"I really enjoyed your
favorite
mc novels
section. And am a pretty regular
visitor to your site. I wondered if you had plans to update that
section of your site any time in the near future.
Thanks,
Robert, 15 Aug 2002
"JR, "
Awakening
New Desires
" was entertaining, but i'm sorry
to say the writing quality wasn't up to your usual high standards.
Other then that, it was successful in giving me a hard on." Thanks,
Dom,
14 Aug 2002
"Hello! I really enjoyed your
new
"Celebrity" page
. Excellent taste...
Just one question: The only woman on the page I never heard of (I
am from Germany) is Catherine Bell. Who is she - actress, model,
singer, whatever?"
MfG K, 14 Aug 2002
"hi, i'm a
big
fan of your work
and was wondering if you
would like to turn your hand to writing a hardcore voyager fanfic set within
the series featuring naomi wildman's first time, Any pairing. I'm
sure this could become a must read like so many of your other works. Thanks
for your time."
Athelas, 14 Aug 2002
"First of all, I'd like to thank you for
opening up such an intriguing universe
(Master
PC Universe)
for other authors to play in.
Truly one of the most interesting ideas in the genre :) Second, I'd
like to send you a Master PC story I've written for inclusion onto your
webpage..."
Aphotic, Author, 12 Aug 2002
...and above all,
thank
you for continuing to contribute your time and effort to the community
.
I'm sure it can't be easy; the other authors/forum posters have gained
a lot from it."
Arc, writer, 12 Aug
2002.
"I'm a
big
fan of the site
, but have been without access
for a while... I remember you had a link to a movie done by personanongrata
listed. Do you still have that address? Keep up the good
work and thank you for any direction you could provide."
Sean,
12 Aug 2002
"Hi. i'm a
fan
that has been reading your stories for some time
now and your new one ("Awakening New Desires") realy hit the nail on the
head. Is there any more stories that you wrote with this theme that
isn't on the emcsa?"
Justin, 11 Aug
2002
"I just got done reading your new story
("Awakening
New Desires")
and it was sweet. One
question... when is the second one coming out? B
Flodder,
10 Aug 2002
"Any chance that we'll ever see how
Rose was controlled from
"Veronica Doll aka
Barbie"
? For a throwaway character she
sure had potential."
Brian, 3 Aug 2002
JR, I was just browsing the Net trying
to find some helpful hints about writing erotic stories - and YOU popped
up! Lucky me! I've read some of your stories and I think your are
a terrific writer and would be honored if you would take a look at my work
and "hack" it away. Thank you soooo much!"
Carla,
31 July 2002
"Just read the story
"Wishcraft"
again. I would love to see a sequel being written. Maybe there
should be brand new characters. Also, I would like to know what happens
to the female jogger Tiffany Sterling. Maybe fully absorb the guy
who is trapped fully inside her body. Maybe raise her IQ a bit so that
she could possibly influence where the story goes. Just a thought."
nberto,
31 July 2002
"Hi. I'm not sure why I'm writing
you. I hope this is the author of
"The
Agency"
and that I have got the right e-mail
address. I love your work, which is probably odd since I'm a girl,
and a lesbian at that--all more info than you needed I'm sure--I just wanted
to thank you for writing something so liberating to my submissive side.
Please do not feel like you have to respond to this I just wanted to thank
you.
Jane, 27 July 2002
JR; I finished reading the
"Cassandra-Vampiress"
series. It was truly interesting, so I was wondering when you will
be starting "The Vampiress Witch" series?"
Derek,
26 July 2002
Hey ~ I just read
"Cassandra
- Vampiress"
on Greyarchive.com and I've got
mixed feelings toward it. It was well-organized but maybe it had
a little too much sex, which isn't really all that surprising judging by
where it was posted up, ne? Very cute idea what Theresa did to Sarah
at the end. Damien was a totally awesome character and i wished that
there was more of him in the story. I'd love it if Damien would get
his own series. I think I might have liked Cassandra better than
Theresa, but probably because she was the opening character and i grew
attached to her. This story is just on the border of becoming something
truly sensational; all it needs is a bit more storyline and maybe more
depth to the characters, I think. Oh, i've run off again with criticism.
Don't get offended; these are just little points i'd like to bring up.
it's up to you on how you take them. On the whole, i rather liked the story
and email me if you create a new story. Just wanted to let you know.
Illusion,
25 July 2002
The
"Sorcerer's
Curse"
was Excellent!! You're one of my favorite
authors. I'm definitely looking forward to some more!"
jg,
24 July 2002
"This was a fun sexy story
(Sweet Sensations)
- sort of a Forest Gump
(life is a box of candy) meets the SRU wizard. Thanks!"
ar,
22 July 2002
"
ur website
is excellent!
keep up the good work!
may i suggest more stories involving Lara Croft/Tomb Raider? i just
really liked ur writin and mr wolf is a great writer himself."
