Hail
The removal of the covers from my chest had affected me exactly the way you would think, and my nipples were standing at attention, taking in the view along with me.
Jan 2012
I've been reading you for years! While going through your stories again I came across the Hail stories. While your Photographic Memory series is my favorite, I loved these!
Dec 2010
Exceptionally good storytelling.
Loved it!
Oct 2009
I enjoyed part one so much I had to read part 2. My hand stayed on my shaft through both parts.
Oct 2009
Very nice.....I was stroking my shaft the whole time!!!
Mar 2009
A beautiful, well written story
Mar 2009
Well done you, What a lovely tender story and what a turn on for an old geezer like me who can hardly remember what a girls body feels like. lol Please write more to this story, Your talent for writing is amazing. Thank you.
Jul 2008
I really enjoyed the "hail" stories.
I'd like to read more.
May 2008
Nice intro to what may be a geisha workhouse or
possibly a brothel perhaps around the time of the
USA Civil War. Next, Hail should probably spend
some time learning both her assigned tasks and
how to use her sexual proclivities to make those
tasks ea
Apr 2006
when do we ge part 3 and what is the reason for the convent.
being a lesbian domme will it go my way.
GBF: Strangely, I was just thinking about this, this morning.
I have to say though... There wasn't any thought of domination of any sort. :-)
Not quite my style.
Oct 2005
Oooooo, that was delectably erotic! Very, very nice.
GBF: Oh, good!
Oct 2005
Mmmm, that was nice! And I very much want to know what's in store for Hail! On to Chapter two...
GBF: You know, I'm a little surprised it took you so long. :-)
Aug 2005
Delightful. So sensual
GBF: Glad you thought so!
Aug 2005
I was reading about Hail, the night before. *beams* I liked that one too. If you keep writing so quick, i'll never get through the list though :D *grins*
GBF: Hey, it could be worse. :-)
Jun 2005
Totally blown away! I look forward to more of the same quality writing on your part. Now that you've set the bar quite high, good luck ;) Regards, Chris
GBF: Oh, so did you read the next couple of chapters, Chris??
May 2005
Very well written. Full of fantasies, told and untold. I look forward to part 3.
GBF: Oh, so do I!
Apr 2005
Hail part 1 and 2 were very well written and both very sexilt explective.
GBF: No Tom? You sure?
Apr 2005
You know how I am Im not really into the lez stuff, so i wasn't that into that kind of stuff.
GBF: Yeah, I know. Thanks for finishing! :-)
Apr 2005
Well chapter one lovely. Hail went from a cold stret waif to a warm bed over night. The solo scene is well written and sensuous although a bit embarassing in the end.
Overall, a delightful story.
GBF: It was supposed to be embarrassing! And thanks.
Mar 2005
an unusual twist, excellent style and wicked in all different amounts of ways
GBF: Thanks. Sounds a lot like you!
Feb 2005
Very literate and enticing.
GBF: Ooh, thanks!
I was aiming for literate, but enticing came first!
Feb 2005
beautiful
...........
GBF: Thanks.
Feb 2005
Very nice, except one thing... It might have been nice to have a bit more description of where she was coming from. I get the idea that what happens in the "normal bedroom" is partly due to being warm and comfortable for once, but it's just a vague idea
GBF: I'm fond of the cat too!
Feb 2005
Wow. Gentle, done right. Most similar stories would have me snoozing two paragraphs in.
Also feels done, strangely, even though we know nothing of the larger plot. I'd find it hard to add to the end of this, without also adding on to the beginning.
GBF: It'll happen. I'm working on it!
Feb 2005
Very nice
Feb 2005
i think theyre great. tell that to lisa 4 me, alright? thanx ^-^
GBF: Thanks
Jan 2005
This is absolutely beautiful. So sweet, tender, romantic... very peaceful, but wonderfully erotic at the same time. I would be very interested in knowing when you publish more material
GBF: Thank you very much. I'd be very interested in letting you know!
Jan 2005
mmmmmmmmmmm
mmmmmmmmmmm
mmmmmmmmmmm
GBF: Hee hee. Bet I know what you were doing!
Jan 2005
How about Hail going into training to service the needs of the priests and brothers of the monastery? That could lead to all sorts of interesting adventures!
Dec 2004
That was great fucking shit. You deserve (7) hale marys.
GBF: Must be the time of year... I can't figure out if this is good or not, and I'm not sure whether 'hale' is misspelled or not!
Dec 2004
i loved it! my favorite erotism is stories, and yours was absolutely perfect! the language was used wonderfully. thank you for a great story.
GBF: Pleased to be of assistance.
Dec 2004
They were very sexual but not very believable. ...(unless you have a future plan for them in future chapters).
GBF: Oh, I have plans... :-)
Dec 2004
Splendid story. I can't wait to hear more of Hail's adventures at the convent. Very tittilating. I really enjoy girl/girl stories. Thanks, very well written
GBF: Thanks a lot. I really enjoyed writing it. I must get back to part 3...
