"... and pull their skirts up almost to their hips, showing off their legs..."

"No!"

"... and their knickers. Flash their breasts."

"Excuse me my good man. I need to have a word with you."

"Ah... Yes Ma'am? Just a second. Larry! Drop them there. No, beside the other pile. Yep. John, take over here, would you? Now, what was it? No, over there. Can't hear. Come with me."

"Yes, much better. Thank you kindly. Now listen, I need to check before I start. Are you the superintendent here?"

"I'm the foreman, Ma'am. What seems to be the problem?"

"Do they have to make all that noise?"

"It's a building site Ma'am. What would you suggest?"

"Don't start that attitude with me, Sir. To whom do I complain?"

"About the noise?"

"No! Not the noise."

"Well, to me, I guess. What is it about?"

"It is about your fellow thugs, Sir. What is your name then?"

"Thugs? I am Robert Woods. Rob."

"Yes Mr Woods. Thugs. I am Elizabeth White..."

"Uhhh... yes?"

"... headmistress of St Lucia's..."

"Oh, the White Witch?"

"...for young ladies. How dare you!"

"Sorry Ma'am. It slipped out. I expected someone much older. Frumpy."

"In your social circle, does this qualify as flattery?"

"What? No, no. Look, what can I do for you?"

"It's a delicate matter."

"Oh. Look, it might be a little quieter in the office there, if you prefer."

"No, no. We are here now. Thank you for the offer. Perhaps you are not a thug after all."

"I should hope not, Miss White."

"Well, then, this matter... I'm no longer sure how to... Well, I think Sir, that I could be blunt without causing offence?"

"You going to call me names again?"

"No, no."

"I can take it."

"All right. I had one of my young ladies report to me in the office yesterday. The poor girl was beside herself."

"I might be able to guess where this is going."

"I thought perhaps you might. This girl thought she was with child."

"And?"

"She is not. I was a little surprised at her lack of basic biology understanding. I will be having stern words with her teachers. Nonetheless, she did have cause for her upset. She had, Sir, lost something."

"Oh, is that all? Perhaps if you tell me what it is, I could assist?"

"No Mr Woods. You misunderstand. It cannot be found."

"No?"

"No Sir. Her innocence, Sir. She has become a woman."

"Oh?"

"Oh, you are very exasperating! She lost her virginity!"

"Oh! I'm sorry. You need to speak more plainly. I'm a builder, for God's sake."

"Yes, I see now."

"And why are you telling me this?"

"One of your fellow builders took it!"

"Are you sure, Miss White?"

"Oh I'm sure. I obtained the entire story from her. It seems she is not alone, and there are a number of brutes from this building site involved."

"Brutes?"

"Brutes, to take advantage of a young woman that way."

"I can assure you Miss, there was no taking advantage. In fact, the girls started it."

"So you admit it?"

"I don't know whether you ever leave the school and spend time with real people Ma'am, but those girls are of age. They are able to make these choices themselves."

"They are children."

"You might think so."

"So Mr Woods, you admit fornicating with my girls?"

"Nothing of the sort. I have heard stories around the site. I'm sure some of them are true."

"Well, are these assignations common?"

"Assig... what?"

"The meetings with the girls. Do they happen often?"

"Oh. Could you walk with me a little, Miss White? Perhaps I can explain."

"That would be most appreciated."

"Around here behind this wall."

"Oh, this is a little more quiet."

"Yes. We're not working here for a while yet. Anyway, look up on the bank there. See the school wall?"

"Oh, yes of course."

"Your young ladies sit on that fence..."

"They do not. That area is forbidden."

"... and pull their skirts up almost to their hips, showing off their legs..."

"No!"

"... and their knickers. Flash their breasts."

"This is hardly a crime, surely, though I will have to have words."

"Look over here. We mostly have lunch at the top of that wall over there, beneath the crane."

"Where, Sir?"

"There, between the two columns."

"You... Oh."

"Yes, 'oh'. The workers were mostly well behaved, at least at the start. Maybe a few whistles."

"I see."

"But then, the girls started to show even more of their skin, amongst other things. Bared their bums, and told the guys to come down and eat lunch with them."

"Grown men with girlfriends and wives, Sir."

"I'm not arguing. Anyway, one thing led to another..."

"Another?"

"Some of the girls stopped showing up. The others took things further."

"But Mr Woods, how did they get from flirting and whistling to fears of pregnancy?"

"It started as a dare. One of your young ladies suggested that none of us were men enough to 'take care of her'."

"I take it she was proven wrong?"

"Yes."

