700 01.01.06 Johnmayken Mary's New Home
comments = Great story, I enjoyed it very much. Regards John
(Eskimo: This was one of those quick story's that I wrote with very little
substance, but it looks like a good one to wank to. Glad you enjoyed it.)
699 31.12.06 Matt Molly's Boys
comments = This is the third story of yours that I've read. You must
be growing on me. Something is growing, that's for sure. My pants seem
to have gotten too tight.
Yes, your spelling and punctuation leaves a little to be desired, but
you more than make up for it in style.
I'm older, and don't know who I'm more envious of, Bob, or the
Dan-Tom-Jeff-Mark combo. It's fun to fantasize about being 20 years old again,
but it's also fun to be an experienced fucker and pluck the cherry of a
college freshman.
(Eskimo: You bring up an interesting point, that being which would be better,
young horny and having a group scene with an older woman? Or being older and expereinced
and introducing a young lady to the joys of sex. Since I'm older, I'll go for the latter.)
698 31.12.06 Steve Slut Cherie
comments = How about another story with a little sister to clean the 2
sluts cunts and asses.
(Eskimo: Interesting idea, but I won't write incest too much. Maybe
instead a girlfriend that lends a hand....or tongue.)
697 31.12.06 FrankJ The Garage
comments = Inject a little "humor" into the scene in the 2nd apartment.
Change the sentence:
"There also is a library in town, in case you want to get something to
read, I can check out a book for you, if you like."
To:
"There also is a library in town, in case you want to get something to
read, I can check out THE book for you, if you like."
Ought to get a rise out of some of your readers. :<)
Otherwise, a nice read, well constructed.
(Eskimo: Thanks for the suggestion, if I get around to it, I will consider
changing it.)
696 31.12.06 jackoleroy story's
comments = interested in sex live and various acts of sexual
intercorse. also interested sex durinf a females bloodiest period.
(Eskimo: Ummmmm, yeah...right.)
695 31.12.06 Tom story's
comments = I like to read rape stories, with very detailed, tell every
little piece if action. Thanks
(Eskimo: I normally don' write rape stories, sorry.)
694 31.12.06 Geoff story's
comments = I loved your stories, turned me on no end, keep writing. i
do a little writing myself, mostly fairly heavy stuff, but i try
different styles. ps I got to your page off Kirsten's stories page, what a collection!
(Eskimo: I was surprised when I saw I was lsited as a featured author on Kristen's
site. And yes, she does have a great collection of story's, something for everyone's
perversion.)
693 30.12.06 Matt My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = Utterly preposterous, of course, but still a nice,
stimulating story. Being of merely 'average' size, I'm nonetheless fascinated
by stories about large cocks. I knew several guys with monstrous
members. Most of them learned to use their cocks well and were able to
please women, but one in particular never learned how to do anything but lay
back and let women 'have their way' with him. None of them ever went
back for seconds. I will be reading, and enjoying, more of your stories.
Thanks!
(Eskimo: Thanks for reading.)
692 30.12.06 Michelle Martha
comments = It is well written and is like a Harlequin just a lot more
spice. Keep up the good work. I am also a big Fan of Black female white male
stories.
(Eskimo: I've a few stories with this genre. And a few more in the works. Oh,
and thanks for the comparison.)
691 30.12.05 Willy Working For Charlotte
comments = Enjoyed the story. Would have liked to see the girls
involved though. Maybe in the next one, huh?
(Eskimo: There will not be a sequel to this one. Although I may write a
story with some lady's daughters getting involved with her new lover.)
690 29.12.06 Sweetsafire Biography of a Storyville Madame Off
comments = Biography of a Storyville Madame Off
I have tried to access this story and it is said not to be found
(Eskimo: Seems I forgot to upload the story, it is now there for
your reading pleasure.)
689 27.12.06 ErvinJ Moving Up
comments = I have read and enjoyed your stories for several years now.
Therefore, I read "Moving Up" with high expectations. While I enjoyed
the storyline, the numerous misspelled and missing words were very
distracting. This story needed much more editing before publication.
(Eskimo: I'll have to look this one over again...)
688 25.12.06 Don Greg's New Housemates
comments = Although this place no longer exists, the Oakleaf Ranch near
Sacramento, CA, often was a place that you could fornicate in the tall
grass, or behind bushes, or in the swimming pool(s), or in tents and/or
camp trailers. I experienced this twice while there...one time in a
camp trailer with a grown woman, and another time with a teenaged nudist
girl that came onto me very hard when her Mommy and Daddy were not
looking. Fucking in the grass in a nudist camp can be done and often is
done, but it must be very secretive. Another place at Oakleaf Ranch that
I saw fucking going on was in the community showers late at night,
between unrelated or legally committed participants, which I did with a
buddy's wifey.
(Eskimo: Sounds like you could write a story, or better yet, give me the
insiration to write one similar. Send me details. As for doing it in the open at
nudist resorts, I've yet to see it happen at leginimate nudist facilities.)
687 25.12.06 Don Impregnating My Wife
comments = She needed to sit or lay in the bathtub with the drain
plugged and "soak" in the cum shootings she took in her pussy, plus all the
other cum shots that seemed to wash on her belly, head, legs and ass.
(Eskimo: Well now, that's an interesting concept....)
686 24.12.06 tphile story's
comments = Any chance you might consider doing some SF stories?
What kind of sexbot/fembot story would you do?
or superhero/pulp characters
or perhaps a historical?
like nudists in the past or future
or the sex lives of those very first nudists
Adam and Eve
they had to be pretty active to populate the earth
keep up the good work
(Eskimo: Interesting story idea..sure to raise the ire of three major religions on
the alst idea there....The others are interesting as well, although I don't think I can do
a robot type. As for historical, I recently finished one on Storyville, the famous red light
district of New Orleans. I am working on a pre-civil war era pieced, from a slave's point of
view. As for works set in the future, I've done a few aleady wher society is into breeding the
females, and I do have one that I've been working on where a flu epidemic wipes out a high
percentage of teh Earth's occupants. Of course, as with most of the ones that are unfinished,
I've no idea when I'll get them done.)
685 24.12.06 Joshua Getting AC
comments = And the LORD spake unto Moses, saying, "Speak unto the .....
