"I have read your most recent masterpiece
of a story (Young Sorceress) and
absolutely loved it. It is definitely one of the greater ones on
the site. You're a damn good author and I encourage you to keep up
with your good work! You probably know what you're doing, but a suggestion
about a "Part 2" would be to have the Sorcerer find a spell to break the
curse and all of Laura's artifically induced emotions would escape her,
and then proceeds to get revenge. Whatever you do, you've got my
support and encouragement!" Kemp, 30 Mar 2001
"i love
Veronica
Doll... AKA Barbie
and
Young
Sorceress
. I have been a fan of yours
for two years. You are the king of erotic stories. Im looking
forward to the sequal to Veronica Doll... AKA Barbie. thanks for
the great stories."
Bman, 29 March 2001
"Hi! I kind of liked the story
(Young Sorceress)
, but I would like to have
seen Laura come up with a way to turn the tables on Serena. I know
given how it was written it might seem impossible, but I just don't think
that it should end on a kind of a sour note like that. In any event,
I would like to see more of your wonderful writing. Keep up the good
work!" Sincerely,
Kelvin, 28 Mar 2001
Subject: veronica doll...
A great story but the opening lines about Wellington being in Australia
is so wrong I felt I should point it out to you. Its the capital city of
New Zealand and has never been any were near Melbourne a land locked city
with no Harbour Thank you again for some great storys Regards."
Vickers,
27 Mar 2001
Hi I read the
'Young
Sorceress'
at mcstories. I like most of your
stories so I was expecting some thing a bit more enjoyable. The NC element
is quite off putting. Could you possibly write a sequel in which Laura
gets her revenge on Serena turning the tables and becomes her mistress
as well. regards."
King Kong, 27 Mar 2001
JR, Well done!
Young
Sorceress
is a super story! KUDOS.
I saw that you are working on another. Keep up the super work.
A great ending - I thought that you would enslave the aunt tho...Did you
ever consider that?"
jdw, 26 Mar 2001
This is just to say that I enjoyed your
latest story
(Young Sorceress)
.
I especially liked the idea of Serena using Laura to avoid having to use
her own magic and thus making her not liable to her own curse. I
can't see the Sorcerer and Laura's aunt giving up, not to mention Danielle's
family. Sequel, please?"
Fast Frank, 26 Mar
2001
Dear Sir, First, let me say that I am a
big fan of your work, especially the
MasterPC
line. On almost every occasion, you continue to out-do yourself, except
for this one
(Young Sorceress)
.
I gotta tell ya, considering the way this story ended, I was very disappointed
to see no mention of a Part 2. I know, opinions are like assholes, everybody's
got one, but in my honest opinion as a long-time reader of your body of
work, I think Laura really needs to be able to find a way to break this
curse and strap Serena over a barrel. I liked the Sorcerer himself, and
for him to be so powerless is not accurate. Don't think any less of me
and don't assume that I'm clinically insane for saying this, but I myself
have studied and practiced various forms of witchcraft and spellcasting
for several years now. Although nothing like what you described in this
story can actually happen, one constant is that everything can be reversed
and corrected. There is no "perfect" spell or curse. I think you should
find a way for the Sorcerer to eliminate the mental portion of the curse,
but let Laura keep her body and Danielle if she truly chooses to. Then,
it's bloody vengeance time on Serena. I would probably write this story
myself, but as much as I get some really good ideas, I fail miserably in
the execution. I hope you accept this criticism and this idea, but if you
do not, that's is your call. You're the professional in this case. Thank
you for your time. Sincerely,
Slade, 26 Mar 2001
Hi! I found the story
(Young
Sorceress)
pretty nice - thanks Keep
on good work!
Ulrike, 25 Mar 2001
Young Sorceress:
JRParz found some more time and was in a writing mood. I may just
be in some kind of odd phasing with his work, but--while I sometimes find
different motivations he says he didn't intend to put in--this time, though
he was doing something more playful, I saw this as having some very dark
overtones. The betrayal by one character, the helplessness of the victim's
support network, the final roping-in of what had looked like someone who'd
gotten to walk--all this is great from my perspective, just an intriguing
contrast with the almost WB flavor of the setting and characters.
- The end pairing of slaves--which JR's MCers like to do, whether
from kindness or just a desire for a quiet harem--seemed more than usually
predatory. (Again, liked that.)
