Guest Story by Lisa

Relentless

Comments


I've never written to someone like this, but as it's 3am and I'm in the the middle of Italy I can't resist it. I like the way you write; it is genuinely erotic, and uplifting (in more than one sense!) and you give a sense of the inner feelings of both Alexis and Eric, and that's not easy to do. Couple of very minor points. I think an Italian would be more likely to say, or think, Dio Mio than Il Dio Mio. And that mauve lipstick is a bit disturbing. But then Alexis probably meant it to be ;-)

David

Dreaming out loud with a bit of careful research always ensures a genuinely erotic story...thanks for such wonderful feedback (& tip), especially from my favorite country. And mauve lipstick can be a beautiful color on the right skin tone...come back after working hours and I'll show you. ;) -Lisa



it is really reallt lacking it just sucks

anonymous

Lacking? I was hoping to generate a little imagination in your 'head' darling...which is not ~just~ for jacking off. Well, maybe it is in your case. Tschüß! ;) -Lisa



good narration with a great ending

anonymous

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good

anonymous

Danke schön. ;) -Lisa



oh lisa its lovely....i have also read ur two other stories.....one which was abt having a dream...and other wich u said u had to write it right on spot...the chocolate-beach...one... ur style is so sexy...sweet...erotic....mmmm i love it....its not vulgar...it arouses the hell out of me....ur too good....so romantic....i start fantasising myself in ur stories...gosh its amazing.

Anonymous

You've given me that internal butterfly thing, Natasha. Your response was certainly appreciated, but I didn't write 'Chocolate Strawberries', Gentle is the culprit...go get him! ;) -Lisa



Extremely sexual for both male and female. Your writing is supperb. You left just the right of questions to be answered to be filled in by my imagination. Alexis and Eric chared a GREAT sex life and would apparently continue for years to cum.

anonymous

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I love Geek sex stories! Soooooo awesome!

anonymous

So do I, join the club. Really, join me. ;) -Lisa



I loved how you ended it

anonymous

If it was up to me, it wouldn't have. ;) -Lisa



mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! beautiful and steamy.

anonymous

That sure made my night, thank you. -Lisa



Wonderful. Your writing style is intoxicating and I liked the way you finished it up- that was romantic and warming for the heart- not merely the sex organs. You did a beautiful job with it- the characters were wonderful and I truly enjoyed reading it.

Elizabeth

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Oooooooooooooh

anonymous

Does this reaction pertain to the story...or something else? Both are welcome! ;o) -Lisa



Nice work. I really enjoyed reading it.

anonymous

Now, how about trying it... -Lisa



I want to know how you managed to enter my memory bank? This is almost an exact replica of a day with my fiance. We also met online.....he planned a "spa day", with rose petals strewn across my bed and floor, candles, chocolate covered strawberries, brandy soaked fruit, and an amazing massage (and much, much more). Your writing brought me right back to that incredible day....thank you!

anonymous

If that isn't a brilliant coincidence... ;) -Lisa



Oh, Wow. I've read you before, but this, , Uhm. Wow, I mean , golly. I mean, my God you are Good. Um, I mean, Thanks for that. It was really interesting. How long ago did you write it? And what are you doing now? Thanks.

anonymous

First question: I wrote it about a month and a half ago, if I remember correctly. Second question: Right now? I'm conjuring up another one... Your reaction to my story was rather adorable, Mister. Was your breathing the only thing that needed...'relaxing'? -Lisa



VERY nice, exciting enough for a man, but not too coarse for a woman, in other words, great bedtime reading for my wife and me. Keep up (!) the good work.

Anonymous

You do the same...if you know what I mean. ;) -Lisa



Awesome...truly awesome! Please keep writing!

anonymous

I'm certainly full of ideas...some of them I just couldn't post. ;) -Lisa



Outstanding story, I enjoyed it immensly.

