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Date Story Comments from KB Gentle's response Rating
9/05/2005 9:22:00 p.m. Suddenly wide awake Hmm, pretty good. Though, gotta say, the only part that really intrigued me was when he found out [snip] -- there's a decent twist. The rest... Guess it depends on your upbringing. Doesn't everything? Thanks.
6/02/2005 Splat! Now, this one is more like it! Nice build-up, nice finish. For a short story, despite the quick jump from first encounter to sex and talking relationship, it doesn't FEEL fast. Okay, it ain't Hemmingway, but it is very decent for web content, especially for a short story. Thanks KB. That more than makes up for the other one! :-)
6/02/2005 Tiros and his Nemesis Sorry, man, but not too enthralled with this one.... ... but it's kinda like those local human-interest stories in the newspapers: gee, that's nice, I wouldn't mind if that happened to me -- now where's the funnies, I could use a good laugh. Just not very dramatic. Well, thanks for the honesty. Best see how others feel, I guess.
6/01/2005 Digitally Part 3 This is the one I was thinking of when you were trying to get my permission to quote me. Hope you continue this, soon, because I was really enjoying this one. Well, except for the mother who'd say the foul words and talk about teen-embarrassing topics like masturbation, but got upset about saying things like "God!" Ah, I wondered. I'm trying to get back to it...
6/01/2005 Dreamscape Hey Lisa, Think that dream may be re-running soon, though with the opposite perspective. Damn, girl! I'd give a more in-depth analysis, but this story is pretty straight-forward sex. There's hints that I'd like your style for the other story, though. The two M's in part two just has me a little wary. Maybe I'll check it out tomorrow. For you? Yeah, I can do that. Not into MMF well, I do have others up my sleeve, just trying to work out the endings. Hope you come back and check them out. Thanks, Mr.
6/01/2005 The Quiz ... picture big burly guy seeming to chortle mightily, but straining so hard that no sound comes out. That's my reaction. Oh, well! Thanks for the story, man! Pleased you liked it. I chortled writing it!
31/12/2004 Next Time - Part 2 A short story. Hmm. Normally, I don't like them ... So, very cool, man. Very. Sorry to snip out so much, but you can't give the story away!