.....You know that the things that you write of are evil. Therefore, cease to do evil
that the Lord may have mercy on you through His Son Jesus Christ. Hell is
not the fun place that you think it may be.
(Eskimo: So, does this mean you didn't like the story? Oh, and save
breath and time, for I don't beleive in a heaven or a hell, save for life
itself. I do feel sorry for you in your ignorant Muslim world..oh, wait, wrong
repressive conservative religion.....)
684 23.12.06 Larry My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = Enjoyed this vey much. Very well written and thought out
story line. Some grammatical and spelling errors.
(Eskimo: TI was wondering about teh reaction to this one. Save for the
speeling and gramatical errors, I thought it turned out well.)
683 22.12.06 Larry Couple Fun
comments = great story; thanks
(Eskimo: Thanks for reading my story's.)
682 20.12.06 JustMe Amusement Park Adventure-
comments = I just finished reading your story, and I just
wanted to let you know that I LOVED it. I've read some
of your other stories, and I have liked all of them. I
think that I have told you before, but you really do
have a real talent with words. You didn't disappoint
me with this one either.
I loved the touch of romance, as it makes the story
seem so much more realistic. You also used just the
right amount of description and dialogue to keep the
story line active and flowing nicely.
I guess that this story just proves that it pays to
be nice and friendly to strangers, as you never know
what may come of it. Keep up the good work, as I enjoy
reading what you write.
(Eskimo: I sure do enjoy it when my readers heap the praise.)
682 20.12.06 Jack Martha
comments = (sighs)
Another home run. This is not helping me feel adequate as an
author, y'know... :-)
(Eskimo: A lot of unexpected free time leads to a lot of, well,
thinking..which leads to me trying to put out a storya day. I probabcly
won't finish any more until after Christmas, as wife and life in general
will be keeping me busy. And please click on Jack's name above and read one
or two(or even more!) of his fine works.)
681 20.12.06 Dr T Nancy's Discovery
comments = All fucking should be done without the benefit of the Pill.
Stories would be much more erotic that way.
(Eskimo: Uh, yeah...right.....)
680 20.12.06 Dr T My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = What you needed to do was to knock up Anna when you were
fucking her, and then Alice would have become a grandma to your baby,
eventually. And after Anna's tummy started "growing, Henry could have
started fucking her, too, preferring to fuck a younger pussy. Then that
would have left you to try knocking up Alice, as well. Then with Anna and
Alice both carrying your baby in their bellies, you and Henry could have
begun trying to breed Carol, as well.
(Eskimo: Uh, yeah...right.....)
679 19.12.06 Jack Celinda
comments = Y'know, re-reading Celinda...
#1: I now breeze over typos. I've gotten used to your writing.
Anyway... consider the differences between Mei and Celinda. I really
think you could have gotten some mileage out of this kind of thing,
given how much of a body-guard Celinda could be for Mei.
Yeah, yeah, I can imagine some cute scenes that'd be no more than some
weird kind of comic relief...
(Eskimo: I'm not exactly sure what happened to this one. Now looking at
it, I probably shold have written what you had metioned.)
678 19.12.06 Sue Breeding Of Chris
comments = Awesome storiy as are your others I have read. Had me
comming in no time.
(Eskimo: I would have liked to seen that, do you have pictures?.)
677 19.12.06 Nick My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = Mate thats fucking awsome. I had a boner through that story.
give us more mate.
(Eskimo: As of this date, I have now written, finished and posted 138 story's. I've
given many and I'm writting more. So there's plenty of works that you'll find to suit
your taste.)
676 19.12.06 Michael Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = I don't think I've read any of your stories before, but
great job!!!!!!!!
(Eskimo: Thank you, hope you find more of my works and enjoy them
as well.)
675 19.12.06 Hopeless Romantic Summer House
comments = As usual, this 'Hopeless Romantic' would prefer that Sue was
'on the pill' or the like by the time that this story begins, so that
Sue and Greg can experience the FULL power of intercourse. Of particular
importance is being compelled by their mutual climax to clutch each
other's body with all of their strength as his fat cock reaches into her
hot depths, followed moments later by his involuntary ejaculation. My
hope is that a feeling of 'unity' will result from that experience,
especially as it is repeated frequently, so strong as to unite them for a
lifetime.
Getting such a prescription for Sue MIGHT be a problem if she is below
the age of consent, but such adjustments to the story are easily within
the power of any author.
I'm not sure that I like the idea that the parents are TRYING to become
pregnant. It might make a better story if the mother had decided (and
told her new husband) that she was safely past menopause, so that so
much good sex somehow lead to and UNEXPECTED pregnancy in the context of
this story. And yes both the children in this story and your underage
readers as well must understand that unplanned pregnancies still occur
despite the best intentions of happily married couples!
Indeed, I think that it is rather logical that very good sex
(particularly when repeated frequently) is far more likely to result in unplanned
pregnancies under all conditions of birth control usage, than lousy sex
(particularly when repeated as infrequently as the partners can manage.
One more thing, I don't think that the parents' terribly rude 'show
time' was very helpful to the children's sexual development. Couldn't the
parents obtain their voyeristic thrills in a manner that the children
wouldn't notice?
(Eskimo: Nice opinion....but I disagree on about everything you pointed out.)
674 18.12.06 Hopeless Romantic Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = The two things this 'Hopeless Romantic' wants to see in a
story (besides very good sex) is realism and long term relationships.
At first glance, the notion of a college boy involved with an older
woman, which in turn involves her college aged daughter and finally two of
the daughter's close friends from college seems a bit unrealistic. But
fortunately your plot unfolds in a delightfully creditable manner.
Again realsism suggests to Cathy that their relationship can't last and
thus I like her goal of initiating her sexually shy daughter to the
extreme pleasures of very good sex. Indeed, the in-person support (even
participation) of her daughter's friends might even be necessary to pull
it off. Still more realism suggests that the two close friends will
eventually find their own sexual partners.
What I would like to see is more chapters of this story that
demonstrates that this one well hung man provides so much pleasure for all four
women that all five of them really surprise themselves by remaining
together for a lifetime, even in spite of the adjustments required to make
the strange economics of their situation work!
