GBF - Photographic Memory

Oct 2013
All I can say is WOW. Fantastic story. I love it. Right up there with Nick Scipio's Summer Camp -series. Keep up with the great work, I highly enjoyed reading it!
GBF: High praise indeed. Many thanks.

Jun 2013
I'm glad you persevered to write the 50,000 words. It was worth it. I always enjoy reading well developed stories that take the time and effort to tell the tale well and completely. Well done!

Apr 2013
Great love story, thank GbF!

Apr 2013
Joyful romance, with a wonderful shift from wild sex to beautiful romance. When I analyze the plot, I have to admit that you ended it at just the right point, yet still I wanted it to continue longer.

Jan 2013
Sure wish that was me in my teens...or any other time.

Jan 2013
Started reading and could not stop until the end. I guess it was writen awhile ago but I was lucky enough to come across yesterday. Very enjoyable thank you.

Jan 2013
Lovely story. You had an idea from the start where it might be heading and the trip was worth it every step of the way.

Jan 2013
We're not quite even, but, it took you 3 years to write it, and me 3 years to say thanks.

Nov 2012
I loved all the chapters of your story. I like how they are erotic and humor and sensitivity all worked in together. Thank you for a great read.

Nov 2012
Very well done. The free form was a bit difficult to follow, but it seemed the proper way to try to describe the way the girls talked--which would also be difficult to follow. I enjoyed it a lot and will check out your other stuff.

Aug 2012
it's late i'm sleepy so downloaded fron 10 to end . the stoy is refreshing, i an enjoying. keep on writing.

Aug 2012
I loved your characters, their playful dialogue, and the overall flow of the story.

Jul 2012
What a marvelous story. I'm heart broken the series is over!! I can't wait until you write more! You bring you characters to life!!

Jul 2012
Awesome story!!! I'm enjoying the whole series!! I had to pretend I was Steve/Steph on this one it was so hot!! Thanks!!

Jul 2012
Excellent. I just read all 17 chapters in one sitting. I literally had to finish. Great story.

Jul 2012
Was a great story thanks for writing it. Read from one to seventeen.

Jul 2012
I loved the ending - wish it could have happened to me

Jun 2012
liked it a lot. Would like to see it continue

Jun 2012
Read 1 and 2 plus Bathtime. Excellent dialogue and all round sensual. Rather like your nom de plume, in fact.

Jun 2012
very good

Jun 2012
Great story. Thanks!

Jun 2012
Quite enjoyable story.

Jun 2012
Loving it, but suddenly they're all talking with an Aussie accent!
GBF: Aussie? No, no, no...

Jun 2012
One of the better romantic story's I have read, Thank You

May 2012
Awesome story. I sometimes don't understand why some authors think their stories are so good, when there is no realism. I begin to wonder if they have ever had good sex with a trusted friend. Thank you for taking the time to write and share a story w

Mar 2012
Very GOOD

Mar 2012
Very nice, Thanks for writing.

Jan 2012
I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for taking the time to write this and posting it. I really enjoyed the way the story started out relatively crazy but intense and managed to keep the intensity but settle into something stable at the end.

Jan 2012
I really enjoyed the story line. Up until the end, I thought Paul would [spoiler].

Jan 2012
Just read the whole thing, and gave it a rating of 10-10-10 on SOL. Great story.

Jan 2012
Thanks for sharing your gift of story telling, I have very much enjoyed the stories I have read so far. I love the way your stories flow and the staccato dialogue of your characters. I now have many more hours of reading ahead of me while I escape into

Jan 2012
Thanks for this great story.

Jan 2012
I just finished reading the entire story in one epic sitting - could't put it down. Really excellent. You have a knack for rendering characters that are very real-life and believable, and that appeal to me. The way they talk, the way they act, the way

Jan 2012
If you stop here, it is still a superb, fun, funny love story. The first few chapters were good, but I wasn't even certain I wanted to bother reading on an on. Then the four of them began to relate on a human level. As we came to the story of Heather a

Feb 2011
Enjoyed you hugely! Thank you for a great time. I hope to do it again.

Feb 2011
Well done!

Feb 2011
it pulledme in good writer

Jan 2011
I enjoyed "Photographic Memory". A lot! Wish I had had that experience in my teens.

Jan 2011
Lovely story! Sexy, funny and tender all at once!

Dec 2010
These were really charming stories, full of fun and surprises. Thanks for the artful writing.

Dec 2010
Very good story! Thanks for writing.

Oct 2010
So Vey Glad I was finally able to read this chapter!

Oct 2010
If only my teenage years were something like this. Please keep up the good work!!

Oct 2010
I've seen it posted before. it is one of my all-time favorite stories!

Oct 2010
Great! loved the emotion...

Oct 2010
Excellent

Oct 2010
Nice.... A complete chapter n a promise of good stuff to come..

Sep 2010
absoluteely fantastic

Sep 2010
Have been reading the whole series, love it. Characters in 3D, dialogue, setting; just astonishing. Easily the best erotic _story_ I have read.

Sep 2010
I generally don't like long serials. I think the last one I liked was MikeCA's "Strip Poker" series. Well done on this....

Sep 2010
Again, nice!

Sep 2010
I can't believe I made it through 15....and I've been busy today! Well done.

Sep 2010
Can't wait for Heather....

Sep 2010
Happy New Year!

Sep 2010
Like the library a lot.

Sep 2010
Still at it. Very nice

Sep 2010
mmmmm

Sep 2010
Still enjoying.

Sep 2010
Nice

Sep 2010
Very romantic.

Sep 2010
I guessed, but still loved it.

Sep 2010
Love it!

Sep 2010
Again, very nice!

Sep 2010
Really liking this...

Sep 2010
I have to give it to you....you write very well.

Aug 2010
Thanks for this story. But it ended too soon.

Jul 2010
Wonderful story and brought back ...

Jul 2010
lovely,touching, but arousing as well. a combination not usually pulled off well in erotic literature.

Jun 2010
I love your stories. My only request is that a link to the next chapter be also provided at the end of each chapter so that one does not have to scroll back to the top of each.
GBF: I'm working on it!

Jun 2010
first of your stories that i have read good so

Jun 2010
Hmmm ... It's been a long while since I've checked in. Still doing famously, I see! Have you any follow-on to The Swap?
GBF: Not yet!

Jun 2010
Great story. I had read 13 chapters when that was all there was but it was still on my list of stories to watch for the contiuation but it had been so long that I started over and remembered it as I read but it was still enjoyable the second time aroud an

Jun 2010
I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read! I loved all of the photographic MemorY stories. keep on writing!

Jun 2010
great ending! im so sad its over tho!!!!

Jun 2010
chapter so far! Fkn awesome

May 2010
I have never once given feedback in my entire 10 years of reading erotica. However, I feel that I must , so without further wordplay! Simply amazing!

May 2010
Very nice, thank you.

Apr 2010
I just came across you website and I really enjoy your stories. I like longer stories and photographic memory was great. I love romantic happy endings and you gave us a good one.

Apr 2010
Love your writing style, Gentle. I majored in Brit. Lit. and appreciate the vocabulary and style you bring to your stories, not to mention the eroticism that permeates them.

Feb 2010
Congratulations! This is one of the best extended stories I have read in several years. Please do something else just as good!

Feb 2010
A great story with real characters. Completely believeable.

Feb 2010
great ending.Build up almost made me switch off.(should be shortned)
GBF: One day I'll figure out how to please everyone. :-)

Feb 2010
wonderful true to life story. Thanks

Feb 2010
a really nice, heartwarming story

Feb 2010
Wonderful! True similar situation to what most of us go through. Thanks!

Jan 2010
Very sweet. Wish it had happened to me.

Jan 2010
Every boy's dream vacation scenario I imagine. Pretty well written, at least I enjoyed it.

Jan 2010
Really enjoyed it. Had a life of its own and a gentle pace that must come with experience. Everything I write is harder, faster and more direct - although I've never created characters quite as diret as the twins!

Jan 2010
Photgraphic Memory is one of my favourite stories and easily one of the best stories i have read on this site.

Oct 2009
You are a great writer. I could read on and on.

Oct 2009
A beautifully told tale

Oct 2009
Thanks, I think I'll keep this around for awhile. I can't express myself anywhere as well as you do but this one is very special.

Sep 2009
Great story

Sep 2009
Wonderful story. Your first that I've read.

Sep 2009
Wonderful story! This ranks up there with the absolute best I have read on ASSTR

Sep 2009
I assume that this is the last chapter in Photographic Memory. If so it is probably your best story of yours that I have read!

Sep 2009
Heather is HOT!

Aug 2009
This is one HOT story for a first fuck!

Aug 2009
I think it is impossible to keep 3 females from not competing for the 1 male.

Aug 2009
Very very very sexy! Loved it.

Aug 2009
Awesome

Aug 2009
Sounds like Paul is store for a lot of Vickie! What about Heather?

Aug 2009
Why are these girls so willing to share? All I can say is I wish I was the guy!

Aug 2009
I would love to be Steve! Well described.

Aug 2009
Well written- very exciting and realistic. I should have been born on a farm!

Aug 2009
Good set-up for the day(s) ahead!

Aug 2009
Great start to a new story. Steve is my kind of gal! Well written with great dialog!

