499 15.03.06 Patty&mick Comunity Breeding Project
comments = hubby and i both cum when we read it
(Eskimo: I would have liked for you to have sent me pictures
of that....my wife and I have a very healthy sex life, and viewing
porn is a great way to add spice to ones marraige...too bad the
majority don't try it. Of course, it probably comes down to self-
esteem issues on teh wife's part, and sometimes even the husband.
But, I'm glad that there are others out there like this couple that
enjoy a good erotic read together.)
498 15.03.06 Trapper Ranch Hand
comments = No bitching here, great story
(Eskimo: I believe that in 2005 I wrote a bunch of very
well-written works. Still not sure if any that I've posted so far
this year will stand up to those high standards, but as from
what I've read amongst the comments, they've been favorable.)
497 15.03.06 Vince Plantation Stud Service
comments = enjoyed the story very much..reminded me of the book
MANDINGO,but this gave much more vivid details. this was really a better
scene' thanks.vince
(Eskimo: Actually, I liked how I ended it, making the story
not actually be what it had seemed.)
496 15.03.06 Diandra Dana
comments = i cum right the end. sexy and stmiulating
(Eskimo: Yeah, it did get good at the end. This was another
nudism story, as I tried to paint a picture of how non-erotic nudism
is, in the nakedness standpoint, yet as a nudist, we're not sexually
dysfunctional, that we do enjoy a healthy sex life with our significant
other, and we don't have non-stop orgies or swapping of wives. Does
that make sense?)
495 07.03.06 Lynx Dana
comments = It was an incredibly pleasnt story to read.. well writen.
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it. So far, this is my favorite story
for the new year.)
494 06.03.06 S S Romancing Shontell
comments = Your story about Andrew and Shontell was both sexually
stiimulating as well as being a well told story. You handled
a possibly controversial subject in a very nice manner. We
read so many of black men and white women that it is nice to
read one of a white man and black woman. I also enjoyed your
spelling and use of words. I am 83 yrs of age and widowed
since 2001. I have thought that I would like to make out
with an attractive black woman.
(Eskimo: This wasn't my first story involving a white male
with a black female. And I notice I get more positve comments on this
typw of relationship, than the usual black male-white female ones. Of
course, the negative comments on the latter style are usually racist
in nature....sort of makes you wonder why the double standard. The same
goes for portraying women as wanting sex, and men wanting sex. Social
mores says it's okay for a man to enjoy using his sex to the fullest
extent, while a woman is not suppose to have such urges. I do know
personally a few ladies that are what one would say are uninhibbited,
either sexually or about their body as nudists, and they seem so much
more full of life, and have more of a positve outlook on things. Maybe
they should be looked up to, and not down upon.
Oh well, time to get off my soap box.....And sit back and see the hate
mail I get for my next story, which is a white female-black male scenerio.)
493 04.03.06 A Guy Romancing Shontell
comments = i like Shontell better than Dana. it is less of a fantasy.
or maybe not - i don't know about the black experience, but i imagine
she would be getting a lot of flack for "betraying her race" and other
such nonsense. but that varies more by time and area i think.
anyway, kudos on a fine story
(Eskimo: I was wondering what sort of response that I would get from
this one. I've had a few people slam me for writting interacial stories involving
white women with black men, and jsut wanted to see if I would get the reverse or
not. So far, not. As for personal experience, I did enjoy the company of a female
African-American in my younger days....and no, money was not exchanged....it was
an itneresting event, elading up to and during the process of making love with her.
I'll enver out it to pen and paper, so don't bother asking.)
492 04.03.06 Jim Dana
comments = I enjoyed the story. There are a few typos you might want
to take care of. One is a bit of a howler: "a more viral sperm count".
That seemed incredibly perverse until I figured you meant "virile".
(Eskimo: LOL I changed that one, glad you brought it to my attention.
Seems Spell check and my going over is not 100% fool proof.)
491 03.03.06 Ian Summer Heat
comments = a good stroke story is great. a well written stroke story is
just that much better .thank you.
(Eskimo: TY)
490 03.03.06 Tom Summer Heat
comments = absolutly amazing took me 5 nites to read
(Eskimo: This was one of the five fan favorites of 2005. Right behind
Justice For Megan and Kentucky Girl. And just ahead of Olive and Ranch Hand.
It's going to be tough to duplicate the popularity of any of these works
in the future, but I'll try.
489 01.03.06 David Breaking In Party
comments = What a wonderful story! I loved it! Do you have other stuff
available that is not on asstr? Would you consider requests?
(Eskimo: At this time, I have never posted any story on any other
site. Asstr is my home, and I don't plan on leaving it...unless the right
amount of money rolls in. As for requests, I have done a few in the past,
but it always takes me a long while tog et them finshed.)
488 27.02.06 Phil April
comments = I thought this story was great, I don't know if it is
possible for a guy to cum so much in one day!
(Eskimo: I'll have to read the story to see how many times he did
orgasm in one day. But as for me, a few years ago Mrs. Eskimo was rather
inspired, as she helped get me off six times one very long, hot summer evening.
I thought my balls were going to fall off, and it took me three days to
recover.)
487 27.02.06 Don Filling The House
comments = Only one of several of your stories and all quite enjoyable.
You are a good author. Thanks much.
(Eskimo: This was actually a sequel to an earlier work, which is
titled Beginning Of A Harem. I presonally didn't like how it came out,
and have for the msot part refuced to write any more sequels to my
story's. BUt, I'm glad you liked it, and I hoipe you enjoy my other works
as well.)
486 26.02.06 Duncan Summer Heat
comments = Hi, you write a nixce story, enjoyed it very much, had a
chuckle
thinking about it too. Just imagined how I would have liked to have
been the hero.
Did alright anyhow. Thanks a lot.
(Eskimo: This story was inspired by the memories of family trips
to the area mentiend in the story. Thinking about it, that's where my
interest in voyeurism was first discovered, what with a bunch of older
female cousins, and a bathroom with curtains that did not close all the
way. Long story, but it had nothing to do with the story I wrote. And no,
I didn't score with anyone, except for with myself, of course.)
