Write your own Emily's Sick Family Story

If you have enjoyed exploring my little world, I would be very happy if you'd like to add your own fantasy.

It can be about me or any of the characters in Emily's Sick Family, plus yourself, of course. It can contain any sexual acts you wish. If you don't want your story published, that's fine.

Tip: try not to rub your knob /pussy too much when you're writing, it does tend to show: plot, motivation, and characterisation all suffer - while boastful sexual gymnastics inflate to unrealistic proportions. Think about context: why would it have seemed a good idea for me to have sex with you. Think about pretext: what happened to get to the point where your zipper is being undone. And try and be erotic, not just sexual.

PS: American English is an acceptable substitute for the real thing ;-)

Make sure you tell me what Byline you want to use (or be anon). Minimum length about 1,000 words (everyone hates being cut short). There is no max. I my chop long stories into episodes. I will not otherwise mess with the story (if I think it needs a bit of developing I'll either ask you to do it, or seek your permission to allow me to do it).

Remember, Emily's Sick World is a shared experience: my head to your head, my rubbed pussy to your rubbed private bits. It's been good for me, show me it's been good for you.

For additional guidance, see White Shadows excellent guide to authors.

If you've enjoyed these stroies, you might like to email me. Praise, flattery, offers to write Emily stories, or illustrate stories here are espcially welcome, as are kindly worded corrections (there are a lot of words here, some must be wrong!). Or share your own sexy story or submit a hot plot.

So you fancy having a stab at writing?

Excellent. Off you go then. Get writing. Mail me when you've got something your pleased with ... What, you feel neverous ... concerned that you'll reveal yourself as a talentless semi-illiterate with all the pent-up erotic imagination of a soggy paper bag.

OK, well read my notes first, then take heart and plunge in ... it's how I started.

Words Matter
Ever wondered what's the difference between pert breasts and perky breasts? Well the answer is that pert breasts are small and rounded, and pretty much stay still, unless you do excessive physical activity, like running upstairs. In which case all women lose track of where their titties get to. Perky breasts are small too, though probably a little bigger than pert breasts, and often pointy. But there special characteristic is their urge to move. They're too small to move far, but if you watch them closely, they do delightful tiny little jitters and judders with motions of their owner's body.

I mention this factoid because they illustrate how nuisances of language can carry a disproportionate meaning. In short, words matter. So if writing about my and my sister Kate, you could say I have pert breasts and Kate has perky breasts. You wouldn't be wrong to say that we both have small breasts, except that in describing them the same way, you imply that they are much the same - glossing over the important differences.

So think about the words. You don't have have to work through an entire taxonomy of titties - or the complete dictionary of dicks. Just draw attention to the differences, and you'll paint a richer picture.

Details Matter
Tits also are a good example of my second tip. Tits are one of the universe's most beautiful creations, as they're constantly in a state of change. My tits may be small and pert - but when I raise my arms they lift and become perky. When I bend over they hang down, long and swaying. When I'm flat on my back (as normal) they flatten (even further) and try and sneak into my arm pits. And if I'm being fucked especially energetically, they bobble and bounce all over the place. And then of course, they become as tight as fat little drums just before my period.

So many facets to just my breasts ... and we haven't even started on the changes that occur to my nipples!!! So recall the details of that memory ... or lovingly dwell on the image of a fantasy, so that you can recall the details, allowing us to enjoy them too.

Motivation
So many erotic stories are just unerotic because they don't involve people. Instead they are populated with a strange alien race of fuck robots, who, for no apparent reason, get their kit off and fuck like dogs on heat with total strangers.

Well, OK, a couple stories about fuck robots might be fun, but not thousands. It is most unsatisfactory to read a story with the Why question looming over you. People do stuff for a reason, and it is up to you to supply a satisfactory one if you want to make your story believable (and I assume you do, as an unbelievable story just doesn't get the juices flowing).

Of course, you don't have to provide the motivation straight away. You can tease it out, gradually revealing it as you explore your erotic journey. But you do have to come up with a reason why a person is making themselves vulnerable by having sex, for example:

  Sex for money
  Sex to get/be with fame or fortune
  Sex for love (it happens)
  Sex for infatuation
  Sex for blackmail
  Sex for revenge
  Sex for babies

Plus of course there is the all to distressingly popular rape, and the nearly equally sad, sex to gain affection. Just think of the plot lines you see in soap operas (oh go on, watch a couple, it won't kill you; you might even learn something about people). Remember, when a woman has sex she makes both her body and her reputation vulnerable, so she must have a pretty damn good reason for doing it - and you having a hot throbbing 10 inch pork sword, though not unimpressive, is not sufficient.

My own little cheat for this is to write about the people in my real life. This allows me to take the fun and games we really get up to as a basis, embellish it in parts if I fancy, and be clear about who they are, what they want out of life, and what our emotional relationships are. In short, it helps keeps this grounded, and so make stuff more believable.

Cause and Effect

Remember that when something happens, there is an effect. If you stick you cock up someone's arse, it's fairly likely to have an effect (well it fucking well does to me). So remember to write about that effect - as it will magnify the pleasure of reading about the cause.

Dialogue is Difficult

It is, it really is. I'm not very good at it, and if you feel uncomfortable with it, leave it out. Stick to the Third Person. If you do try writing dialogue, practice speaking the words out aloud - this will give you an idea if it sounds authentic or not.

Reread Your Work

I hate doing. You'll hate doing it. But before you rush to publish, sit on it for a few days, and then read it again. Trust me, you'll want to make changes.

Does it Turn You On

How do you know if your story is hot? Simple. Read it and see if it makes you wet, or hard, or hard and wet. If not, rewrite time.

Metaphors Help

Well they do. You just know what a girl with bushy pubes, or a neat fan, is like.

Clichés Don't Help

We all use them. But try and avoid them like plague (duh!).

There's More to Life than Sex

Well it's a theory, anyhow. Not every woman likes to suck cock, many think it's dirty ... and with the personal hygiene regimes of some men I've met they have a point. Not every man can cum five times a day, seven days a week, because his knob gets sore. You can't normally have sex with teenagers because they might tell on you, and you'll go to gaol, not passing go, and not collecting £200.

Remember these incidentals, because if you can work them into your story, it'll be all the more horny for being grounded.

Characterisation

Allow the characters in your story to be characters. Let them be timid, or shy, or bold, or strident, or whatever, and allow that character to change (within a reasonable cause and effect) in the normal ways people recognise: people flower, people bloom, people come out of their shell (or sometimes go into one). Base your characters on someone you know, and ask yourself, what would they do in this situation.

Write

Just do it. And keep doing it until you get good. You will. I did (ish).

Emily xxx