"Shh. Suck while I talk. That's better. Listen, I've been thinking about Erin's proposal, and I want to tell you about that, but I don't want you to say anything until I've finished, understand? Ooh, careful with the nodding. That thing's delicate. You are really good at that, you know?"

The Swap Part 1 - May 04

The Swap Part 2 - Aug 04

The Swap Part 3 - Sep 04

The Swap Part 4 - Nov 04

The Swap Part 5 - May 05

Apr 2013
Great story , not far from true life. some very good friends had same problem and solved it the same way.

Aug 2012
well written,straight forward erotic but not nasty or dirty

Aug 2012
Superb writing (as usual) - this was a wonderful series, thank you!

Aug 2012
Thought I would drop you a line and tell you how hot I found this story.

Aug 2012
Very well done!

Jun 2012
that's only fair!

Jun 2012
ust finished part2. Really enjoying the story alot. Good characters, hot action and believable dialogue. Cant wait for more.
      GBF: More? Hardly. :-)

Mar 2012
Great pair of stories. Well written. It reminded me of a personal experience.

Mar 2012
The Swap, although written several years ago, was outstanding. The story was hot - extremely hot, and reading it made me as wet as anything I have ever read. That is partly because swapping partners between committed couples is my favorite theme in erot

Jan 2011
Where's the rest? I there a Chapter 6 happening?
      GBF: No :-)

Jan 2011
Just dandy. A real story ,not just a fuckfest. The story gets better.

Jan 2011
I'm glad...

Jan 2011
Very good start...I like the way the material flows...not too much gabby crap for filler. She does exactly the right amount of heavy panting and such.

Jan 2011
I really like your style, erotic yet realistic enough to be true

Jan 2011
You did a good job building up to this point and breaking the parts into coherent units

Jan 2011
Great story! I I've the first person point of view from the wife's perspective. Its not too often you get a great story told by the lady.

Jan 2011
it's great

Jan 2011
Superbly written. It was definitely one of the best stories I've ever read, and I'm eager to read more of your work. I hope you have some other series planned as well, because I'd be interested in your take on other kinks too.

Jan 2011
So fucking hot loved the intensity and the detail. Usually u skim the actual sex parts a bit more. But I fucking loved that! Liked the ending too haha one each. Not that I'm into it but just curious u do lesbian bisexual stories. Do u ever write about bo

Oct 2010
Probably the best story I have read on asstr. This is an extremely unlikely situation that was written to make it seem like a very loving family relationship. Very well done indeed!

Sep 2010
This is a good story because a) I didn't want it to end and b) I want to know what happens next, lol. Thanks for writing it.

Jan 2010
This tale is a DELIGHT for a 'Hopeless Romantic'. The sex is likewise very well done! :-)

Jan 2010
Incredbale! I'll write more later.

Jan 2010
Loved your story!

Jan 2010
Excellent

Jul 2009
very horny story

Jul 2009
AMAZING!

Jul 2009
AMAZING

Jul 2009
Sort of odd coming in at the end of the story, but it definitely made me want to read the rest.

Jul 2009
More technical than erotic.

Jul 2009
I loved this story, all five parts. And, I love a happy ending. This is the first story of yours I've read. Thank you so much. I hope to enjoy more of your works.

Jul 2009
I've been lurking around your blog for awhile now, but I have yet to comment until now. I found "The Game" incredibly entertaining, but my favorite has got to be either "The Swap" or "The Adventures of Akakia." I adore your writing style! I have yet to

Jun 2009
rather sexy idea

Jun 2009
I have written you before. This time is about "The Swap." I enjoyed the realistic presentation of how the four characters add new sexual relationships for themselves! Even though I am a guy I really likes having a woman tell the story. I am enjoying most

Nov 2008
Great story, I am a twin too. But unlike your story, we did things with sisters and there was no pregnacy. Loved the story have read quite a few of yours. Like the longer stories more.

Sep 2008
An absolutely marvelous awsome series. WOW I doubt anyone can top this but would love for you to try.
      GBF: I hope you read Part 5 then!

Feb 2008
Excellent. Better than awsome.

Jun 2006
Loved all 5 parts - hot story with great plot. Thanks!
      GBF: Wow, it's been a while since anyone told me that. Thanks.

May 2006
Wow - what a setting! Holly has the plan to satisfy all. I love it. A great beginning. Definiteny a 10
      GBF: I hope you read the rest then. :-)

Apr 2006
Hotter than Part 1.
      GBF: Oh, good.

Apr 2006
surely you aren't going to end it here??
      GBF: Ther's a better place?

Apr 2006
You know I love how you write. This was...divine. You push all my buttons. Even ones I didn't know I had!
      GBF: Well, if you will read the whole series all at once! :-)

Mar 2006
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      GBF: What, you read all the way through five chapters, just to give me a one? Get a life.

Feb 2006
Astounding, I wonder if Hollies pussy doesn't get sore, with all thst pounding it gets, I know mine would, delicious at the same time? Jemma
      GBF: You know Jemma, you really should leave an email address. You send so much feedback!

Feb 2006
I have missed answering, just kept on reading this horny story, the more of it read the hornier I'm getting, please keep it going, its worth a few more chapters, and have Holly pregnant
      GBF: No, no. It's finished. Finished, you hear? :-)

Feb 2006
Its starting out quite well, I like the way you describe the yearning of the sister-law Erin to have a baby, it must be terrible not to be able to concieve, when she can see all around her becoming pregnant, still on with the story, I dont know how it wi
      GBF: Well, it's all there to read now...

Jan 2006
This 5 part series is your best I think. Is there a novel length story lurking somewhere within? I hope so.
      GBF: No! But thanks for asking.

Jan 2006
I am delighted with the way that this fuck started, except it was NOT AT ALL NECESSARY that she was already masturbating.
      GBF: Again, over the top. It's a STORY. Entertainment. That's all. Thanks very much for the kind words, nonetheless.

Jan 2006
I suspect that prehistoric human tribes selfishly WANTED to avoid pregnancy and parenthood because children were such a drain on their very limited resources.
      GBF: Thanks for the feedback, but you're going a little over the top.

Jan 2006
wonderful story! very sexy, but also loving, with people who are considerate and honest with one another. I look forward to more from you.
      GBF: Glad you liked it.

Dec 2005
Your writing style is really good. Makes things believable. Perhaps suggests the norms of social intercourse prevailing in California. But after the second episode it feels a bit dragged on and on. Still I liked it more than 95 percent of the stories tha
      GBF: Thanks, I think.

Dec 2005
Pity Erin wasn't involved in the bedroom - voyeur, mastubater, sucker, whatever.
      GBF: You're hard to please. :-)

Nov 2005
Great story :)
      GBF: Thanks.