485 25.02.06 Meech Couple Fun
comments = I have read a few of your stories and love them. I am
curious about your motivation to write. Do you base your stories on real
experiences?
(Eskimo: Real life expereinces? Well, if they were all mine, I would
have had led a very interesting life so far. But alas, no. Although a few are
based on some sort of real life happenings of myself or of otehrs that I know,
most all are simple fantasy's that I took to writting down. I will add to this
that things that I've seen or done, have triggered the imagination in me from
time to time. Without going into details, I might see something, and the idea
of a sex story will come to mind. I've been told that I've a very fertile
imagination, and it shows in some of my works. I guess it helps in making some
of teh story's seem realistic.)
484 24.02.06 Ed April
comments = liked the story a lot . Wish it was me getting in on like
that. Am going too your story page also Paul needs a friend too help him
out with Beth and Alice Will you add too this
(Eskimo: Right after I finished this one, I started two chapters as follow
up works, never got them finished. Maybe one of these days.....)
483 24.02.06 Woody 100 story's
comments = Congratulations, I enjoy your stories
very much. Here's to the next 100.
(Eskimo: It will be tough to do, but I've already knocked the first one
down for the second hundred, so only 99 more to go.)
482 24.02.06 Sylvia Rita's Friendly Neighbors
comments = Awesome story, made me cum lots. ;)
(Eskimo: God, I love to hear that! I love to make the ladies happy.)
481 24.02.06 Hank story's
comments = Do some bro-sis, mom-son, father-daughter stories.
(Eskimo: I get asked to do incest all the time, but I just don't feel
comfortable. I tend to write stories which I'm familiar with, or fantasies which
I would like to happen :)
So, I don't plan on writting any incest stories.)
480 24.02.06 Alexandra Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = Thank you for your lovely story about angel and her
religious breeding. i am very very very happy to read about something i totally
fantasise about continuously and dream about all the time.
thank you for being able to understand my thoughts. i would love to
know what inspired your fertile story.
(Eskimo: What inspires me? Well in this case, it was the works of others
on the 'Naked in School' series, that have been written by others. I jsut decided
to write my own version, with a twist. Anotehr author, Jack C Lipton, has a good
version of his own, which I strongly suggest for all to read. As for what it inspires
me for my stories, being a guy, if it's involvng sex, I'm inspired!)
479 24.02.06 whitecock Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
comments = if ti had been anything except with niggers then maybe it
would have excited me more but having two white women who like to fuck
black men thats just not right
(Eskimo: Nice spelling and grammar, maybe you should become an
author. I sure wish that people that get offended by something, don't read
a story covering it.)
478 23.02.06 a guy Dana
comments = Dana is a bit of a male fantasy story. stripper with the
beautiful body picks an average guy (who happens to be a nudist) out at
random, makes babies and marries him. all within 30 days about.
and it feels like a fantasy, no realism. she has 13+yrs stripping, but
she has only had 3 guys? she is wealthy because some old guy just gave
her money, after a evening spent talking after years of looking? after
13+ years of stripping she is still able to get emotional with a guy,
without having suspisions about his wanting her for her body, not for
herself? it is not believable.
you could have done better, i have seen it here. but everyone is
allowed an off day. it was still pretty good, even if you coulda done
better.
(Eskimo: Interesting you mention that it's a male fantasy. Since
that's what most of us guys fantasize about anyway. You seem to stereotype
strippers, not thinking that they might want to love and be loved. As for
her picking him at random, if you read it, she did not. She became interested
in him for what he did not do, which is consider her as just a piece of
trash.)
477 23.02.06 Jonathon Dana
comments = Dear Eskimo.
This was a wonderful story. It was very uplifting. It's hard to
put my finger on exactly what makes it good but it really is. I enjoyed
it. Keep up the good work.
Sincerely, Jonathan.
(Eskimo: Interesting comments, thank you. I've recieved mixed reviews
on this one.)
476 23.02.06 Guy Kentucky Girl
comments = I just cant get over it that a writter who can write a great
story like this,can turn around and put out some of the trash you do.
(Eskimo: Well, maybe because the authr likes to write stories with a
variety of genres. I know that might seem hard to beleive, but sometimes I
just like to write sex trash. Fantasy? For the most part, HELL YEAH!)
475 23.02.06 Hopeless Romantic Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
comments = In the REAL WORLD, gang bangs involving strangers ought to
be scary just because it is so hard to know whether any of those cocks
are infected. Yes, I know, these stories clearly presume an imaginary
world where STD's don't exist. ;-)
But this story does illustrate a favorite point of mine, a clear
distinction between genetic fatherhood and parenthood. What delights this
HOPELESS ROMANTIC is that this husband has joyfully accepted so many
children that are so clearly NOT GENETICALLY HIS.
Indeed the surprise ending precludes an alternative surprise ending,
where it was discovered to his great horror that he was hopelessly
sterile! :-(
(Eskimo: Good analyisis. However, remember the story was not set in
the real world. As for your alternate ending, I had thought about that, but
in the story in earlier episodes, I did mention that at least two of the
children were his.)
474 23.02.06 Hopeless romantic Dana
comments = :-)
(Eskimo: For some reason, I figured you would like this one.
473 23.02.06 Jack Dana
comments = While I *love* the story, I didn't follow why he was so
willing to "be hers".
All right, so my stories usually have a fair dose of angst to
explain the mindset (or lack thereof) of the protagonist, but I
kind of missed any sense of why he was so open to Dana's
interest. Still a nice, warm, snuggly and cuddly story.
(Eskimo: You raised a good question....I just don't have an
answer. I had him trying to figure her out, not whether he was willing
or not to 'be hers'. After all, in real life, if some real good looking
lady comes up to you and says she wants you to have her baby, what would
you do?"
