"JR Parz,Your Back Burner Page is really
HOT!
I see you are working on a lot
of things... Regarding "
Barbie-Teen
Agent
", Not even started? How can you
do this? You've got us slavering... Also, I have recently gotten
into
Cassandra - Vampiress, 1-4
.
Damn! Something else to wait for... Keep writing!! Cheers..."
The
Story Writer, Writer, 31 Dec 98
"JR Parz Stories Website...
A mixture of Mind Control, Witchcraft, TG and other fantasy erotic stories.
A really good writer, well worth the visit for the sheer variety he produces."
Keith,
Webmaster, 31 Dec 98
"Cassandra - Vampiress IV"
story... Very good! I sort of hope the girls win this one."
Dave,
31 Dec 98
"JR, I have
enjoyed
your stories on all the boards.
However,
it is your mind control 'flavor' to these stories that really set them
apart. It is because of you that I finally found the Erotic Mind
Control Story Archive. My question JR is this: Is there a forum
board like the AR board or the Babes of toyland board for Mind Control?
If there is, please let me know. And also, please keep writing."
Sincerely,
Lasher, 30 Dec 98
"JR Parz, Wow!! This is the first
time I have done any reading in mind control. Really enjoyed it.
You have really done a good job of telling a good story
(Pleasure
Dome, Chapter's 1&2)
. I'm looking
forward to the next chapter. I think you have turned me on to a new
wave of good reading. Thanks. I have book marked your page.
Thanks again.". Jerry, 26 Dec 98
"Hi, Can I say first that
I
love your site. It is a knockout
, you
write really good stuff..." Keith, Webmaster, 24 Dec 98
"I've been a big fan of your stories, especially
the
SRU
ones,
for a long time. I'm so glad to find out you have a website where
all your work is available in one place! It is a very good looking
site, also. I'm wondering if you've read any of my stories which
are archived at Fictionmania? Yours are a lot better than mine, but
I'm wondering if you have any opinions on my writing style."
Steve,
writer, 22 Dec 98
"JR, I hope this message gets through.
I enjoyed your story,
"Pleasure Dome II"
The reason I'm writing you personally is this: I'm starting a web
site soon that will feature erotic fiction from writers such as yourself.
Would you be interested in contributing from time to time or perhaps simply
allowing me to publish your work there? The rewards for your efforts
would have to establish/negotiated as the site is not yet commercial..."
Joe,
Web Master, 22 Dec 98
"JR... I have to tell you, I really
enjoyed
Suzy Spice.
This story really got me because ever since I used to watch 'Land of the
Giants' on Television as a little kid, I always dreamed of finding a living
miniature woman. The art work was excellent and really added to the
story. This was a fun adventure and I definitley want to read more
about
Super Bimbo.
You are one of the few writers that can make humor and erotica work so
well together. Great job."
Trent
Wolf, writer, 22 Dec 98
"Another great installment!
(Pleasure
Dome, Chapter 2)
...". DollLover,
Archive Webmaster, 21 Dec 98
Referring to Pleasure Dome, Chapter
2:
"Mmmm.... Sweet, J.R. You have me
on the edge of my seat... Seeya!"
Sally
Reynolds, writer, 21 Dec 98
"Nice plot deveoplment (
Pleasure
Dome, Chapter 2
). This story (
Pleasure
Dome
) is getting intresting. Thanks for the
preview of chapter 3."
Mr. G, writer,
21 Dec 98
"I have now read the first three parts
of
Barbie-Teen Agent.
I like it! It is moving a little slow in some parts, but it is moving.
I had a question about the long age regression scene of the two agents
that become children. Is all of it necessary? If the later
use in the plot does not justify it, this reader will think he had been
had. But time will tell. For the moment, it peeks my interest.
I think it would be hotter if Barbie put up more of a fight against her
arousal/seduction. Also, you might have her notice wetness, etc...
rather than have her just "feel horny". Still, I am eagerly awaiting
parts 4, 5, ??... cheers."
The
Story Writer, writer, 21 Dec 98
"J.R., I was honored to find my story (An
erotic vampire story called "Roadside") given an honorable mention in your
list of top erotic stories. I love finding out that people have read
and enjoyed my work. It inspires me to write more (and when the real
world becomes a busy and tiring thing, inspiration to explore fantasies
are all the more needed). I also wanted to let you know that I have
very much enjoyed reading your work. I look forward to the final
chapter of
Cassandra - Vampiress
,
and to some of the other vampire stories you have under consideration.
With thanks and admiration..."
Brian,
aka Telephoto, writer, 20 Dec 98.
