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Holy crap, I actually get mail from people who like what I write. Let's read a few...
Oh, and BTW, there are spoilers for my stories on this page as I do respond to e-mails concerning them, so take that into account before you read.
from Ibrahim date Sat, Jul 25, 2015 at 6:52 AM story general subject Writing May I finish off your 'Soccer' story for you? regards, Ibrahim
Well, the answer to that is "no" for a few reasons.
First and foremost, the story as it exists now has only 143 words in it. That's barely one or two paragraphs, so you wouldn't be "finishing it," so much as writing the whole thing yourself.
Secondly, you don't really need my permission to write a story with a similar plot. It's a fairly generic plot as it is, so I can't really claim any sort of rights to the idea, in the same way that I might claim rights to the characters, personalities, and maybe unique events or locations contained within the story. I quite actively encourage you to write all the "young girl playing soccer alone finds herself in trouble" stories you want.
Finally, I kind of get the feeling that you are asking to finish it off "for me" so that you would then ask me to post it here on my site for others to read. Apologies if that is leaping to an incorrect conclusion, but that's the gut feeling I got. The only things I post here are stories I write entirely on my own, often at an annoyingly slow pace. You can apply for a free ASSTR account and post your story there if you like. It's no business of mine.
I actually just went back and reread what I had written of this particular story, and ugh, it's a pretty shitty 2 paragraphs. No wonder I gave up on it. Anything anybody writes with the same basic plot would be miles better.
from Omni date Sun, Mar 29, 2015 at 11:22 PM story theoffer & daddysbed subject Any updates coming? So it's been quite some time since the last update and since I very much enjoy your stories I hope an update comes soon. I'm mostly talking about the offer but I really enjoyed daddy's bed as well since incest and pedo girls rock my socks.
Next time I update either of those stories, it will probably be when they're done, so really, no, no updates on either of them. Well, maybe I'll post one for theoffer before it's done, but it's not really update worthy yet. Don't hold your breath though. Daddysbed is far more likely to be finished first though.
from Omni_ date Mon, Jul 21, 2014 at 6:53 PM story theoffer subject Keep up the good work! I'm loving this story. taking something that should obviously just be a quick pedo rape story to get off on, and turn it into an entertaining and endearing childlove drama is really something to be proud of. The characters are convincing, Oswald is realistic, and Kate always does and says what I feel a little girl would, rather than a man writing a little girl. I'm not sure if you're going anywere with the initial premise anymore, but the story that has developed independant of the premise is great.
Keep up the good work, and I hope you update it soon.
Thanks! I personally feel that this will be next finished story, hopefully by the end of the year. I know, I'm slow. I'm glad you feel that Kate is realistic since I often worry that I write young girls as being too mature for their age, and usually in those cases I give them some kind of recent trauma that forced them to grow up a little quickly. I suppose that's just one of the problems with never having been a young girl myself, heh. Rest assured, I have not abandoned the original plot, although I have strayed from it more than I really intended, but my stories, as with any real life events, kind of develop as they happen. I've got a plan in my head on how to wrap it all up, and just need to commit some time to typing it all out, which is often easier said than done.
from Airimis date Tue, May 27, 2014 at 12:28 AM subject The Offer (update) Dear Hardguy,
You left me in suspence again, but that's okay. I really enjoyed the update and I'm very glad that you did not stop work on "The Offer".
I like the track that you are on with Kate. I'm thankful that you didn't rush into things with her and you are giving her a personality and character that one might have at her age. It adds a lot to the story and Oswald that he is really a nice guy.
I have a few questions about the storyline. And also, everything here is my opinion so please take it as that and only that. I'm not a pro at writing so please don't take any offense to anything. It's all out of curiosity.