Bill

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great writing, descriptive, romantic.

anonymous

It makes me tingly all over just reminiscing... -Lisa



This is one of the sexiest stories I have ever read. You really developed the sexual tension... There is nothing like a really great fuck ;-) And that is what they had (and deserved). Thanks for a really great (10) story and I honestly hope it happened to you personally. Your writtings really turn me on.

Hank

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Oh My God!!!!!! this story was awesome i loved it

anonymous

You guys are turning me to mush...that is so unlike me! {lol} -Lisa



Fubulous story.. I love the anticipation and attention to detail. It really works for me!

anonymous

In that case, drop by again soon! I would love to know if the others do the same. -Lisa



Please continue this story and send me the next part AS SOOn as your are done.

Anonymous

Sorry, love, this one is done. Very flattering, thanks. Though I should have something else I can give you very soon...if you're willing to come back and get it! ;o) -Lisa



Great story! Nicely written. I'm too practical & logical to have an imagination to write stories like this. (maybe in a good dream sometime)

Anonymous

My dreams are where these stories come from...well, with a dose of real-life, too! Try it, even if it's just for your eyes only. Thanks, guy! -Lisa



Very hot story

anonymous

That makes me pleased to have shared it with you. -Lisa



love is not pure as sex

anonymous

Love is an implied thing, of course. Intercourse is a tangible thing, no doubt. But, together they are an incredible force (passion) that flows from the same fountain. This story...is full of passionate sex. Now look at your comment ...can I rest my case, Judge? ;) -Lisa



I loved this story. its always great to know you can drive someone crazy. its a great feeling.

Janet

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OMG that was amazing. I've just recently introduced myself to these and I seriously feel as if I just had sex. oh my god... (sigh). Thank you.

anonymous

You're very welcome! I love doing that 'with' a person's mind. -Lisa



AWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWW!

anonymous

You trying to make me blush? You're close... ;) -Lisa



Your writing is volcanic...really HOT. I had to get off right away. Have you ever considered writing FF stories? I'm Bi and also enjoy them, but it takes a Fem mind to do them well. Have a wet week. Kitty.

Kitty

I have thought about it, but maybe now I'll think of writing one, and my weeks are always wet...guess it has something to do with the atmosphere. ;) -Lisa



Nice story line. I like the descriptive quality used in her submission to Him. Well written and not just another "fuck and suck" story. Written with a good passion for the scene to be experienced and understood. Well done.

SirDeeVe8

I didn't realize the underlying submission until you mentioned it, very keen of you. And, thank you, Sir. ;) -Lisa



it's a nice story. i suggest you to put some pictures related to the story for more excitement.

Anonymous

Damn, are you saying I failed to create the pictures for you? My goal is to excite the MIND...first. ;) -Lisa



Excellent story...I was hoping for a steamy blow job, but I will check out the rest of the stories. Thanks!

Anonymous

Then you might like 'Dreamscape' -Lisa



AMAZING!!!! totally great... and satisfying... you get me?

Anonymous

Yes, <snip>, I get you! That's very 'exciting' to know...you get me!? -Lisa



hey thats really a nice one buddy wish to hear much more frm ur side bye

Anonymous

Very nice of you to say, I should have another real soon, if that's what you mean? -Lisa



good story! please read it now

anonymous

Aww...thanks! -Lisa



DAMN! That was HOTT! I LOVED it! Very steamy, intense, and passionate! I'd Definitely would love to read more.

Derek

You make me love being a writer, Derek. Thanks! -Lisa



nothing's excite

anonymous

This genre is for people with a sensual & imaginative organ, the brain...and if you're not 'excited' when you read, porn is what you might be seeking. -Lisa



Special

anonymous



Your stories are VERY sexy. "Relentless" is a perfect example. Eric is my hero. A great story, wish you had more. Have to give you a 10+ for this.

Hank

I don't blush very often, but you seem to have done that today, Hank...thanks! -Lisa



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He knows that he's cheating as he stands behind the corner, watching her.

