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Guest Story by Lisa |
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Caramel Part 2 |
Comments
I think your stories are extremely interesting and you have a special talent. Yours are the most interesting stories I have seen on the web. If I compare your stories to the best on the web, I would give them a 9. But note that I like your writing much better than the others I have found on the web. You are really off-scale in this grading system.
Oh My! -Lisa
Great story,exactly what I would have done had that been me.I'm curious to know how it all plays out.
Anonymous
I like your style...hope you like pt 3. -Lisa
I don't know how you did it Lisa, but this was even better than Chapter 1! I don't think I have the stamina to read Chapter 3 tonight.... ;)
I blame hormones...oh, and my naughty thoughts. -Lisa
This chapter was tense but but does not stand by itself. It shows the sexual tension between Carlos, Sierra and Paolo but reaches no conclusion. I assume it will all come together at the end but I am not all that impressed of chapter 2.
You're right, it can't stand alone, that's why there's 3 of them. And after having the pleasure of living with these two, they certainly impressed the hell out of me! ;) -Lisa
boring
Does that mean you like it a bit rough? Understandable. My not-so tender stories are all in my head for me to enjoy or I would have to post them on a different site...I wouldn't want anyone in the neighborhood to think I was a pervert or something...Ciao. -Lisa
Another good story, well told. Looking forward to part 3
Be gentle. -Lisa
Find it quite hard to believe Paolo was not Really upset with both his wife, Sierra, and brother Carlos. Apparently this idea of watching his wife have sex with another man was enough to turn him on - even if the other man was his brother. I liked this part of the story but not as much as the first part. Give you a 7 for this one. By the way, Sierra is one hell of a woman with all those organsims.
Passed on to Lisa for comment, but Hank, you're losing it. This is the third time you've commented on part 2 of this! -Lisa
I think this story was incredibly real...realistic in a certain sense...I mean. Very passionate A* material! Well Done
I was just trying to turn you on, but I'm pleased you thought it was passionate. And you are correct...in a certain sense. ;) -Lisa
Wonderful! Sexy *and literate is a rare combination ;) Thanks for sharing a lovely tale - I'll be on the lookout for if you take this further.
I'm definitely taking it further, I hope you like it. Thanks for the compliment... -Lisa
Still rock hard.... can't wait for Part 3....please!
Anonymous
In that case, I'm eager to know how you ~feel~ after Part 3. Come back and join me, will you? -Lisa
i really think in my heart that was really sick how do yall all know that yall dont have any thing sick shit sound like all of yall nasty and gay ....sign ann learn more about hiv then tell your story right....
Not fully coherent, but I get the idea. What I write about is nothing new, my 'anonymous' friend, but these two men are hardly gay and hardly interested in each other. And, I'm very satisfied with the story the way it is...so...what made you read it all the way through??? ;) -Lisa
Unlike most of the things I read for arousal and enjoyment, your stories are written well and evocatively. They paint such warm and feeling pictures of coupling. I am not certain whether you are male or female ... I receive varying sensations on this point from one story to another. Perhaps you will let me know. Please keep on writing. And thanks.
Don't worry, your sensations have been provoked by a worthy opponent...a girl. "Lisa" is indeed a lady who enjoys life and everything has a sexual connotation to it (in her mind). -Lisa
I don't mean to be critical, but as a fellow writer I just wanted to say that you should watch subject-verb agreement. Otherwise it was a great story and very interesting. I'm currently reading some of your other works. Nice job Lisa.
Anonymous
I'm still impressed by your comment, this being my first story. I hope you like the others. I also need to work on my tenses...as I have been told. ;) Perhaps you can tell me where to find your stories...not to critique...I love to read as much as I love to write. -Lisa
OH My god, this was so amazing. you are such a good descriptive writer. holy fuck, i was so wet and hott while reading this, now i want to get fucked....hard and deep
Anonymous
Thank you, imagine the turmoil while writing such stories. Oh, did you find someone to satisfy that bottomless itch of yours? -Lisa
Wonderful use of language
Although I'm still learning, it's wonderful of you to notice! -Lisa
I read the first and thought, holy shit then I read the second. Wow. It makes me want so much, right now. I think I need to call me fiance!
Careful with those words, my friend, you'll get my imagination working again and I might not be so 'gentle'...in part 3. ;) -Lisa
I really can't believe [Gentle] wrote this story. It was too intense and sexy and without real dialog. But it was GREAT and very sexy.
Gentle didn't write it Hank. I did. [Lisa] Sex-iness is what I live for, Hank. ;) -Lisa
Woah. That was intense. I can't wait to see what you've got brewing in your mind for next time.
