299  27.07.05  WM   Summer Heat
   comments = wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
   
(Eskimo: Thank you.)
   

298  26.07.05  WM  Ranch Hand
  comments = im in my 70s and emjoyed your story very much. wish i could 
  have been ned years ago. if any body complains tell them to piss off. 
  
(Eskimo: LOL...Like your comments. Hope I make it to 70, much less still
  enjoy reading about sex...oh, and having sex as well.)
  

297  23.07.05  Dave  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
  comments = hello, i have just read this story, now i have read most of 
  your work on asstr over the last few months and felt i may be able to 
  comment on this one, i read the ranch hand first as you commented it was 
  the better of the two stories , 
  i didnt think there were too many characters they padded it out nicely 
  and it felt more real, i like my stories to have substance and 
  believeability, i did feel that it was a little short i could see his  
  step mother settling down with her new beau, anna becoming his and a rash   
  of kids, the baby making comment led me towards that thought and so with   
  his step mum and new mother in law a happy, baby filled future lies in 
  wait, hope this helps.
  
(Eskimo: I'm really surprised at how well recieved this story was. I 
  do agree that it was a bit shorter than it should have been, maybe some day 
  I'll add on to it. The thought of kncoking the ladies up does sound appealing.)
  

296  22.07.05  hopeless romantic  Ranch Hand
   comments = <>
   I thought that Emma said that both girls were 'on the pill!'
   
(Eskimo: I did...even though the girls are on the pill, they're still
   very much fertile. Without going into great biological detail, all the 
   pill does is make the woman's body think she's pregnant already.)

   Nevertheless, I think that May ought to flinch as the thought 
   penetrated her well fried brain that she was just ONE PILL away from getting 
   pregnant. Indeed, her dreams ought to be filled with  rather pregnant farm 
   animals!
   By the way, was it ever explained to Ned that he would be SEXUALLY 
   COMMITTED to May and Molly for a LIFETIME?
   
(Eskimo: Well, didn't think it needed to be explained. And today's age, it seems
   no one is commited for a lifetime of togetherness.) 

   <>
  I like this idea, especially if Connie can't find a mate of her own. 
  
(Eskimo: I like it too, just trying to figure out a good way of 
  working them in.)

  <>
  Gee, doesn't Ned have his hands full with May & Molly? Perhaps the 
  daughter can bring her currently unemployed boyfriend, who complains at 
  first that he has been sent to 'reform school' by the nature of his new 
  job on the farm. But eventually, the new boy can give Ned the time off to 
  get a degree at the local 'cow college' and thus gradually take over 
  the farm as Frank ages!
  
(Eskimo: Hmmm, now that's a thought....actually, I had thought of 
  a son of Connie, but a boyfriend of the daughter does have better possbilities.)

  In this modern era, a woman has SOME CONTROL over fertility by deciding 
  when to start and stop taking 'the pill.' But otherwise, she is still 
  NOT meant to know JUST WHICH FUCKING resulted in her pregnancy. 
  
(Eskimo: We'll work on the pregnancy theme at another time.)
  

295  21.07.05  anon   Summer Heat
  comments = I loved this story i read it nonstop for 7 hours all night 
  long. I just couldn't stop reading. I was captured in the story waiting 
  to see what would happen next. Great use of detail! I felt like I was 
  actually in the story. The only bitchin I got to do with this story is I 
  didn't like the ending where the girls all got pregnant and the twins 
  had a bad life. Also I would've liked it if Randy nailed his mom and 
  Lucy. I thought he was, considering he was spying on his mom and Lucy and 
  they seemed to be sorta flirting with him walking around and swimming 
  nude. I would like to read this story again revised considering what I 
  just said. ;) I think if the ending was revised with no pregnancy and 
  changing what happens to the twins it would be more believeable. But 
  Great story. I was blown away. Best story i've ever read of this sort. Nice 
  Job!
  
(Eskimo: Yeah, about the ending.....I guess I wanted it to sound like
  real life, where not everybody lives happily ever-after....at least the twins
  eventually did move in with Alice and Randy. And no, I am not changing the 
  story. Another thing, I thought long and hard about having Randy at least
  nail Lucy, but thought better of it...again, I tend to try to make my stories
  somewhat realistic. I mean, how may guys actually do their moms? Now maybe if I
  had it set in West Virginia......)
  

294  20.07.05  Jon  Ranch Hand
   comments = Great story, Please Continue with the story, the way you 
   planned
   GoooooodJob!
   
