Kaz

In progress...

Holding the ice in her left hand, she touched her nipple with it, and felt the shock race through her again.

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Kaz Part One - Jan 00

Kaz Part Two - Jan 00

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Recent feedback

Aug 2010
I like. A little lovin and a little SciFi, perfect combination.

Aug 2010
I like. A little lovin and a little SciFi, perfect combination.

Sep 2009
I hope the first two chapters are just the beginning of a much longer story. This is the first of your stories i have read and I will now read more if no all of them.

Nov 2007
Enjoyed Kaz Part One

May 2006
I decided to start at the beginning to see what I've missed. And...Oh Boy. I'm so glad I found your site! Loved the futuristicness(?) of it, and the ice! Well, I'll just say that I'm buying a bag of it today!
      GBF: I expect a full report. :-)

Oct 2005
I loved the story but what about an editorial comment. Three lines below where "shampoo. two people." is asked for it says "untill he finally grabbed told of her" should read grabbed hold of her. After all your time and effort it is the least I can do.
      GBF: Damn. That's gotta be four years, and no one said a word! Thanks. All fixed, at least at ASSTR

Aug 2005
Goonna go read the other parts - - -
      GBF: Parts? Oh oh. There's only one other!

Aug 2005
wow

Aug 2005
Gentle.........well done. I'm not sure whether I like Kaz better or Meg. They're both sexy and uninhibited. Like I said.....you are superb with discriptive essay.
      GBF: Thanks a lot. You're very kind. Oh, and I can't decide either...

Aug 2005
Read part 1 and 2 back to back and can only manage one word.....DDDAAAMMMNNNN!!!

Aug 2005
Read part 1 and 2 back to back and can only manage one word.....DDDAAAMMMNNNN!!!

Aug 2005
It was great! I came in record time. I loved it great cock raising story.
      GBF: Hey, whatever works, buddy. :-)

Jul 2005
Great story enjoyed it very much.
      GBF: So did I! :-)

Jul 2005
Good but,
      GBF: But?

Jul 2005
Gteat story
      GBF: I wouldn't have called them 'teats' :-)

Jun 2005
Gentle, please get some more ice....
      GBF: You're hot? :-)

Jun 2005
Too short, too short! Too good of a story to not be more fleshed out. "Fleshed out"!? Hmm, I think your writing is having the intended effect on this intrigued reader...
      GBF: Damn, you really need to leave an address! :-) I'm pleased it worked though!

Jun 2005
Great story! I loved the "futuristic" element. The characters were nicely rounded and quite believable in thier setting. The story tempo was smooth, not choppy like poorly handled erotofic can be. I enjoyed the vivid but not-too-flowery details and...he
      GBF: Well, you could have left an email address, so I coul quiz you about that, but thank you very, very much.

May 2005
This is a good one, however I am not to into the future thing. Nothing to do with the wrighting, Its still a good one just not my favorite.
      GBF: Hey, they can't all be. Nothing wrong with an 8, in any case. Thanks.

Apr 2005
Kaz Part Two comments = This was a good beginning to a weekend but what happened to the other 44 hours?
      GBF: I wrote this years ago! I was shy!

Apr 2005
The story was a little confusing at first but the longer I read the more I liked it. Good sex deserves at least an 8!
      GBF: Well, I'm glad it improved for you!

Apr 2005
The communication process was a bit hard for me to follow, but the sexual descriptions really turned me on so I can only say that this story is very good. Nice bit of foreplay, and a great orgasm is all I need to feel good about your writings. Nicely done
      GBF: Hey, I'm glad I overcame your difficulties!

Feb 2005
Tell me more, please!
      GBF: More? Like what? :-)

Jan 2005
Read part 1 and 2 tonight. Kaz and Leks had GREAT sex that realy turned me on. It was based on pure sexual desire with no personal relationship! Loved it when he *****
      GBF: You can't give it away, but thanks.

Jan 2005
You just made my fantasis come true.
      GBF: Good. Which ones, exactly?

Dec 2004
there has to be more !!!
      GBF: Says who? :-)

Dec 2004
Read both parts. Very good.

Dec 2004
Heh i bet you're tired of hearing from me now, i really love your storys, such a picture... life-like, magical thanks again.
      GBF: Not yet, I'm not.

Nov 2004
Please either keep posting or mark this "abandoned." Preferably, start posting again! :)
      GBF: Yeah, Auryn bullied me about that, too. I'm just thinking...

Oct 2004
errr.... For all the ice in that story, it sure is hot in here! Excellent, intriguing, erotic, delightful to read. Gotta save some of the adjectives for the rest of your stories, I'm sure...
      GBF: I like it hot! :-)

Sep 2004
Fuck me, I'm horny! *sigh*

Jul 2004
Much better
      GBF: Better? Better than what?

Jul 2004
I certainly hope that means that more chapters of this story will be posted!
      GBF: Well, the second one was... Just click this


Amazing. Very well-imagined."


I just wanted to let you know that I really did enjoy your story. Will there be a sequal???? :)


The best stories do take on a life of their own...."