I note with some dismay that two of the girls needed condoms for birth
control purposes. It seems to me that Cathy should have been
sufficiently aware of the college sexual scene to have placed her daughter 'on
the pill' during the summer before she left home. If nothing else, peer
pressure should have persuaded both girls to obtain 'the pill' from the
college infirmary. Although condoms are a well accepted 'all purpose'
means of 'safe sex,' they also become a barrier to the intense sexual
feelings that forcefully bond a reasonably compatable couple into a
permanent relationship.
Note that as a couple climaxes, it is important to me that they are
forced to cling to each other with all of their strength to mutually
maintain the reach of his cock into the center of her body. It is that whole
body sexual embrace that inspires the couple with feelings of emotional
unity, especially when the addictive nature of sex requires to repeat
the act at rather frequent intervals. Also, the mutual feeling of his
involuntary ejaculation into her depths should be a constant reminder of
the biological purpose of the pleasure to which they have become
addicted.
(Eskimo: Well, I have to give him credit, he does a great job of diagnosing
a story.)
673 17.12.06 Dr T Lakeside Orgy
comments = All that beer drinking, fucking, and no one was peeing?
(Eskimo: Strong bladders.)
672 17.12.06 Michael Caribbean Cruise
comments = i just thought i would tell you that your story was fucking
awsome
(Eskimo: Thank you.)
671 15.12.06 Tony Breeding Of Chris
comments = i love your stories. i'm a white male who strongly believes
in the Superiority of the Black Man and who believes the true & proper
place of we inferior whites, male & female, is to willingly give
pleasure to our Black Gods. All whites live for one thing - to make our
mouths, asses & pussies available for the pleasure of Black men, to worship
His big, beautiful Black cock and to crave His thick, delicious,
precious Black sperm! we white "men" must do our best to make our white
mothers, wives, girlfriends, and daughters available for the pleasure of
Black Men and for breeding by Black studs. You should check out
niggerworship.com, which is a great and growing community of other whites &
Blacks who realize these truths.
(Eskimo: To each his (or her) own, dude. Personally, I believe we're all equal, and
no race is superior over another.)
670 15.12.06 Jack In Home Stud Service
comments = Ummmmm...
I think you mean "accessible" rather than "accusable".
Spell checkers that can't cope with context are *evil*.
(Eskimo: You're on a roll, Jack. I've made the correction and reposted it.)
669 15.12.06 Jack Celinda
comments = Y'know, perhaps I wasn't paying any attention, but...
Couldn't you have made some kind of snarky/snide remarks about
her piercings in the process of pointing out that she'd left that
part of her life/interests behind?
(Eskimo: You were paying attention. I jsut didn't think to add any more detal
about Celinda's apperance, other than her modesty.)
668 15.12.06 Jack Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = I enjoyed this'n (of course) though you missed an
opportunity to have some fun teaching "towel etiquette"...
(Eskimo: WHAT WAS THIS BOY THINKIN'????. Being a die hard nudist, I should have
mentioned something about that. Of course, Adam was a bit drunk at the time.)
667 15.12.06 Guy Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = A very good start.But when is Adam going to take his ladies
to a nudist camp>
(Eskimo: Oh, I'm sure he will....but there's no fucking way that I'm going to
write about it.)
666 15.12.06 hopeless romantic Celinda
comments = This HOPELESS ROMANTIC is a sucker for 'damsels in distress'
and this is a nice one! :-)
["We're not using protection, Celinda."]
Since Tom's sister-in-law next door is a doctor, Celinda could easily
have obtained birth control pills (or the like) in the interim four
months if she had really wanted them. Furthermore I think that the story
would be more realistic if they were so caught up in their growing lust
that he DIDN'T THINK to ASK about protection until afterward. Note also
that pregnancy and parenthood is certain to lead to major changes for
both of them, to the point that they both MIGHT BE UNDECIDED about her
potential pregnancy.
Thus I think that it would make a much better story if their LUST
completely distracted both of them each time from the prospect of pregnancy
and parenthood, and that his ejaculation into her depths was JUST
UNAVOIDABLE during their strong mutual climaxes. Thus just like our sexual
nature intended, conception was something that JUST HAPPENED during one
of their many lusty sessions, indeed they don't really know WHICH ONE!
At the outset of the story, Celinda dressed in a Goth style, yet there
is no indication of that style of dress after she completely replaced
her wardrobe at Goodwill. Doesn't that deserve some mention? I don't
care for the piercings , but a marked tendency toward black clothing might
suit her taste.
(Eskimo: Hey! I wondered where you've been. And as usual, after reading your
comments, I'm not sure if you enjoyed reading the story as much as you enjoy commenting
about it.)
665 14.12.06 Charles Olive
comments = I loved the story. A similar situation happened to me when
I was seventeen. I was one of the best days of my younge life.
(Eskimo: Now why do you all tell me this and not send me the story?)
664 14.12.06 Abe Big Send Off
comments = I hope I don't insult you, but "when I seen the housewife"
should be "when I saw the housewife". That one error reduces the quality
of your writing, which is otherwise good.
(Eskimo: Someday I'll stop and take the time to make the change, so
you can enjoy the story.)
663 14.12.06 Howard Taking Of Tabitha
comments = hoping that you come out with part 2 to this story.
something along the line of after the baby is born , and the looks of disgust
of the hospital staff , especially the jealous black femain nurses. then
when randies mom and dad come to visit and how they treat lovely white
skiined red haired tabitha as if she were a black slave. and randy
tells tabitha that he loves her but shows no concern for her. randie's mom
likes to tie tabitha up in a "x" pattern and use a whip on her in the
evening when randy is out with his other black bros. , having a good
time. then randie's dad would rescue her and then seduce her. will tabitha
give randy a grandson??? then tabitha's mom comes to visit her daughter
and she is very upset with the treatment of her daughter. which results
in a cat fight between the two moms. tabith's mom starts to get the
upper hand , and would have been victorious , but randy and his dad
interfer , and the result of this is a new pregnant slave. when randy finds a
new girl , then tabitha and her mom end up on the street , working the
streets , to help support randy and randie's family. plenty of tears
and fucking for tabitha and her mom. finally tabitha's dad comes to the
rescue and a deal is made whereas tabitha can keep her kids and return
to raise her family somewhere in mid west america. but tabitha gets
kidnapped by randy and she is breeded once more before finally being set
free
(Eskimo: WTF???? You know, I've mentioned in the past how I try to get you
readers to think and to fatasize about my story's in your mind, to continue
them if you will. However, I'm not a professional, but I think Howie might consider
seeking some sort of counseling.)
