"I'm naked. Don't you have any better ideas?"

Kicking the panties across the floor, she grinned, turned, and walked into the bedroom, knowing he was staring at her ass.

The Magician's Birthday - Nov 07

The Magician's Birthday 2 - Nov 07

The Magician's Birthday 3 - Nov 07

The Magician's Birthday 4 - Dec 07

The Magician's Birthday 5 - Dec 07

The Magician's Birthday 6 - Dec 07

Jan 2012
Had I the power, I'd have you locked up in solitary . . . until you finished chapter 7, and promised to continue forever!!! So very sweet, fun, sexually stimulating, and completely FREE of the "Will to hurt" which poisons so much of the erotica out t
      GBF: No, no, no! Six chapters. That's it! But thanks. :-)

Dec 2010
These were really charming stories, full of fun and surprises. Thanks for the artful writing.

Sep 2010
I hate the end of your stories. I get emotionally involved with your characters. The end is obviously necessary but seldom welcome. That's meant to be a sincere compliment.

Aug 2010
I think you do good story telling. I love these kinds of plots.

Jun 2010
Great story. Thanks so much for sharing it. Can't think of any improvements though, sorry.

Mar 2009
Excelent story, really enjoyed it; a great stoy line, with sex to spice it up.

Mar 2009
Only one complaint,story was too short,but I loved what I got. Thanks for another wonderful tale.

Mar 2009
Very good story, I appreciate the lack of spelling errors and that you took trouble to get the grammar right. It makes reading so much more enjoyable if the right work is used to evoke the right sense. All in all, very enjoyable and professional work.

Mar 2009
A very interesting story. Up to your usual fine standards. One 'slight' problem (especially in a story about magicians), it is 'sleight of hand' not 'slight of hand'.

Mar 2009
Very good story, please write

Mar 2009
I like the way the secrets of witchdom are being revealed bit by bit amongst all the sexy action. There must be more to come. Please.
      GBF: No. Sorry.

Mar 2009
I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the further chapters.

Feb 2009
Just read this story and voted on it. To be honest I can't quite see why it only has 8,8,8 as and expanded score. I thought the story line, the character development and even the conclusion were great. Oh, to be involved in a fantasy like that :), but the

Sep 2008
Well this was quite an interesting story. I am quite fond of your longer stories, though i do realize they take a great deal of time, something you don't have. It would be nice of you to continue this one at your leisure. This has the potential to become
      GBF: I think it's finished... :-)

Sep 2008
Many thanks for taking the time to write and post such high quality material. I enjoyed reading this story, and my only slight disappointment is that it hasn't a sequel (yet).
      GBF: Oh, I'm pretty sure I don't have time for that. Yet...

Jun 2008
I liked it. It was sexy. I was wondering how it was all going to turn out.
      GBF: I liked it. It was sexy. I was wondering how it was all going to turn out.

Jan 2008
I loved the conclusion to this inventive and imaginative story. It's good to have you back.

Dec 2007
Gentle, a very satisfying end, I've often wondered about a polyamorous setup. I suspect in real life there would be problems, but with the aid of telepathy and magic, who knows. Great series, nicely written and set out. I hope that you have time

Dec 2007
Very, very nice. Can't imagine why he can't get around the problem of the doors but at least he understood enough to get a nice present for his birthday! Tied things up nicely; good story.

Dec 2007
Loved it.

Dec 2007
Enjoyed the story. I think you were a bit rushed as there were a number of grammatical errors that I do not recall coming across in your other stories.

Dec 2007
i see you could not take retirement, good to hear from you again.the story was very good ,well written an good plot.hope to see morestories from you.

Dec 2007
That was great, but please say that you will continue the universe even if the story is ended.

Dec 2007
Thanks for the early Christmas gift. I enjoyed the story very much, even though much like "Zane", I was getting distracted by the lack of information being divulged. A good wrap up. Thanks again.

Dec 2007
that was great fun, indeed. Thanks!

Dec 2007
What a fantastic end to this story. I really love it. What an experience he must have had. This was truly worth reading. Look forward to some more stories when you have time. Thanks so much for this. I really enjoyed it very much.

Dec 2007
thank you!

Dec 2007
Okay, I have read all that you have written on this Magician's B'Day. All the way through Chapter six. Great, Interesting, I like the short choppy style, the tumbling of conversations over one another, the fantastic way you keep the poor boy confused.

Dec 2007
From now on, I'm going to be on a witch hunt. With any luck, I might die with a smile on my face and a witch or 2 in my arms.

Dec 2007
Just finished chapter 6 and it was a wonderful ending. It tied up the few loose ends nicely. To bad you can't find another story for Pan to appear in. She made it a really fun read.

Dec 2007
This was an amusing little piece, but nothing earth shattering.

Dec 2007
Thank you, interesting!