I don't think you really want me to answer that...as this is my gentle side. ;) Thanks for stopping by... -Lisa
i rlly liked ur story, it seems so creative and original. ur a rlly great writer, definitely in a class of ur own.
Cool 'penmanship' you seem to be a creative one yourself. That was also pretty cool of you to say...thanks, sweetie. ;) -Lisa
nice dude!!
So are you! Thanks... -Lisa
Very cool, a nice thoughtful story, filled with passion. MAybe its just me but would like a bit 'roughness' in the actual act it just adds for me a bit more realism !!
You know, I share your passion on that one as I think you have inspired a part 3. I would have enjoyed telling that to you personally, but I do hope to see you back in the future as well. Thanks for the boost, my 'intensity level' has been turned up a notch! ;) -Lisa
Excellente!
Grazie! -Lisa
Yummm!
I thought so too... -Lisa
Amazingly erotic, wonderfully delightful, just plain <snip>** amazing. Wonderful job, Lisa.
Oooo...thank you! -Lisa
Great two part story. Love to read erotica about a willing female and her to male partners. Keep up the good work. Love to know when you write another threesome story.
Not sure, Fred, but I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Keep checking back, though...you never know. -Lisa
WOW!!! Where's chapter 3, 4, 5. Does brother bring a woman??? Great writing... Had my full attention and left the ending open this to continue.
I'm not sure...school consumes much of my time now. I still enjoy writing so...we'll see. Thanks. -Lisa
oh my gosh this is awesome... is there going to be another part?
Only time will tell... ;) -Lisa
fucked up u perverts... Bitchin
Honey, don't blow my cover. Some of these people think I'm romantic! -Lisa
this was a truly great story, abd probably on the mind of all men who have a brother with a very sexy wife. You express the lust beatufilly. Thank so much.
Thank you, but can't the lust actually be love? Can more than one or two brothers be in love with the same woman? Hmmm... -Lisa
boring!
Along with your state of mind, sweetheart. -Lisa
It was incerdably so very Hot and sensual and sexy
Anonymous
Happy to please...and thank you. -Lisa
WONDERFUL Well written I wish there was more of this in our society, open mindedness. The husband should have been part of this before not after the fact.
I appreciate the vote and your honesty, but some people can't help giving in to a bit of reckless passion... -Lisa
You are an excellent writer Lisa, and your story was very tastefully composed. I am not the type to enjoy a story about affairs or sibling swapping I must say your story was so well written Lisa and so beautiful portrayed that even I enjoyed it immensely.
Such a lovely reply, thank you! It stirs up a little inspiration for...hmmm...I guess we'll just have to see. ;) -Lisa
Lovely story............ would love to hear her perspective
Anonymous
'Definitely!' and thanks. -Lisa
I have a brother, he had a wife, our chance was missed, now they have a seperate life. Now, I have a wife, he moved out of town, I have had the thoughts, mixed emotions keep me silent, your story..... who knows.... I would like to read more of this and other mfm and fmf.
Thanks for taking the time to write that, I'm so glad you enjoyed it...that means alot coming from someone who can relate. -Lisa
Wow is the first word that comes to mind... I have a little thing for Italians too, so this story quickly became a favorite...
it was a great story
Well, I appreciate that! -Lisa
i think your story is kind of between romantic writing and cheap sex stories...don't get me wrong it sounds nice...but you have to ask yourself what is the purpose of you writing? To make people horny or just to introduce us your sexual fantazies?
Anonymous
I'm floating in a sea of cheap, erotic, silly, sexy, romantic, well-written, no-talent, degrading and funny stories. My goals aren't high, but if my writing will make someone horny...then 'cheers' to cheap sexy stories. Thanks for voting. -Lisa
it made me cum. tonight i'm going to ahve a great fuck with my husband...
You surf on a wave of euphoric bliss and you give me a SIX...how about an eleven?! I'm only suggesting. ;) -Lisa
i kant wait fer part 3!
I was quite surprised at this story. I was sure that Carlos would have been the "victor" over Paolo. (And you would have had more to write about). You know, the grass is always greener on the other side ...etc" and a new lover is ALWAYS more exciting than your married mate. But you came out and totally surprised me. I'm glad it ended with Sierra and her husband Paolo still hapily married. But the story could have been much more provacative if Carlos had won the love-fuck. Gentile, you must be a romantic person! Good for you. The world needs more people like you! Love Hank
Deja vu, Hank? (lol) Anyway, I feel kinda silly responding to a vote intended for someone else, but I am glad you liked MY story. ;) As for Gentle, I have to agree with you...he is definitely a romantic. -Lisa
I read part 1 and 2 and fund them sexually exciting but unbelievable. Two brothers are not likely to take one screwing the others wife as gently as it was told. Nor would I expect Sieria be so open about the whole relationship.