Jean, 22 July 2002
"Sweet Sensations"
is well-written - I liked how careful you were about the chocolates. :-)
The transformations were a bit 'over the top' for my tastes, to the point
where I felt sorry for all of the characters by the end. On the other
hand, I really like that the 'evil' character didn't get away with crimes
scot-free."
LR, 18 July 2002
I just read
"Lust
Potion 69"
and I wanted to write to tell you
I loved it. Where can I find more?"
GS,
14 July 2002
"I have been reading
Master
PC
ever since i found it a few years ago.
Since then i have made an attempt to read all of them i could find, including
that monster of a story by Xanthos Pendragon. (Btw, i believe yourself
and him to be some of the better net writters i know.) But i seem
to always find myself unhappy with the endings. The whole universe of Master
PC is filled with unlimited power, and usually ends up with man with lotsa
women and rich. I am glad you finished your story when you did, I suspect
it was because you actually saw it as "Finished", but i could be wrong.
What i am getting at however is that I, a computer engineering major in
college, wish to write my own Master PC story. Now by no means am I an
english major, nor do i even enjoy story writting, but, i do enjoy a good
story, and i believe I have a hook that might prove to be interesting,
while not ending in the powerhungry god senario. And since you are
the original master of the Master PC universe, i felt i should relate this
to you... Do you have any opinions? This story will be the
first i ever wrote for publishing, even if it is to a sex forum, besides
regular english papers. So any comments suggestions would be highly appreciated."
Nick,
4 July 2002
"I was reading chapter 2 of
Suzi
Spice aka Super Bimbo
and the pic of Shelly
being captured could not be found. Can I have a copy of it?
I collect stories and if illustrations are included I add and resize the
pics to them in the appropriate areas."
talon,
22 June 2002
"Hi JR, just wanted to say "Hi", I liked
visiting your website and to pass onto you the following: 1.
My all time fave story of yours so far is
"Suzi
Spice aka Super Bimbo.
" SO, will
you be adding new chapters of that story soon? Will there be more
poser pics for your new chapters? Also, can I make these suggestions?:
a. How about Suzi Spice taking on another hot "poser pic" female called
Alta Woman? She's found here http://www.altawoman.net
b. How about Super Bimbo teaming up with the She-Hulk, Wonder Woman or
Lara Croft? 2. These are just some mind control movies I thought
you should check out when you get a chance (I think they're great anyway):
a. "Invasion Of The Bee Girls" b. "In Like Flint" OK,
they're a little old but still classic to me. Also, have you seen "Stepford
Wives" and if so what do you think of it? 3.
The
Charmed Ones trilogy
is another favorite of
mine:) Do you plan on writing anymore stories with Alyssa Milano
in them? 4. How did you find out about "Ring Of Desire"?
Where can you find more info on that? 5. 2 of my favorite authors
from mcstories.com are you and Sara H. Have you ever thought about
writing a story with her? Before I go, I just saw "Rod Steele" recently:)
It was very good but for me it's only tied with "Ultimate Attraction" more
than rises above it. Still, Mr. Kanefsky's a great director and I
hope I get to see "Pretty Cool" somewhere either on video or in a
theater. OK, that's it from me. Take care:)
Chris,
22 June 2002
"
I am a big
fan of your website
and
read
your page on novels
just recently. I
found myself really wanting to buy some of these books. I've been
browsing abebooks.com and have already found a few of the books I want,
including most of the Russ Martin books. Although the postage to the UK
may be a bit steep, the fact that the books are going for as little as
$2.50 makes up for that. I'd like to let you know that as a result
of reading your recommendations, I now have a list of 29 books I want to
buy, not including the Jack L. Chalker books. My credit cards are
already screaming in pain. I was happy to see you include Dean Koontz's
Night Chills, I bought this book many years ago, on my first visit to the
States, and it introduced me to the wonderful world of MC erotica.
If you don't mind me bothering you some more, I was wondering if you could
tell me a little about the Satan's Library series of books you have listed
under Adult novels. You haven't rated them very high but I must admit that
titles like Devil's Hand Maiden are always going to catch my perverted
eye. I'd like to finish by saying I don't think I've read a story of yours
that I haven't enjoyed, but special thanks for creating the
Master
PC
universe and the superb
Charmed
Ones Trilogy
. Thanks for the help (and
the stories)."
Sincerely, Neil, 22 June
2002
Hi JR, I just thought I'd drop you a few
lines and tell you.... 'Thankyouthankyouthankyou'.... for finishing another
TG story! I really LOVED
Sorcerer's
Curse
but it was a tad short for my tastes.
Sweet
Sensations
is a really well written story
and you did an excellent job of keeping all those transitions straight!
LOL I know that your main love is for the MC stories but I certainly
love it when you throw us TG fans a tidbit also. Please keep up the
great work, I look forward to seeing more from you in the transgendered
line in the future!