Trilby else, 25 Mar 2001
JR Parz returns with
YOUNG
SORCERESS
. Now, since JR and I share a number
of kinks I got something out of this but I would have been happier if the
story had flowed more or had a clearer focus. I'm not sure what it was
about it precisely or where the narrative was centred. A clearer idea of
how magic was working and what the rules were would have been nice too.
I enjoyed the sexual ideas but would have preferred if the reason the heroine
got trapped was clearer.
Boris Ludmenkov,
Writer, 24 Mar 2001
"
The buffy
story (Buffy's New Reality)
kicks ass.
thanks."
sofia, 23 Mar 2001
"Hello, again. I've just finished reading
the first two sections of
Master PC
.
I don't understand why you permitted Samantha to completely remove Adam's
sexual functionality. She could have left him able to service Heather,
but nobody else. I think Adam and Heather deserve each other. Apart from
the downer of an ending, the story was, I thought, up to your usual standard.
I do have one question, though. Just to be nosey. Are you male or female?
Just curious. Great Writing",
Clive Rockel,
6 Mar 2001
"I came across your stories, and I'm finding
them very nice. I was wondering why some of them are posted imcomplete?
The first one.
Alien's Gift
(1 of 6) stops, just as it got good. Do you know if you can
do anything? If there is other records, or copys of it I could read,
to get the full story?"
Tal,
27 Feb 2001
"When it comes to BE as well as mc
stories, I look for believability in the use of what are obviously psuedo-sciences.
Parz is, time and time again, a master in that realm of the genres. And
he proved it again in
'Pleasure Chips'
.
Also, the story is lots of fun. It merits a sequel as they get into the
slave trade."
Mothman, 24 Feb 2001
"I have for a long time wanted to write
and thank you for the stories you have written and the time you take to
run this site. I have been a regular at your site, although have
seldom written. What got me off the dime was how much I enjoyed your last
story,
Veronica Doll
.
Really well done. I wish I could sing its praises as eloquently as
trilby or for that matter the praises of many of your other stories like
sex
jeinie,wishcraft, alien gift
and many others
but unlike you and the other authors I have trouble writing down on paper
what's running around in my head. So I will put it simply THANK YOU for
all you do."
A fan, 24 Feb 2001
"hi just wanted to say i love
the whole
agency collection of stories
.
are you planning to add new chapters to it soon?"
k,
24 Feb 2001
"hello...i'm lauren i am
a trophy fem for a lipstick lez.
please continue with your
(Veronica
Doll aka Barbie)
story."
lauren, 21 Feb 2001
"Hi JRParz. I just want to tell you,
that I really enjoyed your new story
(Veronica
Doll aka Barbie)
. Please keep up your good
work. Bye",
Oliver, 20 Feb 2001
"Hi, I've read a some of your stories regarding
'
The Agency
',
the ones that I've read are as follows:
The
Agency's Early Years
chapter
one and two
, and
The
Agency, Chapter One - Recruitment Practices,Chapter Two - Roommates and
Chapter Three - Ties that Bind
, I loved them,
do you by any chance have any more? Have you published them? Thanks in
advance for your reply."
Atle, Norway, 20
Feb 2001
"Your story,
Master
PC
is one of my favorites because it deals
with mind control. The idea of total control appeals to me. Now the reason
I am emailing you is, I plan to write a M.C. story of my own. This story
will have some ideas which, you could say that I stole from you, but it
wont be an exact duplicate of your work. I plan to "borrow" certain ideas
from a couple other favorites along with some originals and incorporate
them together into my ultimate fantasy. Now I ask your permission to use
those ideas so that no one will be mad at me for plagiarism. I will be
asking permission of the other authors at the same time. If any of you
say no then I will still write it but it will never be published, I will
keep it for my own private viewing pleasures, if I am allowed then I will
publish them on mcstories.com and storiesonline.net, perhaps I might publish
it on literotica.com. These and asstr-mirror.org are the only free adult literature
sites that I know of. I will put your names and or stories down as a reference.
I hope that you will agree with my plea. sincerely."
G8Ball,
20 Feb 2001
"Hey JR, Big fan. I've been
visiting
your site
for a while now and I've read many
of the stories that appear here as well as on mcstories.com... I've been
writing screenplays for over 5 years. I've written all sorts of genres
and 6 of my scripts have already been copywritten and registered with the
Writer's Guild of America. I've even had producers look at my work.
