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Guest Story by Beth |
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Eyes Closed Part 2 - Blindfolded |
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loved it and would to know what jeff looked like a little . With her surprise and her being a goth i thought maybe Jeff was a preppy guy or a jock, maybe a type of guy she wouldnt normally go after. i know hard to describe but you made it such a mystery without even saying what he looked like or how it was a surprise. <snip>
I have gotten a lot of questions about it ^_^ I intend on writing a third bit, I've just been insanely busy, these days, and haven't been in the mood for writing. I'd probably best get to it, though, before I'm lynched by a mob of angry people wanting my story ^_^ -Beth
Thank's more, more
Anonymous
As I have said before, I've been caught up with life too much to really be doing a lot of writing at the moment. I will, however, write another installment, I've promised people I would. -Beth
so? whens the next one?
The next one? When I get 'round to writing it, these days. I'm horribly busy, it seems, and that quells the desire to write. I'm also in the middle of writing a novel-length bit with a friend who's computer died *sadness*. -Beth
I demand a part three.
Ask and ye shall recieve! I will start writing it as soon as I get out of classes (which, alas, is roughly 2 weeks) so I will get on that asap ^.^ -Beth
It is soooo horney
Anonymous
Aww, thanks ^.^ -Beth
omg this was brilliant, i write these kind of things but none such as this, this was so good i cant believe it. The feeling to it was amazing
Passed on to Beth for comment. -Beth
You made Goth sexy. I love it.
Thanks! I've always felt the allure of the darker pleasures in life (not drugs or alcohol, but more the 'gothic' atmosphere) and I suppose my writing reflects that. -Beth
great story man....simply awesome jus keep it up
I am working on doing just that! ^.^ Glad you liked it. -Beth
Good.
Passed on to Beth for comment. -Beth
More GREAT sex! Alex is one HOT BABE!!! She has never even thought of love - just great sex. Hope you plan on continuing this series and forget the "love" for more REALLY GREAT SEX! One request - don't make Alex so submissive. In fact a great story would be when she, by design, turns the power of sex over to herself and controls Jeff!!!!! This is a natural because: number 1 she is a woman (who normally control sex) and number 2 because she has such a great body and loves to show it. What do you think?
I have actually been considering that for the next installment- ^_~ No promises nor spoilers though! I am sorry I've been slow with it... my creative energies have been absorbed by school @_@ -Beth
Excellent. Just... excellent. Lots of fun to read, explicit and hot.
^_^ *Grins* -Beth
Hmmmm.... makes me wonder why she's surpised it's Jeff... *smiles* I like it... and though I may not look it, I'm a "goth chick" at heart 
All the way, sister! She'd never met Jeff, previous to this little... foray of his, and knew nothing of him other than rumors around campus. That actually is addressed in the most recent installment which is sitting in my email inbox with comments from Gentle attatched to it! -Beth
Great story, one of the best ones i have read so far Keep up the good work.
Anonymous
Aww Thanks ^_^ -Beth
Even better than the first part. Very provocitive and nice. I loved it. Hope there will be more. You explore the inner feelings of the sexual pleasures in this girl. It's wonderful to read about this. Keep them coming.
I appreciate your kind words, I do put something of myself in each of my stories, and I am working on another. It is just taking forever due to school and all that fun stuff. *beats finals back with a large stick* AAH! -Beth
This is great, very sexy. I love it. Hope to see more of this even more explicit.
Any suggestions? I am certainly willingn to explore new venues to please those that I write for! Have fun! -Beth
Hi: I read both parts of the story and hope there will be more on this. I really like the story.
Passed on to Beth for comment. -Beth
I really love this story. The girl reached a high pinnacle of sexual desire and Jeff gave her everything. I hope there will be more to this story.
There will be once I come out of this phase of complete and utter burnout that is college life @_@ I am glad you enjoyed it, I am sure that my characters did ^_~ -Beth
It was amazing! Well done, you have created a piece of art.
That is a high compliment, and for it I thank you most sincerely. *bows* -Beth
Another outstanding story!! I've yet to read a bad one. Some are better than others, but they've all been good. Thank you for allowing me the priviledge of reading them.
Why thank you! I know I've been slow in the writing lately, but I have been dealing with school and work and being sick, blagh. My muse, (i.e. my mate) has been busy and neither of us have been de-stressed enough for him to... *ahem* inspire me. -Beth
Great stuff!should do some more
I intend to, once I get everything settled down again, my life is a bit uproarious at the moment, so forgive me is new material is slow. -Beth
amazing story. i love this story its kinda scary to think of that happening but thrilling at the same time.
Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. ^.^ -Beth
really great i like this one evern better!!!!! any more huh?? huh??
Indeed there are! I just haven't written them yet! -Beth
Enjoyed the supense and action.
Why thank you! I appreciate your kindness. I am glad you enjoyed it and hope you continue to read my works! -Beth
I just read both parts of Gentlebutfirm, It was great erotica. You should definetly write more, whether to continue with the series or start another one. I loved the stories.
Anonymous
Passed on to Beth for comment. -Beth
I cant wait for part 3. . .such intense stories. Very good reads =D.
Why thank you ^_^ I am working on them, I have just been busy lately with stuff. -Beth
oooh. Thank you for the more!
Why thank you! I am working on further stories, but I have been very busy as of late with travelling and whatnot. Stay tuned ^_~ -Beth
Excellent. I love the oral sex description, and the description of the clothing, and clothing being removed.
Passed on to Beth for comment. -Beth
A very suggestive story of an encounter. To me a big mistake that she allowewed him to have sex with her. The story (part 1 and 2) are very "romantic" but in 2005 totally unbelievable.
Well, I appreciate your honest opinion- sorry for having to edit your comment but Gentle and I both agree that comments shouldn't give away the plotline. I will, however, address your concerns. First off- this is (and I stress this) fantasy it couldn't happen for real and I fully admit that. But there is nothing wrong with being imaginative. I usually try to avoid working in the realm of 'real' as it were because I like to let my mind go and fantasize about totally unrealistic things. Of course, I have the common sense not to *act* on them. -Beth
Just read parts one and two. I hope there will be many more parts to this. Wonderful scenarios, exciting and sexy as all get-out ;) Ten for each. Ignore anyone who complains about it not being safe sex. Last I checked, this is a fictional fantasy area, no? Not a didactic forum, and certainly people don't come here to be lectured about re: safe sex practices??? Look forward eagerly to more in the same vein.
Thank you! And, indeed, this is fantasy and in fantasy things like protection and STD's don't exist, dammit ^_~ I am very glad you enjoyed my work, I will indeed be writing more in a little while. I am in finals at school so writing these is not my highest priority >_>' -Beth
Well.......Gothic isn't my style, but this is well written, very erotic and arousing. there is more than one way to seduction.
Indeed, there are many ways of seduction. I am into the gothic aspect of it, but I am going to be writing other things as well, neverfear! I appreciate your kind words and feedback, I hope you enjoy my other writings as they come out ^_^ -Beth
Oh my goodness. Amazing! You had me breathing quite hard.
Why thank you! I am glad, that's what I write for! ^_^ -Beth
Very sensuous story, well told, with good descriptions and minimal dialog to convey feelings. Not as heart-stopping as some stories; more sweet and romantic.
Why thank you! That was actually what I was going for, too much dialogue detracts from the style that I use and as much as I like racy stories... well sensual is better than sexual in some instances. So thanks, I appreciate your feedback, ^_^ -Beth
rape.
You can't rape the willing and she wasn't complaining! -Beth
Absolutely fabulous! Just the right amount of storyline and sex to keep me craving more. I loved it. You know when your reading something and your so into it that you almost forget to breath? Its like that.
Why thank you! I do know what that's like to lose breath while reading and I am so pleased to have inspired that in you ^_^ -Beth
very exciting...I'm hot with anticipation of their next meeting!!
Passed on to Beth for comment. -Beth
Wonderful again. More please!
Working on it, thank you ^_^ I just need a little time to come up with something suitably tantalizing! -Beth
That was fairly good...I enjoyed the read. The ending has me wondering...what the surprie is? I look forward to your next!!
Thanks, I am looking forward to writing it, though I am not entirely sure what to write next ^_~ It'd better be something good though, right? -Beth
It is still a good sex story bur very hard to believe. The complete lack of knowing who Alex was making love with is not believable. Sorry but I don't buy into the main point of the story! It would have been better if you had a complete understanding between Alex and Jeff and that they completed their first sex encounter with a full knowledge of their partners. Alex can not be that passive or nieve.