"Just wanted to tell you I have enjoyed
reading your stories. Favorites are
"WishCraft",
"The Mesmerist", "Master PC",
and
"Lust
Potion 69"
. I hope you will soon complete
the two incomplete stories in the list. I looked at some of your
favorite authors. I agree with a few of them... Keep writing!"
Will,
writer, 16 Dec 98
"JR,
Thanks
a lot for your site and for all your stories
.
I'm really on your wavelength in a lot of ways, and I've gotten a lot of
pleasure from the stories on your Top 25 list and from your own ideas."
Dave
M., 15 Dec 98
"I have chapter 1 of
"The
Agency"
and was looking for any subsequent
chapters... Are there any? Will there be? Could you point
me in the right direction? Good Start - Thank you."
(I
then turned him in the direction of my website and here's his response)
"I MADE IT... Nice Place, thank you very much. Another great
place to gobble my time, and thanks for your time."
Zardoz,
15 Dec 98
"Hi! I just finished reading
chapter
4 of Cassandra's story
and I just thought
I'd drop a line and tell you how great I thought it was. I really
liked the way Damien took Jessica and Cindy in the bar, that was real cool!
I'm also looking forward to the next chapter, and although I think Damien
is a cool character, I'm really rooting for Cassandra and Theresa.
Anyway, I'll let you go now...good luck." Kevin, 12 Dec 98
"JR, Just found the time to tell you that the
latest
Cassandra chapter (IV)
was excellent.
As usual, your story telling skills made the tale flow very well.
Female with female scenes are always a turn on for me, and the scene with
Damien, Jessica and Cindy was especially well done. When I read this
story, it plays in my mind like a film, which to me makes it more vivid.
The style of writing even enhances this type of story even more.
I hope after the last chapter is done, there may be a little more Cassandra
in the future. She's a fully realized character that makes the reader
care about her. I could go on and on but all I can really say is...another
great work!" Trent Wolf, 12 Dec 98.
"Hi. For quite sometime now, I have been
waiting for the second part of your story
"Master
PC"
to appear. After what felt like
forever, I just figured that you had given up on that story and moved on
to something else. A few weeks ago, however, I saw that you posted
a
revised version
of the story. I assumed at that point that a second part was quickly
to follow. As it hasn't appeared, I wanted to write you in order
to inquire as to its status. All I can say is that it is a story
I have enjoyed very much. I can't encourage you enough to please
get that story out there. We've waited a long time now to read it!!"
Martin,
10 Dec 98
"I wanted to compliment you on
"The
Agency"
- - great stuff!!! When is the
next installment?"
Marlissa, Writer, 10 Dec 98
"This is my first response to a story writer
but I need to congratulate you on
"Master
PC"
...it is your best work.
The
new version is really better than I expected.
Another chapter would be the best thing. Best Regards."
Marcos Brasil - Sao Paulo, 9 Dec 98
"Wonder Woman, Super Girl & Bat Girl...you've
been replaced! Enter a new player onto the field of for the fight
of truth, justice and the American way (With some really good sex while
doing it.)! SU .BE. (
Super Bimbo)
is here to play! I love 'er! ... Any chance she'll get to party
with the big "S"?"
r mac (poll), 9 Dec 98
"I wrote the story 'Realizing the Wet Dream,'
(on the Erotic Mind Control Stories Archive) then dropped out of sight.
I suppose I'm back and around. Nice to see Mr. Parz has taken my
dream of woman-to-slut transformation & made it vast reality. Your
posts point to an intelligent man, sir, and I salute you."Copernicus,
writer, 8 Dec 98
"JR...You do excellent work, it's worth the
long waits between your stories. Can't wait for more of
Cassandra
and I'm hoping for a little more of
Sabrina
and Tabitha.
"
KMB,
writer, 7 Dec 98
"KMB here, the author of Blood Lust, and my
highest compliments go out to you sir. You have continued your excellent
story (
Cassandra - Vampiress IV
)
in an original and well thought out manner. You have a real gift
for these types of stories,
Cassandra (- Vampiress)
and the
Sabrina (& Tabitha - Teenage Witches)
are some of the best net erotica I have read. A while back you urged
me to read Cassandra and I'm glad I did...but to get back to my main point,
great story. Can't wait to see how it ends."
KMB,
writer, 6 Dec 98
"Hey...just wanted to let you know I really
enjoyed the
"The Agency"
.
GREAT JOB!!!!!!"
~granade, 5 Dec 98
"Hi, my name is the Mind Control Artist.
I have read several of your stories and loved them, especially
"The
Agency", "Pleasure Chips", "Master PC", and "Alien's Gift"
.
I have written several stories and I posted one on the Mind Control Archive.