As of now, the only thing that has held me back is laziness and getting
an Agent. Once I ditch the laziness and find myself an Agent, I can
finally start putting my scripts to work. I'm writing you because
my latest script deals heavily with the themes on your site. You
can almost call it the bible of bimbofication."
Dennis,
Screenwriter, 17 Feb 2001
"OK. I have read '
The
Agency
'. I think, personally, that it bears
much resemblance to the way the Agency is described in '
The
Agency's Early Years
'. Most importantly because
the method of control seems to have changed. Plus there seem to be a few
other discrepancies. In particular the method of boob enhancement.
I would like to see how you get around the OSO investigation. Just for
interest, mind you. On the whole, I like your style of writing, and
these stories in particular. They are good reads."
Clive
Graham Rockell, 17 Feb 2001
"Greetings from New Zealand. I have just
finished reading
'The Agency's Early Years'
,
which I assume is yet to be completed. I quite like the story, thus far.
The ideas you have used here are very interesting, to say the least. I
am just about to read 'The Agency', and will contact you with my thoughts
when I have done so."
Clive Graham Rockell,
17 Feb 2001
"Dear Mr. JR Parz. (How would you
pronounce that anyway?) I am a sort of fan of your site. A
frequent visitor anyhow. I really enjoy your site, actually, and
am a fan of several of your stories. But I can't say that I like
the way that you finished the
Charmed Trilogy
.
Anyway, you know how you have a picture of Katherine Heigl and Jessica
Alba on your "What's New" page? Well, I came across a picture archive
site, that had much similar, but also more diverse pictures. Of both
actresses and others. So I'm sending you a picture or two of Jessica
Biel, from 7th Heaven. It might make a good addition, if you are
even adding to your site anymore."
annonymous,
14 Fenruary 2001
"
Veronica
Doll
was great! I remember reading her original
comment in your reader's write section a long time ago, and I almost wrote
a story myself. I've always thought that was a great concept, a living
Barbie Doll to be enslaved. I'd be interested to know what she thought
of it. The VR scenes were incredible. I liked that part with the
poodle. :) Also I like the list of lessons they endured, especially 'giggling.'
Very funny. Loved it all. Great writing!"
Trent
Wolf, Writer, 14 February 2001
"I love your
Agency
stories and thought I'd just drop you a note of encouragement. Keep on
writing, you have the touch."
Lefaye, 14 February
2001
"Top of the list this week is J.R.Parz's
cheerful sociopathy in
VERONICA DOLL
.
I'm not at all sure where he can go that's up from what's in this one but
I'm looking forward to finding out."
Boris Ludmenkov, 13 February 2001
"First of all, I enjoy many of your stories.
Alien's
Gift
was awesome.
Tempest
and the Twins
was great, could have used more
sexual descriptions (especially Stephanie & Lisa) but it was a great
read. I enjoy the
Master PC
Universe as well.
"Veronica Doll aka
Barbie"
sounds like it could be your best
yet! Please keep the story going!"
Torrie, 13 February 2001
MC Forum Review on
"Veronica
Doll aka Barbie"
JRParz is a prolific
and fun author. His work is loved by many. This story uses many of his
stronger elements in what amounts to one very hot story (I use the word
hot a lot). I could not really enjoy this story because I kept wondering
where Wellington Bay is in Melbourne. Melbourne is my home town and I have
never heard of it. I even looked in the Melways. Is it a boutique bay that
is left off the maps, or does he perhaps mean Westernport Bay or some other
bay along the coast? For anyone not from Melbourne, then you'll really
enjoy this story."
PretentionPlus, 12 February 2001
MC Forum Review on
"
Veronica Doll aka Barbie"
JRParz credits an e-mail correspondent with the inspiration for this: interesting
person. He finds his customary balance of nice heroines in trouble and
a smug MCer even nastier than his usual kind. Keeping sight of his arousal
goal, he makes the girls' bitter struggle against their enslavement hotter
by detailing how it's happening to them. I like gloating-villain exposition
when it works, and it does here."
Trilby else,
Writer, 12 February 2001
"Interesting story
(Veronica
Doll aka Barbie)
so far--but I was kind of
expecting a real-life story of how she became a submissive Barbie doll.