(Eskimo: I really wouldn't say a sequel is planned...thinking about it
   would be a better term. However, this is one of the few stories that I've 
   written where a sequel could be written. Plus, please remember, at this time
   I currently have over seventy stories started. Some of which I've only written
   a few paragraphs. Most are about mid-way done, some are near completion and I've
   just haven't figured out how to end them the right way, and then there are those
   that I just have sitting around and have no idea what the fuck I'm going to
   do with them.)
   

293  20.07.05  DT  Ranch Hand
   comments = I'm a writer myself but am confined to sports as fiction 
   isn't really my thing. Still, I enjoyed the story and your twist of the 
   girl's parents giving their permission for Ned to pop their cherries. 
   Made for a good read.
   You're another reason why I'm glad I stumbled upon the asstr-mirror.org site. 
   Take care and keep up the good work. If I would ask for something I 
   really like stories that involve preteen girls although I think 10 is 
   about as young as I like. Any younger and they just aren't big enough.
   Sometime I'd like to see a story where a 16-year-old, maybe paired 
   with a black man get to make some kiddie porn by screwing several girls 
   aged 11 to 14. Take care Thanks again.
   
(Eskimo: Gee, I don't know, pre-teen? I'm pretty sure that I will
   not be writting anything with that involved. Of course, I'm sure you will find
   some out there, if you look for it. I also tend to write teen-with-teen stories,
   not really into adults with underage, although this story is just that, but not 
   too extreme. As for the plot, I'm starting to get the knack of making things 
   interesting in the story. Yeah, you can count on there being sex, but writting
   a way on how it leads up to sex can be a lot of work...not to mentino a very
   fertile imagination.)
   

292  19.07.05  Jack  Melanie, An Introduction
   comments = The subject is my comment.  Great story!
   
(Eskimo: Glad you liked. Jack sent me three messages, unfortunatly, I
   fucked up and accidently deleted one of them.)
   

291  18.07.05  Jack  Ranch Hand
  comments = I think it was an extremely good story.  It was fun to read 
  and it would be a very good thing if you decided to include Connie and 
  her daughter in a sequel.  Although I suspect it would suffer from a 
  reality standpoint if you did in fact include Connie's daughter with 
  Molly and May.  Although it makes a hell of a story. (A good enough reason 
  to do it!)  Have a great day.  After having read your story I am not 
  overly concerned about W, Karl Rove, or pretty much anything else for 
  that matter.  Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
  
(Eskimo: Yeah,, the reality versue fantasy part is kind of holding
  me back here on the sequel. I eman, Ned already ahs two hot teen pussies
  at his disposal. Of course, Frank can always service Connie and her 
  daughter. We'll see.)
  

290  18.07.05  Bob  Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
   comments = This was a great story.  I would like to see a sequel or 
   continuation of it.
   
(Eskimo: Don't think there will be a sequel to this one. I will write 
   more stories witht eh sdame theme in mind, though.)
   

289  18.07.05  JP  Ranch Hand
  comments = THE IDEA OF A SECOND STORY COVERING THE MENTIONED STORY LINE 
  SOUNDS LIKE A GOOD ONE.  THEN THERE IS THE POSSIBLITY OF A THIRD STORY 
  AS THE GIRLS GO TO COLLEGE, OR EVEN TO BRING THEIR OWN CHILDREN INTO 
  THE STORY WITH EACH OTHER.
  
(Eskimo: Okay, when I get time, I'll work on it. It'll probably be a 
  year before I get it posted. But I'm sure that I'll have other new fine reading
  material online here between then and now. So check back often.)
  
 
288  18.07.05  Mike  Ranch Hand
   comments = Hi,Reading this story, one can tell that the writer enjoyed writing 
   it. I do look forward to it’s continuation. Thanks again for posting.
   
(Eskimo: There's a good chance of this story to be continued, as well as
   the story My Step-Mom And Our Freinds. Just not sure when I'll even get started
   with continuing either ine.)
   

287  18.07.05  Maura  Breeding Of Chris
   comments = I just recently got an old computer from a friend and found 
   your sroty site. I just finished reading your breeding story and  I am 
   dripping wet. I had my 15 yo daughter redit also as I have been trying 
   to talk her into breeding I think your story may help a lot I tried to 
   find pictures of a black man with a younger white girl but it is 
   impossible to find much of anything when you are not very smart And I have to 
   admit not having finisher high school I am not too bright. Any way I 
   was just wanting to tell you how i loved yourfirst story 
   
(Eskimo- I think we have the champion message of the day here. I sure
   hope my readers can tell fantasy from fiction.)
   