Nov 2005
Very nice!! Has the right pace, discription, and sensuality to it! Great to read something that is not just wham bam thank you maam.
      GBF: Glad you liked it. Sorry it's finished. :-)

Oct 2005
A hot story that just keeps going. I can patiently wait for more(sigh). Well written with a wonderful flowing of events. One of the reasons I enjoy reading your creations is how the events are so logical in their order of progression. Thanks again for
      GBF: More? Not from me! :-) And thank you very much

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Oct 2005
Oh Gentle: Very nice series! Sweet and hot, with excellent grammar. You know how to heat a person up. Thank you.
      GBF: It's cold where you are? :-)

Oct 2005
I am a great fan of yours and this is my favorite story. It unfolds gracefully and sensually, and I'm always impatient to get each new chapter. I suppose the quality that most attracts me is the apparent ease of the two couples with their relationships an
      GBF: Thanks a lot. I'm pleased it's more than just a stroke or two. Umm... You know it's finished, right?

Oct 2005
Very nice story, but ... well, all the talk about this being the end of the series (in the other comments) *does* bother me a bit. So, Gentle, prove them wrong. Please. ;-)
      GBF: Yeah, but they were my comments. :-)

Sep 2005
The Swap--the whole series of 5 stories--is one of the best pieces of erotic literature I've read. I keep hoping that you'll find a way to keep it going.
      GBF: Going? It's gone, sorry.

Sep 2005
Old theme / different premise and carried out in a thoughtful way, just enough twists, turns and dilemma's to make for interesting reading. Not sure what line of work the twins are in that lets them take that much time out on vacation, but I'd like som
      GBF: Not at all. Thank YOU!

Aug 2005
Hey, I really liked this - easy paced, full of good humour with a sharing, trusting relationship developing between the two couples. It was both erotic and sexy. Maybe such relationship can really work. Thanks a lot for writing this - excellent.
      GBF: Maybe, but the odds are against it, you know. :-)

Aug 2005
Ok O just read "The Swap" and the characters are more developed
      GBF: Cool. Thanks.

Aug 2005
I'll give it a 9.Very tastefully dealt with.
      GBF: Gee, thanks.

Aug 2005
Firstly, and most obviously, for the amount of sex you have managed to include WITHOUT spoiling the flow of the plot.
      GBF: Yeah, people remind me that life isn't like this. I don't respond. :-)

Jul 2005
AH HA - the GBF "twist". Not content until you do the dirty deed, Huh? Too Cute - and as usual - outa left field. However, I really have enjoyed 'The Swap' and wish that my experiences during that time could have modeled your story than that of 're
      GBF: Hey, my aim is to serve. Thanks

Jul 2005
very well done
      GBF: Thanks again!

Jul 2005
its superb
      GBF: Thanks.

Jul 2005
I thought it was fantastic.Great story...would love to read the next installment!
      GBF: Next? Finito, sorry!

Jul 2005
Great. Sometimes I get the guys' names mixed up because they both start with M. Other than that (I'm bad with names anyway), the story's great.
      GBF: Hey, I had trouble myself, but thought everyone else would be fine!

Jul 2005
top notch

Jul 2005
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      GBF: And nothing again? :-)

Jul 2005
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      GBF: What, nothing to say? :-)

Jul 2005
OH my. In a good way,( nicely presented!!) OH, OH, MY!
      GBF: Hee hee.

Jul 2005
um... um... uh... lol.... I think I am just going to keep reading if you don't mind... lolol. there was a typo in there somewhere but who cares.... lol.. more, more, more...
      GBF: Onward and upward? :-)

Jul 2005
WOw... can I tell you that you are really appreciated for the MF ROM stuff you write??? even here where it involves couples. The situation is not gratuitous, such a situation could ostensibly arise.. its not just fuck and suck for sex's sake ( not tha
      GBF: Wow, thanks, and that was just part 1!

Jul 2005
Nice story well written, I can read english but it's difficoult for me to write.
      GBF: I don't mind. Thanks.

Jul 2005
SUPERB!!
      GBF: :-)

Jul 2005
cute ending!!! great writing skills

Jul 2005
I enjoyed your story,very well presented. Please let me know any other stories you may have pen.
      GBF: Any other? Have you looked at my website? :-)

Jul 2005
Excellent story Gentle, and the ending was PERFECT!!
      GBF: Excellent feedback. Thank you very much.

Jul 2005
A perfect "10"!
      GBF: I'm scared to ask you to read part 5 now!

Jul 2005
Another fantastic love story. Thank you so much for writing these.
      GBF: Thanks for reading them.

Jun 2005
I loved all of them!
      GBF: All?

Jun 2005
What do I think? I have ceased to think, and only feel...
      GBF: Is this a good thing?

Jun 2005
Nice job Gentle, that was INCREDIBLY HOT! I almost wish I'd married a twin... That was incredibly hot Gentle. Really, really incredibly hot. Dare I use this phrase again? -- HOTTER THAN THE SUN! Wet panties discarded, husband targeted, I'm outta
      GBF: Maybe he has a long lost brother! :-) I'm not sure if Maybe I feel sorry for him!

Jun 2005
This is turning out to be JUST RIGHT for a HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-(
      GBF: That's the IDEA!

Jun 2005
[big snip]... Accordingly, being oblivious to the original purpose of the swap is probably very helpful to that purpose.
      GBF: Umm... It's supposed to be entertainment. I'm not sure where you were going here...

Jun 2005
Really liked the story. The opening up of attitudes in the story appealled to me very much. Thanks for sharing to story.

Jun 2005
Exce,llent
      GBF: What's the comma for? :-)

Jun 2005
Simply awesome! I loved the whole thing and I want to hear more...lots more!
      GBF: Thanks a lot. More? :-)

Jun 2005
Another great thought process but you Kiwi's have got to get the girl/girl thing better! I presume you're a man? (Cheeky aren't !!)and therefore you seem to gloss over the actual feelings us gals have when we are either masturbating or doing a girlfrien
      GBF: What a load of bollox! :-) Pity I couldn't find room for the nicer things you said further down!

Jun 2005
LOL I LOVE the ending!!!! wonderful! :) i will never take a shower again, washing my hair, without thinking of your shower scene.... another 10 for the master writer :)
      GBF: I should pay you, you know.

Jun 2005
Oh! What a lovely resolution to your quintet, even if it is a bit odd! All of the stories were great, and pretty much satisfied all of my "what would it be like with twins" questions. Well done!
      GBF: Odd? What do you mean odd? :-)

Jun 2005
This story (the whole series) is really, really good! You write really well, and the stories were incredibly sexy and somehow even believeable. Thank you very much...
      GBF: No, thank YOU very much.

Jun 2005
please tell me that there will be more to the story!
      GBF: More? What in Hell for? :-)

Jun 2005
Wowers That was superb. You never fail to amaze me
      GBF: Nor does your feedback. Thanks.

Jun 2005
Thanks a bunch for the finish. It was a great way to end the story. Enjoyed it.
      GBF: Thanks very much.

Jun 2005
I always enjoy your stories. You give a good look into their personalities and thereby make them come alive, all without losing the heat of the story.
      GBF: Thanks a lot.

Jun 2005
Such a surprising and deserving ending. This last part was truly marvelous and was even more sexier, if that's possible. I want to be just as seductive as you when I grow up!
      GBF: Hee hee. Thanks Lisa.

