800 27.06.07 Mark A Slave's tale
comments = I just want to say that this is a really good and well
written story. You had have a nice balance of content that keeps the story
interesting and sexual at the same time. Keep up the good work and I
look forward to reading more of your stories.
799 26.06.07 hopeless romantic Rosa
comments = This is a delightful story with many surprises!
Parenthood is such a heavy responsibility that I am convinced that
human sexuality has evolved so as to disconnect in our minds (as far as
humanly possible) any connection between sex and pregnancy. Thus I wonder
if this would have been a better story if Rosa had said very little
about her true reasons for marrying Daniel until after her doctor had
confirmed her pregnancy. Perhaps the story would be better if she had held
off taking fertility drugs until perhaps six months into their very
lusty marriage.
I also think that it is important that Rosa's strong orgasms routinely
forces Daniel to ejaculate copiously into her depths. This point was
well covered during descriptions of Daniel's sexual relations with
others, but you somehow missed the point with Rosa.
Shouldn't Rosa's father have interviewed Daniel at length to insure
that he would be passing genes for natural intelligence along to Rosa's
children? After all, shouldn't any or all of the triplets eventually
inherit their grandfather's law practice if such was their career interest?
By the way, it might add further interest if Amelia became pregnant
about the time that she and her husband reestablished their sexual
relationship, but she had SOME VEILED QUESTION as to whether her child was
Daniel was her child's genetic father. Again, I think that Daniel should
be intentionally kept in the dark about her intent as they thoroughly
enjoyed each other's strong sexuality.
I am also of the opinion that very good intercourse should establish
strong feelings of emotional unity between the sex partners. Daniel's
time with Amelia must therefore remind her of what she SHOULD have with
her husband which thus becomes a factor in their reconciliation.
Conversely even afterwards, Daniel and Amelia should experience surprisingly
warm feelings for each other. Indeed, there should be a standing remark
that if anything happens to Amelia's husband, she would immediately move
in with Rosa and Daniel.
Daniel's French language abilities during their trip to Paris came as
something of a surprise. Would it make far more sense if the story was
placed closer to the Quebec border, and/or Daniel's name changed to
something that better reflected a French Canadian heritage?
798 26.06.07 sweetsafire A Slave's tale
comments = Despite it taking place on a slave plantation it was well
written. The bond between Master and slave was believable. The fact also
that he was taught to read, and write.
I have heard stories about plantation life and not all of the masters
were total buttheads. Some were actually kindly to their slaves. But
still they knew they were owned.
Keep writing and I will keep reading.
You do well with the interracial stories. I thank you for writing those
regarding black women and white males. It is a tough relationship at
times to be involved in.
Take care and keep writing.
797 24.06.07 Rick Mary's New Home
comments = I loved most of the story. There was only one part I didn't
like... the ending. It had no emotion, no passion. Aside from that,
it was a very enjoyable read.
796 15.06.07 Maij Rosa
comments = I loved most of the story. There was only one part I didn't
like... the ending. It had no emotion, no passion. Aside from that,
it was a very enjoyable read.
795 13.06.07 sweetsafire Rosa
comments = Good story. Kinda felt where it would go but not quite how
it would go. Looking forward to the next one
794 13.06.07 Chas Working For Charlotte
comments = You do a great job-enjoy the twists
793 05.06.07 Adam My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = Fuckin my step mum is my DREAM! i blew my load 4 times while
reading n jerkin off!
792 05.06.07 jack My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = That was great. You are very talented. Keep writing.
791 04.06.07 anonimos My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = those are some amazing storys
790 04.06.07 Skipper Becoming A Nudist
comments = Great story!Written by the real Eskimo 1958.It would be nice
if he wrote more of them and less of some of thoes crappy ones.
789 02.06.07 Guy Becoming A Nudist
comments = Great story!Written by the real Eskimo 1958.It would be nice
if he wrote more of them and less of some of thoes crappy ones.
