399 03.12.05 Hopeless Romantic Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
comments = The setup of this story BOTHERS me so much that I could not bear to
read your story. :-(
But frankly, I think that our sex organs have evolved over the
millennium so that healthy women conceive during REPEATED enjoyable
intercourse IN SPITE of their best efforts to use primitive birth control
techniques (excluding 'the pill' and surgical sterilization). Conversely, it
is my understanding that successful lactation naturally inhibits most
woman's ovulation, although using that concept as a birth control
strategy is considered UNRELIABLE by modern standards.
Accordingly, I think that the story would be more REALISTIC if both
mother and daughter became pregnant more than once by the same black man
IN SPITE of the often expressed wishes of all three of them. Indeed, I
suspect that it is the willful VIOLATION of several accepted COMMUNITY
STANDARDS that enhances their adrenalin flows and thus greatly
strengthens their mutual sexual enjoyment of this interracial threesome
relationship. Doing it all 'bareback' should just spur their pleasure yet
another notch! :-(
(Eskimo: Yeah, so you sort of liked the story, this is good, we're making
process.)
398 03.12.05 Alan Kentucky Girl
comments = It was a bit long but a touching tale! It would have been
fun if she shares himm with her sisters and maybe even the parents!!
(Eskimo: Loved the comments, but! I was trying to keep it somewhat
realistic. Yeah, an earlier commenter said it was highly unrealistic that
her father would have just dropped her off at his door, but, doing her sisters
and mother? Okay, it does sound interesting, not to mention fun, but then the
story would have been even longer, and that was your first complaint.)
397 03.12.05 Hopeless Romantic Iqbal
comments = <>
For starters, I usually ignore stories written by or about southeast
Asia for a long list of foolish reasons. Thus, I read this one JUST
BECAUSE of your request for comments, sensing that you had written a rather
unusual story.
Overall, this story is lacking a certain 'something' compared to your
usual efforts. But upon looking back it could be due to the complete
lack of dialog....yada, yada, yada.....
(Eskimo: Well, you did get the 'foolish' part right. Think about it,
the writting style was completely different from my normal methods, chances
are, I didn't write it.)
396 12.11.05 Mohammed
Toys 2
comments = the story is seducting but too long
so try writing a short story behanchod,
(Eskimo: Too long? Checking the file size, it's probably below average in size.)
395 03.12.05 Bobby Carla's Business Trip
comments = loved the way you explained in details
(Eskimo: Thank you, you can never have enough details....or sex!)
394 27.11.05 msht Cassie And The Biker Twins
comments = that apartments with the snow. sounds like those just
across the line into mich. in whiteword township.. i enjoy your stores
(Eskimo: No, actually, I had no particular apartment comples in mind,
since I'm not from the Toledo area, I had no clue of any to begin with. In
all of my works, I do try not to give an exact street name in a particular
city, maybe a compass direction, but that's about it. And in the stories that
are not fiction, such as 'Swingers Diary' and 'Listening In', I change the settings
so no one can figure where they took place.....although one or two readers have come
close with some guess's.)
393 25.11.05 Tony Stories
comments = Well done. Keep up the excellent work. I always enjoy your
stories.
(Eskimo: You know, it's just dawned on me, but it looks like that
I've gotten a bit of a following here. Not in my wildest dreams did I
ever think that I would get so many readers. Of course, the downside to
all of this is trying to come up with some fresh material. But, I'm sure
something will cum up.)
392 18.11.05 Dan Weekend With The Boys
comments = Liked the story. How about another chapter and how about if
she got knocked up and what happens after that.
Keep up the good work.
(Eskimo: Thankfully, this one went under the radar of Hopless Romantic. Anyway,
I'm glad you liked the story. But, there will not be a sequel, sorry. I've way too
many works that I've started and have yet to even come close to finishing to write a
sequel. However, if you want to, you're more than welcome to give it a shot.)
391 17.11.05 hopeless romantic Wife's Friend
comments = So when does Amy become UNEXPECTEDLY pregnant after all thus
UNPLANNED fucking? Again, that awful RISK ought to add spice to their
strong pleasure. :-(
(Eskimo: You know, you really do have too much free time on your hands.)
390 17.11.05 hopless romantic Widower Fun
comments = << So she moved in as well, sharing a room with Kim. Kim
took Mindy's pregnancy real well, acted like the surrogate father. It's
been ten years, since then Mindy had another child, fathered by me, as
did Kim. She let me drill her for a week to knock her up.>>
The ending of this story is particularly lame. But I think that it
would serve nicely as the rough outline of a fascinating sequel. Indeed its
small-town setting where everybody knows Kent's 'business' would just
add extra spice to the story. :-)
<>
There are rather involved scientific explanations as to why one
unprotected fucking leads to pregnancy and another doesn't. But the brief
explanation sounds more like a very quick decision by Lady Luck. But I do
think that their knowledge of the GAMBLE ought to add something to their
sexual pleasure, especially as they strive to enjoy their pleasure but
avoid that inevitable climax as long as possible. But do note my
suspicion that her strong climax somehow increases her chances of conceiving!
:-(
(Eskimo: Well, at least you sort of liked it. You really ought to express
your feelings better.)
389 16.11.05 hopeless romantic Impregnating My Wife
comments = <>
This sentence totally chilled my enthusiasm for reading the rest of the
story. There must be some folks that are somehow attracted to the
thought of FORCING a woman to conceive a child, but I am not one of them.
Instead, I would rather see this story revised so that this wife is
still nymphomaniac, still enjoys gangbang parties and swinging parties and
the like, but insists on doing it 'bareback' for reasons of her own.
Indeed, at the bottom of her nymphomania is a love-hate relationship with
pregnancy so that each time she climaxes with a cock in her depths
(thus forcing his copious ejaculation) becomes a strongly sweet-sour
experience.