First, Clarissa:
I understand that the character Clarissa was used at a stepping stone to get him to realize his feeling for Kate. I liked that she had a backstory that really stirred the emotions. I would think that his world is a small one and that since she frequently visits the local pool there, that we haven't seen the last of her. Also, it would be interesting how she reacts seeing the attraction that he has developed for Kate given her past. She's already showed her jealous streak. I'm wondering if she is just going to move aside for a relationship that has such an age difference?Next, the Coach and Miriam:
Something obviously needs to be done. Yes, you have given valid reasons of why he hasn't done anything so far. My thought is that Miriam is "in love" with her coach, but her coach has no real feeling for her. That relationship is bound to hurt Miriam physically or emotionally with time. If he doesn't care about her, then he is more apt to physically hurt her with sex.I can see this as a way to answer the issue of her mother to get what she wants and she could even give Oswald the credit because her daughter would never turn in the coach. Oswald, at least at the moment, had no intentions of ever hurting her anyway so I find it very unlikely that unless he does it to stop the abuse that is going on with her coach, he is not going to go through with it.
Next issue, Kate and Miriam (and her mother):
You've had them in so much of the story, that it would be tragic for Oswald and Kate to just fall in love and live happily ever after. He has been careful to guard his computer and his chat history. He is bound to slip. She could find his password while he's at work or he could accidentally leave it on, but he is never going to admit any of it to Kate while she's so...vulnerable. Kate finding it, perhaps even having a face-to-face with Miriam, or chatting with her mother and telling her that Oswald is having relations with a young girl, is more likely to happen than Kate just waiting for him to get home and having a civilized conversation about it all and explaining his side of the story. People are emotional and don't want to wait for answers. It could be fun to explore what could happen.Lastly, I really do love the story. I have waited for a long time for you to continue it. I am very glad that I looked back to your page and saw the update. I hope that you are able to continue it or finish it soon. Thank you for posting such a tangled and fun story to read.
Sincerely,
Airimis
Rest assured, I take no offense at anything (usually) and I'm not a professional writer either, though I probably could be one if all my stories didn't involve underage orgasms. Let's see what I can say about the rest without dropping spoilers.
I'm undecided on Clarissa's future in the story. I feel like she knows that her time in the spotlight was lost the moment Oswald said Kate's name during sex. I think she's probably moved on to somebody who is interested in her in more than physical ways.
Coach certainly isn't nice to Miriam, that's for sure, but she's wet and willing, and I don't think he'll jeopardize that with physical pain if he can help it. Something will happen though that will get Oswald's attention back on this front however. A tangled web is being weaved.
I don't know if I want to comment on the matter of an interaction between Kate and Oswald regarding Miriam and her mother. Gotta play my cards close to the vest.
Thanks for loving this story, because it's been roaming around in my brain for some time since the roleplay that inspired it (yes, I'll release that chat log too, maybe), and I'm also looking forward to seeing comments on how it all plays out.
from ross date Fri, Mar 7, 2014 at 10:13 AM subject is Are all your stories legal
Where I live, yes they are. Fictional stories containing fictional characters and depicting fictional events are legal. Where you live...well, I don't know where you live. Consult your local laws and act accordingly.
from Glenn Wallis date Tue, Feb 25, 2014 at 9:22 PM story theoffer subject Rare praise I rarely send in feedback, I probably should do more often, but I just came across "The Offer" on Asstr and I just could not stop reading it. Really lovely story. I wish I could be Oswald and have my own Kate. Its probably fine as it is, but you always wonder "what happened next?" so feel free to write some more! I suppose there are hundreds, perhaps thousands of blokes like me, who long for a loving relationship with a young girl like Kate, even though we know it can never happen.
Thanks
Glenn
I never abandon something I've written this much about, I'm just very pokey about it, RL time and circumstances permitting me being able to actually sit down and write. In some ways, I too wish I could have my own Kate as well, but in other ways, I wish Kate could have a different life experience than the one she is having with Oswald. Her home is slightly broken, not that you should take that as inferring that I dislike same-sex partners raising a child, but she deserves better with respect to the two dads that she has. Her loss of innocence due to their poor parenting practices (and other things yet to be written that I can't talk about now) is a shame.
from Clare date Tue, Feb 25, 2014 at 4:55 PM story quickie subject enjoyed It was a fun story. Well done. The next extension to this story should be when our hero meets Missy in private. Could be fun.