788 17.05.07 Joe My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = that sounds like a great story and i wish that it happend to
me
787 17.05.07 Guy Becoming A Nudist
comments = Your stories never fail to amaze me.Your 'Becomeing A Nudist
is an outstanding piece of work.It s right up there with 15 or 20 of
your stories.i.e.Amusement Park Adventure,Beginning Of A Harem,The Cabin, College,
The Cottage,Dana,Educating Rita,Filling The House,Flashback,The Garage,and Justice
For Megan,(my all time top story favorite)just to
name a few.However I am sorry to say that you do publish some real
stinkers from time to time.But like most things,we have to take the bad ones
along with good.But again,I am only one of your readers.
786 16.05.07 Techreader Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = Hi, Eskimo. I like your story "Angel's Week Of Religious
Breeding, Sunday Ceremony", but I do have a couple of quibbles.
1. The idea that women could reach age 18 as virgins in such a society
is a little unbelievable.
2. The concept of church-sanctioned sex, even performed quite
publicly, isn't unique, but the notion of requiring women to become pregnant
every 3 years strains belief. (I know, it's just a STORY!, dammit? Why
do we readers have to pick EVERYTHING apart? Can't we just enjoy it
for what it is?) Assuming low levels of violent death and even modest
improvements in public health, the society will become quite crowded very
quickly. Demographers estimate that the steady-state population
birthrate is 2.3 children per woman; the "2" part is the replacement for the
parents, and the ".3" part covers pre-reproduction deaths in war, in
disease or from accidents.
3. The word "alter" means to change or to modify, as in "alter a
dress". I think the word you were looking for is "altar", a platform or
table on which religious rites are performed.
As I said, quibbles. I look forward to reading the rest of the series.
785 14.05.07 Jack Becoming A Nudist
comments = I just wanted to point out some spelling errors that can
drive one crazy...
Where you use "peddle / peddled / peddling"
you really wanted "pedal / pedaled / pedalling" instead.
To peddle is to sell, so a hooker peddles her ass all over town.
(giggles)
Otherwise? A Grrrrrrreatttttt story! (Yeah, channelling Tony the
Tiger)
784 13.05.07 Bill Becoming A Nudist
comments = Great story. Has a plot that could be developed into
continued chapters.
783 11.05.07 Dave Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = A very erotic story. Done with class and that element of
seduction and "all about her" senuality. Great Job!
782 11.05.07 Scott Moving Up
comments = You brought back a powerful memory. In middle and early
high school I "dated" a girl I'd known since childhood and really liked.
However, her mother, after catching her daughter and I in a heavy
petting situation, I'll make it brief here, sat her daughter and me down for
a very deep talk. The upshot was for sexual relief I would fuck Judy's
mother Alice while Alice would teach Judy and me ways to make love
without risking pregnancy. In my Junior year Alice got pregnant (by design
or accident I don't know) but Judy, like the daughters in your story,
was very interested and active in her mother's pregnancy...all the way
up to and including giving birth to our daughter. Alice's husband
accepted my daughter as "his" and was none the wiser. However, in the last
semester of our Senior year Alice again was pregnant only this time,
since her husband had had testicular cancer diagnosed and was sterile
there was no longer a way to explain this new baby...so Judy and I learned
about abortion from Alice.
And, in our Freshman year in college Judy and I finally had full,
unprotected intercourse with Alice there helping us along. Judy and I had
planned to marry but during spring break in Florida (her college was out
a week earlier than mine so we didn't get to go together) she met a guy
and fell head-over-heals in love with him - again like the characters
in your story. With every intent on snaring this guy Judy fucked his
balls dry and sure enough got pregnant and he agreed to marry her (they
still are and have grandchildren now). Eventually I too married.
Alice? She and I kept our affair going until she was in her late 70s
believe it or not. Alice died last February while I held her hand.
Thanks for the story and thanks for reading this memory.
781 09.05.07 Bob Becoming A Nudist
comments = I check your page for new stories about weekly. I generally
like what you write. This story is a good one, up the the WTF ending. A
mother getting her in high school, wanting to go to college daughter
knocked up? That struck me as a bit weak. When it happens with adults, as
it does in some of your stories, that's different. But youngsters -
that's not appealing to me.