Inevitably, she discovers from time to time that a new pregnancy is
underway, but she doesn't have a prayer of figuring out which of dozens of
men that that had fucked her over the past month might be the
biological father of the child she is carrying. Indeed, Lady Luck could have
easily decided that this child will be a new racial mixture for her
increasingly multi-colored family!
By the way, while she is OBVIOUSLY PREGNANT, this nymphomaniac ought to
enjoy exhibiting her pregnant body to all of those men that have a
fetish for pregnant women, and watching them become hopelessly aroused by
the thought of fucking her.
(Eskimo: Not sure what to say here...other than get over it.)
388 16.11.05 Jer Turning The Tables
comments = This was well written and the story was just great. I
enjoyed the surprise ending. Keep up the good work
(Eskimo: I've recieved very few comments about this one, and
I'm not sure why. It does have an interesting ending, I do have to admit.
Not your usual interacial story where the white hubby get's cuckolded. Now
don't get me wrong, I enjoy IR stories, as well as most other genres, but I
kind of get put off by those that make their IR stories where they humiate
the hubby(Or anyone else). But, I likened this to my earlier work, The Camp,
where revenge is involved. Of the two, I think I prefer the earlier one.)
387 15.11.05 Lee Justice For Megan
comments = Wow! I just stumbled on this story. One of the best I've
read in more than 10 years of reading erotic fiction. I'm going savor the
rest of your work. read one or two a month, so i won't run out. I
hope you replenish the supply. Thanks!
(Eskimo: By far, this seems to be my best story. Even my wife
liked it! So good that I'm afraid that if someone reads it first, they'll be
dissapointed with the rest of my writtings. As for works on the board,
there's good news, as I have started typing again, albeit very slowly. I'm
going from story to story, adding bits and pieces here and there. Maybe
I'll actually get one done by the end of the year.)
386 15.11.05 Dick Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = I enjoyed the way the story built to the weekend. Ron and
Candy finally got the chance to express their feelings for each other
and everyone seemed to get what they wanted.
I wish life could really be like that.
(Eskimo: This was one of those stories where I started it one way,
and then started another story with a similar style, with me actually
finishing the second one and not the first. It's also one of those hidden
gems I've written. Most stories that people write an opinion on, I may recieve
a negative comment or two. But not this one. It has to be in my own personal
top ten of my works.)
385 13.11.05 Wes Kentucky Girl
comments = Hi, I just finished reading "Kentucky Girl". I can't recall
reading any erotic literature previously that emphasizes moral and
legal concerns in the context of the story. Not only did your feature
character acknowledge these concerns, but acted responsibly throughout the
story line. Very impressive. You were completely successful in
painting a visual image for your reader without resorting to shock and
implausible scenerios.
OK, the concept of this young woman appearing on his doorstep
un-announced with her parents knowldge and permission does place this story in
the category for unrealistic fantasy. An added positive element for me
was the location you used for this story and the similarities to my own
personal experiences. My early years growing up was in a small town
just west of Dayton, Oh.
Oh yeah, I enjoyed your story very much. I will definitely be reading
more of your work.
(Eskimo: I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I did think I made it as
realistic as possible, and Ia gree, having Trixie dropped off by her father
was a bit of a fantasy, but it worked well with the story. And you're not the
first to commetn about this story hitting home concerning the locale it was set
in. I've done an above average amount of travelling in my life, and I've yet to
qualify as a senior citezen. Almost all the places mentioned in all of my stories,
I've actually been to, and in some cases, lived there as well. I guess all that
moving about the country has stimulated my mind somewhat, hence some rather inspred
works have come from it.)
384 12.11.05 sniper Snow Job
comments = killer story man
(Eskimo: Thank you. Although not in my top ten, it's still a good
read, not to mention a nice fantasy.)
383 11.11.05 Alec Summer Heat
comments = Good story. I do wish you would make sure of spellings and
grammer. Not that I am picky but the mistakes distract from the story
line. Overall I thought the story was great. I don't think there is a man
who has not wanted to do his sisters when he was in his early teens and
they were cock teasers. LOL I think some of your ideas for future
stories are very good. The one of the young lady who returns from the Army
to her home in what used to be Tennessee is of particular interest.
(Eskimo: Another story that I'll have to go voer once again. This story
insired by the memory of summer vacatins as a youth to the local mentioned in
the story. Although no peeping on any relatins (okay, maybe a cousin or two), there
was one time a nearby cabin with some teenage hotties (ie: they were alive!), that
were big teases. As for the story he mentioned, I'll pass along to him what I've had
written so far, and let him decide what he wants to do.)
382 10.11.05 AJ Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = this story is pretty cool
(Eskimo: I like happy readers.)
381 09.11.05 Bob Ranch Hand
comments = The ending was fine. It leaves the story to stand complete,
if no sequel is ever written. If you do write the sequel(s), great!
Then again, I thought the first Star Wars movies was the best because
it ended in a similar manner, and was able to stand alone as a complete
piece of work, regardless of whether or not a seques was ever made (as
we know, they were, and they were not as good)
Hoping you can do sequels better than George Lucas!
(Eskimo: I've actually have started a sequel to this one, time will
tell if I ever get it done.)
380 08.11.05 Bob My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = Hot story! And no, there weren't too many characters! Carmen
was the only character who didn't develop, but she had her place when
she appeared.
Technical suggestion - consider running a spelling & grammar checker
over the story before posting.
(Eskimo: I jsut never got around to having Carmen join in on the fun. As
for the 'Technical' issues, I've ben working on that, going over stories that
I've written, and finding and correcting mistakes. It seems spellcheck isn't
100% accurate....and my rgammar never was that great, anyhow.)