It wasn't until I visited your site that I noticed my stories are missing
emotions from the girls. I am in the process of writing several stories
right now, and thanks to your personal introduction page on how to write
erotic stories (Meet JR Parz), I'm going to revise these stories before
I post them...I just wanted to thank you that suggestions page, and tell
you that you do great work and keep it up..."
The
Mind Control Artist, writer, 5 Dec 98
"I just wanted to send you a note to let
you know Part One of my new Star Trek story has been posted on the Grey
Archive. Check it out when you get a chance. Let me know what
you think. I respect your opinion since you seem to be one of
the most prolific Mind Control writers on the net... Later..."
Trent
Wolf, writer, 5 Dec 98
"Just saw your site - excellent job!
Did you write the
Super Bimbo
story before adding the illustrations, or did you use the pics for inspiration
for your writing? Either way it's great!..."
ddral,
poser artist, 4 Dec 98
"I guess I enjoyed
Master
PC
more than I disliked it. It's definitely
not my idea of the ideal BE story, but it does a good job of doing what
it's supposed to, and I congratulate JR Parz for that. Even though
I don't even partially agree with the offensive material, this story gets
a thumbs up from me. I think most people will feel the same way:
they might not agree with the content, but they'll probably read it anyway
just for shock."
Leviathan, Reviewer, 4 Dec 98
"JR Parz, I admire your prolificness and how
you stay true to your mind control roots--I don't always like your stories,
but I admire GREATLY a guy like you, who gets such harsh reviews and continue
writing (On R&D) -- It's almost like you're the literary Rocky." Adrian
Burns, writer, 4 Dec 98
"You have done an excellent job with your
site. I think it's great."
~master~,
4 Dec 98
"Excellent Story, J. Parz! (
"The
Agency")
The notion of the girl being compelled
to read the book and absorb the lessons of her own subjugation was subtle.
And the intelligence regulation was a nice touch."
Ven,
2 Dec 98
"Great Job!! (
"The
Agency")
I too am a huge fan of the author
Russ Martin. I am glad to see there are others who respect his talent.
I always felt that he had a potential gold mine with his theme of possessed
woman, but he was never promoted right by his publishers..."
Blalvis,
2 Dec 98
Regarding "Alien's Gift"...
"Where
can I get the rest of the story, its great."
Ken,
1 Dec 98
"Alien's Gift"
is
an Excellent story. Part 4 coming soon, I hope."
Tim,
1 Dec 98
I give
"The
Agency"
a AAA rating...good start...can be
a real thriller!"
~master~, 30 Nov 98
"I just wanted to send you a note to tell you
that I just finished reading
Chapter One of
"The Agency"
. The set up was very well
done and your descriptions of the woman were excellent. I'm looking
forward to the next chapter. Good Writing! Keep it up!"
Trent
Wolf, a writer, 30 Nov 98
"WONDERFUL STORY (
"The
Agency")
! has chapter 2 finished?!?"
Warrior,
29 Nov 98
"I have finished the first part of
your story(
"The Agency")
!
I think the premise is good."
David,
29 Nov 98
"Master PC"
was
definitely an original...it is amazing, seldom that I come across a story
that linked mindcontrol and computer. Keep it up - is there a second
section to this? It would be interesting to see the next day when
all the girls breasts grow to 44DDD's...just a thought"
anton,
a fan, 25 Nov 98
"Hi... I was reading your stories
in mind control, and I especially like the
"Alien's
Gift."
I thought it was incredible!
I loved it!"
anton, a fan, 24 Nov 98
"Just wanted to drop you a line to
tell you that I loved the first chapter of
"The
Agency"
... Great site btw."
bb, 24 Nov 98
"I've read 1,2,3 of the
"Cassandra
- Vampiress"
story and was wondering if chapter
4 (or more is) out and available somewhere? The story is very well
written...
John, 22 Nov 98
"Please Please Please,
write the next chapter to your story
"Mesmerist"
...Thanks"
Robert,
21 Nov 98
"Great Story (
The
Agency
)! Where do I apply! Looking
forward to future chapters! Thanks."
FireFox,
21 Nov 98
"What a terrific story
(The
Agency)
Keep going -- I'm a BIG fan!!!"
Marlissa,
author of my #1 BEST Story, 20 Nov 98
"I just read your story
"The
Agency"
chapter 1. It seems like it's
gonna be very good, but don't be too long with the rest of the chapters."
Dan,
20 Nov 98
"I'm enjoying
"Alien's
Gift"
a whole big bunch."
Ruthie,
20 Nov 98
"Could you send me the rest of the
Sabrina
series? I would love to get off on them!"
Kelly,
8 Nov 98
"I went over to your website. Nice
place. I've seen your top twenty-five stories. Very cool.
I agree with most of 'em.