Aug 2009
Charming. As a prologue should, it makes one eager for the longer tale to begin. Had you called it an overture, we might think of dozens of symphonies . . . those in praise of beauty, especially those admiring spontaneity & sexual exhuberance! Bra

Aug 2009
Thoroughly enjoyed it. I, to am a photographer, so I identified with that part of the story. The fact that Steve was assertive/aggressive was a turn on for me.

Aug 2009
Thanks for presenting us such lovely characters. I had really enjoyed my self knowing them. The only complaint (I'm sure that you heard it before) is the open nature of the end. Heather is nice, Vicky is playful but Steve is simply unforgetful. Tha

Aug 2009
Very nice build to the end. Loved the plot and character development. Adored this story the most so far of yours. The romance is the thing.

Jul 2009
That was great,couldn't stop reading

Jun 2009
Charming and well paced, without the gory details so often added without need.

May 2009
But it was everything I hoped for.

May 2009
Hi. I REALLY enjoyed "Photographic Memory" and wanted to let you know since you asked that readers tell you what they think.

May 2009
I really enjoyed your tale. Erotic at times, but passably realistic most of the time too (or so a greatly over-aged "teenage boy" would hope!).

May 2009
Thank you very much for such a nice story that just kept getting bigger and better. Keep it up. I wish I could write at all.

May 2009
Thanks for the great story. I love your writing style and dialogue. Really maintains a balance that is entertaining, sexy, and emotional throughout.

May 2009
I cried for real after finishing this. So damn good. I only dream of writing like this. It was so real and I didn't even feel like I was reading just absorbing, couldn't quit reading either, until I had finished it.

May 2009
Thanks for the story.
GBF: Thanks for the feedback!

May 2009
This is a great capstone for the whole series. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, and this is a great wrap up, and a perfect lift for a seemingly endless series of grey days.

May 2009
very good story, I started reading this one a while ago and finished it I thought until recently when it was rediscovered with more chapters and finished again. lovely lovely story, 10/10

May 2009
I've never responded back to an author on asstr before and I want to thank you. I love how natural the dialogue is between your characters. It reminds me of two women I know who keep me on my toes and distracted almost all the time.

May 2009
Well, you know I like - adore! - your stuff. And I also liked this.

May 2009
hate to see this end...but such is life...we thank you...

May 2009
I just finished your story and I thoroughly enjoyed it! I read it in two or three days. It is well written, and quite erotic.

Apr 2009
That was a wonderful story. I was lucky to catch the end. I sincerely hope for more, perhaps a little less time between chapters.

Apr 2009
A wonderful story.

Apr 2009
fantastic ! A great ending. Even "uncle Walt" would consider it a "Fairy Tale " ending or is that "tail" oooohh !.....

Apr 2009
Okay, GBF, you wanted some feedback, so here it is: This is one of the best stories on SOL. If that's not enough, tough. :)

Apr 2009
Thanks for a fun, sweet story. Even if you *did* make us wait three years!

Apr 2009
Thanks for the wonderful story! You write dialog as well as anyone I can remember and the description and plots are near the same level.

Apr 2009
You might consider a sequel about the relationship between Heather and Paul, trials and tribulations along the way, etc. There's a lot more to be told.
GBF: And I might not, too... :-)

Apr 2009
long time no talk. the story was excepal i think i stated this story quite some time ago.but could be wrong. now i'll have to look at some of your other stories.very well writen an very good.

Apr 2009
What can I say, I loved it!! I think any red blooded male who reads it will be envious of Paul and his summer. If you ever think you want to get in the writing mood again, those two twins and their future would make a heck of a read. Thanks again for y

Apr 2009
I love the sentence "I loved the sheer feel of her in my arms." As well as the rest of it, of course, but that just caught me particularly. And good on Paul and Heather. :)

Apr 2009
Very sweet and nice story. Made me feel good :-) Hope you can write a follow up later. Thanks a lot for your hard work.

Apr 2009
well i started reading this when you first posted it, glad you finally finished :) it's a great read and fun story. and now about a sequel with the twins returning ?
GBF: Thanks. No. :-)

Apr 2009
I always enjoy a good story and your held my interest. Since I live in California, it always interest me to read about another country and their customs and language patterns. Thank you for the story and hopefully a muse will get you going on another stor

Apr 2009
Thank you very much. It was always a good read -- which is my highest category of praise.

Apr 2009
Yes, I did enjoy this story lots, but you've left it on a cliff hanger ending - are there plans to write a part 2 or something?
GBF: No. :-)

Apr 2009
I really really enjoyed the last chapter. Thank you very much.

Apr 2009
great story, I waited patiently between breaks in chapters hoping you would continue on with the story. Thanks for the memories.

Apr 2009
a lovely story. it is a pity that we are not _supposed_ to let "children" read this kind of stuff, since all three of my boys would benefit from the experience. some really good characters

Apr 2009
An excellent read. Thank you for the story. Any chance of a sequel?

Apr 2009
Toroughly enjoyed the story. Kept me busy looking for the next chapter. Hope this is not the end.
GBF: Ahh... Yes. Yes, it is.

Apr 2009
I liked the story. You left yourself room for a sequel if you want, what happens at school the next year? Welcome back. Thanks for wrapping up the story.

Apr 2009
Damn. You are good. So here I am with tears in my eyes and feeling moist elsewhere as well and my husband is going to get lucky tonight.

Apr 2009
Thanks for Sharing, great build up and searching for love..

Apr 2009
I think the best i've ever read! Great job!

Apr 2009
Well done Gentle. Completed this enthralling tale with a lovely rounding off.

Apr 2009
GBF, I really enjoyed this story but I do wish I hadn't found it until it was finished. It's really hard to enjoy a story like this when the chapters are so far apart in being posted.

Apr 2009
To call it an enchanting story would be a superfluous use of words. Thank you for writing this. Very lovely!

Apr 2009
That was stunning and perfect! I might just have a new favorite GBF story.

Apr 2009
Well done

Apr 2009
Thank you for the wonderful story. It has been an absolutely great read from go to woh. I'm not a writer so I have no idea how well it was written (professionally) but I'm an avid reader and it was certainly an absorbing and enjoyable read. Congrats on

Apr 2009
Paul and Heather end up together as we knew they must, but the journey was worth the wait. It is nice to see the sex neither glossed over nor sensationalised. It is critical to the tale, yet this is far from a stroke story. You have created some real

Apr 2009
Simply brilliant. You have outdone yourself. The entire story has been artfully written and held my attention and interest. I can understand the need to end it, but would love to see a future story pick up where this one ends. Thanks for a truly enter

Apr 2009
I loved this story. I read most of it a while back, and was pleasantly surprised to see the final chapters posted.

Apr 2009
Nicely done... sorry to see it end but it did need to have a sendoff & this was a good as any that I could have thought of... Keep up the nice work...

Apr 2009
enjoyed the story. nice to read one with a "local" background. i will check out your others.

Apr 2009
Wow, glad you finished this. Great story and thanks much for sharing your talents.

Apr 2009
A few words. Thanks for the great story. I enjoyed it a lot, please write more.

Apr 2009
An excellently written story that I have enjoyed for a long time. I'm a little surprised by the ending because the rest of the story had more than a little real life in it while the last chapter appears to have been written as a little idyllic episode wh

Apr 2009
I liked it a lot. The tension's gentle. The language is nice, and I enjoyed the longer passages of pure dialogue.

Apr 2009
This is one of the best stories I read On SOL. It made me curios of you other tales, and they didn't disappoint either. Maybe only in their briefness. As for the darling characters in this story, I sure hope this will not be the last we'll hear from t

Apr 2009
Have enjoyed your writing very much and have hung in there through you delays hoping you'd add another chapter to a very good story.

Apr 2009
Wonderful ending. Thank you for such a great story. I look forward to every story that you write. you have such a way with words and your female leads are of a type i wish for in my life

Apr 2009
Wonderful, wonderful story. Sad to see it end (finally!). Thanks, and I'm looking forward to your next epic.

Apr 2009
THANK YOU !!!!!! I'm not sure how realistic the story is, but it makes me wish I could have lived it. I'm not good at critiques about what could have been better or what needs no improvement. I just know I really liked reading each chapter and w

Apr 2009
AMAZING STORY. I really did enjoy it. But, there is probably another 50,000 words about the next year and then when the twins visit again next summer. Thanks for sharing.

Apr 2009
Thanks - A great story - i am sorry it is finished in one way - i was looking forward to the year at school ahead :) Thanks again!

Apr 2009
It's been a long time between chapters. I think I've been with you since the first post. It's been a good read!

Apr 2009
Hmmm. There were lots of moments I wasn't sure I liked this story. Lots of times when the gaps frustrated me and made it hard to recall what went before. Now, here at the end, I find that I do not want the story to end. That, perhaps more than anyth

Apr 2009
I just want to know if Heather will share him with Steph and Vicki in the future, or are they exclusive? Seriously, more would be great.

Apr 2009
I like the series just wish that I didn't have to wait so long between chapters. I have cum a lot reading about these kids though really good jerk off material

Apr 2009
It was a wonderful story. However the length of time, made it tough to follow after 3 years. I had to keep going back to get the flavour and flow of the plot. It sort of feel like I wasn't ready to cum and it was over....

Apr 2009
nice story thanks!!! sequel where the other girls come back next summer?????please?

