GBF - Picture This

Apr 2008
I thought it was hilarious when he was describing when he called sarah and she let him have it. He must have been pretty toasted not to have noticed the girl switch.

Apr 2008
I liked it, but i got a bit confused about the living arrangements and about sarah.

Dec 2007
Lisa? What happened to Amy? I would die happy with any one of your women, much less 2. So many woman, so little time.

Dec 2007
The Wizzard is much better.

Nov 2007
Very good.

Jul 2006
Bravo! You're very, very good at this... Hmmm...pink panties... Can't wait for the next chapter :)
GBF: Giggle and bonk is my specialty. :-)

Jul 2006
very good as useal i find the story hard to understand but it's the diffance between americanthought and engish diffance but stillavery good story please keep me on your listof poeple to e-mail thank you
GBF: Thanks.

Jul 2006
Again very well written as you lead your readers, step by step, through a very sexy encounter Amy and Scott. Amy seems like she know what she wants - just sex- and how she wants it - Scott on top. She is sure not a prude (my idea of a great sex fuck). A
GBF: You just might be reading more into this than actually exists...

Jul 2006
Gentle I got a very vivid and arrousing picture of a very excited Scott and an extremely willing Amy making the most out of one of those chance in a lifetime situations that you wish would happen every day! Wonderfully written and quite sexy. PS: doesn
GBF: Oh, good! That was the aim. :-) Oh, and nope!

Jul 2006
a good picture indeed
GBF: I'd better carry on, then. :-)

Jul 2006
more!
GBF: Soon!

Jul 2006
very good...please make a third
GBF: Oh, you asked very nicely. :-)

Jul 2006
consider this a request for a third chapter :). I really liked the tease in the beginning, BTW.
GBF: That's not like a demand, is it? :-)

Jul 2006
Are you going to make me beg? Well - tough! Just get on with it and stop teasing
GBF: That was the plan. :-)

Jul 2006
Your usual excellent, somewhat spare scene-setting and perky dialogue. I love reading it. Thanks for sharing!
GBF: Shucks, did you have to? :-) Thanks.

Jul 2006
Sure is a good way to screw up any realtionship. I dated 3 of 4 girls in the same apartment. Sequentially. Married the last one. I was very careful NOT to mix it up with the roommates; there were months between each relationship, too. Thanks
GBF: So what was wrong with the fourth?

Jul 2006
I haven't even read the first one yet, but this was great. The descriptions had the predictable tumescent effect. Good thing I can read one-handed! I am looking forward to reading the first part of the story so I can see what his part of the break-up w
GBF: Well if you're not going to read them in order... :-)

Jul 2006
Yeah, picture that! Another pretty lass to dally with ... hm, interesting! Good job.
GBF: What makes you think that's going to happen? :-)

Jul 2006
oh, yes, yes.. Thankyou~!
GBF: You alright? :-)

Jul 2006
Scott really does have a way of getting himself into trouble, doesn't he?
GBF: It seems he's jinxed, but hey, he's still having fun!

Jul 2006
Ok what do I have to do to get a part 3?
GBF: What a question!

Jul 2006
Ha-Ha!! Looks like this guy isn't done yet~ What a delightful story and ending. Can't help but wonder what Lisa thinks of all this....... Gee Gentle.... your talent never disappoints~
GBF: Shucks. :-)

Jul 2006
Oh yeah! I thought the first was pretty good. This one was great! I hope you're interested in trying for stupendous! I will have to admit, though, that I'm a fan of longer works, so as much as I appreciate the teasers, I do fervently hope they a
GBF: Well, thanks. Stupendous is quite a reach... I'll give it my best shot. Oh, and I always write what I most want to write at the time...

Jul 2006
LMAO that was great......
GBF: I'm even more pleased now!

Jul 2006
That was quite entertaining......can't wait to see what comes next!
GBF: Oh oh.

Jul 2006
I haven't got your facility with words,so I can't explain why I like this story so much.It's not the sort of thing I normally read but there is something about the light-hearted approach,the remembrance of emotions when one was young.It just seems so righ
GBF: Oh, you did alright. Thanks.

