Call me

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Call me

mast F

 

Settled in bed the woman reads for a while.

Words blur with tiredness, but not before she's at least a little excited by the content.

It's late, dark, cold and lonely.

She struggles, but manages to find the energy to turn to the reading light, glimpse the time, and drop the book.

She lies there, tired but not quite asleep. Visions and ideas from the blurry book dance in front of her closed eyes.

Opening them, she turns back to the bedside table, and then instead of turning on the light, she picks up her cellphone.

Her breasts look strange in the techno backlight, and she waves the phone around to see the effect before pressing more buttons on the keypad, pausing, and then punching some more.

The last button-press is emphatic, deliberate and final.

She lifts the blankets, slides the cool case of the phone down her body, between her breasts and down over her navel, and then further.

Lifting the elastic with one hand, she slides the phone into her thin purple panties with the other. Down over her dark thatch of hair, and lower, until the edge of the device is nestled snugly between two puffy labia.

She turns over, presses her thighs to the sheets beneath her, wriggles to get comfortable, and falls asleep.

If you looked quickly enough, on the glowing display lighting up her pink wetness, you'd see the latest sent item displayed on the screen.

Call me.

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Recent feedback

Sep 2010
Needs more depth,more arousing

Jun 2010
id love 4 that to happen to me it would be so hot

May 2010
Another good one, Gentle, attaboy!
      GBF: :-)

Feb 2010
Interesting site - some good material - a cut above the rest...

Jan 2010
I liked it alot would love to get calls at night when horny

Jun 2009
different but nice.

Nov 2008
Thanks for a fun interlude. Your words flow, tease, and delight.

Oct 2008
I hve a freied and we often have phone sex. She often rubs her clit with the phone. I always feel a strong sexual tie to her.

Oct 2008
Near perfect. How about some more of this length. They must be very difficult to write !!! but worth every bit of it.
      GBF: Some of them just suit this length, I think...

Jun 2008
Smart girl. I really enjoyed this one and just might try it. Lol

Jun 2008
Short and sweet. I gave it a top mark. Thanks for a great start on a Monday morning.

Jun 2008
Not bad -- not your best :-) but no one gets to keep improving forever except those who die young. It left me with a smile, as opposed to a hardon ;-) so was satisfactory.

Jun 2008
cute

Jun 2008
Cute! Fun little piece; makes me wonder who she called...

Jun 2008
I bet she has the cell on vibrate.... give me her # and I will call.

Jun 2008
I assume the phone's on vibrate.

Jun 2008
I've heard of 'phone sex', but this is a bit beyond how most do it... Guess she set it to vibrate and sent her lover a 'call me' message so it would get her off. Cue background music from Kraftwerk, 'telephone call'. Great little short tale.

Jun 2008
I'm ready, where is the number. Love it.

Jun 2008
Great story, as per your norm. Unconventional and very well executed; definately a Gentle But Firm piece. I've had to say this a few times before, but the lass and I have done something similar...

Jun 2008
"Call me" is rather suggestive ;-)~ and I like it! It is just the right length to get one thinking.

Jun 2008
I really liked it. I can say I've done that before. I think she put it on vibrate,myself.

Jun 2008
Cool,,, I reckon I would just have to call. Did she put it on ring or vibrate????? :-) I enjoy your writing.

Jun 2008
wow!! you still got it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jun 2008
I wonder if Nokia includes that kind of treatment when testing their products?? ;)

Jun 2008
'Call me' -- GREAT Story, send more!

Jun 2008
Hee hee. Very naughty. I remember reading something along those lines. Getting pleasure from a vibrating phone. That one was about a guy. :-)

Jun 2008
555-4848 :-)

Jun 2008
so........ is the phone on vibrate?

Jun 2008
Well done! Exceptional visuals! And, as usual the tale told is short but oh,so sweet.

Jun 2008
LMAO!!!!! Seriously...

Jun 2008
GREAT, Gentle!! Short, to the point, vivid...and the suspense at the end...LOVE IT!

Jun 2008
Short and sweet. Thank you.

Jun 2008
And there was me thinking these mobile phones damn nuisance