Apr 2009
Its amazing. I like it a lot. I can't thing of anything better than this. I really like your stories. And this one is one of my favourite. I'd love it if this story goes on and on and on. Thanks for your efforts to bring us these good stories.

Apr 2009
I have enjoyed this story very much. It had a fresh take on the 'young love' thing. The characters were full flesh, the dialog believable, and the 'action' very natural. The sex was nice but not the main thrust of the story. It might be nice to hear

Apr 2009
Loved it! Loved it! So it took three years - well worth it! And the Kiwi flavour made it a bit special. Don't stop - keep the creative juices flowing

Apr 2009
You tell a good story. Sometimes it takes a while, but it's almost always worth the wait. This was a clever ending. I like it so much better when the underage girls don't get knoked up. Keep on peckin'

Apr 2009
I liked your story but for some reason I could never get "deeply" interested in it. It might have been because Paul didn't seem to be that deeply involved with any of the girls. At least that was my perception. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

Apr 2009
Well, Gentle, it was well worth the wait. Such an excellent story that reminded me of so many times in my youth. I loved it and I love you for writing it.

Apr 2009
Loved the story. Maybe someday your Muse would allow you to continue with anonther story about the same characters.
GBF: And maybe not. :-)

Apr 2009
Just dropping a note like you asked for! I've been following this story for the past year/year and a half and all I can say is that it was worth it. I liked the sisters and I think you made most readers fall in love with Heather, even if there was not tha

Apr 2009
Great Story.. really enjoyed it... when is the next one coming... :-)

Apr 2009
I enjoyed the story, the breaks were a bit maddening, but they can't be helped, I could not even begin to write a story this good. I've scored it as a great
GBF: Yeah, sorry about that.

Apr 2009
I've enjoyed your story from the beginning and am happy I stuck with it to the end. I'm not much of a short story reader. I like to get to know the characters. Maybe that is why this is my favourite of your stories I've read. I particularly like the way y

Apr 2009
Thanks. Thanks very much. One of these days, I'll have to go back a read it all at once.

Apr 2009
very enjoyable story. the only bad thing about it probably is the length between posts. personally i find that I've forgotten whats happened in the last chapter with the gaps. I really liked the characters, and I knew that Heather and Paul would ge
GBF: Well, read it again. :-)

Apr 2009
I really liked it! Had to go back and read parts over to remember what was going on, but I caught up again. thanks for writing - hope you have more ideas that will prompt you to write more.

Apr 2009
A really first rate story, worth all the time and effort you put into it. As a reader it was frustrating to wait for the new chapters- but it was always worth it. Thak you for finishing it and doing it so well.

Apr 2009
I enjoyed your story. I will have to reread it in one setting as it has been so long since I read the first few chapters that I have forgotten some of the plot. The characters are great and easy to identify with. Thank you for writing and sharing your

Apr 2009
I Leica.
GBF: Very clever!

Apr 2009
I really loved this story all the way through. Thanks for writing. The only rhetorical question/statement/thought I really have is that the twins are really open sexually, have been intimate with Paul and great friends with the two. What sort of rela
GBF: That's not a plot hole!

Apr 2009
Thank you for the story. It's been a surprising gift every time a chapter turned up.

Apr 2009
I think you write a great story. I find that you are both technically correct as well as a great story teller. My only concern is how long the story stretches out. I often have to reread the previous chapter to figure where I am. However, this is a sm

Apr 2009
As usual it is not only great, but better. And what a wonderful finish to a great story. I'm sure many folks expecially myself got many hours of great pleasure from all 17 chapters. This person very very much appreciates your long hours and hard work.

Apr 2009
Gentle, excellent as usual, I love your style, thank you so much.

Apr 2009
This is fantastic love making and I love how it turned out. Great part of the story. Hope to see more soon.
GBF: Umm... It's finished. :-)

Apr 2009
One of your best. Thanks!

Apr 2009
That was a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.

Apr 2009
Wow! I didn't realize it was 3 years! Amazing how time flies when you're having fun. Since Paul gets Heather, may I have the twins? LOL Great story, thanks!

Apr 2009
Thank you very much for such a wonderful ending to Paul's adventure. He has many more to come with Heather in his life, but it is a good place to leave them. The photographic memory series is always a good read, and re-read. Looking forward to other sto

Apr 2009
Very nice ending. :)

Apr 2009
very,very nice

Apr 2009
wow almost forgot about the story. really interesting reading. hope it isnt as long to the next one

Apr 2009
Great writing...definitely your best, and I really liked most of them! When's the next chapter coming? Keep up the great work.

Apr 2009
I hate the english..its panties not knickers!! no wonder we had to help you in ww2
GBF: I'm not even tempted to respond.

Apr 2009
More! More!
GBF: Soon! Soon!

Apr 2009
I am enjoying the story. Thanks!

Mar 2009
Went so fast I could not pick all of it up. Cell phone? Tent? Whaaaa?
GBF: You should probably start at the beginning. :-)

Mar 2009
Don't know when I have enjoyed a story more.very hard to take the time to do this.lol thanks again for such an intelligent experience.

Mar 2009
I really like the fact that i could actually believe that what i just read might have happened. You have a tenderness that is very appealing and that i enjoy in your writing. Thank you for that.

Mar 2009
umm, well, first, very well written. I am a writer of sorts and I enjoyed the wording and the dialog - very believeable.

Mar 2009
This story comes out of my life, almost. But I finally found completion over forty years later. I was the jerk, but I think I have made up for it this time. Thanks for the story. It helps reconcile the past. Keep it up, so to speak. :-)

Mar 2009
stimulating

Mar 2009
More please! Great stuff, probably some of the best contemporary fiction I've read in a while, erotic or otherwise :-)

Mar 2009
Molly loves this story you are so talented..... :)

Feb 2009
Yeah. Worth the wait. Keep it up, and thanks.

Feb 2009
Gentle, you are always worth the wait, thank you.

Feb 2009
I'm really impressed with Heather and her like of boys! Thought she only liked girls! She is one HOT female. Strange as she is so open about her sex experiences with Paul! Please keep writing this story.

Feb 2009
As always, worth waiting for! :)

Feb 2009
Well, its been a few months since I have looked here, and I see that you still have that *savoir-faire" with your characters emotions.

Feb 2009
A dream of mine long ago

Feb 2009
I hate when I read anything serialized and discover that I need wait for a next installment - reminds me of my childhood when we used to go to the movies of a Saturday morn and wait until the next Saturday to learn what came next. Wrap it up pls in the n

Feb 2009
I enjoyed the chapter. Thank you

Feb 2009
Sigh. RL again, huh? What's this Real Life stuff and my favorite authors? But, yeah, it was worth the wait.

Feb 2009
I haven't voted, since the story isn't done, but I am enjoying this story very much. Thanks for writing!

Feb 2009
It was a real good read, sensitive, caring.

Feb 2009
I guess I'm lucky. I missed the gap and didn't start reading this till now. Anyhoo, it reads good, feels good, and what else is there? I understand about life and it seems there is a lot more life to go around these days. Thank you for sharing. It

Feb 2009
Interesting, and erotic. I like "Steve's" open attitude; and looking forward to the encounters to cum

Feb 2009
Welcome back. I am enjoying your story and look forward to reading more. Thank you for your work.

Feb 2009
I thought you forgot about us!!!!!!! Yes it was worth the wait. Great story (and dialogue) Hope to read more soon... Thanks
GBF: Forgot? Never!

Feb 2009
as you said, long time coming, but well read. definitly looking forward to the next chapter.

Feb 2009
A+

Feb 2009
Excellent part, love the dialog. Took time to get it right, but no one has your way with words. Now if you could just start producing them on a regular basis!

Feb 2009
1st rate return to the story!

Feb 2009
At last... I'm glad i lived to read this one... Another great story... And i've been waiting for a long time since the previous post... God i'm desperately waiting for next post....

Feb 2009
Good! Too good a story to cut it off. God, I hate that term.

Feb 2009
I just found this wonderful story because of your latest posting. I have really enjoyed reading this tale of family, friendship, young lust, and young love. I can hardly wait for your next installment in the story. Keep up your good work and keep the chap

Feb 2009
Apparently you got over whatever trouble you had with the dialogue. It's nice.

Feb 2009
GBF, as always enjoyable reading. but I got too have more, please. Thanks again...

Feb 2009
Definitely worth the wait, and the dialogue above all else is what makes this special.

Feb 2009
Nice continuation... The history of her issue was nicely done... Now the question is where does that lead???? Keep up the nice work...

Feb 2009
Great part of the story. And I can't wait for the remainder. Sounds like it will be really great. This is one lucky guy and seems to fall into some nice situations. Very exciting stories so far and I hope they will continue.

Feb 2009
Well, to be honest, I was laying with my penis and reading the story. Un other words. I masturbated until i cum over the end of the computer screen. Amd then Having done that I went on reading and answering your questions.
GBF: Nothing quite like a set of priorities...

Feb 2009
Great work, fantastic series. Not thinking about doing anymore, are you?
GBF: Yeah, just as soon as I can find some time...

Feb 2009
I love your stories! Especially your Photographic Memory series. When is the next one coming? (see what I did there?)