662 14.12.06 anon Coaching
comments = I read your story titled "Coaching". I thought it was a
well thought out and stimulating story. There were a few typos but
nothing that distracted from the story. I like your setup at the end for
possible sequels. I hope you continue this story line.
(Eskimo: I would like to continue this one, it's just that I'm having a
bad case of writters block towards this particular story. I actually have more
written already, but I need more time to figure out where I want to go.)
661 13.12.06 Jack Working For Charlotte
comments = I liked this story. I really did.
Mind you, I think it was a bit rushed towards the end, but that's not
much of a problem, really.
At the same time you should realize that this tale suggests that the
two shrews may get tamed by seeing a "happy woman" and that their
arrogance would come into question, simply because their mother, who they'd
have a love/hate relationship with (they're both teens, ain't they?) has
found happiness and pleasure in a place they would not, themselves,
have beleived possible, so there's some potential for other stories to
happen in this universe, albeit, perhaps, with other "boys".
So this story may open a can of worms since you'll likely have a
sh!tload of readers expecting sequels...
(Eskimo: Oh yeah! You all know how much I like writting fucking seauels! You do
bring up some good points, and I do admit I rushed the ending. As for the daughters, I
didn't want to fall into the trap of adding them in a sexual content. My thinking was I
wanted to make the story more realistic. YEs, I could have added them 'waking up' so to
speak and finding a guy to take care of tehir needs, but I really did not want to
add anymore about them.)
660 13.12.06 Jay Learning With Gail
comments = Learning with Gail. That is a wonderful story, Great job
thanks.
(Eskimo: This was anotehr one that I enjoyed writting. It flowed well and I fiished it
quickly. And better yet, all comments have been good.)
659 13.12.06 MerDAv Summer House
comments = Love this story theme. I like stories with the persons
involved openly get to a point where they are open and fully revealed to
each other. Thanks!! Would love to have you write a story about a family that
decides to become nudists.
(Eskimo: I actually started a story invloving a family that joined a nudist
swing club, but I trached it, as I had too many characters involved. I also was not
comfortable with the underage theme either. I do have a few other nudist story's
writen, and you might want to check them out.)
658 13.12.06 Doug Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = The second chapter (Monday) is repeated in the first chapter
in the place of correct title-(Sunday)
(Eskimo: Ooops, sorry. I hope I got it fixed.)
657 12.12.06 j My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = go fuckers i want that to happen to me. god my pussies so
wet. call me at 222-2522
(Eskimo: I think J has issues....)
656 12.12.06 j Summer House
comments = hey babe your story made me cum i want u so bad.
655 12.12.06 Frank Broken Links
comments = FYI The links to "Breaking In Party" and "Educating Rita" don't work
Regards Frank
(Eskimo: Ooops, okay, I see one problem, and checking on another,
and hopefully they'll be functinoing correctly soon.)
654 11.12.06 Taumsauk Taking Of Tabitha
comments = The theme of this story intrigues me and it begs to be
elaborated upon in a much longer work. How did such a governmental policy
come into effect? How is the selection process undertaken? How does it
apply to mature women and mothers?
You always impress me with your pushing the envelope, and this one
does. Thanks for writing and posting your work. I do appreciate the effort
that goes into them.
(Eskimo: This is interesting, as I didn't expect any comments concerning this one.
I've written otehrs with this futuristic setting, of a changed world, and I've others started.
For soem reason, I have been enjoying this type of genre, and I'll probably write more. As for
continuing this particular one, I don't think I will.)
653 11.12.06 Clint April
comments = loved it!!!! keep going :+)
(Eskimo: I began this as a three-part story, but as yet, have failed to finish
the other two parts. Although I do have quite a bit written on both. Maybe one of these
days.....)
652 11.12.06 Scott Coaching
comments = Make this story only a start. You've set the stage so
fantastically wonderful you cannot simply abandon the story. Do you
co-write, perhaps with a female who might continue this story from a female
perspective, first person? I so enjoy your stories!
(Eskimo: LOL, I neer said I was going to abandon it! Just have to take the time
to sit down and write how I want to continue it. I do however like your idea. I may
have to cehck into that angle.)
651 10.12.06 Max Beginning Of A Harem
comments = I know that when you really get the scene you want to
portray in your mind you want to get it down on paper as soon as possible so
you don't forget it. However, this sometimes leads to too many lines
starting with 'as' and so it ruins the continuity because it seems that
everything is happening all at once or because of the previous action.
Otherwise, this is a great story. I'm glad I stumbled unto your site
here at ASSTR. Thanks and Keep it up.
(Eskimo: You bring up a good point, and I'll try not to do that as much
in future tales.)
650 10.12.06 Jon story's
comments = Those I have read are just great put me onto some more
please
(Eskimo: TY, just look through my story list, as wella s others, and I'm sure you'll
find something to float your boat.)
649 10.12.06 Bob Coaching
comments = A very good start to what I hope you make into a very good
series!
(Eskimo: OKAY OKAY! I get the hint already. I'll get started right away on
a continatuion of htis one, soon...real soon....)
648 10.12.06 Bill Coaching
comments = If you keep it going w/ olive w/o nailing her daughters
it'll be a great romantic story. If you nail the daughters, it'll be more
ordinary. Of course, they could try to get you and you resist.
(Eskimo: Actually, I wasn't planning on having him nail her daughters. My
story idea is for Olive and her sisters to have their daughters be courted by the
young men on his basketball team. I was thinking of maybe having the young males
and young females learn to work together, live together, and eventually love
together. All under the guidence of Mike, Olive, and her three sisters. The only problem
with this, is the amount of time it will take to get it finished. So far, I ain't
got squat done, so don't expect anything soon.)
647 09.12.06 Ben Carla's Business Trip
comments = I adored this story, I actualy like Erotic stories that have
a story line. It gives the characters some depth. I would love to hear
an extension to this story if you ever think about making one can you
send it to me?