472 23.02.06 Al Ranch Hand
comments = very good ! :)
otherwise :"I would have liked to extend it by adding Emma's co-worker
Connie and her daughter into the story, having Connie joining Emma and
Frank in the bedroom, and her daughter becoming a lover of Ned and the
girls"
It's quite simple :
the bad husband is discovered by the police then a divorce connie is in
a deap sorrow she go to see her friend and she reveal that either she
is attracted by frank or that she need a man : her's was in no condition
to satified her ... or she discover emma going at it with ned and then
is explained the whole thing after maybe a little "blackmail" to reveal
it to frank ... ;)
(Eskimo: Actually, I've started a sequel for this, not long after I
finished the original. But, time gets away from you, I move to other works,
and put some stories on the back burner, so to speak. Maybe one of these
days I'll get back to it.)
471 23.02.06 Al My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = Well !
this one is REALLY nice you should "come up"(excuse the pun ! ;))
with the sequel !
and to be clear :
"I may have added too many charachters" is not ! ;)
well you can add an other ... for exemple the friend of anna ...
and a little bit off threesome ... with more lesbiannism could be a
good idea
(Eskimo: Although I do like your thinking, I don't think I'll
be working on a sequel. However, your ideas could be developed into
another and completely different story. I'll just have to come up
with a plot and characters for it.)
470 23.02.06 S Home Schooling
comments = Its not bad. I could have gone for a little more repetition
about which person had what physical characteristics. Overall well
done. Also I liked the obvious twist at the end, not the cameras, but the
parents knowing and going at it.
(Eskimo: I liked what you had to say. I think I did lack in describing
the characters in this one, but can't explain why I did not. It could be
because I did not want to use an overkill in words, whch sometimes happens
in stories, giving way too much descriptive on people and events. The trick is
to find an even balance between not enough, and being excessive.)
469 22.02.06 Luigi Justice For Megan
comments = A great story exceedingly well told. I very much enjoyed
every word. Iam definitely going to read some others of yours. Wished
that they could be downloaded and read at my leisure.
Keep writing and thanks so much for sharing them with us.
(Eskimo: I've now written and posted 100 stories, with number 100 being
posted today. And by far, I think this story has been my best work. Some
have been close, others don't even compare. Just wish I could bottle it
and use on my other writtings.)
468 22.02.06 Jon Kentucky Girl & Ranch Hand
comments = I just finished RH and KG. You put out some mighty fine
literture.
(Eskimo: Thank you. 2005 was a very good eyar for me, as I've recieved
lots of praise for these two stories, as well as the Megan story and a few
others. Hopefully, 2006 will be just as good. I've already posted six new
works for the year, so I am ahead of last years pace, when I posted sixteen.
I'm now at ninety-nine total, and I've a few that are about there, but need
some final touches. Please cum back for more.)
467 22.02.06 Dave Meadow View Court
comments = I wish things like that had happened when I lived in
Greenwood, Indiana!
(Eskimo: Yeah, it would have been niced if it had happened to me
anywhere! After I wrote this, I never did check to see if there was
actually a street with this name in that town. It would be funny if
there is. Oh yeah, if you don't know much about Greenwood, it is
considered to be rather red-neckish...maybe I'll work on a story about
that, just food for thought.)
466 21.02.06 Joe Stories
comments = A very well written tale, well edited, that I enjoyed very
much.
(Eskimo: Thank you, I just wish you would have mentined which story you
had read that you are commenting about.)
465 21.02.06 Lee Meadow View Court
comments = luved it..spurted a hot cum all over..more please...maybe
have a panty only day-everyone wears panties..or a one tit out day-one
tit showing all the time..etc..tease..fuck..and please...mmmm
(Eskimo: Interesting commetns and suggestions...not to sure what to
say about them, although I guess I could develop them into another story.)
464 21.02.06 Kay Widower Fun
comments = Well written, I'm not sure if you meant it to be so, but I
couldn't help but see the humor from some of the situations you put your
characters in.
(Eskimo: I always try to lighten up my stories with a bit of humor, as
that tends to make them more believeable. This was one of my older works, glad
someone found it and enjoyed the story.)
463 20.02.06 Pedro Justice For Megan
comments = great story, well set up. Just wish you could let someone
proof it for you before posting to catch the typos and missed words. If
you don't have anyone else, you could try me. I've been proofing my own
and other's professional work for some time.
(Eskimo: Looks like I'll have to go over this one once again. As for
proofing it, I am not a professional, so I can't pay anyone to do it, sorry.)
462 20.02.06 Edthedawg Impregnating My Wife
comments = amazing story - loved every minute of it and can't wait to
hear more... where can one find pix or vid clips?
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it, and I've no idea where you can find pix
or video clips.)
461 20.02.06 Gary Tagalong
comments = Id love to hear more about Sam's pregnancy.
(Eskimo: Read my reply to the next comment. I wrote this one
about five years ago, I can't even remember it.)
460 16.02.06 Mike Monica
comments = Another very good one,reading it put a smile on my face. How
about a part 2 with either or preferably both Katherine's character
devlopment and or further adventures of the happy couple/couples.
Thank you for posting your stories.
(Eskimo: A sequal??? HEll NO!!!! Thanks for the suggestion, but it
seems whenever I start a sequel, it just gets hung up somewhere along
the way, and I never seem to finish it. I've about twenty stories
that I've started that are sequels to an earlier work, and have yet to
finish them. But, thanks for asking.)
459 13.02.06 Roger Stories
comments = I'm not the Roger in "Setting up Roger", but I have read a
number of your stories as well as many comments from other readers.
They did turn me on in some cases, but since I am 74 and have an enlarged
prostate, apparently with some cancer, I do have a problem with an
erection at times. For those with the same problem, a Dr. Lin seems to have
some answers: search for "love positions" - I may order something from
him.
Now to the main topic of my comment. It seems that you must have had
some problems with Christians in the past and I agree that some of them
are way off base and are not in agreement with what the Bible says
about sex - but it is to be just with husband and wife. I have always had
a desire since I was eight to be a nudist, which is what drew me to
your website, but circumstances have not allowed it. I noticed that you
and others who have commented have indicated that they are not
Christians, but I would suggest that you look at the website: "Reasons to
Believe" and check out their evidence of the earth's having had a Creator.