Missy and her little sister Wendy are sort of constant background characters who are referenced through several stories. I don't know that I will ever write a story about them as main characters, but they have a very unique relationship with each other. I would like to flesh them out a bit more through the observations of others. Keep your fingers crossed on seeing that happen.
from Herschel date Thu, Aug 15, 2013 at 2:14 AM subject the offer Normally I don't send negative criticism to authors, but I see you've put a lot of work in on The Offer, with still more to do. If you get positive responses, then you can ignore this one, but my personal feeling is the story drags along tediously. I stopped reading about 15% of the way through. But it is my kind of story as far as main characters go, although I prefer romantic and consensual themes, not rape and coercion as suggested early in the story. Sex is supposed to be healthy and pleasurable to all concerned, that's the way I see it. I will say I appreciated your Lolicon notes, thanks for that.
I'm sorry, what was your e-mail about? I stopped reading about 15% of the way through. Seriously though, it sounds like you gave up too soon. Consider reading a bit more of it, and you might change your mind.
from Sandy date Mon, Jun 24, 2013 at 11:50 AM subject Ghost story I was wondering if you will continue writing the story "Ghost"?As I like reading stories of this type.I am fascinated with sexual ghost stories and the supernatural.Please feel free to contact me on this matter.
Nope. I've pretty much lost any interest in continuing that one. Sorry.
from Airimis date Thu, Jun 13, 2013 at 12:31 AM subject Work in Progress I would like to say that I like your writing very much. That isn't as wierd as it comes off as because I'm a writer, too. I write under the pen name Airimis on ASSTR if you are curious about me.
I absolutely loved "It Began One Day At The Mall", "As it Was Meant to Be" and "Daddy's Bed".
I read "The Offer" this morning and I wonder why you haven't finished this one. There is tons of potential in that one. You have multiple directions you could go and good characters that are vivid, distinct, and emotional. Did you get busy on other works, stalled on ideas for the story, or just didn't like the direction it was going? I think it could be as good as some of your others if finished well.
In any case, I look forward to reading more of your work. I know that I should know better than to read works in progress, but "Daddy's Bed" was too good so I wanted to sample other works from you. I wanted to say thank you for putting your work online and that I've enjoyed reading what I have so far. Good luck.
(Also, if you sample my work, I really am open to suggestion and contructive feedback. I don't take offense to much of anything. I'm working on a story at the moment that is along the same lines a saving a lost girl who's brainwashed and abused. I hope to have it finished in a week or so. Good luck on your stories.)
Airimis
Yeah, I already know the endgame for "The Offer," I just got sidetracked on various things. I think I actually have more written on that that I haven't yet uploaded here, but I'll do that once I either finish it, or hit another break in the action. "Daddy's Bed" is similarly stalled for the same reason. I know how it's going to end, and have written more, but it's not yet fit for upload. It all just depends on which story grabs my brain when I sit down to write, and currently it's been a mix of "Secrets" and "Mahou" that are tugging at my gray matter. I'm also (slowly) rewriting a section of "It Began One Day At The Mall" that bugs me for logical reasons, but obviously that's low priority. I've also got a few more stories that aren't even listed on the site, probably because I've barely done anything to them, so I've got a lot of stuff jockeying for my attention. Thanks for reading!
from adam date Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 3:45 AM subject great story Hi I would just like to say this was one great story and I hope there is another part for it to find very soon cant wait to read it
Thanks! I'm not quite sure which story you're referring to though, which is why I've now stuck a drop down selection box on the feedback form.
from Laura date Thu, Jun 14, 2012 at 5:36 AM subject Regarding Your Stories If your'e interested, I'd like to talk to you about getting some of your stories published electronically and making some money.
Let me know.
Thank you,
Laura
No, for three reasons.
from Michael date Thu, Jul 15, 2010 at 6:23 PM subject As it was meant to be Illogicalities I noticed in the story:
1. Ken is introduced to Mikkel's family as a doctor, but no one expects him to help the old man when he has his attack. I doubt they would have contemplated the concept of any doctor other than a medical one. Certainly Alice's comment ‘Oh … from a town other than Charleston? I already know the doctor there.’ supports this view.