Jul 2006
Whew! Now that's more like it!! Outstanding ending...Great horned toads, how is he going to 'splain this???...LOL...Still more running dialog than I'd prefer (I like it broken with some descriptive stuff every so often)
GBF: Can't win 'em all. :-)

Jul 2006
This is getting better all the time, can wait for installment #3.
GBF: Thanks. I'll do my best.

Jul 2006
Thats wild...
GBF: Thanks. Sorry I couldn't leave the rest.

Jul 2006
OMG what an ending !!!!! Loved it! ++++ ty for making a second part oh so much
GBF: Thanks. Who ARE you? :-)

Jul 2006
Does your mother know what you do?
GBF: I've never been one to blab. :-)

Jul 2006
Just....thanks. Your the best
GBF: Is that all it takes? :-)

Jul 2006
Excellant, but you are getting a little perverted with this one. Loved it though. Please continue!
GBF: Perverted? In what way?

Jul 2006
This is very nicely done, and the details are very 'tasty' indeed! :-)
GBF: You're a foodie? :-)

Jul 2006
A trademark GBF story: great, sexy fun, with a twist. Luv and I are hairless...picture that, sweetie.
GBF: Oooh!

Jul 2006
I like it alot! :)
GBF: Whew!

Jul 2006
Oh, write more! Please. Hell, it's got me so horny!
GBF: What did you expect?

Jul 2006
This sounds familiar, almost.... No, I was thinking of anime, and while the humor is similar, the plots generally involve schoolgirls, so it doesn't work. Fun anyway.
GBF: Well, it was intended as a bit of fun...

Jul 2006
mmmn.. that sounds like a very good start to something more sorted.. both my imagination, and heart were racing by the end! - Meow.
GBF: Where do all these ideas come from? :-)

Jul 2006
If you don't write some more I shall pout, stamp my foot and throw a tantrum. Will that persuade you? I love it so far but I'm not going to make you all big-headed by paying you any more compliments until you write some more. So there!!!
GBF: Who ever said there would be more?

Jul 2006
Oh Gentle! I love it when you speak dirty to me. A man's Breath through Panties is always nice. Are you getting a big head, from being told how good you are?
GBF: Yep! :-)

Jul 2006
An excellent little tale, even if it was only a single exposure. I suspect Scott is going to have to do some /very/ fast talking.
GBF: Well, you've seen already that he's pretty quick. :-)

Jul 2006
Fun, Inventive, Funny. Yet another Yowsah!
GBF: Many thanks!

Jul 2006
would not mind if you put a couple more chapters to it . Thanks
GBF: That's what I like. Enthusiasm. :-)

Jul 2006
asusal very sexy with out down right screwing-very well written nicey done ///thank-you
GBF: Thanks!

Jul 2006
Interesting picture. What kind of noises do you make Gentle?
GBF: Keyboard tapping ones, like this...

Jul 2006
lol i pictured it, and i liked the picture :P
GBF: Oh, good!

Jul 2006
Good story. I CAN picture that! Now please tell me - Does he find an explanation out of that predicament?
GBF: Remains to be seen...

Jul 2006
It's very sexy....not really innocent. Seems like a lot of anticipation is going on. I love the story and hope you will continue with it. I want to read more. I believe the stage is set for some really good sex. The girl must be young and those pink panti
GBF: Oh, will you? :-) Thanks.

Jul 2006
NO SEX???? WHAT are you thinking??? Getting a bit long in the tooth, are we, old boy?
GBF: It's not the first time I've done this... :-)

Jul 2006
Great tease, I loved it and want more, your stories are great.
GBF: That's the way. More of that. :-) Thanks.

Jul 2006
very good gives me a very enjoying sight
GBF: Oh? :-) Good. I think.

Jul 2006
This is very entertaining for a start.
GBF: Start? :-)

Jul 2006
I like it, sir! I like it muchly! Yes, I do.
GBF: Oh, good!

Jul 2006
It feels like an extract of something more...but is cute enough to stand alone.
GBF: Just where I wanted to be! :-)

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