The originator of the organization is an astrophysicist and checked out
all the main religious books before deciding to become a Christian
since the Bible had all the steps of creation in the proper order compared
to the other religious books - two was the best that they could do.
And since we live in only four dimensions (length, width, heighth, and
time), do you know that there it has been proven that there are at least
11 dimensions involved in this universe with two of them being
dimensions of time? Evolution is not an answer - check out this site. Only
the stubborn scientists are still trying to deny the evidence for a
creator.
Also, check out what has happened to the United States since 1962 when
the Supreme Court ruled out the Bible from our public schools. A graph
of crime in this country has climbed dramatically since that date. In
addition, why does the ACLU want the Ten Commandments out of our sight?
What is wrong with telling kids that murder of innocent people is
wrong, etc.? We could go over all ten, but that should be sufficient. The
ACLU was started by a Communist and you should know what the Soviet
Union did and what China does to Christians! And do you know that 15,000
Chinese are currently deciding to become Christians every day?
As I said above, sex is supposed to be between husband and wife. Now
that we don't have the Bible in the schools, and crime is on the rise
(in fact, one in 39 Americans have spent some time in prison, according
to some statistics) we have too many kids growing up without a father
and in some cases a mother. As a former public school teacher, I know
some of the problems they have and studies show that those without a
father or those who have been abused have a harder time growing into good
citizens.
So, the idea of loose sex or sex outside of marriage may be enticing to
the hormones, but we do hopefully control some of our other urges,
don't we? Accept for some gang members or extremely hardened criminals,
most of us do not go get a gun whenever someone displeases us and blow
them away nor do most of us ram our cars into those of others when they
cut us off on the freeway, though the urge might be there. Those are
the kinds of things that the Ten Commandments were written for. We all
have a choice - the questions is: what will it be?
I hope that I made some sense after all my rambling.
(Eskimo: Well, you got the rambling part right. And, I'm not sure
where to begin. Let's start with my supposed anti-christian stance. In
actuality, I'm anti-consrvative RELIGION. It doesn't matter wether it is
Christian, Muslim, Jewish, or even pagan, religious fanatics are a problem
in this world, and in America.
Now, lets' move on to evolution. Yeah, I beleive in it. Lots of reasons,
mostly because it's around us everyday. Can you say pesticides? Insects and
weeds evlove to combat the use of them, a lot more swiftly than we, as humans,
evolve to withstand new diseaes, bird flue being a good example. Also, having
travelled the world, seeing Gods such wonders as teh Grand Canyon, the Alps, and
thousands of other natrual phenonomens, it's take his work billions of years to
shape this planet, not seven days like some book says.
Okay, the sancity of marraige. Reading between teh lines there, you seem to equate
the nudist lifestyle with promiscuity. Not hardly! In over a dozen years of
enjoying hte nudist lifestyle, we've never ran into anyone, nor have we asked
anyone, to swap spouses. Now, the ugly side of being known as nudists. We have been
approached by swingers that were not nudists, that heard we were nudists, and were
mistaken in thinking that we would be interested in swinging.
On the America today. The ration of those having spent time in jail. Please note that
the number of DUI's have increased greatly. That probably spiked it somewhat, as has
better police work. Was life in America better in the fifties than today? I don't
think so, just ask any older African-american. Has family life deterioted? Probably,
but why? Personally, I think it's parenting skills, not lack of prayer in school. I
raised a child, with my sife, of course, no real religion was involved. He's in law
enforcement. As for failed marraiges, why? Good question. Alcohol, drugs, abuse, all are
leading contributers. Is it worse now than say fifty years ago? My answer is no. I've
heard plenty of stories of drunken parents, where the non-drunken partenr put up with
the otehr, for the sake of teh kid. Even when there was child-abuse. This shit
didnt happen overnight, it's been going on for, well, since before the bible was written.
As for self-control. Don't blame the lack of releigion. Instead, blame the media. What are
we bombarded with every day? Commercials and piss-poor shows that use sex as a tool. Not
mention the destruction of our young peoples sefl-esteem, especilly the females. Which
brings me back to the nudist lifestyle for a second. From my perspective, most American
nudists are middle-ages, mediun age in the late-forties. Most are not what you would call
physically fit. But, tehy all, for teh most part, are happy with their appearence.
And beleive it or not, most consider themselves Christian, and are happy with the way God
made them. And I firmly beleive that all younger people shold experience it at an early age,
maybe the fashion industry would take a nose dive because of it, but so what.
Well, gues I did ramble as well. I'lls top for now, you all have a nice day.)
458 07.02.06 Charliez Stories
comments = I have read all your listed stories and can come up with
only one answer.There has to be at least two people writting as
"Eskimo1958.
I can not belive that the same person who wrote "Megan","Ky
Girl,"Wingman",and some other very good stories,could have also authored such low
pieces of shit such as," Swingers Interacial Weekend-","Knocking Up A
Mother And Daughter",To name only 2 of the worst of 10 or 15 realy bad
ones.Why the mixed race stories?Do you get some type of sexual release
by having white women fuck niggers?This tends to degrade all white woman
as sluts or whores.Would you please in the future have the "Good"
Eskimo1958 write more and the other Eskimo1958 go off someplace and jackoff.
(Eskimo: Whoa there, Chuckie....let's not get upset about a story or two.
First, I believe variety is the spice of life, that's why I wriote a little bit
evrything, as long as it does not involve underage, watersports, rape(well,
usally not), watersports, or anything involving pain(Okay, maybe a little bit
of pain is okay). And second, you didn't mention a thing about a few of my
stories where a white man has sex with a non-white woman, why is that? Sounds
like you don't get laid often enough, and I think I see why.)
457 06.02.06 Raza Stories
comments = It would be nice to have a story where children
observe/watch/spy on their parents having sex, with each other as well as other
partners. The other partners may be same sex as well as opposite sex so
MF, FF & MM. The stories do not necessarily have to have incest.