2. Alice left school after her 2nd year. And she still can't read? My sons certainly managed it before the end of their 1st year. Stutteringly at times, but all they needed was practice. And with Mikkel reading each evening, his disdain for his children's illiteracy seems odd. Come to that, since he appears not to speak English, why does he have some English books?
3. After the earthquake, Ken reviews his actions and decides that he has made Alice get through her work a bit faster than she would have done had he not been there. Therefore, she would not have been further down the ladder were it not for him, she would not even have reached the top. So he had no cause to kill her.
Heaven forbid a story about time traveling and underage sex be "illogical."
1. Although he does state that he is a doctor, he more or less stumbles in the door moments after Mikkel collapses. He has no tools, no medicine, no clear indication of what exactly has gone wrong. Could he do CPR? Sure, but is that any guarantee it will save the old guy? Let's not forget, he's already possibly screwed up the timeline once by messing with Alice's fate. Can he really afford to do the same by saving Mikkel? I grant you, giving Mikkel another chance at his advanced age probably wouldn't cause Nazis to ride dinosaurs through the streets of New York City in the 1940s, but Ken doesn't want to take his chances. Besides, considering it took 30 minutes for the real doctor to get back anyways, there probably wasn't a whole lot that could have been done anyways. Medicine in the 1830s wasn't exactly great, and even now old people die even with prompt modern medical attention. I'd chalk it up to fate.
2. Did we lose sight of the fact that it's 1836? An illiterate farm girl isn't exactly a rarity, and Hooked on Phonics or a comprehensive and thorough educational system was probably kinda hard to come by. As for the books in english, Charles had only died a month ago, and it may be safe to assume that either he, or his mother, who had died 2 years earlier, could read them.
3. But how can he be sure? Yeah, Alice may not have died in the original earthquake, but in this timeline, she certainly had a chance to if Ken hadn't been there, be it from the upturned pitchfork or from the fall to the floor itself from any height. Even if killing her would have been the wrong thing, and she had gone on to live a full life, there's no guarantee that she would have had children anyways. Consider that she and her sister were due to become orphans in a few months anyways, and there's no telling how their lives may have turned out then, particularly if Alice had become crippled from the fall. There are a lot of what-ifs, and Ken's decision, to end her life or let it continue is one of those what-ifs, either one of which could drastically change things from how it all played out...or, consider the title of the story. Who's to say that what was written, was how it always was? What if, in the past of the present timeline that Ken came from, there also was this mysterious person who showed up on a road outside Mikkel Ottosson's farm in 1836, who stayed with him and his daughters for 6 weeks before vanishing for 4 months before suddenly returning again? What if, everything really was As It Was Meant To Be?
from Penqwin date Fri, Jul 9, 2010 at 3:30 PM subject The Mall One of the best stories I've ever read; certainly in the top ten.
My favourite age bracket (as seems to be yours as well) and romantic with sympathy and kind-heartedness.
Much appreciate your references to 'good pedophiles' too. We do exist! During my life of over 50 years, I've experienced five girls who made it plain I had the option, but took none.
Two of those were girls who were already 'damaged goods' and I wasn't about to reinforce their conditioning, although they knew I was interested - lots of cuddles, a couple of friendly kisses but not one sexual touch.
Unfortunately, Internal Affairs took my computer, May 2008, and I was prosecuted for possessing inappropriate images. Now I'm a convicted sex offender but can't help ruing a degree of over-kill, even though what I did was illegal and bloody stupid.
I have a few stories at storiesonline.net, under the pen-name Penqwin. They're about romantic and gentle, sexual relationships with barely-pubescent girls. I've got a few unfinished yarns but they'll probably stay that way as I'm dubious about being under possible continued scrutiny - paranoia can be a healthy thing!