(Eskimo: I get asked to continue story's a lot. And rarely do I
even start to attempt it, and even rare still does it get completed. At the
moment, I've probably a good dozen wstory's that I've started additional
chapters. And, in ten years of writting, off the top of my ehad, I think I've
finished maybe what? Four? In other words, it doesn't look good. The reason I
don't is the same reason I have soooo many works started, clse to a hundred,
and most far from finished. And all because I get bored with the story, and
I end up moving on towards antoerh item of interest. Anyway, please enjoy what
else I've written so far, and don't expect too many sequels anytime soon of any
of my works.)
646 09.12.06 sweetsfire story's
comments = Hope you are on the mend. At least you are getting some
stories out. Take care and have the happiest of holidays to you and yours.
(Eskimo: TY, and happy holidays to all my readers!)
645 09.12.06 Jack story's
comments = The flurry of updates turned into a blizzard of words.
Thank you for the drifts; it's fun to shovel through, and very
reassuring to see that you are still active!
(Eskimo: Well, lately I haven't been able to do very much else! This isn't
going to last much longer, though. I'm hoping to be back on my feet and back to work
next week.)
644 09.12.06 Patrick Coaching
comments = Please Contine this story. I can see great possibiliites for
it.
(Eskimo: Ditto! Just have to get around to writting more on it.)
643 08.12.06 John Coaching
comments = excellet story with a good lead in for sequels with many
happy pregnant women..
(Eskimo: I really wasn't planning on an impregnation theme with this one. Instead
it will be, if I ever get around ti adding to it, a story of introducinb young males with
young females in a somewhat controlled environment. I'm still working on how the fuck I'll
manage that!)
642 08.12.06 Kevin Summer At The Lake
comments = summer at the lake was awesome i had to read it in one
sitting, the build up was fascinating, you knew what was going to happen but
not when, the end was a bit tame as reading from each boys perspective
especially with your talent to pull a reader into your story would have
made this one of the best stories i have read in many years.
keep up the writing as i will be waiting for many more of your
elaborate plots to enthrall me
(Eskimo: Interesting comments. Actually, as I wrote this, I sort of got bored
about half-way through. I thought the Monopoly game scene was the best part, and I
proably shoulf have had that as the final scene before the ending revelations. Maybe
one of these days I'll re-write it.)
641 08.12.06 Fred Big Send Off
comments = I really liked your story! It is a pleasure reading a story
that can use a joke. I like humorand fun in sex and you got it right.
Thanks.
(Eskimo: This story was inspired by a much shorter joke told to me years
ago by my mailman. I jsut added another female to it and made it longer and found
I wrote a pretty good story with a punchline. I really hadn't written anything with
much comedy of late. At least, nothing that stands out. Although I do tend to make
comments with a comedic flair throughout most of my works.)
640 08.12.06 Ray John's Adventure In Babysitting
comments = This story was enjoyable and very well written. No
exaggerations and tottaly within reason considering the circumstances involved.
I have been reading stories in this website for a long time and I
consider this one as one of the best. I have never written to any author but
I feel that this story was worth the effort. Thanks for an entertaining
story.
(Eskimo: Thanks for taking the time to send me your comments. And I hope
you have enjoy my other writtins as well. As for my best, I'm not sure. I've a few other
story's that I thought were better. I've come to enjoy the theme of older females with
younger males, and I've quite a few written on the subject. And in most of my works, I
usually try to add some resembelence to reality whenever possible.)
639 06.12.06 John Rita's Friendly Neighbors
comments = Eskimo, I just wrote to you about "Summer at the Lake", and
I found this story to be almost as erotic! My wife used to live in a
neighborhood where a lot of the wives frequently went topless out in
their yards, and there was always 2 or 3 couples on the street watching a
porno and playing with each other. I would have liked to have heard what
happenned when the girlfriends came over, but I guess that's another
story. You can write back if you'd like... xxxxx@xxxx.com
Thanks again for such fun stories. I haven't been this hard all week!
(Eskimo: Hmmmm, where did you live? And I'm glad I'm providing such
inspiratinal reading material. As for cutting the story short, I jsut decided to
let you the reader think about what might have happened, sort of like food for
thoguht.)
638 06.12.06 John Summer At The Lake
comments = What I especially loved about this story, besides the two
females controlling all those young dicks, were the contests that the
girls set up to see who would get to de-flower the daughter first! I been
in some group parties where we had contests like seeing which guy could
shoot the farthest or highest - that sort of thing - with a special
prize, such as getting to sink your dick into every one of the girls at
the party and give them each 10 or more strokes. I've also come across
some real-life teen party stories that aren't too far from this either!
(Eskimo: Sounds like you could write some stor's of your own...please
tell me more.)
637 06.12.06 Khalid John's Adventure In Babysitting
comments = The end is classic. This was something like we find in
great classic stories. The sexual part of the story was not so well
inter-woven but was not bad either and the reader at no stage seems to be
lost. The grip on the story remains from word Go to The End. The oddity
of age gap between the sex partners has its own taste for those who
have inclination towards this in their fantasies. Last word - nice story.
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it. I liked how it ended, although an earlier
commenter did want me to presue more writting on it, I decline.)
636 05.12.06 Jeffrey Amusement Park Adventure
comments = Beautiful work! Nicely written stories and well developed
plots. Warm, racy, romantic and hot. Keep up the good work. I hope to
read more.
(Eskimo: This was one of those stories, where I used my memories of my youth. Many
years ago, a young lady from whereabouts unknown, and name long forgotten, decied to let
me enjoy some oral pleasure behind a building in the Rivertown section of the Amusement Park
where this story was set at. Well, I've been back there to the park countless times,
and every time I pass the restaraunt, I just have to smile and reminise.)
635 05.12.06 anon Amusement Park Adventure
comments = Richmond and Greenville? Glad to know there's another
pervert in this area. I'm in Richmond.
(Eskimo: LOL! Actally, I'm in neither...but I have ties to the area.)
634 04.12.06 Don Twentieth Reunion
comments = A very good erotic story. How many more siblings to these
two are you going to make with these gals?
(Eskimo: No chance of additional writtings on this one either.)
633 03.12.06 Don John's Adventure In Babysitting
comments = A very good story. Perhaps you should continue it, as I'm
sure that this baby will need to have some full-blooded siblings?