379 06.11.05 Jim Beginning Of A Harem
comments = Another fine story! Nicely balanced elements of sex,
interesting characters and plot....And this story DEFINITELY deserves more
chapters......How about it? Thanks for writing! Jim
(Eskimo: I wrote one followup story, and that will probably be it. I
Just don't like the idea of keeping on writting about the same line, as I tend
to get bored with one set of characters. I much prefer to write about someone
else in another setting. Which is probably why no new story as come from me in
a few months.)
378 05.11.05 Jim Sam And Crystal
comments = Nice story, interesting twist with the games and multiple
women, but the nicest part is the three in love with each other! Good
job and thanks for writing!
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed this one.)
377 04.11.05 hopless romantic Snow Job
comments = << I was still, savoring the after glow of a great orgasm,
our bodies still connected at the hips, as I had my upper body supported
by both arms straight out, when I heard a sound behind me, of
clapping.>>
This is a rather surprising twist to your story, but it explains why
the otherwise obviously single Aunt Bev wasn't worried about pregnancy as
Nathan ejaculated copiously and repeatedly into her depths. But as I
think about the story, I seriously wonder how Nathan could be so totally
clueless about the peculiar lifestyle of his family until that very
moment! :-(
(Eskimo: Well, you would be amazed at soem family secrets you might
discover years after the fact. I could go there in detail, but why drag my
dead realtives out of the closet. Kind of funnny in a way, from a modern
viewpoint. Seems everyone is concerned about things happening these days,
in regards to underage sex, pedo, incest etc,...YET, you would be surprised at
what dirt you can uncover from the past when you start searching through
things and asking the right person the right question.)
376 04.11.05 hopeless romantic Sam And Crystal
comments = This story is delightfully long, but certainly you need its
entire length to struggle through Crystal's problem at being such a
large woman, and Sam's strongly lesbian tendencies.
Note that I am glad that you included the few lines about her
miscarriage, as it should have forcefully reminded the READER about the awful
risks of unprotected sex. However, I think that both characters should
have stopped to reflect upon the possibility that she might have
successfully carried that child to term. Indeed that thought might have lead
each of them into a combination dream and nightmare about being married
with children and all of the complications thereof. :-(
<>
I am not at all sure what his gang-bang does for the story, but this
HOPELESS ROMANTIC is particularly thrilled with the way itends! :-)
(Eskimo: For some reason, I figured you would like this one, as
wella s not be too keen for the other one you critiqued today. Seems like
when I go into detail on a relationship, the story flows better. As for the
gangbang game, jsut a fantasy....I thought about the 'winner' getting more
than just a womb full of cum, but didn't go on with it.)
375 04.11.05 Sid Educating Rita
comments = READING THIS STORY MADE ME CUM AT LEAST 5 TIMES. YOU WERE SO
LUCKY TO GET SUCK A FUCK!
(Eskimo: lol, glad you found some relief from my story. Keep on
reading...or whatever....)
374 03.11.05 Dave re: message #372
comments = The story is AfterShock by dotB and can be found on his
author page on ASSTR
(Eskimo: Thank you. Hopefully he'll see your post and find the story,
as he didn't leave his email address.)
373 30.10.05 anon The Cottage
comments = Just finished "The Cottage" a really fine piece of writing,
as are all the stories of yours I've read.
I have one negative comment which is that I find this distracting from
your fine story telling.
Your is a personal pronoun.
You're is a contraction of you are; you mix them up.
(Eskimo: Thanks for reading my works. And sorry about the grammar.
I just went through all my works to correct mistakes, and I'm sure
that I've missed a few things.)
372 30.10.05 dawiz Stories
comments = Have been trying to find a specific story that I can't
remember the title of, can you help? Have enjoyed many of your stories.
1 . Main character is a older man who owns a old wooden boat powered by
a steam engine. It also has modern features like radar.
2. He rescues a woman he finds after a tidal wave destroys a coastal
town. He also finds and rescues a cat.
3. He lives on an island that has a hidden narrow passage into a
secluded bay.
4. There are 5 other residents of the island, the owner - an old man in
a wheelchair, his 2 daughters, his nurse/housekeeper/lover and her
young son.
5. They are "visited" by member of the Canadaian Coast Guard searching
for Russian Mafia types.
Any Ideas of the title/author?
(Eskimo: Um, I haven't a clue......try using google.)
371 30.10.05 Les Stories
comments = just want to say that I enjoy reading your stories and find
that they are written exceptionally well. thank you for your erotic and
greatly written with awsome plots.
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed them. Since I started writting
years ago, I'm constantly trying to come up with different plots. I think
that's why I', at a sort of a standstill right now. Yeah, I've some plots
that I'm working on, but they seem to be the same old same old. Give me time,
maybe I'll get something done by the end of the year.)
370 30.10.05 Vic The Cottage
comments = Lovely story, but I'm still not sure I understand the
motives behind the daughter's conversion. The rest is written in a very
credible and compelling fashion.
(Eskimo: Sorry, I never thought it was important to include how or
why concerning the changing attitude of the daughter. Guess I just didn't
think it was important enough to write about in the story.)
369 30.10.05 Kalifornia Caribbean Cruise
comments = it was a good suck & fuck, but it could have been better.
there was no emotion. he married Sandy after a few days, seems to
have no real feelings for her, she is just another cum receptical.
then Kayla loses her virginity, she gets emotionally involved and wants
to become his second wife, fuck and suck Sandy on the side. she
doesn't really know these people!
then on their pre-wedding night they do women/wife swapping! the
bride(s), best men, groom, relatives of Kayla swap in a meaningless sex
party.
as a fantasy it is ok, but if it had emotion it could have been better
than a suck and fuck.