I'll continue to watch for new stories from you. Keep up the good
work!
780 08.05.07 John Becoming A Nudist
comments = Great story. I'd love to read more about these two
characters.
779 08.05.07 anon story's
comments = change the fonts .... has anybody viewed these works in
script before putting them on the Net ???????
778 07.05.07 Stan Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
comments = Hi. Like many other guys, I enjoy stories of interracial sex. I think you
are a good story teller and you make getting pregnant
by a black stud exciting. Wish I were there.
777 07.05.07 Bill Becoming A Nudist
comments = Great story! Captures a lot of the "look and feel" of The
First Time... Too bad more parents aren't like "Mother Gladys".
776 01.05.07 Ed Working For Charlotte
comments = Hi, Great Story.
775 01.05.07 Ed Celinda
comments = Hi, Another excellent story. Interesting plot. Enjoyed it.
774 01.05.07 Ed Moving Up
comments = Hi, This was excellent. Not only the erotical, but the human interest side
too.
773 01.05.07 Ed story's
comments = Hi, I have enjoyed you stories a lot over the last two years. Keeping
writing you are an excellent writer and story teller.
772 25.04.07 guy Jimmy & Cindy
comments = Very good story, greatly enjoyed it. I would like to see in
in chapters
771 17.04.07 Ryder Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = Very good story, greatly enjoyed it. I would like to see in
in chapters
770 04.04.07 Zeza Celinda
comments = Nice like it it helped me get off than man
769 30.03.07 Matt Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = ur story was gud. but it has got all the sex scenes almost
similar.
768 29.03.07 robit Hillary
comments = ur story was gud. but it has got all the sex scenes almost
similar.
767 29.03.07 Argus Kentucky Girl
comments = just wanted to let you know you I really enjoyed the
story,damn near fell out of my chair laughing at the end of it,
keep up the very good work
766 28.03.07 betch story's
comments = your a good writer. just stop using clich`es like "hershey
highway"! it makes the storys Goofy, not erotic! and you have tons of
spelling errors. but other than that, great work.
765 17.03.07 Ed Kentucky Girl
comments = Wow! I must live within an hour of you. I am awed by your
expertise with the written word and insight into so many ethnic and
semi-ethnic mind sets and life styles.
I live in Washington Court House, OH. My Daughter lives not far from
the locations you describe in the Dayton area, and I have traveled and
stayed in most of the other areas you describe. (OK, Key West is out of
my experience. But you got me thinking about going there in the next
month or so.)
Thank you for the really thoughtfully written stories.
764 15.03.07 Les story's
comments = I would like to thank you for writing stories that I and my
wife can enjoy together as I read them to her most nights. Your plots
and whitty humor keep both of us glued to the very end. I know how
hectic it can be to write and proof read all your stories and I am greatful
for all your effort and dedication.
pleasse keep writing and just a special thank you to your sweet wife
Mrs Eskimo. We cant wait till your next story comes out and we know we
are going to love it.
(Eskimo: I enjoy hearing how coiuples lke my works just as much as females. I'll
try getting a story finished by teh end of April, but I cna not promise anything.)
763 14.03.07 Alvin story's
comments = Hi, I just wanted to know if you are going to publish any more stories?
Since I found your site I have been eagerly anticipating more. Hopefully
soon, you are missed. LOL
(Eskimo: I'm in a dry spell at teh moment. This past December was an anomoly,
as I was out of work due to an illness. And now that I'm working once again, I haven't
had time to really sit down and write.)
762 13.03.07 Bob Teaching And Learning
comments = I got some feedback from a guy about a story I'm posting at
another site, who thought I had written your story. I corrected him,
and then surfed over to read yours. Quite good. Technically clean
(except for one tiny error in the summary), and well written. It was a
pleasure to read. Thanks for writing it. I'm glad I didn't read it
before I wrote "Flossie's Revenge", which is about half posted at
storiesonline.org, because there ARE some similarities. I look forward to
reading more of your work.