(Eskimo: I can not contiune this one, as the main female character moved away shortly
thereafter the affair took place. Plus, I mentioend that John found his true love in the
girl down the street.)
632 01.02.06 Paul Amusement Park Adventure
comments = I think that "Amusement Park Adventure" is a very good and
well written. I really liked the way you developed the story.
(Eskimo: I've been writting a few story's lately where it's older female and
younger male. And it seems that they are all pretty much well received. )
631 01.12.06 Dave story's
comments = Eskimo,
I'm enjoying some of your stories. (Fortunately, you have content
codes, so I can make good guesses which ones I'd like.) Anyway, the stories
are good, but there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors. (The sort
that spell checkers won't catch; you misspell words in a way that they
become other words.)
(Eskimo: I'm guilty as charged.....)
630 20.11.06 Don Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
comments = I don't know why any of you are wearing any kind of clothing
if both of these black cock are fucking each of you. Why not just lock
the front door of the house (and the back yard) and fuck any where and
any time as the need arises. Perhaps you can alternate the pregnancies
so that one of you is pregnant for 9 months and the next is pregnant
half way through the pregnancy for another 9 months. And perhaps the
girls that are born can start having babies, too.
(Eskimo: Please keep in mind that this story was a complete work of
fiction.)
629 19.11.06 Don Summer At The Lake
comments = What a way to enjoy life as God intended for us to do. I
liked the idea of everyone being naked and fucking at will, anywheres and
everywheres, with both females getting babies fucked into them.
(Eskimo: Yeah, I am pretty sure most guys like the idea as well.)
628 19.11.06 Tina Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = I love the Angel's Week stories - would love to read a
"prequel" about her 14th birthday when she can start enjoying attention from
other girls and the ceremony about that.
(Eskimo: 'Prequel'? Shit! I haven't even finished the fucking series
yet! I've been stuck on the last installment for ten months now, I need a good
ending which would make it stand out, and I jsut have not come across it. Any
suggestions not involving animals, watersports, and incest would be greatly
appreciated.)
627 05.11.06 Sonny Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = Love your writting. Well done
(Eskimo: I started two versions of this one, and only completed the one. The other is
more involved, with more 'players', but as of yet, I have not even come close to finishing it.)
626 05.11.06 Sonny The Cabin
comments = I have found myself over the yrs in a few situations where I
ended up helping members of the fairer sex who had been in bad
relationships. Though nothing ever happened the fantasy was always there.
Love your stories
(Eskimo: This was one of my early works, and still one of my favorites. And, it's
one of many that I've written or have started to write where the male is helping out a female
get out of a bad situation, wether sexual or relatinship.)
625 26.10.06 Walt My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = over all a good story. felt a bit rushed to get from one sex
scene to another. i know that sex is what these stories are about but
maybe a minor rewritewith a little more character and relationship
development. i am a big fan of your stories. i have not read them in
chronological order and but i feel that this is probably one of your earlier
stories. by the way liked dana a lot good read. have you thought about
writting any episodic or continuing stories. i think that a lot of your
stories leave themselves open for a visitto add another chapter.
(Eskimo: I don't think that I'll re-write it. Although you did bring up a
very good point concerning character and relationship development. I thought about
adding more, especially concerning the neighbor's daughter and her girlfriend, but
opted out. I constantly get requests to add more chapters to a number of my
works, but I prefer to leave them as is. NO particular reason, save as a writer,
I tend to get bored easily with the characters of one story. THis explains why
I've so many works started and yet to finish.)
624 25.10.06 Matt Cindy's Quest
comments = While I did see Cindy's infatuation and lust turn more to
love, I did not see any reciprocation from Redding-- it seemed more pity
and caring--him being a nice guy to her than showing love (the basic
love we have for all people, versus the more erotic love between husband
& wife, boyfriend/girlfriend). Upon reflection, I realised I was
wrong. It is very subtle, but you do see him fall in love with Cindy, made
all the more subtle by the point of view and the fact that he himself
does not realise this until late in the story.
Very well done! (oh, and the sex is good, too!)
(Eskimo: Well now, this one's different. Thanks for the turn-around. Sometimes
we read too much into s story, and sometimes, not enough. I was sort of worried about
the sex part, thought maybe I should have lenghtened it some.)
623 25.10.06 J Impregnating My Wife
comments = that is one fucked up relationship....
(Eskimo: I'm glad you enjoyed it...oh, wait, um, never mind.)
622 22.10.06 anon story's
comments = Hello I find your stories to be facinating. I just read the
last two posted. The one about the young biracial female and the male
in the commune. It was touching for some reason. Maybe it made me think
about parts of my life that I wish I could do over. Keep them coming
please.
(Eskimo: I enjoed writting both of them. And the latter one turned out rather
pleasent, imho. And you're not the first reader to comment on saying a story that had
something to do with their own life. I think this is because in 'most' of the stories
that I have written, I try to include some sort of realism. Maybe in a place, or a
time. Or it even could be the type of relationship. Anywya, glad you enjoyed it.)
621 22.10.06 Keyah story's
comments = I read several of your stories and every one was excellent.
You are the most consistent author I have read. Thanks for a very good
read. Keep up the good work.
(Eskimo: Most consistent? Even I'm not too sure about that. But I thank you
anyway. At the moment, I'm in a writting drought....lots of works started, and
not interested in finishing a damn one.)
620 20.10.06 GuyJD Carla's Business Trip
comments = I also write bf/wm stories on the web and, like this one,
prefer to give them fairly happy endings. This was a very good story and
I think it would be cool to give it a sequel. Maybe one of the guys go
to look for her or she is reunited with the 3 as they are passing
through her location. Just a thought!!!
(Eskimo: I've a few more bf/wm stories in the works, as well as the
opposite. As for a sequel? I really don't think so. but since you're an author
as well, knock yourself out on it.)
619 20.10.06 obhobo Teaching And Learning
comments = Great story but please buy a bucket of commas (no buy two)
and sprinkle them before speech marks
(Eskimo: Oops, the grammar police caught me...I beg mercy from the court, your
honor.)