Celebrity
MC, writer, 8 Nov 98
"Hi... I read your stories at
mcstories and I really liked them. I love your style of writing.
Anil (I'm from India), 7 Nov 98
"Just read one of your recent stories
"The
Mesmerist"
. I really enjoyed it quite
a bit. Not sure why, but I found it to be your best effort, even
though it was short. The slow (relative to the story) submergence
of her personality really turned me on. Strangely, some of my favorite
stories on mcstories are short ones. Hope to see more of it.
:) ...Keep up the great work.
Celebrity
MC, writer, 7 Nov 98
After I complimented an author for a story
I read of his, he responded to my stories on my website:
"...I often check out your web page (even though I often have trouble getting
in) and I enjoy your stories as well...
MC Writer, Writer, 5 Nov 98
After I complimented an author for writing
"Jill Becomes A Slut" , I asked permission to continue his story (See Back
Burner's Page)...he responded:
"I've
read all of your stories at MC and especially enjoyed the "Twins Enslavement
- Amber's Tale"...I think it would be great if you added to it and posted
my beginning there.
Sir James, Writer,
4 Nov 98
Referring to
"The
Mesmerist"
:
"Very good beginning. I'd like to see where you take it. Keep
the MC flavor at least as strong. If you continue, you might want
to explore some of the other powers of the amulet, if any. Just suggestions.
How far will the harem progress? I'd definitely like to read more."
Cho,
31 Oct 98
Referring to
Suzy
Spice aka Super Bimbo
:
"Hey, cute story Man! Not a bad blend of humor and erotica."
TCShan,
author, 27 Oct 98
I asked my new proof reader if he thought
I was a good enough to make money on my writing... Here's part of
his response:
"JR, I was afraid
that you were going to ask that one question. Yes, I think that you
have the ability to write for profit. And, by the way, do very well..."
jdw,
22 Oct 98
I read Cassandra - Vampiress Part 3 some
long, long time ago...Just wanted to tell you that it was very interesting
to me, and I'd love to read part 4.
Eric, a devoted
ff story reader, 19 Oct 98
"Hey! (
Pleasure
Dome's
) a Great Story, and I can't wait to
read the rest of it.
Krypt Keeper, 17
Oct 98
"Your
Cassandra
~ Vampiress
story line has been really interesting
so far and is probably one of my favorite erotic stories. The only
minor criticism I had was the use of the other "vampette" (buffy's actor).
The character of the other vampette is good but I feel when you are in
a fantasy eroticism story, a reference to a real actor, blurs the line
between reality and fantasy and while I'm reading your story I enjoy staying
in the fantasy world.
Mr. Taipan, Writer,
15 Oct 98
(Regarding
Pleasure
Dome
) "Wow, you really like to go all out,
don't you? You, sir, are an excellent writer, I like the whole horny-while-you-shrink
thing. I don't have to tell you to keep on shrinking..."
microman,
15 Oct 98
(Regarding
(Barbie-Teen
Agent series
) "I really like your stories.
Even though they're about some off the wall subjects, they are written
in a style such that they are *almost* believable (know what I mean?).
I guess it's a form of subtlety in your outlandish fiction? Anyway,
keep up the good work!!
Dave,
15 Oct 98
"I love the "
Pleasure
Dome
" story so far. Hope you keep it
going and post more of it."
Frank, 15
Oct 98
"A very nice start (
Pleasure
Dome
)! I hope to see shrunken Laura
too in future chapters. I wait anxiously for the 2nd chapter next
month. Keep up the very good work!"
C.A.B.,
14 Oct 98
"Great story JR! (
Serena
- Teen Witch, Meets A Vampire
) I read it on
the message board the other day! Loved the story a great deal."
The
Bard, 14 Oct 98
"Thought I'd email to catch you both (also
referring to Laura Jean). Great Story (
Serena
- Teen Witch, Meets A Vampire
). Well
written. Convincing "voice" and POV for the narration. Nice
descriptions. And, of course, FANTABULOUS material. AR, AP,
MC, BE - it's got all my favorite letters (except maybe SW). Thanks
for writing and sharing... Anyway, hope to hear more from characters
- lots of potential for a hot, bisexual, teenage nymph coming back into
her power. Thank you."
Nomdreserv,
Author, 11 Oct 98
"I have read your story
Alien's
Gift
. Have you done any more of the
story of the story? ...I can't wait for the next one."
Kim,
11 Oct 98
(
Rings of
Transformation
) "I have always enjoyed
reverse pregnancy stories, but they are few and far between. You
handled this one particularly well, although I would have preferred that
it didn't go by so quick. Reading your story was like reading 1000
Arabian Knights in that each part of the story led into a side story remembered
flashback. That is a gutsy technique, but a little misplaced here.