Dec 2007
Very good. Nicely thought out. I suppose you wont give those two girls's address away.

Dec 2007
If that wasn't fun I don't know what isn't! Thanks! I enjoyed it immensely Ohh and on another note thanks for coming back. I do like you style of writing.

Dec 2007
well that's not exactly how i pictured it ending but it's nice all the same

Dec 2007
You know, a week with Pandora would be quite a treat. It would be my last week, but what a way to go!

Dec 2007
This ended pretty well - a nice closure on it, with fun sex thrown in for spice, like nutmeg and cinnamon!

Dec 2007
Just do it.

Dec 2007
Turns out is a warm loving tale and I really love it.

Dec 2007
OOOH fantastic. What a lovely ending :D thank you!

Dec 2007
I don't like it much... I love it! :)

Dec 2007
I found this chapter to be a lot of fun with the doors and the delicious Pandora. I, like Lasco I think, am a little puzzled about Lasco's role in the scheme of things. But that's part of the attraction of the mystery. Thanks so much for writing.

Dec 2007
I Really like this story, and would like to read more of them about the magician.

Dec 2007
Gentle, I wish you could cash my comments. Pandora's an active little witch and sexy. Shame this story has only six chapters. Can I request The Magicians Next Birthday please, and perhaps a sequel after that. I know I'm greedy. Thank you.

Dec 2007
A good story does not need to have sex and thisis a very good story!!

Dec 2007
Great story, I love magic and witches, especially gorgeous witches, that like sex. Good read, no errors that I noticed, and that is a HUGE plus in this industry.

Dec 2007
From the looks of things it seems that Pandora is more like her namesake...

Dec 2007
These are exquisite stories. I can't wait each time for the next. So glad you're back

Dec 2007
Yum.. Very arrousing.. both erotic-ly, and Curiousity. I can't wait for the more. :)

Dec 2007
This is still a great story old friend. You are on the right track. Please keep sending them to me.

Dec 2007
It's coming along nicely. Lots of things to "watch."

Dec 2007
I... wow! Wow.

Dec 2007
Absolutely delightful !!

Dec 2007
I like it

Dec 2007
I don't see how you'll finish this in only 6 chapters...but I can't wait...

Dec 2007
I'm enjoying very much. Thanks for all you hard work.

Dec 2007
Very interesting part of this story.

Dec 2007
Best one yet, please keep it going

Dec 2007
wonderful to have you back!!

Dec 2007
Does this mean he gets Pandoras box? I'm a bit confused and waiting to see where we are going. Never a dull moment.

Dec 2007
I'm smiling, TY

Dec 2007
THis is an interesting and absorbing story. I like the way you are revealing things through Lasco's eyes. The mystery is a vital part of the plot and that way you manage it deliciously.

Dec 2007
Gentle, very nice, love the transportation spell, so the queen needed a lift home.

Dec 2007
now you have me really curious as to what will happen next. I don't think you will be able to finish out the story in six chapters it really needs to keeep going. Best wishes and keep up the good work please

Dec 2007
This part seems fine. It's exciting to think of what may happen next. Great plot unfolding here. Can't wait until the next part. Seems like it may be something I want to read.

Dec 2007
It keeps getting better and better!

Dec 2007
Zane might have gotten just what he desires with women. It does not seem that he will have too much want for sex at all.

Dec 2007
I like the Magicians Birthday. It sounds like good fun, and the possibilities seem endless. ;-)

Dec 2007
The more you retire the better you get!

Dec 2007
Im a curious Kat, and you have definitely piqued my curiosity

Dec 2007
Retired? Hah. You can't retire, writing is great.

Dec 2007
Just read this story and it seems to be quite exciting. I know there's much more to it and I would love to read it. Let me know when you do the next chapter.

Dec 2007
Oooh.. it gets more interesting :D Yummy. as usual, More please.. and *teases* Isn't this already more than three scenes?

Dec 2007
Your people all have this relatively light-hearted disposition, sunny and fun-loving, as it were. I could wish to live my life with more people like that around me -- I know no one like that in reality, at the moment.

Dec 2007
Intriguing story. Disjointed, but seems to convey the saituation nevertheless. The eroticism is apparent, without being overwhelming. I trust this will change when pandora's Box is opened?

Dec 2007
very, very entertaining story-could happen maybe-but i as a old fat guy thought it was a very good read

Nov 2007
I am not sure where you're going, but you have caught my interest. Please to finish this as I would very much like to see where the end is.

Nov 2007
Hells bells. Where do one get a witch?

Nov 2007
Definitely liking this. I only gave it an 8 technically, because sometimes things were unclear at spots where I don't think you meant it to be unclear. But the plot is great. Very enjoyable. Good sex too.