618 19.10.06 Randall Cindy's Quest
comments = Beautifully crafted story...an innerracial delight. Would
make a wonderful story for an R-rated movie on HBO. It has all the
elements of a winner.
(Eskimo: That reminds me....I've noticed a few of my story themes being used
by other authors. Am I upset? Nah. Flattered? Yeah, just wish tehy would mention where
they get the idea from. Anotehr author has told me and thanked me for inspring him to
write one similar to mine. It's been so long that I can not rememebr who it was or
what story, but I thanked him for it.
A HBO movie? well, they better pay me.)
617 20.10.06 Hopeless Romantic Teaching And Learning
comments = This is a fascinating story in so many ways. Indeed, it is
so good that I hope that your MUSE forces you to add several chapters to
this story, perhaps describing the lives of several singles and couples
that live at the commune! :-)
What I like particularly is your description of the commune as
attracting people of several dramatically religious backgrounds and likewise of
differing attitudes about sexuality and nudity. But even more amazing
is that all are able to somehow cope with each other while working
harmoniously both inside and outside the commune. My own sense of idealism
suggests that your setting is totally REALISTIC, even though my 65 years
of life leads me to strongly suspect otherwise. :-(
I just had the idea that you ought to change this story
slightly to show that the commune school took in many of the students as
well as a few of the teachers from Heaven's Mountain Academy. Indeed, an
important part of the reason that the commune was able to do so was
that Bethany was able to successfully teach her students about
Christianity within the multi-cultural atmosphere of the commune. Indeed, even
though some of her students came from the failed Academt, her teaching was
far easier for her students to accept than what wat taught in the ultra
conservative and even bigoted atmosphere of the Academy!
Yes, a few of the folks that practiced other faiths within the commune
likewise taught the principles of their faiths at the school so that
students were able to make their on choices as they approached adulthood!
(Eskimo: Well, it looks like I wrote one that HR reallyt liked lots...thanks!
I'm sorryt aht I didn't include all of his message, as I was so excited from the positive
comments that I accidently hit the delete button...and no, that wasn't sarcasm. Now that
I've posted this one, I've been thinking of a second, but not sure if I will. I
actually started this story well over a year ago, working on it from time to time. I knew
where I wanted to go, but I jsut had a long way to get there. A sequel? You might have to
wait a few years.)
616 19.10.06 Dick Summer At The Lake
comments = God!! I can't believe how erotic the story was. What a
well delivered, well paced story.
(Eskimo: This was one of those works that you either love or hate. And I do think
that the best part is the sex, especially when I involved the game of monopoly, as I thought
I did a great job of building the anticipation and sexual tension during the game. Although,
after reading it once posted, I did make one fatal error while writting it, which anyone that
has played the game would probably figure out. But so far, no one has mentioned it."
615 19.10.06 Dick April
comments = Paul and Beth have a very nice relationship, a very healthy
attitude about sex, and are caring people. Alice and April have a
wonderful attitude about sex as well. The story was very well written and
I would have enjoyed reading about their experinces at the swinger's
club. I'll bet that Alice has a lot of fun training guys when she goes
to college.
(Eskimo: A long time ago, I started to write additinal chapters for this one, but
I've never gotten around to finishing them. Other story ideas have popped into my head, and
I've pursued them, most of the time not even finishing them as well. At the moment,
I've around a hundred works started, so you can see I tend to get bored with writting a piece
and moving on to another. Sometimes I return to one or two and write as little as a sentence,
or as much as a couple of paragraphs, depending on my mood. For both addtional works for
April, I'm about half-way for one, and a quarter through another.)
614 09.10.06 Mel story's
comments = I think you and Art Martin are my favorite ASSTR authors. I
really enjoy your writing and the way you share the sex in the stories.
I'm an old fart, too, and really enjoy you. I'm bisexual. Do you have
any male/male/female stories? If not, can you recommend someone?
I'm a commercial freelance wine and food writer. I've done some
fantasy writing for friends. I enjoy that alot as well.
(Eskimo: Since I'm really not into MM type of stories, I probably will
never write any. Nor do I read any. Usually, when I see that tag listed for a
story, I tend to pass over it, so I really can't suggest another author.)
613 02.10.06 Lonnie Jessica
comments = Interesting story. I liked the concept of how to build a
community by making every man a possible father.
612 02.10.06 Lonnie Jeanne
comments = Nice story. I like all your stuff.
Thanks for writing.
(Eskimo: LOL, if you're reading this commetn and the one previous, then you
just have to read the next one.)
611 30.09.06 A Guy story's
comments = 1. Twentieth Reunion ok, the best of the bunch. it's a bit
shallow, but it is a fantasy. the story really could use a bit more in
the relationship development between the man and each of the 2 women, a
three way relationshipe is hard. as it is, the story feels like a one
night stand, and then suddenly they are a family living together.
2. Jessica weakest, it is an end-of-the-world suck and fuck fest.
again not much relationship development. dumb thing is, a sex free for
all is a weak way to repopulate the earth.
3. Jeanne this story had a strong start, with the black man
saves/meets white woman and they fall in love. (no white whore bitch getting
used by the black stud playa! is this allowed in an interracial story?
Jerry Springer is gonna get you!)
the story had a pretty strong, deep middle with the first crisis - the
cancer scare, hysterectomy and no more children. i would have like
more on the crisis and the relationship that develops from it, but your
choice.
then the ending, where it gets weak and then falls apart IMHO. in the
second crisis both daughters offer to have the children FOR mom, but the
problems of that relationship event are barely touched, when they meet
other guys - and the whole thing suddenly turns into a orgy/fuck fest.
sam, the hubby, suddenly turns into a cuckold lover w/o a problem and
the wombless wife turns into a slut for her daughters other men. since
I saw no evidence of this before, it was like the whole characters of
the wife and hubby changed, and the whole story changed.
it was like you got tired and took an easy way out, instead of writing
of the turmoil of the wombless wife getting "replaced" by her own
daughters, or of the husband being unfaithful, or the daughters difficulty
giving the children up, or any of the other difficult choices you could
have gone into.
but that is just my $0.05 opinion. don't spend it all in one
place.....
(Eskimo: $0.05 can but a lot, if you use it right. Obviously you spent a lot
of time getting real in-depth with my story's, and I appreciate it. And, as usual,
you tend to read more out of a story than is actually there.)