Jan 2009
A wonderful story that has kept my attention through all chapters(hard to do). Please keep writing more chapters as I'm hooked

Jan 2009
Well, I read the last one, and worked my way backwards to ten before I figured it'd be best to start back at one. Well worth the time, and I don't care what anyone else says. The more time you take, the better they seem to be. Keep it up Gentle! You've cr

Jan 2009
This just gets better

Jan 2009
In one word... awesome. This is one of those stories that only comes around so often. It is just fun to read and there are never enough like it. Keep up the good writing and I'll be happily awaiting the next chapter.

Jan 2009
Damn good (but confusing) story. When is Chapt 16 coming?
GBF: As soon as I find the time...

Jan 2009
Oh. This story is great.... I really like it a lot... Please keep it on... I'm desperately waiting for what happened next...

Jan 2009
I gave you three tens in the vote so how about rewarding me with the continuation of the story please keep it comeing.

Jan 2009
Nice story .. remind of of my younger days MMM But Waiting for the next Chapter RunninBare ....

Jan 2009
Another great chapter, we have not to hear Heather's story in full, and I think that they are maybe a shock or two in there for us. Look forward to you posting Chapter 16.

Jan 2009
will you be posting anymore chapters. as i think they are really good

Jan 2009
Very good story, but drawn out a little.

Jan 2009
I can feel the end approaching, and although I am dying to see what happens, I also cannot bear the journey to be over. I trust you to make it good!

Dec 2008
No but it is very entertaining so far.

Dec 2008
[lost the comment somehow. Sorry]

Dec 2008
I like thanks...the wins are just a hoot. carry on i look forward to more....

Dec 2008
excellent innovation

Dec 2008
I read some of the parts before and like to have a return to the beginning of Heather's story

Dec 2008
WOW a great read...The twins....and now Heather are just so hot....Paul well both run the race...thanks look forward to the rest...

Dec 2008
I don't want to sound too critical but...well...this use of stories being told to establish background within this story seems to be a bit overdone.

Nov 2008
Keep them coming - I enjoyed this one also.

Nov 2008
Heck, no, but I love it as much as the rest of the story!

Nov 2008
AMAZING!! Not a nice place to stop, unless you want us to read the next chapter! There is MORE!!

Nov 2008
This is turning into a really sexy story but I find it very hard to believe that Heather and Marcus stopped at just having "fun" with each other.

Nov 2008
Very nice change of direction... Leaves some wondering as to what may happen in the future with the two if anything. They both like each other but will it grow to something more... Keep up the nice writing...

Nov 2008
It was my hope and there were some good signs that this is where it was going from your previous chapters. Good Show

Nov 2008
I really enjoyed the story though I have read some of your stories before. It's been many, many years since I moved that slowly but there were at least three of those girls that were just dates, with kissing and feeling and delaying "all the way."

Nov 2008
Very interesting. Great part of the story. Can't wait to hear the rest of it. It's very sexy. Love the way she got off.

Nov 2008
Don't get me wrong, the twins are definitely hot; but given my appreciation (weakness) for redheads, I've wanted this story to head in this direction from the start. Lol

Nov 2008
so, although i'm not sure of the direction, i'm looking forward to more.

Nov 2008
Great story! My only whine is that I have to wait between chapters. :)
GBF: Oh, you're one of those. :-)

Nov 2008
This story is delightful and I look forward to getting to the other side of the "brief bridge." I have read most of the stories you have posted (you are prolific!) and I didn't find a clunker in the lot. but this is one of your best.

Nov 2008
So good, I think they are already in Love but will pass through the Lust phase yet. Then there must be a reunion of sorts. Possibly well into the future

Nov 2008
MY GOD! I have lived this story and so glad that it is continuing.
GBF: You sure you mean 'lived'? :-)

Nov 2008
Cool story!

Nov 2008
great story!

Nov 2008
It was fun

Nov 2008
Loved it. I could just see the lights light up in Paul's brain when he heard that *****. Oh, the possibilities for the rest of the summer.

Nov 2008
I like where it's going.

Nov 2008
A very nice read. Will be looking forward to future installments.

Nov 2008
But be gentle with her. We know you must be firm. Thanks.

Nov 2008
Somehow I just thought that ending was coming I did the photography bit when younger - it never developed like this though
GBF: It's not the end!

Nov 2008
what a relief it is to me!

Nov 2008
GBF, as always another outstanding chapter. I await your next post. Please post again soon...

Nov 2008
Thanks for writing a truly memorable story. I hope we don't have to wait too long for more.

Nov 2008
Quirky, funny & really entertaining.. with some really hot spots. Whats not to like?

Nov 2008
they were trying to get heather and paul to fall in love :)

Nov 2008
Mean to stop it there. Thanks for this chapter.
GBF: It's not stopped. Just paused.

Nov 2008
Great! Liked the twist at the end, although there had been hints before. Very nice series...is there to be more?
GBF: Damn right!

Nov 2008
Another Excellent Story - Keep them comming.

Nov 2008
Nice Read... Sad for them leaving but sounds like something else might happen that will have more meaning in the end... Keep up the nice work.

Nov 2008
To quote young Oliver, "More, please." Excellent work with engaging characters. I'm looking forward to seeing more of them as your time permits.

Nov 2008
Oh wow Gentle, it just keeps getting better & better. And you stop at the end in such a delicious way. I am looking forward to another. You do great work with words. Thanks much for your efforts. P...

Nov 2008
Oh yes, its up to your usual standard

Nov 2008
This part is exciting. I love it.

Nov 2008
Man, you never stop and it is just as well. lol Liked it very much

Nov 2008
Too perfect. I had a problem getting into the fantisy. It was like trying to believe that I could just flap my hands and fly like a humming bird. I guess I an getting too old. Still a fun read. Thank you.
GBF: But it ain't over yet...

Oct 2008
This has been a great series and I know it has to end.......but not yet please. I wait with baited breath for each new chapter.
GBF: We're not there yet, I promise.

Oct 2008
"her groin pressed against me, hot and damp with desire." "My hands continued to caress her buttocks, loving the feel of the taut skin." ....Holy Shit! Great stuff.

Oct 2008
A deft hand with description.... Not too little and not too much - leaving one's imagination to fill the canvas. Perfect. I can't wait to read more chapters.

Oct 2008
I am simply LOVING this story! I can't wait to find out where the journey takes us.

Oct 2008
It just keeps getting better and better

Oct 2008
Yes, yes, we are keeping up.

Oct 2008
Cool story!

Oct 2008
I love how you incorporate more then just sex into it. Its practically a romance novel. Keep up the good work.

Oct 2008
hi

Oct 2008
Of course I'm keeping up with baited breath or at least some hard breathing!! Looking forward to the New Year and the further adventures of the foursome.

Oct 2008
The story is getting interesting.
GBF: It's about time... :-)

Oct 2008
I enjoyed it and found amusing.

Oct 2008
Cool Storey thanks for your efforts

Oct 2008
Another great chapter with some good sex. Still wish I was Paul!

Oct 2008
Where did you say they were? I am ready for vacation now.

Oct 2008
Holy shit. I thought it would end at the twelfth part, and I'm so glad it didn't.

Oct 2008
I'll admit I had started to wonder if all SOL-writers had lost all their stocks, and subsequent will to write, lately :-) Thanks for yet another NICE chapter in a great story. I like a little tease, and a little release, and you provide both consistantly.

Oct 2008
What next? Only your sexy, twisted mind can say.

Oct 2008
cause heathers in love with him :-D
GBF: Awww... :-)

Oct 2008
Thank you! I've enjoyed the Memories thoroughly. It's hot in a innocent and forthright sort of way, but mainly lighthearted and fun. I thought Steve's introduction was a bit abrupt, but maybe you'll explain it further in later stories!
GBF: Oh, we've gone WAY beyond that now. :-)

Oct 2008
Hi I am following the story and it is a good one Please keep writing. Thanks

Oct 2008
What a beautiful vacation he has had. So much for roughing it. A tent to sleep in to get rid of the tent in my pants would be a good trade

Oct 2008
it really is, in my opinion, one of the best teenagers love/stroke/watheevr story published this year.

Oct 2008
Man, this is hot.

Oct 2008
Another fine story - Continue with the next one.

Oct 2008
An excellent story, well written and with great heart! I hope there's more to come with this story, it truly is amazing.

Oct 2008
Nicely done... The girls are really hidden tigers... looking for the new years trips... Keep up the good work.

Oct 2008
I believe that you write beautifully.

Sep 2008
God! I had an encounter with a girl like this when I was in highschool. Only trouble was I didn't get to fuck her and I ended in jail. Long story.
GBF: So's this. :-)

Sep 2008
Kept me nicely on the edge and got me hot and smiling.

Sep 2008
Love the story....

Sep 2008
Having a lot of fun with this one, aren't ya? :) A great story, and some really fun characters. Love the girls! More, please.

Sep 2008
Great teaser! I'm really interested in reading the rest of the story.
GBF: I hope that's going well for you. :-)

Sep 2008
Each chapter is better than the previous one.

Sep 2008
That was amazingly done. You defintily have a wonderful story going here. As someone else also said, if I had just thought ahead a bit i would have seen where you were headed with that, but you were very clever in hiding it. Nice job in keeping the twins

Sep 2008
You're doing Greeeat!!!! I love the humor that goes along with the passion. I really don't want the story to end and I hope that when it does *****. You asked.
GBF: I did, but I'm not telling. :-)

Sep 2008
Pleasant story. I'm enjoying it. Tks.

