I have
seen... I had never seen... She has not seen... 'I saw' but not
'I seen' Great story though!
(Eskimo: Well, never said I was an english major. Just passed
it by the skin of my left nut.)
28 13.07.03 Bob The Cabin
comments = hey that was a really good story & the thing about it
is that it could really happen.its not wild & unbelievable.
thanks
(Eskimo: Sometimes I try to make them believable, other times the ole'
fantasy kicks in and all sorts of things happen.)
27 13.07.03 JM41 Beginning Of A Harem
comments = I hope you comtinue this character.
(Eskimo: In process of making a second part.Probably won't have it finished before
end of year, though)
26 13.07.03 Chuck The Cabin
comments = The spelling is atrocious. The story is graphic but
interesting.
(Eskimo: oops, my bad. Forgot to run this one through spell check. Should be
alright now.)
25 12.07.03 Justin Wife's Friend
comments = best story ever
24 12.07.03 Arthur The Cottage
comments = Yo, Eskimo! This was great! Very well done. Thanks for
sharing it, I will be reading more from your site. God Bless and
keep you. Arthur
23 12.07.03 Thacker Wife's Friend
comments = That was some steamy stuff man! I always like stories
where one takes time to undress and does it orgasmically slow.
keep writing!
22 11.07.03 Johanna Cindy
comments = Excellent mix of life and fun!!!! Wish I could have
been Cindy.
21 11.07.03 Harveen Caribbean Cruise
comments = This was the best fucking story I have ever read.
That might not mean much, because I only started to read these
stories about 1 1/2 years ago. But, damn, the "Carribean Cruise"
was amazing! Please continue writing!!
(Eskimo: Thank you, I am.)
20 10.07.03 Jerry Caribbean Cruise
comments = you write good enough said.
19 10.07.03 frog Caribbean Cruise
comments = please continue the story line!!!!!!
(Eskimo: I'll have to give it some thought. It's possible, but will
need lots of work.)
18 10.07.03 Christine April
comments = One of my favorite stories now, i haven't read one as
good in a long time.
17 10.07.03 John Caribbean Cruise
comments = This is an all time best story I have heard and matt I
would love to be in ur shoes for that.
16 10.07.03 Dom The Camp
comments = Whewwww, what an emotional roller-coaster ride that
was! Like Mario Puzo meets Foxy Brown, or one of those "Mafia
Princess movies with balls. Needed the love story ending. It
helped my stomach begin to un-knot, and testes to slowly drop
into place. 'tho it wasn't the usual "stroke story" I expect to
find here, (rape doesn't turn me on) it certainly was a fine
piece of writing. I will have to read a hotter selection next
time. I hope you reconsider your attitude against Pedo (completely
consensual, curious, or a little Lolitaesque perhaps?) Interresting
you have no problem with the balls-hacking-stick-up-the-asshole
-bullet-to-the-brain, violence in this piece; but young people
enjoying thier first sexual experiences, are out of bounds.
Hmmm, different strokes... I guess. So, thanks again, I'm glad
I noticed your listing, and will try to read more. Sincerely,
Dom Sanzone
(Eskimo: Sorry about the no pedo philosiphy, but this is America that I live in.
You know the place, all right to show violnce and distruction, but just a little
bit of underage nudity or sex, and all hell breaks loose.)
15 10.07.03 Bill Triplet Auction
comments = the best
14 10.07.03 mschur April
comments = Great short story! Really enjoyed it. Would like to
read more of their adventures.
(Eskimo: Working on a continuation of this story. May have something
by end of year, if not sooner, please check back often!)
13 10.07.03 anon April
comments = great story
12 9.07.03 Rob Caribbean Cruise
comments = very well written, warm free-for-all fantasy. if only
the real world were like this........a few weeks every year, lol
(Eskimo: he-he, yeah, really.)
11 8.07.03 OKK Caribbean Cruise
comments = Good story, a bit too much luck for the two main guys,
makes us wish it was us, right? You consistantly misspell the word
friends - a bit distracting.
(Eskimo: Thanks for pointing that out, I've re-edited and now posted it back up.)
10 7.07.03 Julian Camp Diary
comments = Interesting but I suggest you develop the characters
more. Make us feel who they are.
(Eskimo: This was one of my first stories, after the first 'Hockey
Groupie' story. I like to think I've gotten better.)
9 7.07.03 Phil Widower Fun
comments = Hello Eskimo1958-- I just read your story Widower Fun
and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. You had good
character development (which is hard to find these days). I
was surprised at how much abuse Kent took from Kim, but all in
all a good story. Do you have any others? Are they posted at
ASSTR? Thanks
8 7.07.03 anon Wife's Friend
comments = I loved the story. It was hot, had great details and
was believable. Keep it up. I hope you take them to other settings,
where they could explore things in a more public arena.
(Eskimo: I'm working on that, always trying to change the settings.)
7 7.07.03 anon The Cabin
comments = thank you
6 7.07.03 Daniel The Cabin
comments = This was a very refreshing story. First, it was filled
with compassion. Paul reaction as he undressed and bathed her
was natural. It didn't dissolve into a "six hours after we met,
she was sucking me dick" story. And I thoroughly enjoyed the
fact she was not a "38DD" (there are not enough stories
tauting the sexuality of small-breasted women. Thanks for
killing off her abusive husband. I will be reading more of
your stories.
(Eskimo: Thank you, I try to make all my stories a bit more involved than just
fuckin' & suckin'. Although fantasy comes in from time to time.)
5 7.07.03 Bill The Cabin
comments = What a great story. You are blessed with a great
talent. Do you have any more stories, if so I would love to read
them. Thanks for sharing this one.
4 7.07.03 Charles The Camp
comments = Very nice story/ Glad to see the bad guys get it every
once in a while, although I would have liked it a little better
to have seen them tied and tourchered a little the next day. are
there any other stories like this out here?
(Eskimo: I'm sure there are, but you'll have to look for them.)
3 6.07.03 Jerry Sex The Cabin
comments = Good story, could it be expanded into a book?
(Eskimo: hmmm, maybe. I'll have to give it some thought.)
2 6.07.03 J C Visiting Challenge
comments = Thanks for such a wonderful story. You have a great
gift, please keep up the good work.
1 6.07.03 Wayne Widower Fun
comments = Great story really enjoyed it. Thanks
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