(Eskimo: When I get the time, I'll have to cehck out what you wrote.)
761 08.03.07 Wayne Impregnating My Wife
comments = so beautiful reading your story. I will send my email and I
would love to send you a photo of my young wife and me with our Black
baby. Everytime I see this Black child I think of the nite this
dominican guy named jose and made her pregnant with our first Black child.
We want more it is so exciting seeing all those big Black cocks making a
baby in my slut wife maria.
(Eskimo: interesting...I'm sort of speechless!)
760 08.03.07 anon Greg's New Housemates
comments = 9.5/10!!!
759 07.03.07 Pat College Graduation Present
comments = It's a good story, and the setting is good. Personally, I'm
doubtful anyone (man or woman) could come that many times. But it's a
story, and it's entertaining.
(Eskimo: A few years back, my wife helped me get my rocks off five times in one
evening, and I was in my early 40's then....of course, I was shit for a week afterwards)
758 07.03.07 Shanker College Graduation Present
comments = Keep them coming
(Eskimo: This was a 'What if...?' story, as I was actually hit up on
by an older lady in a bar teh night before my college graduation....and I was too
damn naive to see it! God, if I knew then what I know now..lol)
757 06.03.07 John Couple Fun
comments = Thank you for the story and for posting it where I could
enjoy the fun. It was a fun story with something for almost everyone. Your
characters were likeable and real. The dialog was as real as any I have
read, considering this is porn. Thank you again. I would like to read
more about this interesting group of people.
(Eskimo: I beleive this one was my first really good story. Although
towards teh end I sort of let fantasy take hold. I probably should have ended it
the parents finding out about the kids.)
756 05.03.07 John Opening Her Eyes
comments = You write the most amazing stories. Thay are the most
erotic stories I have ever read. I perticuly like your
stories about pregnant sex, Thay realy turn me on.
Thanks very much for making my day
(Eskimo: This was one of my favorite writes, and yet it doesn't get too many comments or
views.)
755 05.03.07 ngr Mrs. Driggs
comments = oh that this c ould be for all us young? boys
754 05.03.07 NGR My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = loved it all,,especially the womens attitudes,,with more
were that way, life being what it is
753 01.03.07 Kazi My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = you my friend are a genius. i have read many stories as such
but none as creative n i could feel the passion in ur writing. a trully
gifted imagination you have. i look forward to read more from you.
(Eskimo: I think this is why I've hit a dry spell. It's hard to come up with fresh
material for each new story.)
752 01.03.07 Fred Summer Heat
comments = All I can say is... nicely done story. Enjoyed the
characters. Lucky Randy, for sure. Look forward to your other work.
751 27.02.07 Jason Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = This is a great story, every mans' fantasy
750 26.02.07 Hopeless Romantic Martha
comments = A bit unusual but almost right for a 'Hopeless Romantic'!
:-)
["You know, I'll be ovulating sometime later this week."]
I frankly think that their first intercourse should have occurred at a
random date on her monthly cycle, so that they were firmly 'hooked' on
the pleasure of sex as the date of ovulation came and went totally
unnoticed. Thus it was only after she had missed her menstural period for a
time or two (and possibly suffered from morning sickness) that she
realized and shortly thereafter admitted to him that she was pregnant!
(Eskimo: lol, you seem to have a one-track mind, don't you?.)
749 26.02.07 Dan story's
comments = i cant wait for the next one
(Eskimo: Not sure when I'll be finishing another. Just keep checking back
about once a week or so.)
748 25.02.07 Jeff Cindy's Quest
comments = Hi this is one of the best erotic materil i have readin a
wile and it think the author is pure genious
(Eskimo: Please note that I do not edit the messages before pasting
and copying to this page.)
747 25.02.07 Don Cindy's Quest
comments = heart-warming and sexy at the same time...a very rare
combination! thank you for the humanity displayed by the majority of the
people in the story. Good job!!
(Eskimo: I was wondering what type of reaction that I would get with this one.