Sep 2008
GBF, as always enjoyable reading.

Sep 2008
Very Good

Sep 2008
Your writing is as good as ever.

Sep 2008
Outstanding. How this guy keeps going with all that pussy is amazing. I love the story. Very exciting.

Sep 2008
Thanks for a great story so far, I am really enjoying it and for me you are a great yarn spinner. This is one of those stories that I like to read and not want it to end. Once again thanks, looking forward to more.

Sep 2008
You just keep "cumming" up with more unexpected endings. Superb ending to this chapter. Thanks.

Sep 2008
Lighthearted and fun - and an easy read. You're keeping me awake (or rather from turning off my light).
GBF: You have a few chapters to go...

Sep 2008
All in all, a delightful story and something I really enjoyed.

Sep 2008
I think this chapter is quite good or exciting as it brings back a lot of memories as this is EXACTLY what I have done ***** for a lot of years. Its a perfect way to *****. Well written and very enjoyable!!!
GBF: Sorry, but you were giving it away. :-)

Sep 2008
Ha ha. I loved it. If I'd stopped to think at all, the ending would have been obvious, but you distracted so well with the business and not harping on the ***** that it actually caught me by surprise and gave me a great little chuckle. I've really en
GBF: Swill, huh? :-) Thanks!

Sep 2008
Hot and fun to read!

Sep 2008
excellent work.

Sep 2008
Why is it, Gentle, that I have the feeling I have read this story some long time ago. I see it was posted in 2006, but it seems older than that. Don't get me wrong, it is great. Thanks for the write.
GBF: Well, I *started* it back then...

Sep 2008
Ring in the new year!! Ring my chimes! Chimes are ringing in the new year. Amazing touch to a amazing story. Thanks for writing.

Sep 2008
This is a terrific addition top the story. I love it.

Sep 2008
Story within a story is a great way to go. It flows very nicely within the story.

Sep 2008
great, libraries are interesting places

Sep 2008
Excellent and much appreciated!

Sep 2008
hot stuff in the library I like it!

Sep 2008
As I read this chapter, it seemed to me to be a little more than I need to read as it did not add much to the story.

Sep 2008
quite good..

Sep 2008
Nice read... Enjoying the plot - 3 on one can definitely be mind bending... Keep up the nice work.

Sep 2008
It just keeps getting better and better. Where were these girls when I was growing up? They would have made it interesting.

Sep 2008
Of course I want you to hurry and I look forward to the next installment. I am sure that a good friend of mine will also like the way this story moves when she reads it. Keep up the good work

Sep 2008
Cool story I really liked it. If only ha

Sep 2008
Love this series - Looking forward to many more episodes..
GBF: Many? :-)

Sep 2008
Wow

Sep 2008
wish I was there. Seemed to be enough girls to go around. For just one more. lol

Sep 2008
This is still going great.

Sep 2008
This just gets better and better. Keep them coming - in all senses of the word

Sep 2008
Another great hot chapter! That Vicki is one hot chick. LOVE her ;-) Please keep the chapters cuming!

Sep 2008
Where were girls like that when I was young? Thank you.

Sep 2008
Your stories are GREAT!! Tell me about YOU!
GBF: But your comment was anonymous! :-)

Sep 2008
This is a very good story for reading IMO, and I've already voted 9 on it. My request is simple: finish it and post the final chapters.

Sep 2008
ha very good so far.. poor guy though has fallen deep.. yet somehow i get the feeling...

Sep 2008
I feel very, very excited. This part was excellent.

Sep 2008
Loving the story - very sweet

Sep 2008
Great chapter. Thanks

Sep 2008
I'm really enjoying this story -- but what's going to happen?

Sep 2008
AMAZING!!! Thanks for writing.

Sep 2008
A good yarn, so far; but it's a bloody long wait between chapters. You're not writting for a Pulitzer Prize, so get on with it!!

Sep 2008
I throughly enjoyed the story and I especially enjoyed the New Zeland twist. Keep up the good work and I look forward to chapter 10 and more

Sep 2008
Very nice story. Stimulating. I would like to read more.

Sep 2008
pretty good.. but still sad for him cause he is in it deep.. damn that Love

Sep 2008
this adventure gets better each chapter the photographs in my mind are fantasic I'm jelous of paul all ready now I'm on to chapter 9

Sep 2008
fabulous I esspecialy liked it because I'm in it In my mind anyway I'm on to #8

Sep 2008
Good to see the Photographic Memory series on the go again. My opinion with regards to frottage is that we don't see nearly enough of it in erotic literature, especially with characters who are just beginning to ease into their sexuality.* It's easier to

Sep 2008
Memories, that's what it brings back.

Sep 2008
Keep um comming please (especially those three lovely girls). I especially like how you have come with this story. Keep it up, and if you ever get writers block and need an idea, well, id be happy to help.

Sep 2008
A very good nightime story.Just the right amount of sex for this story. Can't wait to read how you handle Heather when Paul gets hold of her!!! I want to make that your number 1 priority ;-)~

Sep 2008
Nice!, An, I remember when story, most all young boy & girls remember when sometime's. Ah to be young again

Sep 2008
Loving the story glad you resumed.

Sep 2008
Amazing story!!

Sep 2008
love it

Sep 2008
lovely sweet juicy story, thanks for your fine work.

Sep 2008
I'm certainly enjoying your photograpic memories!!

Sep 2008
This was very, very exciting. Made me feel really good. I love the way these girls seem so free and ready to make love. How much better can it get?

Sep 2008
excellent!!

Sep 2008
I LOVE this story! Thanks much and bring on #10.

Sep 2008
Loved then all. Give me more.

Sep 2008
I'm enjoying the story. Please keep the chapters coming. :)

Sep 2008
Keep 'em coming. Fast paced story and you keep the dialog straight...good on you!

Sep 2008
I read and liked all 8 of the series.

Sep 2008
The characters are great, the dialogue fantastic; can't wait for the next installment.

Sep 2008
Humm, what do I think? I'm wondering where this puppy is going. So far, we have eight chapters of character building and a very strange quad forming. We'll see, I guess.

Sep 2008
Not sure if this line was intentional humor, but it just struck my funny bone at the correct angle: "Mike had told me he had a healthy respect for marriage, but that he didn't actually much like the idea." --- Thanks for posting this tale.

Sep 2008
I like your work. My first wife of 31 years (cancer) was a writer and my soul mate. I can only marvel at the volume you have produced. After 45 years in ny architectural practice I am about to call that a day.

Sep 2008
WOW - Not the words a horny old Grand Dad would use for an erotic lit site, but - WOW. The 1st chapter was written by someone with more skill than anyone should be allowed to expect from "asstr-mirror.org" ... and I'm glad I found the GBF link. I'm hooked and

Sep 2008
nice, great read, like your style, please continue...

Sep 2008
please keep adding chapters .... soon. this is a great story thank you

Sep 2008
is well written let me read some more and let you know so far is wonderful

Sep 2008
I like the story.

Sep 2008
Interesting story hope there is more.

Aug 2008
I am glad that you decided to start up with this story again. I reread 1-6 before reading 7&8 since I did not want to miss anything. I enjoy all of your stories but, this one is a little special for a number of reasons. You really work your art on thi

Aug 2008
I am enjoying the story, but am unsure where it leads to... Please continue the story....
GBF: You're not alone... :-)

Aug 2008
Damn, I thought I read this earlier somewhere but it must have been the earlier portion on ASSTR. It is a good story full of the wonder of early sex and yet it does have a story beyond that.

Aug 2008
Execellent . . . great dialogue, but I always say that about your stories. Graphic descriptions that come to life in one's minds eye. and a reasonable facsimile of a plot. What more could one want?
GBF: So I'm doomed to continue? :-)

Aug 2008
great story! Keep up the good work GentleButFirm.

Aug 2008
I really liked it, well done!

Aug 2008
I'm a Yank from central California and I enjoy Kiwi and Aussie storys. You have a good one going here and it ranks up there with the best of them! Thank you for your efforts and I'm looking forward to the next chapter
GBF: I'm not sure I could ever write an *Aussie* story. :-)

Aug 2008
Great to have some more chapters - hope that you will do the rest soon, too!
GBF: Oh, so do I!

Aug 2008
Outstanding!! 10.10.10

Aug 2008
You wanted to know what I think? Very enjoyable!

Aug 2008
Im looking foward to next week
GBF: Oh, God... The pressure!

Aug 2008
Glad to see that you wasted no time getting chapter 8 out. I think this is one of your hotter stories and really enjoy it in process. Hope to read #9 real soon!

Aug 2008
Not bad. Not bad at all. Your characters a decent, and the story is still short enough that they don't seem shallow. As long as you develop them as you continue and work on Paul's relationship with everyone, this will be a gem.

Aug 2008
This was a very good part of your story. I got aught up in the sex and the excitement of the story. This girl really loves the sex and it shows. What a great part of the story. Keep it going, please.
GBF: It's a good part of the feedback, too!

Aug 2008
I so enjoy reading your stories. Is this the end? If it is so be it. Thank you for sharing.
GBF: No, it's not the end. Not yet.