"But... I'm still stunned. Where did he take her?"

"Take? Oh, no. They did it here."

"Here?"

"Yes, yes. Against the wall in fact, just there, so the rest of our boys couldn't see them. The girls could, though."

"This man is disgraceful. Something must be done."

"I don't think so, Ma'am. After all, she asked him to. In any case, he, and she were just the first."

"It proceeded from there?"

"Most schooldays a group of them all meet here. There are a few blankets. The wall. Sometimes a couple might race off to a car."

"Every day?"

"Pretty much."

"I cannot believe my young ladies would behave this way... I... understand the urge, but in the open, against a wall?"

"It's not so bad, surely."

"You, Sir. You take part in this?"

"What do you mean?"

"Well, you stand against the wall here, and deflower my girls?"

"Oh! No, not me. By the way, not many of them needed deflowering, Miss White."

"They didn't? Oh, and why do you not?"

"Not my type."

"No? A young lady wags her... well, derriere... at you, and you are not interested?"

"Well, I'm guilty of looking, but that's all."

"This is a moral choice?"

"Hardly!"

"What then, Mr Woods? I would like to understand."

"I prefer a more mature woman, Miss Woods. Someone with a fully developed body. Maybe with a little experience."

"You are a single man?"

"I am."

"Well tell me then. Is the idea of fornication out here abhorrent?"

"Not at all. It's exciting."

"For whom?"

"Well... are you a rule breaker, Miss White?"

"I have been known."

"Well, it's a forbidden thing. That makes it exciting."

"I guess."

"You understand?"

"I think so. But Mr Woods..."

"Rob."

"Yes, all right, Rob. What about the logistics?"

"I don't know what you mean."

"Well, kissing, I guess. If I stood against the wall, a man could..."

"Press up against you, Miss White, and kiss you. You could not easily escape."

"Yes, indeed. Hmmm... yes, I can perhaps see... Rob?"

"Yes?"

"Ah, if a woman offered, would you like to press her against this wall, and kiss her?"

"Perhaps. Depends on the woman."

"Would you kiss me, for research purposes?"

"Here?"

"Yes, here."

"You are joking."

"No, Rob. No, I'm not."

"I could. Is this a trick?"

"No, no. I'd like to understand the attraction."

"Alright. You tell me when to stop then."

"I shall."

"Well, I'd stand close in front of you like this. Your back against the warm concrete."

"Mmhmm. You can kiss me, Rob."

"For real?"

"Of course."

"I thought this was research."

"It is!"

"Alright, alright... You don't kiss like a headmistress, do you?"

"How many have you kissed?"

"I never tell."

"Fair enough. This isn't so bad. Well, unless any of the girls show up at that wall."

"You see, the possibility is a little scary, and a little exiting?"

"Yes. Rob, they can't get pregnant like this, surely?"

"There is some rush?"

"No, no."

"kick your shoes off."

"That's better. You are a good kisser. I'll be back."

"Where are you going?"

"Just down here. I need to lift this. Miss White!"

"What?"

"Are these regulation knickers?"

"I'm not a student!"

"Lavender lace doesn't go with the image."

"No one sees them, Rob."

"Such a shame."

"Perhaps."

"Do I need to ask permission?"

"No. You can be in charge from here."

"You sure?"

"No. But I mean it."

"Well then, off they come. You have nice legs."

"Thank you."

"Right, that's better. Kiss me some more. Ask you something?"

"Oh. All right."

"You want to go through with this?"

"I'm stunned to realise I do!"

"Then I need to lift that skirt of yours up again. You have a sexy ass, too."

"You're such a flatterer."

"Pay attention."

"Yes Sir."

"You, Miss White, are wet."

"Yes, I am. Dripping."

"Think you can open my jeans?"

"I'll give it a try. Just stop that for a moment, would you?"

"Just for a moment then. That's it. Now take it out. Hey, gently!"

"Sorry. Oh!"

"You like it?"

"I am, Mr Woods, not capable of my usual discretion. Yes."

"Good. Now get your hands back up here."

"Must I?"

"You want someone to catch you before we are finished?"

"No, no!"

"Hands on my shoulders. Okay, now I'm going to lift you, and push you against the wall."

"Ooh."

"Yeah. Wrap your legs around my waist. That's it. You sure?"

"Now, Rob. Now!"

"Ooh, okay. There we go. You okay?"

"God, yes."

"I can start moving?"

"What's keeping you?"

"Nothing, nothing."

"Good. Oh, yes, good."

"You have a... distinct... advantage... you know."

"I do?"

"Yeah. In theory... at least... I should last a .... oooh... little longer... than those young guys."

