The adventures of Akakia

In progress...

Sexual traditions within the tribe were simple.

MF FF rom con

 

The adventures of Akakia - Jan 00

The adventures of Akakia 2 - Jul 08

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Recent feedback

Aug 2010
was alright. Well written but not really my style. Got ms going.

Aug 2010
...was alright. Well written but not really my style. Got me going.

Jul 2009
Great story. Might we see another chapter some time in the future?
      GBF: Given the five years between these two, I wouldn't hold my breath. :-)

Oct 2008
Great story, would love to read more. Made me feel good. An interesting concept for a story.

Sep 2008
I was thoroughly turned on. I couldnt help but pleasure myself and timed my cuming as Liana came for her second time. I enjoyed the feelings you projected between them, loving and so tender. Thank you !
      GBF: What about part two? :-)

Sep 2008
Wow. Very sensual and erotic. And yes, I'd love to read more.

Aug 2008
would like more
      GBF: More?

Aug 2008
I appreciated this story very much. I felt it was written and enjoyed it a lot.

Jul 2008
interesting.....i liked it well both of them

Jul 2008
interesting.....i liked it well both of them

Jul 2008
Do you realize how long it's been? Of course you do, you wrote it. Man, I've actually forgotten that one. Sheesh.

Jul 2008
i read 2 first! lol i like it better than 1 cos i like guys girls? not so much ;)

Jul 2008
This is the best I have read from you. I really loved the intimate pleasure of this encounter. I sure hope there will be more of this.

Jul 2008
this is an interesting fantasy I liked it

Mar 2008
Nice tale of an early tribal ritual... Here's hoping we find out what 'the Giving' is soon!

May 2006
perhaps if the giving were not an end but a beginning
      GBF: That could well be the case...

Jul 2005
This story is wonderful. The setting that's cool. The dialogue was perfect. This story kept me hard, that's for sure. It just felt so real.
      GBF: Thanks. That's the idea!

Jun 2005
I didn't get as deep into this one as is usual for me in one of your stories--maybe 'cause I'm a boy. That didn't keep my erection down though! This sounded like it could be the intro to a long work, both the name "Adventures . . ." and the detail abo
      GBF: Thanks for the 8. I'm really not sure I want to go any further with this though.

Jun 2005
I enjoyed the setting of this one... you should give Akakia more adventures !
      GBF: Oh, I've moved on so far... :-)

May 2005
A wonderful story, I was so aroused that I couldn't contain myself. As I read my hand teased and tortured until my body exploded in orgasm---thanks.
      GBF: What stunning feedback!

Apr 2005
Lovely story. Seemed real, felt I was there with them. Wish I could have been. You do beautiful work and I look for more from you. Best Wishes.
      GBF: Thanks. Oh God, everyone wants more today... :-)

Apr 2005
Well this story is ok, I not really into cuz Im not really into the lez stuff. I think if it wasn't for that on my case it would be good.
      GBF: Thanks.

Sep 2004
Nicely done. A female 'stroke' story. Very well written, from a woman's point of view. Also nice for us voyeurs. I sure would like to see what's in your closet...hehe Thanks for another one.
      GBF: Closet? Me? Nah.