The two of them will be meeting after two months of countless emails. His name is Eric Boldari. He is the epitome of Italian sensualness with his dark hair and smouldering eyes. The passing women here and there have no doubt been captivated by his handsome and devilish smile. His wavy hair looked a little mussed as if he had just gotten out of a bed full of delightful activities.
Standing at six foot two, he quickly slid behind the wall to avoid being discovered. Lifting one tanned hand, he removed the strands of hair that have fallen to his forehead, a simple act that could leave a woman somewhat breathless. One thing he did know was that he enjoyed what he saw of her. She was sitting at the computer completely oblivious to her eager admirer, while he took in every single detail...

Her black rimmed glasses, her mauve colored lipstick, her slender waist, and a mass of long reddish curls. While noticing all of this he couldn't figure out why she would send such a tame picture of herself when seeing her now, she looked like an exotic creature...

Alexis was sitting at her computer, but didn't know what she was reading, as she couldn't concentrate on a single word. She finally gave up after reading the word 'resource' for the twentieth time. Her fingers nervously hit the keys to exit and decided to make some more copies of her reading material instead. Taking a deep breath and exhaling slowly she did notice something in her peripheral vision.
She was too nervous to turn and look for she didn't want to believe that he would come to the university to find her. He sent her an email that shook her to the core of her center...not referring to her being, either. He gave her the name of the hotel and the room number in which to meet him, stating at the end that he would come find her if she tried to change her mind. She told herself over and over, until she lost concentration again, that it was not him. The shadow lurking behind the wall cannot be him.

Thinking back again, she began to wonder why on earth she chose to meet a stranger in the first place. And her family didn't believe in mixing races. She wasn't Italian, although she could pass for one. Her skin was the color of mocha, giving many people the impression that she was a mixture of various 'things'. Spanish? Hawaiian? Latino? She resembled all of these cultures, but possessd no blood from either one. She wasn't exactlysure herself what she was 'made up' of, but she felt exotic...

As Eric attempted to take one last peek before heading back to the hotel, he noticed she was smiling. What was she thinking, he wondered. Curiosity lead to a series of other thoughts as he continued to stare at her smile; it was beckoning him. He found himself walking towards the double doors leading into the computer lab and by the time he realized what he was doing, he was already inside.
To hell with it, sometimes plans must change, he thought to himself. Their meeting was inevitable after getting to know her, so it didn't matter to him if it was here or at the hotel.

He began removing his black, leather trench as he neared her desk. He sat in the empty computer chair next to hers and turned in her direction until the only thing he saw was a view of her sitting by the window. The sun bounced beautifully off the colors in her hair. She didn't move to greet him or even turn his way. He did notice the way her fingers had stopped typing and were poised above the keyboard.
He really wanted her to relax, so he moved in closer to her side with his knee touching hers and softly placed his hand on hers. Still, she would not turn. He then brought her hand to his lips and softly kissed it. He noticed that instead of her body getting relaxed, it became more tense. Il Dio MIO, he thought to himself...he was just trying to get her to relax.

"Alexis," he whispered.

In those long two months, she had never heard his voice and now to hear him speak made her body so aware of what she had been craving for so long. Her mind was spinning already and he had only kissed her hand and whispered her name. Her mind also registered the other students sitting at different computers around the lab.

"Alexis," she could hear him speak again, but with more volume. She slowly turned her head and looked into the most magnificent pair of blue-green eyes. All of the fun and sexy things they had said to one another came back to her memory in a flash, sending electric sparks dancing through her tummy. For a brief moment, she felt as if she were sliding out of her chair, only to realize Eric was moving closer. When their lips met, her breathe departed, causing her to get a little dizzy from the caress. His lips were soft and tasted of cinnamon.

She inhaled his maleness, which gave her tummy another surge of an intense current. Suddenly both of them became aware of their audience, although everyone in the lab could only see the tops of each other's heads. So, it was quite peculiar to see two heads as close as theirs.

