Suddenly wide awake
The two of them became a single machine, voiceless and focused, pumping within and around each other, a delicate but workable mix of hard and soft, wet and dry.
He woke suddenly, in the type of darkness that only three in the morning can provide. An angry wind was blowing outside the window, and he had an aching erection, the kind of rock-hard cock only a certain type of dream can create.
He was lying on his back, to one side of the bed, and he threw back the sheet to take his cock in his familiar right hand. He closed his eyes, and tried desperately to recall the dream. He knew it had something to do with a redhead, and he knew it was dirty, but that was as far as he could get.
Abandoning the memory regretfully, he engaged his imagination instead, and a steady stream of images, memories, and fantasies raced through his head. A blur of faces, legs and skirts. Schoolboy fumblings in the back of the sheds. An eager but badly executed session at camp. His much more competent and coherent efforts as a young man, before he left home. Lisa, skirt up, panties down, bent over the sofa pleading with him. Imagined duty as a stallion to the girl next door. A vision of breasts, and nipples hard with expectation. The sight of his cock impaling an attentive virgin, the mixture of pain and ecstasy on her face driving him on. A girl whose name he has shamefully forgotten, her dark hair half-hiding her mouth, as it pumps his cock; her eyes looking up at him adoringly as he comes, and she dutifully swallows. Skinny-dipping with the guys, and being unexpectedly discovered by a group of rampantly horny girls. Okay, that one was completely made up, but it was good. Breasts, presented for judging. Three sets. The owner of the winning set, her tongue in his mouth as she thanks him, sitting astride his naked body, and lowering herself on him. Dina, fumbling quietly beside him, demanding satisfaction, spooned, her ass rubbing him wonderfully, and whispering that she's coming, again.
His hand had not been idle while the thoughts raced through his head, and as the imagined Dina bent to allow his entry, he came for real, stroking as he pumped ecstatically over his stomach, long stringy tendrils snaking over his skin. He was surprised at the speed of the orgasm. He must have been very close when he woke up. He wondered again what the dream was about, but couldn't recall.
Grabbing a tissue from the nightstand, he started to clean up the mess on his stomach, not really taking any notice of his surroundings.
"Do you think, Michael, that you could manage to involve anyone else?"
"Oh, Alice, I didn't even notice you were there!"
"I can see that. You were out like a light when I got here, and when I squeezed in beside you for some warmth, you didn't even notice."
"How long have you been here?"
"What time is it, Michael?"
"Ah, it's a little after three."
"Oh, just a couple of hours then."
"And I never noticed?"
"Not a thing."
"Umm... were you just..."
"Yes, Mike?"
"...lying there, watching me?"
"I was."
"Oh."
"But..."
"Yes?"
"... lift the rest of the sheet."
Michael took the sheet in his hands, flung it toward the foot of the bed, and looked at what he had uncovered.
Alice lay there, completely naked, her dark hair surrounding her pale, smiling face. She lay on her left side, facing him, her left hand under her head, propping up the pillow. Her small breasts were stacked one on top of the other, nipples betraying excitement, and her stomach smooth and lovely in the dim light. Michael's attention strayed quickly from there though, as he saw some dim movement in the darkness between Alice's legs. While she lay here, cheerfully chatting, her fingers were dancing a jig inside her, flicking and dipping seemingly without control, long slender digits delightfully abusing her skin, pulling feeling and sensation from every touch.
As Michael watched, her effort became more organised, and her face scrunched up in concentration as she drove herself closer to release. She never closed her eyes though, and they stared at him in silence as she stroked herself. He watched her body start to shudder, her muscles quivering from head to toe, and he listened to the graceful moan that escaped her lips as she came in front of him, her orgasm as desperate as his, though somewhat less messy.
He lay still, and continued to watch, as her body calmed down, and her fingers vacated her now tender groin. He smiled then, and reached over to kiss his lover. Their lips together were somehow right, and their bodies moved close together, breasts to chest, thigh to hips, hands and arms encompassing them both.