It would be really exciting if there was a story like a swinging nudist
sex farm etc, where families go in the summer. It could be a nudist
plus swingers resort. The children can see adults (including their
parents) having uninhibited swinging sex, with different partners of the same
as well as different genders so MF, FF and MM, as well as possibly
group sex. At the same time children/teenagers can have sex with each each
other. Observing sexual acts is no issue so sex can be initiated by
different partners even when groups or families are together or if they
run into one another separately, e.g. whilst strolling around the resort.
So a woman can approach a childs mother whilst they are sitting as a
family to initiate sex with her or can run into her whilst walking, with
the child nearby watching and they have sex.
(Eskimo: Interesting concept....however, I'm not too comfortable with the idea
of adults haveing sex with underage children, especially pre-teen. However, I'm
sure there are those that read thjis that are, and they may sit down and write
such a story. But not me. Thanks anyway.)
456 05.02.06 Bob Wingman
comments = Thank you for your stories! I have been enjoying them!
FWIW, I think Wingman is better than Justice for Megan. More believable
maybe; less religious BS. Though the cumuppence ending of Megan is
choice! Thanks again!
(Eskimo: I think the ending to Megan is a lot better than to this
one. Other than that, the story's are both relatively similar. Just a
variation of the same theme in both stories.)
455 02.02.06 Jerry Olive
comments = you did good.
(Eskimo: This is a story that has inspired a bunch of new ones, but as of
yet, I hadn't finished a one. For some reason, just can't get past the middle.)
454 30.01.06 anon Home Schooling
comments = i need a video
(Eskimo: Don't we all! Not to much story to this one, but the sex is
interesting. I'm sure the porno producers read it, they might make one of it.
And they better write the check to me!)
453 29.01.06 Richard The Cottage
comments = Love your story. Have read several others. Please keep up
the great work.
(Eskimo: Another of my earlier works, I've always liked this one,
and it just doesn't seem to get much response, although this is the second
comment in a week concerning it. I always thought that the story made this
one, and the sex was rather nice as well.)
452 29.01.06 Matt Iqbal
comments = loved it
(Eskimo: I enjoy simple, pleasent comments.)
451 28.01.06 Earl The Irishman Widower Fun
comments = love the plot and the ending was fantaboules i would love
the chalange of converting them from lez to my kind of loven
(Eskimo: I'm glad you liked this piece. It's one of my older works,
and I even go back and re-read it from time to time.)
450 27.01.06 hopeless romantic Wingman
comments = This story is delightfully written, and this HOPELESS
ROMANTIC is delighted that Sandy and Kurt spent so much time together before
having sex. Indeed, it is delightfully old fashioned for them to wait
until he has the firm promise of a good job and a firm date for a
wedding before 'doing it.' Last but not least I am particularly happy that
they never used condoms although I am neutral about her having never used
'the pill!'
Conversely, I suspect that it is UNREALISTIC for a college boy and girl
to share a bed together for so many nights IN TOTAL NAKEDNESS without
having sex, even if he is a lifelong nudist. Indeed, I think that
despite their FIRM INTENT, his very erect cock will just slip into her well
lubricated cunt on an unplanned basis as they cuddle together in total
nakedness. Then after simply enjoying the resulting pleasure, their
involuntary stroking will begin, intensifying until their mutual climax
(and his ejaculation) is impossible to avoid.
Furthermore, it is UNLIKELY that she became pregnant that first night
as you have implied, unless they took very special measures toward that
end. It is more likely that pregnancy occurred SEEMINGLY at random
while they were enjoying good sex at frequent intervals, only discovering
that it had happened a few weeks (or more) later when she FINALLY
realized that she was no longer having menstrual periods.
Last but not least, both of them should have had some trepidation about
enjoying her first time on an UNPROTECTED basis, just because that act
could SO EASILY lead to PARENTHOOD (and all of the burdens it implies).
Mindful of this, I think that it is very important that he TRIES each
time to hold his ejaculate for as long as possible to prolong their
pleasure. Furthermore it is the effect of her orgasm strongly milking his
cock that finally FORCES him to ejaculate in her depths. Indeed, they
should soon discover that when sex is THAT GOOD, his copious ejaculation
into her depths is just UNAVOIDABLE. And this grim realization adds a
tartness to the act that adds intensity to their pleasure!
(Eskimo: You really ought to stop thinking so hard, as it seems obvious
to me that it destroys the enjoyment of reading a story.)
449 27.01.06 Jake The Cottage
comments = Great story, if it's true.
(Eskimo: So are you saying that since it is not true, that it's a
bad story? Oh well. I've always liked this one, although I rarely recieve
a comment about it. Not sure why, could be of the unusual setting, which is
just another place that I've visited in my life. For some reason, places that
I've visited tend to end up in my works. I guess knowing the area helps in
describing the scenes. Do you want examples? Well, read more of my works.)
448 26.01.06 Looney Wingman
comments = Great story. I like all your stuff and this one is just as
good as the rest.
I would like to hear the story of what happened between Simon, Diane
and Sarah. I think it would be interesting.
(Eskimo: A story of Diane, Sarah and Simon could be interesting,
but I'm afraid it would develop into a bondage story, and I just don't
feel comfortable with that genre. I was worried about this one, as I was
not sure that I had spent way too much time writting the story line before
getting to the sex.)
447 26.01.06 Bob Justice For Megan
comments = This is a wonderful story. Thanks for posting it for my/our
enjoyment. The build-up to the 'Sting' is well done in my opinion. I
look forward to reading more of your work now I have found you on ASSTR.
Thanks again.
(Eskimo: Well, unfortunaltly, this has been probably my best story
so far. Although there are a few others that rank right up there. I guess
you'll just have to read them all and see which ones you like. I enjoy a
good plot, and this story has an excellent one. I think that's what raises
it above all others that I've penned. Hell, even my wife enjoyed it!)
446 26.01.06 a guy Beginning Of A Harem
comments = i always like harems, in concept.
the problem is women don't want to share either. stresses develop,
uneven sharing (of feel that way) and it all fall apart - unless their is
an outside force holding it together - religion, or force.
then their is the problem of the next generations: the mormons in
texas/utah border face that, with equal #of boys you get excess possible
husbands. so they dump the boys for minor "rebellions" out of the family.
or they send them out to die in battle like the muslims.
ah well, there is always a hole in any system.....