286  18.07.05  Ralph  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
   comments = Excellent story, I don't think there were too many 
   characters, I do think you could enlarge this story though.  Seems 
   like there is a lot of the summer break left.
   
(Eskimo: A continuation? Well, not sure, but if there was to
   be one, this story has the best chance of having one. Let me give
   it some thought for a spell. I've over fifty other works started that
   need my attention as well.)
   

286  18.07.05  Leo  stories
  comments = You are a hell of a good writer. A good plot all the time, 
  good description of personality and hot, steaming sex.
  I enjoy each and yveryone, keep up the good work. Thanks
  
(Eskimo: Thanks, you've obviously have read some of my better
  stories. I've written some bad ones as well, but at least I admit it.
  Actually, my head is starting to swell, with all this praise that I've
  been recieving of late.)
  

285  18.07.05  anon  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
  comments = Enjoyed the story. Pretty hot.
  
(Eskimo: Thanks for writting.)
  

284  18.07.05  tigerd  Justice For Megan
   comments = Thank you for the excellent story.  It had an interesting 
   plot, with several twists and turns that I didn't see coming.  The sex 
   scenes were nicely balanced, too.  They weren't so detailed that they 
   went on for page after page, and yet they weren't glossed over completely 
   either.  And it's always fun when the bad guy gets what's coming to him 
   in the end.  A previous comment from another reader questioned the 
   impending marriage between Ethan and Cathy, and I have to agree.  It seems 
   hard to believe that she would have anything more to do with him at 
   this point.  The only other criticism that I have would be for you to 
   spend a little more effort in the editing of the typos throughout the 
   story.  They can be somewhat distracting at times.  Anyway, I still did get 
   to enjoy a really fine story, and I didn't even spend a cent on it.  I 
   really shouldn't complain too much.  Thanks again.  I plan on reading 
   many more of your stories now that I have found you.
   
(Eskimo: You mentioned the details as written, I always wonder if I'm
   spending enough time on details, and at otehr times if I've spent too much time.
   Glad I found a good balance in this story. As for Ethan and Cathy, yeah, 
   it was hard to swallow, but I had to do something. Thought about Cathy bumping his
   arrogant ass off the planet or at least cutting his nad's off, but this was the 
   better alternative. As for the typos, I always run my stories through spell
   check, and then read them through again. Seems I tend to make some miss's
   once in a while, sorry. And yes, it is free, so why complain? There isn't much out
   there that is, at least in porn.)
  

283  18.07.05  Jimdeeus  Caribbean Cruise
  comments = loved it,are you going to have a 2nd part to it. keep it 
  comming.
  
(Eskimo: Sorry, no plans for a second part.)
  

282 18.07.05  John  Breaking In Party
  comments = good shit
  
(Eskimo: I always thought this to be one of my 'fuck stories'. Not much plot,
  but lots of sex. But I am glad you liked it.)
   

281  18.07.05  Kyle  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
  comments = That was one of the best stories i have ever read, it kept 
  me involved from the first word to the last word
  
(Eskimo: I liked this story, it was a good 'coming of age' story, where
  a young lady discovers her sexuality, along with a young man, who also was rather
  inexperienced on the ways of love. Glad you liked it. I consider this story one of
  my hidden gems.)
  

280  16.07.05  Marcus  Justice For Megan
  comments = WELL DONE! i'VE READ A LOT OF STORIES OVER THE YEARS AND 
  THIS RATES RIGHT UP THERE. SYMPATHETICALLY TOLD, BELIEVABLE, EROTIC BUT 
  GENTLE . I BET YOU ARE A NICE PERSON. YOUR GRAMMER IS A BIT IMMATURE / 
  YOU'RE / YOUR / ETC BUT VERY IMPRESSIVE ALL THE SAME.
  
(Eskimo: Come on, my grammar sucks! I try to catch them when I 
  proofread before posting, but you know, shit happens. But I am glad that 
  you enjoyed the story.)
  

279  16.07.05  David H  Husband's Indiscretion
   comments = First may I tell you that you are a great writer.  You could 
   write comedy for some of the great  comics of the past, like Jack 
   Benny, Bob Hope, Red Skelton and others of their ilk.
   But I digress this story kept me going and set me up for the punch line 
   like nothing I have read recently.  Keep up the good work. 
   
(Eskimo: I've always been told that I'm a terminal smartass, and of course
   I never take anything seriously, including life. This was one of those stories that
   evolved from a joke, and I just put sex into it. Glad you found the humor in it.)
   