Jun 2005
Well, I finally managed to finish reading all the parts. In one word, it's HOT ... and in two words: DAMN HOT.
      GBF: Thanks a lot. Sorry I couldn't post the rest of your comment, but it was too long, and gave too much story away! :-)

Jun 2005
Nice ending, nice story, but certainly without your usual 'twist'.
      GBF: Damn. I'll have to try harder!

Jun 2005
As usual, an outstanding story and very well told. Plausible story line with just the right amount of emphasis on decision making. And what a way to bring such a good series to an end, with a whole world of possible outcomes awaiting the *****. Now is
      GBF: Thanks Ed. Much appreciated.

Jun 2005
Wonderful! it really jerked me...I want to know more...Twins lol...tell me what happens next! please!
      GBF: Next? Waddaya mean next? It's finished. Done. Finito, Kaput. :-)

Jun 2005
Real good.
      GBF: Thanks. So are you!

Jun 2005
This one is real good. I am so surious :-)
      GBF: I believe you! Thanks.

Jun 2005
I really don't like this one because I'm not into the ***** thing. I guess you know that.
      GBF: Yeah, I know that. I was thinking of warning you! :-)

Jun 2005
I think it reals good. I liked everything in the chapter. I still think you could do better :-).
      GBF: Better? You're pretty tough, you know that? :-)

Jun 2005
well written as usual.....and sexy. I'm going to have to go back and read the whole story again. I really think You write very well, and of course I love the subject matter. Still would like to see a continuation of Meg the alien. S
      GBF: Well, thanks a lot. Meg is unlikely to get an update, but I can't rule out the possibility.

Jun 2005
Who! What way to end this chapter. I sure hope you have a couple more chapters to this series, like, at least, up to ...
      GBF: More? I think not...

Jun 2005
Getting better by the minute! That was quite a natural thing between ***** and *****, and it was wonderfully described.
      GBF: Thanks. Sorry for the bleeps.

Jun 2005
goood ... Oh God!
      GBF: 'Oh God' what? :-)

Jun 2005
Fantastic start! Few are as good in presenting pure sex as you are in this story. I will read the rest at our leisure and you know what will happen! Very very well written erotica, and the premise, though not absolutely new, is a welcome departure fr
      GBF: Well, thank you very kindly.

Jun 2005
Great story! Really enjoyed the ending. Do you think you will be writing a sequel?
      GBF: What???? Probably not. Lots of other things to do.

Jun 2005
Excellent, sexy (erotic) story. Very smooth, very loving, with your kind of great dialog. A little humor mixed with all the sexy loving too. Great writing, great editing, great reading. Thanks,
      GBF: Thank YOU Mel!

Jun 2005
Thanks for the story. I enjoyed reading it.
      GBF: Thanks for the feedback.

Jun 2005
This is actually repeating myself. I like your subject matter - I like your phrasing - very much - it is both light and provocative. I don't have many different ways to express this. I am sure you would do a much better job. Keep up the good work and
      GBF: Oh, I'm not sure I can beat that! Many thanks.

Jun 2005
Nice story, but the ending, it makes you want to hear a little more. Maybe I just like your stories, but well...it would help if it seemed a little more completed. Good Job, Great Story,and Great Writing
      GBF: I can't answer all the questions...

Jun 2005
I really enjoyed it all! inspire many thanx
      GBF: :-)

Jun 2005
Great, wonderful talent Gentle.....Thanks....

Jun 2005
Yes, Yes, so sexy and moving and the same time....You are sooooooooooooooo good gentle......Love it...
      GBF: :-)

Jun 2005
It made me feel very good!
      GBF: Oh, good.

May 2005
Can't wait to read the other parts!
      GBF: You should have read them first

May 2005
Hmm, what do I think about this? It was pretty good. When I first start to read it I didn't know what to think of it. When I really started to read it, it turned out to be a real good story. Not the best but it's still a real good chapter :-)
      GBF: Thanks, you're a honey

May 2005
Again and as always, tis wonderful. Mummmmmmmmmm, so good.
      GBF: You know, you should let me know who you are, and I could get all these comments together! :-)

May 2005
Oh Golly Gentle, you have done it again....you get better every time I read your works. Tis so good.........
      GBF: Gee thanks.

May 2005
That was great...I love the ending. You do a wonderful job! Keep it up!
      GBF: ooh, thanks.

May 2005
Excellent, excellent, excellent! Great story. It's just a lot of fun to read it. Thanks so much for continuing to share your work.
      GBF: Thanks a lot. Thanks for reading it!

May 2005
A very good story

May 2005
Awww gentle I just absolutely love the swap, I know it's been awhile since I sent you any feedback and I'm sorry about that I don't know if you would even remember. ANYway I loved it and its so sad that it is over, that's one hell of a cliffhanger if y
      GBF: Of course I remember, and the ***** are fine!

May 2005
I was concerned this had been abandoned. Then I read the last chapter and I still feel like there is a lot still unanswered. I gave it a ten just based on the excellent premise. I love Twin stories where they end up doing it. Thanks

May 2005
Excellent job! I love family group stories. Can't wait untol you write again. Sally
      GBF: Well, they're not my scene, Sally. It was an aberration on my part!

May 2005
GBF, Nice little story. I liked the ending. The characters were pretty good and the sex was well done. Keep up the good work.
      GBF: Little? You have any idea how long this took? :-) Thanks.

May 2005
nice story and you kept all of the twists just right...thanks for the writing...keep it up
      GBF: Thanks. Glad you like it.

May 2005
I really liked this story. I like the gentle romances.
      GBF: Thanks a lot.

May 2005
Quite hot, all the way through. Nicely done.
      GBF: Thanks.

May 2005
OH My Gosh!!!! SOOOOOO worth the wait! You've really outdone yourself and what an amazing and wonderful ending. Once again, I just love your storytelling ability.
      GBF: You know, that would have been the best feedback ever, if only you'd left your email address, so I could thank you properly. Thank you so very much anyway!

May 2005
By the way, I liked the swap
      GBF: Whew!

May 2005
Whoa! Awesome ending, Gentle! Good job!
      GBF: Thanks for the first comment!

May 2005
<> LOL here!!!!
      GBF: Good for you to laugh now and then! :-)

May 2005
I just wanted you to know that I DID notice all your wonderfully clever musical references!!!!! [on top of all the rest of the wonderful writing....]
      GBF: You're the first one to mention that...

May 2005
wow so sexy so dirty, yet.....sweet..... wonderful!!! if only real life could be like this!
      GBF: Oh, really? Thank you very much.

May 2005
wow and that is just part one it's just perfection, your dialogue, descriptions of situations and sex am i getting jaded? this is what i expect from all your stories! :)
      GBF: I'm not sure I can handle the pressure!

May 2005
yummy

May 2005
Lovely! A perfect 10! Sounds to me that Holly finally got all her prayers answered. I am not sure what kind of sequel can come. I think we will need a lot more background before any sequel will make as much sense as the story did so far. However, always
      GBF: Thanks for th 10. As for the rest, I'm not saying anything to someone who won't give an email address! :-)

May 2005
How did you come up with this story idea?
      GBF: Entirely from my warped mind.

May 2005
Very glad that she got no less than her husband got. What a way to feel equal to the beautiful sister-in-law! On a more serious note, your treatment of the conflict between the stable and adventurous parts of Holly's mind is AWESOME!
      GBF: Hey, they're both beautiful!