610 30.09.06 Daniel Dana
comments = awsome story i loved it :)
(Eskimo: thank you.)
609 23.09.06 Cathy story page.
comments = hello, i am Cathy 25 y.o. girl, longhaired blonde, petite,
52kg 168cm,I have a fantasy could you writte story with my theme??? I am
shy girl, but one day I stay on bus stop in the city. Its near sex
shop. I am alone there and one older man come to me and asked about me. he
try persuade me go with him into porn movie cabin in sex shop. I dont
want but he beg a lot only me stay with him there, and he promise dont
touch me. It make me horny imagine the situation looking older guy jerk
cock. I will go with him into backside of sex shop look porn. He will
jerk then persuade me jerk him, suck and let him fuck me. But there
will be other men. they look me come inside and 3 other men changed on me
in cabine. Could you writte it? Thanks a lot. cathy
(Eskimo: Yeah....right. Seems like a synopisis has now been written, so
if anyone would like to write a story, go right ahead. At the moment, I've over
ninety story's waiting to be finished, I would like to get one or two of them
done before I start on another one.)
608 21.09.06 Adam Eastern Woodland People
comments = need info on the subject on top
(Eskimo: WTF?????)
607 20.09.06 Jeff The Cottage
comments = that was great. I could picture this in my head(the big one
not the small one)haha. I am a want to be nudist. I sat naked and read
this while stoking my dick and loved it. write soon my e-mail is
xxxx@xxxx.com thanks again. Jeff
P.S. great plot all the way thru. loved interaction with all familes.
(Eskimo: This was one of my early works, from 1999. The setting was
inspired by a visit to the area mentioned in the story, and a longing to enjoy
the elements there au natural! All I had to do was add a story.)
606 16.09.06 Rhonda Impregnating My Wife
comments = GREAT!
(Eskimo: Even though I wrote this one over two years ago, I am still
surprsied that readers enjoy it. I was thinking that maybe it was a bit much,
but most everyone seemed to enjoy it.
605 13.09.06 justme Doris
comments = Hello Eskimo
I just finished reading your story "Doris." As usual, your stories are
top notch. You have a real knack with words and description. The way
you describe things, makes the reader feel like they are right there with
the characters as the story unfolds. Or at least wish that they were
right there. :)
I love the way you write. I hope that you will give us many more first
rate stories. You ended this story with the sentence".... both of us
wondering how this adventure will continue." Well I sure would love to
hear more about these two characters. HINT! HINT! :)
(Eskimo: I liked this story, seems the ones with older females-younger males
tend to work out well. Look for more of this type in the future. As for more
on Doris and her future sexual adventures, you'll have to dream them up
for yourself.
604 12.09.06 justme My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = Hello Eskimo
I have read a few of your other stories, and I have greatly enjoyed all
of them. But I have to say that I think this is one of the best. I
LOVED it! The dialoge is great, the plot is believable and interesting,
and the story moves along, yet not so fast as to loose the reader. Once I
started reading it, I couldn't quit.
You stated at the end of your story that you thought maybe you had
added to many characters, but I don't think so. In fact I think that you
have just the right number of characters in the story. There are enough
to create endless possibilities, yet not enough to create confusion as
to who is who.
Please... you "have" to write a sequel to this one. :) Now that you
have laid the groundwork, you could keep this going for quite awhile. As I
said, the possibilities are unlimited. Please don't quit now, and leave
us all hanging in mid air. That would be mean of you. :)
This was a wonderful story, and I enjoyed every word of it. You are a
GREAT author. Keep up the good work.
(Eskimo: I love it when readers stroke my ego! I tend to confuse myself
from time to time as I work ona story, this is probably because I work on so
many at one time. Why? Well, ig et bored with one and move on to another. As
for a sequal? Sorry, not a chance.
603 08.09.06 Guy Twentieth Reunion
comments = Welcome back.Glad to see you again write a good story after
some of your recent crap.
(Eskimo: I'm shocked, I really expected Guy to hate this one...oh well.)
602 07.09.06 Jacob Summer At The Lake
comments = Eskimo, this is quite simply one of the best stories I'v
ever read, period. I actually found you through the Angel's Week of
Religious Breeding series and I absolutely loved that too, I really hope you
are continuing to write sequels for that series! Anyways, I absolutely
love the group and impreg themed stories so please write more of those!
Thank You!
(Eskimo: You know, it amazes me, I really didn't think this was going to
be a good story, but it seemed people liked it. As for teh 'Angel' series, I only
have one chapter left, and I'm having trouble finding a way to end it. I'm sure it'll
cum to me eventually.)
601 31.08.06 Oscar Camp Diary
comments = Please try to write a sequel for this story, I assume you
will try to have lori and her parents involved. Since the Main characters
parents are also swingers try not to have incest. This is a great story
good job!!!
(Eskimo: This is one of my older works, and is sort of sci-fi'ish in nature. In
the original story, I did extend it to include the parents and the swinging lifestyle,
but I shortened it, as I didn't want to make it too long of a read. I have thought about
a sequesl, but as most of you know, I'm not a fan of writting sequeals.
600 27.08.06 Justme Summer At The Lake
comments = WOW! That is about all I can say to sum up my feeling about
this story. I have read a lot of stories, but I don't think that I've
ever read one that was any better. From the characters, to the plot to
the dialogue, it was great. There was enough sex to keep the story very
interesting, and the reader wondering what was coming next, yet not
enough to be overpowering.
I have read a few of your other stories, and I am going to look more of
them up. You are a very talented author. I guess all I can say, is that
I wish that I could get invited to a summer vacation like that. :)
Please keep up the good work.
(Eskimo: I do believe oneof the hardest things to accomplish is to
provide a good mix of sex and plot....soemtimes it seems I don't put enough
sex in a story, and soemtimes, way too much. It looks like this one will be
another of my top works, maybe not the best, but in the top twenty percent, and
I've now finished one hundred and thirteen. Of course, I've probably the same
number of ones that I've started and yet to finish.)
I would love to hear your opinion of these comments, or about my stories. So please, let me know what you thought of it. All comments, good and bad, will be greatly appreciated. If you would like for me to respond, which I shall, please add your email address in the comment area. Thank you.