278  14.07.05  Ivan Maggie
  comments = I like the story very much, but I'd like to hear it in a 
  audio way, if you can do that for me, I'll be much obliged to you - 
  failing that, you might want tell me where I can get (download) some erotic 
  audio. Thanks for your time spent on reading this.
  
(Eskimo: Although asstr-mirror.org does not have any audio stories, literotica.com
  does. You might try them. As for the above mentioned story, I wrote it two years ago,
  and have for the most part forgotten about it. Glad someone took the time to read it 
  found it enjoyable. I had to go and see what it was even about, as I could not even remember
  it at all. I probably will never do an audio version of any of my stories. First reason being
  for bandwidth concerns, and another because I'm pretty sure that I couldn't sound like
  a woman having an orgasm.)
  

277  14.07.05 Celtic Cowboy  Justice For Megan
  comments = WOW! That is one of the best pieces of adult fiction anywhere 
  bar none. I had got tired trying to sort the wheat from the chaff at ASSTR 
  and have been spending my time at Storiesonline.net. It was just a stroke 
  of luck (no pun intended) that I found it but I bookmarked you page and 
  will be back I promise. As a writer myself I like to read others work and 
  compare is to mine. Hope your not offended if I don't do that with this 
  story , my confidence is shaky enough.  I had just worked up the courage 
  to post  a flash  story on Beyond the Far Horizon Gina Marie Wylie's new 
  site. It's going to take another bottle of Glenlivet to post the next one.
  All kidding aside that was a very good story if they rated them here I'd have 
  given you a 10 out of 10, If you have a mailing list or decide to start 
  one use this address to contact me
  
(Eskimo: I really do need to figure out how I wrote a story that 
  has recievd so much postive feedback. Was it the plot? Was it the fine 
  mixture of a story and sex? Was it the buildup of innocence in the
  begining to wild, passionate sex? How can I top this? Maybe I ought to
  retire from writting while I'm ahead! Nah, think not. Hope to have a new
  story online by 20th July. It won't be as good as either Justice For Megan or 
   Summer Heat, but it should be entertaining none the less. I also hope to have
  another story completed by the end of month. I think it will be well liked..I hope!)
  

276  13.07.05  Rob  Justice For Megan &  Summer Heat
  comments = Hi,I came across Summer Heat & Justice for Megan, read and enjoyed both of them. I agree with you that without plot, stories are boring. I was surprised to see you had written so much. I've been reading stories from ASSTR for a long time, and had not previously come across your work.
  There seems to be a dearth of talent/quality on ASSTR these days, a far 
  cry from the late 1990's when it seemed there were lots of really good 
  authors writing regularly. My personal view is that the quality decline 
  started after Celeste stopped reviewing.
  For this reason then, I was delighted to find your stories. I hope you 
  will keep writing and posting. I look forward to reading more of your 
  work.
  
(Eskimo: Thanks for finding my stories and enjoying them. I find 
  your view of things quite refreashing. I do try to give some sort of plot 
  in most of my stories, and the last coupler I've written have been warmly
  recieved. I've seen the Celeste reviews, and never had a story reviewed
   there. I did have one reviewed by Crimson, and the review was rather 
   negative for the story. Oh well, such is life. Haven't seen Crimson review 
   any others of late, not sure if still being done. There use to eb awards as 
   well, haven't heard anything lately about that either. I've lots of things 
   to say about this, but not sure how to put in words. Anyway, thanks for 
   reading. Not sure about the talent of other authors. Dark Vision, Scipio,
   Jacl Lipton are a few of the good ones that come to mind. I really should
   post a page of authors I like, maybe if I get the time when my regular life
   calms down, I'll work on it. I have noticed soem authors list me on their 
   pages, and I really should return the favor.)
   

276  12.07.05  Roger  Breeding Of Chris
   comments = Hi, That was a great little story. I liked the idea of a  breeding club/group and inter-racial mixtures.
  I've been to some of the Pacific Islands where whites and Melenasians 
  have inter-bred they make some of the most beautiful girls in the world.
  Liked the story, would like to see more of these families couplings and 
  of course off-spring.
  
(Eskimo: I think I could have done this story better, it was way 
  too short and impersonal.....maybe I'll work on something a bit different.
  I do enjoy the idea of writting stories set ito the future, something about
  fantasy in it that I like. I've done a few so far, more on the computer that
  I've started, but for one reason or another, just haven't finished.)
  