(Eskimo: Yeah, but it's a good fuck-n-suck story. COme on, it was all
fantasy. Actualy, when I started this one, I wanted to be just Joe and Sarah,
but I sort of got carreid away.)
368 30.10.05 Edd Caribbean Cruise
comments = Superb!
(Eskimo: Well, some don't agree, guess that's their opinion. This is an
older story that I went and re-edited.)
367 30.10.05 Derek Comunity Breeding Project
comments = Nice idea. I would like to read more of this.
(Eskimo: I've been kicking around a few other stories with the same
theme. Matbe one day I'll get them finished.)
366 26.10.05 Gino Ranch Hand
comments = first off i'd like to say this is a very good story, on a
league of the justice/megan story. it could have been longer and i
would like to see connie and daughter involved but i know you're fairly
busy with writing new stories. i've been reading a few and some of the
shorter ones don't quite compare with the longer stories but then again i
just like to read. keep up the good work
(Eskimo: These three stories are by far my top three works, and you can
include 'Kentucky Girl' and 'Fantasy Vacation' as the top five. Although 'Couple
Fun', 'Setting Up Roger', 'Relunctance To Swing', 'Nudist', and 'Opening Her Eyes'
are personal favorites as well. And although others have agreed that I should have
lengthened it by including Connie and her daughter, I opted not to. Of course, if I
ever start writting again, maybe I can add another chapter. As for lenght of stories,
it does seem the longer ones are better. My favorite shorter works that I have
written are 'Tale of Two Titties' and 'Listening In', but these are just two. I'm
probably missing a few other gems.)
365 26.10.05 IL Stories
comments = Your stories are VERY good. I have read several and will
read more. You are in serious need of an editor. I am much too old now,
but if I was younger I would volunteer. There are many spelling errors
and some of grammar.
(Eskimo: Yeah, this seems to be the number one complaint. During
last week, I've been going over and editing each story again, usually finding
errors and correcting them. If you've noticed, I've been doing this alpabetically,
and hope to have them all done within a week or so. Of course, I'm not saying that
they'll be mistake free.)
364 26.10.05 Ricardo Summer Heat
comments = Skimo, I really loved this one! As a matter of fact I love
most of your works. Even my poor English has not been a barrier for
having so much fun out of reading your works. I wish you a long career as
an Erotic Fiction Writer.
(Eskimo: Not to sure about a long career, as at the moment I'm
contemplating the idea of not writting anymore. Ni need for anyone to
send messages of encouragment, I've jsut sort of lost interest at the
moment. Maybe in a while I'll ge the urge again. On the other hand, I
did come up with a fantastic story line, and have been kicking it around
in my head the last few days. Sort of a 'current events' story, with a
'what if' twist.)
363 25.10.05 A J Greg's New Housemates
comments = don't know why but this story is just funny.
8/10. great story
(Eskimo: And what's the most amusing about this story, was that I didn't
like it when I got done writting it. I seriously thought about deleting it.
But, glad I didn't, as it seemed to make at least one reader smile.)
362 25.10.05 A J Kentucky Girl
comments = this is my favourite story of yours yet. this is a very
realistic story based on things that can or have happened. but yo ruined it
with the ending about the pills. i think you sholud have just left it
with the marraige surprise or extended it a bit more to describe there
furure. i give 9/10 execellent.
(Eskimo: About the ending, throughout this story, I used a humorous
style of writting. So, had to end the story with humour as well. You're the
first to be negative on it, however. I'm glad the story seemed real to you,
I've found this to be important in writting a good story, although fantasy
is imortant as well.)
361 24.10.05 A J My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = this story is an execellent stroy for who fantasize about
there step-moms (or moms) that would usually never happaned but this
story was very good i give 7/10 there werent to many chractors and the fact
that this story didn't have to many charactors as most would but you
give good short statments of who they are and no doing a paragraph worthy
(Eskimo: Thanks for the good critique. I always worry if I'm writting
to much detail when I describe a character, or even a scene. I want to help the
reader to visualize teh situation, but not cause too much reading overload.)
360 23.10.05 partyguial2k5 The Initiation
comments = Where is the continuation to this story
(Eskimo: It hasn't been written! Shoot, wrote this one what? Five years
ago? Pretty sure I'll never write any continuation on this one.)
359 23.10.05 Jada Twins In Training
comments = I can't wait to read this story.
(Eskimo: You'll be waiting a while.....not sure when or if I'll ever
finish it. I've so many other stories just like it, that I hate copying
story lines.)
358 23.10.05 Jada Summer Heat
comments = That was an amazing story. **********
(Eskimo: Yeah, it was. I'm thinking that this one is in my top ten.)
357 22.10.05 Mike Ellen's Erotic Adventures & Justice For Megan
comments = I just read a couple of your stories and reading them has
kept me up all night. I just read, Ellen's Erotic Adventures and Justice for Megan
Your stories are Fantastic!
(Eskimo: Thank you. The first one is what I would call a sleeper. Not
too many people have read it, but it is quite good, in my opinion. The second
been an overwhelming sucess. That and a few of my other newer works has left
me wondering how I can top them, or if I'll even try...we'll see,)
356 21.10.05 gino Summer Heat
comments = good story, i thought the justice/megan story was better
as it had more of a set up to it but still a pretty good read. if you
like you can e-mail me at ***********, rest assured i will keep
reading your work as it is very enjoyable, you did have a few misspelled
words but with so many stories in the works you probably don't have a
chance to proof read everything.
