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Date Story Comments from Hook Gentle's response Rating
20/07/2006 7:20:13 p.m. Gathering in the Green Yes, we grasp whatever comfort we can in this imperfect world, no matter the cost, or ultimate degradation. An extremely well-done story, a tough topic, a masterful description. Well done, oh scribbler!! Oh, thank you, kind Sir!
15/07/2006 11:22:28 a.m. Picture This 2 Whew! Now that's more like it!! Outstanding ending...Great horned toads, how is he going to 'splain this???...LOL...Still more running dialog than I'd prefer (I like it broken with some descriptive stuff every so often) Can't win 'em all, Hook. :-)
8/07/2006 2:12:41 p.m. Picture This NO SEX???? WHAT are you thinking??? Getting a bit long in the tooth, are we, old boy? It's not the first time I've done this... :-)
25/04/2006 11:47:22 a.m. It starts with a castle Part 6 A dream, eh...I bet! She is getting quite a bit of action now, the saucy wench. Well done, sir! Pray continue to get her into more difficulties.
19/04/2006 1:18:37 p.m. Liberty A very sweet, romantic deflowering, without the mess (good old hairbrushes!). Good start on character development, but I don't quite have a good feel for them yet. A bit hasty into the sex, perhaps, although it IS love at first sight, isn't it? Are you continuing or is that it? Thank you Hook - I'll give it some thought!
9/04/2006 11:08:32 a.m. Wet Well written, Gentle. You have gotten the hang of working those long stretches of short dialog into the story so it still flows well. She was lucky he wasn't really a rapist...could have been...but maybe that doesn't happen in NZ? Where can I find a girl like that...her understanding of men far surpasses that of any woman Iknow...LOL So to take your points one at a time... * he could have been. We have rapists in NZ, but not in MY stories, thankyouverymuch. :-) * And your other point.... Those girls only EXIST in my stories! :-)
9/04/2006 11:07:46 a.m. Everything's A Blur One of your best, Lisa. I liked the "peeling the onion" technique of getting at the story. Your descriptions of these two was extremely real...genuine...and touched my heart. They had great sex, sure, but they gave each other life. Halle's continued life was both a gift from Bryan and his gift to her. A wonderful tale. Danke Schön, Herr Captain. I'm pleased you liked it. I'm beginning to enjoy writing stories like this one...and that other one. ;)
25/03/2006 9:23:45 a.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 So, she gets the "best" of both possible worlds...love and lust...Why do I have the feeling you won't let her enjoy it too much longer...LOL Because you know me too well! :-)
16/03/2006 7:29:48 a.m. Twas the night I like your version better than Clemen's. I wrote one of these for a sexy friend once, describing the trials and tribulations (and delays) of having the kitchen remodeled...but yours just blew me (hahahaha) away!!! Thanks for the enjoyment. Kitchens? Hmmm... There's an idea! :-)
16/03/2006 7:29:20 a.m. This is the girl... The first part of the story made me wistful that MY girl doesn't think to do those things...then shifts abruptly to this wonderful, gentle, sensuous, wonderful creature who makes love like a mother (and I mean that to embody tender, passion). Great style...a winner for sure (and if the girl is real, you already know that!). Awww, shucks. Thanks Hook. Much appreciated.
16/03/2006 7:28:33 a.m. Tennis panties Now that was really fun. You got a lot of imagery in a short space! Too short...I was just getting worked up...but delivers the goods very well, even though I generally like a lot more description...Well Done. I'm not sure I could descibe this more... :-)
28/01/2006 2:16:29 a.m. Meeting of the Minds - Journey of Two Authors A superb story! Who is this "Will" guy, so I can punch him out for trying to capture "our" girl, Lisa...LOL Hope you will continue...the story, I mean...as it is just too cruel to wonder what you will end up doing for this "fiend." How about I call him up and you meet each other half way over the Atlantic? And yes, we do plan to continue the story, but want to take our time. Plus, busy schedules have alot to do with it, too. ;)
28/01/2006 2:15:20 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3 Rather sophomoric, don't you think? Pretty tame...didn't strike me as too erotic. Phone sex in this day of web cams and porn flics just doesn't have the same appeal...although there is still a business providing that as a paid service. Sorry you feel that way, Hook. My other feedback wouldn't indicate that you were with the majority...
11/12/2005 11:06:08 a.m. The Game - Part 4 - Risks Better. Quite tenderly erotic, if you know what I mean. Will this series gradually escalate to more bizarre sexual games? It won't gradually anything, Hook. Only one part to go!
7/12/2005 8:55:17 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Well...ummm...not bad. Erotic setting; dialog enhances the staccato effect of her decisions to have sex. Fairly straightforward, however. Not especially riveting. Can't win 'em all, Cap'n!
26/11/2005 11:58:16 a.m. The Game - Part 2 - How To Play A bit tame, doncha think? No, actually.
20/11/2005 3:30:27 p.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit Very well written. I think the dialog works well in this one...nice balance with the descriptions. Wonderful images generated...you do write well, Gentle! Thanks Hook!
14/11/2005 11:50:34 a.m. Unexpected You have really gotten hooked on this dialog thing...maybe overdone a bit here? A fairly mild romantic story. Not really too erotic...too much like a travelogue..."I stopped here, saw the sights, had a great meal, might go back...." Actually, this is normal for me. :-)
31/10/2005 8:26:36 p.m. Under The Desk VERY engaging. I wasn't prepared to stick it out (metaphore) to the end (another), but you dragged me in (more) and I stayed until the last. That could happen, but I think most of us don't practice the concentration to carry it off. Likely to get the giggles,or something. Still, it is nice to think about. Good work. Still pushing frontiers... Trying, Hook. Thanks a lot.