May 2005
Love your story! Just finished all four parts, doing feedback one at a time!

May 2005
I just wanted to say thanks for the lesson on when to say penis and when to use cock. It sounds so hot when I let "cock" slid off of my tongue, I mena when I am saying it..of course. As Always I am awe inspired. I have read this entire series, and the
      GBF: Oh, yeah, of course you do! :-) Thanks a heap!

Apr 2005
I have fallen in lust with your writing.
      GBF: I hope it was a good for you as it was for me.

Apr 2005
very similar to story of two couples who spent weekend together.swapped and pretended they were on a honeymoon only not with their own mates.
      GBF: Never read that one, but thanks.

Apr 2005
Ooh, so much fun packed into four short stories! Hard to say what my favorite part was, everything was so loverly. Well done; always wondered what it would be like with twins.
      GBF: So... Should I write the last part yet??

Apr 2005
That was a great story like all the rest. You did a great job with all your stories.
      GBF: Thanks

Apr 2005
I'd say that Holly should be a bit exhausted by now- great way to start the day. I loved the eroticism (sex)in this story. It's a great turn on and I'd like to read more about these couples.
      GBF: More?... Yeah, I must get back to this...

Apr 2005
I didn't think it was possible to top part two, but you did it. The whole story was sensually erotic and I liked the *****, in fact they all seem to be playing to the same drummer. Now on to part four.
      GBF: See, told you it was nothing to worry about! :-)

Apr 2005
Many years ago....I had the same opportunity and although we've all gone separate ways, I'll always remember the feelings that you so lovingly brought forth.
      GBF: Glad to be of assistance.

Apr 2005
Very nice, hot sex, nice setting and a girl who knows how to get her point across. I think that Holly was actually eager once it sunk in. All's fair in love and war. To me it was a pleasurable solution. Now onto part two.
      GBF: You THINK she was? :-)

Mar 2005
The Quiz, The Shower, The Swap, Next Time and Twas the Night are
      GBF: More? Well, so long as I hear back! :-)

Mar 2005
Swap is definately one of your best, Thanx
      GBF: Well, thank you. I must write some more...

Mar 2005
enjoyed the story very much. Would have loved for the *** - would have made an interesting moment for all. Like the slow build up. As someone who has been involved in mate/swapping found the details very familiar. Also being bisexual enjoyed the desc
      GBF: Thanks. Sorry to bleep you, but you were giving away too much! Hey, those details were for the girls! :-)

Mar 2005
Once again, if possible you have exceeded all expectations. There are insufficient superlatives. More please.
      GBF: Again? And still no email address? :-(

Mar 2005
I very much liked all 4 parts. It's like see one's own fantasy in print, complete with the right setting. Appreciate your efforts and for makng it available here. Keep it up. I'll be looking for your other stories.
      GBF: Just click on the picture, top left!

Feb 2005
loved the story and would like t read more. have you written any other ones?
      GBF: Any? Hell yes! 70!

Feb 2005
Ohuuuuuuuuu, really good, can't wait for part II
      GBF: You don't have to. Parts 1, 2, 3, & 4 are there waiting for you!

Feb 2005
A very well written work. Written so well that I almost forgot to leave a review. Reading this work can be dangerous, it makes you want to nibble on a snach.
      GBF: There are SO many ways to misinterpret this comment!

Feb 2005
Holly's a bit bossy, don't you think? Still she is very sexy and I envy her lover(s)! Very hot story(ies)!!!
      GBF: Bossy? Nah, desperate! Thanks.

Feb 2005
omg i realy enjoyed the story........im married and would love to be with holly with two guys and erin................im 26 blonde and bi curious
      GBF: :-) You know, if you'd left your email address, you could find out what happens in part 5!

Jan 2005
Very good. One of the best stories I have ever read. Keep up the good work.
      GBF: Thanks. With that sort of encouragement, how could I not?

Jan 2005
Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful!!!! The best I've read in a very long time....(and I'm quite an avid reader!) You are very talented!!!
      GBF: And that's the nicest feedback I've had in a while. Thank you so much.

Jan 2005
A different twist. Interested to see where you take this. Possibilities abound.

Jan 2005
Great story. A 10 for sure.
      GBF: Thanks. That's the third 10.

Jan 2005
great story!!!!

Jan 2005
hey that was a great piece keep writing it's good to read a story other than mF or Fm i like the oder stories let me kow when u write again

Jan 2005
Thanks for a great fantasy. It is a good balance of sensuality/sex/thought processes. I will look for more of your work. Of course you have been writing more........ ?
      GBF: More? Damn right!

Jan 2005
This story continues to facinate me............. well done.... now.. I can only imagine both women are pregnant together...

Jan 2005
GO ON. LOVE IT
      GBF: I will, I will...

Jan 2005
Wow

Dec 2004
...having said that, the sentiments of the story are irresistable and you express the bones of what's needed just enough to allow our own minds to do the rest. Needless to say I'll keep reading and appreciating.

Dec 2004
Read all 4 parts and loved it keep them comin
      GBF: You must read fast...

Dec 2004
Great story!! Can't wait for the next installment
      GBF: Same here. I just can't find the time.... Sorry.

Dec 2004
good!Good!GOOD! yup yup! keep up the good work!
      GBF: Ooh, were you typing one handed? :-)

Dec 2004
Just about as pleased as I was reading the first three chapters this made me stop. I was taken aback, truly amazing work. With two or three chapters of lead up, a plot twist or some such and a chapter or two to finish and I'd be paying for this little nov
      GBF: Well, thanks for the feedback. I can only give my standard response. "If you've got the publisher, I've got the time" :-)

Dec 2004
Loved the setting. Loved the pace. Appreciated the literacy. Characters are well developed. Situational circumstances are believable. So far a well developed plot needing perhaps a scosh more guilt to add a little naughty tang to the good fun.
      GBF: I'm not really big on guilt... :-)

Dec 2004
I really enjoyed the 4 parts of this story a lot! Is there going to be a part 5? It started out as a search for "sperm donor" and moved on to something quite different. It could end here, since the "objective" was reached, but their relationships are n
      GBF: I'm pleased. There is. I'm not telling you where they go, just yet... I promise to let you know when I've written it!

Dec 2004
Fabulous I give you a full 10 out of 10 and I can only tell you what you discribed is 100% the way it happened for me.it is as if you were there. Cheers Harry
      GBF: Thanks Harry. But we need details! :-)

Dec 2004
Great! No use gushing effusively about the wonderful way you describe the basics of intimacy, an activity that has been endlessly treated before. Anything but delighted and heated praise would definitely earmark a clod.

Dec 2004
I have really enjoyed the Swap Parts 1 - 4.
      GBF: Thanks. So have I!

Dec 2004
Your writing is a joy to read; sexy but gentle, not grossly excessive. "Ooh God, keep doing that lover. Just a little faster honey. Oh!" ***reminds me of the old game: Knock, knock! Who's there? Honeysuckle. Honeysuckle who? Honey, suck a little s
      GBF: Thanks for that. Great stuff!