Regards,
Penqwin
Oh I know we exist. I'm one of them, and I commend you on your self-control, while simultaneously cringing at your offender status. As I said on my profile page, I too had those sorts of pictures well over a decade ago, before I really knew what they were, and got rid of them once I realized how much I would lose if I was ever caught with them, and that was at age 13. I can't blame you for being paranoid. I'm sure I would be too if I were in your position.
from Richard date Wed, Jul 7, 2010 at 3:52 PM subject FB; It Began One . . . Greetings Hardguy, Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it very much. I found it to be thoroughly charming with some delightful tense moments. Please forgive me for noting that I found Jack's reluctance to violence unpleasantly disturbing. I prefer my heros to at least attempt to rescue the damsel in distress, despite the circumstance. Personal preferance aside the story remains with me brightening my days.
Thank you again, Richard
I dunno, Richard. I never considered Jack a hero. He just kinda got caught up in everything, and did what he thought was right. Personally, I kind of liked how justice was meted out in the end. In fact, I wrote that part before a great deal of the middle of the story.
from yeller (Hayama Kotono's Scanlations) date Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 2:58 PMsubject Inuboshi I wouldn't say that the girls are "forced" in most of Inuboshi's stories, usually it is consensual from the beginning.... only a minority of his works I'd say include girls actually being forced to...
I think you are misrepresenting Inuboshi by saying most of his stories are like that... I'd say it is only about 25% of them have girls who are forced/tricked into doing it.
Just look at "Always Watching", Itsuki pretty much initiates it the first time. Even in Miyabi Dream'n Miyabi was caught masturbating and you might be able to make the argument she wanted him to do it anyways... In Akina she definitely isn't forced/tricked whatsoever... How can you say Ichigo and Mint are forced in either of their stories? As far as Sakura goes, though, you are right... she was tricked/forced into it at first... but she did make the contract.
Please correct this on your lolicon page... I think you are misrepresenting Inuboshi on the whole for less than half of his overall works... by saying the girls are usually forced.Also.. wouldn't so much say "cat eyes", as just the bright-large eyed anime style... Inuboshi = Dogstar, Inu = Dog, Boshi = Star.
And I'd say most of his girls have a much more "dog" attitude than a "cat" attitude. Just my two cents.Also... Inuboshi has never done a doujinshi (indie publication) EVER, his stuff is all properly published manga, he does not make doujinshi.
He does Ero-Manga or H-Manga, not doujinshi. Aoyama Reo for example does both manga and doujinshi, it just depends how it was published.
Doujinshi = independently published
Manga = published/distributed by a sponsoring company in magazines, and then later if there is demand the manga stories published in magazines by a particular artist, a publisher may release an artist compilation book with a collection of their stories. These collections are called tankoubons.
Ok, a little explanation for the rest of you. I had a section about Inuboshi over on my Lolicon page, because he's probably my favorite lolicon author, and made sure to link it to the Hayama Kotono Scanlations site, because they mostly focus on his work. Yeller, who sent me 3 e-mails the day after I put the page up, took some issues with with I wrote (as you can see), and it just kind of felt like anything I wrote wouldn't satisfy him, so I removed the section on Inuboshi, but did leave his name in the list of lolicon authors, and of course put a link to Hayama Kotono with the rest at the bottom of the page.
Yeller, it's obvious that you're passionate about this, otherwise I doubt you'd have gone to the trouble of, well, chastising me over what I wrote. In my defense, it's not like I spent a good deal of time working on those few lines, and as such I just checked the first few pages of a few scans to see if the lasting impression I had of Inuboshi's scenarios, which was one of generally reluctant or sexually ignorant girls being coaxed/seduced into their first sex act, which they then enjoy and at the end they indicate they want more of it. Those few that I looked at, mostly confirmed that impression on me, and so I went with it.
The cat vs. dog thing is really a matter of personal observation, and 'cat' was the first thing that came to mind. Yes, I knew his name means 'dog star,' but it didn't register in my brain when I wrote that.
As for manga/doujinshi, with the prevalence of hentai and loli doujins out there, that's an easy mistake to make. I'd chalk that up to my American conditioning to just figure that all lolicon material is produced via "underground" channels. Oh if only the US could be as openly perverted as Japan is.
from Bree date Sun, Jul 4, 2010 at 1:57 PM subject I'm impressed! Hardguy,
You make it very difficult to email you! I actually meant to after I read your repost of the "It Started at the Mall" story and never got that industrious. I just read the start of your "Offer" story and figured it'd be inexcusable to not make the effort.