22/10/2005 12:32:29 a.m. White Witch ROFLMAO!!! This is such classic, understated British humor....I love it. Great dialog...one can just see them bantering, and knowing where it is likely to end up. BTW, if any of those young girls show up? Send them over to this wall where I'm working...LOL They know about you already, Hook! :-)
25/09/2005 9:24:18 a.m. Wind-play Clever, light tale. Many of your characters seem to like the female on her belly, legs together, friction-filled entry position...Takes a bit of back arch, doesn't it? It seems like the best position in my book {besides standing} and arching the back can actually be stimulating. I do it enough. ;)
25/09/2005 9:23:16 a.m. Ghost Another gem from the highly orgasmically attuned,Lisa! I loved the line: "She released a low moan as the friction struck her nerve endings." And still with the clever twist at the end, after draining all the, uhm...juices? from the reader with your descriptive, and seductive prose. Ooo, your response has got my heart beating faster. Okay...the beating is not in my chest. I can tell no lies. ;D
23/09/2005 8:35:13 p.m. Alice Pt 4 Roaring with laughter...Oh, GBF, you are really good. Not sure how many writers could have brought off Alice in CummerLand like you did...ROFL...hope you continue. Are you sure you don't have some deep, dark agenda behind this mild little...aha...now I see...it's a "fairy" tail, isn't it, and now we are all going to become rather gay, I suppose... Were you drinking when you wrote this one? :-)
23/09/2005 8:31:03 p.m. Alice Pt 4 So, now the mask is off, eh? Catlina = Gentle! You're jumping to the wrong conclusion here. Catlina wrote part 3. I did the rest.
23/09/2005 8:29:02 p.m. Alice Pt 3 "Catlina?" Come now, Gentle, it's really YOU writing, isn't it? Please change "that she wa dreaming" to "that she was dreaming." I'll fix that. Me? No way! Passed on to Catlina for comment.
23/09/2005 8:28:26 p.m. The Watcher Moon Goddess: Great story...very realistic...a lot of thought went into this, obviously. I liked the line: "Jason took hold of his stiff cock, brought it to the front of her vagina and slowly descended from front to back until he reached the damp opening. When he pushed inside her, their movements slowed, time stopped, and all sound faded." That is exactly right and hardly anyone describes the insertion phase that way. I visualize what I like and try to choose the perfect words...since everyone can relate, it makes my job so much more easier. And delightful! And I'm so glad you could see the image...it's my favorite description. ;P
23/09/2005 7:29:41 p.m. Caramel Part 3 WOW! This series was sooooo hot! You are an exquisite writer, and convey such depths of passion. I especially liked the word, vul-cano. That is the first use of it I have seen and describes perfectly what others can only describe as a 'hot pussy.' Your obedient and devoted 'slave' forever... You are too much, my friend. I like your sign-off, maybe there's a story in that. How about you be my sub? Subject, that is. ;D
23/09/2005 7:21:12 p.m. This is the girl... Wow! Reminds me of all the love, and wildness, and love I used to have...long ago. A great style device...the repitition. I agree. The trick is not to abuse it. Both the love and the repitition.
17/09/2005 10:44:49 a.m. Dreamscape Hi, Moon Goddess. Great story...powerful descriptions...you have some experience at this, I can see...LOL Experience at writing, or...turning you on? ;)
13/09/2005 7:31:10 a.m. Encounter Beth...what a "gentle" story. I really liked it and *** Maybe voyeur fae, that wouldn't surprise me much given their nature. Especially the Sidhe. But that's another matter all together! And maybe it is real and I don't want to admit it, eh? ^_~
13/09/2005 7:29:31 a.m. No Sequel At first, I wondered *****. The end was a rush! What a way to go. ***** Nicely done GBF! Sorry Hook. You gave too much away!
26/08/2005 11:59:58 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 A good start...nice teaser for what could be an interesting mix of group sex...maybe. I already like this lady (the one in the story)...wish I could have met her before I married my current wife! Hope you continue the story. hmmmm guess you'll just have to stay tuned!!! ;-D
26/08/2005 11:51:29 p.m. Eyes Closed Part 2 - Blindfolded Very sensuous story, well told, with good descriptions and minimal dialog to convey feelings. Not as heart-stopping as some stories; more sweet and romantic. Why thank you! That was actually what I was going for, too much dialogue detracts from the style that I use and as much as I like racy stories... well sensual is better than sexual in some instances. So thanks, I appreciate your feedback, ^_^
20/08/2005 7:40:32 a.m. Eyes Closed Will this be a series? I hope so, else there is not much point to it. Passed on to Beth for comment.
20/08/2005 7:02:57 a.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk Kimberly might not have been drunk comments = It certainly works well! Usually I like the dialog, but thoughts are good in the hands of a good scribner (smile). I liked the surprise tag line at the end...LOL...this could be an interesting series, hmmmmmmm? Series? No, no, no....
16/08/2005 7:28:17 a.m. Angel Very hot interchange...Maybe a bit long on the web part, but they had to get comfortable with each other. Nice character development, even though we still don't know that much about either. Hope you continue... Nice name. I'm estatic you liked the story, but there is only so much I can do with short stories and descriptions, so far. I believe the more I write, the better I become with that. Although he and I didn't make it to real life...'interchanging', I might make a part two to this story...if I can come up with something intriguing, or better yet, surprising. Thanks for the prompt, Herr Captain Hook. Anything like the woman? Change the hair to red, the skin to caramel, and the eyes to honey...and I would say that the woman is everything like me. ;)