This seems to fall into the category of, "I've got a great idea for a story--could
you write it for me?" These are usually proposed to noted professional
authors with the notion that if it's a hit, they'll split the proceeds
50/50. Most professional authors scorn these offers, but since
there are little (if any) proceeds to split in MC fiction, I suppose it
doesn't hurt to accommodate them if the author wishes. What I wonder,
though, is why she didn't try to write the story herself, at least for
her own sake. In Douglas Adams' "The Long, Dark Tea-Time of
the Soul" there's a line spoken by the god Thor about the relationship
between gods and humans ". . .You made us to be what you would not
dare to be yourselves. . ." I think that's the way many people feel
about performers--they invest a lot of their own dreams and ambitions in
the talents and accomplishments of others, and forget about accomplishing
anything for themselves. Yes, there are a lot better stories on the
EMCSA than mine, written by better authors. Does that mean
I'm going to stop writing stories? Hell No. Because nobody else can
write My Stories better than me. And even if you can't do better
than the other guy--as long as you're enjoying yourself, why quit?
My father is nowhere near as good a golfer as Tiger Woods, yet he still
plays golf every chance he gets, because he truly enjoys the game.
Who knows what Veronica could have turned out had she written the story
herself? We might have had a new author join the Archive, to feed
our fantasies and our fetish. And she might have become better for
discovering the talent within herself. Nonetheless, I look forward
to the rest of the story. I just hope it doesn't have her get "plasticized"
like in `Julie's Gifts' or---ughh--`Brainwash In Warm Water to Prevent
Shrinkage' (Shudder, shudder. . .). Maybe you could publish the e-mails
themselves as an addenda to the story once it's finished. Take care----wcw43921
P.S. There was a porn star in the early
'90s called Veronica Doll. This wouldn't be the same person, would
it? P.P.S. Have you met Veronica personally? Did she promise you
anything in the way of compensation for you writing her tale? ;)"
wcw43921,
writer, 12 February 2001
JR: First rate story
(Veronica
Doll aka Barbie)
! A new concept in EMC;
not an easy thing to do these days. And very nice character development.
This one goes in my top ten."
vendatrix, writer, 12 February 2001
"hi, love your story about "v doll"
(Veronica
Doll aka Barbie)
. i can't wait for the
next chapter to see what barbie and bambie are going to be doing."
little, 12 Feb 2001
"Hello. I was reading about your
inspiration for the agency and was intrigued by your mention of Russell
E. Martin. I have read everything Jack Chalker has written, and any
author who is mentioned more prominently than his as regards erotic mind
control is definitely worth a look. I have had no luck finding any
mention of his books in the major online bookstores (even in out-of-print
sections). Could you tell me where I can find the six books of his
that you mentioned? Thanks. I also wanted to complement you
on your work; your are among my top favorites in the area of erotic mind-control
fiction (along with Downing Street and Boris Ludmenkov). I look forward
to hearing from you --very sincerely,
Nick D., 11 February 2001
"Really a good read
(The
Charmed Ones Trilogy)
, although I am not familiar
with the series or movie, the story was great. Any possibility of a sequel?"
lin,
8 February 2001
"I just read the
Unholy
Desire series
. I loved it! It is a true work
of art (odd as it may sound to call something like that a work of art.)
You let your true abilities shine through. I espccially liked how you made
Jason so dark and evil, but at the same time slipped some humor into it.
I just wanted to say great job and encore. If anything you are working
on right now is half as good as that, it will be worthy of highest ranks."
signed,
your fan, 31 Jan 2001
"Ok, i read the story
(Veronica
Doll... aka Barbie)
. its very well written.
slow to build up, but worth it for that end part where i realize my new
name is Barbie. my fav bit in it so far has been the pink sweater....
the part where we act like Bimbos in front of those two guys and i twirl
my hair (bc i do that all the time!) and the best was the binkys.
i LOVE the way they were plugged up in our pussys and i had to where Roses
in my mouth with all her juices on it. nice touch! i didnt
like the way you played up the lesbian angle to much. i also dont
like the way im nude so much. i dont mind being nude, but i prefer
the tease of lingerie. and ALWAYS heels. focus more on the
changes. the nails... the hair... and especially the mind.
great start! whens part 2 coming??? barbie, (Veronica
Doll), 30 Jan 2001
"
Great site...
wow!