Aug 2008
This is a great story, that I only discovered from your recent update - but then went back to read from the start. You have created good characters and your dialogue - particularly from Steph - is stunning. A lot of what works for me is that the sex is

Aug 2008
your characters have a wonderful style. playfulness with a sense of honor. please keep going :-)
GBF: Oh, alright. :-)

Aug 2008
I think you did great. I hope that you can do another one in two weeks. That would be great.
GBF: D'oh!

Aug 2008
A great deal of fun! Good to see the story moving again - I had all but forgotten it.

Aug 2008
its all good

Aug 2008
You've got a good thing going. Keep it up.
GBF: :-)

Aug 2008
pretty well done.

Aug 2008
Anyway, fun story. But then again you already know that, you're having fun writing it. :-)
GBF: Indeed I am!

Aug 2008
Please don't stop there! This story is far too compelling to leave alone, at least from a reader's perspective. I'm looking forward to seeing how Paul handles the parting emotionally, after lots more great sex scenes, of course. :)
GBF: I'll do my best to continue.

Aug 2008
Thank you for taking the time and putting the effort into an entertaining story.
GBF: Thanks for responding.

Aug 2008
That's pretty much every guy's fantasy. Nicely done.
GBF: Cheers!

Aug 2008
just wunnerfull hun........loved every minute of it

Aug 2008
Great story so far - really looking forward to the next chapters. Appreciate the flashback approach to introducing the girls' history, and wondering if it's foreshadowing later parts of the story... A fan

Aug 2008
I'm a person of few words but I really like this story. This is the only feedback I've ever given on this site or any other. I hope you will continue the story.
GBF: Thanks for the few words!

Aug 2008
I loved your story so far and will anxiously await any future chapters. Alas, if none be forthcoming, I'll treasure what has already been provided.
GBF: The reverse psychology isn't going to work. :-)

Aug 2008
Ok, now i'm bummed that i had'nt discovered your work before now. It's a to be continued.... (mutter mutter) Seriously, I love the story so far; Great appealing characters... Lots of possible plot directions... The sex scenes are we

Aug 2008
Most enjoyable. Please work on this as you can.

Aug 2008
Enjoying the story so far - the staccato rhythms of conversation are interesting and fun, and the erotic scenes are well-crafted. Looking forward to more.

Aug 2008
I personally think this is one of your best stories. It reminds me of so many things from my youth and those same kinds of bittersweet moments to stay in one's mind like a photograph. Occasionally, at night, before sleep comes, I take those pictures out

Aug 2008
Nicely done. Dialogue reads exactly like overlapping conversations with the girls I knew in the Sixties. The story is quite tightly constructed and has a smooth flow. Paul, too, is authentically dense. Again, very accurate portrayal.

Aug 2008
I wanted to tell you just how arousing I find your stories.
GBF: Not so loud. You don't want everyone to hear. :-) Thanks.

Aug 2008
a lovely flow. how the world should be.

Aug 2008
Nice story - wow two years - i only just stumbled on the story... And do you NZ'rs really call flip flops jandles... wow I am an Aussie and hadn't heard of jandles... Keep on writing it is good stuff!
GBF: No, *jandals*. Welcome, neighbour!

Aug 2008
Goofy but good , man where were these girls when I was a kid? Thanks for you efforts

Aug 2008
I have not a sufficient supply of superlatives to describe to you the sheer pleasure (of both innocent and naughty sorts) your tale "Photographic Memory" has provided me. You will go on my list of All-Time Great Internet Authors along with Frank Downey an
GBF: Thank you kindly.

Aug 2008
Enjoying your posting on SOL, especially the dialog between the 3 girls. As I read the first couple of chapters, I got the feeling I had already been through them. After reading some of your comments, I realized I had, indeed, seen the first few chapters

Aug 2008
Sounds promising. I love the kookie character, I feel as if a know one or two of them. Keep going we are Waiting for "8"; well I am !

Aug 2008
AMAZING STORY!!! Thanks for writing. Would really like to read more about the four of them.

Aug 2008
Great story. I missed the first part 2 years ago, so was able to read from start to here in one set. It would be a shame to not finish a story with saucy, pushy girls and a clueless guy. This is more reality than the conquer all cocksmen. Keep it sha

Aug 2008
What a way to wake up. These are evidently very beautiful girls that love to have fun.

Aug 2008
Hey.......this is a wonderful story and getting better all the time.

Apr 2008
Full of raging teenage hormones. Those girls are just crazy. Kind of like me. But i wouldn't be half as daring as they are. Sexy? Of course it is! Now tell me where did you get the idea for this story.

Aug 2006
I'd love to learn what her sisters do next ?!

Jul 2006
Loved it!
GBF: Loved that!

Jul 2006
Well done. Excellent job. Keep up the good work.

Jul 2006
Typo, Gentle: "It was difficult for Jake not to look at Jane in a different why" is probably "way". Otherwise well-written. . . as usual!
GBF: Bugger. Thanks.

Jul 2006
Reminds me of highschool... hmmmmm :)
GBF: You must have been at a great school.

Jul 2006
Wow! Another winner. You make me so hot, and actually I am quite an old man.
GBF: Age is all in the mind! :-)

Jul 2006
Delightful!!! I vacillate between 'confusingly erotic or erotically confusing' however, I congratulate and thank you for the conversational character development and delight that keeping up with it has caused me. Just 'good, clean, fun.. Thanks for the
GBF: Awww, shuck, thanks.

Jul 2006
That, sir, was very hot! I think the world would be a better place if we all learned to share more, don't you agree? :-)
GBF: Well, a little competition isn't a bad thing...

Jul 2006
Ooo! Hmm, I must be going to the wrong beaches... ;-)
GBF: No, just at the wrong time!

Jul 2006
Fantastic, one of the best I have read. I hope this story line continues.
GBF: Thanks. That's the plan!

Jul 2006
Ok I think almost everybody would love to have a aunt like that. Looks like somebody is starting to lose the innocent to me.
GBF: Slowly but surely. :-)

Jul 2006
This is just getting so much better.I love how you used the young innocent outlook on it.
GBF: You mean there's another option?

Jul 2006
That was pretty good, I was really able to some what pictures what you were saying. You detailed that wonderfully.
GBF: Oh good, because it took me a year to go from this to the next chapter. :-)

Jun 2006
wow... another great series! very sexy.. wish i had the confidence that steph..i mean steve, does
GBF: Is that all it takes? :-)

Jun 2006
Very nice finish! Although I was thinking it might end with , and possibly , it ended as it should have with . I thoroughly enjoyed the whole series and look forward to more of your writing.
GBF: Sorry to bleep your comments, but... It might not be over yet. :-)

Jun 2006
Hmmm, nice story the girls are telling to Paul. Would I be revealing myself as 'slow' if I mentioned the parallels between Jake and Paul? That obvious, huh? Okay, enough said.
GBF: :-)

Jun 2006
Wonderful, not knowing what you are up to next keeps one on the leash!
GBF: Woof!

Jun 2006
I just finished reading all 6 parts. I like how you crank up the sex slowly chapter by chapter. It helps hold my interest much more than the slam bam thank you mam of so many stories. Also stretching it out helps old timers like me (69) be able to keep
GBF: Nothing wrong with a good 69!

Jun 2006
I really like how the girls are toying with Paul and that he is staying true to character. I don't think they'd be doing that if they thought he was a 'real' pervert. On to the next chapter!
GBF: You mean you like reading it, or you like him being tormented? :-)

Jun 2006
Excellent...! Story line actually takes you into the event...good job. One gets so tired of just raw porn, it's refreshing to feel like you are part of the script. ...again...good job
GBF: Hey, get out of my script. :-)

Jun 2006
The best.
GBF: Ooooh!

Jun 2006
Wow! Wish that girl had come into my tent. Only I'd know where to touch her, and how!
GBF: Where HAVE you been? :-)

Jun 2006
Ah, thanks! A wonderful stimulus for a much-needed release at the end of my day. Brings back many memories. I enjoy all your stories, but I think this just became a personal favourite. Keep writing, please. I look forward to more!
GBF: Release? Stimulus? :-)

Jun 2006
great story..

Jun 2006
I think the way you wove a story within a story to explain things was magnificent! As always a delight to read and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
GBF: Thanks!

Jun 2006
I thought it was just ok, somewhat stimulating? It would have made a nice porn flick, more than a story about young people.
GBF: That's very sad, from my perspective.

Jun 2006
great story! i can't wait to see where it goes next!!
GBF: Damn. :-)

Jun 2006
Great story, as I thought you had
GBF: Thanks, but no giving away the story...

Jun 2006
Yeppers, another eggselent (that hen talk) segment. That from an Expert in such stories...you know expert? An X is an unknown quantity and a spurt is a drip under pressure. This one says ya got a winner.
GBF: Oh, good! I thought I lost you in chapter 4!

Jun 2006
Really hot!
GBF: My fave kind of feedback!

Jun 2006
It's developing nicely, and hopefully you've now decided to stop confusing us and decided that she's Steph, rather than Steve. Personally, I don't care what she calls herself, but it makes life mighty confusing for an old man like me when you keep changin
GBF: Hey, SHE wants you to call her Steve. :-)

Jun 2006
It just keeps getting better and better. I wish that I could have found a arrangememt
GBF: Don't we all!