Thanks again, Nora Cress, 20 June 2002
"great story
(A
Warlock's Toys)
. I love to read stories
like that as I often fantasize about making it with two women at once.
thanks."
Richard, 20 June 2002
Hi, Just finished reading the
Cassandra
- Vampiress series
, which is an exceptional
piece of work and I can only beg that you write more. As a regular
reader of fiction on the internet, I can only congratulate you on producing
a series well above the average I have come to expect in term of storyline.
I intend to read the rest of your published work as soon as I can.
Once again, thank you.
Chris, 20 June
2002
"Excellent story
(Cassandra
- Vampiress)
. I would have had it go
another way. Damien just didn't deserve to be in charge and Theresa
could certainly have taken him by not including Cassandra in her plans
but feeding her information that Damien would find in her mind. Then
she could have Damien bring her into the vampire world while maintiang
the ability to enslave him as soon as she was initiated. In this
way she could be with her love forever (she would know that as a mortal
her, Theresa's death would be unbearable for Cassandra) and put Damien
where he belonged, under her control. I just hate it when the male
gets away with sloppy work and the female has to pay. It is past time for
things to be set right." ;-)
Dawn,
19 June 2002
"Who doesn't wish they could just cast
a spell and bend reality. This was my fantasy in high school, which is
why this story
(UnHoly Desire)
speaks so much to me. The way the Author gets into the character makes
them just leap out of fiction and into your imagination. They all feel
like real people not like one-dimensional characters. Hope we can see more
in the future."
Phantom, 19 June
2002
"Thanks for the
Cassandra
- Vampiress series
! At the end, you
said the "fanfare was low". Possibly it was due to not being noticed
and read?? I only just now read the series because I hadn't seen
it on the "Recent" list and that's all I ever have time to check.
Well written. Good form and good content. Gotta run, but wanted
to say "Thanks" and let you know I enjoyed it and admired it. THANKS
AGAIN!"
Rich,
Writer, 18 June 2002
"I just wanted to tell you how much I loved
the
Cassandra - Vampiress series
.
It was EXTREMELY entertaining and well written. In fact I have enjoyed
many of your stories. Just wanted to express my thanks and compliment
you on your talent....
Rob, 16 Jun 2002
"You seem to have some really hot stories
in development on your
Back Burner
.
How can we read what you have done so far? I find your stories really
great."
RDP, 16 June 2002
"Dreams can show us the greatest desires
of our hearts. Taunting us, dangling them in front of our faces but always
out of reach. Dreams are not but broken promises even as they give us hope
that our desires might come true. If anything, that can keep those
broken promises, should present itself than no matter how absurd or pathetic,
it must be looked into. So I ask you, is there a chance that
Master
PC
is real?"
Malek,
15 June 2002
"I greatly enjoyed the
"Cassandra
- Vampiress" series
that you've recently completed.
I was sorry to see it end. However, I'm greatly anticipating Theresa
having her own series
(The Vampiress Witch)
.
I admit, Theresa was much more powerful, and therefore, a more interesting
character. It was a good ending and you were right to end their relationship
(Cassandra
and Theresa's)
. Theresa would never
be strong enough in her own series if Cassandra was there. I've enjoyed
the reading and I hope that the new series is soon in coming. By
the way, I love a lot of the powers you've given Theresa. Keep it
up. Makes it more interesting. Thanks for writing."
T, 15 June 2002
"Daughter of Desire" & "Horny
Little Valentine"
were very nice stories."
ajk,10
June 2002
On the subject of proofreading your newest
stories, I hereby offer my services, in an effort to get these stories
out to your ravenous fans that much more quickly.
Noneofyourbuz,
9 June 2002
Hello, First off, let me say how
much I enjoy your site and appreciate your fiction, as well as the work
you've gone through to make this material available to us. Thank
you very much! I noticed your list of novels involving mind control
and I have one you may wish to pick up; S. M. Stirling's Draka. It
is part of a series but I think you could read the book on it's own without
having to read the rest... Anyway, thanks again for all the pleasurable
reading material.
Regards, Tom,
1 June 02
"Thank you.
"Athens's
G-Spot"
was pleasantly stimulating.
I love this type of story." Dick, 30 May 2002
I read about
"Athens's
G-Spot"
& i wondered, what does G-Spot
stand for & do males have one. If they do, can you tell me how
to find mine.
Ta, John, 28 May 2002
"JR, Just curious. How do I get to
your web site? I saw it mentioned on FictionMania in a comment you
made."
Tanym, 27 May 2002
Hello, I am a fan of your
Master
PC story line
. It is my favorite on
line story series. I can't tell you how often I've thought how cool
it would be to have that program. Do you have any other stories planed?
Thanks for reading this.
Ekempo, 25 May 2002
JR, I reviewed your
favorite
movies list
. Have you ever seen the
Adult movie "Fury"? I have it on DVD. It stars Shayla.