(Eskimo: Wow Gino, three reviews on a Friday night? You must not have
had a date, or you're married. Like you, I enjoyed Megan more than this one. And
yeah, there are typo's. but not as bad as they once were. At this moment I'm
going through each story and editing them again. Hard work, but someone has to do
it. Seems I'm not in the writting mood of late, so not working on any new stories
at this time. BUt no big deal, as I've close to ninety stories published online
right now. My last few have been smashing hits, so thinking on taking it slow and
easy on about a dozen to get an even hundred, then calling it quits.)
355 21.10.05 gino Justice For Megan
comments = best story i've read in a long time, i just stumbled onto
your work and i think i'm going to enjoy being here
(Eskimo: I'm overjoyed that you like my works. Keep on reading,
you might find smoe more you find interesting. And if not, go on to the
one.)
354 21.10.05 gino Fishing Trip to Canada
comments = i've been to Canada twice fishing, nothing like this ever
happened to me(what a shame) the last time i was only 12 yrs old. might
have to go back and get into the great fishing and who knows what else,
i thought this was a great story man
(Eskimo: This was inspired by a actual trip, and an actual fantasy.
Yeah, I would have liked it to happen as well, if I was single.)
353 21.10.05 anon Molly's Boys
comments = Very good
(Eskimo: I enjoyed this story, as it was on my favorite subject, which
is group sex. I've probably a good dozen stories in the works involving this
particular genre, ex\specially the older woman and younger men aspect.
352 21.10.05 a guy Carrie
comments = Kathy, Cathy, and Carrie. there was some name confusion in
the story Carrie.
(Eskimo: Kept ya on your toes, eh? I'll read through it again, I may have
screwed up here and there, not like that isn't possible.)
351 21.10.05 Simon Summer Heat
comments = I've enjoyed nearly all your stories, have the page
bookmarked even, and I'll continue reading them as they come. Great stuff,
well written + proofread (very important).
(Eskimo: Another of my top stories, but unfortunatly, a 'coming of age'
story that I'll probably have to delete from my site. I have been going over my
works, and editing them once again, and have found that they're better reads.
Some may not be the type of story that you migght enjoy, but in that case, just
go to the next one and try it out.)
350 18.10.05 wetlander Camp Diary
comments = Becomes somewhat stultifying after a short while . . .
Didn't bother to read the rest. You make your point tho - The sex acts
themselves are essentially uninteresting when out of a context.
(Eskimo: Excuse me, got to go look up 'stultifying', if I can find that
fuckin' dictionary...meanwhile, I really wasn't making a point, just writting
a story. Another futuristic event, like what I mentioned in message #348. The
future has been on my mind a lot, wondering what is in store for the human race,
what with the Allah and Jesus freaks around us and such. And then there's the
Corporate World, they've done us a lot of good, from destroying our planet's
resources to 'slave' labor and everything in between. Obviously, I'm not
republican.)
349 18.10.05 wet2lander Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = Very nice development of their relationship. Your philosophy
of sexual learning as presented in this story is a sex-positive
approach that I honor. Wish it had been available culturally as I grew up (to
the extent that that ever occurred). Good job!
(Eskimo: Yeah, definitily one of my better stories. I worked a long time
on this one. And time is something I haven't had letely. Been thinking of
retiring from writting. Even though I've about a hundred stories started. This
was actually my second attempt at this story theme, the first one has yet to be
completed, and it may never will be.)
348 18.10.05 Kalifornia Breeding Of Chris
comments = well. not my cuppa tea, nope.
it is not the racial thing, but the coldess, the lack of caring.
it is like they are a bunch of animals, not even erotic since you have
to have human emotions to be that.
but maybe someone else's thing. btw, eskimo, have a pie?
(Eskimo: have a pie????, no idea what that's about. Anyway, you sort
of mised the point. The story was set into the future, in a society that uses
sex for not just reproduction, but for entertainment as well. No inhibitions,
jealousy, mind games, or anything ewlse. Just good old fun sex. And pleasureable
sex at that.)
347 18.10.05 Jaclyn Candy Learns about Love and Sex
comments = This story made me cum as many times as Candy did and I
loved it. It brought up the old feelings of exploring a new person. I 'm
a younge women who;s married and already if looking for other ways to
get off. This story made me desire my husband in ways I haven't before
and I thank-you. The story was very well written and painted a
beautiful, vivid picture in my mind.
(Eskimo: Oh yeaaahhhhh, another female fan. I'm glad you enjoyed
the story. And Mrs. Eskimo and I hope your hubby enjoyed your desires.
This probably ranks as one of my top ten stories, even though some would
say it's pedo, since it concerns underage sex. Speaking of which,
I've been thinking of taking this one, as wel as a few others, offline.)
346 17.20.05 Hopless romantic Changing Values
comments = Another delight for a HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-)
(Eskimo: I sort of figured that you would enjoy this one.)
345 17.10.05 Hopeless Romantic The Cabin
comments = Once I got beyond her history, this story is a delight for a
HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-) <>
There many natural and disease related reasons for infertility. But I
have a suspicion that chronic bad sex and chronic marital problems can
lead to TEMPORARY infertility. Accordingly, this HOPELESS ROMANTIC
prefers that VERY GOOD SEX and a very stable and satisfying relationship
EVENTUALLY led this couple into a totally unexpected pregnancy.
Note that I can't escape the idea that sex is all about making babies
and taking care of them until they become sexual adults. Accordingly,
very good sex within a healthy relationship ought to lead a couple into
pregnancy in spite of their selfish wishes (in the absence of birth
control pills or the like)!
(Eskimo: Hmmm, lot to say there, HR. I never did say why she
couldn't bear a child, didn't think I needed to. But at his much older
age, and probably less viable and healthy sperm, this may also have
contributated to their lack of having any offspring together. Thanks
for your comments.(
344 11.10.05 Don Melanie, An Introduction
comments = sounded real, believable, well written and very erotic
(Eskimo: I really had the intention of continuing this one in more
chapters, but it seemed so real, why make it more into a fantasy?)