Your mind said 6, but your fingers gave me a 7. Now about those brothers, you do have a point. Sierra...is alot like me in so many ways. While everything is true, the sex is not...therefore, the title is Lisa's Stories, not Lisa's Biography. Thanks for the vote, sweetie. -Lisa
Both stories were great! Having the <snip>. Sweet.
Anonymous
Yeah, those 'two' can take much out of a lady... -Lisa
Star rating
I think you did a very good job on one and two, I would love to know when you publish any more GOOD JOB
Anonymous
Soon... -Lisa
Absolutely fantastic !! Your writing is something rare indeed, a turn on for both men and women equally !! Are there any plans for a 3rd part to the story ? Have you any other stories I could read, and are they on the same lines as this one or do you write about other types of sexual encounters ? (i.e. lesbian, gay, bi-sexual, 1-on-1 sex, s&m, etc)
Anonymous
I'm absolutely pleased you enjoyed it so much! Your vote and comments were very generous, thank you. Part 1 and 2 are all I have to give, but as far as Part 3 and other juicy stories...only time will tell. -Lisa
very cool
*smile* -Lisa
I loved the story, well written, you did great... still, part of me is angry at his wife and brother for cheating on a loved (?) one. Could we have Part 3 to smooth it all out and show some feelings besides lust? Did it become a regular thing? Her with two husbands? Or was that it? How did hubby reconcile their betrayal? Thanks for a enjoyable read.
Anonymous
Yes..life can be tragic that way. I thought I would take a serious thing such as this and add a little romantic passion for just that...'an enjoyable read.' Thanks for commenting and enjoying. ;) -Lisa
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I tossed my jacket over the dresser by the door. Walking towards my naked brother with my equally naked wife, I wondered just what to do. I knew he wanted her, but I didn't think he would have the guts to take her. I guess his feelings for her were stronger than I had first assumed. When I got to the edge of the bed, I looked at her and instead of being afraid she was really...annoyed! I guess I shouldn't have been surprised with the vineyard taking up all my time, but didn't she understand that I was DOING all this for her! Shit! Instead of yelling I ran my hand through my hair and rested it upon the back my neck. A slow smile suddenly spread across my face as I looked at my brother fumbling for his shorts. I was speechless at the moment, because I know I should be irrate, but curiosity was burning in the back of my mind. They slowly turned and looked at me. I didn't realize I was still smiling, I guess they thought I had lost my fucking mind. I walked to the vanity, grabbed a chair and slowly sat down by the bed. "Sit down, Sierra." Now I was annoyed. Where does she think she's going? She's not getting off that easy. "We've got something to discuss and you're going to sit there until I'm ready for you to move." "This is embarrassing, I don't want to be here right now." she said flippantly. "You had no problem being here before I opened the door, now did you?" "I also see you had no problem with your choice of company." I said, a little menacingly, a little bored with the conversation. There was something else I wanted to talk about, I had already made my decision on how this night would finish. "So, Carlos, just what is it about my wife makes her so irresistable to you?" "Hmm...you care to share that with me, BROTHER!" He began speaking to me in Italian, but I wanted Sierra to hear what he was saying, too. I knew it would make him a feel uneasy. Little did he know that this was the easy part! As I stood up suddenly, they both flinched. I'm sure he was bracing himself for a fistfight, but I had something else in mind. I just don't know how to present it. As I paced the bedroom to the balcony, where the moon was pouring onto the carpet, I thought of a way...to teach them a lesson and to have a little bit of fun I'm sure they would enjoy. Maybe this night can be put behind us with fond memories so we can continue with our future and be done with the desires that have been smoldering since we were teenagers. The thoughts have always been there. How would it feel to have sex with her at the same time? How would it look if two pairs of hands were caressing her body? How would it sound hearing Sierra moan from pleasure given to her by two different men? So many thoughts, so many things to do. I was planning to make this a night to remember, because as long as I'm alive there will never be a chance for it to happen again. Don't get me wrong, I would rather shove my fist through his intestines, but I know the results of this night will have Sierra knowing just how much I want to please her. How much I care about her happiness. Forgetting the company behind me, I came back to the situation at hand. I walked over to the bed and stood looking over them. I began to tell them how troubling it was to walk into my room and find them in here doing God knows what. So I wanted to know just 'what' it was they were doing. I laughed when they both stared in horror at my meaning. I walked out of the room for a moment and came back with some wine. I knew if she got a little 'relaxed' it wouldn't be so shocking as to what she was about to do. With me and my brother. As I walked to her with the