The moment was not lost, for an audience only fueled his inspiration.

He remembered the instructions he gave her in their last message and wanted very much to see if she had been obedient. He moved in a little closer and placed his hand on top of her thigh, satisfied that she had worn a skirt. Giving her thigh a gentle squeeze, he brought his hand up under her skirt, searching for something that should not be there.

He closed his eyes as he touched her bare skin, pleasantly surprised and very pleased that she followed his instructions. She squirmed in her chair a little to get him to remove it, although she reluctantly realized that was not what she wanted at all. This time she closed her eyes as he squeezed the inside of her left thigh, praying she could keep her mouth from letting any sounds escape.
He leaned towards her ear again whispering all sorts of naughty phrases containing the f-word. He knew that word drove her crazy and wanted to make the best of it in their current position. She was melting on every syllable and becoming very wet as he parted her pussy lips with his middle finger.

She quickly covered her mouth in order to catch the sudden gasp trying to escape, but she was not about to tell him to stop. At the moment, she didn't care where the place was or who the audience consisted of, and didn't have enough strength to tell him to 'no' anyway. In the midst of clicking keys, humming copiers, and a few chattering students, the only thing she heard in her mind was his voice.

"Daammnn, you're so wet, sweetheart."

His voice ignited a fire that was slowly growing between her thighs. She let the side of her head rest onto his forehead and continued to let him explore within her dampness. His finger made a constant path of liquid around her clit, diving into the center every so often to drive the sensations home. Alexis grabbed his arm for support as the trembles began to climb. Seeing this reaction, he slipped his finger back inside her folds and shook his finger along the sides of her walls. As she looked up into his eyes, she noticed the passion building in them and her orgasm took her by surprise.
He quickly wrapped his arm around the back of her and covered her mouth with his right hand as not to let out her scream. As she trembled in the rippling waves of the tide, he slid his finger inside her again and searched for her g-spot. Her second orgasm coursed through her as he relentlessly toyed with her sensitive area. His right hand was still covering her mouth for the sake of her embarrassment, because he knew a few of the students were not paying attention to their computers.

He brought his hand down from her mouth and put it under her chin. He wanted to show her something and needed her undivided attention.

"Look at this. Look at how wet you are, darling."

As he was speaking he was well aware of the sweet aroma filling his nostrils. The scent that drove men wild with passion, a woman's juices. He brought it slowly to his mouth and began licking his fingers like a cream covered popsicle until every last bit of it was gone.

"Mmmmmmmm...when we get to the hotel, I'm going to devour you."

He stood, grabbed his coat and walked out leaving her staring behind him with wide, excited eyes. She knew it was useless to try and finish studying, so she glanced around suddenly feeling self-conscience and noticed everyone was deliberately avoiding her eyes. She saw smiles on a few students sitting closest to her and knew they saw enough. That thought gave her a pleasant little buzz she didn't expect. She never realized it would turn her on to know she was being watched while doing something so intimate.
You learn something every day, she thought with a satisfied smile. An image of the man who silently came to her and gave her two orgasms came back to her memory and she quickly left the school and headed for the hotel in which she would get her first erotic massage. It will be her first one and she was eagerly looking forward to it, especially after what just happened in the lab.

The weather was cool, but windy. As she stepped out of the car, the wind blew open her jacket sending whirls up her skirt; tickling in hidden, but uncovered places. She welcomed the coolness as her body was still hot from her new lover's touch. She walked to the entrance of the hotel oblivious to his gaze from the fourth floor window. He had everything arranged just right, because he had stated a few times that he didn't want to disappoint her. When she opened the door to their room, he looked at her response to it and smiled.
He was sure no one had treated her like a princess before. After taking her coat, he slowly undressed her as the soft music filled the room and the romantic scents from the candles filled the air. He went to the drawer and brought back a silk, violet robe with silver stripes. Like he said, he didn't want to disappoint her. Before he opened the robe for her to walk into it, he looked at her figure and marvelled at his luck in finding such a beautifully shaped woman. Curvaceous, but slender with soft thighs and round full breasts. He stared at her nipples and couldn't wait until he got the chance to put them in his mouth.