343 08.10.05 Jim Olive
comments = this story i just read i love it the way she playd u
at first till you got her in bed you should have put in a
little ass fucking also thank you for letting the other people
read your storys
(Eskimo: Nice to see that my readers are just as perverted as I am.
And also enjoy a sex story with an actual story!)
342 03.10.05 Richard The Camp
comments = Enjoyed the story and hope to find more of your work to
read as lay awake at night.
(Eskimo: Hope you do enjoy reading my other works. Currently, I'm going
through and re-editing my stories when I have the time. Glad you enjoyed this
one!)
341 30.09.05 anon Olive
comments = Super
(Eskimo: I do enjoy the comments, even the ones that are short and
sweet!)
340 29.09.05 Tom Big Send Off
comments = I like the use of my name.
(Eskimo: Okay, glad you enjoyed it.)
339 24.09.05 Greg The Cottage
comments = Although it was demented, and perverted and a rather odd
fantasy. I found it good material and enjoyed it as much as it sounds like
you did writing it.
(Eskimo: Interesting....I agree with perverted. However, not sure about
demented and odd fantasy? The story was inspired by a vacation we took years ago
up into Ontario, where we took a sight-seeing cruise out of Parry Sound. Seeing
the many cottages on the islands in Georgian Bay got me to thinking. As did the
rather obnoxiuos French-Canadian...long story there, but anyway, I am glad you
enjoyed it.)
338 18.09.05 Johnny The Cottage
comments = I enjoyed your story, how do I get more and keep up the good
writting!
(Eskimo: You can read more of my stories by just looking for them...
no idea when the next new one will be finished.)
337 16.09.05 lordy Jane And I
comments = Excelent lets have more
(Eskimo: I think that I've written too many stories...had to go read it to see
what the story was about....I may have a new one out sometime in late October, maybe
November. Other persuits have been taking up way too much of my time lately.)
336 10.09.05 jj April
comments = Good story, some good character developement, certain
fantasy element in the number of times a man of that age could cum, nice
fantasy tho. Enjoyed the story.
(Eskimo: I think this story heped my writting stye, as I really started to
develop the stories characters much better. As for the man's sexual prowes, was it
fantasy or possible? Well, a few years back, with soem rather nice inspiration, I was
able to get my rocks of five times within four hours. However, it took me about four
days to recover. My skinny ass dragged for what seemed like an eternity.)
335 05.09.05 dwarf Snow Job
comments = I really enjoyed this story, I loved the classic setup.
Although I am hoping there will be a sequal to this one.
(Eskimo: This was one of those stories that I wrote while the idea
was freash in my head. Not to many reades have commented about this one,
which is too bad. I think it was one of my better short works. As for a
sequel...god I hate sequels.....we'll see. If I get bored enough, I might
actually write one. Of course, I've about a dozen others that you readers
have asked a sequal for as well.)
334 04.09.05 dwarf Setting Up Roger
comments = I laughed my butt off reading this story, I only wished it
would have been longer. Can't wait to read more.
(Eskimo: I enjoyed writting this one. Most came from personal expereinces
that have happed to my wife and I in the nudist environment. Anotehr story
I wrote, "Nudist", was also inspired by this life-style.)
333 02.09.05 Andy Ranch Hand
comments = I really liked the story! Can't wait to read more from you,
and I hope you do give this one a sequal... Thanks for posting your
writing, I truly enjoy reading all that i have so far.
(Eskimo: Although I do have a sequel started, there's no telling
when or if I'll get it finished. Just check back fromtime to time to see
what's new.)
332 01.09.05 Alli Ellen's Erotic Adventures
comments = Makes one feel horny and jealous
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it. Not one of my most read works, but
a lot of sex in this one. Could have written more story into it.)
331 30.08.05 Jaded Kentucky Girl
comments = It was cute and very funny. And he was true to his word. He
didn't have sexual relations with her until they were married. It was
humorous and worth reading.
(Eskimo: I'm having a very hard time deciding if I want to continue
writting. Two stories I've written and posted this year have been unbelievably
well recieved, not sure if I can repeat the performance. So, it may be a short
spell before I finish one of the many works that I currently have on file.)
330 27.08.05 Ed Kentucky Girl
comments = read your "Kentucky Girl". Then I read it several times again. I
thoroughly enjoyed it. It is well written and has a story line that is believable
or at least plausible. That is important to me, as well as having a happy ending.
I live just east of Kentucky in West Virginia along the Ohio and Big
Sandy rivers. Pikeville is not to far from here. Trixie's family sounds much
like the people who live in the West Virginia's hollers not far from
here. That cause me to wince, or perhaps grin, when you describe
Trixie's family. I have heard the phrase, "that's hitting mighty close To
home," and that surely was.
I enjoyed the humor, the obvious as well as the fuddle. The brother-in-laws smirks
and the sisters looks. I smiled at them. But the birth control pills was the best.
I laugh aloud at that. I look forward to reading your other stories and hope that
some of them come up to this one. Please keep writing, and posting your stories.
What are your favorites?
P.S. The only flaw that I found, was when Trixie fell asleep and was snoring in minutes.
A beautiful delightful girl like Trixie couldn't possibly snore, even if she came from
the hollers of Kentucky. No doubt that her mother would, but not her.
(Eskimo: Now why can't the negative coments be this well written and thought
out? I would say that this story and "Justice For Megan" are two of my best works that
I have came up with in the last year. Although " Summer Heat" was pretty good as well.
As for my older works, I don't know where to begin. The humorous ones I enjoyed
writting. And of course, I always enjoyed the ones involving group sex. It does
seem that my writting style has improved over the alst year or so, and it seems
to me that it's making it more diffiuclt to come up with good fresh material.