(Eskimo: Great, now I'll get all the Islamic nuts mad at me. Oh
well, I tend to get lots of different zealots pissed from time to time.
I do admire your opinon however, and I whole heartedly agree with you. Except,
you might want to improveon your geography, as Texas does not border
Utah. You're actually referring to Arizona.)
445 25.01.06 Allan Ranch Hand
comments = I don't know how you do it....this is as nice as the frst
one I read. You are a genious..I gues but I must read some more.
(Eskimo: A vivid immagination helps. And sometimes, I may see
something, and it just jumps right out at me, saying 'Write me!'.)
444 25.01.06 Jim Wingman
comments = I loved this story. Matter of fact I loved all your stories
(Eskimo: Not sure about that, as even I hate to admit that I've written a few
bad ones.)
443 25.01.06 Allan Kentucky Girl
comments = Well..Hell..This certainly is a joy to read.
I haven't been reading much lately and I didn't think that
a story could be this entertaining. It was very humorious
and erotic without being vulgar.
Congratulations are in order.
I've visited South Carolina, now a trip to Kentucky seems
to be calling.
(Eskimo: Have a nice trip....maybe you'll find her family...or cousins)
442 25.01.06 Larry Beginning Of A Harem
comments = At last there is someone who knows how to write.
441 24.01.06 Dennis Learning With Gail
comments = This is a gr8 story. The sex was ok but the story was
great. I truly enjoyed it.
(Eskimo: I've been thrilled at how well you readers enjoy my
stories when there is a good story involved. Makes me happy.)
440 24.01.06 anon Opening Her Eyes
comments = You should stick to what you know.You dam sure dont know
how to write stories about cheating slut wives.
(Eskimo: Gee Wally, a little harsh, don't you think? Especially since
this wasn't a slut-wife story? I would hate for you to review a story of a wet-dream,
as you would probably screw it up as well.)
439 24.01.06 Tony Wingman
comments = As always excellent writing. I don't care for a few of the
topics of your stories but that's just my tastes.
(Eskimo: I try to use different topics. if I don't, I consider
the stories to be basic repeats of each other. This one was rather long,
before I really had any full-blown sex scene in it.)
438 23.01.06 John Wingman & Kentucky Girl
comments = Just want to say that I like your stories. I love your sense
of humor especially the Kentucky Girl and Wingman.
Keep up the good work
(Eskimo: I love using humor in my stories....makes the read even
more enjoyable.)
437 23.01.06 one Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = do u even know what a christian is? the story was good,
minus the whole insest part. u do realize that ur gonna burn in hell for
that along with exploiting the whole sex & God. Your pretty sick.
somebody fantacisizes about insest a little excesively
(Eskimo: I just love readers that don't have a clue....what incest?
(please note the proper spelling of the word), there was no incest in this
story. And, if you're a real good Chirstian(notice the word should be
capitalized), you shouldn't be reading porn! Am I going to burn in hell?
Well, since I don't necceserilly believe in either a heaven or a hell, I really
don't beleive so. Please use a dictionary before sending your comments from
now on. Maybe you can get your mommy to help.)
436 23.01.06 Brian My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
comments = I think you are a very good writer, and no there were just
the right amount of characters in this story.
(Eskimo: I wasn't too sure about this one. I considered it to be
a 'like it or love it' type. But it sems most of the reviews on it have
been favorable. And thanks for the compliments.)
435 23.01.06 Mart Beginning Of A Harem
comments = A good read, but you need to proofread it for spelling
errors - for example, you're for your (joe talking to deborah about his
mother)and "you won't be much use to me for the remaining FIFTH TEEN
minutes" for fifteen minutes. All of these will pass a spell check but still
be wrong.
Despite the apparent complaint, I do appreciate the stuff you have
written and made available to us non-writers. Keep up the good work
(Eskimo: Well, seems my re-editing didn't do to well. I'll work on it
and repost it soemtime in the future.)
434 23.01.06 AJ Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
comments = hot but weird
(Eskimo: All this story is, is a 'fuck-n-suck' story. It was jsut something
that came to mind rather quickly, and I just wrote it down. I probably could have developed
it more, in way of the characters and the story line. But glad you were 'interested'.)
433 16.01.06 Willy Ranch Hand
comments = I sure enjoy the story and would like to read more if u got
more story on ranch hand
(Eskimo: I did start a sequel on this one, but it's far from being
finished. Seems that it's hard to equal the intensity of the first one.)
432 16.01 06 Judy Olive
comments = It was great to have a male willing to assign some sexual
attractiveness to older woman for a change!
(Eskimo: It seems women just love this type of story, where a younger man
seduces or is seduced by an older woman. I'm thinking it's a fantasy on
their part, and I just wrote it out for them.)
431 13.01.06 Jim Stories
comments = Needs to be much more subtle
(Eskimo: Please explain....you also didn't say which story's that
you are talking about.)
430 04.01.06 Sassy Stories
comments = I really have enjoyed your stories, though to be honest I
have only read 3 of them. I read the one about the ranch hand who
introduced the art of making love with his boss's 2 young daughters, the one
about Olive, and the one with the twin bikers. The reason I chose those
3 were because there were personal details in them that caught my eye -
the name Olive is very familiar and beloved (and no, it is not my own
name), the ranch background was similar to my up bringing, and third and
last, there are twins in every generation of my family, myself being
one. But all this is irelevant drib drab lol! My purpose in emailing you
is to tell you how very much I loved your stories.
The reason I loved your stories was because though they are erotic
(extemely so...so much I had to have a brief interlude lol) they still
kept my interest as to plot details. You could say that they "lured me
in with the interesting titles and brief synopsis, grabbed my attention
wholly and kept me on the hook until completion? They were extremely
erotic without being trashy or crude. My sincerest appreciation and
gratitude!
(Eskimo: I don't know why, but I love it when women write to say how
much that they enjoyed my stories. I ahev noticed that they usually mention
how a story reminds them of something that had happened int heir lives, an
ineresting point, I think.)