275  11.07.05  EspressoBolus  Following Directions
   comments = I found this story haunting in the sense of "lingering in 
   one' thoughts".  I have personal issues with men fathering children 
   recklessly, although in this case I am aware that the women contrived    to gather the seed, regardless of the husband's thoughts on the subject.  The smile on his face (and in his eyes) says he is OK with being used as a 
   stud.  I find the whole thing disurbing. But enough of that!  You write 
   well and you make me think! An author cannot hope for more; except 
   perhaps a 3 book contract with Doubleday or Knoph's. Oh well
   
(Eskimo: Yeah, a contract...now that would be sweet....sorry 
   about your personal issues...well, no, not really.....anway, glad to 
   have made you think, instead of just whacking your meat...or if female,
   knocking the hooded man....)
   

274  11.07.05  hunghandsome  Greg's New Housemates
   comments = This story was so hot! I wish I was Carl and was enjoying 
   all these women as well as seeing them on such a hot black stud as Greg
   
(Eskimo: Another satisfied reader....and not one of my best works,
   either. For some reason, people like reading interracial sex. Watching is 
   okay as well. I'll have to work on another story with that theme in mind.)
   

273  09.07.05  hoopeless Romantic   Summer Heat
   comments = The bulk of this story is a delight for this HOPELESS 
   ROMANTIC. Indeed, I feel that it is only normal and NATURAL that the two 
   women and three girls became pregnant as a result. :-(
   I do wish however that the epilogue of the story was changed so that 
   Amber and April had a more enjoyable adulthood, possibly spending a 
   lifetime living with Randy and Alice in a sexual foursome.
   
(Eskimo: I thought of your idea. But, reality reared it's ugly head
   and I made it more of an unhappy version, except things did get better in 
   end. Sorry to disappoint.)
   

272  07.07.05  Hawk  stories
  comments = I hope to see these soon.....
  Accidental Journey-April-Ash Hollow-Getting AC-Intro To Swing-daughter and 
  Mother Rental-> Neighborhood Swing-Ranch Hand-Trip To Rez-Twins In Training
  
(Eskimo: Probably of this whole group, I'm only close to finishing
  one of them, and that's 'Ranch Hand'. 'Getting AC' is a short one that
  only needs a bit more before I can call it done. 'Ash Hollow' I'm having 
  issues on how to finish. Just have the opening scenes done on most of the
  others you've mentioned, although 'Neighborhood Swing' has a lot done, but
  needs a lot more work. I think I'll be trashing 'Trip To Rez', as well as
  'Accidentel Journey', although I might incorporate the latter into a different
  story. And I have no idea what 'Daughter And Mother Rental' is, as it's
  not one of mine, but it does have a good idea behind it, may have to put
  that one on the starting block.)
  

271 07.07.05  bosnchad  Justice For Megan
  I just finished reading this exciting and excellent story.  I 
  stumbled on to you stories on ASSM and can only say I'm so glad I did.  
  I usually hang out of Storiesonline.net but they dried up for a while 
  and if they hadn't I'd have missed this best story of 2005.  Thanks
  
(Eskimo: Thanks, not sure about the best of 2005, though. My 
  fellow writter Jack C Lipton has put out a few good works this year, 
  as has a host of other authors.)
  

270  07.07.05  Arthur  Justice For Megan
  comments = Very well done, sir.This story is surely amongst your best.
  Thanks for sharing it. God Bless and keep you alway.
  
(Eskimo: Wow! A repeat commenter(is that a word?). With all the praise 
  this story has recieved, I wonder if I'll get some sort of an award?!
  

269  06.07.05  earl   Summer Heat
   comments = Wonderful story, could not put it down.
   
(Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Although I do have to 
   say, I am starting to get a big head with all these positive comments. 
   I'm sure there will be someone that'll be negative sooner or later.)
   

  268  06.07.05  a fan  Summer Heat
   comments = just read this story of yours
   and i ejoyed it much
   for me it had a nice balance of story and sex with good humor
   looking forward to reading more of your story's
   
(Eskimo: Hope you enjoy my other works as well.)
   

267  06.07.05  J  April
  comments = Great story, Though they never seem long enough. Thank You
  
(Eskimo: I always worry that my stories get too long. Imagine that!
  I've a few stories that are long, but I just can't seem to finish them.)
  

266  06.07.05  Arthur  Summer Heat
  comments = Very nicely done. I especially enjoyed the straight forward 
  attitude of the hero; the entire story was satsifying and it was easy 
  to delve into.
  I like your stuff! Thanks for sharing it here at asstr. 
  God Bless and keep you alway.
  
(Eskimo: Looks like I wrote two winners back-to-back. Sort of 
  afraid to try finishing anything else. But, I am on a roll, so we'll
  see what comes up in the next month or so.)
  