She has mind control powers and makes people have sex while she watches.
She is kind of chased in the film. Not bad overall.
MV,
19 May 2002
"
Master
PC
is really hot! Especially for a "far
fetched fantasy". Please write more like this. Take care,
Len,
19 May 2002
"Just wanted to let you know, I found a
supplier who was able to ship me with the whole Emanuelle 2000 series!
That's not the one with Krista Allen, it's the one with Holly Sampson.
I also have a majority of all the Click series. If you'd like, I can give
a review later when I'm not busy. They are all in VCD format!
I'll let you know when I've copied the Click movies. I'll send them to
you free of charge. Think of this as a donation to keep your site
going! Hope it doesn't go down. When I have it completed, I'll send
you another E-mail for your mailing address. I've collected a lot of the
movies that you have shown on your site. I hope you keep doin it!"
Matt, 15 May 2002
"Recently I checked the novels section
of your site. You recommend Russ Martin. Could you please give
me some information on his books. I searched amazon.com for plot
summaries, but they didn't have any. Thanks.
Aphex,
14 May 2002
"I wanted permission to borrow your characters
for an introduction to my story. I would like a few one-liners and
maybe a phone call... Part of how this was set up works great, as
my cuzins are in Monticallo NY and they are the intended victims in the
story. I would like your input and i will share with you the story
before it gets sent out. Only my editor will see it before you, and
shes my cuzin. Thank you for your time, and writing a VERY good universe,
tho i doubt it will be as SINdicated as Star Treak, the quality is just
as high. But that is the advantage of the internet. Instant
publication. I hope you approve of my wanting to use your characters
in a cameo and look foward to hearing from you soon.
-=Paul=-, 11 May 2002
"Hi, I just wanted to say that I have been
reading most of
your stories
lately and wanted to thank you for sharing them with all of us. I
haven't found one yet that I haven't enjoyed." Thanks again,
Tom,
10 May 2002
Hey ya How ya doing. Just thought
I would drop you a line and let you know that I liked your
Alien's
Gift
Story and was just wondering if you were
going to expand it some more because it is a good story and I'd like to
see more written in that universe."
Rschmaus, 2 May 2002
Dear Mr. Parz, I sometimes pick up my notepad
and start writing some weird short stories. I'm sure that they are boring
and don't make any sense at all but it keeps my mind occupied because I'm
trying too quit smoking cigarettes. Well anyways... I'm going too
start writing some short erotic stories and I wanted to say thanks for
your creative thinking tip. It helped me to understand alot more
about how too put a storie together."
Dean, 15 Apr 2002
"
Your stories
are great
...how about making a bimboification
booth..you set the dials and control physical and mental features..you
could also give each person a fetish..such as anal sex, scat or whatever
(scats probably too extreme) ...keep up the good work"
Rob,
14 Apr 2002
"I love the stories about the
Master PC
, but I have a question. Is it real?
Is the master pc program real or just created for the stories, just wondering."
Brandon, 12 Apr 2002
Sir, I read and enjoyed your
Veronica
Doll story
. Have you written any MC
stories with a woman in control, or any TG stories (F to M or vise versa)?
If so, would be most interested to read them.
J.D.,
11 Apr 2002
Dear JrParz, I still think that you are
one of the best writers on mcstories.com. I really liked
"Risk
Factor"
a lot. Especially at the end
where he turns out marrying his own sister. That part was really
weird, but it was exciting at the same time. You should think about
getting these made into movies or something. Thanks again for writing
the mc stories.
Sincerely, Matt, 8 Apr
2002
Dear JR, just a few lines to thank you
so much for your story
"Sorcerer's Curse"
.
I enjoyed it tremendously. It hit a certain nerve in my psyche. I
found it in the nifty serve archive. Do you have others in this vein
that I may read also. Wish I could become Christina."
love stephanie, 31 Mar 2002
"I enjoyed reading the first chapter
of the
Master PC
series. Thank you very much."
george,
30 Mar 2002
"Wow...oh my gosh! that was an awesome
story (
The Witch & The Vampire
)!
it was very well worded. keep up the good work, really, it was great!;)
danielle, 25 Mar 2002
"You're a genius for writing the
ORIGINAL
Master PC
story - its always a great read,
thanks."
Tazzman, 21 Mar 2002
"Hi JR Parz. I had fun reading your
story
'The Risk Factor'
and I hope to read more stories written by you in the future, keep writing."
An avid reader Argo. 18
Mar 2002
Hiya JR. I'm a week or so behind,
was too busy WRITING the past few days to read much, but I finally ran
through your story
"Risk Factor"
.