Dec 2004
very good well written
Dec 2004
Also the dialog was poor between the two. The outcome was predictable except to organism by Marissa
GBF: Okay, I missed out some of your comment, but... I get lots of favourable comments specifically about the dialogue, so I'm a little surprised. I hope you forgive me for leaving in the comment about the organism. I don't mean to make fun, but that is very f
Nov 2004
Well, followed your link back, and am now reading this story. Getting ready to go to part two. I have not figured out how old she is. Maybe I missed her age? Good start.
GBF: I've never said. You can make her any age you want.
Oct 2004
Very Very stiring,,,, I was hard as a rock all the time I read the story. Id love to read stories like this every night. I can really get OFF on them.
GBF: You wanna watch that. Sounds like a medical condition.
Oct 2004
Very well written. When is Part 3 due out?
GBF: Due? Waddaya mean, due? As soon as I can.
Oct 2004
I love her already. I particularly like the setting.
GBF: I hope you read chapter 2 then
Oct 2004
Loved this story!!!Thanks.A clean 'dirty' story.
Oct 2004
Superb! I hope you continue this story, there is so much more that I want to know about your characters.
I too am a feline lover.
Oct 2004
i think its a good story it keeps u hangin on right till the end
GBF: Hee hee. When I read that comment, I thought you said 'bangin' for a start...
Sep 2004
Great
Sep 2004
so real I hurt inside..a delicious ache...a pleasure induced by the excitment of your story
Sep 2004
Yow! Hail's fun. You have a nice way of distilling an erotic story down to the essential elements which make the protagonist sympathetic as well as sexy. Well done. As usual...
GBF: Oh, thanks.
Sep 2004
Damn it, enough with the cliff hangers! I think these are the last two stories I had to read. Grr. Now get your ass writing part three for them both! :)
GBF: Bully
Aug 2004
Delightfully erotic. I hope you develop this more.
Thank you. And the kitten is great.
Aug 2004
Intriguing start. And nicely hot. The kitten is a good touch.
Aug 2004
This was truly erotic writing as opposed to much of the verbiage found all about these days. Thank you.
Aug 2004
lovely
Aug 2004
nice, smile-able
Jul 2004
WELL HAIL YES I LIKED IT MUCH ...HOW ABOUT MORE OF HAIL AND MARISSA?
GBF: Not sure about that...
Jul 2004
well like you said it was short and strange,but you have away with words...
Jul 2004
Good story. Lot of room to develop the plot. Look forward to the next installment.
Jul 2004
This is a good story. I am somewhat troubled by the one-line dialog. Everyone wants to be authentic, but I think the one-liners are messy.
GBF: Sorry you feel that way about the dialogue. Pleased you liked the story.
Jul 2004
I just found your story. it's an interesting beginning. I wonder where you'll go with it.
...
you have a wonderful touch with your sex scenes as well, and that's also enjoyable.
Jul 2004
Ijust finished reading both parts of Hail, and and although girl/girl is not my big turn on,I found it hard to stop reading. Once again it was the slow build up and excellent dialogue that held my attention. You do have a way with words. Thanks again for
Jul 2004
I love the story. It's kind of mysterious and romantic all at the same time. The writing is beautiful, almost poetic. I loved the scene between the two girls.
Jul 2004
Hail seems unusually disinterested in food or water considering that it's been a while since either.
You paint some very beautiful word pictures and describe the indescribable sensations of touching.
GBF: Food? Water? Hmmm... Actually, that's not a bad idea...
And thanks!
Jul 2004
I'm particularly impressed with the dialogue, its rare to find so much of such high quality in any one story.
GBF: And I, for my part, am particularly picky about it. Thanks for noticing.
Jun 2004
It would be a 10 if you had mother superior catch them pleasuring each other and give them both a good spanking.
GBF: You slut!
Jun 2004
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I enjoyed reading chapter 1 when it was first posted, and the second chapter maintains the excellence of style and substance. The characters are interesting and feel real, the sex is well written, and I'm eager to find
GBF: Thank you!
Jun 2004
Very very enjoyable, very fine story. It is so well written, with so much kindness, that reading it I felt exactly in place of Marissa, as if I was Marissa, so that I gave myself two beautiful orgasms!
Thousand thanks to You, dear writer and ... excuse
GBF: You are excused!
Jun 2004
so far so good
Jun 2004
Great story tell me when part two comes
GBF: Yeah, tell me too!
Jun 2004
Good plot development. Not too fast. Descriptive without being overly so. Hope that you will continue the story.
Jun 2004
I like it so far. Lots could happen!
GBF: Like what, for instance?
Jun 2004
very descriptive without being pornographic....enjoyed reading it
Oct 2003
Hi Gentle,
you rotten, conniving, ... writer!
This is so damn good, I want more right now! Ant this is just the first chapter!
Hail is an intriguing character, and there's so much mystery about her, her circumstances, and the world in general, that
Oct 2003
I just finished chapter 1 of "Hail", and came here hoping I'd find more (sigh).
Oct 2003
nice and sweet look forward to reading more
Oct 2003
no idea where we are going but a good start. nice style...you take your time.
GBF: Why thanks.
Sep 2003
I like the story thus far. I look forward to more chapters.
Sep 2003
I've enjoyed your stories before. Can't recall if I've ever written you about them.
I like the imagry you are able to project. Erotic in a soft sort of way too.
Too early to vote yet on this story...let's see how it unfolds. It has many great possib