Nov 2007
Please continue

Nov 2007
CCEMS102@aol.com

Nov 2007
I have never been able to get into the "magic" type of story. Probably the engineer type of brain that I have, but somehow, this story is different. I'm glad I decided to read it. Thaks for the story and looking forward to reading the rest.

Nov 2007
Really good story so far!

Nov 2007
First off this story has more turns than a West Virginia back-road. But like daddy use to say, "It maybe hard on the motor but it's worth the trip."

Nov 2007
Okay, having read all three installments of The Magician's Birthday, I am holding my breath in hopes that each time I open my mail box there will be another installment. Yes, I think it is that good, and yes I will keep reading.

Nov 2007
Gentle, I think that I can see where you are going. Looking orward to next Monday.This is getting better. :-)

Nov 2007
I like. keep going

Nov 2007
Please, Please keep writing, I can't wait to see where you take this, Please, do I have to get down on bended knee for you to continue? Seriously, I think this is going to be a very good story, please continue.

Nov 2007
Lucilla is really taking Zane on a trip and it's not just the sex! What has our magician let himself in for! As Lasco's mind opens to the possibilities within I wonder where his journey will take him? I'm enjoying this. Thanks so much for writ

Nov 2007
Littlerocksilver@aol.com

Nov 2007
Great turn inthe story I didn't see this one coming Keep up the good work. Best wishes.

Nov 2007
Great sexual story. They sure have it going on. I love that she is on top. Seems the feeling is much better that way. I see that mind games are still much in evidence. Must make the sexual experience more vivid.

Nov 2007
loved it. lots of fun, magic, myth, loving, minds searching and finding, perfect.

Nov 2007
Very mixed feelings. I felt OK being inside of Lasco's and Lucillia's head, sharing their pleasure but a bit of a peeping Tom about the other couple

Nov 2007
Why are these people always having so much pleasure even when danger appears, or is that part of the fun?

Nov 2007
Nice

Nov 2007
this story sure is getting more and more interesting lol

Nov 2007
A complaint -- too short!! More, dammit!

Nov 2007
I loved it. Your fast pased dialogue with quick wit and even quicker releases is why you are the best. Good work!

Nov 2007
I like it. It's almost poetry. You'll need to do more.

Nov 2007
Took me a while to have time to get to reading it, and I'm glad I took my time. This was _excellent_, intimate and complex and hot and loving all at once. I don't know if there's a commercial market for this kind of loving eroticism, but it's beautiful

Nov 2007
Hm. I like the direction of this chapter much better than the previous one.

Nov 2007
Very nice

Nov 2007
I don't *know* where it's going. It's kinda like a road trip. I know the next few bits, but after that... depends how it goes.

Nov 2007
I love this story. It does everything. What a rush. Hope there will be more of this one, it's too good to stop now.

Nov 2007
This one looks very good so far.

Nov 2007
Very nice. I liked part 1 but wondered why she disappeared at the end; of course, I don't know witch's rules. It would probably be covered in them. Part 2 had a lot of mind reading; a cool way to speedily give us background. But I'm still wonderi

Nov 2007
It seems that there is a lot more going on with Lucilla. It will be interesting to find out more of her story.

Nov 2007
This has the makings of an intriguing story. I look forward to reading the rest of it.

Nov 2007
I don't like it really. ;-)

Nov 2007
Great story I like to see the Magcian confused. I think he is starting to get worried about what is going o happen. Keep up the good work.

Nov 2007
Nicely written, magic is a nice plot device good use of words you have a nice flow and a good chapter ending I hope you write more chapters I'll be looking forward to them

Nov 2007
This is a most interesting story. I guess it's just a little different. Lucille seems to have an interest in Zane that's a little beyond the obvious sexual one. I wonder...

Nov 2007
Gentle, there's an awful lot left unexplained, I hope that there will be a smidgen of an answer in chapter three. Still I enjoyed it, thanks.

Nov 2007
I like this story so far, but I'm apparently not quite bright today...

Nov 2007
interesting theme, wondering what will be next? I'll wait, lol

Nov 2007
A very erotic chapter. It was also had an element humor to it, which I liked a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nov 2007
good story. :)

Nov 2007
This is going to make me crazy! *Grin* Excellent story. Really excellent. I love all the bits you wind in there...

Nov 2007
Ooooo! Mmmm! You know, I really like this chapter. Just as soon as I think I know what's going to happen you pull the rug out from under me... and do something better!!

Nov 2007
our imagination is rather a wonderous thing, you know? Good fun.

Nov 2007
I like the magician but love the witch! Very creative of you.

Nov 2007
amazing just amazing ;) thank you!

Nov 2007
LOVED the Magician so far...even though short on climax descriptions...Still, an excellent story and I hope you continue.

Nov 2007
A most interesting and sexy story. I really loved it. This is the kind of reading I really enjoy. These two girls really get it on and it is so sexy. Thanks for sending this most interesting story.