Wasn't what I expected but I much enjoyed it. The characters were... *smack*
Man-u-fique! Especially the antagonist, Jonothan. He's got an interesting
sense of humor, and morals--- not very MANY morals, but he does have them---
and I just love the way he handles things, with his whole nonchalant attitude
about it all. Of course, I also sorta resonated with the character a bit
with the NAME as well. Jonothan Darkling? *smirks* Heh. Didn't see that
one coming. Still, intentional or not, he does remind me a lot of me. Er,
not that I'd do something like that to my own siblings... still the idea
of it portrayed as you've written it, is very hot. Plus, as you know,
I'm a sucker for stories with a twist ending. All around good story. Can't
wait to read your next one!"
J.
Darksong, Writer, 17 Mar 2002
"Hi! I would like to continue the
Alien's
Gift
series (with the author's permission,
of course), and I need some info on the "rules" of the Gift as to what
can and can't be done. It's obvious the 'Gifted' person can mess
with other people mentally and physically, but can the Gift be used to
alter the laws of physics? Any clarification would be a big help
in creating a great Alien's Gift 6. Also, since I've not written
a story for "public" reading, advice from one author to another would be
superb.
Neo, a loyal BE fan, 17 Mar 2002
"I enjoy the
"Master
PC"
premise. May I have your permission
to use it? I will not sell it or any part of it. If anyone offers me any
cash, I will point them to you. All I want to do is write a story
to entertain others. I will post it only on The Erotic Mind, if he
lets me. I guarantee it will be worth adding to Master PC line."
Tom, 16 Mar 2002
"hey i loved the story
(Horny
Little Valentine)
. darlene was great
especially. i really like seeing nerdy girls get back at stuck up
girls in pretty much anyway possible ya know? great idea with the
valentines day potion and all that fun stuff. i woulda loved to see
a little more with the brother and sister but its kinda cool that it wasnt
a finished part."
bw, writer, 12 Mar
2002
"Hi JR, Very well done story (
The
Risk Factor
)! And, yes, focussing on the bystanders
worked extremely well. It let the reader anticipate (dread or salivate
or both, as the case may be) the "turning" of each subsequent victim. Erotica,
like lingerie, to a great extent relies on anticipation, and you sort of
set a banquet table where we could smell and desire each dish before partaking.
The change of viewpoints I did not find disruptive, and it was part of
what let you accomplish this approach, so I'm going to have to disagree
with Boris's comments.Well done!"
Jafar,
Writer, 12 Mar 2002
"Hi, JR. I've finally gotten around to
revising and updating me ASSTR website. I've revamped the whole thing,
splitting the one old page into six or seven new pages, with seperate story
pages and a link page added. My links are a list of authors whose stories
I have enjoyed and was wondering if you'd mind if I added your story page
to the list as well. The link to your site will look something like
this: " JR Parz: Want to talk creative? JR has a wide range of interests
and topics in his stories, everything from subliminal computer programs,
hypnotic aliens, vampires, witches and warlocks, and even powerful organizations
bent on enslaving mankind. If there's way to subvert a beautiful woman's
will and make her into a sex slave, JR's probably figured it out."
Thanks for your time."
J.Darksong, Writer,
11 Mar 2002
"Most enjoyable (though not best written)
was
RISK FACTOR
.
It pushed all my buttons, but (sorry J.R.) could have used better plotting.
Perhaps fewer changes of viewpoint would have helped? You always
write about the importance of female victim viewpoint: if we'd had just
one it would have focused things more and the explanation of the powers
was a bit lame."
Boris Ludmenkov, Writer,
9 Mar 2002
Hi JR, I'm glad that you're enjoying the
story (Vegas Weekend)! And thanks for the compliments! I've
enjoyed several of yours, my favorites being
"The
Origin of Hootersville"
and
"The
Mesmerist."
Jafar,
Writer, 3 Mar 2002
"What is the address for your site?
Being a huge fan of
Master PC
(from those I've read on the erotic mind control story archive) I would
love to see the definitive site these are stored at.
T.,
2 Mar 2002
"All I can say is that I liked
"Horny
Little Valentine"
a whole lot and hope you
continue it. I am a little concerned that the smell might get to
a few too many people. Maybe Jared should find a way to modify it."
Hanover, 1 Mar 2002
"A Major fan of you and Russ Martin and
the fellow that sent you the only Russ Martin book that you didn't like.
I've got a question: Where did you find the writings of 5W? This
guy/gal is very very good, and I have NEVER seen his/her stuff anywhere
on the net except on your site. Yes, I still read your stuff and
recognized your talent a very long time ago--which is why I got in contact
with you in the first place. You have come a long way. (Farleven
impresses the hell out of me as well--as does Storysman.) I still
think that there is a Russ Martin niche that needs to be filled in publishing.
It's quite obvious to me that this fellow stumbled onto a gold mine genre
and you are the PERFECT candidate to fill his shoes. Not only do
you understand the psychological nuances of the characters that need to
be established in a mind-control story, but you also continually strive
to expand the horizons of your writing style by branching off into other
settings. Keep up the great work.