I've been trying to write new ones that are not copying ones that I've already
written, which is proving to be a difficult task. But we'll see. I can say
that of the stories I'm close to finishing, there's a wide range of genre.
I've also been working on a 'mind-control' story, something that I've never
tried before. Sort of stuck at the moment on it, but maybe something will inspire
me to finish it by years end. If not, it will be one of many that will get trashed
before completion.)
329 22.08.05 Rod Kentucky Girl
comments = i went back and read it a second time.the best story i've
read on the net.i still say you are writting my history.haha.how did you
know about elkhorn,pikeville,etc.next thing you will be in
shelby,phelps,jenkins or rockhouse,keep up the good work.
p.s dont listen to guy,he's a negative whiner,you rock!!!!!!!
(Eskimo: I just happened to have visited that part of Kentucky a few
times in my life. Most of my stories cover places that I've been to over
the years. Even places that I grew up by. As for Guy, he seems to only like
one type of story, and can't broaden his horizon to enjoy other scenerios.
Too bad, but oh well.)
328 17.08.05 George Breeding Of Chris
comments = The story was good, but i believe that it could have been a
little bit longer and had given a clear sign on how they were doing it.
But overall the story was horny. keep it up.
(Eskimo: You're right, I should have made this one longer. I've
thought about adding parts to it, but just haven't gotten around to it. I
do remember that when I wrote this one, that I sort of rushed it through. I
had the main idea in my head, but didn't expand on it.
327 14.08.05 Guy Couple Fun
comments = There sex stories and then there are SICK stories.I read all your stuff
and for the most part its OK.But some of your stuff is very sick.The
actions of the people in this piece of crap is beyond anything anyone
could understand or belive.A very sick and perverted mind had to have
written this.To belive that a non-whore woman or girl could have intercours
30 or 40 plus times in the time you wrote is stupid to say the least.
Clean up your act or look for some anti Eskimo fan clubs.
(Eskimo: LOL, I'm not even going there, except to say diversity is part of
my best repetoire. Oh yeah, we're having a great vacation.)
326 13.08.05 Guy Getting AC
comments = Its very hard to understand how an author like yourself
would lower themself to write s piece of shit like this.You write a great
story like "Kentucky Girl" and also this thing.I had hoped you had more
class.Its a stupid fuck story that says nothing and goes noplace.
(Eskimo: Well, seems that Guy didn't like this one. Oh well, guess
I'll have to go and cry myself to sleep.)
325 11.08.05 Bob Kentucky Girl
comments = Very good, quite funny in parts also. Keep up the good
work. Loved it.
(Eskimo: Thank you.)
324 11.08.05 Adventure Stories
comments = I enjoyed the story very much. It really kept me excited and
anticipating. But the twist at the end was unexpected and therefore
wonderful. Pretty hot too overall. More?
(Eskimo: Not sure which story it was that this person was comenting
about. COuld have been any of my latest works.)
323 11.08.05 Larry Olive
comments = Great story. I enjoyed it as read it even though I thought
I knew how it would end. But Suprise!!!
(Eskimo: This one was sort of easy to figure out, not like some of
my other works. But it's still a good read.)
322 10.08.05 Hopless Romantic Getting AC
comments = <>
Your story left this HOPELESS ROMANTIC all 'hot and bothered' from his
cock to his morals. But rest assured that my morals were properly
relieved by this ending. ;-)
(Eskimo: HR tends to like stories with a happy ending. Glad it
got him/her off, as well.)
321 10.08.05 Hopeless Romantic Kentucky Girl
comments = I have all kinds of WIERD feelings about your story, just as
you intended! ;-)
<< We're still married, even after six years.>>
Nevertheless, I am utterly delighted with this concluding remark!
(Eskimo: LOL, sometimes I think that you think way to much about
what you read. But that's okay, since you enjoyed the story.)
320 10.08.05 Joe Kentucky Girl
comments = Face it you heard the joke and just had to write a story to
use it. It was a pretty good yarn though.
(Eskimo: Actually, it's all original, I jsut got lucky, that's all.)
319 10.08.05 Dave Kentucky Girl
comments = Eskimo, Great story, really sweet and funny. I'm still laughing aboout
the last joke. Keep up the good work.
Dave
(Eskimo: Sure hope to!)
318 10.08.05 Big Fan Kentucky Girl
comments = Hi, I just want to say how much I enjoyed reading your story Kentucky
Girl. The build-up, plot, characters and your style are fantastic and the story
is really well written. It is amazing given the right length of the story and I
really appreciate the work you have put in. Please continue to write more hot
stories. Thanks for your great work. 5/5 vote
(Eskimo: I've been doing a great job of late of getting the right combination
of reality, plot, build-up and lenght...starting to scare me....very appreciative
of all that have liked it.)
317 10.08.05 Mike Beginning Of A Harem
comments = I liked the basic story, the concept is good and the writing
generally is OK. It is let down by basic grammar and spelling errors -
being English these particularly irritate me. Please check the
difference between you're (short for you are) and your (possessive form of you).
Spellcheck only works to a point - proof-reading is still essential to
find words that are correctly spelled but used in the wrong context.
(poop-shoot vs poop-chute, for example)
Otherwise - keep it up!!!
(Eskimo: I've recieved similar complaints on this one in the past,
but I've just never gotten around to going through it and editing it again.
Maybe one of these days......)
316 10.08.05 A Guy Kentucky Girl
comments = hahahahahahahahaahhahah heheheheheheh hohohohohohoh
roflol.
(Eskimo: I guess he liked it. I;ve a few stories that I have tried
to write with a humorous slant. This one really did the trick.)