I just wanted to commend you, a
wonderfull web site. I have had a few small sites of my own and understand
the work involved without much rewards. I will endeavor to write something
for your site, I also have 17 original works of art in the fetish/mc vain
you are welcome to have for your site or any other. I find I enjoy now
sending my work out there via wonderfull sites such as yours, the world
doesn't need more sites , needs more great free content; so I will do what
I can. Let me know if you are interested in the pics; I will send a zip
of 15 off to you at once, if not , all the best, congratulations on a great
site, I will be back daily. Best site I have seen so far in 2 years of
surfing!"
Mig, 24 Jan 2001
"Hello. I love your website, and have always
been a big fan of your writing. I have the first part of your story, '
A
Witch Casts Her Spell'
, and am wondering if
you ever continued it. I can't find it mentioned anywhere on your site.
I hope you haven't disowned it. I know your 'back burner' list of stories
is quite long already, and many of them are quite intriguing (ie. 'the
Pill', 'Batgirl Goes Back to School', and 'The Lesbian Spell'), so I would
not want to delay your writing these fine stories on my account <g>.
But, if you did write more of 'A Witch Casts Her Spell' would you be willing
to send it to me? And if there is anything I can do to help you in return,
just ask. Thanks. A fan."
Michael, 21
Jan 2001
"I realize that it's been a while since
you posted anything new, but i was wondering if you'd mind if i did a series
of stories set in the
Alien's Gift universe
for posting in mcstories.com's archive... i would, of course, send anything
to you for approval first, as it WAS your idea, but i'd like to get a nod
to start scribbling first ;) thanks for your time!"
a fan, 19 Jan 2001
"I just wanted to drop you a quick note.
I just finished reading your story, "
Gina's
Interview"
and wanted to let you know I really
enjoyed it. Not too much sex like you warn at the beginning, but
the interaction did more that make up for that. I liked the idea
and way of mind control or should I say, body control. I have had
idea for a similar story for a while and my hopefully get it put down to
script at some point. Anyway, your story did what it should have,
it made me hot and wet and I will be revisting it later in mind fantasy
mode where I can truly enjoy the replay. I wouldn't mind being Gina
at all. Thank you for sharing and keep up the great writing."
Laura, 15 Jan 2001
"GREAT story
(Buffy's
New Reality)
!!!!!! Loved all the twists
and turns! I do hope Xander gets turned back to a male soon, though.
Keep up the Buffy stories....there aren't enough of them, IMO."
Dlgus,
6 Jan 2001
"Hi JR :) ...btw... added
Codename
Dominoe: Daughter of Desire
to my picks...been
planning that for a long time. Well done, and so was I, from the heat of
it, after I read it :) Warmly,
sara, writer,
6 Jan 2001
"jr, hi, just dropping a line to say that
i really enjoyed the story
(gina's interview)
and
most of the other stories you have written. i don't know if you ever use
other people's ideas but have you ever thought where a doctor or possibly
a policewoman is thinking she is helping her female patient or victim
and is seduced into acting very usual as opposed to there usual conservative
outlook on life. just an idea keep up the interesting work."
DukesRule, 5 Jan 2001
"I just wanted to take the time to say
that
Gina's Interview
was a fantastic story and I appreciate you taking the time to share it.
I hope that you have some time to possibly continue on? I would love
to see where else you can go with it."
Cory,
4 Jan 2001
"JR- Nice to see you back at the keyboard.
(Gina's
Interview)
... A very hot read, and the details
of 'passion programming' were well-handled. Body vs Spirit, a good
theme. Welcome back, JR!"
Eye, writer,
3 Jan 2001
"JR: Nice one (
Gina's
Interview
). Gina was drawn so as to
be someone worth watching, and her struggle mattered. Liked the idea
of Heather, too, enslaved so deeply she helps enslave others. (The
FF, of course, didn't hinder my enjoyment, either. :)) Thinking about
it, I really liked the idea of seeing that from both sides through Gina:
first, as the desperate victim of Heather's calm-cultlike control, and
then as a sort of Heather-in-training herself, as she happily contemplates
helping to snare the pretty reporter for her master.
There's that dark quality, too: as
Darke himself points out, the essence of this control isn't just being
overwhelmed and then reprogrammed. It's a subversion of the victim's
owm drives, and it would actually be more agonizingly orgasmic for a stronger-willed
woman, who'd just soak more of it up as she fought. Thanks.
A variety of posts have hinted that you're busy, so glad you found or made
the time for this. IMO anyway, it was well-spent. See you on-forum,
and if we don't exchange in the next 22 hours or so (EST), merry millennium.