A
fan, Blalvis, 28 Feb 2002
"I thought the story called flirting is
harzous to your health was my favorite. Well, I like this one (Sorcerer's
Curse) because of the shift Chris to christine goes through."
Kristina,
22 Feb 2002
"I read
"The
Origin of Hootersville, USA"
about 10 minutes
ago, and about halfway down you put "lye" instead of "lay". Now that
that's out of the way, I'd just like to say that "Hootersville" is a damn
good story."
Noneofyourbizwiz,
19 Feb 2002
"Regarding
Sorcerer's
Curse
... Pro....Great story with good
build up. Con.....Needed more look into the lives of others changed.
Would have prefered the change be into a heterosexual female."
Jed,
18 Feb 2002
This may not have been entirely my
cup of tea (
Sorcerer's Curse
),
but I definitely admire your skill in writing it."
A
Reader, 17 Feb 2002
"Listen, a while ago i started writing
a story that has been partially inspired by your writing. infact,
i wrote u an email asking u permission to write it since it was inspired
by you. due to certain reasons i have not been able to continue writing
and am stuck. i feel that it is a great story but have not even gotten
past the 1st section. nothing happening yet just setting the whole story
up. anyways i wanted to know if you wanted to continue it. if you
say yes i will send you a copy of it for you to look at, but please let
me know if you will continue because it is a great idea and if you dont
it will definately sit on the back burners as you say and never be finished.
anyways tell me if you want to look at it and i will send it. thanks,
8Ball,
17 Feb 2002
"Hi JR, Well I must say that I really enjoyed
that story
(Sorcerer's Curse)
a lot! As you said, it could have been a bit longer and explored Christina's
trials and tribulations a bit more but all in all I though it a very good
story. That said, now when can we expect a sequel! ROFL Well I won't
keep ya, I just wanted to let you know that us nonwritters appreciate your
labors! Take care and have a great evening!
Sincerely, Nora Cress, 17 Feb 2002
"The stories by this author are fantastic!!!
I read the one that came out today
(Sorcerer's
Curse)
and immediatly traced the author and
read all of his other works. The stories were spectacular. Interesting
story lines, constant levels of excitement, and always an interesting plot.
The most recent one,with it's locale spiked interest as I live very near
both Amherst and Northampton and understand his point of view. Keep
up the great work. I can't wait for your next installment.
Great stuff,
TUGBOAT, 17 Feb 2002
"Another great JRParz read (
Tempest
& The Twins
). While I didn't like
Tempest, I often find that unlikable, weak main characters do not necessarily
detract from the story. The BE is rather weak for this venue, but, JR's
forte is in MC, with just enough BE to add that extra spice. All in all,
I find this to be another fine effort from one of my favorite writers."
Rick,
17 Feb 2002
"Cool ! Riveting stuff (
Lust
Potion 69
)...really gets you holding your
breath to the last and finish with a flourish. Well written."
lisa,
17 Feb 2002
"Good story (
The
Sex Genie
). I didn't expect the ending,
of Cheryl knowing about the whole thing and pulling one of Toni's eyes."
X,
17 Feb 2002
"Today I rode in a cramped humid bus for
hours and some kid vomited all over me. Then I came home and found a new
JR Parz story (
Sorcerer's Curse
)
on Fictionmania.com. What a great day! The story was kind of short,
especially after the change, but the mind-altering stuff at the end was
pretty sexy."
Fret Pearson, Writer,
17 Feb 2002
"I hope we read another story (
Sorcerer's
Curse
) like this again soon and that it takes
less than 2 years this time :) Poof! Wish Granted!"
c jones on 17 Feb 2002
"Good story (
Sorcerer's
Curse
). Nicely developed plot which
piqued my intrest with each twist and turn. I've enjoyed your other stories;
please keep them coming."
Mona R, 16
Feb 2002
Hi there, I occasionally visit the
ASSTR website to see what's new in the world of erotic writing; it serves
as something of a study break. I usually find something in the archives
with the search feature, but this time I clicked on a random new story...and
got the
Sorcerer's Curse
.
What surprised me was the setting. I'm a student at UMass, and I
live in Amherst, so it was really cool to read a story set in this area.
I am familiar with NoHo, I know people (bi and lesbian) who attend Smith,
and I know the Blockbuster video you mentioned (assuming it was the one
next to Stop & Shop). Your story theme was also pretty good;
I think feminization is an interesting element in erotica. Anyway,
keep up the good work. Best wishes,
Agent
X, 16 Feb 2002
"okay i read
horny
little valentine
and it was very good but
too much sex stuff. I think you could write with out that!
Ha It was good!
Athena, 16 Feb 2002
"You don't know me but your my favorite
writer on MC stories archive website. I am writing because I have a problem.
My first story, has a, in my opinion, a solid beginning but once Ihit the
middle I couldn't go on, writers block. Can you please finish this story,and
rewrite it to your standards, it would really make this fans day.