Well, as I said to the last person- I really didn't write it to be believable... and Alex and Jeff had never really met so it is plausable. And, might I add, this was a relative first for me- I dont normally write erotic fiction so gimmie a break. -Beth
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Alex waited on the steps of her dorm as he'd instructed, nervous, tense, and very aroused. She'd barely been able to get through class all day- thinking about what was going to happen. Leaning back on the hard concrete steps, she closed her eyes and tried to imagine the man that matched the voice that had haunted her all night and kept her from taking notes in class. A pair of hands caressed her shoulders, fingers slid up her neck and drew with them a silken blindfold that was secured around her eyes and tied behind her head. "Glad to see you came, Alex," the voice that had lingered in her mind whispered in her ear, the hot breath tickling the sensitive skin. She inhaled sharply as she felt his hands sliding over the silken shirt she'd donned that morning. The style was low cut over her breasts and tightly drawn in at the waist, hiding nothing. The skirt was long, but had a slit up the side to her hip and exposed no small amount of leg to a viewer's eye. And this view met the eyes of Jeff, whose hands were travelling the length of Alex's arms. "Then come with me- I have something new planned for you." He was already hard just thinking of what he'd come up with during class. He hadn't been able to concentrate... though that was nothing new. He'd even declined one of his friend's offers of a party this evening to come here to Alex. Sliding from behind her, he grabbed her hand and pulled her forward to him- hugging her briefly before leading her off across campus. * * * The glade he'd chosen was small and set out of the way of the main routes through the school grounds. Light from the nearly full moon streamed down through the trees and deepened the shadows under the leafy canopy. Their feet made soft imprints in the dew-wet grass, though no sound could be heard. Alex was a little nervous, but also extremely excited. They were outside in the clear, cool air and maybe... maybe tonight she'd get to see the face of her mysterious lover. Jeff grinned, pulling her closer as he helped her lay down in the soft grass, the dewdrops clinging to her hair and skin and with the moonlight as it was- they sparkled like stars. Shaking his head- Romantic thoughts? Me? Bah!- Fingers slid up her body and slowly popped every button on her shirt, leaving bare the skin beneath. She'd worn a bra today, black and lacy- leaving Jeff to wonder if she'd bought it for this encounter because the virgin he'd had yesterday would likely have little use for such things. A smile danced across his lips as he bent to kiss her throat. How sweet. Her skin exposed to the cool air, she felt goosebumps rise on her arms and across her body- only to be intensified when his lips met the skin of her neck. Arms lifted and she wrapped them around the stranger that was her lover for the second night in a row. A little more daring tonight- and free of the restraints that he'd bound her with the night before- she lifted her head to bite his shoulder gently. Or, she assumed it was his shoulder since she couldn't see him. His reaction, however, surprised her. Sliding his body up hers, he wound his fingers through her hair, "Again... Oh, Alex, again..." his voice begged in her ear, so she obliged. Bolder, she bit down, tongue swirling against the smooth skin of his shoulder once more. The man moaned, hips rocking against hers as his fingers tightened their grip in her dark tresses. But she didn't stop there, she nipped and suckled a trail up his neck to his ear and brought the lobe of the ear into her mouth- teasing, taunting, caressing with her tongue, lips and teeth. If Jeff had been hard before, he was galvanized now, the heat and throbbing in his loins urgently intensified until it was nearly painful. He heard himself groan and his muscles tensed as he nearly lost control of himself for a moment. A shaking hand reached over and captured one wrist, and then the other- holding them over her head. "Be still... if you move I will stop." He panted, releasing her wrists to let his hands slid down her body and fingers hook beneath the bra, tugging it up to reveal the creamy skin of her breasts. Alex smiled to herself both smug and surprised. She'd managed to get a reaction from him, indeed... but he'd told her to stay still... so she did her best. As his tongue flicked the tip of one hard nipple, she inhaled sharply- muscles bunching beneath skin. But she did not move. She couldn't bear it if he stopped now. Hah, success. Jeff was now back in control of himself and of her. She quivered at his touch, so satisfyingly, and he was able to wrestle his own desire back into control. Taking her hard nipple into his mouth, he suckled it, teeth occasionally closing around the taut flesh for a moment before releasing. He heard her whimper and graced the other breast with his attentions, a hand moving to cup the warm weight in his palm before sliding down with fingers so light that they left a trail of gooseflesh in their wake to the waistband of her skirt. Dipping a finger below the tight fabric once, twice, teasingly and then skipping away to leave her breathless and wanting- he let his other hand slide behind her and release the catch on her bra, "Move so I can take this off of you... I don't want it getting in the way." Alex obediently shifted, her arms sliding out of her shirtsleeves and bra straps to leave her torso bare to his ministrations. "Good," his voice rasped from somewhere in the vicinity of her sternum, "now return to the way you were... and remember- don't move." Her hands stretched over her head and she did her best to remain motionless for him. It was hard, now that his hands roamed freely across the skin of her ribs, mouth busy with her breasts and body pressed snugly against her own. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes, concentrating on not moving, on staying still... Jeff laughed softly, letting his hands drift to the waistband of her skirt once more, sliding it down her hips and tugging it away from her feet- another surprise. She'd not worn panties. Well, this girl was certainly full of surprises tonight. He felt her muscles tense as he slid a finger up the inside of her thigh- pausing for a moment to dance across her most feminine area, and then down the inside of the other thigh. Her inhaled breaths aroused him more than he would have believed possible earlier that day. Unable to restrain himself further, he traced her womanhood again, a finger entering the smooth, slick, slippery entrance and pushing into her up to the knuckle. Shifting position he lowered his head so his tongue could slide across the swollen bud of her desire. She gasped, hips shifting beneath his touch, and he stroked he again with his finger, slowly, tongue dancing across the sensitive flesh and drawing a moan from her parted lips. "You like this, Alex?" he asked, lips brushing against the skin of her womanhood as he spoke to her. She heard him ask her a question and through her pleasure-fogged mind, she could barely understand him... but somehow the words got through. "G-gods yes..." she managed. It took all of her strength of will not to move, but she managed somehow. "Please... don't stop." Even to her, her words sounded desperate and wanton- but she was beyond caring. "Oh... I won't. You have been good, Alex. I will reward you." The words made him shiver as he returned his attention to her intimately feminine anatomy. His tongue slid around the center of her pleasure and finger slid in and out, soon joined by its brother- to Alex's delight, judging by the low moan that escaped her lips. Faster. Faster. Faster he moved, rhythm increasing to the sound of her throaty cries as her muscles quivered and strained. He stopped for a moment, eliciting a sad whimper from her throat, but when he renewed his attack she responded with more vigor- pleasure given voice in loud, panting cries as she reached, strained, sought after... and finally found her release. Every muscle quivered and trembled, hands clenched at his shoulders and she finally shuddered to a halt. A job well done, mused Jeff. She couldn't move, her body felt languid and slow and in truth she felt drunk. Or what she'd been told drunk felt like. The ground spun slowly beneath her and she caught her breath in slow gasps that brought the taste of night into her lungs with them. But, apparently this strange lover of hers was not finished with her. Not by a long shot. While Alex recovered from her first, explosive, orgasm- he had been divesting himself of his clothing and now returned to her- completely nude. At the feel of her smooth, cool flesh against his, he nearly lost control for the second time that evening. And even more so when Alex rolled over onto her side, breasts pressing lushly against his ribcage. Her hand slid down his body, tentatively, and traced the lines of his hips and abdomen, bringing a quiet sound to his lips. Alex explored his body slowly, she'd not had the opportunity the last time they'd met. His skin was silky and soft- muscles not bulging like an athlete, but not soft either. Who was he? Her exploring fingers met warmer flesh and abruptly came into contact with something that was hard and throbbing against her hand. Experimentally, she grasped it, feeling the length and thickness of what she presumed to be his manhood. And, judging from his reaction she was right in that assumption. He moaned and his hips raised against her as she stroked the protruding organ gently. Then his hands roughly grabbed her, pulling her over so that she was laying against his chest. The hard length of his manhood found her center and he was in her. He couldn't have waited any longer if he'd wanted to. Pushing her up so that she was sitting astride him, he guided her hips, lifting them upward and then lowering them so that they were pressed against his own in a slow, smooth rhythm. Feeling him enter her deeper with each thrust, she arched her back and moaned softly, taking up the rhythm on her own with thrusts that grew more and more urgent. Jeff let his head fall back and moaned- by all that was holy! This woman was incredible! His hips surged upwards to meet hers with every thrust and after what seemed an eternity she quaked with another orgasm, himself following in her wake and pumping himself into her. "Gods, Alex..." he managed, disengaging himself from her and nestling her against his body for a few moments. Alex did not reply, her eyes closing as she caught her breath. He felt good against her, and she snuggled closer, her head resting on his shoulder as his arm circled around her and held her gently. He smelled of sweat and sex and raw maleness that she couldn't resist and Alex smiled, feeling secure in his embrace. Jeff was already planning their next foray, though with exams next week it might have to wait until the next break... he had to figure out whether she stayed there for the break or went home... With those thoughts he drifted to sleep slowly, his arms around Alex and his mind occupied with erotic fantasies. Alex felt the rhythm of his breathing shift as he fell asleep and smiled, one hand slipping beneath the blindfold and lifting it just enough so she could catch a glimpse of the face of the man she'd so recently made love to. Jeff? Well that was a surprise... but she wouldn't think of it now. Following his lead, she let herself slide into sleep after him, nestled securely against his side and feeling quite at home.
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