:)
trilby else, Writer, 31 Dec 2000
Forum Review: "Gina's
Interview
: JRParz recertifies his EMCSA creds
with a well-crafted piece that gets into both MCer and victim heads. The
smug MCer is suitably nasty/polite but not the complete shit such characters
tend to be, and Gina's a brave heroine. The struggle's a bit foreshortened,
but the surrounding elements--volumes of implications about the rest of
Darke's slaves, the way the conditioning works (and its awful/wonderful
inevitability), the way that's Heather's job, Gina's attitude at the end--provide
a great deal of MC heat indirectly. Kind of a convection oven :). Anyway,
JR has not lost his touch. Plenty of arousal.
I enjoyed "
Gina's
Interview
" very much, Keep up the writing."
BK,
30 Dec 2000
JR, I just read your story (
Gina's
Interview
) - really enjoyed it, especially
the part from Gina's POV. like situations where strong-willed
women are made to develop a new outlook on life and how they deal with
their new situation, and I believe your story relates this quite well.
keep up the good work.
cvn88, Writer,
30 Dec 2000
"hey, i just finished reading your
"alien's
gift"
series.. well 5 parts of it.. i don't
know if there are any more... in the mc stories archive.. i'm impressed
(as impressed as one can be for a mindcontrol sex story) by it.. as i think
the
characters and plot are pretty interesting..
for a sex story.. it's got a sort of highlander type feel to it, where
there are those with the gift who do their own thing to abuse it and battle
it out.. anyways.. at the end of the last one
you wrote that you won't be writing one
for a while, but you welcome others to.. i'm interested definitely.. now,
i'm not sure if i need to ask you for permission or whathever.. but i think
it's better if i tell you anyways.. besides.. look at this as fan mail
:) so i'll be writing ch6 soon... also, i'm not sure whehter i need to
mail it to you, or just submit it myself.. anyways... if you're wondering,
yeah i'm a prolific writer, but never of anything like this... anyways..
sorry for bothering you."
Ardin
Resolute, 10 Dec 2000
"JR, You're conclusion to
The
Charmed Ones
was outstanding. I think
it was worth the wait and in my opinion was the best of the three. You
captured the magical feel of the show very nicely. I can't get enough of
reading about Piper Prue and Phoebe. Alyssa Milano is probably one of my
favorite young stars. There's something about her that lends itself perfectly
to this kind of story. And the villain is probably one of your most original
and interesting. He's very devious in his manipulations. Awesome read."
Trent
Wolf, Writer, 6 Dec 2000
"JR, I have been a fan of your work for
only a year, but I have found that your writing style and subject matter
has inspired me to attempt to write my first erotic story. I have
included a very rough idea sketch of a story universe I would like to see
(and base my first story on!). I would appreciate any feedback or
critisicm you could give me on my idea. Thanks." Josh,
27 Nov 2000
"
Master
PC
- Great story!!!!!!!! Got anymore like
this????????????????"
Slow Rider, 26 Nov 2000
"Hi, I think that this is the correct email
address for the author of
Master PC
.
Great Story! I was considering writing a master PC story of my own, but
I am not exactly sure what the master PC can do. Here are a few questions:
1. Can the program alter things that happened in the past, or only memories?
2. Can it change inhuman objects like chairs tables etc? How about animals?
3. Is the 100 mile range still applicable? 4. how fast does it work,
I gather from your stories, it can change multiple people instantly (when
the girls walked into school) 5. If a person is password protected,
can they still be hypnotised? (I read that in a master pc story.)
6. Can you change your brain chemistry to form a bio computer and download
the program into your head (read that in another story) 7.
Can the program read your mind (for example how does it know which Heather
you are talking about if there are more than 1) Basically what are the
limits to the program? What has improved in the program since adam first
got it? I hope to hear a speedy reply."
John
Thomas, 25 Nov 2000
"Will u be updating your website soon and
are u working on any new stories do u kow where to find any other good
stories like yours."
Ggar, 21 Nov 2000
"
WishCraft
is one of my favorite stories."
Anonymous,
18 Nov 2000
"My word, I just gone done reading
"Rings
of Transformation"
- Cheshire High School?