265  05.07.05   Ian  Justice For Megan
  comments = I've just read Justice for Megan and very much enjoyed the 
  story. I s'pose a short message at leat is in order to say thanks for 
  writing it.
  Now, how about a sequel? I'm not sure you've *quite* got enough works 
  in progress... ;)
  
(Eskimo: I've plenty of stuff that I'm working on at the moment,
  so a sequel for this one would be a long shot. Not to mention the fact that
  it would be a lot harder to accomplish. After all, what would I write about?
  Maybe knocking up Megan? When the time comes, I might kick it around some.)
  

264  05.07.05  Mojo   Summer Heat
   comments = Nicely done -- another fun read! 
   
(Eskimo: Seems this is my second best story ever...see next comment.)
   

263  05.07.05  Jim  Justice For Megan
  comments = I have to say that I don't read many good stories on ASSTR, 
  but I enjoyed yours. I liked that it actually dealt with feelings and a 
  story line. 
  
(Eskimo: Okay, it seems this is by far hands down my best story written, EVER!
  Now what the fuck am I going to do? Oh yeah, try writting one just as good, if 
  not better.)
  

262  05.07.05  hopless romantic  untitled--multiple office romance
   comments = This plot promises to be a delight to this over-the-hill 
   male. :-(
   
(Eskimo: It's not often that I get people commenting on stories that I
   haven't finished yet, and hr sent me a lengthy detailed plan for the above 
   untitled and very unfinished work. If he's reading this, please send me your
   email addy, would like to discuss it with him.)
   

261  04.07.05  Rush Limbaugh Impregnating My Wife
  comments = house  boat.?   147?  come on laughing out loud!
  
(Eskimo: Does anybody know what teh fuck this moron is talking about
  concerning '147'? Must be some sort of abuser of prescription drugs.)
  

260  04.07.05  Darkvision   Summer Heat
  comments = I started reading this story, but found it was cut off in the  group. Where can I find the complete story? 
  BTW - I'm enjoying the stroy.
  
(Eskimo: Not sure what happened. I posted on the newsgroups, and it
  seems some readers had no problem downloading it, while some others did. I 
  emailed the link to my asstr-mirror.org page to him, hopefully he gets that. I was 
  quite surprised, didn't think too many people still use newsgroups.)
  

259  04.07.05  J  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
  comments = Great story. sorry it is over.
  
(Eskimo: I liked this one also. I thought this was one of my
  better coming of age stories. Seems like it's getting harder to write
  fresh material, taking longger betwen stories at the moment. That's not
  entirely true, as I've lots of stories started, but trying to make them
  more than just 'fuck & suck' stories can be rather trying at times.)
  

258 04.07.05  Dave  April
  comments = The story was very good! I would like somrthing like that to 
  happen to me. I've got a fixation on a young girl in my neighborhood, 
  but I don't think my wife would go that far! I'd be happy just to get 
  the young lady though, if I could!
  
(Eskimo: I sure do hope your local girl is of age, or we'll be 
  reading/hearing about you in the media. And yeah, most guys would like 
  something like that to happen to them as well.)
  

257  03.07.05  hopless romantic  Following Directinos
  comments = << Five weeks later, I'm entering a restaurant,>>
  This is a rather surprising twist to your story. But I don't like the 
  idea AT ALL that the author has TOTALLY MISLEAD me about the staging of 
  the story up to this point.
  However, this HOPELESS ROMANTIC does like the idea that Julie had 
  invited her sister in law over to be thoroughly fucked by Paul's 
  brother, so that the apparently infertile Paul can finally become a father.
  I also like the idea that Paul did not know about Sarah's visit, and 
  his brother did NOT know until later about the ulterior purpose of 
  Sarah's erotic visit. Conversely, I think that realism demands that   
  Sarah's brother in-law should have fucked her repeatedly over several days
  to make sure that at least one of those days was within her brief fertile 
  period. It seems that we human beings are intended to be largely 
  oblivious about the possibility of pregnancy before, during, and after 
  intercourse; even though that end is one of two BIOLOGICAL purposes of  
  human intercourse. 
  Note also that I wonder if Sarah should have been primed with a 
  vibrator before his arrival, unless of course the biological father  
  suffers from premature ejaculation or is somehow inhibited about  interracial 
  sex. 
  I would have rather seen the normal cycle of mutual arousal, slow and 
  gentle penetration, hard thrusting, and an involuntary mutual climax in 
  which her cunt STRONGLY MILKS his cock!
  