Paul,
14 Feb 2002
I have been reading your stuff for awhile
now, and I just read
"Horny Little Valentine."
One main comment, (which I know you already know about because I read your
tips on writing,) the subjugated girls' perspective is a great story element,
good job in this specific story. Just wanted to write in, saying good job,
keep it up, keep fighting the good fight, etc."
Noneofyourbizwiz,
12 Feb 2002
"Good Story
(Horny
Little Valentine)
... Plan on writing
more?"
Hal, 11 Feb 2002
"That was a great story
(Horny
Little Valentine)
... Will u be continuing
it? I hope so."
Ami, 10 Feb 2002
Nice one! :) Very fun story...
(Athena's
G-Spot)
got quite a laugh out of me...
Coincidental.."hottie" was a nickname i picked up about 5 or 6 years ago
from a close friend of mine named anthony... but there's no way you would've
known that huh? What a wacky coincidence ;) Loved the
pic of Athena by the way... yummy lady ;P... your story sure made my day,
to say the least :) funny guy/s.. p.s. I actually am
a HUGE angelina jolie fan...nice addition :)
ammana
simmons, 2 Feb 2002
JR, I just found your personal site and
was thrilled. I have a very vivid imagination and was happy to find
that the pic's you have of
Master PC
interface matched, for the most part, what I had envisioned. I also
read your writing tips, but as I said, this is my first attempt at writing
and your comments and suggestions would be greatly appreciated. If
you find my writing to your liking and worthy of being posted to your sight,
please feel free. Again, I'd really like to know what you think.
I will wait to here back from you before I submit it to mcstories.com in
case you make any suggestions. Thank you greatly,
Alex,
30 Jan 2002
Hello, My wife and I are on the mend in
our 5 year relationship. As a result, I'm having stronger sexual
feelings for her than I've ever had in my life. I'm trying to write
some erotic stories that involve her in them. I saw your web page
and read your stories - FANTASTIC STUFF! The problem is, she's a
princess in bed and a devoted mother, and I'm an adventurous tiger and
devoted father. I'd like to get her to loosen up in the bedroom and
get wild. Like most males, I have sexual fantisies that involve her
in first-time lesbian relationships. I'm thinking about playing off
of her strength as a mother as a source of sensual admiration by some other
female. Do you have any pointers or advice? Your time is greatly
appretiated.
Sincerely, J, 26 Jan 02
I am in the process of writing a story
Master
PC
story of my own, and as you are the creator
of the genre I was wondering if you would consider proof reading and editing
it before I submit it. If you would not mind doing this, please let
me know and I will send it along as soon as I get the first chapter done.
Also, I am seriously considering creating an online comic of the story
and am looking for an artist to create the art work that wold be involved.
If you know of anyone I would be greatly appreciative. many thanks
in advance either way for any help you may lend and for damn good story.
Alex,
23 Jan 2002
Hi! My "name" is
Keraptis
and I've been a long-time fan of the EMCSA. I even contributed a
story once, called "The Offer, Part 2." I'm writing because I was
thinking about posting something to the MC Forum board but wanted to check
with you about your policies to make sure my post wouldn't be perceived
as spam. The original author of "The Offer" and I co-wrote a script
for a video, loosely based on our stories, which is now in the final stages
of production. Obviously, we want to get the word out to people who
might be interested in buying a copy. Because the project is directly
related to two of the stories in the archive, I thought the MC Forum community
would want to know about it. I was hoping that a brief post to plug
the video (and to offer to answer questions) would be acceptable and even
welcome. If you think it would be poorly received, I'll back off
... it's certainly not my intention to spam anyone. If you want to
see the synopsis page for the video, feel free to visit: http://www.geocities.com/guytalon/upgrade.htm
Thanks!
19 Jan 2002
Hi JR, It's been awhile since I last wrote
you but then I'm mainly interested in the TG/TS genre stories. I enjoyed
this story
(Lust Potion 69)
the first time around as a SRU story but I enjoyed it even better after
you revised it to leave out the SRU stuff. Personally while I enjoyed
Bill's original stories they are getting kind of ran into the ground with
all that are out there these days. I sincerely hope that you have another
TG tale coming off the press sometime soon since that is my meat and potato's
as far as reading is concerned! I've been checking your backburner listings
but so far it didn't look as if you had any that were that close to being
finished. Please don't let them languish too long before finishing
up one for us starving TG fans! LOL Well now that I've prostrated
myself before you I'll let you get back to your work. Have a good day JR!
Bye for now.
Sincerely,
Nora
Cress, 17 Jan 2002
"Thank you! I visit your site regularly
but somehow I never checked out the MC novels link... it's too bad I didn't,
because this is very useful. I'll try to track down some of these.