So far, no negative remarks. I was afraid that I moved too slow iun the beginning, but
it sems no one has minded.)
746 23.02.07 William Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = wow great story
745 22.02.07 Snib story's
comments = I saw your comment about the flame mail you received from a
jerk from the religious right. Being in that group I can probably
guess what he had to say. I fee that you do a good job of not going out of
your way to slam religion. In Teaching, Cindy's Quest, and Miss
Darling I thought you gave religion a fair shake. It looked to me like you
were looking in from the outside but I didn't see any major problems.
My Big Trouble Making Cock made me think of some of my kids experiences
in bible schools. My son spent some time a Moody bible Institute. His
first trip home after about a month at school he mentioned some of the
guys were asked to leave for drinking and drugs. He could not figure
out how they managed to find out how to get the booze and drugs so fast.
The kids that didn't want to be there found each other real quick. All
of the kids sent home had been sent there by their parents to
"Straighten them out". Over the years I got to talk to a couple of bible school
presidents. When asked about this subject they agreed that their life
would be a lot less stressful if people would NOT send their rebellious
kids to Bible School to get straightened out. I think Oz Ozzie is
doing a good job of presenting the love of Jesus in A Bolt of Love on
beyondthefarhorizon.com.
The Cabin and the Cottage are 2 of my favorites. When I drive through
the gorge on I40 I wonder which one of those mountains has the cabin on
it. We also some time go thought Hot Springs and have taken the Smoky
Mountain railroad. I have spent some time on the north shore of lake
Huron and love boats and boating.
(Eskimo: Thank you. I'm glad you see my point of view. I also hope
that you enjoy more of my story's, it sounds like you've read quite a few
of my works so far. 'The Cabin' was inspired by visits to the Smoky's, and
'The Cottage' by trips to Lake Huron. You would probably like "Justice For
Megan' as well.)
744 22.02.07 Ron Working For Charlotte
comments = i enjoyed your story & would love to see you write a part
two.don't leave us hanging,does William make it one big happy family by
knocking up the daughters?
(Eskimo: LOL....no!)
743 20.02.07 Noe Mrs. Driggs
comments = How an active role for the daughter in the sequal?
(Eskimo: Not likely!)
742 20.02.07 Jim story's
comments = I thought that your stories were the best I got hard quick
and had a vry good time masturbating, thank you!!
741 20.02.07 Harry Moving Up
comments = After first reading "Moving Up" I declared you as one of my most
favorite authors. That was the first work of yours I read and was very
impressed. I'll also admit that I was surprised to find you are male.
You must type very fast for the amount of typos that you collect.
Even in your "Bio Page" the date 7 Jan 06 was errored as 08 not to
mention numerous "teh"s are throughout your stories, plus... IF it is
possible for you to get a proof reader (or two), your works would be
even more enjoyable to read.
Thank you for taking time to read this comment, but I also want to
ask you to keep 'em coming. It would aslo please me if you'd write
more stories of older women with younger men and boys.
Yours truly, your newest fan, Harry
(Eskimo: I ahve since gone back and edited this one again. It should read better
now. Surprised that I'm male???)
740 20.02.07 Richard Setting Up Roger
comments = I help a waning libido by reading erotica,,,for hours a
day, sometimes...and by injections of a WONDER DRUG named edex. I have
read MUCH of your writing and enjoy it very much.
I am 67, and about ready to marry the lady of my dreams in Indiana
in the spring. I am a "house nudist" in my apartment in a building of
100 apartments for people over 55. If the neighbors knew my lifestyle, I
am sure they would go into a catatonic trance! (My two lady Burmese
kitties don't care one way or the other.) I want us try a nudist resort
after we are married. From extensive reading, it seems to me as if you
give the nudist lifestyle a fair and accurate representation, which a
lot of nudists and I, not even a newbie yet, appreciate, I am sure.
All of the foregoing is to compliment you on this great story. I
thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for entertaining me. DO get a
proof-reader, however. That would add to the quality of your already good
writing.
(Eskimo: If you're interested in a nudist resort, jsut ask. I'll point you in the right direction.)