Nov 2007
strong uppity women, the best kind!!

Nov 2007
This story has kind of a slow, disjointed start but by the end of chapter two I'm begining to get into it. I look forward to chapter #3

Nov 2007
So far your story is getting more interesting and, while I am getting a feeling it will be even more so, it's still too early to be fair.

Nov 2007
So far all I see is a wierd FemDom story with little to recommend it. I sure hope it changes radically in the next chapter or I WILL stop reading. Psychological FemDom with controlled impotence is a real squick for me and for many other readers I'm

Nov 2007
I just finished reading the Magician and I loved the story. Well done! I look forward to reading other things from you.

Nov 2007
This was a very wonderful part of your story. It seemed very tender and I know they enjoyed it. I sure did. Look forward to your on-going story. It's really great.

Nov 2007
ps just in case, I am still enjoying.

Nov 2007
A great beginning to a wonderful tail, or is it tale? No matter it still fits ;-)

Nov 2007
Thank you, An interesting start. I look forward to your continued releases.

Nov 2007
I care! I care! Please don't stop. The first chapter was delicious with a taste of mystery, intrigue and a hint of danger at the end that really makes me want to read on.

Nov 2007
You definitely have my attention!! Great beginning!

Nov 2007
Intreaging Start

Nov 2007
Just do it.

Nov 2007
Oh, so if no one writes, no one cares. Please. You're much better than that. And this is one of the best pieces of work you've done, so why the poor me? It's good! You're good! Welcome back! You were missed! Now, keep it coming!!!!

Nov 2007
i lovde the stori i vil read the rest ovit

Nov 2007
If you have it written, and forget to post it, your developing signs of Alzheimer's! Now where did I put my keys...

Nov 2007
glad to know you feel like returning...us adventerous ordinary folk have missed your view of the world.

Nov 2007
When you have the rest let me know.

Nov 2007
I liked it, and I will definately be looking for all the other parts.

Nov 2007
I would like to see the next part when your ready.. I am into things to do with mind control..

Nov 2007
I was going to post in the morning but changed my mind. Once a week, when they are already written, you tease. Now you've left him on the bed tied up what are you going to do with him next.

Nov 2007
Oh my, that is different. Intriguingly different. 5 to go, bring them on, I'm hooked LOL

Nov 2007
this story was awesome!! i definately want to read more! keep up the good work!

Nov 2007
How do I do this. Please continue, or, you'd better not stop. If the next five are as good.

Nov 2007
Man what a story.

Nov 2007
Hm. I liked it, for the most part. I think she should have wished him a Happy Birthday at some point, though.

Nov 2007
Wow! That was better than Harry Potter 6! ;)

Nov 2007
The story is definately a little bit of a departure from your usual . Though the twists and surprises seem to be part of your signature style. I found it Interesting, engaging, and that it leaves you wanting more.

Nov 2007
Ooh, I _like_ the plot twist! I wasn't too sure about Zane all but forcing Lucilla to raise her skirt in public, but it turned out well. You, of course, haven't lost your touch.

Nov 2007
excellent! magical, really! ;)

Nov 2007
“A whispered sighing request in her ear. "Stay." “ I have to say, that is my favorite line. I believe I enjoyed the dialogue/the cat and mouse more than I enjoyed the fucking, although, that was just as savory. And to find him tied up the next morning

Nov 2007
That's a nice story with a hint at something of a plot line much deeper. And yet there's a playfulness rather than something dark. I like it.

Nov 2007
I really enjoyed this one. Like pretty much all of your stories. Nice ending ;)

Nov 2007
"The Magician's Birthday" was as good a story as you have ever written! You went back to your best - dialogue between two people and it was extremely good. Thanks for another "magic" story. You know you should come out of your semi-retirement.

Nov 2007
Good fun! I wonder if Harry lets Ginny tie him up?

Nov 2007
I really liked the dialogue. You sure have a talent for "banter".

Nov 2007
Nice twist! You're still a surprising fellow.

Nov 2007
The story was excellent

Nov 2007
I *LIKE* it. <333 Very hot.

Nov 2007
It seems like you've done it again, writing a prelude to something longer. It's nice to see people "get right to it;" foreplay is nice, but sometimes just cutting to the chase is what's needed.

Nov 2007
I think it is excellent. I was expecting an ending a little like that (Lucilla had to be special in some way) but not having cheated the end was a surprise and a delight. Sexy Lucilla, novel plot, and the dialog seemed real.

Nov 2007
Wonderful story. Thanks.

Nov 2007
Now that was a "feel good" story..... very nice. *smile*

Nov 2007
Great story. I enjoyed it immensely. I think you got a great mixture of tease, suspense, mystery, surprise, eroticism, and climax!