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She peeled the jeans down off his rear, but then they were stuck. "You're going to have to lie on the floor buddy. I need to apply some force."

MF rom con

 

Lust - Jan 00

Life - Jan 00

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Recent feedback

Jun 2006
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmm and real life stuff too!!
      GBF: Awww, thanks.

Jun 2006
this was a very good story, lust very good word i need a healthy bucket of that. this story reads very easey and lets mind wonder thank you sonny
      GBF: Sonny? :-)

Nov 2005
Any chance of finishing this someday? It's sweet.
      GBF: Yeah, well the problem is that I've tried. I'll get back to it. Maybe I need to get older... And thank you very much.

Jul 2005
Great continuation! It would be neat to continue the cycle with a third story another decade on: "Twenty Years After".
      GBF: I actually always intended three stories. It's complex... Thanks.

Jul 2005
Its alright....
      GBF: Gee, thanks. :-)

Jun 2005
not rude at all. sexy teenage pure first time sex the best i could ever hopt toread.
      GBF: So much so that you couldn't punctuate, or capitalise? :-) Thanks.

Jun 2005
I do enjoy your writing style...great imagery....certainly brings us into the story as if we were there...
      GBF: Thanks a lot. I wish I could email you a proper thanks.

Jun 2005
sweet ending!!!!!

Jun 2005
wow. fantastic. I love the way you really LIKE your characters, and you make us really like them too and you love sex, and bodies, and romance, and believe in happy-ever-after. you bring tears to my ears.......at the same time as you bring moisture el
      GBF: Ooooh!

May 2005
Wow Gentle. This one was great! I hope my husband and I are like this still in 10 years. I don't think I can say this enough, you are a GREAT WRIGHTER...very gifted!
      GBF: 10 Years isn't much! :-)

Feb 2005
Help..... where's part 1 of this?
      GBF: Here : Lust

Feb 2005
Oops... sorry. Found the first part. *giggle* I'll be back when I've actually read them. *smile*
      GBF: Some people... :-)

Feb 2005
Very Very Nice!! Captures both the innocence and excitement of a once in a lifetime experience. Every girl should be so lucky as to have an experience such as that her first time
      GBF: Oh, thanks... All the best ones are anonymous...

Feb 2005
What a beautiful story...... and the perfect setting. Nothing beats a hot tub in the rain!!! A perfect sensuous, erotic tale of people totally in love. Bravo!!
      GBF: Thanks. Now get in the water! :-)

Jan 2005
...Wow. I dont read many of these stories, but if i do, i prefer that they be husband and wife. theres something special about that union. keep it up!
      GBF: Welcome aboard. I hope you read some more then.

Jan 2005
Read "Lust" then "Life" and they individually and/or together make a great story. Very convincing in all ways. Give you a 9 for each.
      GBF: Thanks again.

Jan 2005
Read "Lust" then "Life" and they individually and/or together make a great story. Very convincing in all ways. Give you a 9 for each.
      GBF: Thanks.

Jan 2005
Wow I hope my life is like that. I may be young but i know what i want from my life, and thats part of it. Thanks for giving me hope
      GBF: What, you didn't have any before?

Sep 2004
A great story of renewal. Loved it.
      GBF: Thanks for that. I took the liberty of fixing some typos in your comment. Hope you don't mind.

Sep 2004
Followed instructions, read 'Lust' first, took a short break, hehe, and read 'Life'. It was a nice continuation of a life partnership, which I liked, but found the sex a little 'too' much.(can't beleive I wrote that). Maybe I'm still tired from reading 'L
      GBF: Not like you to follow instructions! :-)

Sep 2004
Nice Dialogue, as usual. Great little stroke story.... which reminds me.......gotta go now.
      GBF: Hey, you can keep SOME things to yourself!

Sep 2004
Another very well done vignette. Definitely sweet and a pleasure to read.

Jul 2004
Very nice. I've read several of your pieces now, and this is one of my favorites. Thought you might like to know: you keep misspelling "lightning" as "lightening", but should be no "e" in it.
      GBF: I wonder how that happened. Let me check and fix it...Done. Thanks.

Jul 2004
wow
      GBF: Thanks. That must be the smallest feedback I ever got!!

Jul 2003
That was extremely sensual. Loved it. I would have to say that you are the best author on Asstr I have read.


A riveting tale of the first time for both. Well done.


I love characters that obviously care for one another....I guess that's my mushy side peeking out.