As always, the kissing was a drawn out affair. They both loved this intimate contact, this most tender joining of two bodies, and neither spoke for some time. Alice eventually whispered, returning to the wisecracks that were the mainstay of their discussions.
"Excuse me Mike, but if you don't mind, I'd rather you didn't prod me with that thing. I thought you dealt with it already."
"I thought I had too, Alice, but you convinced me otherwise."
"Think you could put it somewhere a little more comfortable?"
"Think you could lie on your back?"
"You sure this has anything to do with me? You seemed to be coping fine by yourself earlier."
"Oh, and you didn't, little Miss handjob?"
"I was afraid I'd miss out."
"Well, let me kneel between your legs here, and you won't."
"I'm not sure I want to, now."
"Why is that?"
"Maybe I'd rather watch you again."
"Stack up those pillows, and you can watch while you participate."
"You know I have a thing about missionary."
"If you can't handle it, close your eyes."
"It's not my eyes that I need to close. It's my legs."
"Too late now. You've given me expectations."
"I did not give them to you, Michael."
"No?"
"No. you took them."
"I may have. Well, alright then, let's not bother."
"Oh, now, hold on Mike. No need to be rash."
"Yes or no."
"Yes. But only if you can keep me quiet."
"Quiet?"
"I'm going to scream."
"What the hell are you talking about, Alice?"
"When you make me come."
"Come?"
"Again."
"Oh. You sure you can manage two?"
"Three."
"No, two."
"Three. You missed one. You weren't paying attention."
"Huh? When?"
"You were busy, Mike. Hand like this... Thwack, thwack, thwack."
"You came then?"
"Just a little one. Same time as you."
"My God!"
"Hey, none of that, okay? Anyway, I said yes. You look ready. What's the hold-up?"
"I don't understand you at all you know. Alice. Not at all. How loudly do you plan to scream?"
"Louder than the wind. And you understand this well enough."
Alice manoeuvred her body beneath Mike's, and as they both fell silent again, he positioned himself. In some ways, he loved this bit the most. The anticipation of the feel of her wet, ready body for him, the sliding of his hardness against her, the feeling of total enclosure as he slid deep inside her familiar body.
As he lay there for a moment, his body flat above hers, their lips touching again, Alice started to move a little beneath him, small rocking motions from her pelvis, her sense of rhythm taking over, and he lifted himself from her a little, starting to slide out of her, only to change his motion at the last moment, and impale her again. Their movement together became just predictable enough, and they started to move a little faster, his thrusts countered by her little rocking movements.
From Mike's perspective, this whole scenario was some sort of magic that he could neither understand nor get enough of. His body took over and provided the right amount of pressure. Hers countered exactly as it could. The two of them became a single machine, voiceless and focused, pumping within and around each other, a delicate but workable mix of hard and soft, wet and dry.
Alice was right about her ability to achieve another orgasm. As she undulated effortlessly beneath her partner, she could feel herself getting closer, and she whispered in his ear. "Mike, kiss me baby. Keep your lips on me, or I'll scream, I'm warning you."
He didn't answer her request, but her moved slightly above her, without breaking his stride, and placed his lips on her eager set, and their mouths locked together, tongues entwining, lips caressing.
She could feel it now, very close, as Mike thrust deep inside her yet again. She thrust her tongue desperately inside his mouth, and went rigid, her nerves unwilling to take any more input, as she screamed silently within his lips, and clamped hard around his cock. Her contortions were all he could take, and he came too, a hard, almost painful release, deep inside her, as she held him, trying to stop him from moving.
Slowly the shockwaves receded, and he felt safe enough to remove his mouth from hers, nudging her legs to release him a little as well, and he collapsed, sweating and exhausted, on her, and still in her.
"Oh, Alice, I should have pulled out."
"Period is due tomorrow Mike. Relax. I wouldn't have let you."
"You are the sweetest, sexiest thing on the planet, you know that?"
