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David

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11/10/2005 6:17:06 p.m. Relentless I've never written to someone like this, but as it's 3am and I'm in the the middle of Italy I can't resist it. I like the way you write; it is genuinely erotic, and uplifting (in more than one sense!) and you give a sense of the inner feelings of both Alexis and Eric, and that's not easy to do. Couple of very minor points. I think an Italian would be more likely to say, or think, Dio Mio than Il Dio Mio. And that mauve lipstick is a bit disturbing. But then Alexis probably meant it to be ;-) Dreaming out loud with a bit of careful research always ensures a genuinely erotic story...thanks for such wonderful feedback (& tip), especially from my favorite country. And mauve lipstick can be a beautiful color on the right skin tone...come back after working hours and I'll show you. ;)