I thought a straight narrative would have worked better. It is a
bit distracting in an otherwise good story. I give it an 8 out of
10.
Anonymous, 2 Oct 98
(
Rings of
Transformation
) "A quality story with
a great twist. I was really intereted in seeing what would happen
next.
Ann, 1 Oct 98
JR Parz is back with a rather un-Parzian
tale called "
Rings of Transformation
",
an SRU story about a trio who use magic rings...JR's outdone himself on
the weirdness scale this time!
Mark
T., 1 Oct 98...Webmaster of BE Stories Archive
"The only reason Fiction Mania TG is an
awesome site is awesome stories like this one (
Rings
of Transformation
)...That was really, really
good.
Mindy, 30 Sep 98...Webmaster of
Fiction Mania TG
"I've checked out your story (
Cassandra-Vampiress
)
and think it's very good. The plot is interesting, nicely handled
and includes a few twists. Character development isn't great, but
it is much better than in a lot of genre Internet sex stories, and you're
at least making an effort at it, which is commendable. And the overall
quality of the writing is above average, for the kind of story it is...There
is two things about the story that don't thrill me all that much:
the story is really much more about mind control than vampires, to the
point that the latter is reduced to a mere plot device explaining the source
of the former [this is just a personal taste thing--I prefer vampire stories
with plenty of good "fangings." :) ; and the sudden usage of the Scarlet
Witch was unnecessary and adds nothing to the story (so far) that couldn't
have been provided by Theresa just having an Aunt Wanda who was a stronger
witch than she...Still, the above aside, it's an excellent story and I
will gladly add it to the site. Keep up the great work.
Dalan,
18 Sep 98...Webmaster of Grey Archive
"Hi, I have been reading your
Cassandra
stories
(on the Domain of Darkness site) and
I like them very much...You have a natural talent for telling stories.
I have always enjoyed a good vampire story...You have done a wonderful
job combining the supernatural with the completely normal. Thank
you for sharing your stories. They are well worth the time spent.
I look forward to your continuations.
Laura
Jean, 17 Sep 98
"I enjoy
your
site
quite a bit. Transformation, both
physical & mental, into voluptuous bimbos is a major fetish of mine...I
am looking forward to more stories. Keep up the excellent writing."
Dave
H., 14 Sep 98
"
JR, I really
enjoy the stories that you have been writing
.
Wish that I could write as well as you do. However, if you need assistance
in proofing your stories, that is something that I do rather well...Keep
up the great work. I know its hard, but you are doing a great job."
jdw,
Proof Reader, 14 Sep 98
"I liked the plot (
Voodoo
At the Fair
). It was a SIGNIFICANT variation
on the themes I had read in your other stories. I wish it had at
least some token BE in it, so you could submit it to the archive and show
them you could break your rules."
Dana
Short, Author & Proof Reader, 13 Sep 98
"Hi! This is Joseph S. Genovese and
I just wanted to congratulate and encourage you with regards to the ongoing
Sabrina
(& Tabitha - Teenage Witches) Story
.
It is absolutely wonderful. I just finished reading part two and
I can't wait for Part 3. Once again, keep up the fantastic work!
As I was reading Part 2 of Sabrina I couldn't help but think to myself,
'What a lucky guy Merlin is!!!'...I was wondering if you had ever considered
using your excellent skills as a writer to write a stand-alone with...Heck,
I'd write it myself if I was half as good as you are!"
Joe,
11 Sep 98
"...You are prolific writer. I really
liked the twins (
Twins Enslaved-Amber's Tale
)
story and
Sabrina & Tabitha
.
Unfortunately for my greater appreciation of the later, I don't know the
characters which I suppose to be from television. As a writer, I
would be greatful for any suggestions you have..."
The Story Writer, Author, 10 Sep 98
"I love your
sabrina
and tabitha
stories!!!!!1"
DaIsY,
9 Sep 98
Erotic Mind Control's Reader's Picks:
"
Cassandra - Vampiress series
"...."Nice
graphic depiction at times. Part III ends with JRParz giving us a
whiff of what's in store for our heroine. In this case it seems that
she's about to come at odds with her creator/mentor. Hopefully that
should create both interesting sexual situations and help the storyline
have an aim over the next few parts."
Dyssuk,
8 Sep 98.
"Your newest story on mcstories.com
(
Alien's Gift
)
rox my friend. While I won't/can't write them like you, I do appreciate
your style." Cody, 23 Aug 98
"Hey, I just wanted to say I loved your
story (
Alien's Gift 1&2
)!
It's at least a notch above a lot of the other fics out there, and I read
quite a bit......Keep up the good work! I look forward to the next
part!"