"Of course I am, sweetheart. Now get off me, you heavy lump."
"Give me a kiss first."
"You already have half my mouth in there."
"Well, let me give some back then."
"I really must go, you know."
"Not yet."
"Have to. One of us had to maintain some semblance of common sense."
"I can never think straight after you rape me."
"Not rape. You seduced me."
"I have my doubts about that. I think you engineered it."
"Well, of course I did. What's that got to do with it? You would never have made the first move."
"No, you're right."
"Listen, about that, you heard they appointed the new Pope last night?"
"Ratzinger, right?"
"Was. Benedict Sixteenth."
"Yeah, I heard."
Alice jumped up from the bed, energised by the orgasms, as always, and started to dress. "It's not so good, is it?"
"For us, you mean?"
"Yeah. Help me with this stupid thing, would you?"
"No, it's not. We have to make some decisions soon, you know."
"I know Mike, but I really wanted this to work out."
"Well this is working out. It's working out just fine. It's the rest of it."
"Yeah. Well, give it some thought. See you in the morning at Mass?"
"Yeah, I'll be there, Sister."
"You'd better be, Father Michael. It's not a Mass without a priest. The veil straight?"
"It's fine. See you then."
"Okay. Get some sleep Mike. Oh, and no winking this time, alright? Christine thought you were after her."
"She did not."
"Sure she did."
"Sister Mary Alice, you are making that up. Give the Parish Priest a kiss, and hightail it back to your bed."
"Alright. Hey, next time, check if I'm here first, will you?"
"Promise."
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Tha was sooooo bad!! I loved it
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I was starting to be a wee bit suspicious when they started talking about
GBF: Sorry to
I liked it. I did guess before you revealed. As 99.9% of your readers say, "Your dialog is great." I agree, it just rolls. But I have to admit, sometimes I get confused on which charactor is talking. It could be my meds.
GBF: Damn, how did you guess? Oh, and it could be my writing! :-)
I love the tangle of fantasies he flicks through at the start, and you know you're the master of the twist! Just what I was looking for. :)
GBF: I'll send him over for an evening. :-)
Thank you! One of the issues that I have with reading erotic stories is that they are poorly written. My husband introduced me to your writing and I truly appreciate the fact that your spelling and grammar are correct and you write well. If more erotic
GBF: Oh, have I heard from hubby, then? :-)
Hotness abounds!
GBF: Must have been summer!
This is my last story tonight! Enjoyed the byplay and the conclusion. Thanks again for your efforts.
GBF: I should think so! :-)
*delighted smile* Top shelf quality from you, as usual. Never would have guessed how it ended from it's take-off. And your dialogue, as always, right on. Your signature guarentees a good read! No, a GREAT read.
GBF: Thanks. You're the best. Stick around please.
Quite an ending!
good one, read it twice!
GBF: The first time didn't work?
Oh, but do you have a way with words.I don't think in all my years of reading(50 some), have i ever come(0pps) across a stack of breasts. The thought is just too devine. Another muy bueno(10) for the great master....
GBF: Thanks. You're going to have work hard to come up with something to say now if I write a *really* good one!
The dialogue was good but the description of sex was average (at best) and somewhat disappointing compared to previous writings.
GBF: And yet LAST time you reviewed this, you gave me a 1!
ANOTHER WINNER WITH THE SURPRISE ENDING.. Keep em cuming will slip to the next.
This is the first of your stories I have read for a long time and I wasn't dissapointed. I loved it and by the feedback, I guess I'm not alone in this opinion. You're still the master.
GBF: Well, I did wonder... :-)
This story is sexy, sweet, funny, ironic,it's written very well,you got me with that surprise ending. Well yea good story.
GBF: Thanks
I loved it. Nicely written with a twist at the ending. Very tongue in cheek.
GBF: Waddayamean... Tongue in cheek indeed! :-)
Very nice story! well done...:)
LOL!
GBF: That beats the 'I hate you' comments! :-)
I could only read yours "Suddenly wide awake", but I must say it's excelent.