The title I couldn't remember is Rebekka Moon - not a bad horror book,
but not especially erotic. I noticed that you didn't list 'Shade'
by David Darke/Ron Dee - if you've never read it, and if you can find it,
I recommend it. But when all is said and done, I think that the internet
has provided even better erotica than any published source, from this time
or from any time. Even after years of obsessive surfing, I'm still
in awe of the variety and quality of what can be found on the net.
There was a debate once (on ASSD?) on when the golden age of erotica occured,
and someone wrote *this* is the golden age, and we are all part of it.
I agree. On that note, let me thank you for the excellent stories
you've posted, for your fine website, and for your work in maintaining
the MC Forum. It's all very much appreciated."
Doezenov, 16 Jan 2002
"Hello.. I am an admirer of your stories
on mcstories.com. I think I read that one of your favorite stories
is The Conditioners, by Marlissa. It is also one of mine, and recently
I was going to recommend it to a friend. I discovered The Conditioners
is no longer posted on mcstories.com. Do you know where I can access
a copy of it on the web? I tried Marlissa's email, but it has been
closed. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks.."
jj. 15 Jan 2002
Hi, I like the revison of
The
Subjugation of Tammy
better, I would have
further explained how the aphrodisiac works but its your story, just my
$.02. By the way I'll take a liter of the stuff :-) My
personal preference in stories is that not every paragraph be a big sex
scene, when using some type of plot device, like Master PC, certain rules
be setup and followed, kinda like the techno speak from Star Trek, Now
with the nose plugs who say's they can't slip out during a session.
Bruce,
14 Jan 2002
hi, I re-read the story
(The
Subjugation of Tammy)
and read all the way
to part II and there was nothing said that it only worked on females.
He tried it on his skin then Jessica smelled it and became
very hot, I can see it mixed with part of his body chemestry (like some
perfumes do) and he would not be affected by that dose,but if Jessica
had put it on her skin how do we know it would not have made him hot for
her? So sprinkling it on the girls at the end could have worked on
him, also, when he came in to the room with the bottle with the lid off
it would not have worked on him due to the fact part of the activation
is contact with human skin, please re-read what you posted maybe I'm all
wet but that's my take on the story. By the way I do enjoy your master
pc stories and can't wait to read them.
Bruce,
13 Jan 2002
hi, I read
The
Subjugation of Tammy
today, and have 1 small
point. What made chris immune? shouldn't have he been effected somewhat
by the scent? especaly in the last scene with the two sisters?
Bruce,
12 Jan 2002
Love (Lust) Potion 69
=
very inventive.
Nancy, 13 Jan 2002
I like the new revision of
Lust Potion 69
but I have a few comments.
First, tommy was nothing more than a filler. The character could
have been removed from the story and very little if anything would have
changed. Second, if the spell caused jason to become her fantasy
lover, its a bit confusing that jason would become her twin after the transformatin.
Not to where he would look like her before the transformation? it seemed
you were forcing the blonde bimbo on them both a bit. If he thought
she was the prettiest girl in school, why all the changes? Also,
why did you remove the wizard? I don't see anything in the story
that he could have not done.
Bruce,
12 Jan 2002
Just wanted to let you know that I thought
your story
(Alien's Gift)
was fabulous. It kept me completely interested and enthralled throughout
each chapter. And not just the sex, but the entire storyline was
great. HAve you completed any other chapters? I have read up
to number six and I can't wait to keep reading more. Let me know
if you've done anymore, or have written anything else and where it's posted
so I can read them. Thanks and good writing!!!
Jerry,
10 Jan 2002
Hello, I am the webmaster of a story site:
BDSM Library. One of visitors recommended your story
"Janene's
Wishes"
. I am very interested in it and would
like to put it on my site. This is a complete free story site and visitors
will never pay for reading these free stories. You can check it here: http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/.
Here I want to get your permission before I put your story on. If you have
any suggestion or comment, please feel free to email me. I will really
appreciate it if you can give me a reply email. It can be as simple as
"I agree" plus quoting this original email (in case you have no objection,
of course :). I hope you will not have objection to this and I believe
many other readers will also appreciate it. If you want to send me
any other stories, please do so, I am always looking forward to new stories.
You can send them through email or use the submission form on my site:
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story_submit.php Thank you in
advance,
Jinn (webmaster of BDSM Library).
9 Jan 2002
Dear Sir or Madam, Please can you advise
who I should contact to ask permission to include
http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/JR_Parz/www/Index.htm
in the Hawkseek-Yellow-Pages online directory. to change the entry please
use this link: http://dir.hawkseek.com/data/edAdd.exe/change?RlTbKknjTnNG
There is no charge, but we do need their permission. Thanking you in anticipation,
Hawkseek-Team Content Editor http://dir.hawkseek.com
7
Jan 2002
Admire the job you're doing with MC and
Master
PC stories
, etc. Have lost track of one multipart
story about an MCer who downloads the MrPC program to anything and everything
with a microcontroller...Any ideas? Thanks. Dave B.,
7
Jan 2002