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Debbie

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Date Story Comments from Debbie Gentle's response Rating
14/07/2006 10:23:48 p.m. Picture This 2 Does your mother know what you do? I've never been one to blab. :-)
8/07/2006 11:58:56 p.m. Picture This Oh Gentle! I love it when you speak dirty to me. A man's Breath through Panties is always nice. Are you getting a big head, from being told how good you are? Yep! :-)
24/06/2006 11:31:07 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 I liked the part removing "the little rubber". I didn't give as high as score as I personally, (my opinion) don't find certain mentioned situations erotic. Your call. Sorry about that.
24/06/2006 11:29:55 p.m. Photographic Memory 5 Gentle? Were you spying on me again? Bad girls might, but good girls do. They do?
24/06/2006 8:18:08 p.m. Photographic Memory 4 HOT! HOT! HOT! So hot, I got sunburned. Ooh tan lines!
8/06/2006 11:57:35 p.m. A Quiet Meal Does that place deliver? Maybe you could send a menu! I agree w/ Kat, I liked that line about the thumbs...theatre curtains. You can get anything delivered for the right price. :-)
7/06/2006 8:22:11 p.m. No Sequel Very Good! I thought you were going to do the identical sibling thing. There was a spot that was a little rough and hard to follow. But every thing else was great. Rough? Waddayamean, rough? :-)
7/06/2006 8:21:19 p.m. This is the girl... I'm still in shock about the wooden paddle! That has big the biggest surprise at all from you. :) What a woman. Oh, hush. :-)
7/06/2006 8:19:56 p.m. White Witch Over 20 yrs ago I heard my boarding school single dean say, "I'm not concerned about not ever having sex. My friend told me sex was over rated any way." Somebody needed to take her up against the wall! and not be gentle. Are any of your stories not good? I love them all. I'm not sure she'd have gone willingly! As for bad stories, there's only one way to tell. :-)
6/06/2006 9:43:22 p.m. Suddenly wide awake I liked it. I did guess before you revealed. As 99.9% of your readers say, "Your dialog is great." I agree, it just rolls. But I have to admit, sometimes I get confused on which charactor is talking. It could be my meds. Damn, how did you guess? Oh, and it could be my writing! :-)
6/06/2006 9:41:58 p.m. It was sexual right from the start I really liked how you described them as being sensual yet not sexual. I understand that so well, but couldn't figure out how to describe it. Good story. You just need to fumble your fingers on the keyboard. :-)
6/06/2006 9:40:47 p.m. The doorstep Okay Gentle, I feel like you took my virginity on this one. Hey, you offered! :-)
6/06/2006 5:03:35 a.m. Milo Terrific! Gentle, you like those panties don't you? Depends. :-)
6/06/2006 5:02:45 a.m. Sally Nice and Sexy. Thanks
6/06/2006 5:01:36 a.m. The Gauntlet I wanna play! That doesn't make me smutty, does it? Depends on the game...
6/06/2006 5:01:10 a.m. Wet I have read quite a few of your stories now. This is one of my favourites. I can't say that I have a specific favourite one. That would be too much of a commitment for me. Thanks for helping me stay out of trouble! That's not like me at all!
6/06/2006 5:00:27 a.m. Blue Angel The married couple are the best. Married folks need to remember not to take their spouses or sex with them for granted. Tasteful sex is wonderful too. Hey, even bad sex is good. :-)
6/06/2006 4:58:49 a.m. Orange WOW! Very Beautiful! Thanks
6/06/2006 4:58:03 a.m. Now I lay me down to sleep To me, A very heart felt romance. Grief is a part of life and love. The need for your Love's touch, does not just go away. Very nice. Thanks.
5/06/2006 3:57:25 a.m. Liberty Perfect. I would not change a thing. Age was great too. It happens,(even in the United States), that can make it even more special for both. Of course when she's 35-40 she will be needing a teenage boy for her own. lol. I like that the story stopped there. Let our own minds finish the fantasy. Why mess with perfection? You know, that's what I thought too. :) Not the perfection bit, but the rest of it. :)
5/06/2006 3:51:51 a.m. Lust Letter Hot! Breathing Hard! Deb Passed on to Tilly for comment.
4/06/2006 4:02:06 p.m. Photographic Memory 1 Memories, youth, innocence. When just kissing & touching was so exciting. I wonder his plans? Condoms? Same or new girl(s)? No pressure Gentle, but you left me hanging & need to finish the job. lol Well, did you hear the fat lady sing yet? :-)
2/06/2006 4:07:28 a.m. Steak please Gentle, Gentle now. I Adored! I love the language of "Sexual in your Windows"! I laughed, I cried, I got off 10 times! Just get me another Energy Drink & Let's go for another 10! Oh, you did not! :-)