I'm not sure how to appropriately convey that your stories turn me on in spite of my distaste for pedophilia stories generally. I'm grateful you aren't making them 6, but I'd still love to read that they were 13 or 14! Beggars can't be choosers, of course.
I think the Offer is a promising start. I'm curious where you're heading with it, because you're already starting to develop the contrast between Miriam's would-be-rapist and Kate's would-be-hero. It's more sophistication than I'd usually expect from this sort of thing. I'll be watching anxiously to see how you finish!
Bree
Hah, well, I hadn't put the feedback form page up yet, so I hope it's easier to e-mail me now. ;)
Kids under age 10 or so just don't do it for me. Part of that is because of the physical form that I'm attracted to, and the other is sort of from a hygiene standpoint. I have young nieces and nephews, and while I am in no way planning on doing anything sexual with them, just being around them has taught me something about children: they're filthy little creatures. Seriously, if somebody can't be bothered to use a napkin after they eat, I don't want to know what less visible parts of their bodies are like. At least in those few years leading up to adolescence, they start to feel some kind of awareness of if they're clean or not.
I feel really good about Theoffer getting done sooner rather than later. When I sit down to work on it, I just feel like I'm on a roll and the words come spilling on out.
from poppaclyde date Fri, Jul 2, 2010 at 3:06 AM subject Daddy's Bed I enjoyed this story and can see that it has lots of intriguing possibilities.
I look forward to reading it all again when you have finished it.
Have you visited the Darles Chickens pages on this site? Good stories about consensual sex with young girls. SIte has been moribund for about two years so don't think the stories that have potential will be completed, but it is good.
Just about to read about Miriam, although I don't like stories with any force or violence in them.
Best wishes
Yours aye
Poppaclyde
Thanks, yeah, Daddysbed is probably the closest one I have to finishing something next. I actually feel like I'm going to end up rewriting some of it, because I know the ending I want to give it, but I'm having something of a brain fart when I try to actually get there from what I've already put down. I open it back up every month or so, and usually go on to work on something else instead rather than stare at it frustratingly.
Nope, haven't checked it out.
I don't plan on violence in Theoffer, but as for force...well, can't promise anything.
from jim date Tue, Jun 29, 2010 at 7:23 AM subject It happened at the mall Just discovered then finished the story...loved it. You're not being immodest when you say "well written", very erotic as opposed to a "jack off" tale. It taps directly into the fantasies of a man like me i.e. the girls ages (nice trick at the end intro'ing the 10 year old) the live-in aspects, young friends and inclusion of the "daddy" idea...you covered all the bases. Thank you! However those standards seem to have been abandoned in the GYM story...I read it with high hopes but was disappointed (guess I'm not into rape/humiliation, etc) but your postscript explanation helped my understanding of the style change. Thanks again for the "Mall". Jim
Glad you liked Mall. I'm still pretty proud of it myself, going on 5 years since I finished it. As for Jules, I'm not really sure what plans I have in store for her, if any. Not surprisingly, Gym is not for everybody. It's intentionally over the top, and the story tags kind of let you know what you're in for. It's an intentional lark based off of somebody else's fantasy, and not really an example of all the other stuff I write. That said, a little variety never hurt anybody.
from lilkidsex date Sun, Jun 27, 2010 at 12:15 AM subject Welcome and Thanks Hi Hardguy,
i just wanted to say hi and it's good to know you are interested in writing Mg an pedo stories on asstr-mirror.org
I have heard of Mr Double's site but did not register and pay (for security issues) for the stories and could not find a way to get free access. I had seen your username there.
I hope to see some of your stories and let you know what i think of them in the near future. I hope we can keep in contact and share out interests later on. I know i will enjoy them as much as you write them.
I wish you all the best.
P.S. Do you know of any good peso sites to access freely as i need more videos and stuff. Only if you wish to disclose
Thanks, Scott
No. I don't support that stuff in anyway.
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