Dec 2004
I really enjoyed parts one and two...
      GBF: What about three and four? :-)

Dec 2004
Only one word : Excellent !! Any how I would like to hear about you be a sandwich between those two handsome men.
      GBF: Me? But you don't even know if I'm a girl! :-)

Dec 2004
Sure hope you continue this story. Its really great to be able to share the adventure between four such loving, sharing people. Thanks for writing it. Please continue.

Nov 2004
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME :)
      GBF: Thanks.

Nov 2004
(Another) nice gbf story. I wonder...it sometimes seems like gbf is of the male gender, but s/he writes with sensitivity - gentleness...and yet the story is appealing. It sort of blurs the preconceptions, which is a nice place to be.
      GBF: It is, isn't it? So I'll stay there. :-)

Nov 2004
Well Written! Hot Story

Nov 2004
excellent story...on a scale of one to ten...its a 9.5
      GBF: Gee, thanks.

Nov 2004
Well, a nice story, well written. The switch and swap has long been a favorite fantasy of mine. I first liked threesome stories, then threesome with one of them a wife. Particulary first time wife swapping. I think you wrote the reluctance to acce
      GBF: Thanks.

Nov 2004
Good Grief, it's just got alfully warm in here!
      GBF: Should have given me some contact details, so I could send paramedics! :-)

Nov 2004
Oh my!! you've done it again.. Masterfully written, great development of characters and rollicking good sex..

Nov 2004
Well written, as usual, very erotic, nice plot shift, pleasant ending with a hint of more fun to come.
      GBF: More?

Nov 2004
WOW! So much wow that when I got to the bottom I went back up and read it again. I'm not usually a fan of stories with more sex than plot, but there is pleanty of plot in the making from the first three parts to more than make-up for the lack of it in thi
      GBF: My God, you're such a trollop! Can I have your address? :-)

Nov 2004
As usual Gentle.......the writing is superb. However I find the premise unlikely in contrast to Your usual very believable narratives. Perhaps I'm to much from the old school....I want it all from my life partner....and mostly will get it.
      GBF: Well, I know what you mean, and this is the reason that this story is quite different to all my others. An experiment if you will.

Nov 2004
I have just found your story. I like it very much. I am now going to download 2,3 and 4. I like your writing, I find it very sexy and enjoyable, but I think it might lead me to self relief! Thanks again
      GBF: Well, wasn't that the idea? You could always get a nice girl to read them with you!

Nov 2004
Yummy, can I be in the middle?
      GBF: Do your reading first!

Nov 2004
Beautiful. Masterfully written. You manage to make a wickedly sexual scene delightfully -- well, sweet. As I've noted before, you handle dialog wonderfully, and you make a rather astonishing scene seem perfectly believable. You're a truly gifted writer. I
      GBF: Aww, gee, thanks heaps!

Nov 2004
Hi Gentle You really surprised me with this series. Not only was it well written, it showed me some real creativity (especially in part 4). I take back about what I said about you being "predictable". Part 4 was a real surprise to me with ***** dur
      GBF: Well, thanks. I'm pleased I was able to surprise you. Sorry to have [bleep]ed your comments, but I can't let you give it away.

Nov 2004
Hi there, Just a note to say how happy I am that your muse has provided you with another chapter to this story. I am enjoying it a lot. I like the flow and the erotica to the sexual scenes. Keep up the good work and I hope to see another chapter f
      GBF: Aww, shucks, these are the reason I write. Thanks so much.

Nov 2004
I love this story. A good premise coupled with good character development. Wish you could post more frequently though since my old brain looses track of where we have been before. Thanks
      GBF: Yeah, but my brain won't WRITE any faster...

Nov 2004
I'm still feeling it in the pit of my stomach. Feels nice though. I know I said that each story gets more and more erotic and delightful, but that was the 'honest truth' and part 4 was even more erotic than the last. You've certainly wrote another st
      GBF: Thanks.

Nov 2004
It's a wonderfully sexy story. Write faster please! Then, if you have time, perhaps you'd like to read my story, A Knock At The Door by darkstormynite, at Storiesonline. I really love the way you write. More please.
      GBF: Well, time is the problem. I'll do my best.

Nov 2004
I've been waiting -- with baited breath, somewhat -- for this since part 3. Fine piece of work, as all these are! Nicely measured pace -- good scene setting, flow, and of course action. Was lulled into complacently assuming a near foursome with girl o
      GBF: That might take you a little while...

Nov 2004
Loved the story. Very erotic. Very well written.

Nov 2004
Mahvelous, dahling. This reminds me of what a friend said after seeing Woody Allen's "The Sleeper", at my urging. 'They put him in the Orgasmatron! Then he comes out all smiles, and falling down. Now I have to see all of his movies!'
      GBF: Ah, so reading the rest of my stories is obligatory? Good.

Nov 2004
Thanks, very enjoyable

Nov 2004
Well done. Thanks. A neat, surprise (even after the foreshadowing in the beginning) ending.

Nov 2004
It was extremely sexy and delightfully handled. You've restored my faith that at least sometimes real writers write these things and not just horny people. You create dialogue beautifully. And you make the story line seem not just delicious but eminently
      GBF: Oh, wow, thanks so much!

Nov 2004
slipperily? orgasming? wonderful inventions part of a perfect whole. thank you!
      GBF: Wow, why are these ones always anon?

Nov 2004
great style--

Nov 2004
Great story... a wonderful blend of subtlety and nasty. I loved it.
      GBF: Pleased to have pleased.

Nov 2004
A great read. I really think you should write a part 4. Lots of potential ...
      GBF: Potential? You mean you expect more?

Nov 2004
Great story writing; hot yet romantic too. I wait with baited breath for part 4.
      GBF: Good. Oh thanks. Damn.

Nov 2004
Great stuff! Reading a good story after a long long time. very satisfying!
      GBF: You make it sound almost healthy!

Nov 2004
I enjoyed your story.
      GBF: Thanks. I enjoyed your feedback.

Nov 2004
I loved this classic love story! It kept me HARD through all 3 chapters. The swapping stories are very very HOT! Hey, how are some stories about older men with younger girls,mmmmm?
      GBF: Well thanks. And no, I don't think so. I like some equality.

Nov 2004
Loved Part 3, and keep checking back for Part 4! After swapping and FF, hope we're going to complete some MM? Come on - some of us girls get off on talk of the boys getting on with each other.
      GBF: Sorry to be such a disappointment, but if the boys are going to get together, they need to do it without my help. Tell me though, does anyone else agree? Thanks for the rating.

Nov 2004
I like the story and the way its written. Thanks. I didn't get the Part 1 though! Will you be kind enough to email it to me, please!
      GBF: Thanks, and, umm... It's here , and you sent this anonymously! :-)

Nov 2004
Again, wow. I can't wait for Part 4. I'm under the impression that you are male, yet you write "female" so incredibly well. As odd as this sounds, a sexual John Marsden.
      GBF: Part 4? The pressure...

Nov 2004
As a girl I loved it, as you had the FF seduction well taped. Sorry guys but us girls CAN do it better. Its all about patience and of course skill..... Three of us read this chapter out loud and by the time Matt has finished his 'trip around the world'w
      GBF: My God! This gets the best feedback award for all time!

