The Adventurous Matilda Tapley
She stood against him, and as she tipped her face up, her arms found their way around his waist. He looked down at her, and his lips met hers. His hands settled on her shoulders, and their mouths melted together. Matilda may have been inexperienced, but she had an instinctive understanding of what to do.
Oct 2013
Great and very sensitive tale, really want to follow their progress. Just a couple of spelling errors, but thanks for a very enjoyable read.
Jan 2011
Verrrry nice
Jan 2011
Hey gentle. I'm normally not into this sort of story but I thought that was REALLY hot! It says chapter 1. Is there more?????
GBF: I'm afraid not, at least for now.
Sep 2008
THAT..WAS...AWSOME
GBF: So was that. :-)
Jun 2006
Its been so long since I had a Virgin I didn,t know they still made them. This story brought back many very happy occasions. Thank you.Pappy
GBF: They make 'em. I think there's a tendency for a somewhat abbreviated shelf life. :-)
Jun 2006
pure fanasty, but good reading vear well wirten thank you
GBF: You were expecting something else? :-)
Mar 2006
MMMMMMMMMM........very nice indeed.
Jan 2006
This was very nice! I enjoyed it a lot!
GBF: Just what I was hoping for!
Dec 2005
Hard told story I bet. Since you wouldn't normally talk that way. Well except maybe the "Fuck me". Good writing over all. Y'all did good. Looking forward to more.
PS.... I only gave it a 7 because I feel like you have greater stories in you.
GBF: Depends what you mean by hard! :-)
Dec 2005
It must be a fantasy but I can't figure out if it's a woman's or a young man's.
GBF: It must?
Dec 2005
i've been reading your stories for ages now. but this was perfect. my favorite. thank you
GBF: I hope that's not just because I got someone else to help! :-)
Nov 2005
I loved this story a bunch! Can't wait til I have more time to enjoy some other ones.
GBF: Well, thanks. Come back soon!
Nov 2005
Great dialogue...;-))
GBF: Great response.
Oct 2005
Oh boy That was fantastic. Love the stories about young people and their first time. Brings back many memories. Keep up the great writing.
GBF: Oh, thanks a lot!
Oct 2005
A polite sex story that promises much and then delivers.
A very different style from your other stories. I can imagine myself writing something like this if I had the ability and patience. Thank you for sharing another of your creations.
GBF: Polite? :-)
Is this part of the criteria now? :-)
Oct 2005
Great Start! Keep writing this delightful tale.
GBF: Damn. Pressure... :-)
Oct 2005
An excellent story with great dialog and even better sex. But the whole story was not quite believable. I don't know what Gentile and Tramp contributed. Jed and Matilda are interesting characters. Please keep me informed for the next chapters.
GBF: And we're not saying either,. :-)
Oct 2005
Well, firstly ....OUTSTANDING!!!....Bravo, bravo, bravo...the combination of your talents far exceeds their prodigous sum...(!) Seriously, as individuals you are both interesting, amusing and smoking hot writers, but together....Eish....
Secondly, I'm
GBF: The standard answer here is 'it ain't LIKE that! :-)
Oct 2005
That was wonderful....I'm eager to read chapter two.
GBF: You have any idea how long that took? :-)
Oct 2005
Ah, the Great American West. One of my favorite subjects. I've seen few erotic stories about it but this one has started out great. And, better yet, the story line leaves room for many more chapters.
I like the way the dialogue captured the way of s
GBF: Oh, I thought you said 'wet'. :-)
Oct 2005
It was grand. ***
GBF: You gave too much of the story away, sorry. :-) But thanks.
Oct 2005
That was, quite succinctly, one of the sexiest and most arousing things I have yet read. I need to go rape a certain someone now, the whole thing was incredibly hot. Absolutely awesome job, you two.
GBF: I'm verging on speechlessness!
Oct 2005
Do you like it? Hell yes!
GBF: Thanks. And thanks so very much for the editing assistance as well!