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Your story was very sensual and romantic,so real I could imagine every part as if it was happening to me.My pants are no longer fitting loosely! I'd love to hear more. Well, you know what they say about the sub-conscious mind... -Lisa wow i want to meet that man in my dreams too! Or maybe I can give you his address! ;) -Lisa This just has to be some of the most descriptive text I have read for a long while. Lisa has this wonderful ability to bring her readers into the scene - making them feel that are living the events as the story unfolds. Fabulous stuff Lovely words, darling, just lovely. You ready to go home then? -Lisa Hi, Moon Goddess. Great story...powerful descriptions...you have some experience at this, I can see...LOL Experience at writing, or...turning you on? ;) -Lisa Oh my God, that was beyond description! Thank you for sharing it with us. We should have met when we were nineteen. Hey, thanks, but I dare you to say that to me in person. ;P -Lisa This is the most descriptive and believable description of what a woman feels when having sex with a man! It is very believable as well as erotic. I really enjoyed the part where she experiments with how deep she can swallow his cock. I would like to read more about this as I have NEVER read a berrter description. You really have sweet dreams and they are worth a 10! Oohhhh, you're too much! I wouldn't mind writing another story about this, it's one of my favorites. All I have to do is think about what I want to do to a guy...and it pretty much writes itself. Ciao ;D -Lisa I loved the story. It is excellent. And now I am soo horny !! and going to read all the stories !!!
See now, when you say things like this, it only makes me want to drive you insane...with lust. ;) -Lisa Very well written. ;)
Passed on to Lisa for comment -Lisa the best hop there is more 2 come Passed on to Lisa for comment -Lisa I was so hard reading this, just the touch or your lips on my cock would have set me off! Thanks for sharing that juicy remark, but am I suppose to take your word for this? ;) -Lisa This story made me wonder if this were actually a dream that you had. The introduction reminded me of the ghost stories that we used to tell by the fire where we would welcome the readers or listeners into our story and get them interested in it. I imagined it was you doing the action of the story, because you had this dream awhile ago, but I could be wrong. I loved the creativity of the story and will be reading several more of your short stories because i think you do have the potential to be an excellent author. Cheerios! Thanks for taking the time to share that. The action is quite real, but this is my way of practicing...for writing, of course. ;) Your comment was greatly appreciated. -Lisa It was awesome, as was the other story of yours that I have read. Perhaps this man was to be your soulmate? Eh? Sounds like the sex like me and my mate have. Well, again as I said before it is beautifully written and a true joy to read. And damn it got me horny. Good thing I see my man tomorrow- I can take it out on him. This is a bullseye for me, the stimulation of both organs...now that's intoxicating! -Lisa I don't know. I was actually surfing the net for some possible material to use for a book I'm working on. And instead I get this? But...this is good. It's well written, I think. Then again, I get confused alot so I don't know what's good and what's not. But it's the first thing like this I've read without having to jerk off over and it made me think for once. Well done, dude. Now, this is different. Not sure if I should feel disappointment {for you not jerking off} or elation {for making you think}. My pleasure lies at both ends of the spectrum...the stimulation of both organs. While I thoroughly enjoyed reading your comment and vote, you can get an idea of how this can be 'complex' to a girl like me. Good luck with your book. -Lisa AMAZING!! I've read several erotic stories over time, and this is by far one of the best. Your artful finesse with words is a God-sent ability! Remember this, and keep it up. No. You're amazing! With appreciation like that I am inclined to continue until I no longer have feelings of eroticism. Look at that, I couldn't even write that with a straight face! short but sweet-it works I'm so glad! Thanks! -Lisa I love the decription of you showing him someting first. YOu straddling him and touching yourself for him to enjoy.
Oh, Ioved it, too! Thanks! -Lisa this was the first time I've read of anyone else crouching on their feet. My wife will also be flat on her feet as in a squat. She will hold both my hands for balance then take total control of tempo, depth and her own orgasm. If one is athletic enough it is great for the woman as I am told
And you were informed correctly...very, very enjoyable. -Lisa Fantastic!!!! I would have loved to have been that man. You make it sound so real. I am going to have my girlfriend read this tonight and I hope she will make me cum as good as you just did. Your dreams? Everything is allowed there...brace yourself! BTW...adorable comment, thanks. -Lisa I absolutely loved it!! The detail was great.
Thank you! -Lisa good job!!! im breathless after reading this Wow Lisa. Your words brought me to attention. I had to let my penis out of my pants for lack of room. I pumped it as I continued on until the climax...both yours and mine. Next time, dream that I'm there too, with you and your mystery man. I'd love to lick your juices off of him.
Saying you got off on my story would be an understatement! Such a dirty mind you've got there and I'm absolutely thrilled to be thought about at such a... 'sensitive' moment. ;) -Lisa Loved your story and loved that you made me come so hard. Can't wait to have your words make me come more darling. A 'man' after my own heart. Words...I'm a slave to them too! -Lisa umm stupid Sorry, lass, those words have no effect on me. Listen, do you think you could have been bold enough to say that with an address and name attached? Still pleased to get a reaction out of you. ;) -Lisa It was a great story. I enjoyed it very much. It really aroused me to want to make love to my g/f.
It's amazing what sharing a little dream has done for some. Truly inspirational and very 'exciting' to hear! -Lisa That was wonderfully erotic, and very sensual, I came over and over. Amazing work, my dear. Are you kidding me? Or are you just sucking up to me?! It doesn't matter, I enjoy the latter. ;) -Lisa WOW.....great..i really loved it and hope to read more of your stories...
I'm not sure...school consumes much of my time now. I still enjoy writing so...we'll see. Thanks. -Lisa Thank you! You made me come! I've made love to me wife seven times this weekend and you still gave me a hard-on that needed relief! You have managed to leave me at a loss for words. Amazing compliment for a girl like me. Thanks. -Lisa I wish it was me you made me come
I'm flattered...and pleased, thank you. ;) -Lisa wow this story turned me on like lightning, I wish i were that man. haha great story Thanks for saying that! I'm pleased all the way down to my...toes! -Lisa I had to please myself while you pleased me with your story That's what I LOVE/WRITE to hear. -Lisa You can write a very very good story. Would love to get you to be my dream fuck. Careful what you wish for, love. ;) -Lisa Great fantasy! I am wet just thinking about doing it to my boyfriend tonight Well don't keep him waiting, sweetheart! -Lisa Hey Lisa, Think that dream may be re-running soon, though with the opposite perspective. Damn, girl! I'd give a more in-depth analysis, but this story is pretty straight-forward sex. There's hints that I'd like your style for the other story, though. The two M's in part two just has me a little wary. Maybe I'll check it out tomorrow. For you? Yeah, I can do that. Not into MMF well, I do have others up my sleeve, just trying to work out the endings. Hope you come back and check them out. Thanks, Mr. -Lisa It was wonderful. I only wish that some day it can happen to me. I dream of feeling that kind of lust and desire. Very pleased you liked my 'dream'. When I feel desire and lust, I create the means and the mood for some memorable daydreaming. Try it, you'll see! -Lisa It was wonderful, I could imagine myself as the man in the story. I in fact came twice while masturbating to your story. Thank you very much, hope to read more from you. Thank you and there will be more. Hope you enjoy it just as much! -Lisa I think your story was great. it gets you turned on. how old are u? Old enough to appreciate a mind full of romantic, but 'sinsual' thoughts. Pleased you enjoyed it. -Lisa |
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