Oct 2004
fucking great, eze

Oct 2004
Very nice. I enjoyed your story very much.

Oct 2004
Very well written. A couple of mispellings do not detract from the rythum or mood of this piece. Spell check is a necessity nowadays. Your physical details are phenominal; they had me so hot. Too bad my spouse is fast asleep!!?
      GBF: I suggest setting off a fire alarm.

Oct 2004
As usual your writing is ' fun ' to read. You feel good about your characters and that makes it a real pleasure

Oct 2004
A joy to read some well written prose. Do you suppose Erin knows enough about the experiences to tell us? Thanks for the efforts.
      GBF: Oh, she knows enough! :-)

Oct 2004
Great story.

Oct 2004
Loving the story. Suggest the "boat" elements be strengthened to separate this story from run-of-the-mill stories. Keep up the good work. Writing is wonderful.
      GBF: But I don't know anything about boats!

Oct 2004
no time.. no time! Must get to chapter 3!!!
      GBF: Yeah, but, I... Oh, okay.

Oct 2004
Wow. You nail it each time. The interplay of emotions, the playful erotic banter, the descriptions of sensual touches that are so right one could feel a phantom touch on your own skin just reading the words. You -know- you have to keep going now..... (a
      GBF: You are wonderful.

Oct 2004
I don't know why these asstr sites have images any more-- they just won't load........... and the browser hangs--not just this site, almost everyone that has images.
      GBF: Sorry to hear that, but given that I only have one image, and a tiny background tile, I can't see that I shouldbe an issue. How about talking about the story, maybe?

Oct 2004
holy crap thats amazing.
      GBF: Pleased you think so.

Oct 2004
Excellent writing skills. This is a very good story.

Oct 2004
good good good...kept me glued to my screen....the sexual encounters were described so well....I didn't want to stop reading....the deeper it got the faster I read....thank you...you covered it all in the three Swap stories.....makes me more anxious then

Oct 2004
very hot!

Oct 2004
Not sure if I could put my finger on the reason, but each chapter of this story has been less believable to me, and left me colder than the last! I'm glad you get great feedback on it, but I guess it just isn't my cup of tea. I gave it a 2.

Oct 2004
very hot, delicously creative! Great setting and good character descriptions. You've got my keyboard wetted up with juices...
      GBF: Boy juices, or girl juices? Enquiring minds want to know!

Oct 2004
has all the right parts but in any story you prove it is very difficult to place a wife in another man's arms it is hard to describe reckless abandon in the woman but that is the way it would have to be. no finese, just hot lust.as a woman i would want i
      GBF: Seemed pretty reckless to me...

Oct 2004
i fully expected an episode between the men since the women experimentd and liked it. it would have ben so hot for the women to know that men want this once in a while
      GBF: Sorry, but I just can't put myself in their heads to do that...

Oct 2004
as great as part 1

Oct 2004
getting better - I love the gentle love making

Oct 2004
Very good kept my interest all the way thru. keep up the good work

Sep 2004
Great depiction of the fun that two open minded couples can have, once they lose their inhibitions. The oral sex scenes were excellent and believable, and I wish I had some of that right now myself...
      GBF: Sorry to hear you're missing out!

Sep 2004
I have now finished all three parts of this yet to be completed story. It was hotter than hot. Please post the 4th part soon.

Sep 2004
Beautiful There is room for at least a part 4 please?
      GBF: *grumble grumble grumble* :-)

Sep 2004
Excellent!

Sep 2004
nice job. I enjoyed it a lot. Smooth writing it just flowed to an enjoyable conclusion Thanks for the ride

Sep 2004
Great story. I had a similar experience with my two sister-in-laws at a summer camp at the beach.

Sep 2004
thanks for adding the girls. I think the story deserves to be ongoing. if you really want to stretch the things, have the guys play a little together too. no need for full penetration or blowjobs though.
      GBF: No offense, but I think it's unlikely. That's just me...

Sep 2004
Good dialogue, some humour and a flowing storyline.

Sep 2004
Love it...

Sep 2004
You have an amazing talent for writing. I felt the excitement rise within me as I read each part, word over breathtaking word. I enjoy well-written erotica, with the right mixture of detail and emotion. Usually, that requires a woman's touch. You'r
      GBF: I don't recall saying if I am a woman or not... Unusual? I can live with that!

Sep 2004
Hey, I like it very much- big surprise, since I haven't found one of your stories I didn't like very much :)
      GBF: Thanks

Sep 2004
Great job.

Sep 2004
Keep it cumming ! Give me part 4. This is my dream situation :)

Sep 2004
Was happy to see part 3, I waited so long for part 2. Do we get a part 4? Rating this as only 9.04 shows how little appreciation Mr/Mrs/Miss/Ms Average have for good work. Definitely a 10, at least.
      GBF: My favourite editor insists that I need a part 4, so I guess we must.

Sep 2004
Your story was wonderful. everything in its own time. Their sensuous and enticing. It conveys realistic situations, or at least what I fantasize would be realistic. I throughly enjoyed the reading and hope I can find my way to your other stories.
      GBF: Look here: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/gentlebutfirm/www/ :)

Sep 2004
I have now read "The Swap" and "The Simming Baths." Both very good. I think I liked the Swimming Baths a bit better. In "The Swap" I'd have appreciated some more emotional elements. Traces of jealousy, or guilt, or confused affections. Simply swappi

Sep 2004
OK this is a great story :)

Sep 2004
Really enjoyed the story, especially the exploration by the two sisters. I just love that T
      GBF: They've not sisters, T. They're sisters-in-law!

Sep 2004
The words that come to my mind are: Very sweet, passionate in a subdued way and, I guess, close to a decent woman's fantasy of fulfilling sex. To create that effect, it must be well-balanced writing. It cannot bear false notes. Your details remain at t
      GBF: Will you marry me? 8-)

Sep 2004
I really enjoyed this story. I like the dialogue, the setting, and the descriptions. Clear without being vulgar, descriptive but not overly so.

Sep 2004
Oo! Just as good as the first two! Love it! How're you going to top this? Excellent imagination. You think they're going to stop at the islands and take on some handsome young hunk for just one evening, to see how far they want to go with it?

Sep 2004
Thanks, enjoyable Allways enjoy new experiences.

Sep 2004
Very nice writing, sensual without being soppy or sloppy. Your characters are ok but could use a little more "fleshing out". This is far superior to most of the offerings on the website, though.

Sep 2004
YOur story seems to be getting more interesting as the chapters proceed. I especially enjoyed reading the last chapter.

Sep 2004
dissapointing after the first two, but then again it was a tough act to follow. hoping for a part four, which expands more on what happens with erin and holly.

Sep 2004
The Swap continues to be excellent. Nice story well told. Nice action. Look for more chapters. Thanks for writing.

Sep 2004
Been reading your stuff for a bit now and enjoying it. Hope you keep this particular story going. Gave it an 8... haven't read enough of others to give 9s or 10s yet. :)

Sep 2004
Very well done story! You've made it entertaining and sexy. I'm looking forward to subsequent chapters.