429 04.01.06 Fritz Stories
comments = Your stories are o.k. but lapses in grammar spoil them for
me, no hard feelings. Nobody is perfect. BUt we have to keep trying.
Thanks.
(Eskimo: Yes, you're right, and remembering what letters need to be
in uppercase is also important.)
428 03.01.06 A Guy Key West Balcony
comments = nice, but felt....short. like it was a piece of a longer story.
unsatisfying, as light fluffy biscuit is - when you smell the rest of the
banquet thru the door.
(Eskimo: An interesting anology....maybe I could have written a bit more, but
I didn't....possibily a followup with just the mom, maybe? The daughter was the appetizer,
while teh motehr was the prime rib? And then both for dessert? It does have
possibilities, I do admit that. I do have to add, that this was a quickly written
story, less than a few hours. I've some works that I started years ago, and have never
finished. So, for a very short story, I am very satsified with it the way it is.)
427 03.01.06 Bud Following Directions
comments = You asked about a different name for this story.
How about " The Treasure Hunt" ? After reading this story it is appropriate.
(Eskimo: Hmmmm, that is a good title, I'll have to think about it.
Then again, your title has given me the idea of another story. Now, to find the
time to write it.)
426 03.01.06 hopless romantic Key West Balcony
comments = <>
This line spooked a HOPELESS ROMANTIC into believing that this was just
another story about a delightful ONE NIGHT STAND, until I read on to
the far more hopeful ending.
Yes, I would LOVE to see the story continued, particularly if Mom
become so jealous of her daughter that she really wants to SHARE his cock.
By the way, it was never mentioned whether she was 'on the pill!' Mom's
disclosure that she is NOT, occurring later that day might add some
rather strong spice to this story!
(Eskimo: Another indepth review by everyone's loveable literary
critic, the Hopeless Romantic. I ended the story as I did, because I thought
adding more to it to involve the motehr would only ruin it, make it
to long. I did enjoy writting htis one, seting the mood and plot came out
rather well, I thought. And, it made the reader wonder what was to happen
next at teh end. It gave the reader the inspriation to conjure in their
own mind what might happen next. Obviously HR cmae up with his idea.)
425 23.12.05 Gene Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = genius alternative world
(Eskimo: Yeah, it would be nice, wouldn't it.)
424 22.12.05 Pascal Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = comments = The Sunday episode is the same as the Monday episode. It
looks as though part two has been loaded over part one.
Could you please check it for me?
(Eskimo: SHIT!!! I totally fucked things up, hadn't I! Okay, I
luckily had a backup copy, which I edtied quickly and reposted. Sorry
to make a mess of things.)
423 22.12.05 Doug Kentucky Girl
comments = You are and excellent writer & plotter.
MINOR Point: on your Main Page (titled WARNING) you have links thus:
All Stories
Story Catagory's <<<< that's called a Greengrocers' Apostrophe
No biggie, but lose the apostrophe ;)
(Eskimo: Thanks for pointing that out, I'll change it soon. And thanks
for reading and finding enjoyment of the story.)
422 22.12.05 Mike Summer Heat
comments = Great story
421 22.12.05 Richard Justice For Megan
comments = One of your best. I really enjoyed it.
(Eskimo: Even Mrs. Eskimo liked this one. This is probably my best
story, as far as reader comments go.)
420 21.12.05 Bill Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = Your link to "Angel's week ... Sunday" points to a chapter
titled "Monday". The link for "Angel...Monday" also points to a chapter
titled "Monday".
(Eskimo: I think I found the error and have corrected it. If there are any others,
please let me know.)
419 19.12.05 Melissa Ranch Hand
comments = i love reading stories like this. half way into the story i
camw can you believe that????????????
(Eskimo: Gee, not sure if I believe you or not, why not send pictures? Don't
worry, they won't be posted on the internet.)
418 18.12.05 olnik Ranch Hand
comments = hellow,your story is great.my gf also like porn story.i give her your story.
(Eskimo: Glad you liked it.)
417 15.12.05 Warwick Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = Angel 1 is a really good start at an unusual background for
a story. Looking forward to the continuation.
(Eskimo: I hope to have the next installment posted by Christmas. I've
never done a whole series before, so please bear with me. I figured that this would
be a unique story, and I'm trying to keep the reader interested through all chapters,
which can prove to be difficult.)
416 15.12.05 Gary Lover
comments = A very good story. Having written both true sexcapades and
fiction fantasies I loved the gang bang. My mistress, a white 37 yr old
nymph, took on 4 well hung black guys allnight long. Could hardly walk
the next day. I was not able to se them but Terri said they called her
"a trooper"
(Eskimo: Yeah, a good gang bang is something special, would like to hear
of your mistress' story in detail.)
415 14.12.05 Richardv Swingers Interacial Weekend
comments = Nicely done. Kept me reading fast all the way. It was a real
nice read. Sexy too. I love this kind of story, My favorites are about
Mothers in law who finally give in after a struggle.
(Eskimo: Mothers in law????....hmmmm.....I'll have to think on that one.)
414 13.12.05 Rocky Breaking In Party
comments = This was a good story and sexually pleasing. I'm curious if
you are still doing this and how old you are now? I mean this most
definitely does sound like a fun event to do. I've been in threesomes
before but never in orgies with that many people.
(Eskimo: This was one of my earlier works. As for mya ge, let's say I'm
not fifty yet. And no, I don't do orgies. And no comment about multiple
sex partners, as my mommy may be reading this. Glad you liked it and sent me
a pleasant comment.)
413 13.12.05 P Snow Job
comments = This was great and super sexy at the same time. I really
enjoyed it. Thank you for your effort and very nice writtings.
(Eskimo: I wasn't to sure if this story would be well recievd by the
readers. But, I was pleasently surprised that it has been. It could be considered
just another 'fuck-n-suck' story, but as I said, it has recieved good comments.)
412 13.12.05 Chad Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
comments = One can only dream! Great story.