"Oh, good."

"It's theory..."

"I understand. I'm not... going to need much longer, Rob."

"No?"

"No. Oh God, a little faster?"

"If I can."

"Oh, yes. Like that. It's.... Oooooohhh...."

"I can't wait now..."

"No need. None at all."

"I should.... Oh, never mind."

"No, no. I want you in there. You need to put me down?"

"Not yet. You'd fall over."

"I think I would. Kiss me again."

"Good idea."

"And call me Liz."

"Liz? Okay."

"And Rob?"

"Yes Liz?"

"Tomorrow?"

Dec 2010
Very impressive. I love how you handle the dialogue to deliver the story. Still I wonder how it might have been with more details.

Dec 2010
Well done! sexy, sweet, surprising and sassy!

Nov 2010
Great story. You got all of the points across. Well written!

May 2010
oh, very good! Unlikely, perhaps, but great fun!

Aug 2009
I very much enjoyed the sequencing and escalation of the story line. It was a fun read...

Apr 2009
Delightful - Class and Laughs

Apr 2009
sexy story and very funny.

Oct 2008
You've mastered the perfect balance between sex and storyline - and you manage to throw in a healthy dose of variety to keep your stories from being predictable. I just love it! Your characters are so human and real.. and so richly developed.. This is

Sep 2008
I get the feeling that good dialogue stories are actually harder than regular stories. I've seen two very good ones today, this being the second. I was surprised by how well you have carried this off. I rather like them, as an occasional piece. Well

Sep 2008
I have to say the best part was the british humor. It is absolutle amazing. Reminds me of one to many essex jokes... Well, keep up the good work, but maybe a little more length?
      GBF: I've never even *been* to Britain. :-)

Jun 2006
Was this story about a white teacher or headmistriss exploring nature with a black man? If so, if would have been better if you described the sexual contrast of white and black.
      GBF: No. It wasn't. :-)

Jun 2006
Over 20 yrs ago I heard my boarding school single dean say, "I'm not concerned about not ever having sex. My friend told me sex was over rated any way." Somebody needed to take her up against the wall! and not be gentle. Are any of your stories not goo
      GBF: I'm not sure she'd have gone willingly! As for bad stories, there's only one way to tell. :-)

Nov 2005
It is those good girls you have to be careful of I guess. And this includes one of my favorites vertical pleasure.
      GBF: You mountain climb? :-)

Nov 2005
great story really knew a couple of teachers like this. i was not the ont to get to the wall but they were there looking foward to more
      GBF: How did you miss out?

Nov 2005
cute. I liked it. many happy returns of the day.
      GBF: Oh, thanks.

Oct 2005
Yes, Wonderfull dialogue - that constitues the 'Story'!!! C - I knew you could do it... heh heh heh
      GBF: It's great to be back in your good books!

Oct 2005
yes, it worked well.
      GBF: Thanks a lot.

Oct 2005
Excellent this story made me very horney im going to go masterbate now WOW!
      GBF: You know, I always want to know with these, is this a him, or a her?

Oct 2005
Hmmm.. Read this before...Didn't stop me from reading it again tho :)))))) Even better second time round.... A gentle suggestion: I believe it may have added to the intergity of Miss Whites character if she had continued to address him formally, right to
      GBF: Nah! :-)

Oct 2005
A tale of randy school girls and rampant builders could be a little cliched, but not with the gentle treatment. A delight.
      GBF: Thanks. I'll sign you up for a school tour?

Oct 2005
i personally found "White Witch" to be very hot,fun to read.so PLEASE do more. Very GOOD story telling. Thank You.
      GBF: Well, thanks for writing. Next time, if you like, you could leave an email address. I don't bite. Well, not hard. :-)

Oct 2005
Neat story. Well done. Victor.
      GBF: Thanks a heap!

Oct 2005
Your stories get hotter and hotter
      GBF: That's the plan.

Oct 2005
Often it is the innuendos of what isn't written than what is written that makes a story interesting. In this case, I get the feeling of tenderness than raunch - so if that is waht you were trying for - you got there !
      GBF: Hey, it's not about what *I* think!

Oct 2005
Well written - great dialog. You keep getting better!
      GBF: It's only because you bully me. :-)

Oct 2005
*laughing* You are too much. Your talent with dialogue is incredible. And your wicked wit probably has many pious people praying for you.... uselessly. (and thank goodness. Never change!) This was GREAT!
      GBF: Could we get married? :-)

Oct 2005
ROFLMAO ! ! What is the address of this job site?? Are they hiring? Great job, keep up the good work.
      GBF: Thanks. I'll let them know you want a job!