Sunrunner, 21 Aug 98
"Hey, Wanted to drop a line saying nice
story(
Alien's Gift 1&2
).
Really liked it. Hope there is more to come in the near future.....Anyway,
again, nice story."
Brian, 21 Aug 98
"Can't wait for the remainder of "
Alien's
Gift
". It's nice to see good writing
in net based erotica. You write the way people talk which is
the old Hemingway rule. Congratulations for staying away from the
"giant throbbing member" genre of erotic writing. Keep it up."Atay,
19 Aug 98
"I just read
Alien's
Gift
(both parts). Great Work!!
Keep the story going!!
Kevin, 17 Aug 98
"I'd just like to tell you I enjoyed
Alien's
Gift (I&II
). I found it to be in
the classic spirit of mind control stories. I prefer telepathy to
long detailings of hypnosis and liked how you concentrated on the action.
I liked the characters, and was glad you didn't make Colt an abusive person.....I
hope you're considering writing more sections in this series."ZeRoKool,
17 Aug 98
"I really liked your story,
Master
PC
. Is there a sequel to it? If
there isn't, you should make one."
Pilot, 17 Aug 98
"Good story (
Sabrina
& Tabitha - Teen Witches, sequel
).
I'm looking forward to part 3."
Wynegarde, 17
Aug 98
"I just wanted to drop a line and say
I
like your stories
, even though the reviewer
on BEArchive is more or less right about them. Honestly though, you
are a decent writer, but could use a bit more variety in your plots..."
Dana Short, 16 Aug 98
"Hi, Just thought I'd drop you a line to
let you know that I really enjoyed your
WishCraft
series. Very Cool, unlike anything I've ever read before......and
your Website is GREAT!"
Nijikon, 16
Aug 98
"Excellent story (
Sabrina
& Tabitha's Sequel
) The sex is good,
yet it doesn't take away from the plot, rather it is part of it, and not
gratuitous.....keep in coming."
Marcel,
16 Aug 98
Erotic Mind Contol's Reader's Picks:
"
Cassandra - Vampiress
series".........A
recent story that isn't quite done yet, but interesting and erotic.
Almost exclusively ff, but well done, and has the same delicious device
of uncontrollable desire."
Saint Germain,
16 Aug 98
Erotic Mind Control Reader's Picks:
"
Jennifer's Transformation
".......Short,
but well-told tale of Jennifer's change. Seduction in the bathroom
is quite good."
Saint Germain, 16 Aug
98
"I just wanted to tell you how much
I enjoy your TG stories
. I'm a pre-op
TS and I collect TG, TS stories. At present I've a little over 2000
stories in my collection. Your work is some of the best that I've
read. I look forward to reading your new stories also. I have
visited your website too, it looks great. While I personally don't
care much for mind control stories unless their is a TG element in them,
I'm sure that they are just as good as your other stories. Keep up
the good work."
Nora Elizabeth...., 12 Aug
98
"I just wanted to drop you a note to let
you know that I have enjoyed r
eading your
stories on your website
..."
Dan, 12 Aug 98
"
Your stories
really are great.
I love them.
I'm sure if I tell my boyfriend about them, he'll like them too.
See you later!" Liz, 8 Aug 98
"I have enjoyed your excellent stories.
I find especially exciting the stories involving young ladies slowly turned
into brainless bimbos. The first person accounts of the slow transformation
is very arousing. Breast enlargement is also nice, especially when
it accompanies the mental transformation.........I really liked
WishCraft.
The Tiffany character was my favorite character. I hope you do more
with her in the sequel, but please get rid of the TG part of her.
I look forward to reading more stories (hopefully, mind control) from you.
You have a genuine flair for erotic, naughty stories."
Dave, A New Fan, 8 Aug 98
"I came across
WishCraft
,
and I just had to take my hat off to you....Great Story.....although, I
didn't care for the ending, but taste is personal........it was a great
story, and it was well written. I visited your web site, and it turns
out you have written a lot of the stuff I have read.....Great Work :)
Anonymous, 7 Aug 98
"It took awhile, but I finally finished
reading chapter two of
Barbie (-Teen Agent
),
and I'm eagerly awaiting the third chapter. Not only am I enjoying
the mystery of the kidnapping, but the whole plight of delightfully passive
Barbie. I can't wait to see what Linda has in store for her, and
I hope you will allow Jessica to take more and more advantage of Barbie's
situation.........."
Scott,
7 Aug 98
"When I read this story (
WishCraft
)
I didn't know what to expect. I think this story is really worth
reading. The storyline is great, many transformations occur and the
ending I also liked very much. Great writing skills have been shown
here. Please continue to write such good material. I'll be
looking forward to read(ing) it."