Jun 2006
Great love and better sex. A great story with good dialogue and descriptions. A definite 10. But what is going to happen to Vicki and Heather? More chapters?
GBF: Of course more chapters!

Jun 2006
Chapter 5 is good (hot) but not as good (hot) as chapter 4.
GBF: Opinions vary, but thanks!

Jun 2006
WOW WOW WOW HOT HOT HOT SEX SEX SEX And you said this chapter had no sex! I guess "no sex" can be better than "sex" or MF or mf! LOVE IT!
GBF: So you liked it? :-)

Jun 2006
Good story - outstanding developments!
GBF: I thought you might like that one.

Jun 2006
The stories are fantastic! Could not stop, and had to continue until completing them all. You are an excellent author. Thank you, and keep up the good work!
GBF: Thanks. I'm pleased you enjoyed them.

Jun 2006
another good segment. Maybe not the impact of some others but good.
GBF: It's a consolidation chapter. :-)

Jun 2006
Good story. I hope that you continue. Steph should share Paul with her sisters and later Steph and Paul should become a couple. Thank you for writting.
GBF: That simple, huh? :-)

Jun 2006
Read all the chapters together..1-6...enjoyed everything that I've read so far...good characters though not deeply described..good erotic build up..enjoyed the story within a story and hope that you are planning to development the connection more than the
GBF: I'll keep writing if you keep reading. :-)

Jun 2006
Fantastic, I hope there is a great ending but I know in live it doesn't allways work out like that, your stories are the best I've red so far, Thanks a million
GBF: Ending? We don't need no stinking ending. :-)

Jun 2006
I loved it. a sweet story and it felt, im not sure what the right word would be, but almost rewarding.
GBF: I couldn't put the rest of your comments in without giving too much away, but thanks a lot.

Jun 2006
I really liked the experience in the car. Brought back a lot of memories. It's always nice to undress a girl in the car and get on with it. She seemes to enjoy it a lot. Good story. Keep writing them.
GBF: Damn, just when I thought I could have some time off. :-)

Jun 2006
Ahhh Gentle One, you've scored another 10 with me . . . of course that's usually the score I accord your consistenly excellent work. In this particular venture, you seem to have captured a segment of my youthful, and sometimes frustrating times with young
GBF: Wow, thanks. Your opinion means a lot to me!

Jun 2006
Beautiful. Sure like the freedom to do as they like and not worry too much. Seems it's good for all involved.
GBF: Who's got time to worry? :-)

Jun 2006
this was awesome i hope more ch' are coming
GBF: Thanks. And sure there are!

Jun 2006
Interesting, sexy little tale. Outstanding work as usual, Gentle! More, please.
GBF: Damn. I need a break first. :-)

Jun 2006
as always your witings are very good// maybe a little awesome thank you for including my e mail i enjoy the storys

Jun 2006
I like all of your stories.
GBF: I like all of your feedback.

Jun 2006
as always the writings of your pen are so awesome / i loved #4 and now i know were in the world you are but still dod't know your gender // i'll read #5after i go do some shopping ,later
GBF: What kind of priority is that? :-)

Jun 2006
What a great story!
GBF: I'm pleased to hear it!

Jun 2006
I liked the part removing "the little rubber". I didn't give as high as score as I personally, (my opinion) don't find certain mentioned situations erotic.
GBF: Your call. Sorry about that.

Jun 2006
Gentle? Were you spying on me again? Bad girls might, but good girls do.
GBF: They do?

Jun 2006
HOT! HOT! HOT! So hot, I got sunburned.
GBF: Ooh tan lines!

Jun 2006
This is really sexy. No sex, but all the right equipment...
GBF: Good compromise, huh?

Jun 2006
Thank god you're so good at dialogue - it could have got messy but works so well. :) What a great story.
GBF: Many thanks!

Jun 2006
It gives me a real feel of lazy horny summer days. :)
GBF: Oh, good!

Jun 2006
I just thought it was sooooo damn sexy
GBF: Oh, good, just what I was after!

Jun 2006
Those all of them are awesome....I have yet to dislike any one of them.

Jun 2006
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!
GBF: :-)

Jun 2006
I wish something like that had happened to me. Beautiful story well written and teasingly good
GBF: There's a chance you might like the next chapter then...

Jun 2006
I found part #3 very exciting but unrelated to the previous parts.
GBF: You should pay attention. The girls are telling a story. :-)

Jun 2006
Gentle This is a great little story and I have no idea where you are thaing me. The 3 broads sound like a LOT of fun. As usual, great dialogue.
GBF: I'm not telling! :-)

Jun 2006
one hell of a spell binding, hand numbing,rivited to your seat story. Cant wait for the next chapter to begin. two thumbs way up.
GBF: I'm not sure I know how to respond to that. :-)

Jun 2006
another good one -- thanx!!

Jun 2006
I. know about photographic memory, gets me in trouble at times. Love the story, very good.
GBF: I always get in trouble for *forgetting*.

Jun 2006
nice story and interesting to read because i dont know what Steve's (steph's) along with the rest of the girls intentions are. When you make more - which i hope you do - we will all find out what happens next. and good luck on another part to
GBF: All will be revealed. Take that any way you like. :-)

Jun 2006
thank-you for a lovly story and rembering me with and email -i was beganing to think you where notwritingany more storys i hope there are many mor ch's to this story line / agine thank you for an awsome story
GBF: Well thanks, but I have no idea who you are, because you sent this anonymously. :-)

Jun 2006
You certainly had me confused with this chapter, until the end. Talking of confusion, you're far too kind to the Yanks. They don't explain their language, so why should you explain yours? To answer your question, keep the story going, I'm still intere
GBF: It's purely a numbers game. :-) I'd like them to like my story.

Jun 2006
Well done. You went were I thought you would. If it continues as I think it will, I'll have to admit that I appreciate the cliff hangers.
GBF: That's the idea! Glad you liked it :)

Jun 2006
Why couldn't I have an aunt like Sally? Ah, young love or lust. It was so intoxicating and your story is a reminder of that. Great going!
GBF: There hasn't been much TIME for love.

Jun 2006
>Okay, so... more? Of course more!
GBF: Good. :-)

Jun 2006
More, More A very nice start! We certainly will also want to know how Heather fits in. Looks like a fun story. Thank You
GBF: Okay, okay. :-)

Jun 2006
Outstanding! More please.
GBF: Pressure...

Jun 2006
This is a lot like a Saturday matinee where the cowboy jumps off the cliff on his horse to escape the Indians. Don't stop now! And, do not make wait until next week!
GBF: I can only write so fast, though. :-)

Jun 2006
I'm interested to see how this turns out. Seems like but what else...hmmmm? I will vote on completion.
GBF: I'm not sure if you are the first person to figure that out, but you're the first to SAY so. Sorry to bleep you.

Jun 2006
Hello, I love this story. You have great characters. I like how you write about sex. Its intense, yet sweet. Cant wait to read more! Thanks for writing.
GBF: Glad you like it. More? :-) Damn.

Jun 2006
Very Good! I like where this is heading. Can't wait for the next installment.
GBF: I'm just glad you KNOW where it's headed. Damn thing is writing itself. :-)

Jun 2006
Having grown up in Northern NE it brought back a few cherished memories. Well written, believable and charming. Send me additional chapters..... Thanks
GBF: NE?

Jun 2006
Good story...I'm a little puzzled about where it is headed....so you accomplished what you wanted, right? Looking forward to part 4.
GBF: Oh, good!

Jun 2006
Okay, okay! You've got me mesmerized too. Let's get on with the story. You definitely have my attention ... LOL! Good story, keeps moving, has just enough sex to make me anticipate more. Loving it!
GBF: You're so EASY! :-)

Jun 2006
Fantastic continuation. I can see your muse was at your shoulder again. I definitely identified with Paul's pre-dick-ament since the girls' antics had a similar effect on me. I can see where this story of Steve's and Vicki's may be leading, and I will
GBF: I'm glad you're enjoying it. How dare you ogle those girls. :-)

Jun 2006
Really enjoying this, the behaviour of the girls seems so real, the people and scenes seem so close to home...spent almost all of my summer's on the beach... swimming... surfing... messing about with the other kids... learning about girls... fighting off
GBF: NZ is NOTHING like Oz. :-) Said with a friendly smile though, in case readers further away don't understand what great friends we really are.

Jun 2006
Great story - but how long will I have to wait for the next chapters?
GBF: Depends... :-)

Jun 2006
its so good as uselly but when is the rest cumming
GBF: Gimme a break. You just got two chapters. :-)

Jun 2006
Beautiful story. I have read it with great satisfaction. Looks like thowe three girls are really leading up to some good things. Please continue with this.
GBF: I just might. :-)

Jun 2006
Ok, I'm completely sucked into this now... what happens next?!
GBF: Damn, I'm not remotely ready this time.

Jun 2006
This is a great story. More please! :-)
GBF: Wow, I'm lucky I posted the next chapter then...

Jun 2006
I want more, I can not believe this will end like this there must be more!!
GBF: Of course there's more. :-)

Jun 2006
This has the makings of an interesting story, especially as I'm into photography, myself (digital these days). I'll reserve my actual score until the end.
GBF: Good enough!