Sep 2004
Could you add something about Holly being fertile at the time of these in-law couplings...
      GBF: Holly? But her brother-in-law is sterile, remember?

Sep 2004
getting better and better

Sep 2004
So far a great story. Having a little problem trying to determine where it's going. Will Mat and Holly fall in love as well as Mark and Erin. Will Holly desire to put off a child while Erin is raring to go capture Mark. Will Mark be jealous of Mat's

Sep 2004
The story is getting better and better. Can hardly wait to see what happens next. Maybe the girls telling the guys to get it on together if they want to watch as the girls get together would have interesting results. Thanks for a great story.

Sep 2004
weak again from your great story.....just HOW do you get into a woman's head so?
      GBF: You sure it's me? Thanks for the 10 though!

Sep 2004
Wonderful!! Now, where's chapter 4? :)
      GBF: Jeeze, I only wrote chaper three because you threatened me! :-) And you didn't even give me a score!

Sep 2004
Your stories flow nicely. Thanks for sharing them. -Jack

Sep 2004
great!!

Sep 2004
LOVED IT! Wonderful, sweet, erotic descriptions of the things that comprise a memorable fuck. Write more please!

Sep 2004
Where's part 3. This just can't end there.

Sep 2004
I started this story because I am a boat enthusiast. The sex is great, but I'd weave in more nautical references. Very well written.
      GBF: If I weaved in more nautical references, then you would quickly realise I know nothing!

Sep 2004
mmmm good

Sep 2004
pretty hot

Sep 2004
:) May I join in???? lol..wishing I could have been there, the story was written very well and I was ALMOST there with you. (hope you didn't mind) Keep up the great work..lets see more stories!!!!

Sep 2004
I really enjoyed your story... my husband and i have been married 28 years...we're stale... stuck in a rutt... considering selective soft swinging... or trading... so that we can find the spark again... i'd love to read more from you...

Sep 2004
a good solid tale ;) I'd like to read the aftermath though. They would have had a week of this atleast before she would know if she was pregnant - how did the relationship develop? in short well worth of continuing

Sep 2004
looking forward to part 3

Sep 2004
There had better be a part three, buster!
      GBF: Oh, the pressure.

Sep 2004
Very well written. Senstive, believable, and highly erotic. It left me hot and wet, a condition that will be resolved shortly, as I'm going to jump my sweetie's bones NOW.
      GBF: Lucky him (I think)

Aug 2004
Great - lookong forward to part 3
      GBF: Damn... Expectations.

Aug 2004
I liked very much. Could you put more anal play in the future? Sara
      GBF: Hmmm... Thanks a lot Sara, but I don't think so....

Aug 2004
lovely...intelligent writing with excellent seduction...you have won me over...i will be looking for more from so sensitive a writer

Aug 2004
Hot and romantic at the same time. And a good exploration of the narrators conflict about whether to 'loan out' her husband.

Aug 2004
Loved the story, was the mission accomplished?
      GBF: Wait and see!

Aug 2004
Thanks, I have enjoyed so far.

Aug 2004
Good story. Like the setup, the characters (though with the olympics, I keep picturing those twins on the US gymnastics team, who are NOT attractive) I like the sex in it too. I look forward to reading more of your work
      GBF: I live in New Zealand, and we have a set of twins in the Olympics as well. They ARE attractive!

Aug 2004
I genuinely enjoyed your story.. Nice job..

Aug 2004
Just excellent. The writing is well-crafted, the characters are believable, the dialog is appropriate, and the sex is very hot. Nice build up to the sex scenes; anticipation is a good thing.
      GBF: Thanks

Aug 2004
Very good - could be more graphic about the actual fucking - but good
      GBF: I'm not sure I could, actually.

Aug 2004
Wow....that was a worthy Part 2 in my opinion. I love the intensity. And as usual, you have me wanting more. ;)

Aug 2004
Just read both parts of Swap. Nicely written stories. Part three? Thank you.

Aug 2004
Oh, I love part 2 as much as part 1. Thanks again for the great story. I really do like the way you write. Ideas for a chapter 3? I do....

Aug 2004
Really Good! Thanks!

Aug 2004
Very god. The pace was excelant and the discriptions were valid. 9.2
      GBF: I know it was a mistake, but I like being very god.

Aug 2004
not too bad of a story, would have been nice if they all got togeather
      GBF: The night is young...

Aug 2004
Fantastic, nothing less than that.... Never have thought good sex and good love are necessarily the same thing - both are fantastic - and you captured it!

Aug 2004
I commented very favorably on part I. I think you maintained the tone and the quality in Part II admirably. "Admirable" is not a word I use lightly.

Aug 2004
I sure liked it and I think there is room for another episode... More good fun as I expected. They all had the right approach after all...

Aug 2004
Love this second chapter. Very erotic. More exciting when both partners know and enjoy the mental image of the other. Enjoyable reading. Thanks,

Aug 2004
Part three is in order I think, beginning girl on girl thank you for your efforts.
      GBF: Already?

Aug 2004
well written and very graphic.I hope there!s more

Aug 2004
Great story

Aug 2004
great story sexy but inteligent. Very erotic

Aug 2004
I think you are very good at what you do. I like the content - more I like the way you phrase things. From my perspective - a reader of many such works - you have a special knack at stating things which is unique to the way your mind works. I'm hooked

Aug 2004
I've been waiting for Part 2. Great Job! Thanks for your hard work.

Aug 2004
liked this kinda of getz the old juices running....but i can see this could go in different directions....my GF want them to help have a baby or 2 or 3....but it's your story.....Later

Aug 2004
this is great. thanks.

Aug 2004
... And, of course, I'm looking forward to part 3.
      GBF: Already?

Aug 2004
AWESOME!

Aug 2004
Beautiful story. I would give it 11 points out of 10.

Aug 2004
Don't know that I can put into words why this story just isn't working for me. If you recall, I wasn't a fan of chapter one, and chapter two did nothing to change that.
      GBF: Oops. Well, thanks for the feedback.

Aug 2004
Excellent stories both part 1 & 2. Will you continue with more of The Swap?
      GBF: I will... Not yet...

Aug 2004
Excellent! I give you a "10".

Aug 2004
Keep it going! I like what you have written so far. Randy

Aug 2004
Looking forward to more. Dr. Mike

Aug 2004
Makes one wonder about twins in real life. I don't know any. Thanks for sharing your story with us. -Jack

Aug 2004
Nothing wrong with the story at all. I'd only suggest a little bit more character development to go with the fine sex. The characters you have started are interesting and I'd like to know them better. Keep up the good work.
      GBF: Hmmm... I wonder if you read part one?

Aug 2004
Simply put, you are the best writer of erotica on the net at this time.
      GBF: I'm pretty sure I don't deserve that one, but thanks a heap.

Aug 2004
Thanks. I love this story and I've waiting for it.

Aug 2004
This is nice... I have an idea (sorta) about this... they swap, but they don't... Matt and his brother could fool pretty much everybody, why not their wives?

Aug 2004
well done- good story line, well written, everything tracked! So many that are written now are full of spelling and grammatical errors. Also, I've read stories where theindividuals in the story change names, etc.