(Eskimo: This is teh first story in a series, it's my stab at the
popular 'Naked In School' series by another author here at asstr-mirror.org, and
I'm glad you liked it. I hope to have the next chapter posted by Christmas.)
411 13.12.05 Chad Vacation Bonding
comments = Story was great, knowing my family This could have been more
than a fantisy, But that was back in the day and I am sure it never
crossed anyones mind except maybe4 my older sister and my self. Now that
could be a story.
(Eskimo: Another reader who has a childhood that I might want to hear
more about. This was all fantasy on my part, as I had a somewhat normal
family upbringing...of course, what's normal?)
410 13.12.05 Tester P Iqbal
comments = Very thought provoking and interesting story. well, raeding
this brought back my memories of childhood. I also happened to see a
movie on similar theme some years back.
(Eskimo: I don't recall any movie like this story, but if there is one,
I would appreciate someone telling me. And of course, you now have me interested
in hearing about your childhood.)
409 12.12.05 Bernie Olive
comments = great story made me very horny, its good to hear stories of
more mature fems
(Eskimo: I've a few stories with this particular theme. And each
one is unique. Kind of makes me wonder if I've a repressed Oedipus complex.
I do have one or two more on this suubject that I'm presently working on, but
no timetable on when they'll be completed.)
408 10.12.05 Albrecht Summer Heat
comments = absolutly great story! thank you
(Eskimo: Thank you for taking the time to read it and sending
me your comments. I think the year of 2005 saw some of my best works so
far, and I hope to improve for 2006.)
407 07.12.05 Stork Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
comments = damn, that was hot
(Eskimo: Thank you.)
406 07.12.05 Uzra Iqbal
comments = I read this story attracted by its title in Urdu. Indeed, a
very well written story, very realistic; one of the best on this site.
Congratulations.
(Eskimo: I've been pleased with the responses so far with this
one. I'm not too sure how to add another one like this, but maybe I can.)
405 07.12.05 E.T. Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
comments = Enjoyed the story. Hope you'll have more chapters. Maybe the
daughter's friend might like to be part of it too.
Keep up the good work.
(Eskimo: Don't think I'll be adding any more chapters, I think the
ending of this one was enough. I ahte beating a story to death, and so I
usually use one cast of characters for just one story, limiting it to one
story plot.)
404 06.12.05 Jon Ranch Hand
comments = SUPER!!! This is one of the BEST, Please keep on. Add more
to this story. Thanks
(Eskimo: Although I've started a sequel, it's sort of dead in the water, as I've
been busy workingon other projects. Maybe by end of next year I'll have it done, if at all.)
403 06.12.05 Sharon Iqbal
comments = A very good story I read after quite some time though
different from your usual stuff. Could we have more on similar themes?
(Eskimo: Yes, there's a reason it's different. As for your second statement,
it's possible, but not in the near future.)
402 05.12.05 Doug Justice For Megan
comments = just read a long story you dis about a coledge couple , on
from perdue and a yung girle from another. Hope you do more. The passion
and most of all the compassion you expresed was so great, refreshing,
ok just plain awsome. I felt the love. keep it up
(Eskimo: Thanks for reading and enjoying the story, since the comments
are flattering, I won't say anything about spelling and grammar...tempting...but I
won't.....no need to slam a student from U if IN.)
401 04.12.05 Hopeless Romantic Cassie And The Biker Twins
comments = Normally, I abhor CONDOMS just because of the way that they
interfere so strongly with my sexual pleasure. Indeed I wonder if
condoms likewise interfere with a woman's pleasure. Furthermore, I suspect
that the mutual strong pleasure of an UNSHEATHED cock is important to
the emotional bonding that occurs during repeated good sex.
I am delighted however that the condoms are eventually FORGOTTEN,
with the result that both women unwittingly become pregnant, just as
NATURE intended.
(Eskimo: Hmmmm, the more I read his comments, the more I start to
think he's one of those white extreme right-wing closet perverts....anyway,
I'll refrain from such finger pointing, mainly because he actually liked the
story, in his own unique way. I asked my wife, an expert on sex, as we do it
quite iften, and her comment on the use of condoms is that she enjoys both ways
about the same, but when it comes time for clean-up, she would prefer that they
would be worn...seems Mr. Eskimo cums in buckets....As for other women that I've
had the pleasure of 'knowing' over the years, for the most part, condoms were used,
but the enjoyment of it for both parties involved never seemed to be diminished.
Actually, in my own expereince, as well as my wife's, it seems condoms tend to
prolong the experience, as it kept me, and whatever former lovers my wife once had,
from cumming too soon, and since most women, damn near all from my own personal
experience, in both participating and viewing live, tend to take a lot longer time to
achieve their climatic goal during intercourse, while oral does the job real good before
(and during, guess you would have had to have been there) actual copulation. Whew, looks
like I've gone into sex therapy discussion. I'll stop at that.)
400 03.12.05 Hopeless Romantic untitled #2
comments =
I like the idea that this story begins with his flirting with two young
women that work closely together. As both of them rise to his bait, he
deliberately dates both of them separately in order to arouse their
COMPETITIVE instincts. Indeed the women's ongoing stream of well veiled
hints to each other just enhances his apparent progress with both women
beyond his expectations.
But it is only after he is forced to intervene in an absolutely
horrible 'cat fight' between the two women, do they realize that the
acceptance of ultra-modern ethics allows both of them to successfully SHARE his
delightful sexual assets. Indeed, the fun of this story should be the
obvious difficulty that all three have in overcoming their own series of
misconceptions about sexual threesomes, first within their own evolving
relationship, and later among their family, friends, and other
co-workers!
(Eskimo: Getting pretty bad when you start critiquing stories that I
haven't even come close to finishing yet....and in the case of this one, I
probably won't finish it. I probably won't finish it because developing the
story it just isn't coming out the way that I would like...and I'm almost
positive not the way that this particular reader would like lol)
I would love to hear your opinion of these comments, or about my stories. So please, let me know what you thought of it. All comments, good and bad, will be greatly appreciated. If you would like for me to respond, which I shall, please add your email address in the comment area. Thank you.