Oct 2005
Well done! Oh very well done!
      GBF: Thanks!

Oct 2005
Yeah, there was space for my imagination to flit all over the place. And for chuckles to bubble forth. Great story.
      GBF: Thanks. Much appreciated. Hope your imagination didn't make too much mess!

Oct 2005
Hmm.. interesting. The use of dialog only as the medium is restrictive for you as the writer. As a reading experience it's a little harder to get involved - we need to work more at it since so much isn't filled in. Possibly the effect you were after, but
      GBF: Thanks. Sorry I couldn't fit in the rest of what you said.

Oct 2005
An interesting and titillating story. I can almost see it happening. I liked it. Thanks.
      GBF: Thanks a lot.

Oct 2005
Great story! GREAT STORY! Loved every bit of it. Yes, some confrontations turn out quite nicely, like this one. And who knows what tomorrow might bring? I think this is the first story I've rated a 10!
      GBF: Wow, thanks a lot. You've been deflowered! :-)

Oct 2005
Really liked this one. Well done.
      GBF: Thanks Kanga. That means a lot from you.

Oct 2005
Gentle, My Friend, Nice way to demonstrate the writers skill at communication. Well Done!!!! You know my proclivities, and wall f**ing ain't it. BUT the idea is grand..and otherwise ole lady "gets it"...smile.
      GBF: Shucks, thanks.

Oct 2005
Cute story - very nicely done.
      GBF: Many thanks.

Oct 2005
Fun story. The only "distraction" is there are a couple of places where it becomes easy to become confused on who is saying what
      GBF: I did my best. Any particular parts?

Oct 2005
Ohuuuuuuuuuu, Gentle, nice, extremely nice......You write soooooooo wonderfully. Thank you so much! :-)
      GBF: Well, thanks. You having typing issues there? Try dedicating one hand. :-)

Oct 2005
Cute story.
      GBF: :-)

Oct 2005
ROFLMAO!!! This is such classic, understated British humor....I love it. Great dialog...one can just see them bantering, and knowing where it is likely to end up. BTW, if any of those young girls show up? Send them over to this wall where I'm working..
      GBF: They know about you already! :-)

Oct 2005
A novel approach if just a little contrived. Entertaining if not erotic. Well done.
      GBF: Contrived? Well, how could it be otherwise? :-)

Oct 2005
love it ummmmmmmmmm
      GBF: :-)

Oct 2005
very nice, though it was easy to see where it was headed. a little more graphics I would prefer.
      GBF: it was never intended to be subtle! :-)

Oct 2005
Witch?.............short but good gentle. Arousing too. You do have a way with prose. I still wish You would continue with Meg. What a woman!
      GBF: You're obessessed! :-)

Oct 2005
Another fine fornicating frolic!
      GBF: Alliteration is such an underused art. You know any other 'f' words? :-)

Oct 2005
CUTE. You surprise me more and more with every story. Thanks
      GBF: Not sure I was aiming for cute, but I gotta take 'em where I can get 'em. :-)

Oct 2005
Interesting....very interesting. :)
      GBF: Gee, thanks. :-)

Oct 2005
So ... finally ... entirely conversational ... without any exposition. Proof that you don't need to explain. And I do believe that you claimed (some number of weeks ago), that it was close to impossible. I believe the French have a saying, relating
      GBF: Thanks for that. Nothing quite like a challenge!

Oct 2005
I think there is enough detail to imagine what is happening. I would not want all stories to be like this but it is fun once in a while.
      GBF: I agree. And thanks.

Oct 2005
A story done entirely in dialogue. I'm impressed. That isn't easy.
      GBF: Thanks. It wasn't. but I hope it was worth it.

Oct 2005
Nice story; I loved the fact that it was told completely through conversation; enough space for imagination. Now, the $64000 question -- does this relationship last?
      GBF: Who can say? It certainly could

Oct 2005
Entertaining spoof that is well written. Thank you for sending this new story.

Oct 2005
That was cute. A little excercise in word play. Delightful!
      GBF: Thanks. Exactly as it was intended.

Oct 2005
Oh my gosh! LOL For some reason that one just caught my fancy.... maybe it was the talk about fancy lavendar knickers... or being taken up against a wall.... Mmmmmm
      GBF: Must be the knickers...

Oct 2005
I think it's exciting. Love to read this. Hope you will write more.
      GBF: More? Not of this, but generally, for sure.

Oct 2005
I LOVE IT!!!! :-)
      GBF: That's a yes? :-)