(Eskimo: Interesting analysis. Actually, I enjoy throwing a curve 
  in the ending of my stories from time to time. Probably one that comes to 
  mind is Husband's Indiscretion, which has a comical ending to it.
  I think that maybe you've gone into to much thinking on this story. But then,
  I've been known to be wrong.)
  

256  03.07.05  dan    Summer Heat
  comments = hi there...
  just finished reading your story "summer heat".
  as I was a typical horny 15 yr old I am not sure I could have kept up 
  with 3 young teen girls as randy did. but sure would have loved trying.
  I must admit I asm surprised that randy did not end up fucking his mom 
  and aunt as that seemed bound to happen when they were all running 
  around naked.
  all in al I really enjoyed the story. being an old 77 it did take me 
  back to my youth. and yes, I am still very active sexually.
  thanks and keep writing.
  
(Eskimo: You know, you pointed out something that I almost did. I had
  thought about having Randy nail Lucy, but thought better of it. After all, 
  there were three hot teen cunts that were wearing him out as it is. As for him
  doing his mother, I've never been ito that sort of thing in any of my stories.
  I do have to say, even at 15, I don't think I would have been able to
  keep up with them either.)
  

255  03.07.05   rick  Comunity Breeding Project
  comments =  Great interracial theme. Thanks!!!!!!!!
  
(Eskimo: In my personal opinion, not one of my better works. Not
  even sure why I posted it. I've been workign on a bunch off stories set
  in the future, such as this one, and for some reason, I finsihed this one.
  I think I could have done better, and one day I may get one of the others 
  finished.)
  

254  02.07.05  a guy    Summer Heat
  comments = i really liked this story, the polygamy thing is every guys 
  fantasy.  and i like children, and fishing.
  i wonder why it never worked out for the twins, was childbirth too 
  painful, or did they not have the maternal drive.  or did the young 
  childbirth ruin their years at school?
  mothers - they seemed rather careless - i thought they were going to 
  get condoms on one of the shopping trips to town.  then he could have 
  stolen some - but too late!  now everyone involved seems a bit dim, 8 
  people having sex for weeks and not one thought of pregnancy?  a bit 
  much....
  btw, a writing technique thing - instead of an epilog, try using a 
  flashback conversation at the end explaining what happened as they exchange 
  memories.    
  kudos on a nice story.
  
(Eskimo: well, that's thorough! I figured there would be two items
  brought up in the comments, and you nailed both. As for the mothers, I
  mentioned a few times about alcohol was involved. The viewpoint was from
  the teen boy, he just seen them drinking. Why were the two mom's drinking?
  Could it have been because they were lonely, drowning their sorrows 
  together? And then two suitors appeared, and their own lust blinded them of
  what was happening to their children? As for the twins, I never went into 
  detail on why they ended up like they were. Maybe it was because of the stigma
  of teen motherhood, it ruined their life, as they had no stable significant
  other to help them along, while with Alice, she had Randy for her support.
  Yeah, I know, I didn't go into enough detail on this part of the story, but
  then, the story was about Randy, and his eye on it. Your idea on ending it
  with as a flasback conversation was good, I'll take note note of it. Actually,
  I have used that in the past, not sure why I didn't this time. Thanks for 
  enjoying the story.)
  

253  02.07.05  devi Candy Learns about Love and Sex
  comments = twas quite excellenr
  
(Eskimo: Thank you....I liked writting this one.)
  

252  02.07.05  anon   Relunctance To Swing
  comments = daaammn nigga i jerked off to tat
  
(Eskimo: ??????  Well now, that's an intresting response. No idea why 
  the 'nigga' comment, as there wasn't any interracial in this story.)
  

251  02.07.05  Ben  April
  comments = Very well written.  These days good stories don't need to be 
  filled with slutty work.  This well done and almost seemed possible.
  
(Eskimo: Thanks Ben. I do think it was more fantasy than realistic. I
  have been kicking around some follow-up stories, concerning April at college 
  as one scenerio, and her mom and neighbors in another. Don't think I'll
  ever get them finished, though.)
  

250  30.06.05  jay  Impregnating My Wife
  comments = WOW i loved ur story, "Impregnate my wife"! Insperational.. 
  i would love to be in such a position as u were in that story. I too 
  find it unbleavably erousing to see my wife being fucked by strangers. 
  alas i have not been so fortunate so see such events =(   However my wife 
  is open to such things, but we are.. well a bit shy.. in bed (having 
  sex)we talk about it but out of bed it becomes ... no so... real.. u 
  know?  .. i just dont know how to make it go from fantisy to actually 
  happening. do u go to swingers clubs to get started or what? well if u have 
  any advice or comments u can e-mail me at (withheld for privacy)  other 
  wise... keep up the great work!
  