"Come here," he said with a sexy smile.

As she walked to him and slipped into the robe he bent to her ear and told her what wonderful nipples she had. Of course, she blushed, more from the thought of what it would feel like to have his warm mouth on them. He took her by the hand and led her to the back room which was decorated with candles and rose petals. The soft glow was infectious to say the least and she began to slip fully into his control. She looked at the bed, but was silently wondering what was underneath his own robe.
As if reading her thoughts, he slipped it off and threw it over a nearby chair. She admired his lean body, not hard, but what a body he had with his black briefs covering another part she was dying to see. She pulled her bottom lip into her mouth as she imagined tasting his nipples on her tongue as well.

"Turn to the wall and take off your robe, love."

She did what he asked and could hear his soft moan as he feasted his eyes on her luscious, round ass. He stood there, wondering how such a tiny waist could spread out to such ample roundness. He wanted to wrap those honey colored thighs around his waist, but he had to go slow because he had planned to be there all night...and all morning. She turned around to see his reaction and was very pleased that he 'responded' so well to her body. He moved his briefs around just a bit to help relieve some of the discomfort.
He walked around the bed and instead of placing her on it to get started on her massage, he gave in to the temptation of grabbing her ass and squeezing it in his strong hands. She still had on her low heels, which brought her chest up against his close enough for one of his nipples to come in direct contact with one of hers, pulling a low groan from his mouth.

"Okay, I think...you had better lie down now, before I say fuck the massage."

Alexis was delighting over the effect she was having on this gorgeous creature, but she turned her head and kept the celebrating to herself.

Getting in bed, she began to crawl on it slowly until she was in the center, glancing behind her to make sure he had a nice view. By the look on his face, she knew he was seeing 'everything' there was to see from that position and the candles were bright enough for him to see the glistening sheen that lay just outside of her lips and thighs. As she made herself comfortable on her tummy, he came up behind her and straddled her hips.
She could feel his hard shaft touching the lower part of her spine, which tingled all the way down to her toes. He magically produced oil from somewhere and began to rub it onto her body. His touch was warm and sensual, just as she imagined it would be. As he massaged her, he gently rocked his hips back and forth on her bottom sending a surge of fire through her nerves...the lingering kind that makes a woman want to cum at that moment.

He slid off her ass and placed himself between both her legs. He was massaging her thighs, but could not keep his eyes from looking at her pussy, which was flowing with juices. Resisting the temptation to lick her, this time, he turned her over and straddled her again.
They gazed at one another as he massaged her chest and stomach. His forearms would occasionally brush past her hard nipples, purposefully he did that over and over without touching her breasts at all. She wanted to beg him to do something with them, but he was relentless and continued to tease her. Finally, while bringing his palms up her stomach he gently grabbed her breasts, molding them inside his hands.

He squeezed the nipples with his fingers and rubbed his hands around in circles. By this time, Alexis was ready for some intensely passionate sex. She kept quiet, because the torture was so delicious. He reluctantly let go of her, reached above her and came back with a chocolate strawberry. He slowly licked the chocolate and placed it into her mouth, as she bit into the soft fruit she realized it was soaked in wine before it was dipped in chocolate. Eric watched the wine slide down her cheek and licked it up before it touched her ear.