739 18.02.07 Comment Mouse Mrs. Driggs
comments = Good storyline, did spot a typo "feeling his cum drain our
from" to "feeling his cum drain out from".
738 18.02.07 John Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = Lovley story. Could be a novel
737 18.02.07 Jim Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = Great writing, excellent plot.
736 14.02.07 Alex Coaching
comments = Hot with a plot! You are one of the authors I like best as
you write well, giving good characterization of good folks in sexy
situations.
I would be interested in someday reading sequels to Coaching.
(Eskimo: I've been kicking around a sequel, but it just is not flowing out
the way I was wanting it to. Maybe in a year or so.)
735 08.02.07 Lisa story's
comments = hi incest is always best it keeps away from STD and own
family sperm is always best i did with my son and have two kids from my son
(Eskimo: I, uh, really don't know what to add here.)
734 01.02.07 Ieosepus story's
comments = Hi there, I truly enjoy your stories, but I wished you proofread them a
lot more.
You systematically mix up the possesive with the abreviated form of to
be--i. e. you say "you're" when you really mean "your", or you say
"they're" when you mean "their".
Some other misspelling errors happen to be there. Correcting them would
help enormously in making them more readable.
Keep on the hard work!
733 31.01.07 Rusty Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = Very nice. Really enjoyed the openness and caring your
characters exhibited for each other and of course the sex they shared as
well.
732 22.01.07 Jim Jenn's Pool Table Gangbang
comments = warm
731 19.01.07 Lee Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = exelent
730 17.01.07 Eric Wingman
comments = Eskimo,I was pleasantly surprised with your story. I don't usually expect a
good plot-line with these kinds of stories, yet yours kept me reading
until the end. As a fellow author, I thought you had some really good
ideas, and the fact that you kept nudity and sex as two separate entities
was encouraging. Wonderful story, and I will definately read more from
you in the future. it was a pleasure reading your story. You have a
gift, and I look forward to reading more from you.
(Eskimo: Mrs. Eskimo says I have a gift alright, but lets not go there. I
do appreciate your comments though, and with most of my story's, but obviously not
all, I try to make them beleiveable.)
729 16.01.07 Chris story's
comments = Hey there - these are really good stories!
728 13.01.07 Happyman story's
comments = I love your stories! Please keep up the brilliant work!
727 12.01.07 Alvin story's
comments = What a classy story. Humor, tragedy, warmth and a sense of
fulfillment. Please keep going on in this vein. Just Delightful...
(Eskimo: Unfortunatly, I've no idea which story this reader is commenting
about....must be all of them.)
726 12.01.07 espresso My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = I went to college in the late 70's at a private Uni close to
a Christian Uni. A fried of mine and I used to go to the Christian
School's Student Center all the time because the food was way better and
the prices were lower. Most people ignored us but a few talked to us
and soon discovered we were not students there. We figured we would be
asked to leave but instead we became an outlet for a lot of frustration
and curiosity, mostly from girls who were sent to the school to keep
them in line. Some were very cusrious and wanted to see the inside of a
real live College Dorm, theyu all lived in dorms as well, but any
excuse I suppose. Instead we took our girls to a fraternity house were we
knew some members and borrowed a room. The girls showed the
appreciation. We returned them and when we saw them again the next week they just
smiled and waved. Stii, the burgers were a buck cheaper, and other
girls remained curious.
(Eskimo: Interesting comments, thank you. It seems this story, although strictly
fantasy, has gotten some of the readers to comment about their college expereinces,
among other things.)
725 11.01.07 Dr T Becky
comments = It is too bad that as you fucked Becky for the first time
that she did not cry out for you to make a baby in her, even tho you were
her first and she did get preggie...
(Eskimo: Things that make you go 'Hmmmmm!')
724 06.01.06 Bill The Cabin
comments = I really enjoyed this one. Keep upthe good work!
(Eskimo: Another one of my older works, I'm glad you liked it.)