glass, I saw that familiar sparkle in her eyes that informed me it wasn't even necessary to get her drunk. She looked capable of handling the events that were soon to unfold. "Sierra, I have had a fantasy burning inside of me for years. I didn't know how to approach you about it because I thought you would feel as if I was treating you like a whore. I only want to fulfill this fantasy with someone I trust." I looked at my brother, but continued talking to her, saying, "Because this night of ours will be just that...a night. We all seem to have a desire and strong love for the other, so I think it appropriate that we continue what you've started. After this night, it's over, Carlos." "Agreed." But, he wasn't looking at me. He was staring at Sierra, while she regarded me as I was watching him. That is when it began. She let the sheet slip down her body and onto the bed and stood up. Wrapping her arms around my neck, I was already getting aroused just by the way she was looking at me. She hadn't looked at me that way in a long time. I brought my hands up and covered hers and unwrapped them from around my neck. I gently placed them at her side and gave her a soft peck on the nose before I turned around and walked away from her. I walked over to the stereo and let the soft music flow throughout the room. I then sat down on the small sofa by the wall and with my finger, beckoned her to come to me just as she was. Naked. She slowly walked towards me and when she got to the middle of the room, I told her to stop. As the music played, I raised an eyebrow and let her follow the hint. I smiled softly when she quickly understood what I wanted her to do. She brought her hands up over her head and began to slowly rotate her hips, swaying very gently, very sensually. I wasn't going to be watching my brother tonight, but I was curious to see his reaction. It is a rush that people find my wife attractive, but to actually see his lust for her was a whole different feeling in itself. I watched as she turned around and swung that luscious round bottom of hers just inches from my face. Bending over, I could see those beautiful moist lips and was very happy that she was enjoying herself. She grabbed her ankles and ran her hands slowly up and around her well-defined calves. Going higher to her thighs and up to her nice rounded ass, she cupped her cheeks and gently opened them for me to see the whole picture. She looked around to see my face and smiled when she looked down into my lap. An erection that had been slowly building since I entered the room. Slowly she came upright and walked over to Carlos sitting on the edge of the bed. She was standing in front of him waiting for him to touch her and I couldn't tell if this was a little disconcerting for him or not. But then he answered my question when he lifted his hands to her round hips. He rested his forehead on her flat stomach as he struggled to control himself or get the nerve, I couldn't tell. He brought his head up slowly, putting kisses on her tummy and circling her navel with his tongue. His hands left her hips and went straight to her rounded breasts. I have always loved to look at her breasts. I would describe them as a nice rounded size C, with large nipples and they were very sensitive. Carlos caressed her breasts on his palms and squeezed them as he continued to lick her navel. Her head fell back then and I grabbed my crotch at the same time. Damn, I could feel the pressure about to explode and we haven't even gotten that far. I looked at her face and she leaned into him then and almost fell on top of him so he brought her to the bed. That's when he leaned over and began to give her erect nipples more attention. Licking and flicking with his tongue, squeezing the other breast with his right hand, he drove her crazy with need. She tossed her head back and forth and began talking incoherently, but I knew exactly what she wanted. He went up and searched for her mouth, trying to calm her. His left hand went down to her legs and gently slid a finger straight into her pussy. I couldn't take it! I have never felt such intensity raging through my hardness, it was too much, but I wasn't going anywhere. I didn't watch him much, but I could see his hand dipping inside of her over and over as I watched her face and body. Hearing her moan from pleasure that didn't come from me was very erotic to say the least. Her body tensed and I knew she was about to have her first orgasm as she screamed softly. Dropping my head back onto the couch, I willed myself to not come just yet. It was torture but I wanted to release myself inside of her. When I brought my head back up I saw Carlos briefly glance my way. He turned his head back to Sierra and her body rose and jerked softly as he slid his dick into her. The intensity of what was happening was so great that he dropped his head down to her chest. His "Oh God" was a little strained, but I heard it. His hair clung to his forehead and their bodies glistened with perspiration as he slowly thrust inside her womb. Getting back on his hands, she placed her feet on his calves and his pumping quickened. As he slammed into her hips, she grabbed his biceps and began moving her own hips to meet up with his. No! I thought, please not now. Just when I thought I would lose control, Carlos yelled out his release instead. As he