Reviews from Shelly |
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Date | Story | Comments from Shelly | Gentle's response | Rating | 19/04/2006 3:05:36 p.m. | Liberty | The story is cute and a typical girl's story. I liked it and hope I will see more. | More is coming your way soon! |
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24/02/2006 7:45:36 p.m. | The Road to Hell - Day 3b | A delightful story. I love CA's playfulness and daring. It is a lot o fun. I really enjoyed the way the guy made her *****. That was fun. | Fun is good! |
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20/12/2005 7:21:16 a.m. | The Game - Part 5 - Closure | I am stunned. And I thought ll along *****. The story was told so well, with just the right amount of tension. Thanks again for a really great story. | I wish I could post the rest of what you said! :-) |
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11/12/2005 1:56:35 a.m. | The Game - Part 4 - Risks | First of all that is a very exciting story that you tell. It is well written. I really like the way you show her feelings and the way they shift in the story. Again, I would have enjoyed the story even more if Birch had turned out to be another woman. The story could have been written almost the same but with a woman's tenderness and sense of timing. Thanks for an enjoyable story. | It's not over yet, Shelly! |
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2/12/2005 11:58:15 p.m. | The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn | This story is so interesting. It gets right into this girl's mind and does interesting things with it. Thank you, I am eager for more. | I'm sure you'll like the next one! |
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26/11/2005 1:34:12 p.m. | The Game - Part 2 - How To Play | That is a fun story and I liked the way she approached The Game. It is really a nice game with a lot of warmth that is portrayed. I loved the story and am looking forward to more. | Thanks Shelly. |
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1/11/2005 6:45:20 p.m. | Under The Desk | That was a nice light story, horny, but light. To make it better I had to pretend it was my girl friend calling me. We have tried some phone sex before, but never this good. That was a lot of fun and I am saving for my girl friend when she comes over later tonight. | Thanks Shelly. I need a full report! :-) |
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21/09/2005 10:10:45 p.m. | No Sequel | This story was quite well written. I would have liked it even better if there were two girls involved. But, thanks for the story, it was exciting. | mmmm... I might have too! :-) |
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12/08/2005 7:29:17 a.m. | Hey gorgeous | That was a really good story Gentle. Really a fun story with a delightful amount of humor. If you ever write and Dee again I would look foward to reading the story. | Thanks Shelly. I'll make sure I tell you! |
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4/03/2005 7:48:48 p.m. | Chocolate Strawberries | O Yes!!! I could fee; the heat of the sand under me. I could almost feel his tongue inside me. It was so good. And then I came. So hard. You are wonderul! | Oh, well it was worth it then! |
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6/02/2005 | The Shower | A very nice fantasy story and much nicer when told from the viewpoint of a woman. I could just feel the urgency of he man and loved the way he came in you. | Hmm... Thanks. But listen, I'm the author, not the character! |
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