Aug 2004
i want part two of it as soon as possible. plz i am waiting

Aug 2004
MORE

Aug 2004
Good story, funny and surprising
      GBF: Well thanks. Shouldn't have been surprising though!

Aug 2004
Great

Aug 2004
Great beginning- I'm curious as to where you're taking it from here. Holly is a very provocative and sexy figure- any resemblance to you?
      GBF: I'm curious too, and no, Holly is NOTHING like me.

Aug 2004
This is one of the better stories I've read ia a long time. I read it months ago and keep waiting for part 2. ?????

Jul 2004
I liked the story it was the first of yours I have read. I'm going back to read the rest.

Jul 2004
Great story, twins and genetics, well thought out. Part 2? I can't wait...

Jul 2004
The ending seemed kinda contrived. Didn't work for me. Again, not your best.
      GBF: And yet, I get my best reviews for this story... 8-)

Jul 2004
Good story, well written. When will we see part 2.

Jul 2004
I really enjoyed the story. ... Keep up the good work I think you are very talented. Cant wait for part 2.

Jul 2004
I would like to read Part 2 of "Swap" please send a site or the next Chapter. Thanx
      GBF: Yeah, me too!

Jul 2004
It's a 10 for me. Waiting for 11!
      GBF: You mean 2? I'm not sure I can write 11 parts!

Jul 2004
Great story. Thanks
      GBF: Great comment. Thanks

Jul 2004
I loved the Swap Part 1 where is part 2. :-) The story was very interesting, I love it. Please tell me more.

Jul 2004
You gotta keep this one going. i will be looking for the updates. I cant wait......................

Jul 2004
In the interest of keeping the bloodline intact, could there possibly be a better solution...and, what's good for the goose is good for the gander...and how long must we wait for the climax?

Jul 2004
can't wait for the next chapter

Jul 2004
good on you

Jun 2004
I hope you're working on part 2, and that we see it soon.

Jun 2004
I liked that very sexy and with a good build up to the climax. This sounds like it could really happen.

Jun 2004
Its good, A realistic situation makes all the difference.

Jun 2004
Sounds good so far. Hell, it sounds great, so far.

Jun 2004
More predictable than some of your stories, but still very entertaining. Twin brothers definitely played it wrong. While very hot, I don't think I like Holly very much.
      GBF: You don't? Oh, I do!

Jun 2004
Delicious start - look forward to next part. Thankyou

Jun 2004
Nice
      GBF: Hmmm... 8-)

Jun 2004
I really enjoy most of your stories as they have a substance that rings true compared to the wam-bam cum 10 times an hour stuff out there.

Jun 2004
Hot! Hope to see next chapter soon.

Jun 2004
I need part 2 BADLY

Jun 2004
I hope you finish this. A good story.

May 2004
More please!

May 2004
You'd better come up with a sequel, that's all I'm gonna say.
      GBF: The pressure...

May 2004
Good stuff - I like the solid sexual non-violent fun and mutual satisfaction

May 2004
Hey, that's great writing and believable.

May 2004
liked it! how abouy part 2?
      GBF: Yep, when I can. But thanks.

May 2004
Yet another wonderfully done piece. And played out realistically and delightfully. It will be interesting to see how it continues...
      GBF: Me too. Got any ideas???

May 2004
I thought it was great! All guys lust after other women at some time and it's good to know that women lust after other men too.
      GBF: Thanks for all the suggestions. I think you are a little weirder than me though. My stories are at least vaguely romantic...

May 2004
loved it. but wanna hear about matthew fucking you.
      GBF: Me? That ain't gonna happen! Holly Maybe...

May 2004
where is part 2? very good story.....
      GBF: It's kind of in my head, writing itself...

May 2004
great
      GBF: thanks

May 2004
I just found your stories thru asstr.... and loved this beginning.......... perhaps it's the boat theme... for my first swap was aboard a couple's sailboat in the Gulf of mexico...... can't wait for more!!!
      GBF: Oh, you should be telling the story then!

May 2004
Great Start!

May 2004
Great start, looking forward to more.

May 2004
I certainly do not have your talent but from a reader perspective and with your obvious writing talent I think you have set the state for a great series of stories that flow from participant(s) to participant(s).
      GBF: Well, thanks a lot for the compliment. I'm not at all certain re the talent etc. but you have spurred me on.... I'm not too sure about the participants part. I have a (fairly loose) plan...

May 2004
Is that a true story?...amazing!
      GBF: What! Of course not! :-)

May 2004
Vey good. Got me quite excited and looking forward to reading the next part.
      GBF: Damn! Oh, I mean great! I suppose I better write it then...

May 2004
great start i can't wait to hear the rest
      GBF: Same here!

May 2004
I really liked and enjoyed your story. Great entrance and very well written. You describe the characters so that they are quite believable and the events are vivid and realistic.

May 2004
The Swap is very good. Good descriptions, good characters, and written well. I'm looking forward to reading more.

May 2004
coming so quickly after the first story, it was pleasant to find a the tempo rising, and the narrative making subtle variations. I shall re read them.
      GBF: Huh? Well, thanks...

May 2004
...and after 2 years of searching, that was one of the best stories i've ever read!

May 2004
How is the next chapter coming? This is my kind of story ...

May 2004
INTENSE. Am desperately waiting to see how it plays out..

May 2004
greetings and salutations: enjoyed your start of the series on the wife swapping looking forward to copntinious chapers pip, pip and cheereo

May 2004
A true erotic story... Well written! When do we get part 2.... Cant wait

May 2004
Good story telling.....I am looking forward to part 2. You do have a couple of typos in part 1. I am not volunteering as proof reader but thought you would want to know. Thank you for your work.
      GBF: Typos? Tell me what they are, and I'll fix them. Just let me shoot my proof reader first. You realise I'm a New Zealander? I can't spell in American!

May 2004
I read your story on the Swap. Nice story. Decent dialogue. A slightly O'Henry ending (though the title is a bit too revealing for O'Henry.) Careful development of the emotional scene, and some delicate touches of realism. The characters of Holly and Erin

May 2004
Right on, fair is fair. None of this cuckold shit. Lay it all out up front and after the shock wears of a little you could be in for a great time. I bet Mark and the other two WILL be a little surprised at Holly's condition. One has to admit it it is an o

May 2004
Great story! I am eagerly waiting for part two.

May 2004
I just wanted to let you know how very much I enjoy your stories, especially the most recent one. :) Thank you,

May 2004
Absolutely excellent.

May 2004
Good beginning to your story. I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters to see how the story line progresses.
      GBF: So am I. Do you have any ideas?? Thanks for the comment.

May 2004
Great great story!

May 2004
great start

May 2004
So, where's part 2?
      GBF: Oh, gimme a break. I was up half of last night finishing that one. 8-) Tell me though, what do you think should happen?

May 2004
Thanks This is a good start, I hope more is to come.

May 2004
This is a fun story. Some old plots with a neat new twist. Look forward to more of the story. Enjoyable reading. Thanks
      GBF: Well, thanks. I appreciate that. Now I just need to find some time to write the next bit.

May 2004
Very, very nicely told