ejaculated, he continued to buck and press against her, his muscles tight and strained from the blissful pain. That's when I stood up and undressed myself. While I was undressing, Carlos began talking to Sierra, whispering something in her ear. He was breathless, but I know I heard something about "thank you" and "love" and "special." I had an idea of what he was doing. I grabbed a towel as I walked over to the bed and tossed it to my brother. She was still lying across the bed and he gently cleaned her up as I leaned near her head and began kissing her mouth. The state my cock was in was quite painful, but I had to hold on a little while longer. In my peripheral vision, I saw Carlos had dragged himself to the couch. He laid his head back and closed his eyes. I knew he was looking at us even though to the next unsuspecting person he would appear to be asleep. We've always enjoyed doing that. At the moment, I didn't care too much at being watched. I felt comfortable because it was him, but a little intrigued at being watched having sex with my wife. I was glad she didn't have another orgasm as he had his, I wanted to share this one with her. So, I slowly turned her onto her stomach and gently encouraged her to get on her knees. I knew she loved it that way. Rubbing her beautiful, round, tight bottom I knew I was prolonging my torture, but I didn't care. She then spread her knees apart a little more and waited eagerly for me to enter. I decided to prolong her torture as well. Just for a moment. I smiled to myself as I rubbed the tip of my head on her swollen clit. Hearing the juicy sounds it made caused my shaft to jerk. I then slid it from her clit all the way back to her center. I only slipped a couple of inches inside of her and brought it back out, starting at the clit again I did that painful teasing maybe two or three times more only so I wouldn't explode right there. "Please, Paolo, I can't take it anymore" she cried. Almost literally. Finally, I let my cock slide between her wet lips into her walls. I stopped instantly, I needed time to regain my composure from the sudden pleasure. Surely the circumstances of this night has heightened our senses and lowered our patience for release. Okay, now I need to put both of us out of our misery, I thought with a weak smile. The pressure was deliciously excrutiating, just like it was the first time we made love. As I slowly slid deeper inside her moist cunt, my thighs came in contact with softer ones. I closed my eyes as I moved inside her, when I opened them again I could see movement to my left. I chuckled when I realized what Carlos was doing...and so soon. So, I spread my palms over her back and grabbed her shoulders. Gently I pulled her up to me as we stayed connected back to chest. She reached behind me and grabbed my ass and massaged her hands into it while I ground my hips into her. Enjoying the sensations, kissing and sucking her neck, biting into her shoulder, anything and everything else around me was gone, except the low, but ever-present sound of someone else's moan. I wrapped my hands around both her breasts, going to her nipples I squeezed them gently, but firmly. Slipping one hand down her stomach I teased around her labia as I quickened my thrusts inside her from behind. Moving, thrusting, touching, caressing and bucking, it lasted longer than I would have expected. The same moment I had that particular thought, Sierra began to search my body for something to hold onto. I knew she was approaching a hard release. "Mmm...I can't...breathe." "It's okay, my love. Just let it go." "Ooo...oo...oh. Please stop, I can't...oh God! "I'm sorry, love, but I can't stop...I can't...oh Christ! As her release began from the core it spread throughout her body like wildfire, pulsating so hard I thought the pressure would crush me. She screamed from deep within her as it washed over her, the sensations causing my release to start with a shudder. The vibrations it caused inside her seemed to go on forever sending her into a second orgasm with more intensity as she whimpered and cried. My arms clasped strongly around her torso. Someone had to hold the both of us up, but what I really wanted to do was fall to the floor. In the distance, because my sanity was gone, I knew Carlos was enjoying himself by the sounds of his release. As the ride began to come slowly to a halt, I carefully slid out of her and fell to the bed. Still feeling the aftermath of a 'tidal wave', we laid there half-awake, half-dazed. One hundred percent satisfied. Seconds stretched into minutes before anyone spoke...or moved. The only muscle I could move or wanted to move was my tongue. "I love you, Sierra. You've made this a night to remember, thank you, baby." "Mmm hmm..." When Carlos finally came to the bed, he was back in his underwear. He really didn't know what to say, just at a lost for words, I guess. He stumbled in his efforts to say how much he loved and appreciated what they had done. That he'd never forget this night and he'd cherish it for a very long time. We all smiled to ourselves, the feeling in the air of love, uncertainty, and wonderment. I leaned my head back and closed my eyes, but I was still watching him, wondering what he was about to do. He turned to walk out and I asked him then..."You leaving so soon?"
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