I freakin' went to Cheshire High School (No, really, Cheshire High School
in Cheshire, CT)!!! Overall, a weird story. The story was good, and wraps
up pretty well. The characters are where I give you mucho credit. The breast
descripts were okay, Suitable for the story. When mentioning the permanence
of the rings early on, you know that it would come into play somehow. Overall,
pretty well done."
Anonymous, 15 Nov
2000
"Hi, I'm Sam. I've read your cool sex stories
at your site and i was wondering if you could send me more. Please send
them to this e-mail, with uninteresting names because i check this at school.
It would be a big favor and i would very much like it. Please do this for
me. If you have another site or a site to recommend, please tell it to
me. Thank you big time! Sam P.S. please tell me your all time
favorite story."
Sam, 4 Nov 2000
"Beautiful Story
(Buffy's
New Reality)
. I will never watch Buffy
in quite the same way again. Got any more?"
deano, 4 Nov 2000
"I haven't written you in a long time but think
of what you could do with the
sabrina and
tabitha (teenage witches)
story.
sabrina in college and doesn't know that tabitha is there and more powerful
then ever. sabrina could be mind controlled to be in an orgy or gangbang."
Levy,
3 Nov 2000
JR, ... As for your latest
Buffy's
New Reality
story... I liked it, but along
with some other readers, didn't find it to be among your very best work.
Doesn't mean I didn't like it... it just didn't make it to the summit for
me. The super-short chapters were an interesting method, and I love to
see experimentation going on. Mostly, I thought the characters lacked the
personality you usually give them. The story itself (idea-wise and event-wise)
was good... I just wish I could have related more to the ongoing and growing
lust in each person. All the best, JR!"
Sara,
Writer, 30 Oct 2000
"Hi there, For what it's worth, I just
wanted to say how much I enjoy your site and appreciate your efforts.
I'm sure it's a lot of work and I know that you probably don't get enough
thanks. Well, from one person.... Thank You"
Bill, 26 Oct 2000
"JR, I just got through reading your
Buffy's
New Reality
story. If I were ever going to
write a Buffy fanfic, this is almost exactly how I would write it. I have
actually thought about doing one, but I don't watch the show regularly
enough to do it justice. You have. You included all my favorite characters,
although I would have like to have seen a little more Cordelia. She deserves
a story all her own though. So does Willow. So does Faith for that matter.
She's a great addition to the show. I've always imagined her and Buffy
going at it like you so vividly described. I'm glad Giles finally got some
too. Man, this story has it all, even Xander in TG. I'm not really
into that, but I found it amusing anyway. This story rocked! I loved it!
Still can't wait for Charmed 3.
Trent
Wolf, Writer, 24 Oct 2000
Caught your story,
Buffy's
New Reality
, on the asstr and I have to say:
What happened? What's with the roman numerals to denote scene changes?
You used to be able to do transitions. Is this a style thing? You
now write like it's almost a script. Maybe you should go whole hog and
do an annotated script style. That may be fun. I have all due respect
for your ability, volume alone, and getting things finished, and maintaining
your fine website, etc., etc.
But this one wasn't you're best effort.
You know the show, the characters are depicted
fine, but turning Xander into a woman? And not following up? Just
what would Anya think? He used to have the hots for Buffy, she's a nympho,
they don't hook up? He just disappears? Spike is destroyed sexually?
He was big Vampire on Campus, and he has some setbacks, but you don't live
almost as long as Angel and not have the ability to bounce back.
Maybe a submissive streak, into spanking afterwards. A radical change,
like Giles. They're both English, after all, right? :) And
the finale? Drusilla effective at all, in anything, without help. I always
saw her as an Ophelia. Crazy as a loon and not much more help. Mostly
though, the ending seemed tacked on.
The ideas are there but the execution is
awkward. The asides are disturbing, disconcerting, but maybe that is an
asstr thing and will be taken out in final (I hope. Keep them at the bottom.)
I heard a rumour that you're going to change
'Jennifer's Transformation' from a varient 'Reward' story to a 'Derek the
Warlock' story. Resist. You do not have to force all your stories
into the same universe. Heinlein tried and even he couldn't quite do it.
You have enough Derek stories now and in the future. You can write outside
your usual, you have the talent.
On to a specific, you wrote: Willow still
took pleasure in a slue of female subjects... You mean to use slew. I checked.
Take this for what it is, an informed critique from a fan. Comment on it,
toss it, write a scathing 'how dare you' reply, your choice. Thanks,
more later (maybe).