It goes hotter and hotter and hotter, and by the end, when I thought it couldn't get any more hotter, my mind made a complete flashback of the hole story, and it was many times
GBF: Thanks. That's stunning feedback.
[Unusually, even perhaps disturbingly long snip]... This is an amazing twist to your story. But I am equally angry that this tidbit of essential information was withheld until the very end of your story. :-(
GBF: Well, it's a property of the English language, to say nothing of the time-space continuum that I can't have it as a twist, at the same time as telling it to you from the beginning.
LOL, normaly I'm not so amused by ***** includings/themes, but this one is just to good to pass up, the setup is great, the choice of words JUST hits the right mood, ... ah! It's simply a great piece of work. (It took more than five minutes to calm down e
GBF: Thanks for that. Sorry to beep you. I can't have you giving it away!
The beginning - sexy. The middle - satisfying. The end - surprising. What can I say? I have a thing for stories. My compliments on the delicious interaction; I could almost see myself as Alice and then... I have to say though, if this is your version of p
GBF: This is just entertainment !
Ooh, very clever twist. I'd be alot more trusting of my ***** if I knew they had healthy desires like the rest of us sheep! Way fun to go back and read a second time after you know the backsotry!
GBF: It is, but I had to bleep what you said, so you don't give it away.
awsome
GBF: Cool
wow!!! amazingly written and uber hawt!
GBF: That's quite a way you have with words!
It was wonderful!
GBF: That's a relief!
HAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHA...
GBF: :-)
By the way, I never said, but I loved it. Sexy, sweet, funny, ironic...
GBF: Thanks. You can stay.
The story was written very well, the surprise ending was very enjoyable, it seems to me you were writing from firsthand knowledge, about yourself, and your lover, it is the kind of writing i enjoy. Keep up the good work
GBF: First hand? No, not this one!
It's cute how you kept their identity until the end. That added a bit of a twist to the story.
GBF: Cute? :-)
I also read the one about the ***** and the ***** odd twist haha.
GBF: Odd indeed!
Love the ending! Keep up the marvelous work.
This was very cute, very hot, very clever.
It took me a while to get around to reading it.....
It was WELL worth the wait!
GBF: It was worth the wait for that feedback too. Thanks.
I just finished this one and it was great. I guess after all the stories that I have been reading lately, I thought that the characters were going to be related, anyways this was amazing. The friendly banter reminds me of my own sexual relationship and
GBF: Yeah, well incest isn't my thing. Well, except that story about the twins... Oops. :-)
What a story and a great suprising ending. Brilliant and natural dialog. Really enjoyable.
Hmm, pretty good. Though, gotta say, the only part that really intrigued me was when he found out [snip] -- there's a decent twist. The rest... Guess it depends on your upbringing.
GBF: Doesn't everything? Thanks.
Surprise ending good story.
GBF: :-)
Funny! :-) ~ I've been reading some of your feedback and responses which were just as amusing and interesting reading Gentle.., you can be a little sarcy sometimes. oh, and as a asstr virgin thank you for my gentle initiation!!
GBF: Sarcy? Me? My God, you've got a cheek!
Welcome aboard, pull up a chair, and make yourself comfortable.
Oh, and how about getting a spine next time, and giving me an email address? :-) I promise not to abuse the knowledge.
VERY well done!Your dialogue is very believable and the imagery is superb!
GBF: Come and sit over here with us sinners, okay? :-)
I bitterly resent the ending of this story, just because it reveals that I have just been SCAMMED!
:-(
Conversely, I would have totally different feelings if you had been UPFRONT about the fact that this story involved... [snip]
GBF: It's a real pity that I can't include the rest of this feedback without giving the story away. Suffice it to say he/she is NOT happy with my story. I take it on board, but I've received a lot more positive affirmations, so I'm not letting it get to me.
funny ending.
the rest of it wasn't bad either.