(Eskimo: Thanks for enjoying this story theme. Some write me and say 
  it's a terible genre, but it seems there are just as many that enjoy it. I
  guess as long as you can seperate fantasy and reality, you can probably do
  allright. This story, by the way, was purley fantasy. I have been thinking 
  writting a story about this couple concerning one of their earlier breeding
  sessions. Please mind that it's only in the thinking stage. Happy reading, 
  keep those comments coming! ps- I've already emailed Jay and discussed about 
  getting his wife involved in swinging...maybe some day we'll have Jay's account 
  of that written down online here. What do you say, Jay?)
  

249  25.06.05  scott  Justice For Megan
  comments = i have read many of your stories, but for some reason missed 
  this one. it brought back lots of memories from my college days. when i 
  moved to ga. the only school i found that would not charge out of state 
  fees was atlanta baptist college. talking about a life twist. very 
  small and very dogmatic. i lasted for two years before transferring to a 
  state university for my senior year.this story would definitely deserve a 
  ten.
  
(Eskimo: Damn! How the fuck am I going to top this story? Or even equal
  it? Well, I'm sitting back and re-reading it. I have a plot, one that's
  not just take her clothes off and fuck her silly. It's sort of fantasy, but it
  has a good dose of reality in it as well. It has romance, which someone
  has already noted. Maybe I'll just quit while I'm ahead.)
  

248  20.06.05  anon  Justice For Megan 
  comments= This story is ABSOLUTELY PERFECT for a HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-)
  
(Eskimo: All these nice comments about one story, it's starting to go
  to my head...both of them....wonder if any of you nominated it for a Silver 
  Clitordis" award.)
  

247  12.06.05  anon  Vacation Bonding
  comments = "Yeah, life is good "That may be so,but your story stunk.Too 
  much sex.A wife takes on 12 0f her step sons friends?Get real ass 
  hole.You write some very good stories at times,but then you get on your 
  nigger and too much sex kick and go to hell.
 
(Eskimo: LMAO, no, really. I love it when someone trashes one of my 
 stories. What the fuck tehy want? A fucking masterpiece everytime? Sometimes
 I get bored, and I just want to write a 'fuck' story with lots of fantasy. And 
 that's what this was. Oh well, I did get good comments about this one as well. 
 So you just can't please veryone.
 

245  06.06.05  Madhu  Justice For Megan
  comments: Read your May 2005 stories, viz., Justice for Megan and Following 
  Directions. Nicely done. Look forward to many more from you, especially 
  conception stories, as you had earlier indicated.
  
(Eskimo: Thanks, and I am working on a few other conception stories, but
  only one real seriuosly.)
  

246  12.06.05  Ralph  stories
  comments = Love your stories and am anxiously awaiting any new or 
  completed ones.  Look forward to them
  
(Eskimo: I'm hoping to have a new story up by mid-july.)
  

244  05.06.05  bob  Olive
 comments = Interesting story. Good plot development. Good sex. What 
 more can one ask for?
 
(Eskimo: I've actually started a few other stories with 'Olive' in
 mind. They're not the same 'Olive', but each involve an older woman and younger
 man(or men). No idea when or if I'll ever get them finished.)
 

243  05.06.06  Tim  Justice For Megan
  comments = I just wanted to thank you for a very enjoyable story.  As a
  very far left "none" I was pleased with the way you dealt with the insane 
  right and showed how folks on both ends of the spectrum could be rational. 
  An old limerick comes to mind:
  There once was a lady from knizes,
  Who had breasts of two different sizes.
  One was quite small
  And was nothing at all.
  The other was large and won prizes.
  The story was really very enjoyable.  Read it in one gulp.
  
(Eskimo: I love limericks...but anyway, glad you liked the story. This
  one seemed to be the biggest hit that I've written so far.)
  
  
242  25.05.05  civilmage  Cassie And The Biker Twins
  comments = I like the story. I liked the romance as well as the sex. I 
  know it's a complete tale. However, I still find I want to know more 
  about what happens to Gabriel, Richard, Robert and Cassie as well as what 
  happens with Thomas growing up in such an open family.
  
(Eskimo: Why is it everyone thinks I should continue the story's I 
  write? NOt sure what to say, except that maybe that they all just lived 
  happily ever after.)
  

241  25.05.05  Don

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