Vahktang, Writer,
24 Oct 2000
"Hi, my name is Kerry, and I'm a volunteer
for an Audio-Reader Network, a reading service for the visually impaired.
We record and read various programs, books, and magazines, which are then
broadcast to a special radio receiver in the homes of our visually-impaired
patrons. Here's our website for more info: http://www.uk...
Anyway, I do a show once a month called
the Adult Magazine Hour, where I read erotic fiction and letters from various
mazazines, primarily Penthouse and Playboy.
In honor of this upcoming Halloween, I wanted to read on my programs
short stories that constituted supernatural
or horrific erotica. I got on the web, and among others, came across
your website. I perused some of the stories and really liked them
and wonder if it would be all right to read a couple of them for my show
this Sat.? I actually record it tomorrow, and I know this is rather
short notice, but the idea first came to me yesterday. Let me know
if this is OK."
Sincerely, Kerry, 23
Oct 2000
Hey, i loved you story on
Sabrina
and Tabitha (Teenage Witches)
... very, very
good! i'd love to see another chapter...and the
master
PC
ones really intrigue me... i'd like to
see more on them, although I'm not too much of a humiliation freak, i still
find that they are well written... keep it up...(no pun intended...)
Dark
Angel, Oct. 23/2000
Regarding
Buffy's
New Reality.
.. "Just read this and I
thought it was excellent. I'm a long time BTVS fan and I really liked the
erotic imagery and characterizations. You say it will "not" be a trilogy.
Pity, there is enough plot to extend over quite a bit of story. Regarding
Dawn, a good look at her reveals she is quite "mature", she possibly could
share in some of the action. I also think reality has been changed, and
I'm looking forward to the resolution. Thanks very much for the story,
and I look forward to more of your work."
Regis,
22 Oct 2000
"The whole
Master
PC
story is awsome! I especially like the
end!"
Cai, 22 Oct 2000
Regarding
Buffy's
New Reality
; Freaky, man, but I liked it.
Could have delved a bit more into the hypno angle, but that's just my like.
Still a kick-ass story. Good work."
Anynom,
Writer, 22 Oct 2000
"Sabrina & Tabitha - Teenage Witches
was fantastic. can you do me a favor...........Can you send both
part one and part 2 to my friend, her mail is... tell her that i told you
to send, THANX. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
LOVE LOVE LOVE."
DOMENIQUE, 21 Oct 2000
"JR Parz, I just sent you an e-mail from
the Erotic Mind Control letter forum. But since I'm still not a computer
expert and maybe sent it wrong, I'm writing you again. I found your
review/comments of "Ultimate Attraction" "Alien Files 1 and 2". Being the
author/director on the films, I just wanted to thank you for the support
and am happy to hear that you enjoyed them. I am also a big fan of this
genre and have read most of the books on your list. From my first feature
"There's Nothing Out There" through my latest project "Pretty Cool" and
"Emmanuelle 2000", I have been dealing with mind control, breast expansion,
and other fun concepts that seem to have a following. I am pretty sure
you'll want to know more about my latest projects so give me an e-mail
if you want. I'm at Rolfe@theresnothingoutthere.com Keep of the good
work. By the way, I think your stories are awesome as well. Best
Wishes,
Rolfe, 21 Oct 2000
"Regarding
Unholy
Desire..
. First of all let me say that I like
your story. I have read many of your works, and you seem to be maturing
in you style. I think, however the old saying less is sometime more,
is true in many instances. Have you thought about being a little more discriptive
and less directness. Sometime it might help to let the reader use
there imagination more. This in many cases a little suspence gets
the reader more involved. Like I said before I have followed your
work, and am looking forward to reading more of your work. I feel in the
future if you have not already, you will be asked to submit some of your
work to either a magazine, or a publisher. I wish you all the luck
and hope you keep progressing."
Davis, 16
Oct 2000
"As with most of your stories,
Unholy
Desire
was pretty good. I am a long
time fan and was wondering will we get new additions to this story explaining
the evil within him?" axeman, 16 Oct 2000
"Regarding
Beach
Babes
... There was a great build up, but a
pitiful ending. What happened with the girls and Mike? What happened with
the girls and that guy at the end? It was a real let down."
Anonymous,
16 Oct 2000
"
Sabrina
& Tabitha - Teenage Witches
was the best.
can you please send stories like that to my email adress?"
domenique,
16 Oct 2000