He fed her strawberries and other kinds of exotic fruits, he massaged her gently and made sexy innuendos about what he was going to do to her later. She was constantly on the verge of orgasm, but he would never let her fall over when he sensed her nearness. He caressed her and worshipped her body for what seemed like a few hours, his erection never faltering. When he thought she couldn't stand anymore, he lifted himself from her and the bed and carefully pulled his briefs over his pulsing member.
Alexis stared at his cock and mentally noted its beauty. The head was fat and smooth and she was anxious to feel the silky skin on her tongue. Her body, as though it had a mind of its own caused her to get on her knees and crawl to him before he could sit on the bed. She looked up to make sure he would not mind if she touched it for a moment and he smiled back down at her to acknowledge her curiosity. His plans would still be carried out this night, he thought.

She could smell soap and the scent of man as she held his cock to her lips. It was as soft as his lips, she thought as she opened her mouth wider. She played around with the head, enjoying its silkiness, enjoying its taste. Little drops of precum flowed and she licked at it then, letting his whole shaft slide fully into her mouth. She allowed her tongue to slide along the underside as he began to thrust back and forth unconsciously. Suddenly he pulled back and grabbed the corner of the wall, willing himself not to cum. He groaned and thought of his mother, his grandmother, his DEAD great-grandmother, anything to ensure regaining his control.
He was sweating now and lunged for her, knocking her on her back onto the bed. Parts of his hair stuck to the side of his face and forehead as he crushed her mouth in a ferocious, breath-taking kiss. His lips trailed down her neck and to her breasts where he sucked them into his mouth roughly at first. Sensing her pain, he calmed himself for a moment and resumed his attack on her nipples. Alexis' moans turned into yelps as he devoured each breast with relentless fervor. Eric's body lifted from hers and he pulled her up in the process.

Turning her around, he pressed his chest against her back as he placed her hands around the back of his neck. He massaged her breasts and nipples til she was begging for him to take her. He reached down then and fingered her clit, making her shudder with delight. He slipped his finger up inside her and it dawned on him then that he had wanted to taste her again.
He untangled himself and threw her down to the bed and dove right into her wet pussy, licking and sucking, giving her a third orgasm since this afternoon at school. She was still feeling the after shocks of a powerful climax, when he brought her to her knees. She was breathless and dizzy with ecstasy. He slid easily into her wet folds and since he had built himself up for so long he wasn't going to take it easy on her this time. Walking her over the headboard on their knees he told her...

"I think you better hold onto that."

As soon as her second hand firmly grabbed the headboard, he let loose an onslaught of thrusts. Eric's dives started deep and hard and eventually became a pounding force within her tight, but slippery cunt. He growled loudly on every push and Alexis yelped just as loudly as pleasure and delicious pain surged throughout her body. The bed hit against the wall with his drive and threatened to alert others of their private activities, something he didn't really care about at the moment. He brought her back to his chest as he continued to pound away inside her moistness.
She was exhausted and ready for release. He reached down and brought the juices from her pussy and rubbed some of it onto her bottom lip, tilting her head back he licked it from her lips and kissed her. The pressure undoutedly became overwhelming at this erotic act and she started groaning from the oncoming pleasure. He continued to massage her clit as he slid his thick penis inside her creamy vagina.

She climaxed hard, thinking her very life was about to end in the split second before she could descend. As her walls pulsed onto his hard shaft, Eric exploded with a tremendous force. With teeth clenching and eyes tightly shut, his body began to fall forward before he caught the headboard with one strong arm, the other arm was around Alexis' waist allowing him to proceed with deep short thrusts. He wanted to dislodge every bit of cum he had inside her, that thought giving him the strength he needed to keep them both up, somewhat. Without warning, his arm gave way and they both went head first into the pillows.

"Damn" he said weakly, "I forgot to give you the wine...you know, to loosen you up a bit".

They giggled at that thought and fell asleep.

The next morning they woke and had a wonderful bout of morning sex.

"What are you doing tomorrow?"

"Oh, I have class and defense courses at the station."

"What are you doing next week, then?"

She laughed. "I have to help my mother at the gallery."

"What are you doing for the rest of your life?"

For the first time in her twenty-eight years, Alexis was speechless.
~The End~

 

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