Jun 2006
I didn't realize I had missed a 'chapter'. You were right, I was confused. What's new? I liked the sexcitment going the whole story through. I wanna go swimming. Sex would be nice too.
GBF: You want to try to keep up. :-)

Jun 2006
You are driving me crazy. Can't you get Steve's name right? I hate being called the wrong name. Betty. I mean Debbie. P.S. Loved the story!
GBF: Crazy is good. Just keep the gender straight, I say. :-)

Jun 2006
Good, really good
GBF: Oh... Good! :-)

Jun 2006
I kinda feel like I'm in the twilight zone
GBF: :-)

Jun 2006
Such a light, romantic story. I always love your humor. Coupled with the poetry of your words, it's well worth reading on a lazy Saturday afternoon.
GBF: Damn, it's only Friday! :-)

Jun 2006
fabulous!
GBF: Great!

Jun 2006
Extremely enticing,,,,,,:-) Loved it, especially the raised skirt part.....Ohuuuuuuuu Yessss!! Chuckle.....Thanks Gentle....P
GBF: I guess you don't need the main course, then? :-)

Jun 2006
Where is the rest the following day, I just started to live into the story and then it's finished
GBF: Oh, it's not finished... :-)

Jun 2006
More please!
GBF: I'm working on it!

Jun 2006
holy shit that was amazing
GBF: It was? Oh, dear, I'll tame the next one a bit. :-)

Jun 2006
As good as ever - your style is really very easy to enjoy!
GBF: Many thanks.

Jun 2006
Steve really knows what she wants and lucky for Paul, it's him! I am looking forward to more of this story to see what happens; on camera and off. Bravo!
GBF: Damn, so I need to write more? :-)

Jun 2006
Excellent Mind candy. I wish to see more of this series. :) Thanks.
GBF: Direct from my mind to yours!

Jun 2006
I think this story was the shit. the kid is so lucky i wish something like this would happen to me.... but yea it was excellently written and it really turned me on.
GBF: So... The 'shit' is good? :-)

Jun 2006
Can't wait for the next chapter. Makes me jeqalous when I think of all the nights that I spent camping out and nothing ever happened.
GBF: Well, you are not alone! :-)

Jun 2006
Memories, youth, innocence. When just kissing & touching was so exciting. I wonder his plans? Condoms? Same or new girl(s)? No pressure Gentle, but you left me hanging & need to finish the job. lol
GBF: Well, did you hear the fat lady sing yet? :-)

Jun 2006
The girl was,nt real but the lead up was great. Very easy to read.t.y. Pappy
GBF: Not real?

Jun 2006
This is a great story congatulations. Everyone should have an experience like that.
GBF: Could be, but don't forget it's a STORY. :-)

Jun 2006
erotic to me as its one of my fantasys
GBF: Which part?

Jun 2006
Very good. Actually one of my fantasies, outdoors, a sexually aggresive girl...fantastic.
GBF: Many thanks.

May 2006
just right
GBF: Whew!

May 2006
very nice.
GBF: Very welcome!

May 2006
It is a very sensous story, much like any young kid would like to have experienced. Of course I never had such a moving experience, but the description and detail were accurate and complete. I can't wait to read more!
GBF: Hey, not too young. You want to get me in trouble? :-)

May 2006
That was wonderful! No pressure, but I think this is already shaping up to be one of your best series. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing your tales with the rest of us!
GBF: NO pressure? :-)

May 2006
Oooo, now that was titillating! I love the way you've described the photographic element. As with everything in life, luck does indeed play a major role there. I'm off to read Chapter One...
GBF: Best of luck!

May 2006
I thought it a great story....................! The thing is, as we get older the memory of our youth starts to slip quietly away. It is only when we get the privilege of reading about someone else's adventure, that our mind is reminded that we too wer
GBF: Three things. Thanks. I think you are reading a lot into a little sex story. It's not over yet. :-)

May 2006
I really liked it. The prologue was cute, but there is nothing more sexy then a female taking control. Gentle that story inspires me to make damage of my own... any takers?
GBF: Damage? :-)

May 2006
More? Hell yes!
GBF: :-)

May 2006
Please, Sir, may I have some more?
GBF: Oh, alright then. :-)

May 2006
I think it's Neat!!!
GBF: :-)

May 2006
very good story stay with it, by the way good hear from you again thank you sonny
GBF: It's only been a week! :-)

May 2006
Of course, more! lol Not even in my best dreams does a girl, a strange girl, descent upon me and aggressively take charge and seduce me. lol Still, thats what fiction does best. Approximate the unlikely. Thank you for sharing with us. It is much appre
GBF: This doesn't happen to you? Are you sure? :-)

May 2006
a very good story so far, i hope theres more. Thanks
GBF: More, yes. Heaps? Not sure about that.

May 2006
this was real good like it can u do another part tooo this and have him get rubbers and fuck her silly do her ass and she wont get preganant lol i cant write but i have good sex ideas keep up the good work pal
GBF: I'm not sure how to answer this... But I think I have to assume that you ended up on my page by mistake. You belong somehwere else in the pornosphere.

May 2006
Sure why not I enjoyed it so far... give us more...
GBF: Alrighty!

May 2006
This is a fun story. I hope there is more to it. Thankyou
GBF: I'm glad you enjoyed it. There sure is.

May 2006
Please more....
GBF: oh, alright. :-)

May 2006
Enjoying the story thus far, looking forward to more.
GBF: Damn! :-)

May 2006
great set-up - youthful enthusiasm & embarassment yet surprisingly responsible. Well written with good tongue still firmly implanted in your own cheek - nowhere near Steve's lips. lookin good!
GBF: I'll keep going then. :-)

May 2006
loved it, every young mans dream come true!
GBF: You think women are different? :-)

May 2006
Tremendous story. One of your best.Younge sex but with all the concerns of "am I doing it right?". They both learned soooo much. Who needs a teacher when they can teach each other, This is truly a great story and is one of your very best. A definit
GBF: Thank. I knew I could rely on you! :-)

May 2006
Getting that perfect picture is the product of good planning, lots of luck and PERFECT timing. You had at least the first two! Too bad you missed the big wave, but, Gentele, that's life.
GBF: You know what? I don't think Paul was complaining. :-)

May 2006
interesting story hope there is more to come.
GBF: I hope so too!

May 2006
Great story. OMG I am so impressed.
GBF: That just might be my feedback of the week, despite being anonymous!

May 2006
very refined. an exceptlly well written story
GBF: Thanks.

May 2006
Oh yes, much more of this. I want to see what happens when . I want to see the reaction from Sally when she . Oh yes, more of this for sure.
GBF: No one said those things were going to happen! :-)

May 2006
Good story, interesting characters and plot. A very nice beginning. Keep up the good work.
GBF: What about the hot sex? :-)

May 2006
Nice story, so far, but the hero took a risk changing film as he walked back from the beach -- if you change film in bright sunlight, there's a chance you can get light streaks on the first few frames (or last few, if the camera rewinds before shooting ra
GBF: He had a dark bag. :-) And in any case, he was quite likely bent over, at least a little, due to the bulge in his pants!

May 2006
Good Start!! As they say in the Navy "Carry on, Carry on.
GBF: Good, good. :-)

May 2006
You asked, Okay, so... more? I say... YES! Thank you.
GBF: Just the answer I was looking for!

May 2006
yes! More! please?
GBF: I'll give it my best shot!

May 2006
More? No Kidding, a lot more if you please. Thanks for sharing a fun story.
GBF: Oh, good. Righto then.

May 2006
Your stories are always fun
GBF: That's a good start. Thanks.

May 2006
This story contained a brazen girl and an excellent encounter, both of which I enjoyed and admired. The description was magnificent, I was able to get a mental picture. Your words had a rhythm and led me through, allowing me to almost feel the tension a
GBF: You can hang around here and make comments as much as you want!

May 2006
Your usual excellent dialogue and earthily delicate descriptions. You somehow manage to make everything fun, and hot, while remaining almost prim in your descriptions -- like how I'd imagine my favorite repressed librarian (and a good friend she is, too)
GBF: I'm a wimp! :-)

May 2006
Excellent story. Masterful use of dialogue, as always. Very entertaining and very erotic.
GBF: I hope I can keep it up then...

May 2006
Very beautifuly done. It brings back some memories I had almost forgoten. St eve really knew just what to do to get the boy off and get her off too. The story was an adventure for a young guy that he will remember all his life. It's too bad as we get olde
GBF: Don't sound so sad. It's not over yet!

May 2006
Skill is required ... knowing what to look for, how to frame it, how to use the light. All of that is important. But nothing ... NOTHING ... beats old-fashioned luck! Being at the right place at the right time when just the right group of girls decides
GBF: So you understand cameras and girls? :-)

May 2006
Where do you find these girls?! Journey home last night went SO fast. Prologue made me grin (I could just see you doing exactly that!), and story was so engaging I nearly missed my stop. :) Roll on more chapters!
GBF: :-)

May 2006
Well personally I liked the story.
GBF: That's a relief.

May 2006
It's pretty clear the type of girl who lives in your mind. Unashamed, as aggressive as necessary, and always lighthearted. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go, and guessing the camera & tripod may play a role.
GBF: Thanks. I needed a new title for this, having already used the one I wanted, and this got me thinking...

Photographic Memory

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