315 10.08.05 John Kentucky Girl
comments = This was without a doubt a great story.All of us men can
only dream of such a moment "EVER" even remotely happening like that!I
guess i'll try saving a life! But, how often does that happen if ever! The story
was genuine in nature with a great deal of inocents to it. It was tastefull &
respectfull and not like other stories that are pure trash. Keep up your "GOOD"
work! Was this a real story or your imagination?
I guess this was just a stroke of luck. Thank You
(Eskimo: Save for the beginning, a chance encounter with a busty
little thing that was in over her head, the story was all imaginaition.
But, I am glad you all liekd it.)
314 09.08.05 Alex Kentucky Girl
comments = hahahahah that's hilarious. good job!!!
(Eskimo: Thank you.)
313 09.08.05 Jack Kentucky Girl
comments = I liked the punch line at the end...
Reminds me of an old joke where a guy is given suppositories and in a
follow-up visit to the doctor complains that they taste so awful...
(Eskimo: Funny thing, the longer I worked on this story, the more
humorous it became. I needed a good, funny ending, and it eventually came
to me. I actually got that part down long before I had even started the
sex scene.)
312 09.08.05 Pete Kentucky Girl
comments = how did you know my life,i was born in pikeville,schooled in
elkhorn and work in dayton now.did you pick the town names from a
map?it sounded like you knew what you wrote about.i knew several families
like trixies.one special girl named rose and one named tootsie.would love to
tell you a bit about them so they could be added to a story love
your work.great writting.
(Eskimo: In one day I got eight responses on this story. Seems my
fellow perverts enjoy comedy with their porn. Although I'm not from Pikeville,
I've lived nearby for a breif time, and I've worked there on occasion too,
all a very long time ago. I'm rather familiar with the Dayton area, and the
opening incedent at the waterpark north of Cincinnati was actually a recent
and true event. The rest I made up. As in most of my stories, I pick locations
on places that Ive lived, worked or visited over the years.)
311 07.08.05 David Olive
comments = this is with out a doubt one of the best stories i have ever
read. older men younger women is the norm,your's has turned it into a
new era. hope other's or your self keep writing stories like this.
(Eskimo: I've actually have experience in real life going against
norm, as my wife is almost a decade older than I. And we both agree, there
is nothing wrong with a mature, older woman getting her brains fucked
out by a young man.)
310 06.08.05 Ken Couple Fun
comments = at first it was hard to figure which group i was with on in
to the story it got easier great storie
(Eskimo: This was one of my first really great pieces of writting. It
seems everyone liked it. It was also one that I enjoyed writting as well. The
story just sort of flowed out of me. I just wish all my works were this easy to
compose. Or as well recieved by you readers.)
309 05.08.05 Ray Stories
comments = Enjoy your stories a lot, always look forward to new ones!!!
(Eskimo: Not sure when next one will be posted. Time kind of gets
away from me, maybe in a week or two. I do have one that's about finished.)
308 05.08.05 Ivor Ranch Hand
comments = a second chapter at least is deserved as at the moment the
story is left hanging.
(Eskimo: I've been kicking around the idea of a second chapter. Yeah,
I've got it started. And yeah, I've no idea when the fuck I'll get it
finished.)
307 04.08.05 Julie Couple Fun
comments = You have quite the gift for writing erotic stories. Hell,
it took me 2 nights to read your story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
One side note, not likely that all that sex resulted in so many
simutaneous orgasms, but it was fun, fun, fun to imagine.
Thank you for sharing your joys.
(Eskimo: I am overjoyed when a woman responds to my story's. Not sure why,
maybe because I'm happy that what I wrote got them off. Hey, if I can't do it in
person, let it be by pen! And imaginiation is a wonderful thing, too.)
306 04.08.05 Brad Caribbean Cruise
comments = I was really impressed by the amount of actual story, some
writers go directly to the sex, not building anything up. This story was
very detailed, Great Work!
(Eskimo: This story, as well as "Couple Fun", were two of my first
really good stories. I've written some better since, and some real dogs as
well. BUt we all can't be perfect.)
305 04.08.05 Dick V Olive
comments = This was a wonderful read. I wish i could find many more
stories done so well. This story gave me goosebumps in a very nice way!!
Thanks
(Eskimo: Thank you for sending your comments, and that goes for everyone that
takes the time to read and respond to my stories. I've a few other works similar to
this one, something about an older woman that always got my motor running. And wife
always enjoys the idea of a younger man...please note that it's only an 'idea'. No
applicants need apply.)
304 01.08.05 Larry Summer Heat
comments = Great Story
(Eskimo: Seems like this story has ben well liked. Although some have not liked
the ending concerning the twins. I guess I was trying to be too realistic in what happened
to them.)
303 30.07.05 WM April
comments = again, if only dreams could come true.
(Eskimo: Seems as if WM has a lot of free time on his hands. And yeah, this
is a good dream story.)
302 29.07.05 WM Swingers Diary
comments = good. i wish......
(Eskimo: In this story, wish's did come true for some friends of ours.)
301 29.07.05 WM Caribbean Cruise
comments = loved it. great humor.
(Eskimo: I like this guy, he sent comments on three of my stories. He
also sent me his email, but when I responeded, it bouced back. If you're
reading this WM, thnaks a lot.)
300 28.07.05 Paul Ranch Hand
comments = a that is one of the best i wish he was me pleasing them
ladys wow thankyou x
(Eskimo: Another story that's everyman's dream...multiple female sex partners!
I've always wondered if this would work in the long run.)
I would love to hear your opinion of these comments, or about my stories. So please, let me know what you thought of it. All comments, good and bad, will be greatly appreciated. If you would like for me to respond, which I shall, please add your email address in the comment area. Thank you. You can send me an email at eskimo5555 at my yahoo account.