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It was a charming story, sweet and inoccent. My cock was aching all through the story as I remembered a few year ago the same had happened to me. Excellent story I'm glad it brought back fond memories, and I'm very glad it gets your seal of approval! -Tilly I loved your story it was really really good. So are you going to make a sequal or another chapter? Please do i would love to read it. Well let me know. Keep up the good writing hun. Too many things on the go to even think about looking backwards, but you never know! Thanks for the encouragement! Thank You This story brings back long ago memories. You lucky thing! -Tilly This was very sweet, and I loved the innocence. It's probably because I'm so naieve! nice and naughty. nice build up, great end
unbelievable romantic. young love is SSOOOO enjoyable. makes me cry. not that way. my heart just aches, hoping that all will beautiful. in the now and the future.and in the past looking back on it. how good is that?? Oh don't, you'll start me off now! both stories (liberty and wet) were awesome and i would LOVE to read sequels! For a while ive tried to write like this or anything, however i have a harder time to put it on paper as well as you do plus i find i have trouble finishing them. the way you wrote both stories, but especially "Wet" was very witty and the almost small talk between them made it seem like they just clicked together because they didnt need to say much before they new each other. Liberty was awesome to read. I cant really explain what I liked about it but it made me wanting more. It was one of those stories that id really like to keep reading about just to see how their lives turn out. does he move to london permanently for liberty, how do their parent take this news...and so on. anyways, i loved them both and personally would love to read more on them both but liberty more so. I it a bravo! Gosh. I like "Wet" too. I thought it perfect, just a b it short but perfect
What about "less is more"? ;) -Tilly Innocent, romantic, sweet, light-hearted, and ooh so erotic. You MUST write more! Okay! Oh, and thanks! Perfect. I would not change a thing. Age was great too. It happens,(even in the United States), that can make it even more special for both. Of course when she's 35-40 she will be needing a teenage boy for her own. lol. I like that the story stopped there. Let our own minds finish the fantasy. Why mess with perfection? You know, that's what I thought too. ! I liked it very much Ahh. Someone after my own heart! -Tilly Yes i ove your work i thought it was great but some parts of the srory was predictable, but the movie part was unexpected but great,hey it was way better than the normal sensless mumbling with a virgin story. Ahh...you must be used to Gentle's writing - the master of the unpredictable! I'm just glad you liked it! -Tilly u mother faukr fauck me now You know what, I think I'm gonna have to take a rain cheque on that (thanks anyway), but the 10 is much appreciated! -Tilly very well written ,and nine years is not most /I enjoyed it every must
Sounds like someone was a little to preoccupied to type! I got the gist of this, and thank you! -Tilly TANFASTICALLY FANTASTIC STORY Keep it up ! ! ! ! Thank you for your tanfastic feedback! -Tilly Wow!! I loved that so much!! Tilly your one amazing writer! Please I loved to her more of this. Number 1 Fan!!
Thanks Gordo! That's praise indeed! -Tilly GREAT!!
*grin* THANKS!! -Tilly [blank] Were there no comments to qualify this anonymous disparagement? What a shame. I can only learn if people talk to me. Criticism I can handle - I just prefer it a little more constructive! -Tilly Great story, loved the romance. Would have liked it more if she were 18. Thank you, and hopefully you'll like the next one better! -Tilly Great story! Very well-written, no wasted words! Thanks! My pleasure! very nice story. I can see why you're recommended by gentle. great tatse. Gentle is very discering about who he lets grace his website - I had to jump through all sort of hoops to persuade him! it was nice, really appealed to me since I'm the romantic type(looks away ^_^ ) but it was put well together another well done story I think we're all the romantic type here! Thank you for letting me know you liked it! -Tilly Loved it - a simple love story so well told. I hopw there is more in the pipe-line? Thank you! -Tilly Very Sweet.........Nice story........but I'll have to admit, I'm a bit bothered by the age difference. (But you have to cut me some slack....I work in law enforcement. :P) All opinions appreciated! I wanted to give Liberty something special, and that's how Tom turned out, but thanks for letting me know what you think! -Tilly The story is cute and a typical girl's story. I liked it and hope I will see more. More is coming your way soon! -Tilly Loved it. A sequel iS a must. Well that told me! I've got other stories to get out of my system first, but I might just get round to adding to this one soon. Thanks! -Tilly is there more too this and lisa get told how he popped here friend like too see more and does tilly have more stories I'm working on more - Gentle will get them as I finished them! Thanks! -Tilly Give me Liberty or give me death. But I'm not Tom. I'm Hank and really enjoyed your story Tilly. It is very believable and very sexy. I was wondering, as I read the story, how you would end this story, how you would take care of Lisa. You did it in 6 simple sentences. Well done! This story has potential for a lot more chapters. Just the age difference must be overcome. And I'm sure a lot more sex is required before they consider a permanent relationship! Libby just lost her virginity!! Please continue. For this story you deserve a 10! Hank, blunt is good. Thanks for this! -Tilly Loved the story. Got and kept my attention. Would have liked to have been able to read the discussion between Tom and Lisa as he revealed the love affair. Maybe later? Thank you! More Liberty and Tom? Like you say, maybe later! -Tilly I just finished reading your story. Man, what a story. I LOVED it. It has all the ingredients that make a story interesting, and holds a readers interest right up until the final word. The plot is interesting and believable, the dialoge is great, and the implied romance begins almost from the first word of the story. Goodness me. Well, JustMe, thank you! You've given me alot to think about! -Tilly A WONDERFUL story in a fresh new setting, (Jolly ole England)and a hint that there could be a bit more of this? Oh I do hope so. Tilly your writing is fasinating. And Gentle, you find the most wonderful exciting writers for your web site. That is a talent all in itself. Thank you both so,so much........And if you add to this please let me know.....P.... Oh, you do not have to write back, only if you wish.
Passed on to Tilly for comment. -Tilly this is a lovely story---very romantic--love to hear more of how things developed in London Thank you! -Tilly wow this is good lol do u have a second chapter to this?
Thank you! No plans for a second chapter just yet, but if I keep getting requests like this, I think I might reconsider! -Tilly Tilly is quite a writer. I love the story. You know, I enjoy hearing about a teen-ager who has learned how to have good sex and this is fantiatic. It really turns me on. Makes me with I had a 16 year old friend living close by. I really did enjoy it and hope Tilly will continue to write some more lovable stories. Glad it had the desired effect! -Tilly Oh baby.....I love a lady who knows what She wants and gets it. Very Good & deliciously romantic. Passed on to Tilly for comment. -Tilly A very sweet, romantic deflowering, without the mess (good old hairbrushes!). Good start on character development, but I don't quite have a good feel for them yet. A bit hasty into the sex, perhaps, although it IS love at first sight, isn't it? Are you continuing or is that it? Thank you Hook - I'll give it some thought! -Tilly Hi very nice but u should have had tom finnish her first time with oral just to let every one know she was satisfied just my way
Passed on to Tilly for comment. -Tilly i liked the romantic angle, it made it more sensual. Well, that was the idea - I'm just glad it appealed to you! -Tilly What an excellent story! Very well told. Refreshing and amusing. Passed on to Tilly for comment. -Tilly |
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