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I've never written to someone like this, but as it's 3am and I'm in the the middle of Italy I can't resist it. I like the way you write; it is genuinely erotic, and uplifting (in more than one sense!) and you give a sense of the inner feelings of both Alexis and Eric, and that's not easy to do. Couple of very minor points. I think an Italian would be more likely to say, or think, Dio Mio than Il Dio Mio. And that mauve lipstick is a bit disturbing. But then Alexis probably meant it to be ;-) Dreaming out loud with a bit of careful research always ensures a genuinely erotic story...thanks for such wonderful feedback (& tip), especially from my favorite country. And mauve lipstick can be a beautiful color on the right skin tone...come back after working hours and I'll show you. ;) -Lisa it is really reallt lacking it just sucks Lacking? I was hoping to generate a little imagination in your 'head' darling...which is not ~just~ for jacking off. Well, maybe it is in your case. Tschüß! ;) -Lisa good narration with a great ending Passed on to Lisa for comment. -Lisa good Danke schön. ;) -Lisa oh lisa its lovely....i have also read ur two other stories.....one which was abt having a dream...and other wich u said u had to write it right on spot...the chocolate-beach...one... ur style is so sexy...sweet...erotic....mmmm i love it....its not vulgar...it arouses the hell out of me....ur too good....so romantic....i start fantasising myself in ur stories...gosh its amazing.
You've given me that internal butterfly thing, Natasha. Your response was certainly appreciated, but I didn't write 'Chocolate Strawberries', Gentle is the culprit...go get him! ;) -Lisa Extremely sexual for both male and female. Your writing is supperb. You left just the right of questions to be answered to be filled in by my imagination. Alexis and Eric chared a GREAT sex life and would apparently continue for years to cum. Passed on to Lisa for comment. -Lisa I love Geek sex stories! Soooooo awesome! So do I, join the club. Really, join me. ;) -Lisa I loved how you ended it If it was up to me, it wouldn't have. ;) -Lisa mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! beautiful and steamy. That sure made my night, thank you. -Lisa Wonderful. Your writing style is intoxicating and I liked the way you finished it up- that was romantic and warming for the heart- not merely the sex organs. You did a beautiful job with it- the characters were wonderful and I truly enjoyed reading it. Passed on to Lisa for comment. -Lisa Oooooooooooooh Does this reaction pertain to the story...or something else? Both are welcome! ;o) -Lisa Nice work. I really enjoyed reading it. Now, how about trying it... -Lisa I want to know how you managed to enter my memory bank? This is almost an exact replica of a day with my fiance. We also met online.....he planned a "spa day", with rose petals strewn across my bed and floor, candles, chocolate covered strawberries, brandy soaked fruit, and an amazing massage (and much, much more). Your writing brought me right back to that incredible day....thank you! If that isn't a brilliant coincidence... ;) -Lisa Oh, Wow. I've read you before, but this, , Uhm. Wow, I mean , golly. I mean, my God you are Good. Um, I mean, Thanks for that. It was really interesting. How long ago did you write it? And what are you doing now? Thanks. First question: I wrote it about a month and a half ago, if I remember correctly. Second question: Right now? I'm conjuring up another one... Your reaction to my story was rather adorable, Mister. Was your breathing the only thing that needed...'relaxing'? -Lisa VERY nice, exciting enough for a man, but not too coarse for a woman, in other words, great bedtime reading for my wife and me. Keep up (!) the good work.
You do the same...if you know what I mean. ;) -Lisa Awesome...truly awesome! Please keep writing! I'm certainly full of ideas...some of them I just couldn't post. ;) -Lisa Outstanding story, I enjoyed it immensly. Passed on to Lisa for comment. -Lisa great writing, descriptive, romantic. It makes me tingly all over just reminiscing... -Lisa This is one of the sexiest stories I have ever read. You really developed the sexual tension... There is nothing like a really great fuck ;-) And that is what they had (and deserved). Thanks for a really great (10) story and I honestly hope it happened to you personally. Your writtings really turn me on. Passed on to Lisa for comment -Lisa Oh My God!!!!!! this story was awesome i loved it You guys are turning me to mush...that is so unlike me! {lol} -Lisa Fubulous story.. I love the anticipation and attention to detail. It really works for me! In that case, drop by again soon! I would love to know if the others do the same. -Lisa Please continue this story and send me the next part AS SOOn as your are done.
Sorry, love, this one is done. Very flattering, thanks. Though I should have something else I can give you very soon...if you're willing to come back and get it! ;o) -Lisa Great story! Nicely written. I'm too practical & logical to have an imagination to write stories like this. (maybe in a good dream sometime)
My dreams are where these stories come from...well, with a dose of real-life, too! Try it, even if it's just for your eyes only. Thanks, guy! -Lisa Very hot story That makes me pleased to have shared it with you. -Lisa love is not pure as sex Love is an implied thing, of course. Intercourse is a tangible thing, no doubt. But, together they are an incredible force (passion) that flows from the same fountain. This story...is full of passionate sex. Now look at your comment ...can I rest my case, Judge? ;) -Lisa I loved this story. its always great to know you can drive someone crazy. its a great feeling. Passed on to Lisa for comment. -Lisa OMG that was amazing. I've just recently introduced myself to these and I seriously feel as if I just had sex. oh my god... (sigh). Thank you. You're very welcome! I love doing that 'with' a person's mind. -Lisa AWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWW! You trying to make me blush? You're close... ;) -Lisa Your writing is volcanic...really HOT. I had to get off right away. Have you ever considered writing FF stories? I'm Bi and also enjoy them, but it takes a Fem mind to do them well. Have a wet week. Kitty. I have thought about it, but maybe now I'll think of writing one, and my weeks are always wet...guess it has something to do with the atmosphere. ;) -Lisa Nice story line. I like the descriptive quality used in her submission to Him. Well written and not just another "fuck and suck" story. Written with a good passion for the scene to be experienced and understood. Well done. I didn't realize the underlying submission until you mentioned it, very keen of you. And, thank you, Sir. ;) -Lisa it's a nice story. i suggest you to put some pictures related to the story for more excitement.
Damn, are you saying I failed to create the pictures for you? My goal is to excite the MIND...first. ;) -Lisa Excellent story...I was hoping for a steamy blow job, but I will check out the rest of the stories. Thanks!
Then you might like 'Dreamscape' -Lisa AMAZING!!!! totally great... and satisfying... you get me?
Yes, <snip>, I get you! That's very 'exciting' to know...you get me!? -Lisa hey thats really a nice one buddy wish to hear much more frm ur side bye
Very nice of you to say, I should have another real soon, if that's what you mean? -Lisa good story! please read it now Aww...thanks! -Lisa DAMN! That was HOTT! I LOVED it! Very steamy, intense, and passionate! I'd Definitely would love to read more. You make me love being a writer, Derek. Thanks! -Lisa nothing's excite This genre is for people with a sensual & imaginative organ, the brain...and if you're not 'excited' when you read, porn is what you might be seeking. -Lisa Special Your stories are VERY sexy. "Relentless" is a perfect example. Eric is my hero. A great story, wish you had more. Have to give you a 10+ for this. I don't blush very often, but you seem to have done that today, Hank...thanks! -Lisa |
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