TLP

Complete

He didn't say anything either. He put his hands on my hips, and slid his cock between my legs and up, through the sopping lips and inside me. One stroke.

MF

 

TLP 1 - Jun 08

TLP 2 - Jun 08

TLP 3 - Jun 08

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Recent feedback

Jan 2012
I liked it as far as it went. It moved at a good pace and was believable although different from any of my experiences. I will read TLP2

Oct 2010
Absolutyely hilarious! Had me laughing out loud. The plot and scenes were outrageous, but from my perspective, were not out of the ordinary.

Jun 2010
fkn awesome! like HOT!!!! very impressive. very clever. really well written and fkn HOT!!!!!

Aug 2009
Too funny.

Jul 2008
I especially liked the intro and the finale. Very different from Three Little Pigs. But each in their own way is very good.

Jul 2008
nice sex scenes but she sure is easy!

Jul 2008
Hey, this is great Gentle. But It kinda left me hanging. Is there more? But it is neat.

Jul 2008
I enjoyed reading it but I felt it lacked your usual detail. Sort of like a low resolution digital photo. Thank you.

Jul 2008
Really!!! And in 3 parts yet! My what big ------- Fun!! Keep it up

Jul 2008
*****- only doesn't work cause Glenda makes it clear that they weren't little at all. In fact she makes it appear that they were quite well endowed. But, this was good. Funny thing is I can see this as a comedy/drama movie. Wesley Snipes, Sinbad, and

Jul 2008
Kind of a screwy story line, but I could not put this aside until finished

Jul 2008
Glenda seems to be a Red headed May West. Love it

Jul 2008
What is the brother going to fix ?Glenda ? I loovvvveee Glenda.

Jun 2008
***** (with a touch of LRRh) Yes, I liked it. It could probably use just a little detail, here and there, but no doubt, doing that properly is easier said than done. Glenda's voice was pretty convincing, too. Good job!

Jun 2008
I guess I am getting slow on the uptake. It took me 2 whole chapters to figure out the meaning of the title. Good going Gentle.

Jun 2008
Nice remake on an old tale!

Jun 2008
*****, obviously. Decent story, all in all.

Jun 2008
***** ;)

Jun 2008
BB=Big Brother?

Jun 2008
Best telling of three little pigs I've ever heard or seen! Now that was funny, clever and entertaining, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

Jun 2008
This is your best one. Great innuendo. No extra words. Good storytelling. Congrats.

Jun 2008
Gentle, ***** obviously, it maybe that Glenda is an associate off BB Wolffe. No I give up, can't remember the plot, so tell me.

Jun 2008
TLP, too little pussy? Maybe I'm just stating my own condition! LOL

Jun 2008
Damn!!!! You tricky old sod! I knew the *****, but somehow didn't connect it with the *****!!! Hahahahahaha....so he *****...or she blew something?? So, I guess it ends there as a parody, eh?

Jun 2008
Great story...love the lady! Can't say the plot is familiar...haven't kept up with my gangster history. I assume this is a work in progress? You going to drop it here??!! There are a lot of loose ends that could lead in many directions...well done f

Jun 2008
duh..... *****? Took me a minute but I should've gotten it right away with BB Wolfe. A "blonde" Glenda would have been too much? ;o) Very nice.

Jun 2008
I just finished reading this story and the result is.....my panties are soaked and my fingers are sticky. Very sexy. :-)

Jun 2008
I've just had a thought: this red-headed babe, she wasn't wearing a hooded cloak at some point before the start of the story was she?

Jun 2008
LOL! That's funny. And Red, I mean Glenda, is deliciously slutty. What's next? Snow White and some short guys?

Jun 2008
This story keeps getting better. I think the girl loves to fuck. Wonder what she'll do next? Very interesting story. Would love for you to write some more of it.

Jun 2008
Well, this girl sure is not bashful. I love the wood dildo effect. Talk about sex on the run...she gets into it very well.

Jun 2008
Telling the TLP to the grand kids will never be the same again :-)

Jun 2008
These Tax Inspectors may sound rough, but they're all huff and puff. Still, it doesn't sound like it'll take much to blow that house down, or the next, probably.

Jun 2008
Oh and I am still sitting with the cheesy grin. Don't you just love a man with a sense of humour. I liked the bit where she found the wooden model....