723 06.01.06 Tom Story's
comments = HI, I really liked your stories, especially the interracial
ones. Not sure if you take requests, but my wife has always been a prude,
sex at night lights off, things like that. I would love to read a story
about her, being down south, kidnapped by some black guys, used as
there whore, made to do things that she normally wouldn't do. Being passed
around for there amusement, then maybe becoming a crack whore for them,
and only doing things for black men and boys. Being driven around in a
car with them, naked having them show her off, and letting there
friends use her too. If you do take requests -- could you write me a story
like that. Her name is Laurie, she 5'2 145 lbs blonde hair blue eyes,
36c/27/37 big tits and a big ass lol Please let me know if you can.
(Eskimo: Your story idea is intriguing, but it's just not the story
that I would want to write.)
722 06.01.06 Luna Kentucky Girl
comments = Very well written loved the story line within the writing.
Gave you a full setting and got you going
(Eskimo: I think what helped this story, as well as some of my other better
works, is that I did a great job of providing detail, and actually made a story.)
721 05.01.06 Jerry RV'ing Fun
comments = I just started reading some of your stories. I liked the way
this one started out as it took the teacher thru a more natural
proccess of befriending some young men before engaging in some good raw sex.
My wife has never shown an interest in erotica. I use it for
entertainment as well as getting me aroused for some great sex with my wife. She
doesn't know what has turned me on but she sure enjoys the results. I
would like to get her interested in erotica. Do you have any other
stories that start out like RV'ing and gradually work their way into a story
that will arouse her?
(Eskimo: Geecsh, I've lots of story's that would probably fit the bill Suggest
you check out my catagory page, and go from there.)
720 05.01.06 Flash Summer House
comments = Good story. Hope you got more of this type in your
colection.
(Eskimo: I've a few otehrs with the theme of young love, if that's what
you're referring to.)
719 05.01.06 Brad My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = liked thestory need to continue it on
(Eskimo: No fucking way! This story is fine without making a sequel.)
718 05.01.06 Salt Wife's Friend
comments = thank you for an intersting story as i am now living on my
own these stories help I will be looking at more of your stories, please
send me a link
(Eskimo: I would send you a link if you had given me your email addy.)
717 05.01.06 Randi Working For Charlotte
comments = Another warm inviting story to get me off. But if I may
offer a suggestion, it might be a bit more believable if the women in your
stories are not quite so forward in their initial sexual overtures. In
this case with Charlotte going down on William there in his car with
little preliminary, gives a flavor of fantasy rather than reality. I
would have preferred William instigating the passion rather than the
mother. But it all ends well, doesn't it, especially in that scene where
Charlotte announces to her two sexy daughters that she's going to spend
the rest of her vacation in William's bed. Better to be up front than
evasive.
(Eskimo: I disagree with you, for in this case, the young man is
relatively inexpereinced, and Charlote obviously sensed this and decided
it was best if she made the first move.)
716 05.01.06 Randi Moving Up
comments = What a masterful story, and the theme represents the perfect
union of older white woman with a younger black stallion. I wish more
divorced white wives would recognize the obvious allure of a black lover
and take it to the necessary step that Sarah did in this story. Wonderfully done.
(Eskimo: Ummm, yeah...right...actually, race had nothing to do with this
story...but if you want to interpet that way, go right ahead little fella.)
715 04.01.06 Rob Friend In Need
comments = Hi, enjoy your stories very much. Doctors do not always get
it right and a will to live and purpose in life can do absulute
wonders, keep up the good themes.
(Eskimo: This is one of those 'feel-good' story's. And I'm surprised that I
don't get more commetns on it.)
714 04.01.06 Alvin story's
comments = Hi Eskimo,
I like your stories, and they all are not some kind of 'revenge'
stories, just very good romance stories. However, if you can find an editor
to help with some grammar and spelling they would make your stories
'excellent'. This does not bother me inasmuch as I am sure it bothers some
AOD's (Aliens, Ogres, and Demons) whose sole purpose is to torment
under the name 'anonymous'. Believe me, it would save you some grief. I
don't know if you are aware of "Literotica' there are some excellent
editors who would love to help. That's what they are there for.