J.C. Arby,
5 Aug 98
"
I love the
Web page
! Your stories continue to be
top notch. I like each one better than the last, especially when
new beauty comes at the expense of some already beautiful but bitchy antagonist.
Keep up the great work. It is greatly appreciated."
Shap, 5 Aug 98
"
Janene's
Wishes
was excellent! Actually, I like
your short story work more than your longer stories in some ways.
Less time to get trapped in "out of character" stuff. Short, sweet,
to the point and with an ironic twist."
Mark
T., BEA Story Archivist, 5 Aug 98
"I would just like to say that I am enjoying
this story (
WishCraft
)
a lot. I love the way all the transformations take place in the same
story."
oriole,
3 Aug 98
"I just read the first part of "
WishCraft
"
and I think it is as great as the rest of your stories. I think that
you have a style to your writing that is far greater than most authors
on the net..."
Tesla,
2 Aug 98
"I just finished reading "
WishCraft
"
at your site. What a fun read! You hint that there may be more
to come; please add me to the list of those encouraging you to write a
sequel. I've looked at some of your other stories and find them to
be enjoyable, too. Thank you so much for turning me on to your site!"
Fred, 2 Aug 98
"Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying
your
WishCraft
story. Keep up the great work!"
Martin,
1 Aug 98
"Great story (
WishCraft)
.
I have read most, if not all of your stories and really enjoy them.
Keep up the good work."
jdw,1
Aug 98
"Really enjoyed
Master
PC, Alien's Gift, and Jennifer's Transformation
(neat idea to add a chapter to "The Gift" using the subject's perspective.
Looking forward to the rest of
WishCraft
"
Nomdreserv, author, 31 Jul 98
"WOW WHAT CAN I SAY BUT WOW!!!!!!!!!
I luved it.....a lot! Coolness! The part in the end (
WishCraft
)
is too cute! My favorite part is the kitten transformation, but that's
just me. Great work in making Carmen a cat, very good! Sequel??
Oh please! This is a very very good story....it ranks up in the Days
of His Lives fame in my book."
That AR fanatical Kitten, 29 Jul 98
".....(regarding
WishCraft
,
specifically the Carmen character)...and let me say I have never been so
sexually aroused in all my life! Living Catholic just doesn't give
one to many sexual experiences."
Carmen Waverly :), 29 Jul 98
"I am no professional, but it seemed as
though you put to much emphasis on part 1 (
Alien's
Gift 2
), maybe some new things should happen
in the next part. To what I don't have any suggestions, but I am
getting tired of those same authors that always go for that world female
dom thing - ya know what I mean? I like your story lines a lot, and
will continue to read them as you put them on your page......."
Playr10, 29 Jul 98
"Outstanding work...best I've read in some
time...I'll be waiting for part 3 (referring to
Alien's
Gift or Barbie-Teen Agent)
"
Jack, 28 Jul 98
"Loved both parts of the story
Alien's
Gift
. Can't wait for more. I hope
that Colt will use his transformation powers for revenge as well as pleasure!
Thanks again for the great stories."
Shap, 26 Jul 98
"Thanks for the story (
Alien's
Gift, Part 2
) - I enjoyed it. What do
you have planned next? The field is wide open isn't it. Again
- thanks for your time and energy - this is one of the better efforts I
have seen on a.s.s.m.
alobarpaul,
21 Jul 98
"Liked your story (
Barbie-Teen
Agent)
! The plot is new and refreshing.
One thing though, I would have love to have a detailed description of Barbie
getting younger in the chamber."
Netman99, 13 Jul 98
"Very smooth, and easily your best yet
(
Cassandra - Vampiress, Part 3
).
Your evolution, from your earlier stories (Cassandra - Vampiress 1 &
2) to now is clear. The introduction of the Scarlet Witch is quite
natural. The idea of a witch casting a spell on herself is excellent.
I hope you keep having fun with this piece......"
WhyNow,
author, 12 Jul 98
"I've
read
your last 2 stories
and I think they are very
interesting........I think you have great potential so keep posting."
CMarvel, 8 Jul 98
"Nice story. (
Barbie
- Teen Agent
) I look forward to the remaining
chapters."
David, 8 Jul 98
"Definitely a good read (
Barbie-Teen
Agent
)... I found it quite arousing
and can't wait to read more!!!!!"
Lisa, 7 Jul 98
"I found your story (
Alien's
Gift)
one of the most wonderful I ever came
across....."
Rotten,
4 Jul 98
"Hi, I just read your story (
Jennifer's
Transformation
) on the Mind Contol Story site,
and found it to be very good. You mention the story The Reward which
is also very good. I urge you to keep writing in The Reward universe.