GBF: Funny feedback. All of it. :-)
Wonderfull, so simply pleasing and so erotic. Just the way it was when I was youthfull and free.
A marvellous conclusion so kinky.
GBF: It was? :-)
Thanks.
It's a hoot...a very hot hoot, with an unexpected twist at the end. I'll give it a 10 just for that.
GBF: Thanks. For the 10 and the comment.
Well up to your usual high standard: loved the twist!
GBF: Thanks.
I LOVE IT!!! absolutely perfect!!!
GBF: Oh my God! :-)
This was very good. I enjoyed it a lot.
Your usual great dialog moved the story along.
GBF: it wasn't moving fast enough under its own steam? :-)
Great story, I really liked this. Thanks for sharing.
By the way, you've got a great site.
GBF: Thanks.
Yikes! Nothing like the old old stories of [snip]. Wonder what the truth might be ...
GBF: Yeah, I wonder...
Gentle,ya did it again,another great story!And the twist at the end was awsome!Who would have ever thought at the first that you were talking about [snip]. Anyways keep them coming!
GBF: I wondered what happened to you. Thanks.
I adore the right-hand scenes. Men are such sexy creatures, well, most of them. I laughed out loud when their identities were finally given away.
GBF: That was just my intention. Thanks.
Wow Thats an awesome story. lol i loved it. i loved the end when the turned out to [snip] lol that seemed to just make it seem even naughtier.
GBF: I know how you like things to be naughty! :-)
Nice twist at the end.
nice story -- and a good ending.
I found your story amusing as well as erotic. And I liked the twist at the end.
Gentle, You earn the Blue Ribbon in the Hall of Erotic Phraseology; incredible variety and tastefully arrayed!Keep it up; a sure formula for keeping it up!
Big grin, nice almost boring story until the twist in the tail made it not in the least boring. Well done, most enjoyable.
GBF: :-)
Wow! What a surprise!
GBF: Oh, good!
Very interesting. I liked the ending
GBF: Oh good. Given that's where the story was going! :-)
Boy, I hope you're not [ snip ].
GBF: Nope. Lucky huh?
Excellent as always.
GBF: Thanks. The rest of your comment would give the story away! :-)
you did mean "wanking", right? "Oh, and no _wanking_ this time..."
GBF: No, no. Winking!
Oh, my. Very nicely done, to match the other 54 of yours on my disk.
A very neat twist, developed at exactly the right speed.
GBF: Slow reader, or repeat offender? :-)
Never saw it coming ... a nice twist.
Love the way it started out.....I was on pins and needles and other "things" :o) for the whole story......very neat....and nice......
GBF: Other things? :-)
Wow what a twist at the end I know I sometimes dream And when I awake it was always a dream usually it is about something I had just read This is a great story loved it
GBF: I'm glad you liked it. Keep in touch about the dreams. I always need ideas!
Loved the premise, loved the ending. Loved the story, in fact.
GBF: You can stay! :-)
As always, the story has a twist -- and what a twist it is this time!
GBF: Gotcha, huh?
Very appropriate for this season.
(I'm not [spoiler snip].)
GBF: I'm glad you think so.
GBF: Well, it had to be short... I don't want to say why! :-)
Loved the twist, and so true.
GBF: Thanks.
Gentle I'm sure you will get a lot of high scores for this great surprise ending, but I for one must give you a zero.
GBF: Sorry to have offended. It certainly wasn't intentional.
I enjoyed it. The sneakiness, the solitude, the searching of memories, the climax. And then
GBF: Thanks Ian. Sorry to snip you, but that was a spoiler!
It is a real good story, it is real confusing when you are reading in the middle of the story, but other then that the story is real good.
GBF: Thanks gorgeous!
Your usual excellent dialogue, with a merry/silly/funny twist at the end. I like it! Excellent fluff.
GBF: Fluff? How dare you, Sir? :-)
As always, I loved it. My wife's [snip] and I'm as far from it as I can get. I've always said I'd become [snip] when...[big snip]
GBF: So, would she be offended?