Keep up the excellent work though, Thanks for sharing.
(Eskimo: Thank you for your support. I do have someone that just started
editing my works, but I haven't added his work at this time. It seems I've been a
bit busy lately to get to it.)
713 04.01.06 Doodad Nudist
comments = I enjoyed the story. There's a lot of truth it
it,especially about nudism being something other than about sex. The feeling of
freedom, the lack of erections, the cavalier attitudes of experienced
nudists, the the community shower, not having to dress to go outside or to
take a shower, all of these hit home with me. And the nude woman in
the office made me howl! I remember expecting my first nudist experience
to be different, but I certainly didn't expect to see REAL, bare ass
naked people with no clothes on!
You communicated some of the realities of the nudist lifestyle. Thanks
for the great story.
(Eskimo: The reason I communicated this one well was because Mrs. Eskimo
and I have ben practicing nudists now for about 15 years now. I have used a few
of our expereinces in soem of my nudist stories in the past, and probably will in \
the future as well.)
712 04.01.06 Wiley Rita's Friendly Neighbors
comments = Hi there, I thought I let you know that the various link that point to
this file 'educatingrita.htm' as 'educatingrita.html'
(Eskimo: I thought I had fixed this, but obviously I have not. I'll work on it
once more.)
711 03.01.06 Jorel My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = You have just finished a great story with some very erotic
scenes. As to the number of characters - no problem, loved the
different descriptions.
(Eskimo: After fiishing this one, I almost deleted the last part with the
second male, but I didn't. Seems just as well, as most have enjoyed this one.)
710 03.01.06 Don Mary's New Home
comments = They are great.
709 03.01.06 DM Coaching
commets = I just finished reading "Coaching" and I cannot wait for the next
episode. I have you bookmarked so I can stay up with your writing.
Love your style...
(Eskimo: Not sure when I'll get around to finishing this one.)
708 02.01.06 Don My Big Trouble Making Cock
comments = Very erotic story, but I must have 'missed' something....I
thought Joan was on the Pill, so how did she get preggie?
(Eskimo: You obviously missed the part where after he was gang fucked,
it was explained how the pill didn't prevent her from becoming pregnant. I
have actually heard that this has happened once in a great while to couples that
were not exactly expecting to be producing a baby.)
707 02.01.06 Dann Fantasy Vacation
comments = I wish there really was a place like that. We talked about
things like that but never had the opportunity. Hope at least part of
this was true for you. Great story....I really enjoyed. I just found your
site and love ir stories.
(Eskimo: This was jsut anotehr work of fiction on my part. I'm not even
sure why I wrote it, and some hated it, while others liked it. Personaly, it's
probably in my top twenty five of ones I wrote that I liked.)
706 01.01.06 Mihir My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = V gud story to make me hot,i lov yur writing
(Eskimo: For future reference, anyone else that wants to criticize my spelling and
grammar errors, please read the above message and translate for me.)
705 01.01.06 deathrider62 Summer At The Lake
comments = Very nice story enjoyed reading it .
704 01.01.06 Don Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
comments = And I thought that at least there was going to be some
impregnating here. But that is sorta hard to do when you have condoms
covering your hard cock when it shoots off.
(Eskimo: I can't get every female knocked up in every story, now
can I?.)
703 01.01.06 J Caribbean Cruise
comments = Hi Eskimo, first story I ever read of yours - very well
done. Lots of detail and very erotic as well. Will enjoy reading more,
now that I have found you.
(Eskimo: I sure hope you enjoy a few more of my story's.)
702 01.01.06 onewhoknows Opening Her Eyes
comments = not a bad story. reminds me of my exwife. she was a drinker
also. her cuz filled her up then his bros helped eventually
she got pregnant with her daughter. thats another story
(Eskimo: Another reader ginv me an excellent suggestion on waht to write! It may
be a while before I get it done.)
701 01.01.06 lala Mary's New Home
comments = can u fuck me plz and bring these studs along
(Eskimo: Mrs. Eskimo said no.)
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