B.W.,
2 Jul 98
"I've read a couple of your stories in
the past, but
Sabrina & Tabitha
is the best yet...Keep those great stories coming.
Jonathon,
7 May 98
"Brilliant! (
Twins
Enslaved - Amber's Tale
) Just Brilliant!
KoolKat,
7 May 98
"After reading the full story (
Sabrina
& Tabitha - Teen Witches
). I find
it wonderful. A sequel could be considered but a slight re-write
might be necessary. Learning more of what Tabitha has in store for
Sabrina would be good. I particularly like her dark and evil side.
A good side would be Salem and his pets.
cy101,
7 May 98
"That was a very good story (
Sabrina
& Tabitha - Teen Witches
). I hope
that it won't be long before part two is on the way!
dangerbunny, 6 May 98
"I really like your story (
Sabrina
& Tabitha - Teenage Witches
). The
writing is very good. The prose keeps me at the edge of my seat.
Keep up the good work.
cy101,
6 May 98
"Fantastic Story
(Sabrina
& Tabitha - Teen Witches)
. You've
just got to continue it! A bit of m/f (or m/f/f) action, as well
as Sabrina and Tabitha getting it on would be good! Please tell me
that you're writing more!"
KoolKat,
Author, 5 May 98
"I just finished reading your story
Master PC
from the mcstories.com and I like
it....I really want to read the next chapter.."
Amichay, 5 May 98
"Excellent - Loved both parts (
Cassandra
- Vampiress I & II
), really easy to read
and entertainingly erotic. Thanks and can't wait for part 3."
rbruzz19, 3 May 98
"Cassandra (- Vampiress
)
is a great story of seduction. Loved reading it and found it to be
very erotic. I can't wait to read more."
Anne, 30 Apr 98
"I enjoyed your story (
Master
PC
). Good premise and pretty good layout,
but got a little repetitive. I like the slave girl theme. I
would have liked to see more. Hope to see more of your work.....keep
on writing."
Jeff,
29 Apr 98
"I read your story (
Master
PC
). I really like it a lot. I'm
interested in growth like the breasts and all that. I have my own
story, Kathy's Power......."
Alicia,
Writer, 29 Apr 98
"...(referring to
Lust
Potion 69
)......Well Written and certainly
fit beautifully into the SpellsRUs universe. This is a Well done!
and a Thank You."
Edward
Winston Bear, 29 Apr 98
"I just read your story,
Master
PC
, and I want to tell you that it is great!
I hope you are writing more in that world, and I look forward to reading
more, though, I wish you would spend more time describing the sex scenes........."
M.W., 28 Apr 98
"Wow this story (
Master
PC
) is great!....................You have
a great imagination!"
memi,
26 Apr 98
"I read both part 1 and part 2 of
Cassandra
- Vampiress
, and found them to be very beautifully
written. Honestly, I wish that there are more of such good stories."
Daniel, 26 Apr 98
"This story (
Cassandra
- Vampiress II
) is fantastic! I think
it is better than the first! I love the fact that its shorter, for
one, but there seems to be a lot more happening. Its great!
It moves faster and it got me pretty excited! Keep up the great stories!"
Sxy, 22 Apr 98
"Hey, that story (
Pleasure
Chips
) kicked ass, too. You are one
hell of a writer. Where do you get all your ideas for this stuff?
Where ever you get em, they're great. I especially enjoyed it because
it could actually happen in the future with all this shit about microchips
and shit."
SBNasty,
6 Apr 98
"I must say you are a fantastic story teller.
I luv the way these stories of yours flows. You seem to have a natural
talent for them! The part I like best in this story (
Lust
Potion 69
) is how Serena's idea of perfection
is herself....I like that."
Angel, 5 Apr 98
"Your stories (
Cassandra
- Vampiress I & Lust Potion 69
) are incredible!
It is obvious you have put much time and thought into them! I was
fascinated by the level of dialogue and plot...."
Sxy, 4 Apr 98
"I just read (
Cassandra
- Vampiress
) and I really like this one.
Especially the part where the vampire turns one girl into the others sex
slave! Wow."
Mirebelle,
4 Apr 98
"I hadn't realized until I saw the repost
today that you were responsible for
Master
PC
which was a very enjoyable story.
It reminded me of <The Reward> which remains one of my favorite MC/Body
Control stories."
Boris
Ludmenkov, Author, 3 Apr 98
"I was just writing you to congratulate
you on a terrific story,
Master PC
.
I read it at BEarchive on the web and loved it. The story was very
entertaining. I look forward to reading your other stories.
This story was one of the best that I have ever read!"
Joseph,
23 Mar 98
Master PC was the first story I submitted... The response
was overwhelming!